1. Hard (4.52 stars, 446 notes)
2. Normal (1.94 stars, 208 notes)

樱小姐赛高

1. 反正是四星 感觉ar再低一些比较好
2. 还有clap最好换个音效 这个感觉不好听而且没啥感觉 换个稍微明显一点的当节拍器是不是好一些
3. 还有很重要的一点就是对称用得太多太多了 感觉就是做一个然后就复制一份 然后对称一下没了。。。全图都是这感觉 没有堆成的就在中轴线 感觉很偷懒 并且以为对称flow也没管了 距离也没管了 摆放也感觉有点单调了
   01:56:157 (3) - 没必要为了对称突然跳这么远吧 类似的很多 为了摆对称然后完全没管距离限制额 可是这是一个四星 应该是normal难度=L=
   别的基本都是一个样 节奏下的感觉没太大问题 主要就是摆放
   上面的mod指出了很多具体的问题 我没具体说哪里哪里。。因为我觉得大方面问题很大额。。。感觉上需要remap =L= 不过我说的也做不得准就是了

smallboat wrote:

Hi,615,Random mod req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

這個滾動的內圈感覺蠻小有忽然看不到的感覺，還是換了?
拖的時候有時會覺得拖過頭。
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很平凡的兩個diff。慢歌怎么出奇

[Yume]

01:50:907 (3,1) - 呈弧線? 因為前面23也是弧的。這邊突然縮進去了蠻怪。好
02:10:782 (2) - 再移下面一點跟(1)(3)呈弧形。好
02:15:657 (1) - +whistle做個強調。待考证
02:18:657 (1) - ^
02:27:657 (1) - ^
03:00:282 (4,1) - 音效兩個對調一下，finish我覺得是在白線的時候+比較適合。手贱233
04:27:657 (1) - 感覺開頭+finish比較好，加了記得把whistle去掉。好

[Otome] 要不要大白線+whistle試試?歌里有不是大白线的whistle

00:24:657 (1) - whistle?好
01:22:782 (4) - NC比較適當?一大节一个nc
01:39:657 (5) - 這應該是要加finish?不用，音乐声音变小了
01:44:907 (1) - 這折返有一點大聲，加個綠線，音量30或40?好
01:57:657 (1) - 用01:56:532 (4) blanket.好
02:33:657 (3) - whistle?好
04:29:157 (3) - 感覺+finish比較好。同上

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
irc到一半你去写作业了，我就先粗略的把你的remap成果说一下

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[Otome]
General
接着irc，之前的我就不说了
Beats
01:06:094 (4,5,6) - 依然是跟音轨的问题，我觉得跟vocal比较好，而且这里还没有那么激烈，虽然要kiai但是还有一段距离吧，所以还是跟vocal？ 不好说，怕改了就没节奏了
01:07:219 (2) - 这个长音只有一个单点，感觉应该是一个长滑条什么的。
01:21:657 (1,2) - vocal跟的有问题，应该突出一下长音然后用一个单点突出后边音的急促[/color] 不是所有地方都跟vocal啦
02:48:657 (1,2,3,4) - 参考这种节奏型：

SPOILER

，后边对偶句的节奏同样 好主意
03:31:782 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 选了这么长一段，主要是感觉要有feeling，我感觉这里是要少放一点节奏空一空的，后边一点似乎是发觉要空，所以空的还不错，这里用了一些三连，我感觉有些可以简化或者去掉。 猴
04:07:219 (2,3,4) - 这里说的节奏同上图 还行吧
04:21:282 (4,1,2,3) - 跟的鼓，我感觉还可以跟vocal，个别可以跟一下鼓，没有vocal的地方 后面懒比了

Placement
01:36:657 (1) - 稍微往右移一点，flow稍微有点硬 稍稍调了一下
02:09:657 (1) - 不像blanket也不是顺的flow，所以还是弄得顺一点比较好
02:17:157 (3,4) - 听起来像是先下后上的对称，并且这里可以用反flow着重一下 好主意
02:26:157 (4) - 修一下滑条，它的弧度显得有点大，和别的滑条相比有一点突出的感觉，我觉得突出的程度大了，和5形成blanket是个好办法这样多唯美
02:27:657 (1,2) - 多变的弧度，这里弧度应该加大一些，上句弧度明显比这里滑条大 猴
02:37:782 (3) - 弧度问题，可以加大一点点 猴
02:38:157 (4,5) - flow需要注意，这里没有理由让flow换一下 没换啊，这是新的一句了吧
02:54:282 (5) - Flow问题。。。上一句我记得没有换flow啊，这里却换了同上
03:56:157 (4,5,6,1,2) - 我会感觉这地方排版略显粗糙，滑条弧度没有得到控制显得不是很美观，然后flow比较硬 为何我觉得挺好
04:01:219 (2,3,4) - 控制间距，虽然我觉得小跳一点也不无理由，不过似乎之前的跳就不是很多，这里远不及强调至此的程度 再看看吧
04:16:782 (2,3,4) - 三角跳flow接右下滑条然后是对称，我觉得还是有点硬的flow，让3、4接2接的更顺一点比较好 改了下
04:18:657 (1,2,3,4) - 虽说也还可以，不过觉得stack理由不充分，音乐还是比较流动的，你看后边紧接着就是blanket而不是stack，音乐却差不多 为何如此认为
NCs
我感觉nc需要注意，因为看样子你的nc是加在重音上了，我觉得这曲子还是很明显一句是一句的，这样加的话有点偏了的感觉，你明白我的mod里面基本不会提nc的问题的，除非我觉得比较不合适

我觉得挺好，只要有序就行吧
That's my suggestions..If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

615915887 wrote:

什么也没有发生

ZZHBOY wrote:

我来给你mod拉!

[general]
感觉音效有点缺o.o

[yume]
01:13:782 - vocal从这里开始所以考虑从这里开始摆
然后看了你第一个kiai 感觉boring
基本全是一个一拍滑条加一个note全程贪吃蛇 如果bpm不变换个曲也能玩挖
或者你是想控制难度o.o 是我懒比了
03:00:657 (1) - 可以换成一个转盘 为何
04:33:657 - 然后这里一根绿线是干啥的挖 删了

[otome]
01:07:969 (4,5) - 感觉改成直线或者让滑条弯一下会美观一点 猴
02:30:657 (1) - 个人不喜欢一个滑条折返两次 感觉可以拆开 还好了
03:31:969 - add a note，这里有个音
03:33:469 - ^ 感觉是故意的 但你这曲就两个难度所以感觉不要空太多比较好
03:36:469 - ^
03:40:219 - 这里vocal也有个音
03:42:469 - ^
03:48:469 - ^
04:25:969 - ^ 声音较小，故意放慢节奏的
04:26:907 - 这里后面有几声鼓点 不想跟了，我是懒比

感觉我们的想法差很远啊 你果然是善良人 这真是一份没用的mod 按你喜好看看拉 懂特佛搞特买库刀索

TatsumiAlicekawa wrote:

[Yume]
AR+1? 至少放过easy
[Otome]
00:28:782 - 两个短滑条不要，变成这样 感觉挺好啊
00:40:782 - ^
01:07:407 - 添一个note听起来不那么空荡一些 猴
01:16:219 - 这样节奏紧凑一点 那里没有音啊
02:03:469 - 添一个note ^
02:37:219 - 同01:16:219

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod
我真的不是有意拖这么久的……sorry

Otome
AR+1？cs+1？（如果能有cs4.5该多好）那样spread不太好
00:35:344 (4) - reverse selection，我知道你这里是想对称，不过我看了看你的排列习惯，我认为这样更为合理 啥是 reverse selection
02:07:032 (2,3,4,5) - 2,5和3,4分别reverse selection，并且把6改为上扬的滑条，作为转折的话，我觉得02:09:657 (1,2,3,4) - 足矣 上扬不错
03:29:157 (1,3) - 换一下位置 感觉没影响
好吧，感觉确实挑不出什么毛病了……

Yume
01:00:657 (1) - 头部whistle音效
01:03:657 (1) - 头部whistle音效All fixed

实在揪不出什么问题了…………

娱乐性质mod，无需给GD……
over

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From popner's modding team

[General]

1. None.

[Normal]

1. 00:33:657 (3) - NC
2. 00:48:657 (1) - whi on the head
3. 00:51:657 (1) - ^
4. 01:02:157 (2) - whi
5. 01:45:657 - 从这里开始24clap还是比较明显的为什么要换24whi？ clap略违和
6. 02:35:157 (1,2,3,4) - 尽量不要超过3个note 为了nm
7. breaktime太长 和hard一样
8. 03:45:657 (3) - NC

其他fix

[Hard]

1. 01:00:657 (1,2) - 不好看，你就不能把间距拉大点么？后面的也一样
   
   整体还不错，比较善良

最后祝您身体健康

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ i'm here from my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
it's better to keep the source names consistent with the ranked ones. you're missing ~Da Capo II~ in the source, so be sure to add that.
add "ending" in the tags for more specification.
that sliderball is pretty hard to see during gameplay. think you can make it more visible for players to follow during gameplay?

[Normal]
since this is the easiest diff, decrease the OD by 1 so that it'd be easier for players during gameplay. OK
00:29:907 (2) - stack this on 00:26:907 (3) - instead for a smoother transition. the downwards position makes the general flow look akward to follow during gameplay. Fixed
00:50:157 (3) - i think you can add a whistle at the end for emphasis with that dinging sound in this part of the song. OK
01:20:907 (2) - rotate this 90 degrees CW by doing Ctrl+>. it'll me a lot smoother to follow like i said before during gameplay. Nice idea
01:33:282 (4) - add a finish here. yes there's a finish on the next note, but because there are cymbals here, the finish would emphasize that sound in the BGM. Sounds good
01:36:282 (3,1) - if you want to make this more flowy, make it look like this. your corrent pattern feels rough to follow during gameplay. OK
02:27:282 - a circle with a finish would seem more appropriate here. this part is asking for a note because of the cymbals IMO. seems good
02:41:907 (2) - same idea as 01:20:157, but like this instead. ok
02:53:157 (3) - same idea as 01:33:282, this time with the clap. I didn't find sth. like finish here
02:57:657 (1) - you're missing a finish at the beginning. same reason as 01:33:292. ok
03:48:657 (1) - i highly suggest that you make a 2/1 repeat slider. right now you have a 4/1 slider. in other words 4 beats in one slider. a 2/1 slider ends at 03:50:157 - and adding a repeat would end at where the 4/1 slider is. doing this would make a smooth transition to the vocals in this part during gameplay. to make it more creative, try doing this. it'll be more fun to follow a different shaped slider instead of the same old sliders during gameplay. changed to another shape
04:15:657 (1) - same as 02:57:657.
that 30s break has to be reduced. it's too long to follow during gameplay. you should start the pattern at 03:15:657 - . you'd be halving it by 15 seconds since 15 seconds is long enough for a break. also the guitar riff plays a high note, so it makes it even better to follow during gameplay.

[Hard]
considering that this is the hardest diff, either increase the HP drain or OD to 7. you don't have to increase both at the same time. change[/color]
00:28:782 (3,5) - i think you can either stack (3), or space out (5) for a symmetric pattern in this part during gameplay. fixed
00:55:219 (2,3) - replace this for a circle and 2 1/4 sliders to follow the music more properly during gameplay.
01:00:657 (1,2) - it'd be better if you make (1)'s arc smoother and moving (2) to the left. the overlapped blanket doesn't look nice to follow during gameplay. it should look something like this. if you say you want to keep the blanket, you can space it out, but keep in mind that the risk is that it can be hard to read and misleading during gameplay.
01:16:782 (3,4) - here as well. the overlapped blanket doesn't look nice to follow during gameplay. do something like this instead.
01:33:282 (6) - same as normal about the finish.
02:07:407 (2,3,4) - considering that (2) is going left, (3,4) completely break the general flow of this pattern. make those 2 notes go left instead of right to keep the flow steady and smoother to follow during gameplay.
03:39:282 - i think you can add a note here for consistency with 03:37:782 (2) - since it follows the vocals in this part of the song.
04:27:657 (5) - you're forgetting a finish on this note for emphasis in the cymbals. add it for that purpose.
same as normal about the break. start it at 03:15:657 - . also your overlapped blankets don't look as nice during gameplay personally. you need to highly consider spacing them out, or making a different pattern. doing something like 04:24:469 (9,1) - is basically what i'm talking about. it'll be more neater and more smoother to follow during gameplay if you use the right amount of spacing. consider changing it lol

and that's all i got. the least i can do is star this since it's almost on its way for a bubble. you just need to fix those problems i mentioned in the diffs, and it'll improve a lot more. anyways, GL and don't give up on this map .