nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.) · forum

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-24T02:13:14+00:00

nice song!( 'ω')!!!!!!!!!!

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2013-11-24T02:31:52+00:00

ありがとう (>3<)/

- Miomio Chii -

440 posts

Joined October 2012

- Miomio Chii - 2013-11-24T02:42:55+00:00

hihi, here is my mod. From forum PM. (have nazi point)
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK ✔
[Easy]
00:23:283 (1) - front x128 y152 ?
00:39:402 (3) - snap second dot on the grid ?
01:06:268 (1) - snap front's dot on the grid ?
01:20:596 (1) - ~~x277 y43~~, x256 y64, x240 y120 ?
hitsound ok
[xChippy's Normal]
00:31:790 (3) - add whistle for the end ?
00:55:522 (1) - ~~x423 y306~~, x420 y232, x360 y164 ?
01:14:999 (3,4) - same shape ?
[alacat's Hard]
01:26:641 (3) - add whistle ?
[Insane]
seems ok

i try to do my best, sorry that only a few !
Hope it could help you ! 彡★

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2013-11-24T04:40:37+00:00

- Miomio Chii - wrote:
hihi, here is my mod. From forum PM. (have nazi point)
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK ✔
[Easy]
00:23:283 (1) - front x128 y152 ? Front, what u mean '-' ?
00:39:402 (3) - snap second dot on the grid ? I 'm not using grid snap when i map, it"s not a problem imo '-'
01:06:268 (1) - snap front's dot on the grid ? ^
01:20:596 (1) - ~~x277 y43~~, x256 y64, x240 y120 ? prefer the current position >.<
hitsound ok

[Insane]
seems ok :3

i try to do my best, sorry that only a few !
Hope it could help you ! 彡★

no change for me but thx for checking and star :3/

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-11-24T21:17:53+00:00

Ello, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
Letterbox conflicts
[Easy]
Circle size -1?
00:52:387 - Consider adding a note here, so that the objects are equalyl spaced apart (by a beat) consistently. I was kinda caught off guard on this part, now seeing why, since 00:52:611 (3) - is placed on a red tick

01:13:208 (1) - Try having it start at 01:13:432 instead. The spacing between 01:12:984 - 01:13:432 follows up well with 01:05:820 - 01:06:268, 01:09:402 - 01:09:850 and will be recognizable.
[xChippy's Normal]
01:15:671 (4) - Make it look like this, so that it's perfectly parallel with 01:17:462 (2) - :

[alacat's Hard]
00:31:119 (3,4) - What's the sudden jump here for? o.o
00:46:567 (1) - Move to about x:292/y:320 00:47:014 and switch notes (2,3) - like this:

Makes a pretty interesting jump imo.
[Insane]
00:17:126 (6) - Remove this note, it sounds extra here.A stream here doesn't really fit since I'd usually see it during the part where you'd hear the drum rolls.
00:47:910 (5,6,7,8) - May want to increase the volume of these notes, I could barely identify what hitsound they were o~o
00:50:596 (6) - NC?
00:57:313 (6) - Should be NC instead of 00:57:984 (1) - .

Hope this helps~!

[NSER]-Zazalng

194 posts

Joined August 2012

[NSER]-Zazalng 2013-11-25T05:00:39+00:00

Hello sir, I'm from modding queues

Let's start with me (Neko isn't here)
[Easy]
01:13:208 change end Point to 01:14:552
01:18:805 change Beat to here 01:18:581

[Normal]
01:22:164 change end point to 01:22:611 or reverse it

[alacat's Hard]
00:38:731 snap with 1,2 ?

[Insane]
00:27:761 unsnap plzzzzz
00:32:686 I think it too hard for insane low bpm here try to unsnap it

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2013-11-25T20:32:45+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿
[General]
Letterbox conflicts
[Easy]
Circle size -1? np i prefer the current CS
00:52:387 - Consider adding a note here, so that the objects are equalyl spaced apart (by a beat) consistently. I was kinda caught off guard on this part, now seeing why, since 00:52:611 (3) - is placed on a red tick nope i don't think it's confused imo
01:13:208 (1) - Try having it start at 01:13:432 instead. The spacing between 01:12:984 - 01:13:432 follows up well with 01:05:820 - 01:06:268, 01:09:402 - 01:09:850 and will be recognizable. ok fixed

[Insane]
00:17:126 (6) - Remove this note, it sounds extra here.A stream here doesn't really fit since I'd usually see it during the part where you'd hear the drum rolls. nope it fit for me
00:47:910 (5,6,7,8) - May want to increase the volume of these notes, I could barely identify what hitsound they were o~o increase by 10% '-'
00:50:596 (6) - NC? fixed on the next note
00:57:313 (6) - Should be NC instead of 00:57:984 (1) - . fixed

Hope this helps~!

[NSER]-Zazalng wrote:
Hello sir, I'm from modding queues

Let's start with me (Neko isn't here)
[Easy]
01:13:208 change end Point to 01:14:552 I changed the start instead '-'
01:18:805 change Beat to here 01:18:581 no

[Insane]
00:27:761 unsnap plzzzzz you mean unstack no ? if yes, no i prefer stack them
00:32:686 I think it too hard for insane low bpm here try to unsnap it it play well for me

thx for mod :3/

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-11-26T16:11:31+00:00

Mod replies:

-Kirito wrote:
hi umi san~

[xChippy's Normal]
01:01:343 - 1/1 slide Arrow to change? nope prefer to keep the little pause here
http://puu.sh/5qHpj.jpg
start point x:344 y:180
mid point x:320 y:124
end point x:324 y:72
01:05:149 - whistle(soft none) add
01:09:626 - ^
01:10:522 - ^
01:11:417 - ^
Added some by myself as some of those above would disrupt my consistency

good lucky umi san

- Miomio Chii - wrote:
hihi, here is my mod. From forum PM. (have nazi point)
-------------------------------------------------
[xChippy's Normal]
00:31:790 (3) - add whistle for the end ? there is already one OAO
00:55:522 (1) - ~~x423 y306~~, x420 y232, x360 y164 ? huh o.o? even tho I didn't understand this one prefer to keep the blanket I have atm
01:14:999 (3,4) - same shape ? Making them the same shape will leave an ugly taste behind.

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿
[xChippy's Normal]
01:15:671 (4) - Make it look like this, so that it's perfectly parallel with 01:17:462 (2) - : fixed

[NSER]-Zazalng wrote:
Hello sir, I'm from modding queues
[Normal]
01:22:164 change end point to 01:22:611 or reverse it prefer the current rythm as I used this alot in this diff

Thanks for modding all owo

Diff:

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TitleUnicode:なないろびより(TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:-Umi-
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256,192,87761,12,0,89775,0:0:0:0:

Umi

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Umi 2013-11-26T18:11:57+00:00

updated :3

CPLs

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CPLs 2013-11-27T10:04:17+00:00

just taking a quick look..

capitalize all the first word of source

and how about adding "silver link" in tags?

Umi

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Umi 2013-11-27T10:36:57+00:00

Fixed Both thx ^^

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2013-11-27T12:51:31+00:00

Just few suggestions before pushing this forward.~

[General]
Title Unicode: There needs to be an extra space between なないろびより and (TV Size).
It'd be more suitable to end the kiai time at 01:24:178 - where the next stanza exactly begans. or you can extend it to 01:27:537 - , or 01:29:104 - .
The bg file is better as .jpeg imo considering that the current file size is way too big. (i have never seen such a heavy bg...)
I think Source should be "Non non biyori" (uncapitalize the last 2 words), or do you have any source about it?

[Insane]
00:19:253 (4,5,6,7) - Considering how the (3) flows, this stream should be curved for a better flow imo.
00:32:910 (3) - Honestly i dont like this pattern since it caused me to misread the rhythm due to the stack and it ignores the crush-symbal at 00:33:134 - . Please consider remove the slider and rearrange the rhythm.
00:42:089 (3) - Copy (2) and rotate it by -120 degree. I dont think the current angle looks that great.

[Hard]
Volume setting is kinda higher than it needs to be, especially in kiai sections.
01:00:895 - This is still optional, but i think this crush-symbal somewhat sounds differently and a normal-finish would fit nicely with it.

[Easy]
00:08:955 (1) - This slider should be more curved imo because it looked weird compared to (3).
01:14:999 - A finish would fit better with the instruments.
01:22:387 (3) - This slider somehow looks randomly placed, due to its angle and shape. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1130265
01:27:649 (1) - The spinner apprears too suddenly and is surprising to beginners imo. It's highly recommended to replace (5) with a circle and start the spinner at 01:27:537 - instead.

Pretty much a perfect mapset, not much to complain about patterns! Throw a forum pm at me once you're done with these fixes.

alacat

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alacat 2013-11-27T13:28:01+00:00

Melophobia wrote:
[Hard]
Volume setting is kinda higher than it needs to be, especially in kiai sections. yep, turn down the volume in kiai time
01:00:895 - This is still optional, but i think this crush-symbal somewhat sounds differently and a normal-finish would fit nicely with it. ok :3

めろさんありがと(～・ω・)～

http://puu.sh/5uLFk.zip

Umi

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Umi 2013-11-27T13:34:07+00:00

Melophobia wrote:
Just few suggestions before pushing this forward.~

[General]
Title Unicode: There needs to be an extra space between なないろびより and (TV Size). Fixed
It'd be more suitable to end the kiai time at 01:24:178 - where the next stanza exactly begans. or you can extend it to 01:27:537 - , or 01:29:104 - .
The bg file is better as .jpeg imo considering that the current file size is way too big. (i have never seen such a heavy bg...) change into .jpg
I think Source should be "Non non biyori" (uncapitalize the last 2 words), or do you have any source about it? i don't really have source but i always saw it write like that (ex : 1, 2, 3)

[Insane]
00:19:253 (4,5,6,7) - Considering how the (3) flows, this stream should be curved for a better flow imo.
00:32:910 (3) - Honestly i dont like this pattern since it caused me to misread the rhythm due to the stack and it ignores the crush-symbal at 00:33:134 - . Please consider remove the slider and rearrange the rhythm.
00:42:089 (3) - Copy (2) and rotate it by -120 degree. I dont think the current angle looks that great.

[Easy]
00:08:955 (1) - This slider should be more curved imo because it looked weird compared to (3).
01:14:999 - A finish would fit better with the instruments.
01:22:387 (3) - This slider somehow looks randomly placed, due to its angle and shape. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1130265
01:27:649 (1) - The spinner apprears too suddenly and is surprising to beginners imo. It's highly recommended to replace (5) with a circle and start the spinner at 01:27:537 - instead.

All fixed

Pretty much a perfect mapset, not much to complain about patterns! Throw a forum pm at me once you're done with these fixes.