Hashimoto Yukari - Lost my pieces [OsuMania] · forum

Soldsaga KunG

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Soldsaga KunG 2013-11-06T09:52:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 พฤษภาคม 2557 at 17:02:12

Artist: Hashimoto Yukari
Title: Lost my pieces
Source: Toradora!
BPM: 86
Filesize: 2957kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:

4K Easy - 4Key (0.63 stars, 153 notes)
4K Normal - 4Key (0.75 stars, 183 notes)
7K Hard - 7Key (1.24 stars, 268 notes)
7K Normal - 7Key (0.88 stars, 189 notes)

Download: Hashimoto Yukari - Lost my pieces
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kuuderes_shadow
lZenxl
indyinyou
Tip Baka
yoshilove
vocaloid1anime2
P i K o B a K a
[13] BECK
[Shi-Ra]
[ S a k u r a ]

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Last edited by Soldsaga KunG 2014-05-19T10:02:52+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

kuuderes_shadow

132 posts

Joined May 2013

kuuderes_shadow 2013-11-06T11:59:54+00:00

From Mod Requests.

General Point - Try to match the note placement to the patterns in the music. If you have notes going up a scale the presses probably shouldn't be jumping around the keys erratically.

4K Easy:

SPOILER

In the early parts of this map in particular there doesn't seem to be any distinction between what you have as a single hit and what you have as a hold.

00:00:964 this note is no different from the ones on either side. So why is this a hold when those aren't?
00:32:360 and 00:33:057 make these holds
00:53:290 this note is begging to be on the right hand column. (an example of the General Point I mentioned above - there are plenty of others)
00:56:080 delete this - there's nothing there.
01:06:197 and 01:06:894 add notes.
01:19:801 delete this. The hold gradually fades out and there's no other notes here.
01:28:871 add a note

4K Normal:

SPOILER

00:22:941 no note here.
00:25:732 or here
00:32:447 should be on 00:32:360 and 00:33:144 should be on 00:33:057. If you want them to gradually get stronger, perhaps add a second hold to each later, but don't just start the note after it begins.
00:33:755 to 00:36:546 see General Point above.
00:44:918 onwards see General Point above. Yes. For all of it.
00:49:453 if you're going to have a note here, why not at other similar points in this section? You could also do similar at the section starting 01:35:150
00:51:197 and 00:52:592 make single notes
01:03:057 this is perhaps the least significant mapped note. Why is it a double?
01:14:220 make this a single note too.
01:31:313 add a note here?
01:32:011 and here?

7K Normal

SPOILER

See General Point above again, although this isn't as bad as the previous 2 difficulties.

00:21:197 do the same as you did at 00:18:406? That was good.
00:32:447 and 00:33:144 - as with 4K Normal
00:54:860 this begins at 00:54:685
01:10:034 hold this until 01:12:825
01:17:011 end one note when you start the other.
01:31:662 what is this? If a continuation of the previous note, continue that instead. Otherwise get rid of it (but see next)
01:31:662 add a hit.
01:32:011 ^
01:38:290 ^
01:38:987 ^
01:43:522 double

7K Hard

SPOILER

Again, see General Point above. I'm going to treat this map as though you actually want to add some difficulty to it, rather than staying as a mapset with 4 easy maps.

Don't put hits where there is nothing in the music.

00:00:267 make this one hit and one hold until 00:01:313, where you should do the same. End that hold where the next one starts.
00:03:057 add a hit
00:07:766 delete. There's nothing there.
00:08:639 extend this to 00:11:429
00:08:987 add
00:09:336 ^
00:09:685 ^
00:10:034 replace with a hit
00:12:127 add
00:12:476 ^
00:14:569 ^
00:14:918 ^
00:15:266 ^
00:17:011 add a hit
00:18:406 ^
00:19:801 ^
00:21:894 to 00:27:825 lots of hits here where there are no notes - remove them.
00:32:447 and 00:33:144 - as with 4K Normal
00:32:796 delete.
00:33:232 what is this bit doing here?
00:33:755 perhaps add another hit?
00:36:894 add
00:37:243 ^
00:38:290 ^
00:38:987 ^

I think you should be getting the picture of where to add notes now. Whenever there's a note, put something in your map. Where there isn't, don't. Just go through this map following that basic rule and you will improve it no end. Because there's quite a lot of places in the rest of this difficulty that also needs fixing. This map has almost no notes that need more than a 1/2 beat snap divisor.

01:20:586 and 01:20:935 as with 00:32:447 above.
01:21:197 onwards. Perhaps have long holds (for the background sound), short holds (for the notes played by the strings) and hits (for the piano) going at the same time here? You do it briefly at 01:22:243 but it could be done for the whole section. It would make this map considerably harder though. If you aren't going to do it, get rid of it at 01:22:243.
01:42:127 this is a continuation of the previous hold.
01:43:522 make this a chord. Possibly 3 notes.

Nice song, but this needs quite a lot of work on it yet. Good luck, and hope I've helped.

Last edited by kuuderes_shadow 2013-11-06T12:47:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Evening

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Joined December 2012

Evening 2013-11-06T12:38:47+00:00

Also from Mod req:

[7K Hard]

00:07:766 (7766|4) - Do not add notes that have no beat to it feels "empty" when I press on it - Remove
00:22:592 to 00:28:173 - It's fine with a rhythm created, no problems here
00:32:447 (32447|0,32796|3,33144|6) - I don't get the beat here try not to use 1/8's in "quiet" sections, it is hard to determine when the player should press it.
- Replace the 3 notes with a single slider starting from 00:32:360 to 00:33:057
00:30:964 (30964|4) - Shorten it by 1/8 - The player needs to have a significant indication when they should release the slider
00:33:232 (33232|0,33319|1,33406|2,33493|3,33580|4,33668|5,33755|6) - Extend the stream here to the white line below
00:59:220 (59220|5,59569|2,64453|3,64801|1,65150|3,65499|5,65848|0,65848|4,66197|1,66546|3,66894|0,68639|0,69336|3,70034|1,74220|0) - The strength on the piano is the same, I recommend going for double notes on each note or single note on each note
01:20:586 (80586|3,80935|2) - It is not timed correctly shift down to the nearest 1/4 bar - Consider making them sliders also
01:26:778 Add a slider that is 1/2 long

[7K Normal]

Going to exclude any repetitions from kuuderes_shadow

00:32:447 (32447|1,33144|5) - Shift down to the nearest white line (1)
00:30:964 (30964|3) - Shorten it to the nearest white line (1)
00:59:918 (59918|5,59918|1) - and 00:58:871 (58871|1) - are same piano chords - Consider making them the same note pattern

[4K Normal]

Same thing as above ( Exclusion )

00:17:011 (17011|0,18406|1) - Extend to 00:21:197 and remove the note at 00:21:197
00:19:801 (19801|3) - Change to slider that ends at 00:21:197
00:32:447 (32447|1,33144|3) - Shift down the nearest white line (1)
00:41:429 Why double notes? - I guess it's not much of a problem here - Consider removing one note
00:50:499 Duplicate the slider and put on column 3rd from the left
00:51:894 ^ Same thing as above
00:53:290 (53290|3) - Convert to slider that is identical to the one next to it

[4K Easy]

No comment

Refer to kuuderes_shadow's mod

[Timing]

It's perfect, don't need to change

[General]

Preview Point!
Kiai Time!
Turn off Letterbox and Countdown!

indyinyou

887 posts

Joined June 2009

indyinyou 2013-11-06T15:17:07+00:00

[7K Hard]

00:01:662 : add ?
00:11:778 : ^
00:24:370 : remove ? ผมไม่ได้ยินเสียงอะไรเลยนะ หรือ หูผมไม่ดี 555
00:25:034 : remove
00:42:476 : add
00:42:825 : ^
00:43:173 : ^
00:43:871 : ^
00:44:617 : ^
00:48:057 : ^
00:50:848 : ^
00:55:034 : remove
00:55:383 : ^
00:56:080 : ^
00:56:778 : ^

ม็อดแค่นี้แหละ ฮ่าๆ มาลองวิชาเฉยๆ จะ kd หรือไม่ ก้ได้ แล้วแต่ ไม่เคยทำแมพ เสียงเปียโนล้วนแหะ

Channa

74 posts

Joined November 2012

Channa 2013-11-27T15:26:40+00:00

[7K Hard]

มีหลายท่อนไม่มีเสียงเพียบเบย บางท่อนเสียงบาง ต้องลบออกหน่อย
บางท่อนก็เสียงไม่พอนะจ๊ะ

SPOILER

00:22:941 (22941|5) - ลบ
00:23:290 - เพิ่ม
00:23:639 (23639|5) - ลบ
00:25:732 (25732|0) - ลบ
00:26:080 - เพิ่ม
00:26:429 (26429|6) - ลบ
00:27:127 (27127|1) - ลบ
00:27:476 (27476|5) - เพิ่ม
00:28:173 (28173|1) - เปลี่ยนให้ยาวขึ้น ไปจบที่ 00:30:964
00:32:360 (32360|0) - ลบ
00:33:057 (33057|6,33144|5,33232|4,33319|3,33406|2,33493|1,33580|0,33668|1,33755|2) - ลบ
00:32:360 - ใส่ลองโน๊ต ถึง 00:33:057
00:33:057 - ใส่ลองโน๊ตถึง 00:33:755
00:37:941 - ใส่ลองโน๊ตถึง 00:38:639
00:38:639 - ใส่ลองโน๊ตถึง 00:39:336
00:52:243 - ใส่
00:52:766 (52766|3) - ลบ
00:53:639 - ใส่
00:54:336 - ใส่
00:54:685 - ใส่สัก 2 ตัว
00:57:476 - ใส่ 1
01:02:360 (62360|2,62708|3,63057|5,63057|4) - ลบ
01:05:848 (65848|0) - ลบ
01:11:080 (71080|5,71255|4) - ลบ
01:16:662 (76662|1,76836|2) - ลบ
01:18:057 (78057|2,78232|3) - ลบ
01:20:499 - เปลี่ยนเป็นลองโน๊ตแบบนี้ดีกว่าไหม? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1130614
01:21:197 - เอาโน๊ตปกติ 1 ตัวไปไว้ริมซ้ายละกัน ตามรูปด้านบน
01:21:546 (81546|0) - ตัวนี้ย้ายที่หน่อย
01:21:720 (81720|1) - ลบ
01:24:336 - เพิ่ม
01:24:685 - เพิ่ม
01:25:208 (85208|5) - ลบ
01:25:732 (85732|2) - ย้ายหน่อยก็ได้มั้ง?
01:26:080 - เพิ่ม
01:27:301 (87301|3) - ลบเถิด
01:27:825 (87825|1) - เปลี่ยน ln เป็นโน๊ตปกคิ
01:28:173 - เพิ่ม
01:28:697 (88697|3) - ลบ
01:29:220 -เพิ่ม
01:29:569 - เพิ่ม
01:29:918 - เพิ่ม
01:30:441 (90441|4) - ลบ
01:30:790 (90790|6) - ลบ
01:31:313 - เพิ่ม
01:32:011 (92011|4) - เปลี่ยนที่หน่อย
01:32:185 (92185|5) - ลบ
01:35:673 (95673|2) - ลบ
01:36:371 (96371|3) - ลบ
01:37:069 (97069|3) - ลบ
01:39:860 (99860|4) - ลบ
01:41:080 - เพิ่ม

gg ขอให้โชคดีแจ้

yoshilove

yoshilove 2014-04-14T14:36:41+00:00

hi~ from queue :3

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

check : widescreen Support (4K Easy)
remove check : Letterbox during breaks (All diff)

4K

7K

[7K Normal]
00:15:615 (15615|3) - move to 3
00:17:011 (17011|1) - move to 1

[7K Hard]
00:28:173 (28173|5) - move to 7
01:17:011 (77011|3) - move to 3

- [ S o r a ] -

318 posts

Joined December 2013

- [ S o r a ] - 2014-04-15T08:39:26+00:00

:3

Pikobaka

168 posts

Joined October 2012

Pikobaka 2014-04-20T14:23:11+00:00

[13] BECK

46 posts

Joined May 2013

[13] BECK 2014-05-08T12:20:20+00:00

มาม้อดเพลง กำ( 'w') b

เท่าที่ดู ไม่มีอะไรมากแล้วล่ะมั้ง เท่าที่ได้อะนะ
ด้วยความที่มันไม่ไช่พวก MX หรืออะไรยากๆอะนะ ก็เอาพองามแหละน้า -w-

4K Easy

01:33:406 (93406|3) - ย้ายไปซ้าย 1 ช่องฮะ
00:59:229 เพิ่มช่องสามสักตัวจะสวยมากฮะ 'w'

4K Normal

01:15:615 เพิ่มโน้ตธรรมดาช่อง 1 ฮะ สวยวิ้ง~
01:22:592 (82592|3) - ย้ายไปช่อง 1 จะวิ้งมาก~
01:23:290 (83290|0) - ย้ายไปช่อง 4 จะเพอร์เฟค~l

เราไม่รู้เขายิงไรกัน ดงดาว เอาไปทำไร 55555
แต่เอามาก็ดีนะ กรรม

- [ S o r a ] -

318 posts

Joined December 2013

- [ S o r a ] - 2014-05-11T18:29:37+00:00

[13] BECK wrote:
เราไม่รู้เขายิงไรกัน ดงดาว เอาไปทำไร 55555
แต่เอามาก็ดีนะ กรรม

กำ ดาวน่ะ ยิ่งมีเยอะ ยิ่งแรงค์เร็วนะนาย
อย่างน้อยต้อง 12+ ถึงจะเริ่มแรงค์ได้
และมันเอาดึงดูดคนให้มาเล่น ประมาณนั้น

[Shi-Ra]

458 posts

Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2014-05-15T18:59:29+00:00

Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K Normal

Inside :3

You need to turn off Letterbox for both diffs, check AiMod. And I recommend you to set HP/OD like 6/7 for this diff, now it's too easy.

00:07:243 - you have two sounds for this place, so using LN ending isn't enough to accent all sounds here, I recommend you to add one more note to 2nd column to fill empty place

00:09:685 - add note to 0 column according to the sound which goes there, it'll be suitable with your pattern here too

00:24:685 (24685|6) - move to 5th column instead to continue your pattern transition here between previous and next going parts

00:37:941 (37941|4) - I suggest you to turn this note into LN and end it here 00:38:639 - it'll be more suitable here according to the sound

00:43:522 (43522|5) - same recommendation like above, turn it into LN and end it here 00:44:220 - well suitable transition here with your notes

00:49:801 (49801|0) - you can remove this LN, here you have the same situation like previously, no any additional long sound, so accent it correctly using one LN

01:05:150 (65150|5) - move this one to 2nd column to avoid double noting, you don't have here two identical sounds to accent them with repeating notes in the same column

7K Hard

Inside :3

HP/OD suggestion is 7/8 due to hardest diff in mapset, check it.

00:05:848 - you can add here one more note according to the additional sound here, you can do that coz it's HD diff

00:22:592 (22592|2,22592|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 0 and 5th columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable chord transition here rather than closed chord

00:25:383 (25383|6) - move to 5th column to keep your double stair chords here, don't ruin them

00:33:755 (33755|5) - move to 1st column instead, don't leave empty this part for the left hand here, make your patterns balanced

00:43:522 (43522|5) - I suggest you to use open chord here, move this note to 6th column, it'll be more comfortable to play such transition

00:54:685 (54685|6) - move this one to 5th or 4th column here to finish your right stair pattern correctly, there's no need to make symmertical pattern

01:25:732 (85732|1) - I recommend you to move this note to 3rd column here you have the same sound like for the next going note into 3rd column, so it'll be well suitable here

01:30:964 - you can add here one more note to 4th column according to the piano sound

01:37:941 (97941|3) - remove pls, you don't have here two long sounds

01:49:104 (109104|3) - move this one to 2nd column and add one more note to 6th column to perform here strong finish

No problems with other diffs owo
Good luck :3/

Soldsaga KunG

282 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Soldsaga KunG 2014-05-16T14:01:56+00:00

[Shi-Ra] wrote:
Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K Normal
Inside :3
You need to turn off Letterbox for both diffs, check AiMod. And I recommend you to set HP/OD like 6/7 for this diff, now it's too easy.

00:07:243 - you have two sounds for this place, so using LN ending isn't enough to accent all sounds here, I recommend you to add one more note to 2nd column to fill empty place OK Fix

00:09:685 - add note to 0 column according to the sound which goes there, it'll be suitable with your pattern here too OK Fix

00:24:685 (24685|6) - move to 5th column instead to continue your pattern transition here between previous and next going parts OK Fix

00:37:941 (37941|4) - I suggest you to turn this note into LN and end it here 00:38:639 - it'll be more suitable here according to the sound OK Fix

00:43:522 (43522|5) - same recommendation like above, turn it into LN and end it here 00:44:220 - well suitable transition here with your notes OK Fix

00:49:801 (49801|0) - you can remove this LN, here you have the same situation like previously, no any additional long sound, so accent it correctly using one LN OK Fix

01:05:150 (65150|5) - move this one to 2nd column to avoid double noting, you don't have here two identical sounds to accent them with repeating notes in the same column OK Fix

7K Hard
Inside :3
HP/OD suggestion is 7/8 due to hardest diff in mapset, check it.

00:05:848 - you can add here one more note according to the additional sound here, you can do that coz it's HD diff OK Fix

00:22:592 (22592|2,22592|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 0 and 5th columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable chord transition here rather than closed chord OK Fix

00:25:383 (25383|6) - move to 5th column to keep your double stair chords here, don't ruin them OK Fix

00:33:755 (33755|5) - move to 1st column instead, don't leave empty this part for the left hand here, make your patterns balanced OK Fix

00:43:522 (43522|5) - I suggest you to use open chord here, move this note to 6th column, it'll be more comfortable to play such transition OK Fix

00:54:685 (54685|6) - move this one to 5th or 4th column here to finish your right stair pattern correctly, there's no need to make symmertical pattern OK Fix

01:25:732 (85732|1) - I recommend you to move this note to 3rd column here you have the same sound like for the next going note into 3rd column, so it'll be well suitable here OK Fix

01:30:964 - you can add here one more note to 4th column according to the piano sound OK Fix

01:37:941 (97941|3) - remove pls, you don't have here two long sounds OK Fix

01:49:104 (109104|3) - move this one to 2nd column and add one more note to 6th column to perform here strong finish OK Fix

No problems with other diffs owo
Good luck :3/

All Fix ;w;

Ayachi-

2,261 posts

Joined November 2013

Ayachi- 2014-05-18T22:08:11+00:00

Hi~ from queue
Column : |1|2|3|4|

Uncheck letterboxing

4K easy

00:39:336 - Add a note
00:50:499 - Add a note at 4
00:51:894 - Add a note
00:53:301 - ^
00:54:685 - ^
00:58:871 - ^

4K normal

00:39:336 - Add a note at column 2
00:53:290 - Add a note
00:54:701 - ^
01:17:011 - ^

Nice map !

Good Luck!

Soldsaga KunG

282 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Soldsaga KunG 2014-05-19T09:54:12+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
Hi~ from queue
Column : |1|2|3|4|

Uncheck letterboxing

4K easy
00:39:336 - Add a note
00:50:499 - Add a note at 4
00:51:894 - Add a note
00:53:301 - ^
00:54:685 - ^
00:58:871 - ^

4K normal
00:39:336 - Add a note at column 2
00:53:290 - Add a note
00:54:701 - ^
01:17:011 - ^

Nice map !

Good Luck!

Fix All Thx ^^

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