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[Easy]

00:06:951-(6) nc
00:07:368-(1) remove nc

Prefect!


[Normal]

00:09:868-(4) x:432 y:180
00:25:824-(4) (5) You can use a long slider (from 00:25:824 - 00:25:909) to replace it
00:32:576-(4) x:328 y:316
01:20:701-(2) Are you sure this is ok in normal ?...@m@

[Tari]

01:11:543-(3) This slider...O.O
01:11:951-(4) So the distance snap of this one...?
01:28:201-Maybe this green line should be moved to 01:26:951? or there is a missing spinner?

I love this song:D
Anyway, nice map~Fight for rank!
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[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
01:21:951 (4,6) - hit sounds sounds strange :( maybe just my illusion

[Normal]
00:29:034 (4) - add a reverse :)

00:56:535 (4) - cut half

[Tari]
00:15:284 (4) - add a note


00:16:951 (1) - forget the hit sound or on purpose?:) If the later,may add hit sound at

and
00:19:868 (7) - and remove 00:20:284 (1) - 's

00:44:243 (2) - may add a note between 2 and 3

01:06:326 (6) - change it into ?

01:26:534 (7) - may add a green line to light the hit sound just like the follow

and
using clap

hope to be helpful!
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Accel World wrote:

[Easy]

00:06:951-(6) nc nope
00:07:368-(1) remove nc and nope

my reasoning behind those two colors is change in hitsounds, not to follow the downbeat

Prefect!


[Normal]

00:09:868-(4) x:432 y:180 why not
00:25:824-(4) (5) You can use a long slider (from 00:25:824 - 00:25:909) to replace it nah
00:32:576-(4) x:328 y:316 done
01:20:701-(2) Are you sure this is ok in normal ?...@m@ its fine

I love this song:D haha me too
Anyway, nice map~Fight for rank! trying my best lol

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
01:21:951 (4,6) - hit sounds sounds strange :( maybe just my illusion not to me

[Normal]
00:29:034 (4) - add a reverse :) not feeling it

00:56:535 (4) - cut half fine how it is

no change ;~;

hope to be helpful! thanks anyways!
thanks for the mods! i will get to your maps shortly
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remapped the end of kiai and fixed the green line thanks for the mod guys!
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Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

[Tari]

00:26:118 (7) - Something about this pentagon still looks a bit weird; move 7 up a bit? Maybe it's just my eyes getting tired.
00:31:534 (3,4,5,6,7) - This could be a neater pentagon too, if you're going for that effect.
01:25:284 (5,6) - Not the best place (musically) for a mini-jump; is there a way to rearrange this to be distance snapped?

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look!
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Changed everything, except the last suggestion given in my diff, if I were to change that mini jump, then I would have to change 00:05:909 (6) -

which I don't want.

http://puu.sh/5wqSH.osu
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Kytoxid wrote:

Last minor touches~

[Easy]

00:20:701 (2,3) - This blanket is a bit off; I would move the middle point of 3 up and left 1 grid.
00:39:451 (3) - I would probably remove this slider; to continue the gap pattern from 00:36:326.
00:44:868 - This would be a good place to add a slider; the vocals maintain intensity here, unlike above.
00:56:951 (1,2) - This blanket is also slightly off: http://puu.sh/5wj9r.jpg (compare the approach circle with the slider curve).

fixed everything!

[Normal]

00:25:285 (4) - Goes a bit low, is it possible to raise it up a bit? It doesn't go offscreen, but is touching my hit indicator.

Not much to say here, here's a few more blankets that are a grid off or more; you can shift points around by a few pixels if you have the time. Use the approach circles of the note you're blanketing as a guide:

00:07:368 (1) -
00:55:285 (3) -

fixed everything!

All just minor touches, lemme know when you've taken a look! will do ^^


thanks! I fixed everything
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Alrighty then. :D
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Kytoxid wrote:

Alrighty then. :D
thank you for the bubble!

fiaejgoiwjgo such excitement
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ah, i will take care of that map :P my post will appear here tomorrow ^_^~
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Kind of sad that you abandoned your Hard. I would have liked to see you try to improve it more instead of just removing it.
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Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider :P?

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes?

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group

that's all~

Nomal

00:42:785 (4) - why dont just go into straight ?

that's all~

easy

Nothing bad!Nice easy <3


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!
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its bubbled already, thanks though. i will keep your suggestions just in case
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"(Anime Size Ver.)"

What?
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Gabe wrote:

"(Anime Size Ver.)"

What?
its the official title for the song

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Title info from Matsushita Yuya's official site: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Music/Arch/E ... index.html

Title - SEE YOU (アニメサイズVer.)
Romanized Title - SEE YOU (Anime Size Ver.)
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[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody.


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start.
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~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.


~Easy~
  1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.


~Normal~
  1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead.
  2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.


~Tari~
  1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly.
  2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read.
  3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully.
  4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty.


Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.
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Silver Crow wrote:

Nomal done

GOOD LUCK!

just one change, thanks!

Konei wrote:

[Easy]

00:57:368 (2) - Missing normal sample on the end :/
01:19:451 (3) - Need the normal sample on the start, not onthe Sliderbody. done


[Normal]

01:19:451 (3) - Missing Normal sample on the start. done


thank you konei!

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better. changed bgs
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully. fixed all combo colors in my diffs
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map. done
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.
eh i think it is fine the way it is, the spinner sort of does the job

~Easy~
  1. OD -1 to balance with the difficulty settings.
done

~Normal~
  1. 01:02:785 (5) - This slider shape is really ugly if you compare it to the rest of the difficulty, I'd rather make it curve like the others instead. done
  2. 01:20:284 (1,2) - I think that placing these two objects like this could confuse the beginners, place them normally like the rest please.
adjusted, Ctrl+G and then readjust blanket

Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled. done ^^


Thanks to you all!
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Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The background size is pretty weird, try to find a normal resolution? Would be better.
  2. There are some small inconsistencies in Kiai and Combo Colours through the difficulties, check them carefully.
  3. Disable the Widescreen Support since you're not really using a SB for this map.
  4. The mp3 ends really suddenly, could you try to add some fade out maybe? Would be a good idea.


~Tari~
  1. 00:11:118 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is inconsistent, make sure to fix it properly. k, but I want to keep the spacing from 1 to 2 the same here.
  2. 00:19:243 (6,7,1) - I don't really like this pattern since it's a jump and then an anti-jump, it's pretty confusing to play. You should try to space them normally instead, they would play better and they would also be easier to read. Increased spacing of note 1, but I don't want to decrease spacing at note 7 because It needs to be consistent to 00:33:201 (8) -
  3. 01:06:743 - It feels like you're missing a circle here if you listen to the music carefully. Just Reversed the slider.
  4. 01:26:534 (7) - I'd suggest to add a spinner here instead of a slider, to avoid the same scores on this difficulty. k, but didn't give me the positions, so I did what I thought best and decided to silence the end.


Make sure to also fix the other mods you've got while the map was bubbled.


Fixed everything here! Thanks Andrea

Silver Crow wrote:

Hello :3

Start from [Lust] Diff:

I thought it is already for rank really nice and lovely diff, so i just give you some suggest.

00:43:201 (4,5) - here maybe go for a slider :P? Its a matter of preference and I like slider better here.

00:58:201 (2,3,4,5) - could think about the shape of these notes? They're fine, I can't really make a pattern out of them, and I want it to look similar to 01:05:284 (3,4,5) - so no change

01:08:201 (3,4,1,2) - i think NC start by 3 and NC the 1 then 01:09:868 (3,4,1,2) - is another group Not true, the strong vocal and the downbeats start there, so my comboing is fine

that's all~


thats all my Mod, sorry of i can only pcik less problem(?), bec i relly thought its all fine to be rank.

GOOD LUCK!


No changes, read inside for more info


Update http://puu.sh/5BhLd.osu
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Everything is better but since you've got three mods actually after the bubble I'm not confident in ranking this, sorry!

Re-Bubbled~
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