smallboat wrote:

一定要删掉它

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Hard]
神触居然会做出这么简单的图来。。这作为hard太良心太简单了，BPM很低，适当考虑放些滑条跳，可以增加这个diff的乐趣。没跳的hard不是好hard，全程ds很无聊 被特别叮嘱过要做的简单向= =

1. 00:04:892 (1) –这类重音可以配合着来个小跳，不过要改全都要改，兼顾统一性 ^
2. 00:08:123 (3) –这个头上用S;C4的clap会更好 好
3. 00:38:123 (1) –首加finish更好，另外这一段开始是舒缓段，音量应该调低而不是调高 恩
4. 00:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) –这几句节奏下的完全一样真无聊，建议换些滑条和note的组合。例如00:40:892 (6) –这可以改成1/2滑条+circle，也可以直接三个圈，也可以圈加滑条，总之要增加多样性 ok
5. 00:51:046 (1) –这个音效组，加个滑条滑动静音音效，那个滑动的声音听着有点难听，另外减少音量，这音量居然比KIAI还大，有点喧宾夺主 ok
6. KIAI音量同insane的建议，太低，根本打空气，建议到70以上 ok
7. 00:55:661 –这音量减成25干嘛，没任何意义，要复制insane的绿线偷懒也检查一遍啊 。。。吧没用的绿线都删了。。。
8. 01:07:200 (4) –这头上的clap你有没有搞错了，检查一遍绿线
9. 01:05:815 (1,2,3) –我建议这三个头上用相同的音效，就是N;C2的clap，然后01:07:200 (4) –用S;C4的clap，打击感很好，而且适合kiai的激烈度。 2和4加了，1和3没加
10. 01:10:430 –这地方几根绿线自己看不说了 。。。
11. 01:12:738 (4) –头上漏了个clap done
12. 01:21:507 (5) –尾上用S;C4的clap done
13. 01:27:507 (5) –音量又无缘无故变了，你要知道hard和insane是不一样的，节奏不一样，音效自然就不一样，insane里面有很多1/4的串子或者连续1/2，而这类串子全加音效会很吵，所以就用绿线来减小音量，而你的hard节奏是很简单的，音效不用考虑那么复杂，一味的复制绿线只能ruin your diff hitsound pattern
14. 01:27:507 (5) –头上我建议改成水滴的音效，就是这个00:22:661 (4) –滑条尾的 done

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smallboat wrote:

Hi,victorica_db, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.為什麼會有這些bassdrum clap cymbol hihat命名的多餘的音效? 這些是沒辦法用自定義調音效的，一定要刪掉它，不要留沒有用到的檔案在Rank圖裡面。是 mania的音效
2.自定義音效名稱我建議前面第一個字小寫。= =..

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

00:09:507 (2,3,4,5) - 感覺能呈一個弧度比較好看。3下移了一些
00:10:430 (3,5) - 這邊其實可以照24拍加個whistle，不一定只有前面的12才要加呀，可以加看看。加了很多
00:13:200 (2,3,4) - 三角形?唔 这个是有些不好看 因为直的滑条限制 我也不知道怎么办了> <
00:25:200 (3) - 跟前面疊起來?好
00:38:123 (3) - 這邊是重音怎麼不加finish改了 不过好像效果看不出来
01:22:430 (1) - ^Okay

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane] Hard是 AR7 然後這個Insane也 AR7 ? 建議 AR+1 來辨認出區別圈圈速度。好

00:05:353 (3,4,5) - 前面跳得這麼大，然後這邊用antijump做跳不太有什麼漸慢感覺，尤其是4點到5的時候，沒什麼理由，test一下就知道了。好吧 这里咱想办法改下
00:08:584 (1,2) - 考慮看看要不要24拍加一個whistle。好
00:12:969 (4) - 或許可以試試放在00:11:815 (6) 滑條頭上做個轉圈flow，放在這邊有點彆扭。恩 试着改了一下
00:25:200 (5,6) - 試著擺個弧度? 現在這個明顯是凹進去的不好看。好
00:27:046 (1) - Blanket 00:26:815 (4) ?fixed
00:27:507 (2) - 這可以小跳，中間有長音可以放遠一點，放到2.0x左右可行。例如 (472|316)。
00:31:661 (4,6) - 同樣這邊也是做跳，這樣看起來很擠，試著再放開點。
00:36:276 (4) - 弧度，也可以個人喜好選擇no change。这里做出弧度就会太弯了 这里还有个三连
00:42:276 (2) - 或許滑條尾可試試疊00:40:661 (2) 滑條頭上。好
00:54:507 (1) - 這樣放也是可以，但有點擠，給你兩個選擇:可以都兼顾哦

SPOILER

,

SPOILER

00:58:430 (1) - 放到(220|92)比較有感覺。好

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.谢谢mod~

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. 把所有难度widescreen support去掉好像是呢 这个只有sb用的到
2. Tags里的Log Horizon去掉，因为source里已经有过，另外加ed在tags里

[Insane]

1. AR+1，和hard区别开来，而且这个insane的难度需要一个AR8的支持。Fixed
2. 00:07:661 (3,4,5,6) –这形状flow不怎么舒服，考虑把00:08:353 (6) –放到(148,124)这个附近, 后面的蓝1和2之类的位置也跟着变下，现在这个6翘着而且形状就诡异。恩 做了些修改
3. 00:08:123 (5) –用S;C4的clap和你的normal保持一致？好
4. 00:13:200 (5) –首加whistle和00:09:507 (3) –保持一致？好
5. 00:15:969 (1) –finish略吵，考虑把音量减小到50左右好
6. 00:21:507 (2) –首加个whistle更好，因为有钢琴音好
7. 00:22:892 (5) –很明确的漏了个clap，水滴音唔 sorry
8. 00:37:200 (2) –这个用默认的normal-hit音更好吧，音乐里这个音的音效和左右是不一样的，应该是个地鼓位
9. 00:38:123 (1) –首，00:38:123 (1,2) –尾这些类似的，这一段音乐里有低音鼓的这一段，用N;C2的hit音加上，不要空着音效，像打空气。哇 效果很棒 Thank U
10. 00:39:046 (3) –这个尾巴也是
11. 00:51:046 (2) –减小点音量，太吵了好
12. 00:51:738 (1,2,3) –这里音很弱，强烈不建议放跳好 12 交换了位子
13. 00:52:892 (1) –KIAI音效音量真小，就45%还没主歌高，根本听不见，强烈建议到70%因为咱用了normalhit 所以70真的玩起来好别扭 真的> <
14. 01:07:200 (1) –试试使用S;C4的clap,跟贴合音乐好
15. 01:21:969 (2) -^
16. 01:09:276 (1,2) –为啥你喜欢把1/2的摆成这样，打着很坑，像1/4，而且不符合设计学因为咱是强双啦> <
17. 01:17:353 (3,5,6) -^

[Normal]

1. 这虽然是最低难度，但是是个normal，请HP+1，OD+1来平衡难度，然后AR+1好
2. 00:19:200 (1) –加whistle会更好 好
3. 00:37:200 (1,2) –加点啥音效，别空着，音乐这的鼓音和之前是不一样的，我建议加默认的normal的hit音，也就是N;C2的clap不错呢QvQ
4. 00:46:892 (2) –漏了个whistle捂脸
5. 00:51:046 –这些建议同insane，音量什么的，还有KIAI的也是会试图做些更改
6. 00:55:661 (5) –clap呢？不要只把clap加在折返滑条身上，请仔细听一下，这样是不会发出clap的声音的，请把clap加在滑条头或者尾或者折返箭头上来表达好
7. 00:59:353 –为啥要减低音量？我觉得这个和insane的情况不一样Fixed
8. 01:07:661 (1) –首加finish和00:52:892 (1) –保持一致好
9. 01:21:507 (3) –尾巴上用S;C4的clap试试不错呢 加了
10. 01:27:046 (3) –折返箭头上不要降低音量，这很另类，听着也不舒服。另外我建议用那个水滴的音效放在这个折返箭头上。恩要改的话insane也改成水滴唔 怪怪的 保留了

谢谢小凛的mod> <
mod 和作图一样都好神QwQ

S o a p wrote:

[HARD]
00:21:046 (5,1,2) - 这边明明是个长音为什么要加这么多不明的节奏 因为跟的节奏o.o
00:34:200 (8,1) - ctrl+G break the flow
00:41:353 (7) - 这个间距变得没什么意思 改掉 好
01:03:046 (7) - 这里是个重音怎么能用滑条尾巴盖过去呢 改了
01:18:507 (8,1,2,3,4) - 这里完全对不上歌词啊 跟的节奏

_(:з」∠)_GDER来找我摸那我就摸GD了啊【炸 果然是懒比

axschiming wrote:

hello,m4m


[Hard]
00:15:969 (1,2,3) - 拼成一个正三角形试试？ 好
00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - 看看这样猴不猴哦，4的尾巴消音掉-w- 还是现在这样好

SPOILER

00:55:661 (7) - 改成向下弯好些 还是现在这样好

其他实在找不出问题了Orz


大概就这样，实在摸不动了Orz
给图和歌都赞一个，射一发，祝早日rank

axschiming wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:584 (1,2) - 包一下？ 不好
00:13:200 (2,3) - 这两个调整下位置让flow更加平滑些？改了下
00:23:353 (1) - 我感觉开头用SC5的clap也挺带感,其他难度的也是。。。额
01:05:815 (1,2,3,4) - 叮叮地有点怪怪的，柑橘能换一个皮肤的默认音效会影响 改了一下
01:10:430 (4) - 尾巴稍稍偏左一点点？flow或许更好些恩
01:17:815 (6) - 包下2...？

[Insane]
00:07:661 (3,4,5,6) - 你看看这样好不好0 0.因为音乐是越来越弱的。。不太好吧

SPOILER

00:15:507 (4) - Ctrl+H再稍稍调整下试试？感觉能和12凑成2组额
00:19:200 (4,5) - 稍稍突出下这两声？虽然我也不知怎么放好，但是感觉这两声挺亮调整了下
00:33:738 (1) - 与7放在同一个y上？恩
00:34:661 (6) - 同上好
01:24:969 - ……美丽？这里没有音也不能overmap呀
谢谢mod 和星星
大概就这样，实在摸不动了Orz
给图和歌都赞一个，射一发，祝早日rank

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m from ur queue (sry i can only do standard)


[Spring Roll's Hard]

00:02:123 (3) - blanket (2)? fixed

00:02:815 (5,2) - not stacked properly fixed

00:09:507 (2,6) - stack? fixed

00:41:353 (7) - move this to x64 y256? fixed

00:43:661 (4,6) - not stacked properly (turn off grid snap to stack this)
01:13:200 (5,7) - ^ fixed

00:55:661 (7) - x404 y100? i prefer mine

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Add Audio-Lead-In better, the beginning looks so suddenly. Maybe 1500 better. i dont know how to change it ,i cant find it owo
KIAI-TIME should be started at 00:52:892 better for playing. for i have to make the kiai time same with other diffs,so no change.

[Hard]
Due to low BPM and SV, I suppose AR6 would be better but it's up to you. i prefer ar7
Placement
Some blanket looks forced and ugly for playing, you should consider on this.
00:09:507(2,6) Stack these notes better. fixed
00:15:969(1) If you aim to jump here, maybe get more spacing better. Current looks a bit confused. fixed
00:31:661(3) Change this direction like this and the flow would be more nice. i prefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:430(1) CTRL+G looks more nice flow from (8) for playing. fixed
Hit Sound
00:08:584~00:38:123 You can put hitsounds in this part more positively, ex) whistle to follow the piano, clap to follow the drum. fixed


Good Luck.

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m from ur queue (sry i can only do standard) :d

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

00:12:276 (1,2,3) - make this less random (you could like do some kind of blanket to 00:14:123 (4) kinda like this http://gyazo.com/2c236301792e7b0be2f6f33125f5aef9)changed some

00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - make this curve more eventry my best...

00:38:123 (3,4,5) - how bout blanketing (4)no it will break the flow

00:47:353 (3) - idk why, this pattern looks a bit ugly to me. try to change this slider a bit maybeyea changed it to a circle

01:02:584 (5) - move this down to y104 so its the same as (3) ok

01:04:661 (2,1,2) - more equal triangle? http://gyazo.com/79d66ea9f3651abfc417dcbeccf40dddchanged some

01:08:584 (2,4) - not stacked properly?

01:15:046 (1,2,3) - better square let me go ;w;

01:27:046 (3) - this sounds better; http://gyazo.com/eac7587d91cbabd1f953d27d411c4089

more beat blankets @_@nice thx


[Sweet Vanilla's Insane]

00:02:815 (4,5) - why not stack like you did for (2) and (3)? hum

00:09:046 (2,3) - blanket?ok

(this part you can probably just ignore)
00:19:084 (3) - overmap tbh.
00:30:161 (3) - ^
00:34:084 (3) - ^
00:35:700 (2) - ^

00:24:276 (3) - fix up blanket a little bit
00:40:661 (2) - ^
00:42:738 (3) - ^
01:19:430 (3) - ^
01:11:353 (1) - ^
01:16:661 (1) - ^

00:21:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - im not sure how to but try to make a better pentagon? (maybe you can try to do the star stuff)

00:40:661 (2,2) - stack?yea

01:26:815 (3,5) - not stacked properly

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Add Audio-Lead-In better, the beginning looks so suddenly. Maybe 1500 better.done but it sounds bad
KIAI-TIME should be started at 00:52:892 better for playing.Fixed
[Normal]
Placement
00:38:123(3) Add NC here because of downbeat.ok
00:54:738(3,4,5) On here, I suppose it looks not good flow, you can put notes like 00:57:507 (2,3) it looks naturally and easy to play. e.g)changed some

SPOILER

01:18:738(1) Prefer not to add red tick on this slider since it doesn't work better.changed
01:25:200(1,2) Swap NC better to follow the previous pattern.no it looks too long
Rhythm
00:37:200 Unnecessary green line
00:59:238 ^ and more.
Hit Sound
00:18:738(4) Add whistle better for pattern, and delete whistle at (5)' head. For newbie, you can put whistles for consistent.adjust some

[Insane]
Placement
00:16:892(5) It's fine but bent this slider a bit, and the flow looks more nicely. e.g.)nice

SPOILER

00:30:969(2) I suppose you can move this note better since the movement from (1) to (3) looks a bit odd. e.g.)changed some

SPOILER

00:31:661(3,4) Try to get more spacing here? Just conidering, it looks narrow compared other placements.adjust
01:09:969(2) It looks so confused since this spacing looks not properly. Move this note away better.changed
01:18:276(6)^^
Rhythm
00:04:661 I'll expect a note here since yo ualready add at 00:01:892.it is not the same imo
00:19:084(3) Remove this note better since there is no similar sound here. Instaed, add a note at 00:19:546 better.
Hit Sound
00:13:892(1)Add whistle at reverse, it sounds really nicely for playing.nice
00:22:200(2) Add whistle here.This note has emphasized by instrumental.agree
00:38:123(1) Addi finish at head.fixed
thx for mod~
Good Luck.

Charles445 wrote:

[Standard]



[Spring Roll's Hard]
Difficulty is missing SliderBorder setting. Since you have a hitcircle skin you need to add a SliderBorder to your map file. Open the .osu in notepad, go to Colours and change it to this -> http://puu.sh/7Z7d2.png
Overall Difficulty +1? I think 6 would fit this difficulty. all fixed

Charles445 wrote:

[Standard]

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]
Difficulty is missing SliderBorder setting. Since you have a hitcircle skin you need to add a SliderBorder to your map file. Open the .osu in notepad, go to [Colours] and change it to this -> http://puu.sh/7Z792.png oh, I forgot it sorry> < fixed
01:18:738 (7) - Add new combookay
01:20:584 (1,2) - 1/2 sliders in a row is difficult for beginners to read and play. Two circles would work fine here. -> http://puu.sh/7Z732.jpgfixed

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane]
Difficulty is missing SliderBorder setting. Since you have a hitcircle skin you need to add a SliderBorder to your map file. Open the .osu in notepad, go to Colours and change it to this -> http://puu.sh/7Z792.png^
00:11:700 (5) - Remove this circle? It doesn't fit any instrument in the music. hum,okay fixed
00:35:700 (2) - Same with this circle.fixed
The spacing in this difficulty is rather strange, a lot of the spacing changes don't fit with the music.
For example, 00:23:353 (1,2) - is a big jump , 00:23:815 (2,3) - is very small spacing, 00:24:276 (3,4) - is a big jump, then 00:24:969 (4,5,6) - is normal. It doesn't make sense to change the spacing four times so quickly here.yes, now fixed the inconsistent spacing
I think more consistent spacing overall would make this difficulty more fun to play.thank you, I try my best to make my map more consistent, welcome you back > <
Thank you!! nice mod as you always done

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, M4M

Spring Roll's Hard

00:51:046 - Please turn off kai, it looks a bit funny starting here. Usually Kai time is triggered during the chorus or on the fast tempo part of a song. fixed

01:22:430 - Consider ending Kai time here. The stanza at this point is pretty much the same as 00:01:200 (which does not have Kai time). fixed


Not a bad mapset Good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, M4M

Sweet Vanilla's Insane

00:01:200 (1) - Add a soft finish on the head, for a better intro into the playtime.okay

00:04:892 (2,4) - Erm, really ugly overlap here not even HD mod can hide it. 00:05:815 (4) - 's head is completely covered by 00:04:892 (2) - . Please re-arrange these sliders.it fine

00:17:584 (7,8) - Consider replacing these objects with 00:28:661 (1,2) - , so that it will follow vocals better. Also, it'll keep the consistency in the pattern, since this stanza corresponds to the same stanza as 00:28:661 (1,2) - i have considered it, but it be played well with background sound

01:22:430 - Consider ending Kai time here. The stanza at this point is pretty much the same as 00:01:200 (which does not have Kai time).okay

Sweet Vanilla's Normal

00:01:200 (1) - Add a soft finish on the head, for a better intro into the playtime.^
00:08:584 (1) - ^^

00:11:353 (5,2) - Consider moving these objects more apart, so that 00:13:200 (2) - doesn't look attached to the remains of 00:11:353 (5) - . it is fine imo

01:22:430 - Consider ending Kai time here, as said beforeokay.

Not a bad mapset Good luck!

1. 00:03:046 (3,1,2,3,1) - I cannot understand the NC placement scheme here. Maybe remove all NC and add NC at 00:04:892 (2) instead?
2. 00:20:123 (2) - Add whistle? Sounds better for me. (Feels too silent without a whistle, besides, synth piano notes landing on white ticks are either of the same pitch, or sounds almost the same.)
3. 00:22:430 (3) - Add whistle? The pitch here is higher than the rest of the stanza except the note at the preceding red tick.
4. 00:35:353 (3) - Add whistle on slider end. That whatever-that-is sounds whistle-worthy.
5. 01:00:276 (1) - Remove finish (For consistency - no finish was added at 01:15:046 (1) and on the same points in Insane)

1. 00:22:661 (4) - Add repeat to fill 00:23:123 - ? Synth piano note on the empty red tick as important as the other synth notes mapped on the same stanza imo

1. 00:16:430 (3) - Add whistle, just like Normal.
2. 00:23:123 - Add a note? The synth here feels important for me. (Same as Hard)
3. 00:48:276 (1) - Move spinner to 00:48:969 and end at 00:51:046 for the clap or at 00:50:584 for the bell sort of sound? imo it's better if you map 00:48:046 - 00:48:738. Also, the spinner feels better placed at 00:48:969 where it emphasizes only three vocal notes with the same pitch. (The second syllable has lower pitch, is shorter, and is sung more softly, so it can be ignored.)
4. 01:24:969 - Add circle? Feels too silent without one, especially since the pace here is the same as the beats before and after this point.

1. 00:11:353 (5) - add whistle at tail to match whistle filler in insane
2. 00:15:046 (5) - ^
3. 00:25:200 (3) - i think you forgot to add a whistle here. or im not sure why you would leave that one whistle out when it was there for the previous section, like at 00:10:430 (3) !
4. 00:28:892 (3) - ^
5. 00:32:584 (3) - ^ at head

1. cant find anything ~ nice difficulty!

1. this is a bit easy for an insane diff o-o AR+1?
2. 00:13:892 (7,1) - swap them in the timeline? have the slider come before the hitcircle and remove NC (add NC at 00:14:584 (2)) putting the slider on the strongest vocal has a nicer feel imo. it also adds a fitting jump for the vocal and has a hitcircle to hit the weaker vocal
3. 00:23:123 (6) - add note~! it feels empty, especially since the piano continues and has a note there
4. 00:33:969 (2) - i think you missed a whistle here
5. 00:55:661 (5,6) - not really anything wrong but i personally would change 5 into a reverse slider and remove 6 to match the back and forth motion that you have at 00:59:353 (3,4,5) and 3 other places! just a suggestion~

Eyenine wrote:

Yo.
For M4M
I don't know if my mod will be of any help to your map at this point, but I'll try.np

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

1. 00:03:046 (3,1,2,3,1) - I cannot understand the NC placement scheme here. Maybe remove all NC and add NC at 00:04:892 (2) instead?fixed
2. 00:20:123 (2) - Add whistle? Sounds better for me. (Feels too silent without a whistle, besides, synth piano notes landing on white ticks are either of the same pitch, or sounds almost the same.)added
3. 00:22:430 (3) - Add whistle? The pitch here is higher than the rest of the stanza except the note at the preceding red tick.^
4. 00:35:353 (3) - Add whistle on slider end. That whatever-that-is sounds whistle-worthy.^
5. 01:00:276 (1) - Remove finish (For consistency - no finish was added at 01:15:046 (1) and on the same points in Insane)okay

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane]

1. 00:16:430 (3) - Add whistle, just like Normal.fixed
2. 00:23:123 - Add a note? The synth here feels important for me. (Same as Hard)hum..nope
3. 00:48:276 (1) - Move spinner to 00:48:969 and end at 00:51:046 for the clap or at 00:50:584 for the bell sort of sound? imo it's better if you map 00:48:046 - 00:48:738. Also, the spinner feels better placed at 00:48:969 where it emphasizes only three vocal notes with the same pitch. (The second syllable has lower pitch, is shorter, and is sung more softly, so it can be ignored.)i thk it's fine thx
4. 01:24:969 - Add circle? Feels too silent without one, especially since the pace here is the same as the beats before and after this point.fixed

I couldn't find many issues (other than nazi), sorry.
Sorry I took too long for this mod.
Also, sorry if my mod isn't of any help.
thx for mod and star~
Good luck, and a star~

Kihhou wrote:

HI~! M4M friend!

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

1. 00:11:353 (5) - add whistle at tail to match whistle filler in insaneokay
2. 00:15:046 (5) - ^^
3. 00:25:200 (3) - i think you forgot to add a whistle here. or im not sure why you would leave that one whistle out when it was there for the previous section, like at 00:10:430 (3) ! okay
4. 00:28:892 (3) - ^^
5. 00:32:584 (3) - ^ at head^

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane]

1. this is a bit easy for an insane diff o-o AR+1?nono that's very hard in dt mod
2. 00:13:892 (7,1) - swap them in the timeline? have the slider come before the hitcircle and remove NC (add NC at 00:14:584 (2)) putting the slider on the strongest vocal has a nicer feel imo. it also adds a fitting jump for the vocal and has a hitcircle to hit the weaker vocali changed them to a jump
3. 00:23:123 (6) - add note~! it feels empty, especially since the piano continues and has a note thereokay
4. 00:33:969 (2) - i think you missed a whistle herefixed
5. 00:55:661 (5,6) - not really anything wrong but i personally would change 5 into a reverse slider and remove 6 to match the back and forth motion that you have at 00:59:353 (3,4,5) and 3 other places! just a suggestion~changed the flow here, I really doesn't like current one too

thanks for your mod~
Hope this helped~ Good luck!

Eyenine wrote:

Yo.
For M4M
I don't know if my mod will be of any help to your map at this point, but I'll try.
[Spring Roll's Hard]

1. 00:22:661 (4) - Add repeat to fill 00:23:123 - ? Synth piano note on the empty red tick as important as the other synth notes mapped on the same stanza imo no i prefer mine

Good luck, and a star~

Kihhou wrote:

HI~! M4M friend!



[Spring Roll's Hard]

1. cant find anything ~ nice difficulty! thank you~

Hope this helped~ Good luck!

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From ur request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
If you need translation to Chinese, please let me know.（如果你需要中文版，请告诉我）

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Please remove (TV Size) in the title, Reference: Click!
Also, The Source should be ログ・ホライズン, and please add LOG HORIZON to the tag.
Some minor stuff to say.

[Spring Roll's Hard]
General
Some little thing to say..
Beats
00:16:892 (3,4,5) - I'm pretty sure that you followed vocal here, but next slider, you just changed to drum, which is not easy to notice though the distance is obvious. So I just suggest changing the next slider. (used a small jump to make it easier to make and better to look) Example: fixed

SPOILER

Hitsound
00:56:123 - S:C4 clap and whistle is more suitable to emphasize the sound. all fixed
00:59:815 - Same as above. And 01:10:892 , 01:14:584
01:20:584 (1,3) - S:C4 clap is more suitable for the 2 notes to follow the background music. fixed
01:27:507 - Really strange to hear the hitsound here, but the background is the sound you used, so I'll give it a pass, but strongly recommend that make the volume lower by 20% or so. i change the volume to 40%,it isnt strange now i think(maybe

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.
Call me back when you are ready~ www

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From ur request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
If you need translation to Chinese, please let me know.（如果你需要中文版，请告诉我）

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Please remove (TV Size) in the title, Reference: Click!
Also, The Source should be ログ・ホライズン, and please add LOG HORIZON to the tag.
Some minor stuff to say.

[Selisi's Normal]
General
Well done~ Nothing here important to say~Thanks a lot^ ^

[Selisi's Insane]
General
Well done, just some small stuff to say here.
Beats
00:48:276 (1) - Just saying that here you used a spinner to cover the vocal sentence, which in a Insane diff, it's not that tight in beats. So I just suggest a more tight beat here by following beats. Example:thanks^ ^ you are right, fixed it now

SPOILER

(placement depends on you, not a hard thing to do imo ww)

Placement
00:32:815 (7,8) - (Nazi) Stack properly plz~ (X:155 Y:257)fixed
Hitsound
00:56:123 - Maybe also use whistle on the note? Fits in the music.okay
NCs
00:21:969 (1) - Just a suggestion here, to make the pattern more like a whole one, remove NC here?fixed

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.
Call me back when you are ready~ www
Thank you very much Ature^ ^

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Mania checked, no any problems~ Piano'd owo

Atrue wrote:

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Mania checked, no any problems~ Piano'd owo

Ok~ Rechecked and every thing looks fine~ (Added TV size as tag)

Good luck!
Bubbled~