tellertheworld wrote:

Form my modding queues~
[Another]

open

Sorry ,I don't like this music.
But, I was playing once.
In this diffs, the spinner is too long.
You should not use the spinner in the main rhythm.
Good luck for you~

(NO KD)

ts8zs wrote:

[Another]
00:17:942 (1) - move to 64,40 lol no it's out screen. mostly in Catch The Beat game can't catch it cuz' no
>00:17:768 (4) - Ctrl+G n
>>00:18:466 (2) - Ctrl+G n
00:51:605 (1) - move up 1 small gird k
00:53:698 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1196080 n
00:57:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - Roate 30°? n. but i rotate it 45°
01:06:431 (2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1196086k
01:09:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1196096 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1196098 or a stream n
01:27:884 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1196104
[Hyper]
01:19:512 (3) - blanket 1's head?k
[Standard]
00:51:605 (3) - blanket k by me
[Beginner]
01:22:303 (4,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1196116 k

iNickel wrote:

[Beginner]

00:13:407 (1) - Remove this circle! Not, i change it
01:11:838 (3,1,2) - This pattern is not really good for easy! Not. i think it's good

So far.. Fine diff! Thanks o/

[Hyper]

Use Distance snap! That's the main problem here! ok will work it later

[General]

Your map is good, but you should always use distance snap!
and PLEASE! CHANGE THE BACKGROUND !!! :O Why? Resolution Size? You scared the face? o/ i don't know the matter

vahn10 wrote:

[General Stuffs]
move the first red timing section 1/2 to the right so it will start on the downbeat no
remove the inherited/green section then on the second red section, add kiai time no
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen)

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  Mengapa BGnya 600x400? Coba carilah BG yang ukuran 1024x768 atau 800x600

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  Perfect

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  00:13:407 (1,2,3,4) - Change Slider or Delete Circle (It's So Many)
  00:42:884 (2) - Unranked because is so hard circle are behind slider

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  01:28:233 (1,2) - Circlenya begini
  
  SPOILER

  

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  01:06:431 (2,3,4,5) - Circlenya Diluruskan saja
  01:23:361 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - NC

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hi, DenoisoGoiso^^



[General]

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  Mengapa BGnya 600x400? Coba carilah BG yang ukuran 1024x768 atau 800x600 I want to change the BG. wait.

[Easy]

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  Perfect

[ComeBackHome's Normal]

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  00:13:407 (1,2,3,4) - Change Slider or Delete Circle (It's So Many) nope
  00:42:884 (2) - Unranked because is so hard circle are behind slider nope

[Hard]

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  01:28:233 (1,2) - Circlenya begini nope
  
  SPOILER

  

[Insane]

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  01:06:431 (2,3,4,5) - Circlenya Diluruskan saja nope
  01:23:361 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - NC nope bad imo :p

Sorry for My Bad Mod ;(
Good for Ranked^^

Restrict wrote:

Happy New Year 2014 happeh nau yard tho

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[Hyper]

01:00:675 (1,2,3,4,1) - Messy fixed

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Some of your timing offset have moved, ex. your second inherited point in hyper, that should be on 13756 but that's on 13757

Example :

Hyper
I 13757 on 13756 fixed
I 19336 on 19337 nope, but i add +2 on this

Check every inherited point and fix them by moving to time where inherited point located and click Timing Setup then click "Use Current Time" done.

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi

Happy New Year ~ happeh nau yard tho :3
Mod from #modreqs yeah big luck hahahahHHahahahahAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

[Beginner]
00:22:128 (3) - Put it a little bit in right. ok
00:30:675 (1) - Really ? Make it more simple ! jk
01:20:907 (3) - ^

[Hyper]
00:37:651 (4) - 4 is hidden ! Is it a trap ? xD okay? .-.
00:40:442 (4) - ^ ( It's C/c x) ) okay? .-.

[Another]
Haven't found mistakes ! ok


Good beatmap !
I like the song ! Errors are just spacing x) Bt it's okay ! yeah spacing at hard are sucks
Good luck !

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, modding because M4M :3

[General]
Maybe begin all the diffs in 00:13:756? This way you begin in a downbeat and allow to use the previous beats as a countdown so players hit more accurately. .-.

I feel your offset is a bit early, try 1209 and 25104 as offsets. Though I think you only need an offset in 2777, I'm not sure about this last one, you should try getting some timing checks. nope, not changes. offset is great for me.

[Beginner]
General Feedback/Settings
The diff felt fine except in some spots I will point here.
I highly suggest you to increase AR by 1, AR2 is too slow for this map and it'd lead players to hit before time.
Also increase OD by 1.
And maybe increase CS by 1 too, so the map looks a bit cleaner and reduce the overlaps. nope, too hard.

Rhythm
00:15:501 (3,4,5) - These ones feels pretty off for me, I think it'd be better if you do the this the same as 00:13:756 (2). It'd follow better the song imo. ok
00:23:698 (1) - Begin this in 00:23:872? It'd fit better with the constant 1/2 in the bass sound. ok
00:33:466 (1) - I feel this spinner would be better if it begins in 00:34:861 - so it fits better with the violin. You can put a 2 beat slider in 00:33:466 to fill the space. ok
00:43:233 - I think a rhythm like this would emphasize more the music. ok

00:46:024 - Same as above, but this time just use the first two sliders I show in the screenshot. ok
00:58:231 - Maybe add a circle here? It'd emphasize nicely the music here.
01:01:024 - ^
01:03:814 - ^
01:05:559 (1) - What do you think about a rhythm like this one? In case you add the circles I suggested before this would mantain consistency, and if not, just omit the (4) there (Removed the NC in that screen). nope

01:13:931 (2) - How about removing this one and putting a slider similar to 01:12:884 (1) in 01:14:280? it'd feel the violin-like instrument nicely. ok

[Hyper]
General Feedback/Settings
I must say I really enjoyed this one. Flows nicely and the use of blankets make this looks fine, nice one. There will be some suggestions about spacing.
Also increase HP and OD by 1, 5 is quite low for these values. okay increased

Rhythm
00:49:861 - Maybe add a circle here? really not sure about this. but added.
01:03:466 - Maybe add a rhythm for the violin-like instrument? This would keep the consistency. ok
01:25:791 - Add a 1/1 beat slider here, this part feels a bit empty. You could make it like here. ok, looks good.

SPOILER

Placement
00:20:384 (3,1) - This spacing confused me a bit, you should make it the same as the other parts (1.20x) fixed
00:23:175 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - How about making all these having 0.60x spacing? fixed and linear flow looks good now ^^
00:30:675 (4,5) - Space these sliders a bit, at first glance they look like spaced 1/2 beat instead 1 full beat. fixed
00:40:791 (1,2,3) - Maybe space this more? nope
00:44:628 (3) - Maybe move this around x:256 y:120, the reduction in spacing doens't fit too much. moved
00:46:721 (2,1) - This could be a bit hard without ruining your structure, but the spacing there is a bit confusing you better keep consistent the ~0.90x here. fixed
00:57:187 (2) - Move this around x:132 y:320, so the change in spacing isn't too confusing here. moved
00:59:977 (2) - Similar as above moved
01:23:000 (2,1) - The blanket is good, but the spacing makes think this is 1/2 instead 1/1 so keep the spacing consistent >.< no changes.

Aesthetics
00:32:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'd suggest you to keep this clean of overlaps so this look cleaner. Already fixed.
00:37:651 (4) - *nazi* Stack this perfectly to the end of (2) Already fixed.
00:40:442 (4) - ^ Already fixed.
00:50:035 (1) - This is not very symmetrical with 00:49:687 (6). Copy (6) and flip it horizontally (Ctrl+H). fixed
01:25:094 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here. fixed

[Another]
General Feedback/Settings
Well, there are a few inconsistencies in patterns, an ok diff, I feel it can be improved, I'll help you a bit.
Increase OD by 1, OD7 is like free 300 for most skilled players. yes

Rhythm
00:30:500 (1) - Delete this slider and put a circle instead. Then, put a circle in 00:30:675 with NC. The rhythm will be pretty much the same, but beginning the jumpy pattern in that downbeat, would feel better imo. yes
00:33:117 (1) - I'd make this a 1/2 beat slider and begin the stream in 00:33:466, it'd feel better to play imo. yes
00:43:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is more like a personal distaste and would mean some big changes in the diff so feel free to ignore. I think these would play better as 1/2 beat sliders, or like this. yes

00:46:024 (1,2,3,4) - ^ yes
00:48:814 (1) - This would play better as a 1/2 beat slider imo. nope
00:49:163 (2) - ^This one as 1/1 beat slder, remove 00:49:512 (3,4) if you do. nope
00:50:210 (1) - As 00:48:814 (1), adding that the 1/4 jump here is quite excessive. nope
00:50:559 (2) - As 00:50:210 (1), remove 00:50:907 (3) if you do. nope because no more 00:50:907 (3) rhythm again. rhythm is changing. no change.
00:52:652 - This beat feels a bit weird being ignored. nope no change
00:53:873 - Maybe add a circle here? as i say. i don't want to add circle here if i put circle in here somebody will spesific the flow and don't know the beat/rhythm.

Placement
00:18:989 (4,1) - I'd expect a jump here to emphasize this part. Maybe like the ones you have in 00:22:128 (1,2,3,4,1), maybe not that strong, you choose. nope
00:20:559 (5,1) - ^ nope
00:21:605 (3,1) - ^ nope
00:24:745 (4,1) - ^ nope
00:29:280 (1,2,3) - I'd make this one a bit smoothie to keep the consistency on how you have 1/4 objects. ok

That'd be all from my part, good luck :3

Trust wrote:

hey, from my queue probably~

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended change/very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]

There are several unsnapped green lines in each of your difficulties. Be sure to resnap them. You mean Another diff? i think. fixed.

[Beginner]

00:22:128 (3) - Shift this note to the right a little so the jump to 00:22:826 (4) isn't so excessive. Fixed, but 00:22:826 (4) is moved. not the (3).
00:46:024 (4) - NC here, currently the combo is needlessly long. You can also NC on 00:47:419 (6) if that works better for you. fixed
00:46:024 (4,5,6,7) - The spacing for this entire string of sliders is inconsistent. Stick to a static distance spacing please. uhh no sorry.
01:18:814 (1) - If you want to stay consistent with hitsounding, the clap on this slider should be on the tail and not the head. The reason being is because if you look at your first Kiai, all of the claps are on strong white ticks and for some reason they aren't in the second. You really should fix your clap pattern from this point on. fixed on my way.
01:20:907 (3,4,1) - Same as 00:46:024 (4,5,6,7). nah c:

Well it would be nice to at least hear some whistles. The hit-sounding in general could use some work. Standard has pretty decent hit-sounding so I would definitely refer to how it was done there and try to apply it to this one.
[Hyper]

Change the Tick Rate to 2. It fits better with the pacing of the difficulty as well as makes it easier to read due to the sudden SV changes.

00:28:233 (3) - Could blanket better with more curve. Nope, i think it's already perfect <3
00:29:977 (3) - nazi~ The endpoint of this slider can be moved up one grid for proper symmetry. no idea can't be helped
00:36:256 - You probably won't change this, but it needs to be mentioned. Why are you increasing the SV so drastically (0.75x to 1.00x) following the kiai time when the pacing in music is actually less intense and not really speeding up? Furthermore the speed-up is made extremely difficult to read because of the spinner that proceeds it which I doubt any "Hard-level" player could even possibly react to when playing this for the first time. I'm not telling you this needs to change, but most likely, a BAT will find this questionable. ^
00:40:268 (3) - This will be blanketed perfectly if you move it to x:280 y:114 fixed
00:50:035 (1) - Remove the NC so this object fits nicely with the triangle pattern. fixed
00:50:210 (2) - NC fixed
00:56:140 - An SV decrease here would be fitting with how softly the music plays. done
01:09:745 (1) - Seems kind of dry and bit lazy to me that you would skip over so many powerful sounds in the music with a spinner on this difficulty. Not to mention that there's another spinner shortly after. I would map out this part to keep things interesting. But i think that was fit with a spinner. these powerful sounds is hard to map when i do. then really weird if slow to higher, really, probably this is makes sounds very hard. no map on this part. I'm not lazy, obviously.
01:23:000 (2,1) - The blanket between these two can be cleaned up. i was trying to understand this.
01:27:884 (5,6) - I get why just using 2 circles makes sense for the easier difficulties, but here it feels really under-mapped. The music has been in crescendo since the spinner, so the end of the map should really be as exciting as possible imo. Consider changing to two 1/2 sliders and a circle: of course, this is makes ugly distance == cursor movement really poor when i look this, really better o/

Example

Lots of hitsounds missing - claps in particular - and the spacing is sporadically random.

I'll stop here because this was a lot and I'm pretty tired. I know you're looking for a BAT, but this needs a lot of work - consistency with spacing and hit-sounding in particular and know that i'm not trying to be discouraging because it would definitely be awesome to see this get ranked someday. Anyways, if you would like a test-play and some feedback on your Another diff, feel free to catch me in-game.

Best of luck.

Sieg wrote:

Hi, your testplay here

http://puu.sh/6IngI.osr

SPOILER

not so bad for 1st try?
I hate doubles btw (:
diff is quite fun