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Atrue
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kanon_sayuri wrote:

[Easy]
转盘好多。。
00:25:103 (3,4,5) - 对一下flow，5可以考虑ctrl+< 特意为之，因为这里差不多有一个强音吧，其他难度在这个地方的flow也都是反的，这里稍微换个方向不会加难度。而且如果ctrl+>的话会出现两头遮挡，这在ez里面会比较难以读图。
00:04:484 (1,2) - 大长滑条有点丑。。 这。。我怕加难度。。 那我拆一下吧，反正难度后面没控制好。。
00:16:237 (1) - 一句歌词的开始放一个转盘感觉有点别扭 好的，我改成了和后边相似处一样的节奏型
00:27:577 (1) - NC 好的
01:11:288 (2,3) - 接续有点紧凑了，有可能是kiai想加快一点吧，但是感觉上easy还是尽量在大小白线放。后面同理。 不好改，既然已经做出来了节奏型也已经固定了，如果要改就是remap，关于这点我还得征求更多人的意见。不过既然没有爆星。。是吧？
01:45:103 (1,2) - 这后面突然note少了好多，建议中间白线再加个note 好的

[Normal]
00:04:278 (1) - 试着不要叠在下面，一开始这个节奏感觉叠着不舒服 如果没有改正意见的话我觉得还是stack比较好些，摊开反而难看了
00:06:133 (1) - 去掉NC ok
00:09:432 (1,2) - 不好读，换成两个滑条试试如何 换滑条的话如果不大改就得挤在一起那样很难看，所以这里先保留，我觉得也不是很好读，不过也不能算是太难读
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - 建议重新排列，略别扭。折返滑条最好是往返一下的，往返两下莫名难受，加上遮挡什么的很不舒服 想法改了一下
00:37:474 (1,3) - 完全重叠。。。记得这样的隔了一段时间的滑条完全重叠似乎不是unrankable，如果有明确的指出unrankable的话我会拆梗的
00:50:670 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:28:608 (2,3) - 和上面一样，不过这里还好。最好还是改一下 还好的话我就先不改了，因为如果要改的话后边全部都得动，然后这里又是kiai觉得激烈一些也好
01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - normal的这个节奏。。放着白线重音不放找红线低音，太难读了。试试改成这样看看http://puu.sh/5yN3m.jpg
知道这里会被说，我觉得一味走白线太过单调，这里有条件自行创造节奏，如果有其他人也认为这里非改不可的话我会改的
[Hard]
01:07:164 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 布局有点难看。。 god.. 我觉得还可以吧。。还真没预料到这里会被说难看额。。
01:28:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 跳的没什么规则，这种可以参照一下DNA的图 好，这里是我作了回死，我知道肯定有人说不行的，那我把它修正下
01:34:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这三个折返滑条没有节奏感啊 再等等，这里我也是清楚大概会被说的，不过还不是很想改掉

http://puu.sh/5yNuf.jpg 三个难度里这个用的太多了。 因为想到对称就是这个嘛，又不想弄那些非几何图形，况且视flow情况，distance都有不同的应用，看起来是一个梗其实已经是在多用了（我感觉是这样）
梗比较少，多摸摸图 嗯，已经在疯狂摸图了我觉得再怎么摸的话风格也差不多形成了。。梗的话每个人的定义不同，换句话说这图的每个地方我都精细的考虑过，排列上我是尽量走flow的感觉的
参照一下已经rank的图会对你作图有所帮助，节奏感很好，难度把握好点就好了。加油~ 感谢！关于难度的话确实我做着做着就hold不太住，不过也许在承受范围内？再看看~
Thx for mod！！ :) updated
Atrue
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Atrue
remapping for sv and distance in ez and nm…also adjusting hard
Vita-VVA
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Joined March 2013
Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
00:07:783 (5) - maybe a NC(new combo) here

00:14:381 (5) - ^

00:20:979 (5) - ^

00:25:103 (3,4,5) - might a bit difficult for a newbie

00:34:175 (4) - NC

00:47:371 (3) - ^

00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really bad pattern for beginners...Not only cause the double 1/2 snap but also the stock

01:41:804 (1,1) - maybe unrankable in Easy

Actually I prefer this diff as normal....

[Normal]
00:53:969 (7) - NC

01:00:154 (1) - remove NC

01:00:566 (2) - NC

01:28:608 (2,3) - try to suit DS in onder to suit this diff

01:37:474 (1) - maybe with your clap sound not finish

[Hard]
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - lightly ugly arrange(meaningless, and I didn't caught the tricks which you are using )

00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - an obvious strange arrange just like above

00:57:267 (5) - If you tried to make a difference between the shor stream and the slider, try to use a NC or the snap like
01:00:463 (4,5) - If not, fix the 01:00:463 (4,5) - 's snap

01:08:814 (9) - NC

01:08:814 (9) - may be cut a quarter like and 01:10:773 (2) - is really far away from them...

01:36:855 (7) - a strange slider cause not followed neither the rhythm nor the vocal

01:38:092 (3) - move to x176 y192or make a bit longer snap among 01:37:886 (2,3,4) -

01:40:979 (5) - maybe you'd better rearrange them just like move it to x232 y156

01:42:422 - should add a note if you follow the rhythm

01:51:288 (1) - it's better to use a green line the make a higher speed of slider at the last one of the map just like maybe a 1/16 reverse slider

[End]

That's all :)其实我会讲中文
Kamio Misuzu
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Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
[Easy]

00:25:103 (3,4,5) - 这里我说的是ctrl+<，不是ctrl+>。。。再看看。

[Normal]

01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 仔细听的话确实可以听出来，但是我不认为这是normal里该出现的节奏，准确的说insane出现的可能都不大。normal和easy是面向新手的图，对白线只是学会怎么打图对节奏，创新不是不可以，但是确实不好打，别扭。以上。

我知道都是用心做的，但是有些情况不是用心就能做好。多练练手吧。no kds。
Atrue
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Atrue

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
00:07:783 (5) - maybe a NC(new combo) here fixed

00:14:381 (5) - ^ fixed

00:20:979 (5) - ^ fixed

00:25:103 (3,4,5) - might a bit difficult for a newbie changed the stack.

00:34:175 (4) - NC fixed

00:47:371 (3) - ^ fixed

00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really bad pattern for beginners...Not only cause the double 1/2 snap but also the stock fixed the stack and 1/2

01:41:804 (1,1) - maybe unrankable in Easy joined them as one spinner.

Actually I prefer this diff as normal....

[Normal]
00:53:969 (7) - NC

01:00:154 (1) - remove NC

01:00:566 (2) - NC NC mods above are all applied

01:28:608 (2,3) - try to suit DS in onder to suit this diff ? 还是说中文吧，这里没看懂你想说啥

01:37:474 (1) - maybe with your clap sound not finish Nope, here is more fit in finish.

[Hard]
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - lightly ugly arrange(meaningless, and I didn't caught the tricks which you are using ) later I will give the diff a whole adjust and here will be made prittier.

00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - an obvious strange arrange just like above ^

00:57:267 (5) - If you tried to make a difference between the shor stream and the slider, try to use a NC or the snap like
01:00:463 (4,5) - If not, fix the 01:00:463 (4,5) - 's snap Sure, I fixed the rhythm as previous one.

01:08:814 (9) - NC ok

01:08:814 (9) - may be cut a quarter like and 01:10:773 (2) - is really far away from them... sure

01:36:855 (7) - a strange slider cause not followed neither the rhythm nor the vocal ok most of you mentioned that and I will change the beats here in next adjusting.

01:38:092 (3) - move to x176 y192or make a bit longer snap among 01:37:886 (2,3,4) -

01:40:979 (5) - maybe you'd better rearrange them just like move it to x232 y156 ok

01:42:422 - should add a note if you follow the rhythm ok

01:51:288 (1) - it's better to use a green line the make a higher speed of slider at the last one of the map just like maybe a 1/16 reverse slider Nope..just a hard..

[End]

That's all :)其实我会讲中文
手头还有1个上周余留的req，弄完了就先来看你的图，谢谢了
Awaken
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Joined February 2012
Awaken
给我做个beginner啊 歌好听 曲子也短
Atrue
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Awaken wrote:

给我做个beginner啊 歌好听 曲子也短
ok~ :)
kamisamaaa
530 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
mod补完了~基本都是一些小的建议额 可以改可以不改~你自己看吧~
[hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2) - 这个吧00:12:731 (1) - 这个包住感觉比较好看和整洁~ 改的时候记着吧00:11:082 (1) - 这个做成和2对称
    00:17:267 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这些可以好好摆一摆 有意思一点
    比如00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:267 (4) - 叠起来感觉比较好看 00:17:474 (5,6,7) - 这三联可以吧8开头包住啊 或者间距拉开一点点和8看起来像是对称啊 然后把00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:474 (5) - 这个叠起来啊 都会更有意思一些额 整体感也会强一些
    00:23:659 这里音很重的 空下来感觉不合适
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 整体向右移动一些 和1配合起来对称一点？
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 还有00:39:948 (1,2,3) - 是这首歌比较特别的节奏 你可以用大一些的间距 做点特别的梗突出一些 要不然这里和别处都是一样的1.0X完全就把这里掩盖下去了 和别地方感觉不出来不一样
    00:54:587这里虽然没有音 但是感觉加个note很舒服
    01:03:350 (1,2) - 这里为啥是个二连。。01:03:350这里的音感觉还没01:03:144这里的强呢 要是相加不如直接从01:03:247这里来个三联 也舒服一些
    01:07:989 (6,7,8) - 这里和上面一样 建议突出一下 别和旁边一样的间距 另外01:07:989 (6,8) - 这两个没叠好
    01:19:536 (2) - 包住3呗
    01:34:690 (1,2) - 和之前一样
    01:37:577 (1,2) - 这里遮住太多了 打折也觉得不舒服 你再想想别的节奏或者吧这两个距离拉开一些
    01:40:566 (4,6) - 这两个分别用一下ctrl+g？ 感觉有意思一些 而且不会太难 如果改了01:47:577 (5,6) - 这两个也一起ctrl+G
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) - 这些和掐面两个都叠到一起看着真心乱
    你在做blanket的时候取消GS 包的就会很好看额 我看你都没怎么包好
    00:27:577 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个做成两个一组的跳

[normal]

  • 00:08:195感觉像这里不应该空拍额 如果真要空 这里的二连和00:09:432 (1,2) - 紧接着这个都是叠在一起的 但是节奏不一样感觉不好
    00:58:092 (3) - 这个滑条感觉不对 白线哪里有vocal的可以你直接放过了
    高潮部分用滑条直接带过去的vocal有点多 感觉有点偷懒额 因为前面都一直追vocal 到了高潮反而空了好多很不合适 这首歌唱的也不快 音多的地方可以用往返滑条 最好别空唱歌
    01:17:474 这里添加一个note比较好
    感觉normal没啥问题0.0

感觉做的很不错啊0.0 起码很多地方摆放比较和曲能表现出曲子的感觉。。比我厉害多了额
给你射个星~ ;)
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Atrue
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kamisamaaa wrote:

mod补完了~基本都是一些小的建议额 可以改可以不改~你自己看吧~
[hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2) - 这个吧00:12:731 (1) - 这个包住感觉比较好看和整洁~ 改的时候记着吧00:11:082 (1) - 这个做成和2对称 fixed
    00:17:267 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这些可以好好摆一摆 有意思一点 大概是又有意思点了吧。。这个地方我把8和4的尾巴叠起来了，间距不想做较大改变
    比如00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:267 (4) - 叠起来感觉比较好看 00:17:474 (5,6,7) - 这三联可以吧8开头包住啊 或者间距拉开一点点和8看起来像是对称啊 然后把00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:474 (5) - 这个叠起来啊 都会更有意思一些额 整体感也会强一些
    00:23:659 这里音很重的 空下来感觉不合适 嗯，跟的是歌词所以大概大丈夫，vocal这里可是强调连续的呢
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 整体向右移动一些 和1配合起来对称一点？ 好的，顺便我也把5修了修
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 还有00:39:948 (1,2,3) - 是这首歌比较特别的节奏 你可以用大一些的间距 做点特别的梗突出一些 要不然这里和别处都是一样的1.0X完全就把这里掩盖下去了 和别地方感觉不出来不一样 求连贯，不想在这里本来比较弱的地方做大动作，求得是一种带过的感觉~
    00:54:587这里虽然没有音 但是感觉加个note很舒服 有一点空的感觉，我是严格按照vocal来下音的，vocal明显是在空这里嘛。。
    01:03:350 (1,2) - 这里为啥是个二连。。01:03:350这里的音感觉还没01:03:144这里的强呢 要是相加不如直接从01:03:247这里来个三联 也舒服一些 抱歉这里我是跟了那种鼓声，你可以静音音效然后25%听一下，虽然十分不明显，但是我还是觉得二连稍微感觉好些。。
    01:07:989 (6,7,8) - 这里和上面一样 建议突出一下 别和旁边一样的间距 另外01:07:989 (6,8) - 这两个没叠好 叠了，然后这中间我改了节奏，7改成了二连，也增大了78之间的距离
    01:19:536 (2) - 包住3呗 好
    01:34:690 (1,2) - 和之前一样 还是觉得二连好一点，因为如果三连的话感觉第一个音不明显
    01:37:577 (1,2) - 这里遮住太多了 打折也觉得不舒服 你再想想别的节奏或者吧这两个距离拉开一些 改了1.0间距
    01:40:566 (4,6) - 这两个分别用一下ctrl+g？ 感觉有意思一些 而且不会太难 如果改了01:47:577 (5,6) - 这两个也一起ctrl+G 改了别的样式，因为如果ctrl+G就会打乱ds，后边那里实在是想不出来怎么改又不变ds了，所以就没改
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) - 这些和掐面两个都叠到一起看着真心乱 再看看，这里不太想改，如果改了就得大动工，况且堆叠的好的话也不会太乱
    你在做blanket的时候取消GS 包的就会很好看额 我看你都没怎么包好 我在做的时候是取消gs的。。。
    00:27:577 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个做成两个一组的跳 还是不改了，因为如果变两个一组的跳的话我理解得变间距，然而这里本来已经比较乱，如果要变间距会显得更加乱，因此还是pass了

[normal]

  • 00:08:195感觉像这里不应该空拍额 如果真要空 这里的二连和00:09:432 (1,2) - 紧接着这个都是叠在一起的 但是节奏不一样感觉不好 直接把后边的那个红线note移到前边的白线上来了
    00:58:092 (3) - 这个滑条感觉不对 白线哪里有vocal的可以你直接放过了 之前是减难度所以改成这样，不过现在既然提到了那我就改回去
    高潮部分用滑条直接带过去的vocal有点多 感觉有点偷懒额 因为前面都一直追vocal 到了高潮反而空了好多很不合适 这首歌唱的也不快 音多的地方可以用往返滑条 最好别空唱歌 难度已经爆表求不要再加难度，用滑条就是为了减小难度的
    01:17:474 这里添加一个note比较好 真心不能加了，再加马上就4星半了。。
    感觉normal没啥问题0.0

感觉做的很不错啊0.0 起码很多地方摆放比较和曲能表现出曲子的感觉。。比我厉害多了额
Mod好评！其实感觉过奖了，这图还比较渣。。
给你射个星~ ;)
多谢~
dennischan
454 posts
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dennischan
Hello~
mod for mod~~
nice background by the way~~

00:04:278 (1) - Why is this note here? no music here~~
00:29:948 (7,1,2,3) - Replace with spinner? I think music suggests spinner here and you have no spinner in this diff anyway
(if you don't replace it with spinner at least stop the slider speed change)
00:31:700 (2) - NC?
00:33:762 (7) - delete this note? (and put 00:33:350 (6) - in its place)
01:07:164 (4) - NC?
01:08:814 (9) - NC?
01:13:350 (2) - don't stack this please. It makes people confuse it with triplets such as 01:11:907 (4,5,6) - and 1/4 notes like 01:11:907 (4,5,6) -
01:22:010 (3,4,5,6) - a little hard to read
01:30:051 (3,3,4,5) - hard to read
01:51:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - very hard to read >:(
01:50:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - not needed really. you can keep it if you want, but I think a spinner is enough for this part.
HP -1 (HP drain is much too high. People will die with HR on even with FC) This is a major suggestion. All others are relatively minor.
00:04:277 (1) - same, not needed. (no music here)
00:14:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good job :) (I like triangles~~)
00:30:876 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - WHY NOT FOLLOW VOCAL!! remap please.
I think you should do what you did on the Shore diff. This part is bad because there are awkward breaks
(e.g between these two combos 00:36:855 (1,2,3,1,2) - ) and also it does not have any relation with the music.
Also, this part cause people to easily die with such a low amount of notes and high HP drain.
01:41:804 (1) - This slider is not nice :( make a better wriggle slider or just make a regular one.
01:48:402 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this kind of flow is ok, but I don't like it,
01:50:051 (1) - same, make a better slider or make a regular one.
01:53:350 (7) - replace with a spinner. (please~~~) end the spinner here(01:54:999 - ) or there(01:58:298 - )
00:04:278 (1) - Why is this note here? no music here~~
00:13:556 (3) - move this to stack with head of 00:11:907 (2) -
00:24:690 (4,1) - please try not to stack this~ it makes me confused as its half a beat but stacked (maybe its just me confused~)
00:28:195 (6,7) - also confusing (for me)
01:03:041 (9,1,2) - This is very confusing~
Nice diff by the way~
Found nothing wrong in the other diffs~
Good Luck, and I think you'll get this ranked soon~
Atrue
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Atrue

dennischan wrote:

Hello~ Hello~~
mod for mod~~
nice background by the way~~ Thank you~


HP -1 (HP drain is much too high. People will die with HR on even with FC) This is a major suggestion. All others are relatively minor.
00:04:277 (1) - same, not needed. (no music here)
00:14:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good job :) (I like triangles~~)
00:30:876 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - WHY NOT FOLLOW VOCAL!! remap please.
I think you should do what you did on the Shore diff. This part is bad because there are awkward breaks
(e.g between these two combos 00:36:855 (1,2,3,1,2) - ) and also it does not have any relation with the music.
Also, this part cause people to easily die with such a low amount of notes and high HP drain.
01:41:804 (1) - This slider is not nice :( make a better wriggle slider or just make a regular one.
01:48:402 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this kind of flow is ok, but I don't like it,
01:50:051 (1) - same, make a better slider or make a regular one.
01:53:350 (7) - replace with a spinner. (please~~~) end the spinner here(01:54:999 - ) or there(01:58:298 - )
In fact I'm gonna remap this diff and just beginning to do that. Anyway thank you for modding and I will take the mod in to the new diff.
00:04:278 (1) - Why is this note here? no music here~~ Hmm.. Maybe you can ignore the hitsound and you will find a drum here.
00:13:556 (3) - move this to stack with head of 00:11:907 (2) - Yes~
00:24:690 (4,1) - please try not to stack this~ it makes me confused as its half a beat but stacked (maybe its just me confused~) fixed
00:28:195 (6,7) - also confusing (for me) Hmm.. I choose not to fix it now.. Maybe ok here.
01:03:041 (9,1,2) - This is very confusing~ Canceled the stack on 9,1
Nice diff by the way~ Thank you~
Found nothing wrong in the other diffs~
Good Luck, and I think you'll get this ranked soon~ Oh~Thank you!
Thanks for modding!
moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf
歌不错 ，给个星星给你 加油^^/
Atrue
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Atrue

moonlightleaf wrote:

歌不错 ，给个星星给你 加油^^/
谢啦～
Fycho
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Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
Disable letterbox and widescreen support for all diffs
[Hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2,1) –没对齐
    00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –这种flow不是很好，排列的时候尽量不要直线=。=01:50:051 (1,1,1,1) –也是，我比较不喜欢这些，哪怕错开也行。我的话我会让00:12:731 (1,2,3,4) –成一个正常的几何形，然后00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –移动方向一上一下，物件一左一右，看起来也美观flow也好
    00:20:979 (2,3,4,5) –这个形状不是很喜欢，正四边比这好看多了0.0
    00:22:628 (6,1) –这里都拘在右边感觉很挤，建议把00:23:041 (1) –挪开
    00:29:432 (10) –nc非常乱，这里都到10了。。。建议一根大白线NC一次之前好像说过
    00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) –和之前差不多，我建议00:34:999 (3,4) – 旋转一个角度，竖过来，不要2,3是直线flow
    00:52:319 (5,1,2) –挤在一块了=。=
    00:54:793 (5,7) –弧度一样=。=
    00:56:237 (8,1) –间距太小了吧
    00:56:855 (1,2,3,4) –怎么妞妞蛐蛐的
    01:08:814 (1,2,3,4) –hard难度里这种还是首尾相接比较好，你1的尾巴在左边2的头怎么到中间去了，这样是insane的难度了我觉得
    01:14:587 (7,3) –难看的overlap
    01:15:206 (2,3) -^
    01:17:474 (1,2) –看起来总那么不舒服，不是很对称
    01:17:474 (1,3) –乱，overlap
    01:18:298 (3,5) –滑条弧度不要变来变去，太乱
    01:30:670 (7,8,9,10,11) –NC巨长，中间断开
    01:37:577 (1) –有点坑，而且还是hard，坑读图，别和2stack
    01:40:154 (3,4,5,6) –分开啊，首尾叠着看起来有点缩=。=
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) –我不是很喜欢这种梗
    01:46:752 (3,4,5,6) -^
    01:49:226 (5) –加nc？
Atrue
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Fycho wrote:

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
Disable letterbox and widescreen support for all diffs
[Hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2,1) –没对齐
    00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –这种flow不是很好，排列的时候尽量不要直线=。=01:50:051 (1,1,1,1) –也是，我比较不喜欢这些，哪怕错开也行。我的话我会让00:12:731 (1,2,3,4) –成一个正常的几何形，然后00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –移动方向一上一下，物件一左一右，看起来也美观flow也好
    00:20:979 (2,3,4,5) –这个形状不是很喜欢，正四边比这好看多了0.0
    00:22:628 (6,1) –这里都拘在右边感觉很挤，建议把00:23:041 (1) –挪开
    00:29:432 (10) –nc非常乱，这里都到10了。。。建议一根大白线NC一次之前好像说过
    00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) –和之前差不多，我建议00:34:999 (3,4) – 旋转一个角度，竖过来，不要2,3是直线flow
    00:52:319 (5,1,2) –挤在一块了=。=
    00:54:793 (5,7) –弧度一样=。=
    00:56:237 (8,1) –间距太小了吧
    00:56:855 (1,2,3,4) –怎么妞妞蛐蛐的
    01:08:814 (1,2,3,4) –hard难度里这种还是首尾相接比较好，你1的尾巴在左边2的头怎么到中间去了，这样是insane的难度了我觉得
    01:14:587 (7,3) –难看的overlap
    01:15:206 (2,3) -^
    01:17:474 (1,2) –看起来总那么不舒服，不是很对称
    01:17:474 (1,3) –乱，overlap
    01:18:298 (3,5) –滑条弧度不要变来变去，太乱
    01:30:670 (7,8,9,10,11) –NC巨长，中间断开
    01:37:577 (1) –有点坑，而且还是hard，坑读图，别和2stack
    01:40:154 (3,4,5,6) –分开啊，首尾叠着看起来有点缩=。=
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) –我不是很喜欢这种梗
    01:46:752 (3,4,5,6) -^
    01:49:226 (5) –加nc？
Sorry but a lot of matters of patterns are mentioned and I think it's better to remap for a better arrangement.
Thanks for modding.. Remapping~ :)
Fycho
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2013-12-27 22:17 Atrue: 汗
2013-12-27 22:17 Atrue: 中间的1/3真的不好读么。。。
2013-12-27 22:18 Fycho: 00:16:649 (6,7,8) - 
2013-12-27 22:18 Atrue: 然后滑条变速也是失败的。。
2013-12-27 22:18 Fycho: NC有点奇快
2013-12-27 22:18 Fycho: 奇怪
2013-12-27 22:18 Fycho: NC有点奇怪
2013-12-27 22:18 Atrue: 对
2013-12-27 22:18 Atrue: 00:16:649 (1) - nc
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 
2013-12-27 22:19 Atrue: 恩恩
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 3/4这种还是别hard出现了
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: insane用用就好
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 不好读
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 难读图，
2013-12-27 22:19 Atrue: 汗。。那我这得找别的东西跟了
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 这个hard略难
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 换成折返滑条啊
2013-12-27 22:19 Atrue: 嗯
2013-12-27 22:19 Fycho: 3/4折返滑条
2013-12-27 22:19 Atrue: 有些跳
2013-12-27 22:20 Fycho: 00:41:597 (2,3) - 似乎碰到一起？
2013-12-27 22:20 Atrue: 其实我的normal用的折返
2013-12-27 22:20 Fycho: 00:49:845 (7,1) - 碰到了？
2013-12-27 22:20 Atrue: 没碰，不过是挺近了。。
2013-12-27 22:20 Fycho: 和normal一样又没事
2013-12-27 22:21 Atrue: 后边这个碰了
2013-12-27 22:21 Fycho: 其实normal你可以用3/2滑条忽略中间纳音
2013-12-27 22:21 Fycho: 那音
2013-12-27 22:21 Atrue: 嗯
2013-12-27 22:21 Fycho: normal忽略蓝线音
2013-12-27 22:21 Fycho: 间距都是1.2啊
2013-12-27 22:21 Fycho: 开DS做的？
2013-12-27 22:21 Atrue: 对
2013-12-27 22:22 Atrue: 不光是1.2
2013-12-27 22:22 Fycho: 00:56:443 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这读图的时候我都读成1/2间距了。。。
2013-12-27 22:22 Atrue: 还有各种跳也是ds
2013-12-27 22:22 Fycho: 00:56:649 - 这加个
2013-12-27 22:22 Fycho: 00:57:267 (1,2) - 1/1间隔的其实没必要这么死板也用1.2
2013-12-27 22:22 Fycho: hard对1/1只要别太大，很自由的
2013-12-27 22:22 Fycho: 01:02:216 (3,4,5,6) - 这是人读的
2013-12-27 22:23 Fycho: 01:02:216 (3,4,5,6,7) - 加点NC还比较好点
2013-12-27 22:23 Atrue: 啊啊这个读图真的很难么。。
2013-12-27 22:23 Fycho: 01:14:175 (1,3) - 碰到了
2013-12-27 22:23 Fycho: 真的很难的
2013-12-27 22:23 Atrue: 那就在6上加nc了
2013-12-27 22:23 Fycho: 自己做是感觉不出来的
2013-12-27 22:23 Atrue: 恩恩
2013-12-27 22:23 Fycho: 自己的图没有读图困扰 打HD简单
2013-12-27 22:24 Fycho: 01:16:237 (5,6) - 组合起来看不好看
2013-12-27 22:24 Fycho: 01:17:886 (4) - 碰到01:18:505 (5) - 的滑条尾了。。。
2013-12-27 22:24 Fycho: 01:21:185 (2,3) - hard这有点南部
2013-12-27 22:24 Fycho: 难
2013-12-27 22:24 Atrue: 好，我弄些线性flow
2013-12-27 22:25 Fycho: 01:24:278 (2,3,4,5) - 这个四边形好穷怕
2013-12-27 22:25 Fycho: 奇葩
2013-12-27 22:25 Atrue: 啊，那个四边形我是觉得有点随机跳的感觉
2013-12-27 22:25 Fycho: 别太直线和接近直线了
2013-12-27 22:26 Fycho: 你那个虽然等DS但是四边形有点破坏几何梗，看起来不好看
2013-12-27 22:26 Atrue: 嗯
2013-12-27 22:26 Fycho: 01:24:896 (5,6) - 这间距0.7，。，。。
2013-12-27 22:26 Fycho: hard里滑条和滑条的间距 
2013-12-27 22:26 Atrue: 诶，56间距是1.2啊。。
2013-12-27 22:26 Fycho: 考虑滑条跳比note跳容易的多
2013-12-27 22:27 Fycho: 但是别跳散架了否则就像insane
2013-12-27 22:27 Fycho: 滑条跳多用，note跳少用
2013-12-27 22:27 Atrue: 嗯
2013-12-27 22:27 Fycho: 101:32:319 (1,2,3) - 这间距有点insane的味道。。。
2013-12-27 22:27 Fycho: 01:40:154 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这什么形状0 0 
2013-12-27 22:28 Fycho: 01:41:804 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏有点无聊？
2013-12-27 22:28 Atrue: 其实也是只有1.4了。。那我弄得小一点
2013-12-27 22:28 Fycho: 01:45:103 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) 
2013-12-27 22:48 Atrue: 哦哦，是这个意思
2013-12-27 22:48 Atrue: 嗯
2013-12-27 22:48 Atrue: 这样的低bpm这种节奏会觉得无聊么？
2013-12-27 22:51 Atrue: 关于ds做图我还是觉得等间距会舒服些，如果insane再考虑拆开，现在也是在该跳的地方开着ds调大间距来的
2013-12-27 23:01 Fycho: ..
Jycool
346 posts
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Jycool 
21:00 Atrue: insane我决定re了
21:01 Atrue: 啊?
21:01 jyc-Binggan: 节奏可以
21:01 Atrue: 这节奏可以?
21:01 jyc-Binggan: 有的地方不行
21:01 jyc-Binggan: 但是比原来好多了啊
21:01 Atrue: 对
21:01 Atrue: 爷爷
21:02 jyc-Binggan: 摆的太开
21:03 Atrue: dt^
21:03 Atrue: 啊。。且不说太开
21:03 Atrue: 我觉得结构啊
21:03 Atrue: 没关啊
21:03 Atrue: 美观啊
21:04 Atrue: 都还得弄
21:04 jyc-Binggan: lkx的都比你的好dt
21:05 Atrue: dt。。，
21:05 Atrue: 这真是神奇
21:06 jyc-Binggan: 后面不行
21:06 jyc-Binggan: 前面可以
21:06 jyc-Binggan: 等我回来再说
21:06 Atrue: 好
21:06 jyc-Binggan: 你这个比较好改
21:07 jyc-Binggan: 半个小时就能弄完
21:07 Atrue: 嗯，等你的mod了~
21:07 jyc-Binggan: 我不po啊
21:07 jyc-Binggan: 就irc给你说说
21:07 Atrue: 啊，好
21:07 *jyc-Binggan is listening to ookawa shigenobu - suiro noaru machi no fuukei
21:08 jyc-Binggan: 这个图我传你没啊
21:08 Atrue: 没
21:08 jyc-Binggan: 好
21:08 jyc-Binggan: qq
21:08 jyc-Binggan: 传你
21:08 jyc-Binggan: 这是我第一张图
21:08 Atrue: 好
21:09 jyc-Binggan: 算是第一张做完的图
21:09 Atrue: 哇，我看看
21:10 jyc-Binggan: 也是挺好玩的
21:11 jyc-Binggan: 我洗澡去了
21:11 Atrue: 好
21:18 Atrue: 有意思的图
21:21 Atrue: 我下qq
21:21 Atrue: 了啊
21:21 Atrue: 太卡·
21:23 Atrue: 卡死了。。我重新登录一下
21:32 Atrue: 回来的时候告诉我一声哈~
21:47 jyc-Binggan: 回来了
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 人呢
21:48 Atrue: ok
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 看我玩一把我的图啊
21:48 jyc-Binggan: 我估计我pass不了
21:48 Atrue: 好
21:49 Atrue: 图挺难的
21:49 jyc-Binggan: 坠毁
21:49 Atrue: god
21:49 Atrue: 追回
21:49 Atrue: 坠毁
21:51 jyc-Binggan: 太极吧难
21:51 jyc-Binggan: 我们来mod
21:51 Atrue: 不过放auto的时候感觉挺有意思
21:51 Atrue: 来
21:51 jyc-Binggan: 做那图的时候我1万rank
21:52 Atrue: 那也是排着爽然后打起来怎么都打不了了
21:52 Atrue: 这图难度也是确实大
21:52 jyc-Binggan: 我先说一下你hard的整体啊
21:53 Atrue: 诶又掉了？
21:53 Atrue: 好
21:53 jyc-Binggan: 后面做的像insane
21:53 jyc-Binggan: 有点难了
21:53 Atrue: 嗯，是间距问题吧？
21:53 jyc-Binggan: 嗯
21:54 jyc-Binggan: 让我们慢慢看
21:54 Atrue: 昨天老fycho也是这么说的
21:54 Atrue: 好
21:54 jyc-Binggan: 我边说你边改
21:54 Atrue: 好
21:55 jyc-Binggan: 你这滑调摆的太丑可
21:55 jyc-Binggan: 了
21:55 Atrue: 哪里
21:55 jyc-Binggan: 00:08:608 (3) - 
21:56 Atrue: 啊。。确实不好看。。不过这里有个对称。。
21:56 jyc-Binggan: 这种的
21:56 jyc-Binggan: 我知道你有对称啊
21:56 Atrue: 突出3/4的感觉= =
21:56 jyc-Binggan: 还是丑
21:57 Atrue: 嗯
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 00:07:783 (1,2,3,4) - 
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 这几个是一组的
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 所以00:09:432 (5) - 
21:57 Atrue: 对的
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 这个放个跳
21:57 jyc-Binggan: 然后1234摆的在紧一些
21:58 Atrue: 诶，可是这个是00:07:783 (1) - 这个对称的吧。。
21:58 jyc-Binggan: 别为了对称
21:58 jyc-Binggan: 懂吗
21:58 jyc-Binggan: 这几个滑条建议都重摆
21:59 Atrue: 好
21:59 Atrue: 嗯
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 说一下理由啊
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 就是你这几个滑条走向太乱
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 感觉随机
22:00 Atrue: 嗯
22:00 jyc-Binggan: 虽然你做了对称
22:01 jyc-Binggan: 弄得简单整洁一点
22:01 Atrue: 2斜上摆如何？
22:01 jyc-Binggan: 改完没？
22:01 jyc-Binggan: 你把间距调成1.0
22:02 Atrue: 嗯
22:02 jyc-Binggan: 1向下
22:02 jyc-Binggan: 斜下
22:02 jyc-Binggan: 2斜上
22:02 Atrue: 嗯
22:04 jyc-Binggan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207363
22:04 Atrue: 嗯？
22:05 jyc-Binggan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207365
22:05 jyc-Binggan: 这两个是我摆的啊
22:05 jyc-Binggan: 你参考一下
22:06 Atrue: 好
22:06 jyc-Binggan: 然后我们继续啊
22:06 Atrue: 好
22:06 jyc-Binggan: 00:11:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
22:06 jyc-Binggan: 这8个感觉不是很好
22:07 Atrue: 也是，这里是缺梗了
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 我先说一下啊
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 这种白线节奏
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 随便摆
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 根本不用开ds
22:07 Atrue: 诶诶诶？
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 点不着的是傻逼
22:07 jyc-Binggan: 白线节奏还不会读，玩个鸡巴音游
22:08 Atrue: 也是
22:08 jyc-Binggan: 我先说一下我的建议啊
22:08 Atrue: 嗯
22:08 jyc-Binggan: 就是1234先间距小一点
22:08 jyc-Binggan: 然后5678再扩大
22:08 jyc-Binggan: 懂什么感觉吗
22:08 Atrue: 间距渐大然后发散是吧？
22:08 Atrue: 嗯，想过
22:09 Atrue: 我试试
22:10 jyc-Binggan: ok我们继续
22:11 Atrue: ok
22:11 jyc-Binggan: 00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - 
22:11 jyc-Binggan: 这种的太丑
22:12 jyc-Binggan: 而且影响流动性
22:12 Atrue: 嗯。。确实影响flow。。
22:13 jyc-Binggan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207381
22:13 jyc-Binggan: 摆成这种
22:13 jyc-Binggan: 注意ds
22:13 jyc-Binggan: 是1
22:13 jyc-Binggan: 00:15:618 (4) - 
22:14 Atrue: 好
22:14 jyc-Binggan: 这个和前三个不一样
22:14 Atrue: 这点很漂亮
22:14 jyc-Binggan: 4弄成相反的
22:14 Atrue: 是的
22:14 Atrue: 嗯
22:15 jyc-Binggan: ok继续
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 你顺便把00:16:030 (5) - 
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 也重新摆一下
22:16 Atrue: 诶
22:16 Atrue: 我是把45看成一个正题了
22:16 Atrue: 整体
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 也可以啊
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 但是5太丑啊
22:16 jyc-Binggan: 直着插入
22:16 Atrue: 噗
22:17 jyc-Binggan: 反正我是不喜欢
22:17 Atrue: 嗯，我想法改改
22:17 jyc-Binggan: 我也同时改啊
22:17 jyc-Binggan: 改完把文件传给你参考
22:17 Atrue: 嗯
22:17 Atrue: 好
22:17 jyc-Binggan: 00:16:649 (1) - 
22:18 jyc-Binggan: 这个和5的尾巴重合到一起
22:18 Atrue: 诶，这个要stack么？
22:18 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:18 jyc-Binggan: 因为和5的尾巴是同一个音
22:18 Atrue: 好
22:20 jyc-Binggan: 00:18:298 (2) - 
22:20 jyc-Binggan: 这个加nc
22:20 jyc-Binggan: 00:18:092 (1) - 
22:20 jyc-Binggan: 这个去掉nc
22:21 Atrue: 好
22:21 jyc-Binggan: 然后每一个1都可以跳一下
22:22 jyc-Binggan: 你不跳也可以
22:22 jyc-Binggan: 毕竟是hard
22:22 Atrue: 也就是nc处的重音可以跳一下是吧？
22:22 jyc-Binggan: 对啊
22:22 Atrue: 嗯
22:22 jyc-Binggan: nc不是随便下的
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 00:20:566 (6) - 
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 这个nc
22:23 Atrue: 嗯，我的nc是下在长白线或者长白线后边第一根白线上的
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 那是基本下法
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 还是自己判断啊
22:23 jyc-Binggan: 我是按歌词来的
22:23 Atrue: 嗯
22:24 jyc-Binggan: 毕竟是有人唱的
22:24 Atrue: 我也是觉得按歌词好些，但是又怕乱了
22:24 Atrue: 嗯
22:24 jyc-Binggan: 00:22:628 (8) - 
22:24 jyc-Binggan: 这个太丑了
22:25 Atrue: 啊。。又是这样的滑条
22:25 Atrue: 嗯
22:25 jyc-Binggan: 00:20:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
22:25 jyc-Binggan: 你这几个太挤了
22:25 jyc-Binggan: 所以8不得已就得这么拉
22:26 jyc-Binggan: 00:21:804 (5) - 
22:26 jyc-Binggan: 这里放个跳啊
22:27 Atrue: 啊。。我是这一段整体拉大了间距
22:28 jyc-Binggan: 00:23:247 (9) - 
22:28 jyc-Binggan: 这个nc
22:29 jyc-Binggan: 继续？
22:29 jyc-Binggan: 你改了说一声啊
22:29 Atrue: 恩恩
22:29 Atrue: nc好改
22:29 Atrue: 这样的直接往后说就行
22:30 jyc-Binggan: 00:24:896 (2) - 
22:30 jyc-Binggan: 这个nc
22:30 jyc-Binggan: 00:24:896 (5,6) - 
22:30 jyc-Binggan: 这连个
22:31 jyc-Binggan: 不对
22:31 jyc-Binggan: 复制错
22:31 Atrue: nc
22:31 Atrue: 嗯，改了
22:31 jyc-Binggan: 00:27:577 (1,2,3,4) - 
22:31 jyc-Binggan: 这四个
22:31 jyc-Binggan: 摆的有点随便
22:32 Atrue: 嗯，是的。。
22:32 Atrue: 不过也是ds过来的。。
22:32 jyc-Binggan: 00:27:164 (1) - 
22:32 Atrue: 我是想走弧线形
22:32 jyc-Binggan: 这个nc
22:33 Atrue: 嗯，改了
22:33 jyc-Binggan: 00:27:577 (2,3,4,5) - 
22:33 jyc-Binggan: 这四个你间距有点大
22:33 jyc-Binggan: 1.2或1.3差不多
22:33 Atrue: 其实昨天做完了是1.6的+ +||
22:34 Atrue: 好，我继续缩小
22:34 jyc-Binggan: 毕竟是hard
22:34 jyc-Binggan: 懂吗
22:34 Atrue: 嗯
22:34 Atrue: ok
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 00:33:350 (3) - 
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 这个变速可以
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 但是hard就别用了
22:35 jyc-Binggan: insane里再用
22:35 Atrue: 好
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 而且你这变得太慢了
22:35 jyc-Binggan: 0.75差不多
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 00:39:948 (4,1) - 
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 这两个怎么回事
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 00:40:773 (1) - 
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 这个尾巴和前一个4挡住了
22:36 jyc-Binggan: 建议重摆
22:37 Atrue: 之前本来不是这个节奏的，但是后来改成这样就临时这样摆了。。
22:37 Atrue: 嗯
22:37 jyc-Binggan: 你音效是还都没弄是吗
22:38 Atrue: 对
22:38 jyc-Binggan: 00:44:072 (1,2,3,4) - 
22:38 jyc-Binggan: 这四个你是跟的擦音吧
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 但是后面你又全根的vocal
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 这就乱了
22:39 Atrue: 对的
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 或者你都跟vocal
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 或者都跟擦音
22:39 Atrue: 那就还是vocal
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 或者你像lkx
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 那种跟vocal再来点擦音
22:39 jyc-Binggan: 别只跟一点
22:40 Atrue: 这里我再想想
22:41 Atrue: 好，大概有个概念往下走~
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 00:47:371 (1,2,3,4) - 
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 这四个再干嘛
22:41 Atrue: 算是个梗？
22:41 jyc-Binggan: 垃圾梗
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 全图只出现这一个地方的梗
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 就是垃圾
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 懂吗
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 要不你就从头到尾都和这梗差不多
22:42 jyc-Binggan: 要不就别放莫名的梗
22:44 jyc-Binggan: 我草我掉了吗
22:44 Atrue: 没啊
22:44 jyc-Binggan: 熄灯了
22:44 jyc-Binggan: 你改完没
22:45 Atrue: 中间一分钟左右没有说话吧。。
22:45 Atrue: 0.0
22:45 Atrue: 往下走
22:45 jyc-Binggan: 好
22:45 jyc-Binggan: 00:57:267 (1,2,4) - 
22:46 jyc-Binggan: 摆的太开
22:46 Atrue: 好的
22:46 jyc-Binggan: 01:00:257 (7) - 
22:46 jyc-Binggan: 这个删掉
22:46 Atrue: 其实也只有1.2间距而已= =
22:46 jyc-Binggan: 间距无所谓
22:47 jyc-Binggan: 说你的走向摆的开
22:47 Atrue: 嗯
22:47 jyc-Binggan: 01:03:041 (1) - 
22:47 jyc-Binggan: 去nc
22:48 jyc-Binggan: 01:03:453 (2) - 
22:48 jyc-Binggan: 这个nc
22:48 jyc-Binggan: 01:03:865 (1) - 这个nc去掉
22:48 Atrue: 啊。。这里是为了区分节奏这样加的。。
22:49 jyc-Binggan: 01:05:515 (1) - 
22:49 jyc-Binggan: 这个也去掉
22:50 jyc-Binggan: 01:05:103 (4) - 
22:50 jyc-Binggan: 这个加nc
22:50 Atrue: 好
22:51 jyc-Binggan: 01:07:164 (1,2) - 
22:51 jyc-Binggan: 这两个太丑
22:51 Atrue: 汗
22:52 Atrue: 那我来线形的吧
22:52 jyc-Binggan: 而且我不建议用折线滑条啊
22:53 Atrue: 嗯。。伤flow是吧？
22:53 jyc-Binggan: 想你这种最好别用
22:53 jyc-Binggan: 感觉你用不好
22:53 jyc-Binggan: 先用直线和弧线的
22:53 Atrue: 嗯
22:54 jyc-Binggan: 01:09:432 (4,5) - 
22:55 jyc-Binggan: 这两个节奏别扭
22:57 Atrue: ok
22:57 jyc-Binggan: 我告诉你怎么改啊
22:57 jyc-Binggan: 01:09:432 - 
22:57 Atrue: 我这里是改成了直线滑条
22:57 jyc-Binggan: 这里下note
22:57 Atrue: 然后点 滑条 点的节奏。。
22:58 Atrue: 嗯
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 01:09:639 - 
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 这里下滑条
22:58 Atrue: 对对
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 滑倒01:10:051 - 
22:58 Atrue: 对的
22:58 Atrue: 改的一样
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 01:10:463 - 
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 01:10:773 - 
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 01:11:082 - 
22:58 jyc-Binggan: 这三个地方下note
22:59 Atrue: 诶诶诶？
22:59 jyc-Binggan: 因为是hard
22:59 jyc-Binggan: 下在重音就ok
22:59 jyc-Binggan: 你之前的太乱
22:59 Atrue: 间距也不跳了吧？
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 01:10:463 (1,2,3) - 
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 摆跳啊
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 大跳
23:00 jyc-Binggan: 都是重音当然跳
23:00 Atrue: 我觉得大跳的话比现在还难额。。
23:01 jyc-Binggan: 间距1.7左右
23:01 jyc-Binggan: 相信我
23:01 Atrue: ok
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 01:11:288 - 
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 这里下一个四分之一的折返滑条
23:02 jyc-Binggan: 并且加nc
23:03 Atrue: 好
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 01:12:525 (1) - 
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 这个删了
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 01:12:731 - 
23:03 jyc-Binggan: 这里下note
23:04 jyc-Binggan: 并且nc
23:05 Atrue: 01:12:525 - 这里会有一个鼓声没有跟上。。
23:05 Atrue: 虽然是vocal但是空着这里会有一点空
23:05 jyc-Binggan: ok
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 那就这样
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 01:11:907 (5) - 
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 这个滑到
23:05 jyc-Binggan: 01:12:216 - 
23:06 jyc-Binggan: 01:12:319 - 
23:06 jyc-Binggan: 这里再加四分之一滑条
23:07 Atrue: 四分之一还是二分之一？
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 四分之一
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 01:12:731 - 
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 这里加note
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 啊
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 我先去打水
23:07 jyc-Binggan: 马上
23:08 Atrue: 嗯
23:08 Atrue: 那一声白线鼓还是没有跟上。。
23:10 jyc-Binggan: 哪个
23:11 Atrue: 01:12:525 - 
23:11 jyc-Binggan: 跟上了啊
23:11 Atrue: 诶？
23:11 jyc-Binggan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207548
23:11 jyc-Binggan: 看截图
23:12 Atrue: 汗，这不是1/2么。。
23:12 jyc-Binggan: 这是1/4
23:12 jyc-Binggan: 吧
23:13 Atrue: 诶？
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 不管了
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 继续
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 01:14:175 (1) - 
23:13 Atrue: 继续
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 去掉nc
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 01:14:999 (7) - 
23:13 jyc-Binggan: 加nc
23:13 Atrue: 嗯
23:14 jyc-Binggan: 01:15:412 (2,3,4,5) - 
23:14 jyc-Binggan: 间距太大
23:14 Atrue: 1.2了。。
23:15 jyc-Binggan: 相信我
23:15 jyc-Binggan: 太大
23:15 Atrue: 啊，我是现在从1.4改到1.2了
23:15 jyc-Binggan: 01:17:061 (1) - 去掉nc
23:15 jyc-Binggan: 好
23:15 Atrue: 其实可能还是有点大
23:16 jyc-Binggan: 01:17:061 (1) - 
23:16 jyc-Binggan: 这个改成长话条
23:16 jyc-Binggan: 滑到01:17:474 - 
23:16 jyc-Binggan: 01:17:680 - 这个加nc
23:17 Atrue: 好
23:19 jyc-Binggan: 01:17:680 - 
23:19 jyc-Binggan: 这里开始的节奏
23:19 jyc-Binggan: 我给你截图
23:19 Atrue: 好
23:20 jyc-Binggan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207567
23:20 jyc-Binggan: 01:19:329 - 
23:20 jyc-Binggan: 这里的note加nc
23:21 jyc-Binggan: 都改完告诉我一声
23:21 Atrue: 好
23:22 jyc-Binggan: 改完了？
23:22 Atrue: 没呢，马上
23:23 Atrue: 好了
23:23 jyc-Binggan: 01:20:773 (1) - 
23:23 jyc-Binggan: 这个滑条改成2个note
23:24 jyc-Binggan: 01:21:597 (7) - 这个nc
23:24 jyc-Binggan: 01:22:010 (1) - 这个去掉nc
23:25 Atrue: 好
23:26 jyc-Binggan: 01:22:835 (5) - 这个改成一半的折返滑条
23:27 jyc-Binggan: 01:23:453 - 
23:27 Atrue: 好
23:27 jyc-Binggan: 这里开始的节奏我给你截图
23:27 Atrue: 好
23:28 jyc-Binggan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1207584
23:28 jyc-Binggan: 01:24:278 - 这个note加nc
23:29 jyc-Binggan: 从01:24:484 - 这里开始的节奏和之前是重复的
23:29 jyc-Binggan: 你直接从01:10:463 - 这里复制过去
23:29 Atrue: 嗯
23:29 jyc-Binggan: 然后重新摆
23:30 Atrue: 好的
23:31 jyc-Binggan: 01:24:484 - 
23:31 jyc-Binggan: 这里的滑条不需要x1.4
23:31 jyc-Binggan: 和之前一样是1.3
23:32 Atrue: 稍一等，我先弄好复制
23:32 jyc-Binggan: 好
23:32 jyc-Binggan: 弄好了之后告诉我
23:33 Atrue: 好了
23:34 jyc-Binggan: ok
23:34 jyc-Binggan: 注意从01:37:061 - 这里就不一样了
23:34 Atrue: 对的
23:34 Atrue: 注意到了
23:35 jyc-Binggan: 01:37:061 - 这里变成note
23:35 jyc-Binggan: 在这里01:37:267 - 
23:35 jyc-Binggan: 加个转盘
23:35 jyc-Binggan: 转到01:38:298 - 
23:36 Atrue: 那后边那个白线不会太近了么？
23:36 jyc-Binggan: 改完了？
23:36 jyc-Binggan: 不会
23:36 Atrue: 对的
23:36 jyc-Binggan: 01:38:298 - 这个尾巴消音
23:37 Atrue: 排版还没有重新排
23:37 Atrue: 不过节奏是复制过来了
23:37 jyc-Binggan: 没事我排了
23:37 Atrue: 好的
23:37 Atrue: 嗯
23:37 jyc-Binggan: 我直接复制
23:37 jyc-Binggan: 01:38:505 - 
23:37 jyc-Binggan: 这里的滑条太快了
23:37 jyc-Binggan: 改成1.0
23:37 Atrue: 那我改sv
23:38 jyc-Binggan: 01:41:804 (5,6,7,8) - 
23:38 Atrue: ok
23:38 jyc-Binggan: 这四个在干嘛
23:38 jyc-Binggan: 改成单点ok？
23:38 jyc-Binggan: 不要随便用短话条
23:38 Atrue: 好吧。。
23:39 jyc-Binggan: 01:43:453 (1,2,3) - 
23:39 jyc-Binggan: 这几个摆的太开了
23:39 Atrue: 嗯
23:40 jyc-Binggan: 我说走向
23:40 Atrue: 好
23:41 jyc-Binggan: 01:48:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
23:42 jyc-Binggan: 这八个摆的太傻逼
23:42 Atrue: 嗯
23:43 Atrue: 可是也不能跳啊。。。
23:45 jyc-Binggan: 我后面的改完了
23:45 jyc-Binggan: 直接把文件传给你啊
23:45 Atrue: 0.0
23:45 Atrue: 好
23:45 jyc-Binggan: 我觉得我得骗一个kds
23:45 Atrue: puush吧。。qq已经下了
23:45 jyc-Binggan: 这他吗已经不是mod了
23:45 Atrue: 嗯
23:45 jyc-Binggan: 已经是remap
23:45 Atrue: 对，是的
23:46 jyc-Binggan: 怎么存对话
23:46 Atrue: 斜杠 savelog
23:46 Atrue: save了？
23:47 Atrue: 会弹出一个框说你成功保存了
:o
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歌不错 ，给个留言给你 加油^^/
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歌不错 ，给个留言给你 加油^^/
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264,196,99226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,99329,2,0,P|284:288|276:328,1,90,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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148,280,99948,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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256,320,103247,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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424,332,105103,5,4,1:2:0:0:
216,212,105309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,148,108711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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436,160,109226,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,180,109432,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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168,48,109845,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,280,110051,6,0,L|124:232,1,45,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,152,111185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,108,111288,2,0,P|388:72|432:48,1,90,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,172,111597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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