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Baihe House

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Baihe House 2013-11-04T14:31:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2021年5月29日 at 15:34:24

Artist: Waterflame
Title: Carrots
Tags: natureshadow upbeat non-lyrical fun happy
BPM: 155
Filesize: 3379kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:

no thinking about (5.32 stars, 692 notes)

Download: Waterflame - Carrots
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做着玩

Last edited by Baihe House 2021-05-29T07:34:48+00:00, edited 50 times in total.

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2013-11-05T05:46:18+00:00

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2013-11-05T11:00:53+00:00

Baihe House

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Baihe House 2013-11-05T11:23:13+00:00

新人一枚，求摸图~ ;w;

BurNing

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BurNing 2013-11-12T13:40:08+00:00

[General]
1.Source不能为空
2.BG分辨率不太主流，规定的上限1024x768的4:3图片。不过这样也可以啦/w\
3.PreviewTime插入点感觉在00:49:326这里比较好，感觉高潮在这里，就是和KIAI Time开始的时间一致

[no thinking about]
00:51:068 (6) - 这里的slider建议拖出来放到下面

如图

01:09:068 (4) - 这里建议改成叠加连打或者折返，和前面的对应

┳＿┳ 推敲了几遍就这些了，图比较短，没什么大改的地方
/w\ 总体感觉不错，Good luck

hoshisorakiseki

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hoshisorakiseki 2013-11-12T13:45:06+00:00

mapper群
offset-4感觉更准确
tag~~去掉“carrots waterflame”~~感觉要重新写
音效感觉不好，都被鼓声覆盖住了，换响亮一点的（比如normal）可能好一点
开头 - 00:24:938 -->感觉好长
00:25:326 (3) - (256,264)
00:26:874 (4) - (244,296)
00:35:390 (2) - (144,168)
00:37:713 (2) - (156,172)
02:03:261 -->这么快就完了，差评
感觉一大堆note，我曾经因为这个被黑N+1遍

Baihe House

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Baihe House 2013-11-12T14:30:23+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

mapper群
offset-4感觉更准确
tag~~去掉“carrots waterflame”~~感觉要重新写
音效感觉不好，都被鼓声覆盖住了，换响亮一点的（比如normal）可能好一点
开头 - 00:24:938 -->感觉好长
00:25:326 (3) - (256,264)
00:26:874 (4) - (244,296)
00:35:390 (2) - (144,168)
00:37:713 (2) - (156,172)
02:03:261 -->这么快就完了，差评
感觉一大堆note，我曾经因为这个被黑N+1遍

看来，我做了半天的时间，果然是不对的 ;w; 谢谢你的mod~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-11-13T12:42:54+00:00

首先音量不科学.. normal100%太吵了, 建议.. 60%左右吧

你的节奏可以看出来基本上是整曲的1/2拍, 然后少数地方加了连打

在前面那一段虽然说这样还是太闷不过感觉没办法吧毕竟就是那样的节奏
可以建议的就是00:41:967 (1) - 这种扭音的地方加点特别的东西比如一个奇葩的滑条之类..
但是到了00:49:322 - 开始, 音乐里就有各种蓝线上的音了
比如一开始就是ooooo. x x o ox xo这样的节奏, 但是还是放的1/2 (
建议开着减速仔细听一下到底是什么节奏再放.. 应该是有一堆二连的
这个的节奏有点类似s-c-u的milky ice bear MMzz和Sync做的可以参考一下

后面的部分也是各种1/1和3/4的音.. 请重新对下节奏233

然后那个00:49:322绿线请放在白线上面..

另外就是没加音效啊至少24clap是必须的.. 嗯

大概就这样.. BG不错, 点赞

~~我想吐槽纯音是instrumental不是non-lyrical~~

Baihe House

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Baihe House 2013-11-14T07:13:57+00:00

wmfchris wrote:

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-15T17:01:23+00:00

To anyone will mod the map, plz add this picture first in your modding.

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2013-11-16T04:20:33+00:00

[General]
hi
曲子中有过多的地方没有作图，要么填上要么cut掉

[Insane]
00:25:322 (3,4) - 为啥这里是1.5xsv?然后后面又变回去了
00:28:031 (3,4) - ^,后面的也不提了，我看不到有什么理由要用sv加速..
00:41:967 (1,2,3,4) - 滑条形状过于怪异
00:24:934 (1) - 没对到时间轴
00:55:902 - kiaitime没对到时间轴

这种图不好mod...因为满满的都是问题...
1.间距太过随机莫名
2.统一滑条弧度，滑条风格不要太多变，会很奇怪
3.节奏太单一，要随着音乐变化做出变化 →例如第一个kiaitime里有很多2连4连节奏，你全部都不跟...这样也是很莫名
然后过了kiaitime以后他会有几个比较清脆而又明显的音，这种音可以用1/2来突出他
4.clap其实用2/4clap就好，你这样加会比较混乱
5.不够美观...多尝试对称或者矩形阵

[Other]
尝试弄清kiaitime那段节奏，然后把图弄美观，最好是remap一次

woshiguabi

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woshiguabi 2014-01-28T16:30:17+00:00

操烂百合屋

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-02-19T13:46:12+00:00

随手mod

no thinking about

00:38:773 (6) - 怎么突然加大间距啊
00:40:031 (4,5) - 距离和前后拉开一些
00:58:999 (1) - 这个note和前面四个是一串, 间距放成一样的比较好, 不然还以为是二分拍
00:59:967 (4) - 这样去掉转向 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348819
01:07:709 (4,5,6) - 有点挤了, 推荐放到外面去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348822
01:11:096 (1,2,3) - 这个和后面是一串啊 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348828
01:12:354 (2) - 距离和前后拉开一些
01:12:934 (1,2,3,4) - 选上这四个 ctrl+shift+s 放大150%

01:34:225 (7,8,9) - 距离和前面拉开一些
01:48:160 (3) - 距离和前面拉开一些
01:54:160 (2,1) - 可以放得远一点啊 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348835
01:56:386 (7) - 我觉得去掉这个note比较好
02:00:354 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348837
02:40:611 (1,2,3) - 距离和前面拉开一些(?)

我觉得打起来还可以, 其实你可以做完全难度找一群人mod啊

哦另外tags里的carrots和waterflame和标题重复了, 可以删掉

其实waterflame是谁啊...

~~看到NG站就觉得好想学fl studio编曲做图玩好懒sad~~

Sakaue Nachi

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Sakaue Nachi 2014-03-14T14:22:14+00:00

来骗豆了

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hoshisorakiseki wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

To anyone will mod the map, plz add this picture first in your modding.

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