smallboat wrote:

一定要删掉它

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Hard]
神触居然会做出这么简单的图来。。这作为hard太良心太简单了，BPM很低，适当考虑放些滑条跳，可以增加这个diff的乐趣。没跳的hard不是好hard，全程ds很无聊 被特别叮嘱过要做的简单向= =

1. 00:04:892 (1) –这类重音可以配合着来个小跳，不过要改全都要改，兼顾统一性 ^
2. 00:08:123 (3) –这个头上用S;C4的clap会更好 好
3. 00:38:123 (1) –首加finish更好，另外这一段开始是舒缓段，音量应该调低而不是调高 恩
4. 00:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) –这几句节奏下的完全一样真无聊，建议换些滑条和note的组合。例如00:40:892 (6) –这可以改成1/2滑条+circle，也可以直接三个圈，也可以圈加滑条，总之要增加多样性 ok
5. 00:51:046 (1) –这个音效组，加个滑条滑动静音音效，那个滑动的声音听着有点难听，另外减少音量，这音量居然比KIAI还大，有点喧宾夺主 ok
6. KIAI音量同insane的建议，太低，根本打空气，建议到70以上 ok
7. 00:55:661 –这音量减成25干嘛，没任何意义，要复制insane的绿线偷懒也检查一遍啊 。。。吧没用的绿线都删了。。。
8. 01:07:200 (4) –这头上的clap你有没有搞错了，检查一遍绿线
9. 01:05:815 (1,2,3) –我建议这三个头上用相同的音效，就是N;C2的clap，然后01:07:200 (4) –用S;C4的clap，打击感很好，而且适合kiai的激烈度。 2和4加了，1和3没加
10. 01:10:430 –这地方几根绿线自己看不说了 。。。
11. 01:12:738 (4) –头上漏了个clap done
12. 01:21:507 (5) –尾上用S;C4的clap done
13. 01:27:507 (5) –音量又无缘无故变了，你要知道hard和insane是不一样的，节奏不一样，音效自然就不一样，insane里面有很多1/4的串子或者连续1/2，而这类串子全加音效会很吵，所以就用绿线来减小音量，而你的hard节奏是很简单的，音效不用考虑那么复杂，一味的复制绿线只能ruin your diff hitsound pattern
14. 01:27:507 (5) –头上我建议改成水滴的音效，就是这个00:22:661 (4) –滑条尾的 done

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smallboat wrote:

Hi,victorica_db, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.為什麼會有這些bassdrum clap cymbol hihat命名的多餘的音效? 這些是沒辦法用自定義調音效的，一定要刪掉它，不要留沒有用到的檔案在Rank圖裡面。是 mania的音效
2.自定義音效名稱我建議前面第一個字小寫。= =..

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

00:09:507 (2,3,4,5) - 感覺能呈一個弧度比較好看。3下移了一些
00:10:430 (3,5) - 這邊其實可以照24拍加個whistle，不一定只有前面的12才要加呀，可以加看看。加了很多
00:13:200 (2,3,4) - 三角形?唔 这个是有些不好看 因为直的滑条限制 我也不知道怎么办了> <
00:25:200 (3) - 跟前面疊起來?好
00:38:123 (3) - 這邊是重音怎麼不加finish改了 不过好像效果看不出来
01:22:430 (1) - ^Okay

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane] Hard是 AR7 然後這個Insane也 AR7 ? 建議 AR+1 來辨認出區別圈圈速度。好

00:05:353 (3,4,5) - 前面跳得這麼大，然後這邊用antijump做跳不太有什麼漸慢感覺，尤其是4點到5的時候，沒什麼理由，test一下就知道了。好吧 这里咱想办法改下
00:08:584 (1,2) - 考慮看看要不要24拍加一個whistle。好
00:12:969 (4) - 或許可以試試放在00:11:815 (6) 滑條頭上做個轉圈flow，放在這邊有點彆扭。恩 试着改了一下
00:25:200 (5,6) - 試著擺個弧度? 現在這個明顯是凹進去的不好看。好
00:27:046 (1) - Blanket 00:26:815 (4) ?fixed
00:27:507 (2) - 這可以小跳，中間有長音可以放遠一點，放到2.0x左右可行。例如 (472|316)。
00:31:661 (4,6) - 同樣這邊也是做跳，這樣看起來很擠，試著再放開點。
00:36:276 (4) - 弧度，也可以個人喜好選擇no change。这里做出弧度就会太弯了 这里还有个三连
00:42:276 (2) - 或許滑條尾可試試疊00:40:661 (2) 滑條頭上。好
00:54:507 (1) - 這樣放也是可以，但有點擠，給你兩個選擇:可以都兼顾哦

SPOILER

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SPOILER

00:58:430 (1) - 放到(220|92)比較有感覺。好

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.谢谢mod~

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. 把所有难度widescreen support去掉好像是呢 这个只有sb用的到
2. Tags里的Log Horizon去掉，因为source里已经有过，另外加ed在tags里

[Insane]

1. AR+1，和hard区别开来，而且这个insane的难度需要一个AR8的支持。Fixed
2. 00:07:661 (3,4,5,6) –这形状flow不怎么舒服，考虑把00:08:353 (6) –放到(148,124)这个附近, 后面的蓝1和2之类的位置也跟着变下，现在这个6翘着而且形状就诡异。恩 做了些修改
3. 00:08:123 (5) –用S;C4的clap和你的normal保持一致？好
4. 00:13:200 (5) –首加whistle和00:09:507 (3) –保持一致？好
5. 00:15:969 (1) –finish略吵，考虑把音量减小到50左右好
6. 00:21:507 (2) –首加个whistle更好，因为有钢琴音好
7. 00:22:892 (5) –很明确的漏了个clap，水滴音唔 sorry
8. 00:37:200 (2) –这个用默认的normal-hit音更好吧，音乐里这个音的音效和左右是不一样的，应该是个地鼓位
9. 00:38:123 (1) –首，00:38:123 (1,2) –尾这些类似的，这一段音乐里有低音鼓的这一段，用N;C2的hit音加上，不要空着音效，像打空气。哇 效果很棒 Thank U
10. 00:39:046 (3) –这个尾巴也是
11. 00:51:046 (2) –减小点音量，太吵了好
12. 00:51:738 (1,2,3) –这里音很弱，强烈不建议放跳好 12 交换了位子
13. 00:52:892 (1) –KIAI音效音量真小，就45%还没主歌高，根本听不见，强烈建议到70%因为咱用了normalhit 所以70真的玩起来好别扭 真的> <
14. 01:07:200 (1) –试试使用S;C4的clap,跟贴合音乐好
15. 01:21:969 (2) -^
16. 01:09:276 (1,2) –为啥你喜欢把1/2的摆成这样，打着很坑，像1/4，而且不符合设计学因为咱是强双啦> <
17. 01:17:353 (3,5,6) -^

[Normal]

1. 这虽然是最低难度，但是是个normal，请HP+1，OD+1来平衡难度，然后AR+1好
2. 00:19:200 (1) –加whistle会更好 好
3. 00:37:200 (1,2) –加点啥音效，别空着，音乐这的鼓音和之前是不一样的，我建议加默认的normal的hit音，也就是N;C2的clap不错呢QvQ
4. 00:46:892 (2) –漏了个whistle捂脸
5. 00:51:046 –这些建议同insane，音量什么的，还有KIAI的也是会试图做些更改
6. 00:55:661 (5) –clap呢？不要只把clap加在折返滑条身上，请仔细听一下，这样是不会发出clap的声音的，请把clap加在滑条头或者尾或者折返箭头上来表达好
7. 00:59:353 –为啥要减低音量？我觉得这个和insane的情况不一样Fixed
8. 01:07:661 (1) –首加finish和00:52:892 (1) –保持一致好
9. 01:21:507 (3) –尾巴上用S;C4的clap试试不错呢 加了
10. 01:27:046 (3) –折返箭头上不要降低音量，这很另类，听着也不舒服。另外我建议用那个水滴的音效放在这个折返箭头上。恩要改的话insane也改成水滴唔 怪怪的 保留了

谢谢小凛的mod> <
mod 和作图一样都好神QwQ

S o a p wrote:

[HARD]
00:21:046 (5,1,2) - 这边明明是个长音为什么要加这么多不明的节奏 因为跟的节奏o.o
00:34:200 (8,1) - ctrl+G break the flow
00:41:353 (7) - 这个间距变得没什么意思 改掉 好
01:03:046 (7) - 这里是个重音怎么能用滑条尾巴盖过去呢 改了
01:18:507 (8,1,2,3,4) - 这里完全对不上歌词啊 跟的节奏

_(:з」∠)_GDER来找我摸那我就摸GD了啊【炸 果然是懒比

axschiming wrote:

hello,m4m


[Hard]
00:15:969 (1,2,3) - 拼成一个正三角形试试？ 好
00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - 看看这样猴不猴哦，4的尾巴消音掉-w- 还是现在这样好

SPOILER

00:55:661 (7) - 改成向下弯好些 还是现在这样好

其他实在找不出问题了Orz


大概就这样，实在摸不动了Orz
给图和歌都赞一个，射一发，祝早日rank

axschiming wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:584 (1,2) - 包一下？ 不好
00:13:200 (2,3) - 这两个调整下位置让flow更加平滑些？改了下
00:23:353 (1) - 我感觉开头用SC5的clap也挺带感,其他难度的也是。。。额
01:05:815 (1,2,3,4) - 叮叮地有点怪怪的，柑橘能换一个皮肤的默认音效会影响 改了一下
01:10:430 (4) - 尾巴稍稍偏左一点点？flow或许更好些恩
01:17:815 (6) - 包下2...？

[Insane]
00:07:661 (3,4,5,6) - 你看看这样好不好0 0.因为音乐是越来越弱的。。不太好吧

SPOILER

00:15:507 (4) - Ctrl+H再稍稍调整下试试？感觉能和12凑成2组额
00:19:200 (4,5) - 稍稍突出下这两声？虽然我也不知怎么放好，但是感觉这两声挺亮调整了下
00:33:738 (1) - 与7放在同一个y上？恩
00:34:661 (6) - 同上好
01:24:969 - ……美丽？这里没有音也不能overmap呀
谢谢mod 和星星
大概就这样，实在摸不动了Orz
给图和歌都赞一个，射一发，祝早日rank

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m from ur queue (sry i can only do standard)


[Spring Roll's Hard]

00:02:123 (3) - blanket (2)? fixed

00:02:815 (5,2) - not stacked properly fixed

00:09:507 (2,6) - stack? fixed

00:41:353 (7) - move this to x64 y256? fixed

00:43:661 (4,6) - not stacked properly (turn off grid snap to stack this)
01:13:200 (5,7) - ^ fixed

00:55:661 (7) - x404 y100? i prefer mine

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Add Audio-Lead-In better, the beginning looks so suddenly. Maybe 1500 better. i dont know how to change it ,i cant find it owo
KIAI-TIME should be started at 00:52:892 better for playing. for i have to make the kiai time same with other diffs,so no change.

[Hard]
Due to low BPM and SV, I suppose AR6 would be better but it's up to you. i prefer ar7
Placement
Some blanket looks forced and ugly for playing, you should consider on this.
00:09:507(2,6) Stack these notes better. fixed
00:15:969(1) If you aim to jump here, maybe get more spacing better. Current looks a bit confused. fixed
00:31:661(3) Change this direction like this and the flow would be more nice. i prefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:430(1) CTRL+G looks more nice flow from (8) for playing. fixed
Hit Sound
00:08:584~00:38:123 You can put hitsounds in this part more positively, ex) whistle to follow the piano, clap to follow the drum. fixed


Good Luck.

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m from ur queue (sry i can only do standard) :d

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

00:12:276 (1,2,3) - make this less random (you could like do some kind of blanket to 00:14:123 (4) kinda like this http://gyazo.com/2c236301792e7b0be2f6f33125f5aef9)changed some

00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - make this curve more eventry my best...

00:38:123 (3,4,5) - how bout blanketing (4)no it will break the flow

00:47:353 (3) - idk why, this pattern looks a bit ugly to me. try to change this slider a bit maybeyea changed it to a circle

01:02:584 (5) - move this down to y104 so its the same as (3) ok

01:04:661 (2,1,2) - more equal triangle? http://gyazo.com/79d66ea9f3651abfc417dcbeccf40dddchanged some

01:08:584 (2,4) - not stacked properly?

01:15:046 (1,2,3) - better square let me go ;w;

01:27:046 (3) - this sounds better; http://gyazo.com/eac7587d91cbabd1f953d27d411c4089

more beat blankets @_@nice thx


[Sweet Vanilla's Insane]

00:02:815 (4,5) - why not stack like you did for (2) and (3)? hum

00:09:046 (2,3) - blanket?ok

(this part you can probably just ignore)
00:19:084 (3) - overmap tbh.
00:30:161 (3) - ^
00:34:084 (3) - ^
00:35:700 (2) - ^

00:24:276 (3) - fix up blanket a little bit
00:40:661 (2) - ^
00:42:738 (3) - ^
01:19:430 (3) - ^
01:11:353 (1) - ^
01:16:661 (1) - ^

00:21:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - im not sure how to but try to make a better pentagon? (maybe you can try to do the star stuff)

00:40:661 (2,2) - stack?yea

01:26:815 (3,5) - not stacked properly

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Add Audio-Lead-In better, the beginning looks so suddenly. Maybe 1500 better.done but it sounds bad
KIAI-TIME should be started at 00:52:892 better for playing.Fixed
[Normal]
Placement
00:38:123(3) Add NC here because of downbeat.ok
00:54:738(3,4,5) On here, I suppose it looks not good flow, you can put notes like 00:57:507 (2,3) it looks naturally and easy to play. e.g)changed some

SPOILER

01:18:738(1) Prefer not to add red tick on this slider since it doesn't work better.changed
01:25:200(1,2) Swap NC better to follow the previous pattern.no it looks too long
Rhythm
00:37:200 Unnecessary green line
00:59:238 ^ and more.
Hit Sound
00:18:738(4) Add whistle better for pattern, and delete whistle at (5)' head. For newbie, you can put whistles for consistent.adjust some

[Insane]
Placement
00:16:892(5) It's fine but bent this slider a bit, and the flow looks more nicely. e.g.)nice

SPOILER

00:30:969(2) I suppose you can move this note better since the movement from (1) to (3) looks a bit odd. e.g.)changed some

SPOILER

00:31:661(3,4) Try to get more spacing here? Just conidering, it looks narrow compared other placements.adjust
01:09:969(2) It looks so confused since this spacing looks not properly. Move this note away better.changed
01:18:276(6)^^
Rhythm
00:04:661 I'll expect a note here since yo ualready add at 00:01:892.it is not the same imo
00:19:084(3) Remove this note better since there is no similar sound here. Instaed, add a note at 00:19:546 better.
Hit Sound
00:13:892(1)Add whistle at reverse, it sounds really nicely for playing.nice
00:22:200(2) Add whistle here.This note has emphasized by instrumental.agree
00:38:123(1) Addi finish at head.fixed
thx for mod~
Good Luck.

Charles445 wrote:

[Standard]



[Spring Roll's Hard]
Difficulty is missing SliderBorder setting. Since you have a hitcircle skin you need to add a SliderBorder to your map file. Open the .osu in notepad, go to Colours and change it to this -> http://puu.sh/7Z7d2.png
Overall Difficulty +1? I think 6 would fit this difficulty. all fixed

Charles445 wrote:

[Standard]

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]
Difficulty is missing SliderBorder setting. Since you have a hitcircle skin you need to add a SliderBorder to your map file. Open the .osu in notepad, go to [Colours] and change it to this -> http://puu.sh/7Z792.png oh, I forgot it sorry> < fixed
01:18:738 (7) - Add new combookay
01:20:584 (1,2) - 1/2 sliders in a row is difficult for beginners to read and play. Two circles would work fine here. -> http://puu.sh/7Z732.jpgfixed

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane]
Difficulty is missing SliderBorder setting. Since you have a hitcircle skin you need to add a SliderBorder to your map file. Open the .osu in notepad, go to Colours and change it to this -> http://puu.sh/7Z792.png^
00:11:700 (5) - Remove this circle? It doesn't fit any instrument in the music. hum,okay fixed
00:35:700 (2) - Same with this circle.fixed
The spacing in this difficulty is rather strange, a lot of the spacing changes don't fit with the music.
For example, 00:23:353 (1,2) - is a big jump , 00:23:815 (2,3) - is very small spacing, 00:24:276 (3,4) - is a big jump, then 00:24:969 (4,5,6) - is normal. It doesn't make sense to change the spacing four times so quickly here.yes, now fixed the inconsistent spacing
I think more consistent spacing overall would make this difficulty more fun to play.thank you, I try my best to make my map more consistent, welcome you back > <
Thank you!! nice mod as you always done