I don't mod osu!Standard but, this song is good
Sorry if the mod is too little :\
[General]
The BG Picture is too low in resolution, use photoshop to create a BG or ask someone to do it in high resolution.
-> Low resolution maps are seen as unprofessional to some players
The song ended too abruptly
Here's the link for the better fade out I created in Audacity, just replace it with the original
https://www.dropbox.com/s/k591ohni46h67gv/Waterflame%20-%20Glorious%20morning.wav[Insane]
This really looks like a primary colored rainbow
-> Change the combo colors so that it looks the colors of the sunset (ex. Red / Orange / Yellow )
Try not to put the circles outside the grid (Ex. 00:03:153 (1) and 00:06:311 (1) )-> Some skins may have problems with circles going out of the grid (ex. Circles appearing under the Hp Bar)
This difficulty seems "dry" to me
-> Too little notes with extremely high distance snapping
--> Add more notes!
The whole segment before 00:25:653 has too much mouse movements, try to lower the distance between the notes since it is the "quiet" part of the song.
00:24:863 (12) - You finished the segment too early, it's awkward. Make it so that the finish is at 00:25:653
01:03:547 to 01:09:863 I like the way you use your storyboard with the whistle, but it is just too many in my opinion, lower the amount of whistles
01:16:311 to 01:24:995 I have never seen streams with 3 combos, try using 1 stream for one combo?
01:25:126 - Add
01:25:258 - Add
[Hard]
00:24:863 (8) - You finished the segment too early, it's awkward. Make it so that the finish is at 00:25:653
00:39:468 (1) - Don't use a new combo with the same color, the combos at the segment also feels too short for [Hard]
Don't overuse shapes, the angle needed to move the mouse is going to be real sharp
-> This will ruin the flow of the difficulty
01:03:547 to 01:09:863 I like the way you use your storyboard with the whistle, but it is just too many in my opinion, lower the amount of whistles
*Assuming you are going to complete this difficulty, cause it's incomplete
[Easy]
Same thing as Hard
[laingv587's Morning]
00:16:837 (5) - Clap?
I think this difficulty is fine, try to refer to it to improve your mapping