mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless
00:07:783 (5) - maybe a NC(new combo) here fixed
00:14:381 (5) - ^ fixed
00:20:979 (5) - ^ fixed
00:25:103 (3,4,5) - might a bit difficult for a newbie changed the stack.
00:34:175 (4) - NC fixed
00:47:371 (3) - ^ fixed
00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really bad pattern for beginners...Not only cause the double 1/2 snap but also the stock fixed the stack and 1/2
01:41:804 (1,1) - maybe unrankable in Easy joined them as one spinner.
Actually I prefer this diff as normal....
00:53:969 (7) - NC
01:00:154 (1) - remove NC
01:00:566 (2) - NC NC mods above are all applied
01:28:608 (2,3) - try to suit DS in onder to suit this diff ? 还是说中文吧，这里没看懂你想说啥
01:37:474 (1) - maybe with your clap sound not finish Nope, here is more fit in finish.
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - lightly ugly arrange(meaningless, and I didn't caught the tricks which you are using ) later I will give the diff a whole adjust and here will be made prittier.
00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - an obvious strange arrange just like above ^
00:57:267 (5) - If you tried to make a difference between the shor stream and the slider, try to use a NC or the snap like
01:00:463 (4,5) - If not, fix the 01:00:463 (4,5) - 's snap Sure, I fixed the rhythm as previous one.
01:08:814 (9) - NC ok
01:08:814 (9) - may be cut a quarter like and 01:10:773 (2) - is really far away from them... sure
01:36:855 (7) - a strange slider cause not followed neither the rhythm nor the vocal ok most of you mentioned that and I will change the beats here in next adjusting.
01:38:092 (3) - move to x176 y192or make a bit longer snap among 01:37:886 (2,3,4) -
01:40:979 (5) - maybe you'd better rearrange them just like move it to x232 y156 ok
01:42:422 - should add a note if you follow the rhythm ok
01:51:288 (1) - it's better to use a green line the make a higher speed of slider at the last one of the map just like maybe a 1/16 reverse slider Nope..just a hard..
That's all 其实我会讲中文