ClariS - Colorful -movie MIX- [Osu|Taiko]

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Hello~
From my modding queue. Sry for my late mod.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe you can add guest mapper's id in every diff's storyboard.
[Beginner]
General
Nice map.
Hitsound
00:13:897 - 00:20:302 - Maybe slidertick silence in this part?
01:24:010 (1,2,3) - Slidertick is not fit in music I think here.
[captin's Easy]
General
Maybe a little hard for newbies. But considering you have a Beginner diff so it's reasonable. And good map.
Hitsound
01:26:706 (2) - Slidertick silenced here?
NCs
00:44:234 (2) - Nc here and no nc at next and previous note.
[Raose's Normal]
General
Nice map and a little suggestions here.
Beats
01:17:268 (2) - Maybe this beat? You followed vocal and suddenly turned to drums.
(3 could be a slider or a circle, either is ok.)
Placement
00:51:650 (3) - Blanket is suitable here and can make it prettier to see.
Hitsound
01:25:358 (3,1) - Slidertick could be silenced.
[Guy's Hard]
General
Good map and a little suggestions here
Placement
00:28:729 (1,2) - This pattern is not fit in the sone here I think. First I think the flow here is not so smooth to play, and the beats is not so obvious to emphasize the vocal which is more interesting to play with, though you followed the drum in previous part.
01:19:291 (3,4,1) - The flow here is not so smooth to play. You indeed made similar pattern in previous part but I think here the angle of the turn is sharper than before and make the flow not so good here.
Hitsound
01:24:684 (2) - Slidertick is better to be silenced here and here:01:26:706 (1)
[Insane]
General
Some suggestions here. Good map.
Placement
00:09:010 (3,4) - How about enlarging the distance between the 2 notes? You did similar things in previous similar places.
00:28:055 (3) - Flow is not good here especially when the distance is bigger than usual.
00:28:055 (3,4,5,1) - I don't think it is really necessary to enlarge the distance here to emphasize here. So shorten the distance between 4,5,1 is better for me.
01:12:549 (4,5,6) - I think the 3 notes should be the same distance.
01:20:976 (4,1) - How about make a bigger distance between the 2 notes? A strong sign showed something here and you used the usual distance and flow.
Hitsound
00:22:661 - How about increasing the volume of the hitsound here on the 4 notes?

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
captin1
fixed the nc, thanks!
Topic Starter
Moway

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue. Sry for my late mod.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe you can add guest mapper's id in every diff's storyboard. I'll ask Oyatsu and see
[Beginner]
General
Nice map.
Hitsound
00:13:897 - 00:20:302 - Maybe slidertick silence in this part?
01:24:010 (1,2,3) - Slidertick is not fit in music I think here. I'll hold off on these now because I'm not sure on the rankability of silent slider ticks and slider-slide, especially on the easiest diff. It's a good suggestion if I can do it.
[Insane]
General
Some suggestions here. Good map.
Placement
00:09:010 (3,4) - How about enlarging the distance between the 2 notes? You did similar things in previous similar places. I think euqal spacing fits this part pretty nicely
00:28:055 (3) - Flow is not good here especially when the distance is bigger than usual. adjusted the pattern a bit
00:28:055 (3,4,5,1) - I don't think it is really necessary to enlarge the distance here to emphasize here. So shorten the distance between 4,5,1 is better for me. shorten the distance for (4,5), but I still like a jump to (1)
01:12:549 (4,5,6) - I think the 3 notes should be the same distance. the jump to the stream is pretty good I think
01:20:976 (4,1) - How about make a bigger distance between the 2 notes? A strong sign showed something here and you used the usual distance and flow. sure, fixed this
Hitsound
00:22:661 - How about increasing the volume of the hitsound here on the 4 notes? fixed

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Thanks for the mod!
Guy
almost fixed~
thank you for modding :)
http://puu.sh/5xReU.zip
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[JuDa's Muzukashii]
00:17:605 - add d since the drum plays during this part

[JuDa's Oni]
nothing~

nice map as usual~
good luck for rank~
JUDYDANNY

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.
[JuDa's Muzukashii]
00:17:605 - add d since the drum plays during this part fixed~.
[JuDa's Oni]
nothing~

nice map as usual~ Thanks :oops:
good luck for rank~
Thanks for mod~! :)

plz update(Muzukashii only) ;)
http://puu.sh/5yXyc.zip
AnreFM
Hey guys! :D
umm here's a mod from me, I hope it'll at least help you a bit ><



If there's anything you don't understand or the links are messed up somewhere, feel free to state so and I'll explain as best as I can~


[Beginner]

  1. A few suggestions on improving the blankets here, since this is the easiest diff and players will look at the notes for quite some time before clicking it, migt as well make it as good as possible :3
  2. 00:15:920 (2,1) - The blanket here can be made better. Try rotating 1 by 10 degree and then move it to x216/y232. The result should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141640
  3. 00:33:448 (4,1) - Maybe curve (1) more so that it blankets (4) better? Looked better that way actually, the current one feels rather off
  4. 01:08:504 (2,3) - Try aligning (3) so that they will be more connected. That way, it will look nicer and the flow will become smoother
  5. 01:17:942 (4) - Blanket. Move this to x228/344 so that the blanket to 01:15:920 (3) - is better
  6. 01:19:965 (2,3) - The flow for these notes isn't really good imo. Since all the other notes before this follow a smooth flow and each notes are somewhat connecting with each others, this one isn't. The tail of (2) is ending on the edge of the map, but then (3) starts almost directly below it and thus makes a sharp downright turn there. Try using this pattern, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141674 it will look better too imo :D
  7. 01:26:706 (3,4) - Since the vocal here on (4) have good varety of pitch, how about making the shape look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141703. These smooth turns will emphasize the vocal more, rather than just a usual curved one
  8. A nice beginner overall. The rhythms are quite simple though not really boring to play too, so good job here o3ob


[captin's]

  1. 00:02:942 (4) - Since this note still has the same rhythm as the previous notes-following the vocal, I see no reason to add an NC here. The NC here only makes the readability a bit worse, since the NC will make a different feel to the note, though it doesn't needed here since it still has the same rhythm as the notes before it
  2. 00:07:156 (1,2) - The flow is nice and good, but I really don't like how (2) is shaped lol. Currently it looked like it is placed a bit randomly imo. hmm, how about moving this a bit so that it'll blanket (1) better, and making the pattern more readable? Try moving (2) slider to x76/y172, it will looked a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141955
  3. 00:09:178 (3) - This one is a bit confusing imo, It's slightly harder to read because of the gaps between the notes before this. Moreover, the notes before this at 00:07:156 (1,2) - really implied that you're following the vocal, but actually you aren't, since the note at 00:09:178 (3) - falls on a simple 1/1 beat. If youu want to follow the vocal here, move 00:09:178 (3) - 1/2 beat earlier to the red tick at 00:09:010 - , that way, it will be easier to grasp the beat here. I also think that the vocal is stronger here imo, since the music is quite smaller on volume
    Though, if you still want to use the 1/1 beat, I really recommend to change 00:09:010 - into a repeat slider that the tail will replace 00:09:178 (3) -. That way, it will be less harder to read the patterns here because of the distance between the slider and the circle will be gone, and also repeat slider will have almost no chance to break the combos for beginners :3
  4. 00:22:998 (1) - Since you start following the vocal here, would be nice to curve this to emphasize the vocal. And also, since this slider is in no part of the pattern at 00:20:639 (1,2,3) - which uses straight sliders, it will be better to differentiate this slider from that pattern too. Just curve it simply to make it also connected with the circle at 00:23:673 (2) - to keep the flow smooth http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143205
  5. 00:27:380 (3) - Since the slider here doesn't exactly following the vocal, you mught want to keep this slider straight, and also maybe move the tail a bit down? The vocal here stay at the same pitch, it will emphasize them, and also tt doesn't looked really good when the next circle at 00:28:392 (4) - appear, it looked like it's about halfway blanketed lol. Try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143232
  6. 00:34:459 (1,2,3) - Ah, these three. Since the note at (1) isn't exactly following the vocal(the vocal start 1/2 beat later at 00:34:628 - ), I thought this one is following the background music at 1/1 beat. And it is also followed by a 1/2 slider on the white tick at (2), but then it suddenlly follows the vocal by using 1/2 beat at (3) :< might be confusing for beginners since they think it will be a simple rhythm, though suddenly a 1/2 beat appeared there. Since this one is easy, you may want to use simpler rhythms for beginners. SO yeah, try to use simpler ones like this http://puu.sh/5AFog.jpg
  7. 00:41:538 (5) - umm, the way it bends a bit to the left make the flow a bit bad imo, try raising the middle point so that the turn at the curve become better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143245
  8. 00:47:605 (2,3) - Sorry but, Maybe improve the curve on these two? the way it curved right now doesn't really affect the gameplay and feels like a straight slider, thus making the flow not really smooth imo. Try making them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143251
    00:49:628 (1) - You might want to keep consistent with how you use the straight sliders for this part. Since you use a straight slider for similar parts like this (at 00:46:931 (1) - and 00:44:234 (1) - ) you may want to keep this slider straight for consistency imo. And also, the background music went denser at
  9. 00:50:302 - , so yeah, music wise, I think this part is still similar with the previous parts imo
  10. 00:49:628 (4,1,2,3) - The comboing here feels a bit off imo. Since 00:51:650 (4) - has the same vocal(not to mention the connecting patterns) as 00:52:998 (1) -, you might want to make them as a same combo. Try NC at (4) - instead of (1) here, looked a bit weird because of their pattern actually lol
  11. 01:03:111 - I find the blank gap here is awkward to play imo. The gap here really dampen the powerful flow in the beginning of the kiai after the spin, not to mention that the vocal here is really powerful too imo. If you worried about the gap between the spin and the next circle, I'm sure adding something here won't make beginners confused imo since there's a good 1/2 beat gap there. So yeah, I really suggest adding something here, either a circle or a slider from here to 01:03:448 - , though I really prefer the slider, since the vocal here is really heavy and a lon circle doesn't really make up for that imo. But yeah, anything will actually better than leaving this blank actually ;w;
  12. 01:05:133 (4) - This doesn't looked really good imo. It's almost the same with 00:27:380 (3) -, when the next circle appeared, it looked like it will blanket the circle but it doesn't ;w; So yeah, since blanketing the 01:06:145 (5) - is not the solution (the flow will become really bad imo), how about fixing the pattern a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143496 ? Other than it will looked better this way, the flow will become easier here imo with the slider facing downward and slightly curved
  13. 01:10:527 (1,3) - Won't do much, but you might want to keep the shape of these two the same lol, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143510
  14. 01:11:538 (2,1) - The blanket of these two can be made better imo. Try arranging the middle and the last dot to make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143516
  15. 01:15:920 (1,2) - As these two are part of a same combo, would be nice if you make them look more connected imo. How about blanketing (2) like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143522
  16. 01:20:302 (5,1) - lol another Blanket orz why don't we blanket (1) so that it will look better than the current one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143529 The flow on (5) is better this way too imo
  17. 01:23:336 (2) - I feel having a 1/2 slider-following the vocal here doesn't really fit imo. Even though it follows the vocal correctly, that gap before the piano really bugs me off, since the flow of beats before this are quite good and keep flowing nicely and this one suddenly break it imo. And also, if you listen slowly, the vocal actually ends on 01:24:010 - , at the piano. So yeah, consider extending the slider to 01:24:010 -
  18. Overall, the rhythms are pretty good and the flow is nice too! though some shapes and patterns can be made better, I think I have put everything that needed to be fixed here, but you might want to check any other blankets there :3 But really, aside from that, the rhythms are pretty good for an easy and it isn't filled with any lasy 1/2 sliders spams, so good job captin! :D


[Raose's]

  1. 00:09:515 (4,1,2,3) - The flow here is a bit bad, considering the flow of notes before these are smoother imo. See, the flow from (4) to (1) use a quite sharp turn upright there, might be better if you turn this smoother imo. Try positioning them a bit more apart by not placing the notes exactly above each other, so that the flow become smoother like this http://puu.sh/5AMKb.jpeg o3o
  2. 00:31:425 (1,2,3,4,1) - the parts here looked.. a bit too crumpled. With the way the overalps isn't looked good and how 00:32:774 (2,3) - doesn't have the exact same shape, looked a bit weird when playing imo. I tried arranging them so that they will look and played better, the result looked like this owo

    here's the code if you need it o3o
    344,312,31425,6,0,P|352:204|300:136,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,228,32774,2,0,P|220:200|144:208,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    56,276,33448,2,0,P|106:306|164:299,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,252,33954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    212,192,34122,6,0,L|227:68,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,40,34796,2,0,P|355:111|392:149,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:48:448 (2) - Is this a part of a pattern or something? Cause if not, you may want to use this to blanket (1) since it looked better that way owo and also try not to make it a really curvy blanket cause It'll mess with the DS and you won't want that lol
  4. 01:02:437 (1,2,3,4) - Since this is the first notes on kiai, you might want to make this looked nicer, currently it looked a bit untidy imo. Try curving 2 more to make the flow better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143729
  5. Wow, the patterns are pretty neat here, and it also flows really well. So yeah, a really good Normal overall :3


[Guy's]

  1. 00:16:257 (2) - You might want to NC here to distinguish it with the previous slider at 00:15:246 (1) - , just like what you did at 00:12:549 (1,1) -. And is also gives a nice combo dividing for the next notes at 00:17:268 (1,2,3) - by dividing them to 3 different notes L3
  2. 00:48:111 (2) - I didn't really see a good reason why you're stacking this, as you use a normal spacing for the similar part on the notes at 00:44:909 (1,2) - . So yeah, better keep the consistency on stacking here by just unstack this and put this by a normal distance. Though, if you still want to keep the stack, then stacking the notes at 00:44:909 (1,2) - is nice too :3
  3. All of the notes are flow really well, and the jumps are well placed too. Though I think some parts can be used to make a good small jumps to make the flow better, I'll refrain from breaking your style too much orz But yeah, it's still a really good hard and it's nice to play :3


[Insane]

  1. 00:28:392 (4,5) - The flow here kinda stop abruptly imo, since the AR is high, it would be nice to to keep the jump flow here since from 00:27:886 (2) - to 00:28:055 (3) - use a nice jump, having the next note at 00:28:392 (4) - spaced normally kinda gives a weird feel to the flow. So yeah, maybe try this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143809 the jump quite makes sense too, since the vocal kinda start there owo
  2. 00:45:414 (2,3) - The distance between these two looked a bit weird imo. Though the distance is actually fine, these two looked a bit too close in particular, so maybe move the 00:45:751 (3) - up by a few grid?
  3. 01:00:414 (1,2,3,4,1) - Just saying, but I find these part a bit too easy. Considering how you use jumps and circles throughout the map, this part seems a bit too easy by only using a 1/2 sliders, not to mention you aren't using jumps there too. So yeah, I would prefer having the piano followed by a circles here. Beside that they will emphasize the piano better, the pattern on hard also use a 1/2 sliders, so it would be nice to make a bit variation here :'D
  4. Though I felt that some notes can flown better by using a circular flow, that will be egostical of mine to make you change the notes based on that reason :'p But it's still a really fun insane to play, the AR9 fits really well with how you placed the jumps and streams, so I don't have a really big problem reading the flow of notes :3 Nice Insane Moway o3o/


[JuDa's Muzu]

  1. 00:05:807 (7,8,) - I find the kat at (8) is abit weird imo. Since the vocal clearly has a different pitch than (7), which is lower. So I really suggest using a don here to emphasize that
  2. 00:07:156 (9,10) - Following from the above. While (9) actually has a higher pitch than (10), I think the don and kat placement should be switched between these two. Put a kat at (9) and then don on (10), it will emphasize the vocal better that way. And also, if you follow my suggestion from the above, it will make a nice d k d k pattern there :Dhttp://puu.sh/5AQiv.jpg
  3. 00:49:122 (18,19,20,21,22) - Since the pattern before this (at 00:46:425 (6,7,8,9,10) - ) uses a kkk k k pattern, I think it will be nice to use a bit variation here by using a kkk kd pattern, It's better imo and it will make the beat flow better too, since I don't really like using k too much u.u
  4. 01:00:414 (7,8,9) - Since these three have a different pitch on the vocal, making it using kat kat kat is a bit off imo. How about using a D D K or a K D K, though I think K D K would be better here :D
  5. A really nice Muzu! I really like how you didn't only stick to following vocal most of the time and use interesting patterns instead! :D And also, btw I didn't found any problem for the Oni; the variety of patterns are nice already, though but I think that you can use a more comlex patterns rather than using triplet most of the time :3 But still, the taiko diffs are nice and I really enjoyed playing it Judy! :D


Umm yeah, I guess that's all for my mod, and if there's anything you didn't understand there, feel free to say that! :D
I hope my mod will be useful for you, though I'm really sorry if it didn't><

Okay then, good luck guys! Here's a star for you~
I really hope this will get ranked soon lol (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ☆~
JUDYDANNY

AnreFM wrote:

Hey guys! :D
umm here's a mod from me, I hope it'll at least help you a bit ><



If there's anything you don't understand or the links are messed up somewhere, feel free to state so and I'll explain as best as I can~

[JuDa's Muzu]

  1. 00:05:807 (7,8,) - I find the kat at (8) is abit weird imo. Since the vocal clearly has a different pitch than (7), which is lower. So I really suggest using a don here to emphasize that
  2. 00:07:156 (9,10) - Following from the above. While (9) actually has a higher pitch than (10), I think the don and kat placement should be switched between these two. Put a kat at (9) and then don on (10), it will emphasize the vocal better that way. And also, if you follow my suggestion from the above, it will make a nice d k d k pattern there :Dhttp://puu.sh/5AQiv.jpg
    nope. (1)~(9) is only piano sounds put k (but (1) put k is ignored basic pattern and(5) is catching pitch changing, so put d) , no sounds piano is d patterns, and(9)put d is cause piano sounds low pitch (and loud).
  3. 00:49:122 (18,19,20,21,22) - Since the pattern before this (at 00:46:425 (6,7,8,9,10) - ) uses a kkk k k pattern, I think it will be nice to use a bit variation here by using a kkk kd pattern, It's better imo and it will make the beat flow better too, since I don't really like using k too much u.u
    ok. fixed. and 24 changed also d.
  4. 01:00:414 (7,8,9) - Since these three have a different pitch on the vocal, making it using kat kat kat is a bit off imo. How about using a D D K or a K D K, though I think K D K would be better here :D
    sorry, nope. My big notes style is "want to accent", "sounds too loud", "hit cymbals little follow & little accent". there is too quiet sounds. so accent is ignored.
  5. A really nice Muzu! I really like how you didn't only stick to following vocal most of the time and use interesting patterns instead! :D And also, btw I didn't found any problem for the Oni; the variety of patterns are nice already, though but I think that you can use a more comlex patterns rather than using triplet most of the time :3 But still, the taiko diffs are nice and I really enjoyed playing it Judy! :D
    Thanks >w<


Umm yeah, I guess that's all for my mod, and if there's anything you didn't understand there, feel free to say that! :D
I hope my mod will be useful for you, though I'm really sorry if it didn't><

Okay then, good luck guys! Here's a star for you~
I really hope this will get ranked soon lol (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ☆~
Thanks for mod!~ ・ω・/
http://puu.sh/5BHX3.zip
Raose

AnreFM wrote:

[Raose's]

  1. 00:09:515 (4,1,2,3) - The flow here is a bit bad, considering the flow of notes before these are smoother imo. See, the flow from (4) to (1) use a quite sharp turn upright there, might be better if you turn this smoother imo. Try positioning them a bit more apart by not placing the notes exactly above each other, so that the flow become smoother like this http://puu.sh/5AMKb.jpeg o3o sureee
  2. 00:31:425 (1,2,3,4,1) - the parts here looked.. a bit too crumpled. With the way the overalps isn't looked good and how 00:32:774 (2,3) - doesn't have the exact same shape, looked a bit weird when playing imo. I tried arranging them so that they will look and played better, the result looked like this owo okk

    here's the code if you need it o3o
    344,312,31425,6,0,P|352:204|300:136,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,228,32774,2,0,P|220:200|144:208,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    56,276,33448,2,0,P|106:306|164:299,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,252,33954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    212,192,34122,6,0,L|227:68,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,40,34796,2,0,P|355:111|392:149,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:48:448 (2) - Is this a part of a pattern or something? Cause if not, you may want to use this to blanket (1) since it looked better that way owo and also try not to make it a really curvy blanket cause It'll mess with the DS and you won't want that lol sorry I actually like how it is right now
  4. 01:02:437 (1,2,3,4) - Since this is the first notes on kiai, you might want to make this looked nicer, currently it looked a bit untidy imo. Try curving 2 more to make the flow better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143729 looks nicee
  5. Wow, the patterns are pretty neat here, and it also flows really well. So yeah, a really good Normal overall :3 tyyy~


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Guy

AnreFM wrote:

Hey guys! :D
umm here's a mod from me, I hope it'll at least help you a bit ><



If there's anything you don't understand or the links are messed up somewhere, feel free to state so and I'll explain as best as I can~


[Guy's]

  1. 00:16:257 (2) - You might want to NC here to distinguish it with the previous slider at 00:15:246 (1) - , just like what you did at 00:12:549 (1,1) -. And is also gives a nice combo dividing for the next notes at 00:17:268 (1,2,3) - by dividing them to 3 different notes L3
  2. 00:48:111 (2) - I didn't really see a good reason why you're stacking this, as you use a normal spacing for the similar part on the notes at 00:44:909 (1,2) - . So yeah, better keep the consistency on stacking here by just unstack this and put this by a normal distance. Though, if you still want to keep the stack, then stacking the notes at 00:44:909 (1,2) - is nice too :3
  3. All of the notes are flow really well, and the jumps are well placed too. Though I think some parts can be used to make a good small jumps to make the flow better, I'll refrain from breaking your style too much orz But yeah, it's still a really good hard and it's nice to play :3



Okay then, good luck guys! Here's a star for you~
I really hope this will get ranked soon lol (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ☆~
All fixed~
Thank you for modding :)
http://puu.sh/5DHo9.zip
captin1

AnreFM wrote:

Hey guys! :D
umm here's a mod from me, I hope it'll at least help you a bit ><

[captin's]

  1. 00:02:942 (4) - Since this note still has the same rhythm as the previous notes-following the vocal, I see no reason to add an NC here. The NC here only makes the readability a bit worse, since the NC will make a different feel to the note, though it doesn't needed here since it still has the same rhythm as the notes before it
  2. 00:07:156 (1,2) - The flow is nice and good, but I really don't like how (2) is shaped lol. Currently it looked like it is placed a bit randomly imo. hmm, how about moving this a bit so that it'll blanket (1) better, and making the pattern more readable? Try moving (2) slider to x76/y172, it will looked a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141955 that spot isn't the best blanket :P but moved it so that the blanket is right
  3. 00:09:178 (3) - This one is a bit confusing imo, It's slightly harder to read because of the gaps between the notes before this. Moreover, the notes before this at 00:07:156 (1,2) - really implied that you're following the vocal, but actually you aren't, since the note at 00:09:178 (3) - falls on a simple 1/1 beat. If youu want to follow the vocal here, move 00:09:178 (3) - 1/2 beat earlier to the red tick at 00:09:010 - , that way, it will be easier to grasp the beat here. I also think that the vocal is stronger here imo, since the music is quite smaller on volume
    Though, if you still want to use the 1/1 beat, I really recommend to change 00:09:010 - into a repeat slider that the tail will replace 00:09:178 (3) -. That way, it will be less harder to read the patterns here because of the distance between the slider and the circle will be gone, and also repeat slider will have almost no chance to break the combos for beginners :3
  4. 00:22:998 (1) - Since you start following the vocal here, would be nice to curve this to emphasize the vocal. And also, since this slider is in no part of the pattern at 00:20:639 (1,2,3) - which uses straight sliders, it will be better to differentiate this slider from that pattern too. Just curve it simply to make it also connected with the circle at 00:23:673 (2) - to keep the flow smooth http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143205
  5. 00:27:380 (3) - Since the slider here doesn't exactly following the vocal, you mught want to keep this slider straight, and also maybe move the tail a bit down? The vocal here stay at the same pitch, it will emphasize them, and also tt doesn't looked really good when the next circle at 00:28:392 (4) - appear, it looked like it's about halfway blanketed lol. Try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143232
  6. 00:34:459 (1,2,3) - Ah, these three. Since the note at (1) isn't exactly following the vocal(the vocal start 1/2 beat later at 00:34:628 - ), I thought this one is following the background music at 1/1 beat. And it is also followed by a 1/2 slider on the white tick at (2), but then it suddenlly follows the vocal by using 1/2 beat at (3) :< might be confusing for beginners since they think it will be a simple rhythm, though suddenly a 1/2 beat appeared there. Since this one is easy, you may want to use simpler rhythms for beginners. SO yeah, try to use simpler ones like this http://puu.sh/5AFog.jpg
  7. 00:41:538 (5) - umm, the way it bends a bit to the left make the flow a bit bad imo, try raising the middle point so that the turn at the curve become better like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143245
  8. 00:47:605 (2,3) - Sorry but, Maybe improve the curve on these two? the way it curved right now doesn't really affect the gameplay and feels like a straight slider, thus making the flow not really smooth imo. Try making them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143251
    00:49:628 (1) - You might want to keep consistent with how you use the straight sliders for this part. Since you use a straight slider for similar parts like this (at 00:46:931 (1) - and 00:44:234 (1) - ) you may want to keep this slider straight for consistency imo. And also, the background music went denser at
  9. 00:50:302 - , so yeah, music wise, I think this part is still similar with the previous parts imo
  10. 00:49:628 (4,1,2,3) - The comboing here feels a bit off imo. Since 00:51:650 (4) - has the same vocal(not to mention the connecting patterns) as 00:52:998 (1) -, you might want to make them as a same combo. Try NC at (4) - instead of (1) here, looked a bit weird because of their pattern actually lol
  11. 01:03:111 - I find the blank gap here is awkward to play imo. The gap here really dampen the powerful flow in the beginning of the kiai after the spin, not to mention that the vocal here is really powerful too imo. If you worried about the gap between the spin and the next circle, I'm sure adding something here won't make beginners confused imo since there's a good 1/2 beat gap there. So yeah, I really suggest adding something here, either a circle or a slider from here to 01:03:448 - , though I really prefer the slider, since the vocal here is really heavy and a lon circle doesn't really make up for that imo. But yeah, anything will actually better than leaving this blank actually ;w; hm if you say so, still not sure since it appears so early before the spinner ends...
  12. 01:05:133 (4) - This doesn't looked really good imo. It's almost the same with 00:27:380 (3) -, when the next circle appeared, it looked like it will blanket the circle but it doesn't ;w; So yeah, since blanketing the 01:06:145 (5) - is not the solution (the flow will become really bad imo), how about fixing the pattern a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143496 ? Other than it will looked better this way, the flow will become easier here imo with the slider facing downward and slightly curved
  13. 01:10:527 (1,3) - Won't do much, but you might want to keep the shape of these two the same lol, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143510
  14. 01:11:538 (2,1) - The blanket of these two can be made better imo. Try arranging the middle and the last dot to make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143516
  15. 01:15:920 (1,2) - As these two are part of a same combo, would be nice if you make them look more connected imo. How about blanketing (2) like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143522
  16. 01:20:302 (5,1) - lol another Blanket orz why don't we blanket (1) so that it will look better than the current one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143529 The flow on (5) is better this way too imo
  17. 01:23:336 (2) - I feel having a 1/2 slider-following the vocal here doesn't really fit imo. Even though it follows the vocal correctly, that gap before the piano really bugs me off, since the flow of beats before this are quite good and keep flowing nicely and this one suddenly break it imo. And also, if you listen slowly, the vocal actually ends on 01:24:010 - , at the piano. So yeah, consider extending the slider to 01:24:010 -
  18. Overall, the rhythms are pretty good and the flow is nice too! though some shapes and patterns can be made better, I think I have put everything that needed to be fixed here, but you might want to check any other blankets there :3 But really, aside from that, the rhythms are pretty good for an easy and it isn't filled with any lasy 1/2 sliders spams, so good job captin! :D


Okay then, good luck guys! Here's a star for you~
I really hope this will get ranked soon lol (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ☆~
lazy to say fixed for everything, this is why I shouldn't speedmap at 3am, laziest blankets ever XD but sankyu~

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ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Moway
Version:captin's Easy
Source:Gekijouban Puella Magi Madoka Magica [Shinpen] Hangyaku no Monogatari
Tags:劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ 叛逆の物語 opening alice clara captin1 raose guy oyatsu judydanny
BeatmapID:323891
BeatmapSetID:127683

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1763,337.078651685393,4,2,1,40,1,0
13897,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
14571,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
16594,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16762,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
19291,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
19459,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
60414,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
61762,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
62437,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
73139,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
73223,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
84010,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
92100,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 167,167,167
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 255,32,143
Combo5 : 255,255,128

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Topic Starter
Moway

AnreFM wrote:

Hey guys! :D
umm here's a mod from me, I hope it'll at least help you a bit ><



If there's anything you don't understand or the links are messed up somewhere, feel free to state so and I'll explain as best as I can~


[Beginner]

  1. A few suggestions on improving the blankets here, since this is the easiest diff and players will look at the notes for quite some time before clicking it, migt as well make it as good as possible :3
  2. 00:15:920 (2,1) - The blanket here can be made better. Try rotating 1 by 10 degree and then move it to x216/y232. The result should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141640
  3. 00:33:448 (4,1) - Maybe curve (1) more so that it blankets (4) better? Looked better that way actually, the current one feels rather off
  4. 01:08:504 (2,3) - Try aligning (3) so that they will be more connected. That way, it will look nicer and the flow will become smoother
  5. 01:17:942 (4) - Blanket. Move this to x228/344 so that the blanket to 01:15:920 (3) - is better
  6. 01:19:965 (2,3) - The flow for these notes isn't really good imo. Since all the other notes before this follow a smooth flow and each notes are somewhat connecting with each others, this one isn't. The tail of (2) is ending on the edge of the map, but then (3) starts almost directly below it and thus makes a sharp downright turn there. Try using this pattern, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141674 it will look better too imo :D
  7. 01:26:706 (3,4) - Since the vocal here on (4) have good varety of pitch, how about making the shape look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141703. These smooth turns will emphasize the vocal more, rather than just a usual curved one all fixd on this diff
  8. A nice beginner overall. The rhythms are quite simple though not really boring to play too, so good job here o3ob


[Insane]

  1. 00:28:392 (4,5) - The flow here kinda stop abruptly imo, since the AR is high, it would be nice to to keep the jump flow here since from 00:27:886 (2) - to 00:28:055 (3) - use a nice jump, having the next note at 00:28:392 (4) - spaced normally kinda gives a weird feel to the flow. So yeah, maybe try this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143809 the jump quite makes sense too, since the vocal kinda start there owo sure looks good here
  2. 00:45:414 (2,3) - The distance between these two looked a bit weird imo. Though the distance is actually fine, these two looked a bit too close in particular, so maybe move the 00:45:751 (3) - up by a few grid? fixed this up
  3. 01:00:414 (1,2,3,4,1) - Just saying, but I find these part a bit too easy. Considering how you use jumps and circles throughout the map, this part seems a bit too easy by only using a 1/2 sliders, not to mention you aren't using jumps there too. So yeah, I would prefer having the piano followed by a circles here. Beside that they will emphasize the piano better, the pattern on hard also use a 1/2 sliders, so it would be nice to make a bit variation here :'D alright i tried a pattern here that i think is pretty cool
  4. Though I felt that some notes can flown better by using a circular flow, that will be egostical of mine to make you change the notes based on that reason :'p But it's still a really fun insane to play, the AR9 fits really well with how you placed the jumps and streams, so I don't have a really big problem reading the flow of notes :3 Nice Insane Moway o3o/


Umm yeah, I guess that's all for my mod, and if there's anything you didn't understand there, feel free to say that! :D
I hope my mod will be useful for you, though I'm really sorry if it didn't><

Okay then, good luck guys! Here's a star for you~
I really hope this will get ranked soon lol (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ☆~
Awesome mod, thanks anre!
Niko-nyan
Here My Mod

General : Some of map in search beatmap have another Source maybe you can ask expert sourcer to help you

Muzukashii
00:05:807 - d for consistently pattern with before
00:22:661 - d looks better for make the next pitch lower than the last pitch
00:22:998 (14,15) - swap the notes because 15 have high pitch than 14
00:35:133(14,16) - k because high pitch than before
00:49:628 - k for consistently pattern
00:50:807 - d for low pitch than before
01:20:807 (48,49) - swap the notes because 48 have the high pitch than 49
01:29:571 - why you didn't put spinner in here because i still hear the music

Oni
00:05:807 - d for consistently pattern with before
00:22:830 - ddd / ddk / dkd looks better because same pitch
01:08:336 - kdd / kkd looks better because dkd looks really trolling sound
01:29:571 - why you didn't put spinner in here because i still hear the music

finished :) don't forget to reply my mod
JUDYDANNY

Niko-nyan wrote:

Here My Mods

General : Some of map in search beatmap have another Source maybe you can ask expert sourcer to help you

Muzukashii
00:05:807 - d for consistently pattern with before nope sounds piano.
00:22:661 - d looks better for make the next pitch lower than the last pitch nope. violin still sounds strong.
00:22:998 (14,15) - swap the notes because 15 have high pitch than 14 want to accent 14 because hits snea. and plays better for me. so keep /w\
00:35:133(14,16) - k because high pitch than before ok~:3
00:49:628 - k for consistently pattern fixed~:3
00:50:807 - d for low pitch than before changed the patterns. d kkd k -> d kd dk
01:20:807 (48,49) - swap the notes because 48 have the high pitch than 49 changed the patterns 39~43,45~49->kkddk,kdddk
01:29:571 - why you didn't put spinner in here because i still hear the music but spin plays to press keys "dkdkdk..."... ._.
I cant hear to fit "dkdk" sounds , and think 01:28:897 - is better accent points than 01:29:403 - .


Oni
00:05:807 - d for consistently pattern with before same as Muzu
00:22:830 - ddd / ddk / dkd looks better because same pitch nice~! changed ddd xDD
01:08:336 - kdd / kkd looks better because dkd looks really trolling sound yes. fixed "kkd" :3
01:29:571 - why you didn't put spinner in here because i still hear the music same as Muzu.

finished :) don't forget to reply my mod Thanks Niko-nyan :):)
Thanks for mod :):)
plz update ;)
http://puu.sh/5RpHB.zip
Topic Starter
Moway
updated
-_-NUNOONJA-_-
;);););):):):):):):):):):):) very goodddddd
UnitedWeSin
:o:o

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Epilepsy Warning. It's missing in beginner. Also do you really need epilepsy warning here?


[Storyboard]
  1. Maybe you could ask Oyatsu to include more "Beatmap by ----" since right now in all the diffs it says Moway, and most of the diffs aren't by you so.


[Insane]
  1. Consider HP+1 for better spread.
  2. 00:21:734 - I couldn't help notice that a note felt missing here. It's not a huge deal but maybe you'd like to experiment with a different pattern that would have a 5 note stream.
  3. 00:29:909 (1) - Instead of this 1/1 slider on the red tick you could experiment with a circle here then 1/2 slider at 00:30:077 which would follow the piano transition in the music perfectly along with 00:30:414 (2,3,4,5).

    With a jump and whistle on the head of the 1, I feel you could make a really nice pattern there.
  4. 00:38:167 (1) - Move it down a grid or so to round of the curve of the stream.
  5. 00:39:178 (7) - Maybe you'd like a more simple circle flow like this:
  6. 00:44:234 (1,2) - I thought you could try Ctrl+J. I feel it's more comfortable coming from 00:44:066 (3) imo and a better pattern with 00:43:560 (1,2,3). Maybe you could adjust spacings a bit to make it better.
  7. 00:46:088 (1,2) - Maybe move these down a few grids for a better pattern with 00:45:414 (2,3).
  8. 01:01:762 (1) - The jump feels a bit big, I suggest place it at (156, 184) to continue in the same pattern. You can try the 2 below it blanketing the 1:


[Guy-san's Hard]

  1. 00:34:796 (3) - I think whistle on head instead of tail is better for vocal.
  2. 01:11:538 (4) - Add finish is nice for better accent after 1-3.
  3. 01:17:100 (1) - Whistle on head? Feels empty here.


[Raose's Normal]

  1. 00:05:133 (2) - Missed whistle on head?
  2. 00:15:246 (1) - You can even out the right portion of the curve a little to blanket 00:16:594 (3). I just moved the anchor to (304,304).
  3. 00:32:774 (2) - Too many whistle in this part, I think remove whistle from end of 2 is best.
  4. 01:00:414 (4) - How about a NC here? It's pretty epic imo. :)
  5. 01:03:616 (2,3) - Minor spacing error.
  6. 01:17:268 (2) - Missed a hitsound on the head I believe.
  7. 01:27:549 (2) - Missed clap on repeat?


[Capt's Easy]

  1. 00:01:763 (2,3,4) - It's not good in an Easy to use a complicated rhythm like this first and then a simple rhythm like 00:04:459 (1,2) right after it when the music is the same. I suggest that you use the 00:04:459 (1,2) rhythm at both spots. So add a repeat to 00:01:763 (2) and go from there.
  2. 00:23:336 - I suggest larger volume here. 40% is too soft, you should try 60%. Also a crescendo through 00:20:639 (1,2,3) is nice.
  3. 01:00:414 - Some volume is better here imo. The sudden 60% increase is a bit much. Compare it to the Beginner diff and see if you agree.
  4. 01:29:740 - I think you should use lower volume here.
  5. Lots of missed hitsounds. Maybe on purpose?
    00:50:976 (2) - clap on end
    01:03:111 (1) - clap on end
    01:09:515 (3) - clap on head instead of tail maybe
    01:10:189 (4) - clap
    01:10:527 (1) - finish or clap on head
    01:18:279 (4) - clap
    01:19:291 (3) - clap on end
    01:20:302 (5) - missing claps


    Hitsounding seems incomplete here. Please look over your diff to make sure you've hitsounded as inteneded.


[Beginner]
  1. 00:35:470 (2,3) - Don't break flow and make the beginner turn around it will confuse them. Simple is best for this diff.
  2. 01:29:403 - I think you want reduce volume for the spinner from here.


Great job. :)
Let me know when you're done checking these and we can try to get Taiko icon.
Topic Starter
Moway

UnitedWeSin wrote:

:o :o

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Epilepsy Warning. It's missing in beginner. Also do you really need epilepsy warning here? added it, I think it is probably necessary because of those two effects in the kiai


[Storyboard]
  1. Maybe you could ask Oyatsu to include more "Beatmap by ----" since right now in all the diffs it says Moway, and most of the diffs aren't by you so. yes, will do.


[Insane]
  1. Consider HP+1 for better spread. yes
  2. 00:21:734 - I couldn't help notice that a note felt missing here. It's not a huge deal but maybe you'd like to experiment with a different pattern that would have a 5 note stream. nice catch here, I like it a lot better as a 5 note. Will see what you think about it.
  3. 00:29:909 (1) - Instead of this 1/1 slider on the red tick you could experiment with a circle here then 1/2 slider at 00:30:077 which would follow the piano transition in the music perfectly along with 00:30:414 (2,3,4,5).

    With a jump and whistle on the head of the 1, I feel you could make a really nice pattern there. yeah I like this better as well, I'll see what you think of what I did
  4. 00:38:167 (1) - Move it down a grid or so to round of the curve of the stream. fixed
  5. 00:39:178 (7) - Maybe you'd like a more simple circle flow like this: here I like the kick to the right and up, then reverse back to down and left for the next slider
  6. 00:44:234 (1,2) - I thought you could try Ctrl+J. I feel it's more comfortable coming from 00:44:066 (3) imo and a better pattern with 00:43:560 (1,2,3). Maybe you could adjust spacings a bit to make it better. alright, will try this. I made it so that (1) is higher so that the angle from the previous objects isn't as steep. This makes the pattern pretty horizontal, so we'll see once you look at it again if you think it is alright.
  7. 00:46:088 (1,2) - Maybe move these down a few grids for a better pattern with 00:45:414 (2,3). fixed
  8. 01:01:762 (1) - The jump feels a bit big, I suggest place it at (156, 184) to continue in the same pattern. You can try the 2 below it blanketing the 1: Here, I agree the jump is a bit big, so I adjusted in a different way. The motion I had I liked quite a bit so I tried to preserve that by adjusting (2) as well.



[Beginner]
  1. 00:35:470 (2,3) - Don't break flow and make the beginner turn around it will confuse them. Simple is best for this diff. fixed, few people had an issue here so best to change i think
  2. 01:29:403 - I think you want reduce volume for the spinner from here. oops


Great job. :)
Let me know when you're done checking these and we can try to get Taiko icon.
Great mod as usual. Will check on the guesters ^^
captin1

UnitedWeSin wrote:

:o :ohi cutie

[Capt's Easy]

  1. 00:01:763 (2,3,4) - It's not good in an Easy to use a complicated rhythm like this first and then a simple rhythm like 00:04:459 (1,2) right after it when the music is the same. I suggest that you use the 00:04:459 (1,2) rhythm at both spots. So add a repeat to 00:01:763 (2) and go from there. hmmm i guess :/
  2. 00:23:336 - I suggest larger volume here. 40% is too soft, you should try 60%. Also a crescendo through 00:20:639 (1,2,3) is nice. cool
  3. 01:00:414 - Some volume is better here imo. The sudden 60% increase is a bit much. Compare it to the Beginner diff and see if you agree. I'll just keep it all silent then, never really liked spinner sound anyways lol
  4. 01:29:740 - I think you should use lower volume here.
  5. Lots of missed hitsounds. Maybe on purpose? jeez you must think i'm the worst hitsounder ever ;; i miss so many claps
    00:50:976 (2) - clap on end
    01:03:111 (1) - clap on end
    01:09:515 (3) - clap on head instead of tail maybe
    01:10:189 (4) - clap
    01:10:527 (1) - finish or clap on head
    01:18:279 (4) - clap
    01:19:291 (3) - clap on end
    01:20:302 (5) - missing claps


    Hitsounding seems incomplete here. Please look over your diff to make sure you've hitsounded as inteneded. gg typo /me runs


Great job. :)
Let me know when you're done checking these and we can try to get Taiko icon.
ww ty~
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Raose

UnitedWeSin wrote:

:o :o

[Raose's Normal]

  1. 00:05:133 (2) - Missed whistle on head? yep!
  2. 00:15:246 (1) - You can even out the right portion of the curve a little to blanket 00:16:594 (3). I just moved the anchor to (304,304).
    looks nice :D
  3. 00:32:774 (2) - Too many whistle in this part, I think remove whistle from end of 2 is best. done
  4. 01:00:414 (4) - How about a NC here? It's pretty epic imo. :)good ideaa
  5. 01:03:616 (2,3) - Minor spacing error. fixed
  6. 01:17:268 (2) - Missed a hitsound on the head I believe. probably, i didn't do these hitsounds HAHA
  7. 01:27:549 (2) - Missed clap on repeat? yep
ty for mod !

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368,268,37493,2,0,P|332:327|267:346,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,230,38167,2,0,L|67:235,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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235,93,40189,2,0,P|183:60|114:62,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,143,40864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
10,258,41201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,41538,2,0,P|153:353|219:321,1,120,8|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
271,233,42212,6,0,P|304:166|300:110,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,56,42886,2,0,P|391:114|405:172,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,229,43392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,287,43560,2,0,P|396:322|328:351,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,352,44234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,284,44571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
119,163,44909,6,0,P|157:95|265:68,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,144,45751,2,0,P|284:183|231:178,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,271,46425,2,0,P|248:299|341:277,1,180,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,181,47268,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,117,47605,6,0,P|507:207|464:294,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,325,48448,2,0,P|336:285|337:210,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,105,49122,2,0,B|233:126|233:126|167:96|107:122,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,224,49965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,208,50302,6,0,L|190:333,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,253,50976,2,0,L|263:129,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,168,51650,2,0,P|383:304|301:370,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,310,52661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,195,52998,6,0,P|150:136|157:76,2,120,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,243,54010,1,10,0:0:0:0:
298,126,54347,2,0,P|365:163|470:122,2,180,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,88,55695,6,0,P|135:125|92:186,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,126,56706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,230,57043,2,0,P|237:299|256:350,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,125,58055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,229,58392,6,0,P|452:221|477:198,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,124,59403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,59740,2,0,L|151:157,1,60,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,330,60414,6,0,P|277:290|317:194,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,132,62437,6,0,P|326:215|420:215,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,77,63616,2,0,P|160:55|75:102,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,152,64291,2,0,L|136:268,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,296,64796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,195,65133,6,0,P|300:290|366:320,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,148,66313,2,0,P|285:141|373:72,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,49,66987,2,0,L|438:178,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,225,67493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,273,67830,6,0,B|252:308|196:264|196:264|127:256|78:304,2,240,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,225,69515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,225,69684,2,0,P|368:167|252:164,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,209,70527,6,0,P|85:216|28:197,2,120,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,114,71538,2,0,P|272:249|206:320,1,240,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,209,72549,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,113,72886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
345,157,73223,6,0,P|434:141|495:62,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,140,74403,2,0,P|208:106|117:122,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,170,75077,2,0,P|69:216|67:298,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,348,75583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,283,75920,6,0,P|261:274|367:312,2,180,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,335,77268,2,0,B|30:236|140:194|101:82,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,39,78279,1,10,0:0:0:0:
312,98,78616,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,215,78954,2,0,P|396:184|428:125,2,120,8|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,301,79965,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,215,80302,2,0,P|115:184|83:125,2,120,8|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,300,81313,6,0,L|281:171,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,84,81987,2,0,L|384:218,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,313,82661,2,0,P|479:227|443:79,1,240,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,50,83673,1,10,0:0:0:0:
233,89,84010,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,220,84684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,315,85358,2,0,P|366:313|439:275,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,210,86706,6,0,P|127:148|27:147,1,180,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
67,260,87549,2,0,L|9:307,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,298,88055,6,0,P|178:333|299:315,2,180,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89403,12,0,92100,0:0:0:0:
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