Nifty wrote:

From queue~

- Muzuka- I mean... Oni -

No seriously this is Muzukashii.

These triplets seems like they're kinda just randomly placed, like a Futsuu was made and then you added some blue tick notes to up the diff (that's not the case here, but I've done that, please never do that).

Remember that an Oni difficulty can be whatever you want, as long as it makes sense to the music. I see a lot of room for more diverse triples and 5-lets which would match the actual rhythm a lot better than a kkk or ddd every bar. Go look at the 3 Oni GDs you have and try to take ideas from them in terms of placement and rhythm.

That's all I have to say on this difficulty.

This difficulty is more of a Muzukashii+ instead of a Oni difficulty imo since its sole purpose is to bridge the unusually large gap between the Muzukashii and the 3 Oni GDs in the mapset so I think the only issue with it at the moment is the naming of the diff. I'll look for some additional advice from other mappers before applying any appropriate fixes towards this. Thanks for pointing it out!

- Muzukashii -

As a general note, this difficulty has a bunch of awkward gaps. You seem to be mapping the drums, but cut off whenever the vocals stop. Decide which you're mapping to and be consistent, especially for a lower difficulty.

An example would be like here, 00:43:605 - , where it seems like you're just leaving space to reduce difficulty.

I do like the part at 00:58:005 - , since I can tell you were mapping to the drums, but it also fit the voice fine. Try to find places where you can do the same thing, like at 00:10:005 - .

This isn't much of a mod as it is a critique, woops. Fixed several inconsistencies that you pointed out, as well as the awkward breaks that are littered throughout the map.

- Futsuu -

00:08:355 (18) - Delete this, then move 00:08:955 (19) - this to 00:09:105 - here. This will make those hits be easier to read and sound/feel better to play. Aye, fixed.

00:11:205 (3) - Change to k to match every other d that's on beat 1. I assume you meant 'change to k'? If that's so then yeah, changed :p

00:26:805 (15,16) - ctrl-g this, sounds better, fits better. After that, change 00:26:205 (14) - this to a d, as it will break the pattern you've established so that k on beat 1 makes more sense when reading. Nice, fixed.

The kiai should be denser than the rest of the song, right now it sounds pretty much exactly the same, if not more simple because you left spaces for when there's no vocals. The density differences between the kiai times and the normal parts of the map are usually not important for lower-end difficulties as it'll heavily influence the SR of the map. So I'll be maintaining the current density of the kiai time for now.

That's all I got for today, hope I could help ^^

xtrem3x wrote:

1811's Oni

• 
  00:14:655 - Change this note to k --> have same tone as previous note.
  00:17:055 - Same -> but here is to emphatize next note with cymbal.
  ^ Fixed both
  
  00:18:855 - Change this note to D --> have same tone as previous 3 notes. Fixed
  
  00:24:255 - Same as 00:17:055- Done
  
  00:31:155 - in this point have sound for a triple... Ok, fixed
  
  00:37:605 (237,238,239,240,241) - this section is weird, my suggest in change for KDDK d (Specifically to prioritize the beginninh of kiai time in next note)
  For this one, I just changed it to K D K D, fits better imo
  
  00:40:680 - Move this note to 00:40:530- and change to d --> the triple is better here.
  00:50:280 - This note to 00:50:130- and change to d --> Same
  ^ Fixed both
  
  00:55:455 - Same as 00:17:055- Done

xtrem3x wrote:

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> BG images in 1360x768? -> is 1366x768 or FUll HD 1920x1080 Changed BG sizes to 1366x768

Kantan

• 
  HP = 8 / OD = 3 Changed
  
  all song with 0.80x velocity is better. Wouldn't make much of a difference to the overall difficulty of the map imo, will keep this as it is for now.
  
  00:25:605 - -> (is more fittable to combine vocal/BG sound) Sounds good, changed
  
  00:34:605 (8,9) - ctrl+g -> this section is too monotone, Is better follow drum sounds bcombined with variations of vocal sound. Aight, changed
  
  00:37:605 - this slider is weird, is possible finish in 00:38:205- I do agree that the slider does not fit for this part, so I changed it to a spinner instead.
  
  00:41:805 - change this section for dkk, to follow pitch vocal sound adequatly. Gonna keep this because I want it to be sort of an opposite pattern with 00:40:005 (3,4,5) -
  
  00:57:405 - Change this note to d --> more for variety. k-k for this part has a better impact imo
  
  01:07:305 - Change this note to k --> is same drum roll as previous note. True, however the drum roll has a "descending" tone to it which is better expressed using this k-d-d pattern
  
  01:16:605 - Change this note to k --> Is to emphasize the next note. Agreed, changed.

Futsuu

• 
  HP = 7 / OD = 4 Changed
  
  00:26:205 (14,15) - ctrl+g --> same reason as 00:25:605- (in kantan) okay
  
  01:07:305 - Change this note to k --> is same drum roll as previous note. Same reason as Kantan, no change for this.
  
  01:14:505 - Change this note to k --> have more emphasis in previous note than next. Okay~
  01:16:605 - Same alright

Muzukashii

• 
  
  HP/OD = 5 Maintaining the OD as 6 for this
  
  00:18:405 (30,31,32,33) - change this section for kkdd (?) Adjusted it to kdkk to better follow the music
  
  00:38:005 - change this note to k --> following pitch vocal sound is more fluid. I'm following the change in tone and pitch of the vocal notes from 00:37:605 (27,28) - to 00:38:005 (29,30) - for this part, so kkdd would fit better
  
  00:42:405 - change this note to k --> have more emphasis with previous note than next. The don here allows for a better transition towards the kkd at 00:42:705 (16) -. Changing it to k would just make this whole part be cluttered with kats.
  
  00:52:905 - the triple is better here... I think having the 1/1 note spacing here before the finisher at 00:53:205 (22) - adds more impact to it
  
  01:02:505 - Change this note to k --> comparing with next note have less sound. It's already a k though .3.
  
  01:07:305 - Change this note to k --> Drum roll continues. Same reason as both Kantan and Futsuu, no change for this
  
  01:16:905 - Change this note to k --> to leave with priority the next note (and sequence change) Okay

Oni

• 
  HP/OD = 6 Changed
  
  00:43:005 - in this section seems a bit broken, is possible change this for ddd k k d I like the current pattern better as it flows smoother with the music, so no change for this
  
  00:55:455 - Change this note to k --> to leave with priority the next (big) note. Got it, changed.
  
  00:59:730 - Move this note to 00:59:880- --> the triple is better here. Fixed
  01:04:530 - Move this note to 01:04:680- --> Same Fixed
  
  01:05:055 - Change this note to k --> Same as 00:55:455- Fixed
  01:12:255 - Same The flow of the current pattern suits the music better imo

qoot8123 wrote:

@xtrem3x

All fixed!

thanks for mod!

oni

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neonat wrote:

Kantan

00:32:805 (5) - k? Certainly higher than 00:33:405 (6) as well Changed. Also changes it into a mono pattern which would make it easier for beginner so that's always a plus.
01:02:205 (9,10,11) - 01:04:605 (14,15,16) - the placement of the dons and kats as of now don't really match with the song... including how 01:04:605 (14,15) should mach more together than 01:05:205 (16) - make it distinctively different Removed the awkward kat at 01:03:405 - and changed 01:04:005 - to a kat to match the music in a better way.

In the kiai the kkd and ddk sometimes just doesn't add up with the song, 00:47:805 (18,19,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:51:405 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - does though, to name a few that seemed fine Adjusted quite a number of the patterns and removed some 1/1 filler notes that kinda made no sense.

Futsuu

01:08:805 (3,4,5,6,7) - doesn't feel as strong as 01:11:205 (9,10,11,12,13) - remove 01:09:705 (6) - ? Yeah it does flow better now. Changed :3

Muzukashii

I get the feeling that some of the triple beats before kiai felt more like double beats, like at 00:11:505 (6,7,8) - 00:17:505 (26,27,28,29) - possibly emphasize more on these rhythm for the song? Moved the don at 00:11:805 (8) - over to 00:11:955 - for a kd dk pattern, did the same for the latter suggestion.

01:01:005 (13,14,15) - seemed a bit odd for the triplets here, doesn't seem like a part to highlight that strongly, places like 00:53:055 or maybe 00:55:530 or 00:56:730 seem like better locations? ahh you're right, that triplet is weird x_x removed. However I think I'll just keep the other 3 parts the same since I prefer the single 1/2 spaced notes for them as the last single note can emphasize better on the "loud sound" in the music at their respective sections.

Lite Oni

Could also highlight some of the double rhythms the song has, 00:13:005 (16) - shift to 00:13:155
00:11:805 (9) - 00:21:405 (10) - 00:22:605 (17) - etc. sounds amazing, changed.

make triplets at places like 00:43:530 - 00:47:130 - instead? The percussions there do warrant such patterns, just that with 00:39:405 (3,4,5,6) - it seems pretty static Agreed, adjusted the whole kiai section accordingly.

neonat wrote:

JuDa's Oni

00:12:705 (2) - make this part similar to 00:21:105 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ? Kinda lacks the double rhythm in the song right now
prefer to keep the tension(1/2) to release on 00:24:105 - for emphasized the cymbal. It seems better to play the variation imo :3

neonat wrote:

All the best

1. Romanised Title: S.M.L* (TV size ver.)
   (i believe the star symbol ☆ is romanized as asterisk * on recent consensus)
2. Maybe add 'Jerry' to tag so people know who you were?

1. 00:13:605 - consider to change this note to k? a variation seems nice here
   00:23:205 - same as ^
2. 00:47:205 - change to k can fits the snare and shouting better here imo
   00:56:805 - same as ^
3. 01:04:005 (12,13,14,15) - how about change to d-kkD? i think it would fits your general rhythm better and 01:04:905 - sounds different than 01:07:305 -
   

1. 00:09:386 - consider to remove finisher and 00:09:705 - add k here for the shout? this is the only diff that doesn't have not for it.
   00:10:005 - can put the finisher here instead.
2. 00:16:905 - maybe add k here, to make longer pattern at the end of stanza?
3. 00:25:905 - consider to add d here, for consistency with 00:16:305 -
4. 00:36:705 - add d for the drum? it could help the spread with Muzukashii as well
5. 00:43:305 - how about move to 00:42:105 - and 00:42:405 - change to k? could fits the vocal nicely.
   00:44:205 - and this could be moved to 00:44:505 - for some breather
6. 00:51:405 - add k, for consistency with above point.
   00:53:805 - move to 00:54:105 -
   00:56:505 - move to 00:56:205 -
   this way the kiai's structure will be more consistent.
7. 01:25:905 - add d for more impact to the ending?
   

1. 00:04:005 - move to 00:03:855 - since the sound is more prominent there and consistent with 00:01:455 -
2. 00:07:905 - , 00:09:105 - considering the spread with futsuu, i think you can nerf this part by deleting these notes.
3. 00:12:705 - consider to add k, Futsuu don't even have this long break
   00:22:305 - same as ^
4. 00:16:755 - maybe move it to 00:16:605 - so it's mirrored with 00:10:605 (2,3,4) - ?
   00:26:355 - same as ^
5. 00:18:555 - same spread issue as before, consider to remove this note and 00:18:405 (31,32,33) - change these to d
6. 00:45:255 - remove this note so it's more consistent with 00:54:855 -
   00:46:305 - could be removed as well to emphasis the vocal
7. 00:55:455 - , 00:55:905 - remove for more consistent structure with prev suggesiton
8. 00:50:355 - maybe change to d? it sounds better to me.
   00:51:405 (12,13,14) - and d-k-d?
9. 00:57:780 - could make triplet.
10. 01:01:155 - consider to remove, it follows the vocal more nicely and create better spread
    01:01:455 - change to k since the pitch is same and inverted with 00:59:655 (8,9) - ?
11. 01:01:905 - add ka and 01:02:655 - add d? flows better imo
    01:04:755 - add d, same as ^
12. 01:13:005 - how about move to 01:12:705 - and add k at 01:13:305 - since the pace is getting higher here, i think no need for multiple break
    01:14:055 - add d and 01:13:905 - change to k?
13. 01:18:105 - , 01:20:505 - consider to add k for same reason as ^
14. 01:22:305 - , 01:23:355 - , 01:24:705 - , 01:25:155 - can be removed instead. This way will make the outro more consistent structurally except the last pattern for the climax.

1. I think you can remove the 'Lite' from the diffname, since it's still an Oni anyway.
2. There is a decimal error on the base SV for this diff. You'll need to fix it to 1.4 in notepad.
   
3. 00:12:180 (11,12) - i think this triplet is kinda forced. Since this section is relatively calm i suggest to remove 00:12:180 - and maybe 00:12:255 - change to d to reflect it better.
4. 00:14:430 - remove and 00:14:355 - change to d for same reason.
   00:15:855 - change to d to be consistent with previous point
5. 00:18:555 - maybe make the triplet ddd instead?
6. 00:21:780 (12,13) - same as before, i'd suggest to remove 00:21:780 - and change 00:21:855 - to d
   00:23:280 (21,22) - remove and 00:23:205 - change to k
7. 00:24:180 - remove
8. 00:25:380 - remove and 00:25:455 - change to d
9. 00:26:580 - could add the k triplet here instead to be more consistent with next pattern.
10. 00:31:455 - maybe remove this note to emphasis the vocal? next finisher can get better impact too imo
    00:33:855 - same as^
11. 00:40:680 - , 00:40:755 - add d? i think it's nice to make the kiai denser.
12. 00:43:080 - how about move to 00:42:930 - ,
    00:42:855 - change to d and 00:43:005 - change to k to make ddk triplet
    00:43:155 - and change to d for the kick
13. 00:46:005 - maybe change to k? it can emphasis the vocal nicely imo
14. 00:47:055 - change to k, 00:47:130 - move to 00:47:280 - and 00:47:355 - add d, so the ddd triplet lands on similar verse with 00:47:805 (58,59,60) - ?
15. 00:50:055 - how about change to d,
    00:50:280 - move to 00:50:130 - , and 00:50:205 - change to k to make the ddk triplet here instead. Sounds like a better spot to me
    00:50:355 - maybe change to d for the kick.
16. 01:07:080 (54,55,56,57,58) - this snaps to 1/3 :c
17. 00:51:780 - maybe move to 00:51:930 - to make a kkd? it never appear.
    00:52:155 - and maybe change this to d for better flow
18. 01:10:305 - remove and 01:10:605 - change to k to maintain consistency with 01:08:205 -

1. Very nice diff, but i really suggest to 01:07:080 (412,413,414,415,416) - snap to 1/3

1. 00:33:855 - maybe remove, and then
   00:33:630 - move to 00:33:480 - and change the triplet to ddd? sounds more smooth to me
2. nice diff too!

1. consider to change HP/OD to 6/6. The diff is the hardest in term of SR so it deserve more accuracy for player imo.

Volta wrote:

Hello, here's a bubble check as requested.

[General]

1. Romanised Title: S.M.L* (TV size ver.)
   (i believe the star symbol ☆ is romanized as asterisk * on recent consensus)
2. Maybe add 'Jerry' to tag so people know who you were?
   
   Both added
   
   Added "sml" into the tags as well since it'll be easier to search for that instead of s.m.l

[Kantan]

1. 00:13:605 - consider to change this note to k? a variation seems nice here Sounds good
   00:23:205 - same as ^ Okay
2. 00:47:205 - change to k can fits the snare and shouting better here imo Alright
   00:56:805 - same as ^ Changed
3. 01:04:005 (12,13,14,15) - how about change to d-kkD? i think it would fits your general rhythm better and 01:04:905 - sounds different than 01:07:305 - ooh, agreed. Fixed
   

[Futsuu]

1. 00:09:386 - consider to remove finisher and 00:09:705 - add k here for the shout? this is the only diff that doesn't have not for it. Now that you mentioned it, the big kat does feel weird x_x Removed the finisher and added the kat at 00:09:705 -
   00:10:005 - can put the finisher here instead. Kinda feels like a weird note to emphasize imo, a normal don should be fine. (I removed the finish for this note in Kantan since it's the only diff that has it)
2. 00:16:905 - maybe add k here, to make longer pattern at the end of stanza? Sure
3. 00:25:905 - consider to add d here, for consistency with 00:16:305 - Changed
4. 00:36:705 - add d for the drum? it could help the spread with Muzukashii as well Changed
5. 00:43:305 - how about move to 00:42:105 - and 00:42:405 - change to k? could fits the vocal nicely. Nice! Fixed
   00:44:205 - and this could be moved to 00:44:505 - for some breather Sounds good
6. 00:51:405 - add k, for consistency with above point. Fixed
   00:53:805 - move to 00:54:105 -
   00:56:505 - move to 00:56:205 -
   this way the kiai's structure will be more consistent. Agreed, changed.
7. 01:25:905 - add d for more impact to the ending? Sure
   

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:04:005 - move to 00:03:855 - since the sound is more prominent there and consistent with 00:01:455 - Okay
2. 00:07:905 - , 00:09:105 - considering the spread with futsuu, i think you can nerf this part by deleting these notes. True, the spread does become more even.
3. 00:12:705 - consider to add k, Futsuu don't even have this long break Added
   00:22:305 - same as ^ okay
4. 00:16:755 - maybe move it to 00:16:605 - so it's mirrored with 00:10:605 (2,3,4) - ? Nice, fixed.
   00:26:355 - same as ^ ok
5. 00:18:555 - same spread issue as before, consider to remove this note and 00:18:405 (31,32,33) - change these to d Fixed
6. 00:45:255 - remove this note so it's more consistent with 00:54:855 - Removed
   00:46:305 - could be removed as well to emphasis the vocal Agreed, also allows for more breaks as well :3
7. 00:55:455 - , 00:55:905 - remove for more consistent structure with prev suggesiton Okay
8. 00:50:355 - maybe change to d? it sounds better to me. It flows better as well, fixed.
   00:51:405 (12,13,14) - and d-k-d? changed
9. 00:57:780 - could make triplet. Nice consistency with 00:48:105 -, changed!
10. 01:01:155 - consider to remove, it follows the vocal more nicely and create better spread Agreed
    01:01:455 - change to k since the pitch is same and inverted with 00:59:655 (8,9) - ? nice, changed.
11. 01:01:905 - add ka and 01:02:655 - add d? flows better imo I think maintaining the break after the note at 01:01:455 - would be more accurate because I'm accompanying a majority of the vocals for this entire section. For 01:02:655 -, I feel that a simple k-k would be able to emphasize the vocals here much better.
    01:04:755 - add d, same as ^ Same reason as above, I'd wanna emphasize more on the vocals for this section.
12. 01:13:005 - how about move to 01:12:705 - and add k at 01:13:305 - since the pace is getting higher here, i think no need for multiple break Sounds good, fixed
    01:14:055 - add d and 01:13:905 - change to k? Okay
13. 01:18:105 - , 01:20:505 - consider to add k for same reason as ^ done~
14. 01:22:305 - , 01:23:355 - , 01:24:705 - , 01:25:155 - can be removed instead. This way will make the outro more consistent structurally except the last pattern for the climax. wow this is nice, fixed!

[Lite Oni]

1. I think you can remove the 'Lite' from the diffname, since it's still an Oni anyway. Alright
2. There is a decimal error on the base SV for this diff. You'll need to fix it to 1.4 in notepad.
   Fixed!
3. 00:12:180 (11,12) - i think this triplet is kinda forced. Since this section is relatively calm i suggest to remove 00:12:180 - and maybe 00:12:255 - change to d to reflect it better. Agreed
4. 00:14:430 - remove and 00:14:355 - change to d for same reason. Ok
   00:15:855 - change to d to be consistent with previous point Fixed
5. 00:18:555 - maybe make the triplet ddd instead? I think a kat triplet would sound more consistent with the music imo
6. 00:21:780 (12,13) - same as before, i'd suggest to remove 00:21:780 - and change 00:21:855 - to d Removed the centre note,
   however I decided to maintain the note at 00:21:855 - as a kat so that there's a consistent repeating k-k pattern with 00:21:105 (8,9) -
   00:23:280 (21,22) - remove and 00:23:205 - change to k Applied. I also changed the note at 00:23:655 - to a kat, with the same reason as above.
7. 00:24:180 - remove Ok
8. 00:25:380 - remove and 00:25:455 - change to d Ok
9. 00:26:580 - could add the k triplet here instead to be more consistent with next pattern. Added the triplet here, however I removed the triplet at 00:27:180 -, this way there is a nice spread of kkk d k k d kkk d pattern here instead of a triple triplet spam
10. 00:31:455 - maybe remove this note to emphasis the vocal? next finisher can get better impact too imo Agreed, fixed
    00:33:855 - same as^ ok
11. 00:40:680 - , 00:40:755 - add d? i think it's nice to make the kiai denser. sure thing
12. 00:43:080 - how about move to 00:42:930 - , nice!
    00:42:855 - change to d and 00:43:005 - change to k to make ddk triplet alright
    00:43:155 - and change to d for the kick okay, changed
    Decided to change the triplet at 00:43:455 - to a kkd since it matches the music more accurately.
13. 00:46:005 - maybe change to k? it can emphasis the vocal nicely imo sure, it can also act as a "hold note" towards 00:46:305 -
14. 00:47:055 - change to k, 00:47:130 - move to 00:47:280 - and 00:47:355 - add d, so the ddd triplet lands on similar verse with 00:47:805 (58,59,60) - ? okay
15. 00:50:055 - how about change to d, fixed
    00:50:280 - move to 00:50:130 - , and 00:50:205 - change to k to make the ddk triplet here instead. Sounds like a better spot to me
    00:50:355 - maybe change to d for the kick. Changed the section of 00:50:355 (12,13,14,15) - to a k d k d pattern instead. It flows better for this part after the ddk triplet imo.
16. 01:07:080 (54,55,56,57,58) - this snaps to 1/3 :c Changed this section to a different pattern
17. 00:51:780 - maybe move to 00:51:930 - to make a kkd? it never appear. okay
    00:52:155 - and maybe change this to d for better flow fixed
18. 01:10:305 - remove and 01:10:605 - change to k to maintain consistency with 01:08:205 - nice, fixed.

you may call me back after that :3

Volta wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]

1. 00:33:855 - maybe remove 【 no change】, and then
   00:33:630 - move to 00:33:480 - and change the triplet to ddd? sounds more smooth to me
   to be mentioned before someone, I decide to change there.
2. nice diff too!
   Thanks ٩(๑>◡<๑)۶

you may call me back after that :3

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Volta wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]

1. 00:33:855 - maybe remove 【 no change】, and then
   00:33:630 - move to 00:33:480 - and change the triplet to ddd? sounds more smooth to me
   to be mentioned before someone, I decide to change there.
2. nice diff too!
   Thanks ٩(๑>◡<๑)۶

you may call me back after that :3

Thanks for mod(¦3[___]
@neppu:
About my diff, 00:32:805 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) -
change to k-kkd-k-ddd-k-k please :3
http://puu.sh/yCxqf/d8781f1876.jpg

Volta wrote:

Mapset looks good with decent spread. Mappers use nice pattern selection in general and I demand season 2.

Re-bubbled~

neonat wrote:

All the best