Halfslashed wrote:

As requested, will be taking a look at the Hyper+

[Hyper+]
00:30:009 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest a rhythm like this to build into 00:30:641 (1) - more appropriately with the melody. Since there are '1/6' quadruple sounds, I think there is no reason to put 1/4 repeating slider and 1 note, so I leave this
00:31:272 (2) - This slider seems like an underwhelming way to lead in to the stream starting on 3, so I recommend either using two circles to rhythmically build into it or increasing spacing to and from this slider. I think current style is better because i don't feel any weird here and I want to make the slider symmetric to the following slider.
00:39:641 (1,4) - Since you decided to go with repeats here, try starting 1/3 repeats on 00:39:588 - and 00:40:219 - to follow the melody better. - fixed
00:46:746 (3,4) - I'd recommend using a rhythm like this or at least use some 1/3 repeats to differentiate this part from 00:46:114 (1,2) -. -fixed
01:29:062 (1) - I recommend changing this to a 3/4 slider + circle like you do with 01:29:535 (2,3) - to make 01:31:588 (1,2) - stand out better. - fixed

Not much else to say really. Good luck, let me know if you need anything else!

Muya wrote:

WHAT HAPPENED

1. 00:09:167 (4) - stack
2. 00:18:798 (6) - 저는 이렇게 거리를 벌려줄 이유가 00:18:641 (5) - 이후에 마땅한 배치를 찾지 못해 억지로 빼냈다 밖에 없다고 느껴졌고, 그게 곡을 잘 표현하고 있다던지 맵의 퀄리티를 올리고 있지는 않다고 생각합니다. 00:18:483 (4,5) - 의 간격과 통일하는 방법이나 00:18:798 (6) - ds를 조금이라도 더 줄이는 것을 제안합니다. - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/ad7HpWH.jpg 00:18:956 (1) - 부터 간격이 넓어지는 형태로 만들면 여러가지 고려해서 충분히 설득력이 생긴다고 생각합니다.
3. 00:20:851 (1,2,3) - 처음 봤을 때 1/3박자에 부담을 느껴서 만들어진 소극적인 배치라는 생각이 들었습니다. 플레이적으로는 이렇게 ds를 좁게 해두는 편이 갑작스레 나타난 1/3박자를 리딩하는데 도움을 주겠지만, 저는 개인적으로 한 파트의 끝이며 그 만큼의 임팩트를 가지고 있는 곳이기 때문에 거리를 더 벌려 강조하지 않으면 안되는 곳이라 생각합니다.
4. 01:14:693 (4,5,6) - 곡의 분위기가 약해진 파트이면서 전후에 배치된 노트들에 비해 상대적으로 큰 ds값을 가지고 있기 때문에 줄여주는게 좋아보입니다.

Beomsan wrote:

via discord

[Hyper+]

1. 00:18:798 (6) - 저는 이렇게 거리를 벌려줄 이유가 00:18:641 (5) - 이후에 마땅한 배치를 찾지 못해 억지로 빼냈다 밖에 없다고 느껴졌고, 그게 곡을 잘 표현하고 있다던지 맵의 퀄리티를 올리고 있지는 않다고 생각합니다. 00:18:483 (4,5) - 의 간격과 통일하는 방법이나 00:18:798 (6) - ds를 조금이라도 더 줄이는 것을 제안합니다. - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/ad7HpWH.jpg 00:18:956 (1) - 부터 간격이 넓어지는 형태로 만들면 여러가지 고려해서 충분히 설득력이 생긴다고 생각합니다. - 제 생각에는 평범한 인세인 난이도에서 그 다음 나오는 노트에 가까워짐으로써 난이도를 낮추는 효과도 있고 제가 보기엔 나쁘지 않은 배치같아서 그냥 놔두겠습니다!

맵이 정말 예쁘네요
good luck!

Niva wrote:

Oh, it's back! o.o

@Reisen Udongein Thank you for fixing my diff back then! I decided to follow Hailie's suggestions (with a slightly different interpretation) and tweak some parts of my diff around so that the map should feel more up-to-date with modern maps (hopefully) without deviating from the original map's philosophy, I hope you liked it~

:3

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159,315,46746,6,0,P|139:319|109:312,2,41.6666666666667,2|0|0,0:0|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
211,375,47062,2,0,P|231:371|261:378,2,41.6666666666667,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47377,12,4,48325,1:2:0:0:
54,280,48641,6,0,P|99:321|166:311,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,280,49114,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,202,49272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
159,316,49430,1,0,1:2:0:0:
294,333,49588,2,0,L|386:333,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,368,49904,6,0,P|432:332|443:300,1,62.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,240,50219,2,0,P|506:183|476:126,1,125,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,52,50693,1,0,1:2:0:0:
509,52,50851,2,0,P|465:93|399:85,1,125,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
316,29,51325,6,0,P|313:10|305:-4,2,31.25,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,131,51641,2,0,P|297:142|288:156,2,31.25,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,88,51956,1,0,1:2:0:0:
404,88,52035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,88,52114,2,0,P|455:89|517:88,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,84,52430,6,0,P|492:152|510:207,1,125,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,282,52904,2,0,B|435:286|435:286|399:276|399:276|353:280,1,125,4|2,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
238,347,53377,2,0,P|269:349|300:355,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
204,259,53693,2,0,P|167:265|142:267,1,62.5,2|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
285,205,54009,2,0,P|277:153|271:101,1,93.75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,98,54325,2,0,P|328:126|387:113,1,125,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
488,229,54956,6,0,P|511:288|489:344,1,125,0|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,286,55430,2,0,B|393:290|393:290|348:280|348:280|307:284,1,125,0|2,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
229,244,55904,2,0,P|165:248|96:246,1,125,0|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
23,242,56377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,316,56535,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,316,56851,2,0,P|19:319|-14:321,1,62.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,358,57167,2,0,P|159:355|196:355,1,62.5,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,384,57483,6,0,P|359:353|425:362,1,125,4|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,382,57956,2,0,P|451:341|438:280,1,125,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,196,58430,2,0,P|525:228|526:266,1,62.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,175,58746,2,0,P|420:151|435:122,1,62.5,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,207,59062,2,0,B|272:211|256:220|256:220|237:211|208:208,1,93.75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,217,59377,2,0,B|185:188|200:158|200:158|216:125|198:94,1,125,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
135,269,60009,6,0,P|192:300|253:277,1,125,0|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,328,60483,2,0,P|365:299|434:317,1,125,0|2,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
483,370,60956,2,0,L|467:235,1,125,0|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
458,164,61430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,82,61588,1,10,0:0:0:0:
450,82,61904,6,0,L|446:35,2,31.25,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,127,62219,2,0,L|359:77,2,31.25,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,165,62535,1,4,1:2:0:0:
282,165,63009,1,4,1:2:0:0:
47,247,64746,6,0,P|83:270|136:262,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,274,65062,2,0,P|203:262|263:298,1,125,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,343,65535,1,4,1:2:0:0:
388,88,66956,6,0,P|410:67|427:31,1,62.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,168,67272,2,0,P|400:197|423:230,1,62.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,134,67588,2,0,P|268:114|192:118,1,125,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,115,68062,1,4,1:2:0:0:
85,354,69798,6,0,B|118:354|139:338|139:338|175:338,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,346,70114,2,0,P|166:289|192:232,1,125,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,233,70588,1,4,1:2:0:0:
420,55,71693,22,0,L|415:95,1,23.4375008940697,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,225,72009,2,0,L|451:200,1,23.4375008940697,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,191,72325,2,0,L|348:175,1,23.4375008940697,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,56,72641,6,0,L|406:158,1,83.3333333333333,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
468,302,73062,2,0,B|488:262|488:262|477:220,1,83.3333333333333,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
318,237,73483,2,0,P|361:257|405:250,1,83.3333333333333,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,172,73904,6,0,P|287:232|251:283,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,351,74377,2,0,B|169:346|169:346|126:359|126:359|87:355,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,283,74851,2,0,B|41:287|41:287|84:274|84:274|123:278,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
122,278,75483,6,0,P|110:248|110:204,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
20,200,75798,2,0,P|24:166|46:128,1,62.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,58,76114,2,0,P|20:31|58:9,1,62.5,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,100,76430,6,0,P|134:118|70:82,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,39,76904,2,0,L|131:187,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,245,77377,2,0,B|125:291|125:291|140:337|178:349,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,348,78009,6,0,P|145:342|108:352,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,312,78325,2,0,L|256:244,1,62.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,348,78641,2,0,P|367:342|404:352,1,62.5,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,288,78956,6,0,B|452:289|452:289|424:266|385:266,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,226,79430,2,0,B|294:203|265:192|265:192|294:181|319:157,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,117,79904,2,0,B|424:118|452:95|452:95|509:96,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
508,95,80535,6,0,P|497:63|502:21,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
429,165,80851,2,0,P|403:142|386:103,1,62.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,247,81167,2,0,P|340:240|306:215,1,62.5,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,195,81483,6,0,B|143:195|143:195|164:162,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,102,81956,2,0,B|248:17|248:17|266:52,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,111,82430,2,0,B|353:195|353:195|319:195,1,125,2|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
321,209,83062,5,4,1:2:0:0:
317,225,83377,2,0,L|310:266,2,31.25,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,324,83693,2,0,L|385:281,2,31.25,2|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,384,84009,6,0,P|373:354|314:366,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,318,84483,2,0,P|196:348|131:340,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,281,84956,2,0,P|77:219|113:170,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
113,169,85588,6,0,P|110:130|106:85,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
217,161,85904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,322,86062,2,8,P|228:288|227:259,1,62.5,8|10,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
120,271,86376,1,0,1:2:0:0:
167,357,86535,6,0,B|208:357|208:357|249:372|249:372|291:372,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,344,87009,2,0,P|443:351|490:314,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,209,87483,2,0,P|399:202|352:239,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
421,276,88114,5,8,0:0:0:0:
470,193,88272,1,2,1:2:0:0:
385,143,88430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
338,227,88588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,193,88746,2,0,P|482:154|478:119,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
271,168,89062,6,0,P|332:176|384:143,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,96,89535,2,0,P|189:144|193:205,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,96,90009,2,0,P|289:39|234:11,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
235,11,90641,6,0,P|267:17|302:15,2,62.5,8|2|0,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,103,91114,2,0,P|417:101|387:107,2,62.5,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
503,42,91588,6,0,L|497:185,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,248,92062,2,0,B|445:248|445:248|415:275|373:264,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,203,92535,2,0,B|319:203|319:203|349:176|391:187,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
391,187,93167,6,0,B|385:155|385:155|394:120,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
412,14,93483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,81,93641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
346,61,93798,2,0,L|291:53,3,31.25,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,51,94114,6,0,B|270:63|237:51|237:51|201:38|174:52,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,98,94588,2,0,P|83:153|107:209,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,242,95062,2,0,B|203:254|239:241|239:241|272:229|301:241,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
301,241,95693,6,8,P|304:278|306:315,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
356,163,96009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,169,96167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,83,96325,2,0,P|509:49|507:16,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
470,169,96641,6,0,P|409:189|348:153,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,129,97114,2,0,B|243:129|243:129|201:149|201:149|162:149,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,208,97588,2,0,B|92:253|92:253|95:298|133:317,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
131,316,98219,6,0,L|68:316,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,264,98535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
186,374,98693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,243,98851,1,10,0:0:0:0:
262,346,99009,1,0,1:2:0:0:
262,346,99167,6,0,B|308:346|308:346|339:373|383:367,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,320,99641,2,0,B|456:277|456:277|441:240|441:240|448:194,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,131,100114,2,0,P|440:165|379:157,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
379,157,100746,5,8,0:0:0:0:
491,131,100904,1,2,1:2:0:0:
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491,131,101219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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274,127,101535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,157,101693,6,0,P|110:170|57:137,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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17,284,102641,1,2,1:2:0:0:
170,157,102956,1,0,1:2:0:0:
17,284,103272,6,0,L|22:359,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
13,203,103588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,290,103746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,167,103904,2,0,L|79:135,3,31.25,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,120,104219,6,0,B|120:129|150:100|150:100|201:100,1,125,6|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,46,104693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,100,104851,2,0,B|362:100|362:100|392:129|436:120,1,125,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
436,119,105483,6,0,P|442:87|433:58,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,194,105798,2,0,P|507:169|513:139,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,278,106114,2,0,P|509:277|543:253,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,278,106430,6,0,B|429:265|429:265|378:265,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,314,107062,6,0,L|232:377,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,234,107377,2,0,B|196:191|196:191|212:156|212:156|209:112,1,125,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
209,113,108009,6,0,P|241:123|274:120,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,164,108325,2,0,P|365:162|336:171,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,232,108641,2,0,P|270:278|291:324,1,93.75,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
299,329,108956,2,0,P|267:320|230:324,1,62.5,0|2,1:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
374,357,109272,6,0,P|432:373|490:347,1,125,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,266,109746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
510,185,109904,2,0,B|504:142|504:142|514:102|514:102|508:63,1,125,0|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
507,62,110535,6,0,L|497:0,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,125,110851,2,0,L|390:125,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,185,111167,2,0,L|501:247,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,303,111483,6,0,B|422:311|397:303|397:303|371:295|347:304,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,112114,6,0,L|176:148,1,62.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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242,99,113062,6,0,P|277:94|308:99,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,66,113377,2,0,P|395:41|406:11,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,144,113693,2,0,P|383:191|417:228,1,93.75,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
412,224,114009,5,0,1:2:0:0:
388,337,114167,1,2,1:3:0:0:

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   01:48:641 (2) - 이거 둘다 -8 도만 돌려주시면 좋을것같아요. 전노트랑 각도가 비슷할 수 있도록.
   
   
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C O I N wrote:

Hyper+

1. 00:05:062 (8) -
   01:48:641 (2) - 이거 둘다 -8 도만 돌려주시면 좋을것같아요. 전노트랑 각도가 비슷할 수 있도록.
   
   
2. 00:17:535 (2,3) - 요거 담요 조금만 다듬어주시면 이쁘게 둘러쌀 수 있을것같아요!
   
   
3. 00:15:325 (3,5) - 이거두개 일직선 맞춰주시면 플레이할때 더 이쁠듯요!
   
   
   
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Hailie wrote:

a few minor things I like to mention before I bubble

Beginner
- you said that that the spinner needs to practice with the spinner but I still felt that it makes the 2nd part of the kiai underwhelming 01:32:851 (1) - than it already it is so while I can understand you wanting to keep the other spinners , I think it better to have this 1 gone at least - the others should be enough for a beginner

Standard -
01:23:377 (3) - maybe do a rhythm like this instead https://puu.sh/zENbR/80929fe7dd.png ? just using a repeat doesn't feel all that engaging for a newbie and while this is but still simple enough to not be too hard (don't have to do exactly like the suggestion but something similar to it maybe)

Muya's - Probably should check this to tick 2 like the rest of the difficulties - I don't see exactly a reason for it to be different with the rhythm usage in this difficulty

anyways that should be about it since I pretty okay with the rest of the difficulties - call me back again

UndeadCapulet wrote:

nekomata master is good at music

00:47:535 (1) - topdiff needs to use muya's snapping for this

other stuff

top
01:51:483 (1) - prob use the 00:02:851 (5,1) - rhythm for a nicer callback to the intro

muya
00:18:325 (1) - weird rhythm to me, seems you want to map drums here but the first main drumbeat is at 00:18:246 - , really think you should revise this in some way
prob set everything after 01:44:219 - to 40%vol

white

UndeadCapulet wrote:

prob set everything after 01:44:219 - to 40%vol

beginr
00:20:851 (1) - , 00:51:167 (1) - not rly nice places for a spinner bc it causes a 4/1 gap when the song starts to pick up, think you should just map these spots with objects - changed to the couple of notes on first one, but I still think that second one is fit to spinner because kind of xylophone melody is there and the situation that not even one spinner exists on the beginner diff really makes me feel weird

call us back

UndeadCapulet wrote:

welcome back reisen

Zero__wind wrote:

yes!

Myxomatosis wrote:

Hey, I have some concerns that could use fixing before this gets ranked:


[Muya's Another]

The kiai from 01:24:009 - onwards is lacking hitsounding. Just two finish hitsounds and nothing else in the most intense section of the song feels really empty. Could add some more finishes, claps to support the drums, whistles to support the melody, or a combination of those.

[Beginner]

I highly recommend lowering the slider tick rate to 1 for this difficulty. Due to the low slider velocity, the first and last tick of each slider is currently invisible in gameplay, but still produces a sound, so it provides feedback for something the player can't see.


Amazing mapset throughout, I really like the different styles. Would be nice to see these things fixed though. Good luck!

Muya wrote:

@Reisen
thanks for updating, however, Im sure for ArtistUnicode are got some wrong on my diff.
please fix it, thanks!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

highest diff
01:05:535 (1) - missing stack

just reminding xD