Hollow Wings wrote:

from q

General

1. 为什么不加tag？ 沒感覺tag能加啥
2. 滑条身的音感觉可以静音，在低难度里显得有点吵了

Insane

1. 01:01:964 (6) - 丧心病狂的出界unrankble 我又出界了
2. 这图还需要摸？射2星

Hard

1. 00:16:292 (1) - 去掉nc？因为后面3段vocal你都是一个颜色带过去，所以 去掉NC
2. 00:44:277 (3,4,5) - 建议你仔细调整一下这里的blanket和stack，没完全叠好就会显得很难看 Fixed
3. 01:24:128 (3,1) - 3的尾巴离1远一点 遠離了
4. good

Normal

1. fine

Easy

1. 00:18:307 (1) - 出界unrankble 我經常做出界耶~

虽然q里说过了但我还是想再说一次：我摸图摸到现在你的gd摸过不少，柑橘做的都很有想法质量又高，非常喜欢OVO

神麻婆球个mu mutualed

good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
kiai结束的时间真是奇怪……为什么不在最后一个音01:27:934 - 这里结束呢
加点tags 像ending啊之类的 再从别人已经rank了的OP里抄点儿啥

Insane
00:05:546 (1,3) - 不要挨在一起好看些，调整一下1的角度就好了
00:13:158 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的节奏其实是不准确的，其实这里出现了1/6 如下图，考虑到难度问题可以把那两组1/6的二连用滑条带过

SPOILER

00:14:501 (6,1) - 距离太近了，不能很好地强调出1头上的重音，建议把1挪到(416,140)这一带
00:18:307 (1,3) - 为啥不叠好呢 你把五角星一起挪一下嘛
00:19:874 (1,3) - 你从00:14:725 (1,2,3,4) - 这里开始就全normal了所以这里尾巴被静音听起来非常奇怪 最好就正常音量
00:23:456 (4) - ^
00:28:382 (4) - 把这个换成和这个滑条的方向一样的三连打比较有趣 也更合曲
00:29:053 (1) - 这里开始又变回soft了我很苦恼=。=最好加个低音鼓的音效或者就继续用normal
00:31:740 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉叠着没啥意思 试试这个

SPOILER

00:50:098 (5) - 按你前面的加音效方式 这里应该是漏了个finish
00:51:889 (1,3) - 感觉交换NC更能保持NC的稳定性
00:56:591 (7) - 把它叠到00:57:262 (9) - 的尾巴上如何
01:10:247 (1,2) - 这里其实有两组三连打的节奏 没有表现出有点可惜 虽然现在这样没什么问题吧
01:22:113 (4) - 感觉尾巴上好像需要一个finish 仔细听音乐的话

Hard
这个diff怎么一开始有好多normal whistle 好吵 就像Insane里面一样处理就好了
00:05:770 (1,2) - 逆时针转一下角度让00:04:986 (4,1) - 不要碰到吧
这diff真是你做的？0.0 好多normal whistle 感觉音效完全不是一个人加的 建议diff间还是保持一致比较好
00:35:098 (8) - 头上加whiste比较好吧
00:45:620 (5) - 感觉这滑条放在hard里很危险 基本上是看不到的=。= 建议叠在4的头上 然后后面的旋转一下调整间距如下图

SPOILER

00:50:546 (1) - 头上finish美丽
01:00:173 (3,4) - blanket？ 而且最好离远点 都到kiai了还这么小间距真是难受，01:01:964 (6,7) - 这种就还比较合适
kiai总体上间距太小了 本来也是滑条比较多 间距大一点没事的 现在这样完全和前面体现不出区别

Normal
星有点高 考虑HP-1 OD-1 因为你Hard也比较简单，Normal不需要弄这么高
00:18:755 (1) - 还是开始的音效吧 whistle实在听起来有点突兀 各个diff间统一一下
00:39:128 (6) - 这个碰血条=。= 你把00:38:456 (5,6,1) - 一起挪到(228,132) 然后微调一下00:40:695 (2) - 就可以了
01:27:710 (4) - 尾巴上clap换成whistle
没啥问题 就是牵绊段的音效要弄好

Easy
AR3比较好 2太慢了
00:03:979 (4) - NC，这一组combo太长了
00:43:382 (1) - finish美丽
00:55:023 (1) - 我感觉不要finish更合曲 keep 跟你意見相反
01:10:247 (3) - 重要的finish美丽 还有就是这里应该NC一个 不然太长了
01:27:710 (3) - 尾巴上clap去掉吧 你H和I里都没有的，而且最后这里确实也没鼓

没了
LB is good
Good luck~

IamKwaN wrote:

搞完個玩家訪談,終於有時間

[General]
Tags: little busters refrain - 呢3個應該唔洗重複,source有曬

[Easy]
00:18:307 (1) - 我個人覺得可以扭得靚d lol ;盡量
00:52:337 (3) - 中間同後面條白線放定點,可以突出鼓點 ^

SPOILER

01:24:576 (2) - Prev: 1.07x spacing fixed

[Normal]
AR-1
我覺得前奏既難度高過kiai time比較少見,建議前面少d呢類slider: 00:29:949 (2,3,4,5,1).
00:43:382 (1) - spacing Prev: 0.84x Fixed
01:09:128 (2,1) - 開HD會比較難打,建議01:10:695 (1)擺系01:09:799 (3)左下 個人認為none睇到就夠 理鬼佢咩mod

暫時easy同normal先 我越來越懶;w;

1. "little busters" and "refrain" tags are already use into the sourse. so add "リトルバスターズ！" to tags instead of them.
2. Please add Audio Lead-in about 1000~1500.
   

1. 00:07:337 (9) - Add whistle? That's pretty fit the song imo.
2. 00:55:023 (4) - This flow is a little bad. Try to changed the slider shape to direct upwards.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:27:486 (1) - Spinner start is 00:27:262 - better to me. Also spinner end is 00:28:605 - here. because Current is a bit short recovery time after the spinner for Hard difficulty.
   

1. 00:32:635 (1) - This part seems you add the whistle each 2/1 rhythm. so remove whistle from slider head. and Add whistle to slider end.
2. 00:34:874 (4) - Add whistle to slider head.
3. 00:36:217 (1) - Add whistle to slider end.
4. 00:38:456 (5) - Add whistle to slider head.

1. fine.
   

Guy wrote:

o.o

Guy wrote:

o.o

Edit:
Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. "little busters" and "refrain" tags are already use into the sourse. so add "リトルバスターズ！" to tags instead of them.
2. Please add Audio Lead-in about 1000~1500. Fixed both

[Insane]

1. 00:07:337 (9) - Add whistle? That's pretty fit the song imo. ok
2. 00:55:023 (4) - This flow is a little bad. Try to changed the slider shape to direct upwards. ok, also changed so placement after this slider
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:27:486 (1) - Spinner start is 00:27:262 - better to me. Also spinner end is 00:28:605 - here. because Current is a bit short recovery time after the spinner for Hard difficulty. ok

[Normal]

1. 00:32:635 (1) - This part seems you add the whistle each 2/1 rhythm. so remove whistle from slider head. and Add whistle to slider end. ok
2. 00:34:874 (4) - Add whistle to slider head. ^
3. 00:36:217 (1) - Add whistle to slider end. ^
4. 00:38:456 (5) - Add whistle to slider head. ^

[Easy]

1. fine.

Call me back~

1. Are you sure you want BG's with different aspect ratios? One is 16:9 and the other is 4:3

1. 00:46:068 (3) - Curve the other way, it will flow better from both directions.

1. 01:16:964 (5,1,2) - kind of a spacing error

1. 00:23:456 (5) - Curve the other way, it will flow better from both directions.
2. 00:27:262 (1) - Spinner doesn't really fit tbh since there is nothing different about the music. Also you don't have spinner here in other diffs.
3. 00:44:277 (3,4,5) - I highly recommend increasing spacing so blanket doesn't overlap, since overlap blanket doesn't look good.
4. The gap between 01:19:650 (8,1) - is 1/2, but between 01:19:874 (1,2) - is 1/1, however they are the same spacing. It's better to try to follow DS here.

xxdeathx wrote:

Random bubble check!

[General]

1. Are you sure you want BG's with different aspect ratios? One is 16:9 and the other is 4:3 I think it's not problem here~~~

[Easy]

1. 00:46:068 (3) - Curve the other way, it will flow better from both directions. ok

[Normal]

1. 01:16:964 (5,1,2) - kind of a spacing error fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:23:456 (5) - Curve the other way, it will flow better from both directions. fixed
2. 00:27:262 (1) - Spinner doesn't really fit tbh since there is nothing different about the music. Also you don't have spinner here in other diffs. removed and add some note
3. 00:44:277 (3,4,5) - I highly recommend increasing spacing so blanket doesn't overlap, since overlap blanket doesn't look good.
   changed pattern
4. The gap between 01:19:650 (8,1) - is 1/2, but between 01:19:874 (1,2) - is 1/1, however they are the same spacing. It's better to try to follow DS here.

fixed


Almost there!