M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support".
I don't like combo color 5 ,it's not suitable for the BG.
[Beginner]
Is this diff is really necessary? I don't think so since the Easy diff is enough to play.
Placement
00:19:965(2) Move at x:176 y:344. I suppose it would be more better.
00:36:819(2) I suppose you can make a angle better.
01:03:785(1,2) If you really consider this diff for beginner, you shouldn't make kinda slider, it looks crowded and confused since the spacing is hard to understand. Replace simply one.
Hit Sound
00:19:965(2) Add whistle.
[Easy]
Placement
00:01:763(1) Add NC here since the music has started here.
00:21:987(1) Not to spam NC in Easy, it looks confused.
00:40:189(3) Change the direction like this, it would be better.
01:18:954(2) Spacing is not proper.
Rhythm
00:36:482 Add a note here for consistence rhythm.
01:29:740(1) Beginning is 01:29:487.
Hit Sound
You can add whistle with constant rhythm on the diff for newbie.
00:07:156(1) Add whistle.
00:39:515(1)^
00:09:852(1) Add whistle at head.
00:55:189(3) Add finish at end not whistle.
00:57:043(2) Clap here, not whistle.
01:08:504(2) Delete finish at head.
01:24:684(2) Add whistle at reverse.
[Normal]
Placement
00:41:201(4,5) I suppose you can make playable flow, like this.
00:46:425(3,4,1) The angle of flow looks so sharp for Normal.
00:59:403(4) Why don't you stack like before placement?
Rhythm
00:12:549 unnecessary green line
00:17:942(1) End snap at 00:18:616
01:17:268(2) Start at 01:17:100 for your pattern.
Hit Sound
The hit-sound rogic sounds odd for me, you can follow piano sound better.
00:08:504(3) I don't know your hit sound pattern, but add whistle at head better.
00:27:380(3) Add whistle at head, and delete one at reverse and end.
00:35:470(3)^
00:30:077(3) Add whistle at head and delete one at end.
01:24:010(1) Finish sounds loudly, whistle better.
01:28:055(1) Add clap at reverse.
[Hard]
Placement
00:52:493(4) x:288 y:320 あたりにもってくると打ちやすそうに見えますがどうでしょう
Rhythm
00:12:549 不要な緑線
00:26:538 ここから1/1スライダー持ってくればボーカルに合うと思います
Hit Sound
00:09:910(5) 始点にwhistle追加。(1)~(4)でボーカルの強いとこにwhistleあるのでここも欲しいです
01:26:706(1)^
00:35:302(4) whistle追加
00:44:571(2) clap追加
[Insane]
Placement
00:33:279(3,4) Just CTRL+G better, I don't suppose it looks fine to make a anti-jump.
00:08:504(1) Maybe you can bent this a bit, and it's easy to hit.
00:37:324(2)Current looks a bit ugly for me, so put a small jump here? Player will expect it because of begining of vocal.
01:08:504(3) Upcurve follows next slider imo.
01:10:864(2,3) Swap these sliders better, I suppose you can make consistent jumping here. Current is only followed DS from (1) to (2), but it's not good.
Rhythm
00:03:448(2,3,4) It sounds a bit odd since some of vocal isn't fit to music, so like this?
00:27:380 You can here strong sound, so it's better to follow the sound than vocal.
Hit Sound
00:10:864(4) Add whistle at head, I can hear it clearly.
00:18:448(2) Delete whistle at head, there is no sounds here.
00:19:976(4)^
00:19:921(3) Add clap at head.
00:35:302(1) Add clap at end.
00:38:504(5,6)^
00:49:976(6,8) Add clap.
Good Luck!
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support".
I don't like combo color 5 ,it's not suitable for the BG.
[Beginner]
Is this diff is really necessary? I don't think so since the Easy diff is enough to play.
Placement
00:19:965(2) Move at x:176 y:344. I suppose it would be more better.
00:36:819(2) I suppose you can make a angle better.
01:03:785(1,2) If you really consider this diff for beginner, you shouldn't make kinda slider, it looks crowded and confused since the spacing is hard to understand. Replace simply one.
Hit Sound
00:19:965(2) Add whistle.
[Easy]
Placement
00:01:763(1) Add NC here since the music has started here.
00:21:987(1) Not to spam NC in Easy, it looks confused.
00:40:189(3) Change the direction like this, it would be better.
01:18:954(2) Spacing is not proper.
Rhythm
00:36:482 Add a note here for consistence rhythm.
01:29:740(1) Beginning is 01:29:487.
Hit Sound
You can add whistle with constant rhythm on the diff for newbie.
00:07:156(1) Add whistle.
00:39:515(1)^
00:09:852(1) Add whistle at head.
00:55:189(3) Add finish at end not whistle.
00:57:043(2) Clap here, not whistle.
01:08:504(2) Delete finish at head.
01:24:684(2) Add whistle at reverse.
[Normal]
Placement
00:41:201(4,5) I suppose you can make playable flow, like this.
00:46:425(3,4,1) The angle of flow looks so sharp for Normal.
00:59:403(4) Why don't you stack like before placement?
Rhythm
00:12:549 unnecessary green line
00:17:942(1) End snap at 00:18:616
01:17:268(2) Start at 01:17:100 for your pattern.
Hit Sound
The hit-sound rogic sounds odd for me, you can follow piano sound better.
00:08:504(3) I don't know your hit sound pattern, but add whistle at head better.
00:27:380(3) Add whistle at head, and delete one at reverse and end.
00:35:470(3)^
00:30:077(3) Add whistle at head and delete one at end.
01:24:010(1) Finish sounds loudly, whistle better.
01:28:055(1) Add clap at reverse.
[Hard]
Placement
00:52:493(4) x:288 y:320 あたりにもってくると打ちやすそうに見えますがどうでしょう
Rhythm
00:12:549 不要な緑線
00:26:538 ここから1/1スライダー持ってくればボーカルに合うと思います
Hit Sound
00:09:910(5) 始点にwhistle追加。(1)~(4)でボーカルの強いとこにwhistleあるのでここも欲しいです
01:26:706(1)^
00:35:302(4) whistle追加
00:44:571(2) clap追加
[Insane]
Placement
00:33:279(3,4) Just CTRL+G better, I don't suppose it looks fine to make a anti-jump.
00:08:504(1) Maybe you can bent this a bit, and it's easy to hit.
00:37:324(2)Current looks a bit ugly for me, so put a small jump here? Player will expect it because of begining of vocal.
01:08:504(3) Upcurve follows next slider imo.
01:10:864(2,3) Swap these sliders better, I suppose you can make consistent jumping here. Current is only followed DS from (1) to (2), but it's not good.
Rhythm
00:03:448(2,3,4) It sounds a bit odd since some of vocal isn't fit to music, so like this?
00:27:380 You can here strong sound, so it's better to follow the sound than vocal.
Hit Sound
00:10:864(4) Add whistle at head, I can hear it clearly.
00:18:448(2) Delete whistle at head, there is no sounds here.
00:19:976(4)^
00:19:921(3) Add clap at head.
00:35:302(1) Add clap at end.
00:38:504(5,6)^
00:49:976(6,8) Add clap.
Good Luck!