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Kyubey
Hello! M4M from my queue.
I can't do good help with spacing and flow, but i'll say about other necessary unrankable things.
[General]
Set same uninherited timing points for all diffs.
Set same preview points for all diffs.
Make hitsounds more variety.
Delete song title/artist and your nickname from tags.
[Light]
Changing SV on easy diffs is unacceptable.
So, your spacing changes too, because of changing SV. Thats unacceptable.
Open AiMod and fix all unsnapped kiais.
Make more break times.
Rhythm is good.
[Medium]
Changing SV on normal diffs is unacceptable.
So, your spacing changes too, because of changing SV. Thats unacceptable.
Open AiMod and snap unsnapped objects.
Make more break times too.
01:20:690 (7) - NC
01:24:440 (12) - NC
01:08:502 (5) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat.
01:27:721 (16) - ^
01:38:502 (5) - ^
01:42:721 (4) - ^
02:03:815 (3,4) - Too hard spacing.
02:18:815 (3,4) - ^
02:24:440 (1,2) - Unacceptable sliders.
03:03:346 (2) - 1/4 repeats in unacceptable.
03:06:627 (3) - ^
03:23:502 (5) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat.
[Hard]
Open AiMod and fix unsnapped kiai.
01:32:877 (3) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream.
01:51:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 01:51:627 to 01:52:096. Try to add stream
02:12:252 (4,5) - If you want to make antijump, make NC here.
02:36:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627.
02:40:377 (4) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream.
02:41:784 (1) - This spinner doesn't fits.
02:47:877 (3) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream.
02:51:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627.
03:11:784 (1) - This spinner doesn't fits.
03:17:877 (5) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Beafowl

Kyubey wrote:

Hello! M4M from my queue.
I can't do good help with spacing and flow, but i'll say about other necessary unrankable things.
[General]
Set same uninherited timing points for all diffs. Done
Set same preview points for all diffs. Done
Make hitsounds more variety.
Delete song title/artist and your nickname from tags. Done
[Light]
Changing SV on easy diffs is unacceptable.
So, your spacing changes too, because of changing SV. Thats unacceptable.
Open AiMod and fix all unsnapped kiais. Done
Make more break times. Done
Rhythm is good.
[Medium]
Changing SV on normal diffs is unacceptable.
So, your spacing changes too, because of changing SV. Thats unacceptable.
Open AiMod and snap unsnapped objects. Done
Make more break times too.
01:20:690 (7) - NC Done
01:24:440 (12) - NC Done
01:08:502 (5) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Done
01:27:721 (16) - ^ Done
01:38:502 (5) - ^ Done
01:42:721 (4) - ^ Done
02:03:815 (3,4) - Too hard spacing. Done
02:18:815 (3,4) - ^ Done
02:24:440 (1,2) - Unacceptable sliders. Done
03:03:346 (2) - 1/4 repeats in unacceptable. Done
03:06:627 (3) - ^ Done
03:23:502 (5) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Done
[Hard]
Open AiMod and fix unsnapped kiai. Done
01:32:877 (3) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream. Done
01:51:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 01:51:627 to 01:52:096. Try to add stream Done
02:12:252 (4,5) - If you want to make antijump, make NC here. Made sth. different
02:36:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627. Done
02:40:377 (4) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream. Done
02:41:784 (1) - This spinner doesn't fits. Done
02:47:877 (3) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream. Done
02:51:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627. Done
03:11:784 (1) - This spinner doesn't fits. Done
03:17:877 (5) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627. Done

Good luck!
First I wanted to say that I'm sorry that I needed time to reply to your mod, in the last days I was to busy.

Thanks for your mod! :)
I didn't know that there's an AIMod, after you noticed that I looked in the file tab and saw it. LOL
The SV in Light and Medium are not changed because it is not in the ranking criteria. #modhelp also said that.
Kudosu will be given later!
Secretpipe
Hi

Mod because dubstep <3<3

[Light]

02:05:694 (1) - Make it more simple !
03:30:245 - Add a spinner ? OwO

[Medium]

01:17:881 (2) - Make a slider similar to the previous !
01:20:694 (1) - More simple !
01:25:381 (2) - Make a slider similar to the previous !
02:24:444 (6) - New combo
03:12:256 (4) - Make a symmetrical slider !
03:30:303 - Spinner :3


[Hard]
00:44:131 (4) - Reverse
00:51:631 (3) - Make a better slider ( shape)
00:54:444 (1) - ^
00:58:662 (2) - Make the slider 2 symmetrical to previous
01:41:787 (2) - Make a better slider ( shape)
03:04:756 (3) - ^
03:30:244 - Spinner xDD

Oh , and I find it too hard for a Hard diff ! Rename into insane ?


Nice song ! and Nice stuff btw xD
Good luck for rank :3
Topic Starter
Beafowl

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi

Mod because dubstep <3<3

[Light]

02:05:694 (1) - Make it more simple ! I'm not sure with that
03:30:245 - Add a spinner ? OwO Done

[Medium]

01:17:881 (2) - Make a slider similar to the previous ! Done
01:20:694 (1) - More simple ! Done
01:25:381 (2) - Make a slider similar to the previous ! Done
02:24:444 (6) - New combo Done
03:12:256 (4) - Make a symmetrical slider ! Done
03:30:303 - Spinner :3 Done


[Hard]
00:44:131 (4) - Reverse Done
00:51:631 (3) - Make a better slider ( shape) Done
00:54:444 (1) - ^ Done
00:58:662 (2) - Make the slider 2 symmetrical to previous Done
01:41:787 (2) - Make a better slider ( shape) Done
03:04:756 (3) - ^ Done
03:30:244 - Spinner xDD Done

Oh , and I find it too hard for a Hard diff ! Rename into insane ? You're right, it's harder than hard. I will notice that.


Nice song ! and Nice stuff btw xD
Good luck for rank :3
Thanks for your mod!
BigWilly
[Light]

00:07:569 (4,5) - Avoid the overlap by moving #4 up a bit and right a bit

00:29:131 (6,1) - Avoid the Overlap by moving 6 to the left a bit
00:54:444 (1,2) - Try to make these two sliders go in the same direction
01:03:819 (3,4) - ^
01:17:881 (4,5) - Place 3 in the curve of 5
01:35:694 (1,2) - Try to make these two sliders go in the same direction

GL
Topic Starter
Beafowl

Feverie wrote:

[Light]

00:07:569 (4,5) - Avoid the overlap by moving #4 up a bit and right a bit Done

00:29:131 (6,1) - Avoid the Overlap by moving 6 to the left a bit Done
00:54:444 (1,2) - Try to make these two sliders go in the same direction Done
01:03:819 (3,4) - ^ Done
01:17:881 (4,5) - Place 3 in the curve of 5 Done
01:35:694 (1,2) - Try to make these two sliders go in the same direction Done

GL
Thanks for your mod!
sleumas2000
Light:
02:59:131 (2) - Sudden Change in Slider Velocity caught me really unawares, makes the map a lot harder to read. I'd recommend you keep the same velocity.
03:03:350 (1,1) - Why the New Combos?
03:07:569 (5) - Should be one here instead
03:29:131 (2) - ^^^Slider Velocity again
Medium:
02:25:381 (2) - A little Hard to read
02:59:131 (7) - Guess what: Slider Velocity
03:29:131 (2) - ^
Hard:
00:03:819 (1,2) - Don't like the spacing here. Too Jump (not that it's hard, it just doesn't play well)
02:16:006 (1) - Try Moving so it isn't covered
02:28:194 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Very Irregular Spacing, try spreading the notes so they, at least, only half cover each other. hey currently cover c. 2/3 of the next.
02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) etc. - ^Similar, not quite as bad.
02:59:131 (3) - Slider Velocity. Not as bad as before, but....
03:16:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing, sorry
03:29:131 (4) - ^
BrosephStalin
This map is fun to DT :33
Topic Starter
Beafowl

BrosephStalin wrote:

This map is fun to DT :33
:3
Topic Starter
Beafowl

sleumas2000 wrote:

Light:
02:59:131 (2) - Sudden Change in Slider Velocity caught me really unawares, makes the map a lot harder to read. I'd recommend you keep the same velocity. Done
03:03:350 (1,1) - Why the New Combos? Removed them
03:07:569 (5) - Should be one here instead Done
03:29:131 (2) - ^^^Slider Velocity again Done
Medium:
02:25:381 (2) - A little Hard to read Changed a little bit
02:59:131 (7) - Guess what: Slider Velocity Done
03:29:131 (2) - ^ Done
Hard:
00:03:819 (1,2) - Don't like the spacing here. Too Jump (not that it's hard, it just doesn't play well) Done
02:16:006 (1) - Try Moving so it isn't covered Done
02:28:194 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Very Irregular Spacing, try spreading the notes so they, at least, only half cover each other. hey currently cover c. 2/3 of the next. Made something completely different there
02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) etc. - ^Similar, not quite as bad. I'm not sure with that
02:59:131 (3) - Slider Velocity. Not as bad as before, but.... Done
03:16:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing, sorry Done
03:29:131 (4) - ^ Done
Thanks for your mod! c:
Secretpipe
Go :D
sheela
Hey.

General

  1. End the first kiai time at 02:00:069 , and the second kiai time ends at 02:59:131 .

    Light

    1. 00:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo here. And move the red point to x:351 y:120.
    2. I got confused if the distance snap is 1.0x, or 1.2x. The distance snap is not constant.
    3. 00:20:694 (5) - Add a new combo.
    4. 00:31:944 (1) - Blanket with the repeat of 00:29:131 (6) .
    5. 00:35:694 (1,2) - Something like this?:
    6. 00:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 00:38:975 (4) .
    7. 00:41:319 (3) - Blanket with 00:42:725 (4) .
    8. 00:46:006 (4) - For not getting this overlap, make it straight, so move the last point to x:317 y:204.
    9. 00:54:444 (1) - Too far.
    10. 01:11:319 (4) - Curve it in the other way.
    11. 01:15:538 (3) - Move it to x:138 y:224, and move the last point to x:228 y:146.
    12. 01:33:819 (4) - Perfect the blanket.
    13. 01:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 01:40:850 (2) .
    14. 01:44:600 (3) - Perfect the blanket.
    15. 02:00:069 (1) - Remove the new combo.
    16. 02:03:819 (3) - Move it to x:261 y:80 to have a blanket. If so, move 02:03:350 (2) to x:362 y:123.
    17. 02:08:506 (4) - Make it parallel to 02:07:569 (3) .
    18. 02:10:381 (3) - Blanket with 02:09:913 (2) .
    19. 02:14:131 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:13:194 (1) .
    20. 02:32:413 (2) - Move this to x:206 y:102, so it could make a blanket.
    21. 02:47:881 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:46:944 (1) .
    22. 02:51:163 (1,2) - Make a better blanket.
    23. 03:03:819 (3) - Add a new combo, since the kiai time starts here.
    24. 03:16:944 (1) - Curve it in the other way.

    Medium

    1. 00:16:944 (1) - Too close to 00:15:069 (2) .
    2. 00:25:381 (2) - Make a better blanket.
    3. 01:25:381 (2) - Make the same slider pattern as 01:24:444 (1) , but flip.
    4. 02:06:162 (1) - Move it to x:431 y:23 for a blanket.
    5. 02:26:319 (3) - Make it parallel to 02:25:381 (2) .
    6. 02:32:881 (2) - Copy and paste 02:31:944 (1) , and Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, and Ctrl+G.
    7. 02:46:944 (1) - Be careful with the distance.
    8. 03:16:944 (1) - ^

    Hard

    1. 00:02:647 (4) - Make a better blanket with the tail of 00:01:944 (3) .
    2. 00:05:694 (1) - Move the last point to x:359 y:158 for a perfect blanket.
    3. 00:22:100 (3) - Be careful with the distance. Move it further.
    4. 00:24:444 (1) - ^
    5. 00:28:194 (1) - ^
    6. 00:39:444 (6) - Add a new combo.
    7. 00:46:006 (8) - Flip it vertically.
    8. 01:04:287 (3) - Ctrl+G?
    9. 01:06:631 (4) - Ctrl+G, and be careful with the distance.
    10. 01:32:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
    11. 01:44:131 (4) - Ctrl+G.
    12. 01:45:537 (7,1) - Switch them.
    13. 01:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
    14. 02:17:647 (3) - Move it to x:381 y:71 for a better blanket.
    15. 02:36:631 (3,4) - Put them more closer.
    16. 02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
    17. 02:44:131 (3,4,5) - Put them more closer.
    18. 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
    19. 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and remove the new combo of 02:51:631 (1) .
    20. 02:52:803 (9) - Add a new combo.
    21. 03:03:350 (2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
    22. 03:06:631 (4,5) - Put them more closer.
    23. 03:14:131 (3,4,5) - ^
    24. 03:17:881 (3,4) - ^
    25. 03:20:694 (1,2,3,4) - They are too far apart. Put them closer.
    26. 03:25:381 (3,4) - ^
    You can ask me questions if you want. Good Luck on ranking this map.
Topic Starter
Beafowl

sheela901 wrote:

Hey. Hello. :3

General

  1. End the first kiai time at 02:00:069 , and the second kiai time ends at 02:59:131 . Done

    Light

    1. 00:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo here. And move the red point to x:351 y:120. Done
    2. [b]I got confused if the distance snap is 1.0x, or 1.2x. The distance snap is not constant.
    3. 00:20:694 (5) - Add a new combo. Done
    4. 00:31:944 (1) - Blanket with the repeat of 00:29:131 (6) . Done
    5. 00:35:694 (1,2) - Something like this?: OK
    6. 00:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 00:38:975 (4) . Done
    7. 00:41:319 (3) - Blanket with 00:42:725 (4) . Done
    8. 00:46:006 (4) - For not getting this overlap, make it straight, so move the last point to x:317 y:204. Done
    9. 00:54:444 (1) - Too far. Done
    10. 01:11:319 (4) - Curve it in the other way. Done
    11. 01:15:538 (3) - Move it to x:138 y:224, and move the last point to x:228 y:146. Done
    12. 01:33:819 (4) - Perfect the blanket. Done
    13. 01:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 01:40:850 (2) . Done
    14. 01:44:600 (3) - Perfect the blanket. Done
    15. 02:00:069 (1) - Remove the new combo. Done
    16. 02:03:819 (3) - Move it to x:261 y:80 to have a blanket. If so, move 02:03:350 (2) to x:362 y:123. Done
    17. 02:08:506 (4) - Make it parallel to 02:07:569 (3) . Done
    18. 02:10:381 (3) - Blanket with 02:09:913 (2) . Done
    19. 02:14:131 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:13:194 (1) . Done
    20. 02:32:413 (2) - Move this to x:206 y:102, so it could make a blanket. Done
    21. 02:47:881 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:46:944 (1) . Done
    22. 02:51:163 (1,2) - Make a better blanket. Done
    23. 03:03:819 (3) - Add a new combo, since the kiai time starts here. Done
    24. 03:16:944 (1) - Curve it in the other way.Done

    Medium

    1. 00:16:944 (1) - Too close to 00:15:069 (2) . Done
    2. 00:25:381 (2) - Make a better blanket. Done
    3. 01:25:381 (2) - Make the same slider pattern as 01:24:444 (1) , but flip. Done
    4. 02:06:162 (1) - Move it to x:431 y:23 for a blanket. Done
    5. 02:26:319 (3) - Make it parallel to 02:25:381 (2) . Done
    6. 02:32:881 (2) - Copy and paste 02:31:944 (1) , and Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, and Ctrl+G. Done
    7. 02:46:944 (1) - Be careful with the distance. Done
    8. 03:16:944 (1) - ^ Done

    Hard

    1. 00:02:647 (4) - Make a better blanket with the tail of 00:01:944 (3) . Done
    2. 00:05:694 (1) - Move the last point to x:359 y:158 for a perfect blanket. Done
    3. 00:22:100 (3) - Be careful with the distance. Move it further. Done
    4. 00:24:444 (1) - ^ Done
    5. 00:28:194 (1) - ^ Done
    6. 00:39:444 (6) - Add a new combo. Done
    7. 00:46:006 (8) - Flip it vertically. Done
    8. 01:04:287 (3) - Ctrl+G? Done
    9. 01:06:631 (4) - Ctrl+G, and be careful with the distance. Done
    10. 01:32:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
    11. 01:44:131 (4) - Ctrl+G. Done
    12. 01:45:537 (7,1) - Switch them. Done
    13. 01:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
    14. 02:17:647 (3) - Move it to x:381 y:71 for a better blanket. Done
    15. 02:36:631 (3,4) - Put them more closer. Done
    16. 02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
    17. 02:44:131 (3,4,5) - Put them more closer. Done
    18. 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
    19. 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and remove the new combo of 02:51:631 (1) . Done
    20. 02:52:803 (9) - Add a new combo. Done
    21. 03:03:350 (2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
    22. 03:06:631 (4,5) - Put them more closer. Done
    23. 03:14:131 (3,4,5) - ^ Done
    24. 03:17:881 (3,4) - ^ Done
    25. 03:20:694 (1,2,3,4) - They are too far apart. Put them closer. Done
    26. 03:25:381 (3,4) - ^ Done
    You can ask me questions if you want. Good Luck on ranking this map.
Everything applied. Thank you! :)
luxoDeh
Hi! M4M from my queue :)

LIGHT

00:33:819 (1) - it's a small overlap but you can avoid it I think :3
flip horizontally, then vertically and then crtl+G and then fix the spacing. just to have a better flow and cuter pattern imo
00:55:381 (1) - delete NC there's no motive to leave that slider before with a single combo, plus it's still easy diff, better keep the combo consistent.
01:12:256 (5,1) - spacing should always be consistent in easy. but changing it the reverse slider will be a problem. maybe it's better delete the reverse and add a note at 01:14:131 - so maybe you'll be able to fix the spacing without remap all the next part.
01:43:663 (2,3) - blancket between these 2 can be improved
01:58:663 (1,2,3) - flow can be improved here. maybe try somethink similar to this:
02:32:413 (2,3) - do a better blancket
03:13:194 (1,2) - these 2 are too close. I know you did because of spacing, anyway if you move 03:14:131 (2) - some grid down it will look better
Simple but still good easy diff.

MEDIUM

01:46:944 (1,2) - well, since you gave that form, try to blancket these 2
01:53:506 (4) - move one grid down to make it at the same high as 01:52:569 (2) - ?
02:17:881 (2) - what do you think of making this with the same shape of 02:16:475 (5) - ? copy/paste it and flip horizontally
02:23:975 (5) - place this note to x:328 y:188 so it'll be more or less in the middle of the 2 sliders

HARD

00:36:865 (5,6) - not sure of this stack..
00:46:475 (9) - make this curve
01:20:108 - add a note here
01:41:787 (2,3) - stack perfectly
02:49:522 (2,3) - fix blancket
02:50:928 (1,2) - ^

Nice map. Simple but nice also for other diffs. Good luck for rank!
Topic Starter
Beafowl

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue :)Hi c:

LIGHT

00:33:819 (1) - it's a small overlap but you can avoid it I think :3 Avoided
flip horizontally, then vertically and then crtl+G and then fix the spacing. just to have a better flow and cuter pattern imo Too hard to fix the spacing. I will do something different later.
00:55:381 (1) - delete NC there's no motive to leave that slider before with a single combo, plus it's still easy diff, better keep the combo consistent. I didn't see that...thanks
01:12:256 (5,1) - spacing should always be consistent in easy. but changing it the reverse slider will be a problem. maybe it's better delete the reverse and add a note at 01:14:131 - so maybe you'll be able to fix the spacing without remap all the next part. ok
01:43:663 (2,3) - blancket between these 2 can be improved Done
01:58:663 (1,2,3) - flow can be improved here. maybe try somethink similar to this:
Done
02:32:413 (2,3) - do a better blancket Done
03:13:194 (1,2) - these 2 are too close. I know you did because of spacing, anyway if you move 03:14:131 (2) - some grid down it will look better Done
Simple but still good easy diff. Thanks c:

MEDIUM

01:46:944 (1,2) - well, since you gave that form, try to blancket these 2 Done
01:53:506 (4) - move one grid down to make it at the same high as 01:52:569 (2) - ? Done
02:17:881 (2) - what do you think of making this with the same shape of 02:16:475 (5) - ? copy/paste it and flip horizontally Nice idea, applied
02:23:975 (5) - place this note to x:328 y:188 so it'll be more or less in the middle of the 2 sliders Done

HARD

00:36:865 (5,6) - not sure of this stack.. Changed
00:46:475 (9) - make this curve Done
01:20:108 - add a note here Done
01:41:787 (2,3) - stack perfectly Done
02:49:522 (2,3) - fix blancket Done
02:50:928 (1,2) - ^ Done

Nice map. Simple but nice also for other diffs. Good luck for rank!
Thanks for your mod! :)
Secretpipe
I think I can handle that map now BerkZ ! :D
Just send me a message
Cerulean Veyron
Hey! M4M from my queue! Sorry if i'm a bit late :<

DUBSTEP!! MY LANGUAGE <33333
[> General <]
  1. - Seems fine here :3/ just check AiMod for that unsnapped kiai time.


[> Light <]
  1. CS -0.5 Don't worry, it won't hurt the spread much.
  2. 00:05:694 (3,4) - Were you using 1.2x or 1.3x spacing since the start? This spacing is unbalanced.
  3. 00:08:506 (5) - Try to rotate this by -7 to perform a double blanket. And watch the spacing.
  4. 00:33:819 (1,2) - Quite a tiny overlap. Split a bit.
  5. 00:39:444 (1,2,3) - Check your spacing here, it looks unbalanced.
  6. 00:59:014 - Inherited points on break? Remove this unused point.
  7. 01:00:948 - ^
  8. 01:04:756 (4,1) - Jumps aren't allowed at this kind of diff. So i might think this is unrankable.
  9. 01:17:413 (2,3,4) - You should've made a triangle formation here, so make one(?)
  10. 01:52:569 (3,4,5) - Make a Symmetry here, the flow looks straightic.
  11. 02:31:475 - Same as 00:59:014 -
  12. - The patterns you made here were quite nice. I hope it would be neater because i know you have something potential you want to show to others. So try that! \8D/


[> Medium <]
  1. - Some Combo Colours are not right between the other diffs. Or is this on purpose?
  2. 00:24:444 (1,2) - Recorrect the blanket here.
  3. 00:38:037 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:43:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice, try making it neater by making some of them symmetric.
  5. 00:45:069 (5) - I guess you forgot an NC here.
  6. 01:00:947 - Unused Inherited point, remove it.
  7. 01:03:819 (4,5) - Make a symmetry here. Curve or sharp, It's still symmetry.
  8. 01:40:381 (2) - I think the slider's tail is out of grid, which is unrankable. Move it in.
  9. 01:59:600 (3,1) - I was wondering if you purposally made this overlap with no care of spacing. So... split?
  10. 02:07:569 (3) - Same as 01:40:381 (2) -
  11. 02:29:131 (3) - A bit boring when holding a single slider for a long time. Replace it with a spinner, or reduce arrows and add notes next to it.
  12. 02:31:475 (4) - Same as 01:00:947 -
  13. 02:48:819 (4,5) - I think it's possible for you to make a double blanket here...
  14. - Same comment as the previous diff, but i think more than that. I don't know if the spacing is too big for a 'medium' diff like this one, but nvm...


[> Hard <]
  1. - Same issues spotted as before, so just gonna point out some minor issues.
  2. 00:07:569 (1,2) - Check the spacing here, it's too close.
  3. 00:12:256 (3,1) - ^, or an Anti-Jump?
  4. 00:41:787 (2,4) - Overlapped tail-on-head, Split?
  5. 01:01:944 (1,2) - Make a bit parallel here.
  6. 01:11:787 (1) - I don't this this part of song track needs a spinner here. Replace it with notes and some 1/4 beat notes.
  7. 01:30:069 - A break in kiai time? Not sure if it's not rankable or okay. Well... remove it, just my suggestion.
  8. 01:38:975 (2,1) - Decrease this spacing, the jump is too big for a Hard diff.
  9. 02:28:194 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + G each of them? better flow and playstyle.
  10. - Very good mapping, i think you'll need to pay a bit of attention to the spacings and overlaps often. Just my suggestion >_>

I think that is all~ Great song!
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Beafowl

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hey! M4M from my queue! Sorry if i'm a bit late :<

DUBSTEP!! MY LANGUAGE <33333
[> General <]
  1. - Seems fine here :3/ just check AiMod for that unsnapped kiai time. Fixed


[> Light <]
  1. CS -0.5 Don't worry, it won't hurt the spread much. Okay
  2. 00:05:694 (3,4) - Were you using 1.2x or 1.3x spacing since the start? This spacing is unbalanced. Actually I used Distance Snap, but I changed some things there.
  3. 00:08:506 (5) - Try to rotate this by -7 to perform a double blanket. And watch the spacing. Done
  4. 00:33:819 (1,2) - Quite a tiny overlap. Split a bit. I don't see an overlap, but they are very close each other, so I seperated them a little bit.
  5. 00:39:444 (1,2,3) - Check your spacing here, it looks unbalanced. Fixed
  6. 00:59:014 - Inherited points on break? Remove this unused point. These are coming from other diffs. I forgot to remove them in other diffs, thanks for mentioning that.
  7. 01:00:948 - ^ ^
  8. 01:04:756 (4,1) - Jumps aren't allowed at this kind of diff. So i might think this is unrankable. Fixed
  9. 01:17:413 (2,3,4) - You should've made a triangle formation here, so make one(?) Nice idea
  10. 01:52:569 (3,4,5) - Make a Symmetry here, the flow looks straightic. I made something different with your idea. Thanks.
  11. 02:31:475 - Same as 00:59:014 - Fixed
  12. - The patterns you made here were quite nice. I hope it would be neater because i know you have something potential you want to show to others. So try that! \8D/
c:

[> Medium <]
  1. - Some Combo Colours are not right between the other diffs. Or is this on purpose? Nope, my fault.
  2. 00:24:444 (1,2) - Recorrect the blanket here. Fixed
  3. 00:38:037 (4,5) - ^ ^
  4. 00:43:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice, try making it neater by making some of them symmetric. Okay
  5. 00:45:069 (5) - I guess you forgot an NC here. Yeah
  6. 01:00:947 - Unused Inherited point, remove it.
  7. 01:03:819 (4,5) - Make a symmetry here. Curve or sharp, It's still symmetry. Sharp
  8. 01:40:381 (2) - I think the slider's tail is out of grid, which is unrankable. Move it in. I saw more of them and fixed them all
  9. 01:59:600 (3,1) - I was wondering if you purposally made this overlap with no care of spacing. So... split? Splitted
  10. 02:07:569 (3) - Same as 01:40:381 (2) - Fixed
  11. 02:29:131 (3) - A bit boring when holding a single slider for a long time. Replace it with a spinner, or reduce arrows and add notes next to it. Added a spinner
  12. 02:31:475 (4) - Same as 01:00:947 - Fixed
  13. 02:48:819 (4,5) - I think it's possible for you to make a double blanket here... Was pretty hard, but I made one.
  14. - Same comment as the previous diff, but i think more than that. I don't know if the spacing is too big for a 'medium' diff like this one, but nvm...


[> Hard <]
  1. - Same issues spotted as before, so just gonna point out some minor issues.
  2. 00:07:569 (1,2) - Check the spacing here, it's too close. Fixed
  3. 00:12:256 (3,1) - ^, or an Anti-Jump? Should be an Anti-Jump
  4. 00:41:787 (2,4) - Overlapped tail-on-head, Split? Moved a slider a bit
  5. 01:01:944 (1,2) - Make a bit parallel here. Done
  6. 01:11:787 (1) - I don't this this part of song track needs a spinner here. Replace it with notes and some 1/4 beat notes. Replaced
  7. 01:30:069 - A break in kiai time? Not sure if it's not rankable or okay. Well... remove it, just my suggestion. Removed
  8. 01:38:975 (2,1) - Decrease this spacing, the jump is too big for a Hard diff. True. I moved the blanket so there a much easier jump
  9. 02:28:194 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + G each of them? better flow and playstyle. Not needed imo, but okay
  10. - Very good mapping, i think you'll need to pay a bit of attention to the spacings and overlaps often. Just my suggestion >_>

I think that is all~ Great song!
Good Luck!
Thanks for your mod! A really old map which means there are some big issues. And don't mind if you are late, I'm busy too.
[-Mei-]
Hey! M4M from my Q~
Let's get started!


Light:
  1. Check AiMod. Fix DS problems.
  2. 00:39:444 (1,2) – DS. Please fix it.
  3. 00:45:069 (3,4) – Do this instead:
    It looks neater this way.
  4. 00:50:225 (3,2) – Stack these two hitcirlces
  5. 00:56:319 (3,4) –Blanket maybe. Like this:
  6. 01:08:506 (5) – Move this slider here X: 348 Y: 144 so that it can be inline with 01:07:569 (4) –
  7. 01:14:600 (3,4) – Why not blanket these two sliders. Like this:
    It looks better to me.
  8. 01:27:725 (4,2) – Why not stack them?
  9. 01:45:538 (4) – Do this instead:
    It looks neater.
  10. 02:39:444 (1,2) – Blanket maybe?
  11. Nice diff! Just needs a little work.
Medium:
  1. Check AiMod again. DS problems.
  2. 00:24:444 (1) – NC here.
  3. 01:12:256 (4) – Move this slider here X: 368 Y: 276 to be inline with this slider 01:11:319 (3) –
  4. 01:13:662 (2,4) – Stack
  5. 01:37:569 (3,4) – Do this instead:
  6. Great diff. Couldn’t find anything else.



Nice mapset. Couldn’t find a thing in Hard diff. ;)
Hope your map get’s ranked!
Good Luck~ :D
Topic Starter
Beafowl

[-Mei-] wrote:

Hey! M4M from my Q~
Let's get started!


Light:
  1. Check AiMod. Fix DS problems. I didn' fix all DS problems because some sliders would overlap.
  2. 00:39:444 (1,2) – DS. Please fix it. I didn't find a problem there (actually AiMod says theres a DS problem).
  3. 00:45:069 (3,4) – Do this instead:
    It looks neater this way. Okay
  4. 00:50:225 (3,2) – Stack these two hitcirlces Done
  5. 00:56:319 (3,4) –Blanket maybe. Like this: Why not
  6. 01:08:506 (5) – Move this slider here X: 348 Y: 144 so that it can be inline with 01:07:569 (4) – Fixed
  7. 01:14:600 (3,4) – Why not blanket these two sliders. Like this:
    It looks better to me. ok
  8. 01:27:725 (4,2) – Why not stack them? Stacked
  9. 01:45:538 (4) – Do this instead:
    It looks neater. Done
  10. 02:39:444 (1,2) – Blanket maybe? Made one
  11. Nice diff! Just needs a little work.
c:



Medium:
  1. Check AiMod again. DS problems. Fixed some but sometimes it happened the same I said above. (AiMod says there are DS problems, but there aren't.)
  2. 00:24:444 (1) – NC here. Done
  3. 01:12:256 (4) – Move this slider here X: 368 Y: 276 to be inline with this slider 01:11:319 (3) – Fixed
  4. 01:13:662 (2,4) – Stack ok
  5. 01:37:569 (3,4) – Do this instead: Done
  6. Great diff. Couldn’t find anything else.



Nice mapset. Couldn’t find a thing in Hard diff. ;)
Hope your map get’s ranked!
Good Luck~ :D
Thanks for your mod! c:
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