ClariS - Colorful -movie MIX- [Osu|Taiko]

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kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support".
I don't like combo color 5 ,it's not suitable for the BG.
[Beginner]
Is this diff is really necessary? I don't think so since the Easy diff is enough to play.
Placement
00:19:965(2) Move at x:176 y:344. I suppose it would be more better.
00:36:819(2) I suppose you can make a angle better.
01:03:785(1,2) If you really consider this diff for beginner, you shouldn't make kinda slider, it looks crowded and confused since the spacing is hard to understand. Replace simply one.
Hit Sound
00:19:965(2) Add whistle.
[Easy]
Placement
00:01:763(1) Add NC here since the music has started here.
00:21:987(1) Not to spam NC in Easy, it looks confused.
00:40:189(3) Change the direction like this, it would be better.
01:18:954(2) Spacing is not proper.
Rhythm
00:36:482 Add a note here for consistence rhythm.
01:29:740(1) Beginning is 01:29:487.
Hit Sound
You can add whistle with constant rhythm on the diff for newbie.
00:07:156(1) Add whistle.
00:39:515(1)^
00:09:852(1) Add whistle at head.
00:55:189(3) Add finish at end not whistle.
00:57:043(2) Clap here, not whistle.
01:08:504(2) Delete finish at head.
01:24:684(2) Add whistle at reverse.
[Normal]
Placement
00:41:201(4,5) I suppose you can make playable flow, like this.
00:46:425(3,4,1) The angle of flow looks so sharp for Normal.
00:59:403(4) Why don't you stack like before placement?
Rhythm
00:12:549 unnecessary green line
00:17:942(1) End snap at 00:18:616
01:17:268(2) Start at 01:17:100 for your pattern.
Hit Sound
The hit-sound rogic sounds odd for me, you can follow piano sound better.
00:08:504(3) I don't know your hit sound pattern, but add whistle at head better.
00:27:380(3) Add whistle at head, and delete one at reverse and end.
00:35:470(3)^
00:30:077(3) Add whistle at head and delete one at end.
01:24:010(1) Finish sounds loudly, whistle better.
01:28:055(1) Add clap at reverse.
[Hard]
Placement
00:52:493(4) x:288 y:320 あたりにもってくると打ちやすそうに見えますがどうでしょう
Rhythm
00:12:549 不要な緑線
00:26:538 ここから1/1スライダー持ってくればボーカルに合うと思います
Hit Sound
00:09:910(5) 始点にwhistle追加。(1)~(4)でボーカルの強いとこにwhistleあるのでここも欲しいです
01:26:706(1)^
00:35:302(4) whistle追加
00:44:571(2) clap追加
[Insane]
Placement
00:33:279(3,4) Just CTRL+G better, I don't suppose it looks fine to make a anti-jump.
00:08:504(1) Maybe you can bent this a bit, and it's easy to hit.
00:37:324(2)Current looks a bit ugly for me, so put a small jump here? Player will expect it because of begining of vocal.
01:08:504(3) Upcurve follows next slider imo.
01:10:864(2,3) Swap these sliders better, I suppose you can make consistent jumping here. Current is only followed DS from (1) to (2), but it's not good.
Rhythm
00:03:448(2,3,4) It sounds a bit odd since some of vocal isn't fit to music, so like this?
00:27:380 You can here strong sound, so it's better to follow the sound than vocal.
Hit Sound
00:10:864(4) Add whistle at head, I can hear it clearly.
00:18:448(2) Delete whistle at head, there is no sounds here.
00:19:976(4)^
00:19:921(3) Add clap at head.
00:35:302(1) Add clap at end.
00:38:504(5,6)^
00:49:976(6,8) Add clap.

Good Luck!
NavyYa
Hello~ I tried m4m, but my mod may not helpful.. sorry
But I will try my best

[Beginner]

00:17:942 (1) - opposite curve? (move the slider's red points to (172,320)

00:24:684 (1) - how about starts at 00:24:010 with ctrl +G reverse slider?

[captin's Normal]

00:00:751 (1) - round slider like 00:01:763 (2)

00:03:785 (2) - delete and 00:02:942 (1) reverse?

00:20:639 (1) - http://puu.sh/5j7lv.jpg

00:21:987 (1,1) - delete nc

00:36:482 - add circle?

01:02:774 - 01:03:448 this part have to add some notes . I felt empty

01:28:055 (1,2,1) - I recommend this http://puu.sh/5j7vs.jpg



[Raose's Normal]

Good map with fast slider

00:46:425 (3) - delete clap?

00:59:403 (2) - stack with 00:58:055 (4) ?

01:05:133 (1) - utilize rhythm instead of reverse slider like 01:06:313 (2,3)

[Hard]

00:03:111 (5) - I think the slider have to starts at (4).? my opinion :D

00:57:043 (2,3) - stack?

00:59:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - little hard? use slider in (3,4)

01:08:504 (2) - like 01:07:830 (1) (slider curves)

01:12:212 (1,2,3) - circles

[Insane]

delete 00:19:796 (4) and 00:19:291 (3) reverse?

00:21:734 - I think this timing need circle

00:52:998 (1,2) - how about this rhythm?
http://puu.sh/5j86v.jpg

01:27:212 (2) - stack with (1)'s tail?

[JuDa's Muzukashii, Oni]

I don't know about taiko modding, but I think you must add spinner in end!



Good song and Good mapset!
I love it~
Raose

kajiyatta wrote:

[Normal]
Placement
00:41:201(4,5) I suppose you can make playable flow, like this. ok
00:46:425(3,4,1) The angle of flow looks so sharp for Normal. adjusted
00:59:403(4) Why don't you stack like before placement? i think it's fine
Rhythm
00:12:549 unnecessary green line ok
00:17:942(1) End snap at 00:18:616 oops
01:17:268(2) Start at 01:17:100 for your pattern. i'm following theh drums
Hit Sound
The hit-sound rogic sounds odd for me, you can follow piano sound better. i just used hitsound copier lol
00:08:504(3) I don't know your hit sound pattern, but add whistle at head better. already there
00:27:380(3) Add whistle at head, and delete one at reverse and end. ok
00:35:470(3)^ ok
00:30:077(3) Add whistle at head and delete one at end. ok
01:24:010(1) Finish sounds loudly, whistle better. ok
01:28:055(1) Add clap at reverse. ok

[Navy] wrote:

[Raose's Normal]

Good map with fast slider

00:46:425 (3) - delete clap? sorry i think it fits

00:59:403 (2) - stack with 00:58:055 (4) ? ok

01:05:133 (1) - utilize rhythm instead of reverse slider like 01:06:313 (2,3) don't want to make it too hard >:[

ty peoplee :D

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Colorful.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62437
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Colorful -movie MIX-
TitleUnicode:カラフル -movie MIX-
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Moway
Version:Raose's Normal
Source:Gekijouban Puella Magi Madoka Magica [Shinpen] Hangyaku no Monogatari
Tags:劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ 叛逆の物語 opening captin1 raose guy oyatsu judydanny
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[Difficulty]
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qoot8123
Hi~ Moway and JUDYDANNY :3//
Here is a Taiko mod request via PM
Let's GO~



Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. Turn up the sample volume on kiai time 70% is too low with this mp3



[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:35:470 (16) - move to 00:35:639 - to follow the vocal's stress
  2. 01:00:414 (1,2) - change to slider and end on 01:01:594 - and 01:01:762 (3) - add finish is better imo
  3. 01:09:515 (20) - move to 01:09:347 - ,01:09:852 (22) -move to 01:09:515 - and 01:10:021 (23) - change to d to reflect 01:06:819 (9,10,11,12) -


[ Oni]
  1. 00:21:650 (57,58) - reverse these two notes? the pitch on 00:21:987 - is higher than 00:21:819 -
  2. 00:21:313 (53) - change to k if you fixed the above one
  3. 00:22:746 - try to add note here to make the difference with 00:21:987 (58,59,60,61) -
  4. 00:24:684 (7) - move to 00:24:852 - is better imo
  5. 00:59:150 - same as 00:22:746 -
  6. 01:05:218 (2) - move to 01:04:880 - and 01:05:049 - add note .the reason is same as 00:22:746 -
  7. 01:15:583 (37,38,39) - as i said before,try to add note


Nice song and map!
Good Luck for Rank~ :)
JUDYDANNY

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~ I tried m4m, but my mod may not helpful.. sorry hi~ :3
But I will try my best
[JuDa's Muzukashii, Oni]
I don't know about taiko modding, but I think you must add spinner in end!
sorry, I dont want to put spins. :?



Good song and Good mapset!
I love it~

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi~ Moway and JUDYDANNY :3// hi~ >w<//
Here is a Taiko mod request via PM
Let's GO~



Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. Turn up the sample volume on kiai time 70% is too low with this mp3
    vol + 10



[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:35:470 (16) - move to 00:35:639 - to follow the vocal's stress sorry . nope;;
  2. 01:00:414 (1,2) - change to slider and end on 01:01:594 - and 01:01:762 (3) - add finish is better imo change d d k → k k K
  3. 01:09:515 (20) - move to 01:09:347 - ,01:09:852 (22) -move to 01:09:515 - and 01:10:021 (23) - change to d to reflect 01:06:819 (9,10,11,12) - nice~ >w< fixed
    and...changed some by me.


[ Oni]
  1. 00:21:650 (57,58) - reverse these two notes? the pitch on 00:21:987 - is higher than 00:21:819 -
  2. 00:21:313 (53) - change to k if you fixed the above one
  3. 00:22:746 - try to add note here to make the difference with 00:21:987 (58,59,60,61) -
    00:21:313 (53) ~ 00:22:746 (7) changed colors & patterns~ :3:3
  4. 00:24:684 (7) - move to 00:24:852 - is better imo no change ><
  5. 00:59:150 - same as 00:22:746 - ^
  6. 01:05:218 (2) - move to 01:04:880 - and 01:05:049 - add note .the reason is same as 00:22:746 - ^ I want a little break time to delete triplet..
  7. 01:15:583 (37,38,39) - as i said before,try to add note ^
    and...changed some by me.


Nice song and map!
Good Luck for Rank~ :)
Thanks for mod~! ・ω・/
plz update~ ;)
http://puu.sh/5k083.zip
Topic Starter
Moway

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support". fixed
I don't like combo color 5 ,it's not suitable for the BG. it's supposed to match for homura, but i suppose we can change if i get a better suggestion
[Beginner]
Is this diff is really necessary? I don't think so since the Easy diff is enough to play. Easy is easy enough to get away with for a rankable spread, but might as well make a better one if i can.
Placement
00:19:965(2) Move at x:176 y:344. I suppose it would be more better. sure
00:36:819(2) I suppose you can make a angle better.i prefer the angle I have now
01:03:785(1,2) If you really consider this diff for beginner, you shouldn't make kinda slider, it looks crowded and confused since the spacing is hard to understand. Replace simply one. I don't think it's any harder to understand than 2 simple curves, so I'll leave it for now
Hit Sound
00:19:965(2) Add whistle. fixed

[Insane]
Placement
00:33:279(3,4) Just CTRL+G better, I don't suppose it looks fine to make a anti-jump. Nah, I like the anti jump which makes the next jumps stronger with the crescendo in the synth part
00:08:504(1) Maybe you can bent this a bit, and it's easy to hit. I think it's fine this way
00:37:324(2)Current looks a bit ugly for me, so put a small jump here? Player will expect it because of begining of vocal. sure
01:08:504(3) Upcurve follows next slider imo. nah I think this formation is pretty nice
01:10:864(2,3) Swap these sliders better, I suppose you can make consistent jumping here. Current is only followed DS from (1) to (2), but it's not good. It's supposed to be increasing spacing so that the jump to the vocal feels more natural
Rhythm
00:03:448(2,3,4) It sounds a bit odd since some of vocal isn't fit to music, so like this? sure
00:27:380 You can here strong sound, so it's better to follow the sound than vocal. i agree, fixed
Hit Sound
00:10:864(4) Add whistle at head, I can hear it clearly. fixed
00:18:448(2) Delete whistle at head, there is no sounds here. goes along with the string section
00:19:976(4)^ one there too
00:19:921(3) Add clap at head. don't hear thi one
00:35:302(1) Add clap at end.
00:38:504(5,6)^ same
00:49:976(6,8) Add clap. don't liek those here, a bit too spammy and those would be accentuating the bass dru which i didn't want to do

Good Luck!

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~ I tried m4m, but my mod may not helpful.. sorry
But I will try my best

[Beginner]

00:17:942 (1) - opposite curve? (move the slider's red points to (172,320) changed the placement of the 2nd circle so I think it is different here now

00:24:684 (1) - how about starts at 00:24:010 with ctrl +G reverse slider? for here I think it is okay to start later, especially for the very easy diff


[Insane]

delete 00:19:796 (4) and 00:19:291 (3) reverse? nah, the way it is kind of goes along with that bass slide

00:21:734 - I think this timing need circle don't really hear it in the music

00:52:998 (1,2) - how about this rhythm? way it is now goes along with the little string part in the background
http://puu.sh/5j86v.jpg

01:27:212 (2) - stack with (1)'s tail? I like having the jump to that bass drum hit


Good song and Good mapset!
I love it~
Thanks guys!
Momochikun
Great song and nice map you got there ~ :3
captin1

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[Easy]
Placement
00:01:763(1) Add NC here since the music has started here.
00:21:987(1) Not to spam NC in Easy, it looks confused.
00:40:189(3) Change the direction like this, it would be better.
01:18:954(2) Spacing is not proper.
Rhythm
00:36:482 Add a note here for consistence rhythm.
01:29:740(1) Beginning is 01:29:487. don't want spinner that soon after note in easy
Hit Sound
You can add whistle with constant rhythm on the diff for newbie.
00:07:156(1) Add whistle. no, since it is lower pitch than note after which does have whistle
00:39:515(1)^
00:09:852(1) Add whistle at head. no for same reason
00:55:189(3) Add finish at end not whistle.
00:57:043(2) Clap here, not whistle. drum is not directly on this note, would rather have alternating for more interesting sounds
01:08:504(2) Delete finish at head.
01:24:684(2) Add whistle at reverse.

Good Luck!

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~ I tried m4m, but my mod may not helpful.. sorry
But I will try my best

[captin's Normal]

00:00:751 (1) - round slider like 00:01:763 (2) keeping it straight, but moved so the line into curve of two is smoother

00:03:785 (2) - delete and 00:02:942 (1) reverse?

00:20:639 (1) - http://puu.sh/5j7lv.jpg

00:21:987 (1,1) - delete nc

00:36:482 - add circle?

01:02:774 - 01:03:448 this part have to add some notes . I felt empty notes would be too soon after end of spinner, none added

01:28:055 (1,2,1) - I recommend this http://puu.sh/5j7vs.jpg keeping mine, like the pattern and would rather have a solid sound on the last note rather than a spinner start which has no sound

Good song and Good mapset!
I love it~
thanks

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[Editor]
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Title:Colorful -movie MIX-
TitleUnicode:カラフル -movie MIX-
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Moway
Version:captin's Easy
Source:Gekijouban Puella Magi Madoka Magica [Shinpen] Hangyaku no Monogatari
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Topic Starter
Moway

Momochikun wrote:

Great song and nice map you got there ~ :3
sankyu
Guy
http://puu.sh/5kARq.zip

Thank you for mod :)
Lust
moe moway~

From my queueueueue

i dont like that gray combo color

[Beginner]Sorry if this might be all over the place
  1. 00:13:897 (1,2) - make (1) less of a curve so that it blankets (2) better
  2. 00:26:032 (2) - make this a clone of 00:24:684 (1) (of course keep the repeat), would look much cleaner
  3. 00:09:852 (3) - give this slider a slight curve and dip it down a bit, for flow like this
    and then adjust spacing where needed
    also you rarely use straight sliders in this diff, so might as well make it more curvy to fit (i think you used maybe three or four tops straight sliders)
  4. 01:28:055 (5) - move this up and too the left a little, around 100:116 and straighten the curve a bit

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:785 (3) - turn this in to straight slider so it looks like this
    you can also find a way to stack it with 00:02:605 (3)
  2. 00:21:650 (6,7,8,1) - playing this felt confusing because of the quick jump down, but since its an insane its alright, but kinda awkward to play first time going through perhaps change this up?
  3. 00:26:875 (3) - widen this slider just a smidge, end slider point to about 268:160
  4. 00:38:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - for this right here try a repeating slider for 1-4
    my repeating arrow is huge i apologize if its not clear ;~;

    the way it is now is boring and uninteresting and not very intuitive, perhaps if you could even turn it in to a stream instead of stack, that would be more appropriate
  5. 00:41:369 (2) - move this to where (4) is, might provide a more interesting combo
  6. 00:54:347 (1) - deepen the curve on this and point the slider end a little bit upwards

I love this song and i played the entire mapset, its nice! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Moway

Lust wrote:

moe moway~

From my queueueueue

i dont like that gray combo color

[Beginner]Sorry if this might be all over the place
  1. 00:13:897 (1,2) - make (1) less of a curve so that it blankets (2) better moved (1), but I think the curve is alright here
  2. 00:26:032 (2) - make this a clone of 00:24:684 (1) (of course keep the repeat), would look much cleaner fixed
  3. 00:09:852 (3) - give this slider a slight curve and dip it down a bit, for flow like this i prefer the straight line here
    and then adjust spacing where needed
    also you rarely use straight sliders in this diff, so might as well make it more curvy to fit (i think you used maybe three or four tops straight sliders)
  4. 01:28:055 (5) - move this up and too the left a little, around 100:116 and straighten the curve a bit fixed this

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:785 (3) - turn this in to straight slider so it looks like this
    you can also find a way to stack it with 00:02:605 (3)
  2. 00:21:650 (6,7,8,1) - playing this felt confusing because of the quick jump down, but since its an insane its alright, but kinda awkward to play first time going through perhaps change this up? don't think it's too confusing, since it's following the flow of the square and the increased spacing is gradual to match the crescendo
  3. 00:26:875 (3) - widen this slider just a smidge, end slider point to about 268:160 fixed
  4. 00:38:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - for this right here try a repeating slider for 1-4
    my repeating arrow is huge i apologize if its not clear ;~;

    the way it is now is boring and uninteresting and not very intuitive, perhaps if you could even turn it in to a stream instead of stack, that would be more appropriate changed to a stream
  5. 00:41:369 (2) - move this to where (4) is, might provide a more interesting combo too big of a jump I think
  6. 00:54:347 (1) - deepen the curve on this and point the slider end a little bit upwards think this one is okay now

I love this song and i played the entire mapset, its nice! Good luck!
Thanks yo
Bellum
Hi~ I'll try m4m and from your modding queue.

[General]

■ Please check this map song setup SB setting -> Display epilepsy warning (stroyboard has quick strobing) < - this check please.
[Easy]

HP +1 OD +1 CS +1

■ 01:19:965 (2,3) I think this slider pattern a little stiff flow imo, if you change this suggestion slider flow.
[captin's Easy]

OD -1

■ 00:02:942 (3,1) I think this pattern blanket shape is more improve here, (1) slider middle point more up please
so nice better blanket shape imo.
■ 00:44:234 (1) remove new combo and 00:44:909 (2) add new combo here.
[Raose' Normal]

HP -1 OD -1

■ 00:01:763 (1,2) Can you try this two slider pattern symmetry? I think is better imo.
[Guy's Hard]

■ 00:25:189 A little jump spacing this pattern a awkward, I suggestion this pattern flow here.
■ 01:19:291 (3,4,1) This is pattern flow a little so bad imo. this pattern moving is awkward here, can you try this pattern flow ?
[Insane]

■ 00:36:482 (4,5) I think this two note suddenly jump imo. this is note jump a little long, a little decrase spacing
and you try this pattern flow.
■ 00:54:852 (2) I think this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo.
■ 01:29:403 (5) New combo?


This is map diff all so nice imo, sorry my poor mods.. anyways Good luck !
captin1
all done, thanks

up to you to add sb warning moeway

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Topic Starter
Moway

Preo wrote:

Hi~ I'll try m4m and from your modding queue.

[General]

■ Please check this map song setup SB setting -> Display epilepsy warning (stroyboard has quick strobing) < - this check please.
fixed!


[Easy]

HP +1 OD +1 CS +1 i think it's fine for now, we'll see

■ 01:19:965 (2,3) I think this slider pattern a little stiff flow imo, if you change this suggestion slider flow. fixed this up
[Insane]

■ 00:36:482 (4,5) I think this two note suddenly jump imo. this is note jump a little long, a little decrase spacing
and you try this pattern flow. i like the sudden jump for the sudden drum hit, changed position a bit though
■ 00:54:852 (2) I think this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo. preserving this for the zig zag
■ 01:29:403 (5) New combo? sure


This is map diff all so nice imo, sorry my poor mods.. anyways Good luck !
Thanks!
Lanturn
Well I started this.. then stuff happened... then I forgot about it... then yeah, I wasn't able to finish :(

[General]
Tags: Add what i write in Bold
Alice (アリス) and Clara (クララ). The singers of ClariS. Wait.. who would actually search for something as silly as this? Oh well, it doesn't hurt. :P

Background: That is one big file size.. how about using this: http://puu.sh/5ozGC.jpg and reducing it over 500kb? doesn't hurt and there really is no difference between them. (basically just ran it through photoshop and re-saved it at a slightly lower quality (8) instead of what it probably was at (11-12)

[Beginner]
  1. 00:33:448 (4) - I think this would have more impact if you moved the slider to 00:34:122 - and adjusted. It catches the vocals and lets the previous section have the 4/1 break it should normally have.
  2. 01:27:380 (4) - this is a dangerous note. as it doesn't actually hit anything audible at all. Delete?



Might finish later... as for now No KD please :3

After a quick scan.. the rest of the diffs look very well done. I couldn't really find anything, so take a

Since this mod is incomplete, don't bother giving me KD or anything
Topic Starter
Moway
Fixed everything, thanks Lanturn!
Raose

Bellum wrote:

[Raose' Normal]

HP -1 OD -1 i think current settings are fine D:

■ 00:01:763 (1,2) Can you try this two slider pattern symmetry? I think is better imo. ya
thanks !

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10,258,41201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue. Sry for my late mod.



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe you can add guest mapper's id in every diff's storyboard.
[Beginner]
General
Nice map.
Hitsound
00:13:897 - 00:20:302 - Maybe slidertick silence in this part?
01:24:010 (1,2,3) - Slidertick is not fit in music I think here.
[captin's Easy]
General
Maybe a little hard for newbies. But considering you have a Beginner diff so it's reasonable. And good map.
Hitsound
01:26:706 (2) - Slidertick silenced here?
NCs
00:44:234 (2) - Nc here and no nc at next and previous note.
[Raose's Normal]
General
Nice map and a little suggestions here.
Beats
01:17:268 (2) - Maybe this beat? You followed vocal and suddenly turned to drums.
(3 could be a slider or a circle, either is ok.)
Placement
00:51:650 (3) - Blanket is suitable here and can make it prettier to see.
Hitsound
01:25:358 (3,1) - Slidertick could be silenced.
[Guy's Hard]
General
Good map and a little suggestions here
Placement
00:28:729 (1,2) - This pattern is not fit in the sone here I think. First I think the flow here is not so smooth to play, and the beats is not so obvious to emphasize the vocal which is more interesting to play with, though you followed the drum in previous part.
01:19:291 (3,4,1) - The flow here is not so smooth to play. You indeed made similar pattern in previous part but I think here the angle of the turn is sharper than before and make the flow not so good here.
Hitsound
01:24:684 (2) - Slidertick is better to be silenced here and here:01:26:706 (1)
[Insane]
General
Some suggestions here. Good map.
Placement
00:09:010 (3,4) - How about enlarging the distance between the 2 notes? You did similar things in previous similar places.
00:28:055 (3) - Flow is not good here especially when the distance is bigger than usual.
00:28:055 (3,4,5,1) - I don't think it is really necessary to enlarge the distance here to emphasize here. So shorten the distance between 4,5,1 is better for me.
01:12:549 (4,5,6) - I think the 3 notes should be the same distance.
01:20:976 (4,1) - How about make a bigger distance between the 2 notes? A strong sign showed something here and you used the usual distance and flow.
Hitsound
00:22:661 - How about increasing the volume of the hitsound here on the 4 notes?

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
captin1
fixed the nc, thanks!
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