1. Hard (2,9 stars, 498 notes)
2. Light (1,58 stars, 221 notes)
3. Medium (1,71 stars, 244 notes)

Rainmon wrote:

Let me give you your first mod on this! From #ModReq

I am surprised it turned out that well for someone who never acctually mapped before. I usually don't mod newbies maps
but you got my attention on this one.


[General]

1. You BG size is too big. You should resize it to 800x600 or max. 1024x768 Changed it to 1024x768

[Hard]

• General

1. This is too Hard for a hard. It's more like a Hard+. Your spacing is the problem that makes it difficult. I have some good ideas for the first
   part, but you should fix the spacing on the whole map or either create another difficulty that is a proper Hard.
   
2. Consider reducing OD (Overall Difficulty) to 6. Done

• Object Placement & Hitsounds

1. 00:02:643 (4,5) - This is a pretty big spacing issue. BUT Instead of placing the circle further away, I would do this:
   
   Example

   
   
   What did I do? I moved 00:03:346 (5) under the slider end of 00:02:643 (4).
2. 00:07:565 (1,2) - Just the same as above, but this time, you move the whole slider 00:08:502 (2) under the end of 00:07:565 (1). Not
   under the reverse, under the end/begining.
   
3. 00:15:299 (2,3) - Just as above ^
   
4. 00:15:299 (2,3) - Move 00:18:346 (4) (begining) under 00:17:877 (3)
   
5. 00:21:393 (2,3) - ^
   
6. 00:23:502 (4,1) - ^
   
7. 00:25:143 (2,3) - ^
   
8. 00:27:252 (2,3) & 00:28:893 (4,5) - ^
   
9. 00:19:752 (2,3) - I would stack them to fix the spacing Done
   
10. After 00:31:940 you have a lot of spacing issues. I really suggest and I highly recommend to use distance snap for Easy, Normal and Hard
    to make them playable enough for 'not-so-pros'. Obviously, hard isn't supposed to be for newbs, but this makes it unnecessaryly harder than it should
    be. Please consider redoing the spacing.
    
11. Also, I would turn the Hitsoundvolume up on 00:31:940 to at lease 50 ~ 60%. Don't forget to hitsound it, or it won't be rankable. Done
    
12. 01:02:877 (3,4) - I am not quite sure if this is an appropriate pattern in terms of speed for this difficulty-level (while 01:17:643 (3,4) is perfectly fine). Might consider
    removing and replacing it. BUT I might be very wrong on this one, so feel free to ignore this one.
    
13. 01:06:627 (4,5) - ^ (I'm not going to point those issues out any further as I figured that you got what I meant.)
    
14. 01:11:784 (1) - Spinner dosn't fit here. The only part where it could work would be from 01:11:784 - 01:12:252 which is way too short for a spinner.
    You mapped similar parts earlier, I wouldn't break that consistency if I were you. Also, 01:11:784 (1,1) the time you have from finishing the spinner to hitting
    the next circle is pretty small and therefore it might be too hard. Removed the first object after the spinner
    
15. 02:41:784 (1) - ^ ^
    
16. 03:11:784 (1) - ^ ^
    
17. 02:01:705 (1) - Remove New Combo (NC) Done
    
18. 03:08:502 (4) - You could add a New Combo to outline the diffrence in the music even more. Done
    
19. 03:23:502 (3) - ^ Done

[Medium]

• General

1. HP Drain Rate should be on 3. Done
2. Spacing Issues. It's practically a No-No to not use distance snap. Consistent Spacing is very important. This is also the only issue I could find in Normal. Done

[Light]

• General

1. Spacing Issues. Use distance snap! Done

Kyubey wrote:

Hello! M4M from my queue.
I can't do good help with spacing and flow, but i'll say about other necessary unrankable things.
[General]
Set same uninherited timing points for all diffs. Done
Set same preview points for all diffs. Done
Make hitsounds more variety.
Delete song title/artist and your nickname from tags. Done
[Light]
Changing SV on easy diffs is unacceptable.
So, your spacing changes too, because of changing SV. Thats unacceptable.
Open AiMod and fix all unsnapped kiais. Done
Make more break times. Done
Rhythm is good.
[Medium]
Changing SV on normal diffs is unacceptable.
So, your spacing changes too, because of changing SV. Thats unacceptable.
Open AiMod and snap unsnapped objects. Done
Make more break times too.
01:20:690 (7) - NC Done
01:24:440 (12) - NC Done
01:08:502 (5) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Done
01:27:721 (16) - ^ Done
01:38:502 (5) - ^ Done
01:42:721 (4) - ^ Done
02:03:815 (3,4) - Too hard spacing. Done
02:18:815 (3,4) - ^ Done
02:24:440 (1,2) - Unacceptable sliders. Done
03:03:346 (2) - 1/4 repeats in unacceptable. Done
03:06:627 (3) - ^ Done
03:23:502 (5) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Done
[Hard]
Open AiMod and fix unsnapped kiai. Done
01:32:877 (3) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream. Done
01:51:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 01:51:627 to 01:52:096. Try to add stream Done
02:12:252 (4,5) - If you want to make antijump, make NC here. Made sth. different
02:36:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627. Done
02:40:377 (4) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream. Done
02:41:784 (1) - This spinner doesn't fits. Done
02:47:877 (3) - I don't like that slider ends on hard beat. Try to use stream. Done
02:51:627 (3) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627. Done
03:11:784 (1) - This spinner doesn't fits. Done
03:17:877 (5) - There is no rhythm like this. There is 1/4 like on 01:51:627. Done

Good luck!

Thanks for your mod!
I didn't know that there's an AIMod, after you noticed that I looked in the file tab and saw it. LOL
The SV in Light and Medium are not changed because it is not in the ranking criteria. #modhelp also said that.
Kudosu will be given later!

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi

Mod because dubstep <3<3

[Light]

02:05:694 (1) - Make it more simple ! I'm not sure with that
03:30:245 - Add a spinner ? OwO Done

[Medium]

01:17:881 (2) - Make a slider similar to the previous ! Done
01:20:694 (1) - More simple ! Done
01:25:381 (2) - Make a slider similar to the previous ! Done
02:24:444 (6) - New combo Done
03:12:256 (4) - Make a symmetrical slider ! Done
03:30:303 - Spinner :3 Done


[Hard]
00:44:131 (4) - Reverse Done
00:51:631 (3) - Make a better slider ( shape) Done
00:54:444 (1) - ^ Done
00:58:662 (2) - Make the slider 2 symmetrical to previous Done
01:41:787 (2) - Make a better slider ( shape) Done
03:04:756 (3) - ^ Done
03:30:244 - Spinner xDD Done

Oh , and I find it too hard for a Hard diff ! Rename into insane ? You're right, it's harder than hard. I will notice that.


Nice song ! and Nice stuff btw xD
Good luck for rank :3

Feverie wrote:

[Light]

00:07:569 (4,5) - Avoid the overlap by moving #4 up a bit and right a bit Done

SPOILER

00:29:131 (6,1) - Avoid the Overlap by moving 6 to the left a bit Done
00:54:444 (1,2) - Try to make these two sliders go in the same direction Done
01:03:819 (3,4) - ^ Done
01:17:881 (4,5) - Place 3 in the curve of 5 Done
01:35:694 (1,2) - Try to make these two sliders go in the same direction Done

GL

BrosephStalin wrote:

This map is fun to DT :33

sleumas2000 wrote:

Light:
02:59:131 (2) - Sudden Change in Slider Velocity caught me really unawares, makes the map a lot harder to read. I'd recommend you keep the same velocity. Done
03:03:350 (1,1) - Why the New Combos? Removed them
03:07:569 (5) - Should be one here instead Done
03:29:131 (2) - ^^^Slider Velocity again Done
Medium:
02:25:381 (2) - A little Hard to read Changed a little bit
02:59:131 (7) - Guess what: Slider Velocity Done
03:29:131 (2) - ^ Done
Hard:
00:03:819 (1,2) - Don't like the spacing here. Too Jump (not that it's hard, it just doesn't play well) Done
02:16:006 (1) - Try Moving so it isn't covered Done
02:28:194 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Very Irregular Spacing, try spreading the notes so they, at least, only half cover each other. hey currently cover c. 2/3 of the next. Made something completely different there
02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) etc. - ^Similar, not quite as bad. I'm not sure with that
02:59:131 (3) - Slider Velocity. Not as bad as before, but.... Done
03:16:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing, sorry Done
03:29:131 (4) - ^ Done

General

1. End the first kiai time at 02:00:069 , and the second kiai time ends at 02:59:131 .
   
   

   Light

   1. 00:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo here. And move the red point to x:351 y:120.
   2. I got confused if the distance snap is 1.0x, or 1.2x. The distance snap is not constant.
   3. 00:20:694 (5) - Add a new combo.
   4. 00:31:944 (1) - Blanket with the repeat of 00:29:131 (6) .
   5. 00:35:694 (1,2) - Something like this?:
      
      SPOILER

      
   6. 00:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 00:38:975 (4) .
   7. 00:41:319 (3) - Blanket with 00:42:725 (4) .
   8. 00:46:006 (4) - For not getting this overlap, make it straight, so move the last point to x:317 y:204.
   9. 00:54:444 (1) - Too far.
   10. 01:11:319 (4) - Curve it in the other way.
   11. 01:15:538 (3) - Move it to x:138 y:224, and move the last point to x:228 y:146.
   12. 01:33:819 (4) - Perfect the blanket.
   13. 01:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 01:40:850 (2) .
       
       SPOILER

       
   14. 01:44:600 (3) - Perfect the blanket.
   15. 02:00:069 (1) - Remove the new combo.
   16. 02:03:819 (3) - Move it to x:261 y:80 to have a blanket. If so, move 02:03:350 (2) to x:362 y:123.
   17. 02:08:506 (4) - Make it parallel to 02:07:569 (3) .
   18. 02:10:381 (3) - Blanket with 02:09:913 (2) .
   19. 02:14:131 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:13:194 (1) .
   20. 02:32:413 (2) - Move this to x:206 y:102, so it could make a blanket.
   21. 02:47:881 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:46:944 (1) .
   22. 02:51:163 (1,2) - Make a better blanket.
   23. 03:03:819 (3) - Add a new combo, since the kiai time starts here.
   24. 03:16:944 (1) - Curve it in the other way.

   Medium

   1. 00:16:944 (1) - Too close to 00:15:069 (2) .
   2. 00:25:381 (2) - Make a better blanket.
   3. 01:25:381 (2) - Make the same slider pattern as 01:24:444 (1) , but flip.
   4. 02:06:162 (1) - Move it to x:431 y:23 for a blanket.
   5. 02:26:319 (3) - Make it parallel to 02:25:381 (2) .
   6. 02:32:881 (2) - Copy and paste 02:31:944 (1) , and Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, and Ctrl+G.
   7. 02:46:944 (1) - Be careful with the distance.
   8. 03:16:944 (1) - ^

   Hard

   1. 00:02:647 (4) - Make a better blanket with the tail of 00:01:944 (3) .
   2. 00:05:694 (1) - Move the last point to x:359 y:158 for a perfect blanket.
   3. 00:22:100 (3) - Be careful with the distance. Move it further.
   4. 00:24:444 (1) - ^
   5. 00:28:194 (1) - ^
   6. 00:39:444 (6) - Add a new combo.
   7. 00:46:006 (8) - Flip it vertically.
   8. 01:04:287 (3) - Ctrl+G?
   9. 01:06:631 (4) - Ctrl+G, and be careful with the distance.
   10. 01:32:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
   11. 01:44:131 (4) - Ctrl+G.
   12. 01:45:537 (7,1) - Switch them.
   13. 01:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
   14. 02:17:647 (3) - Move it to x:381 y:71 for a better blanket.
   15. 02:36:631 (3,4) - Put them more closer.
   16. 02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
   17. 02:44:131 (3,4,5) - Put them more closer.
   18. 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
   19. 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and remove the new combo of 02:51:631 (1) .
   20. 02:52:803 (9) - Add a new combo.
   21. 03:03:350 (2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider.
   22. 03:06:631 (4,5) - Put them more closer.
   23. 03:14:131 (3,4,5) - ^
   24. 03:17:881 (3,4) - ^
   25. 03:20:694 (1,2,3,4) - They are too far apart. Put them closer.
   26. 03:25:381 (3,4) - ^
   You can ask me questions if you want. Good Luck on ranking this map.

sheela901 wrote:

Hey. Hello. :3

General

1. End the first kiai time at 02:00:069 , and the second kiai time ends at 02:59:131 . Done
   
   

   Light

   1. 00:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo here. And move the red point to x:351 y:120. Done
   2. [b]I got confused if the distance snap is 1.0x, or 1.2x. The distance snap is not constant.
   3. 00:20:694 (5) - Add a new combo. Done
   4. 00:31:944 (1) - Blanket with the repeat of 00:29:131 (6) . Done
   5. 00:35:694 (1,2) - Something like this?: OK
      
      SPOILER

      
   6. 00:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 00:38:975 (4) . Done
   7. 00:41:319 (3) - Blanket with 00:42:725 (4) . Done
   8. 00:46:006 (4) - For not getting this overlap, make it straight, so move the last point to x:317 y:204. Done
   9. 00:54:444 (1) - Too far. Done
   10. 01:11:319 (4) - Curve it in the other way. Done
   11. 01:15:538 (3) - Move it to x:138 y:224, and move the last point to x:228 y:146. Done
   12. 01:33:819 (4) - Perfect the blanket. Done
   13. 01:39:444 (1) - Blanket with 01:40:850 (2) . Done
       
       SPOILER

       
   14. 01:44:600 (3) - Perfect the blanket. Done
   15. 02:00:069 (1) - Remove the new combo. Done
   16. 02:03:819 (3) - Move it to x:261 y:80 to have a blanket. If so, move 02:03:350 (2) to x:362 y:123. Done
   17. 02:08:506 (4) - Make it parallel to 02:07:569 (3) . Done
   18. 02:10:381 (3) - Blanket with 02:09:913 (2) . Done
   19. 02:14:131 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:13:194 (1) . Done
   20. 02:32:413 (2) - Move this to x:206 y:102, so it could make a blanket. Done
   21. 02:47:881 (2) - Make it parallel to 02:46:944 (1) . Done
   22. 02:51:163 (1,2) - Make a better blanket. Done
   23. 03:03:819 (3) - Add a new combo, since the kiai time starts here. Done
   24. 03:16:944 (1) - Curve it in the other way.Done

   Medium

   1. 00:16:944 (1) - Too close to 00:15:069 (2) . Done
   2. 00:25:381 (2) - Make a better blanket. Done
   3. 01:25:381 (2) - Make the same slider pattern as 01:24:444 (1) , but flip. Done
   4. 02:06:162 (1) - Move it to x:431 y:23 for a blanket. Done
   5. 02:26:319 (3) - Make it parallel to 02:25:381 (2) . Done
   6. 02:32:881 (2) - Copy and paste 02:31:944 (1) , and Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, and Ctrl+G. Done
   7. 02:46:944 (1) - Be careful with the distance. Done
   8. 03:16:944 (1) - ^ Done

   Hard

   1. 00:02:647 (4) - Make a better blanket with the tail of 00:01:944 (3) . Done
   2. 00:05:694 (1) - Move the last point to x:359 y:158 for a perfect blanket. Done
   3. 00:22:100 (3) - Be careful with the distance. Move it further. Done
   4. 00:24:444 (1) - ^ Done
   5. 00:28:194 (1) - ^ Done
   6. 00:39:444 (6) - Add a new combo. Done
   7. 00:46:006 (8) - Flip it vertically. Done
   8. 01:04:287 (3) - Ctrl+G? Done
   9. 01:06:631 (4) - Ctrl+G, and be careful with the distance. Done
   10. 01:32:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
   11. 01:44:131 (4) - Ctrl+G. Done
   12. 01:45:537 (7,1) - Switch them. Done
   13. 01:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
   14. 02:17:647 (3) - Move it to x:381 y:71 for a better blanket. Done
   15. 02:36:631 (3,4) - Put them more closer. Done
   16. 02:40:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
   17. 02:44:131 (3,4,5) - Put them more closer. Done
   18. 02:47:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
   19. 02:51:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and remove the new combo of 02:51:631 (1) . Done
   20. 02:52:803 (9) - Add a new combo. Done
   21. 03:03:350 (2,3,4,5) - I think that is not for a hard difficulty. Replace it a 1/4 slider. Done
   22. 03:06:631 (4,5) - Put them more closer. Done
       
   23. 03:14:131 (3,4,5) - ^ Done
   24. 03:17:881 (3,4) - ^ Done
   25. 03:20:694 (1,2,3,4) - They are too far apart. Put them closer. Done
   26. 03:25:381 (3,4) - ^ Done
   You can ask me questions if you want. Good Luck on ranking this map.

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue Hi c:

LIGHT

00:33:819 (1) - it's a small overlap but you can avoid it I think :3 Avoided
flip horizontally, then vertically and then crtl+G and then fix the spacing. just to have a better flow and cuter pattern imo Too hard to fix the spacing. I will do something different later.
00:55:381 (1) - delete NC there's no motive to leave that slider before with a single combo, plus it's still easy diff, better keep the combo consistent. I didn't see that...thanks
01:12:256 (5,1) - spacing should always be consistent in easy. but changing it the reverse slider will be a problem. maybe it's better delete the reverse and add a note at 01:14:131 - so maybe you'll be able to fix the spacing without remap all the next part. ok
01:43:663 (2,3) - blancket between these 2 can be improved Done
01:58:663 (1,2,3) - flow can be improved here. maybe try somethink similar to this:

SPOILER

Done
02:32:413 (2,3) - do a better blancket Done
03:13:194 (1,2) - these 2 are too close. I know you did because of spacing, anyway if you move 03:14:131 (2) - some grid down it will look better Done
Simple but still good easy diff. Thanks c:

MEDIUM

01:46:944 (1,2) - well, since you gave that form, try to blancket these 2 Done
01:53:506 (4) - move one grid down to make it at the same high as 01:52:569 (2) - ? Done
02:17:881 (2) - what do you think of making this with the same shape of 02:16:475 (5) - ? copy/paste it and flip horizontally Nice idea, applied
02:23:975 (5) - place this note to x:328 y:188 so it'll be more or less in the middle of the 2 sliders Done

HARD

00:36:865 (5,6) - not sure of this stack.. Changed
00:46:475 (9) - make this curve Done
01:20:108 - add a note here Done
01:41:787 (2,3) - stack perfectly Done
02:49:522 (2,3) - fix blancket Done
02:50:928 (1,2) - ^ Done

Nice map. Simple but nice also for other diffs. Good luck for rank!