lazy to say fixed for everything, this is why I shouldn't speedmap at 3am, laziest blankets ever XD but sankyu~AnreFM wrote:
Hey guys!
umm here's a mod from me, I hope it'll at least help you a bit ><
[captin's]Okay then, good luck guys! Here's a star for you~
- 00:02:942 (4) - Since this note still has the same rhythm as the previous notes-following the vocal, I see no reason to add an NC here. The NC here only makes the readability a bit worse, since the NC will make a different feel to the note, though it doesn't needed here since it still has the same rhythm as the notes before it
- 00:07:156 (1,2) - The flow is nice and good, but I really don't like how (2) is shaped lol. Currently it looked like it is placed a bit randomly imo. hmm, how about moving this a bit so that it'll blanket (1) better, and making the pattern more readable? Try moving (2) slider to x76/y172, it will looked a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141955 that spot isn't the best blanket but moved it so that the blanket is right
- 00:09:178 (3) - This one is a bit confusing imo, It's slightly harder to read because of the gaps between the notes before this. Moreover, the notes before this at 00:07:156 (1,2) - really implied that you're following the vocal, but actually you aren't, since the note at 00:09:178 (3) - falls on a simple 1/1 beat. If youu want to follow the vocal here, move 00:09:178 (3) - 1/2 beat earlier to the red tick at 00:09:010 - , that way, it will be easier to grasp the beat here. I also think that the vocal is stronger here imo, since the music is quite smaller on volume
Though, if you still want to use the 1/1 beat, I really recommend to change 00:09:010 - into a repeat slider that the tail will replace 00:09:178 (3) -. That way, it will be less harder to read the patterns here because of the distance between the slider and the circle will be gone, and also repeat slider will have almost no chance to break the combos for beginners :3- 00:22:998 (1) - Since you start following the vocal here, would be nice to curve this to emphasize the vocal. And also, since this slider is in no part of the pattern at 00:20:639 (1,2,3) - which uses straight sliders, it will be better to differentiate this slider from that pattern too. Just curve it simply to make it also connected with the circle at 00:23:673 (2) - to keep the flow smooth http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143205
- 00:27:380 (3) - Since the slider here doesn't exactly following the vocal, you mught want to keep this slider straight, and also maybe move the tail a bit down? The vocal here stay at the same pitch, it will emphasize them, and also tt doesn't looked really good when the next circle at 00:28:392 (4) - appear, it looked like it's about halfway blanketed lol. Try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143232
- 00:34:459 (1,2,3) - Ah, these three. Since the note at (1) isn't exactly following the vocal(the vocal start 1/2 beat later at 00:34:628 - ), I thought this one is following the background music at 1/1 beat. And it is also followed by a 1/2 slider on the white tick at (2), but then it suddenlly follows the vocal by using 1/2 beat at (3) :< might be confusing for beginners since they think it will be a simple rhythm, though suddenly a 1/2 beat appeared there. Since this one is easy, you may want to use simpler rhythms for beginners. SO yeah, try to use simpler ones like this http://puu.sh/5AFog.jpg
- 00:41:538 (5) - umm, the way it bends a bit to the left make the flow a bit bad imo, try raising the middle point so that the turn at the curve become better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143245
- 00:47:605 (2,3) - Sorry but, Maybe improve the curve on these two? the way it curved right now doesn't really affect the gameplay and feels like a straight slider, thus making the flow not really smooth imo. Try making them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143251
00:49:628 (1) - You might want to keep consistent with how you use the straight sliders for this part. Since you use a straight slider for similar parts like this (at 00:46:931 (1) - and 00:44:234 (1) - ) you may want to keep this slider straight for consistency imo. And also, the background music went denser at- 00:50:302 - , so yeah, music wise, I think this part is still similar with the previous parts imo
- 00:49:628 (4,1,2,3) - The comboing here feels a bit off imo. Since 00:51:650 (4) - has the same vocal(not to mention the connecting patterns) as 00:52:998 (1) -, you might want to make them as a same combo. Try NC at (4) - instead of (1) here, looked a bit weird because of their pattern actually lol
- 01:03:111 - I find the blank gap here is awkward to play imo. The gap here really dampen the powerful flow in the beginning of the kiai after the spin, not to mention that the vocal here is really powerful too imo. If you worried about the gap between the spin and the next circle, I'm sure adding something here won't make beginners confused imo since there's a good 1/2 beat gap there. So yeah, I really suggest adding something here, either a circle or a slider from here to 01:03:448 - , though I really prefer the slider, since the vocal here is really heavy and a lon circle doesn't really make up for that imo. But yeah, anything will actually better than leaving this blank actually ;w; hm if you say so, still not sure since it appears so early before the spinner ends...
- 01:05:133 (4) - This doesn't looked really good imo. It's almost the same with 00:27:380 (3) -, when the next circle appeared, it looked like it will blanket the circle but it doesn't ;w; So yeah, since blanketing the 01:06:145 (5) - is not the solution (the flow will become really bad imo), how about fixing the pattern a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143496 ? Other than it will looked better this way, the flow will become easier here imo with the slider facing downward and slightly curved
- 01:10:527 (1,3) - Won't do much, but you might want to keep the shape of these two the same lol, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143510
- 01:11:538 (2,1) - The blanket of these two can be made better imo. Try arranging the middle and the last dot to make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143516
- 01:15:920 (1,2) - As these two are part of a same combo, would be nice if you make them look more connected imo. How about blanketing (2) like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143522
- 01:20:302 (5,1) - lol another Blanket orz why don't we blanket (1) so that it will look better than the current one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143529 The flow on (5) is better this way too imo
- 01:23:336 (2) - I feel having a 1/2 slider-following the vocal here doesn't really fit imo. Even though it follows the vocal correctly, that gap before the piano really bugs me off, since the flow of beats before this are quite good and keep flowing nicely and this one suddenly break it imo. And also, if you listen slowly, the vocal actually ends on 01:24:010 - , at the piano. So yeah, consider extending the slider to 01:24:010 -
- Overall, the rhythms are pretty good and the flow is nice too! though some shapes and patterns can be made better, I think I have put everything that needed to be fixed here, but you might want to check any other blankets there :3 But really, aside from that, the rhythms are pretty good for an easy and it isn't filled with any lasy 1/2 sliders spams, so good job captin!
I really hope this will get ranked soon lol (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ☆~
lol it's almost 3am again, why do i do this
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