Avril Lavigne - My Happy Ending

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Gero
Try with this:

BPM: 85.055
Offset: 270

And add one more on this time:

00:52:471
KittyAdventure
Can i make diff?

Please Under the Skin delete in the source and add in tag
Topic Starter
Zexion

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Can i make diff?

Please Under the Skin delete in the source and add in tag
Sorry, I'll have to say no since a GD has already been claimed and I plan to make only three (ENH).

Thanks about that, removed UMS from Source and added to tags.
AnreFM
Normal GD taken? :(:(:(

sobs
The Beat
IRC Mod

2013-11-07 23:38 Zexion: ya el slider de
2013-11-07 23:38 Zexion: que era?
2013-11-07 23:39 The Beat: 53:885
2013-11-07 23:40 Zexion: si la verdad mata el ritmo jaja
2013-11-07 23:40 The Beat: es que el problema que le encuentro a ese slider es el sonido que genera el slider antes del hit
2013-11-07 23:40 Zexion: algo que recomiendes
2013-11-07 23:40 The Beat: total no guardo los cambios asi que
2013-11-07 23:40 Zexion: ev-er-ry-thing
2013-11-07 23:40 Zexion: trate de seguir las silabas y asdf
2013-11-07 23:40 The Beat: dejame probar algo
2013-11-07 23:40 Zexion: dale
2013-11-07 23:41 Zexion: tomale un puush y me lo mandas :B
2013-11-07 23:43 The Beat: http://puu.sh/5bRV6.jpg
2013-11-07 23:43 The Beat: creo que ahi resulta mejor
2013-11-07 23:43 Zexion: es mas intuitivo
2013-11-07 23:44 Zexion: igual la diferencia de tiempo a la siguiente nota confundía... si, cambiado
2013-11-07 23:44 Zexion: creo que usare unos sliders con reversa para que sea mas facil pero el ritmo está bien
2013-11-07 23:44 The Beat: al final ve tu que pones pero si es por ritmo, creo que ahi esta bien
2013-11-07 23:45 The Beat: es que muchas veces no me gustan los sliders que pones porque generan ruido mientras esten clikeados
2013-11-07 23:45 The Beat: y cuando haces uno corto, suenta tan pronto el hit que creo que a veces mata el ritmo
2013-11-07 23:45 Zexion: es que ese sonaba mal
2013-11-07 23:45 Zexion: lo deje asi
2013-11-07 23:46 The Beat: dejame seguir viendo
2013-11-07 23:46 Zexion: http://puu.sh/5bS3A.jpg
2013-11-07 23:46 Zexion: okap
2013-11-07 23:49 The Beat: 59:885
2013-11-07 23:50 The Beat: ese 4
2013-11-07 23:51 The Beat: no suena bien
2013-11-07 23:51 Zexion: osea fuera?
2013-11-07 23:51 Zexion: o otra sugerencia?
2013-11-07 23:51 Zexion: no suena mal sin el 4
2013-11-07 23:51 The Beat: yo lo saque pero
2013-11-07 23:52 The Beat: por eso
2013-11-07 23:52 The Beat: pero no encuentro que suene bien con el
2013-11-07 23:52 Zexion: hmm, okap, me parece. Lo borré
2013-11-07 23:52 The Beat: dejalo mientras
2013-11-07 23:52 Zexion: si es que enrealidad
2013-11-07 23:52 Zexion: no hay voz ahi, no seguia nada esa nota
2013-11-07 23:52 The Beat: si pero es encuentro que no deberia estar
2013-11-07 23:53 The Beat: pero al mismo tiempo hay que agregar algo porque sino dejas como un vacio
2013-11-07 23:53 The Beat: me cachai?
2013-11-07 23:53 Zexion: alargue el slider 3
2013-11-07 23:53 Zexion: para que ocupara todo el espacio
2013-11-07 23:54 Zexion: http://puu.sh/5bSoV.jpg
2013-11-07 23:57 The Beat: 1:39:062
2013-11-07 23:57 The Beat: saca ese 2
2013-11-07 23:57 Zexion: y alargo 1?
2013-11-07 23:59 The Beat: mmmmm tengo dudas
2013-11-07 23:59 The Beat: te suena bien?
2013-11-07 23:59 Zexion: no mucho..
2013-11-07 23:59 The Beat: dejalo por mientras
2013-11-07 23:59 The Beat: porque alargarlo no bien
2013-11-07 23:59 The Beat: osea pon el 2 que estaba antes
2013-11-07 23:59 Zexion: sip
2013-11-08 00:00 The Beat: 01:40:826 ese encuentro que desentona de verdad
2013-11-08 00:00 o mira hice un link *O
2013-11-08 00:00 The Beat: *O*
2013-11-08 00:01 Zexion: jajaja
2013-11-08 00:01 Zexion: pero me dice formato invalido
2013-11-08 00:01 Zexion: no estoy seguro como es en el IRC
2013-11-08 00:01 The Beat: sip
2013-11-08 00:01 The Beat: que es irc?
2013-11-08 00:01 Zexion: Internet Relay Chat
2013-11-08 00:01 Zexion: es basicamente el formato de chat que estamos usando
2013-11-08 00:01 The Beat: ahhh
2013-11-08 00:02 The Beat: bueno ese 2 que decia no creo que suene bien
2013-11-08 00:02 Zexion: y es verdad
2013-11-08 00:02 Zexion: si
2013-11-08 00:02 Zexion: ahi alargue el slider
2013-11-08 00:02 Zexion: y suena bien
2013-11-08 00:05 The Beat: 02:10:768 a 02:11:474
2013-11-08 00:05 The Beat: mmm no suena tan bien en comparacion a las otras partes iguales a esas
2013-11-08 00:06 Zexion: si
2013-11-08 00:06 Zexion: está desafinado
2013-11-08 00:06 Zexion: el timing de la canción no es definitivo
2013-11-08 00:07 Zexion: asi que eso deberia arreglarse despues
2013-11-08 00:07 The Beat: va a sonar raro pero es como si la cancion te lo desfasara
2013-11-08 00:07 Zexion: es que eso es
2013-11-08 00:07 The Beat: como que empieza bien y luego se desfasa por la cancion
2013-11-08 00:07 Zexion: el punto de referencia (offset) está mal en mi mapa
2013-11-08 00:07 Zexion: si es que la canción es mas complicada en timing de lo que pensé
2013-11-08 00:07 The Beat: yo creo que deberias mapear canciones de the mars volta -w-
2013-11-08 00:08 The Beat: son faciles de ritmo (?)
2013-11-08 00:08 The Beat: si (?)
2013-11-08 00:08 Zexion: ._.
2013-11-08 00:08 The Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ybLSwRp5Q0g bajale el volumen al pc -w-
2013-11-08 00:09 The Beat: bueee y eso creo que es por ahora
2013-11-08 00:09 The Beat: a lo mejor encuentro algo luego pero creo que eso es no mas
UndeadBananaz
Hey. Saw this in timing check queue.

You need 2 timing sections:

85 BPM 4/4 Offset 5900
85.060 BPM 4/4 Offset 15782

I'm pretty sure that's it. The BPM starts when all instruments start playing together, so don't map the first 5 seconds. (start mapping when the first timing section starts)
I think the song is cool, good luck with the map! Might come back to check it later.
Lally
hi o3o #queue

[Normal]
  1. HP -1
  2. first thing that i notice in this map is that the first object after the spinner is to close to it like: 00:03:076 (1,1) - 00:15:605 (1,1) - 00:49:816 (1,1) - 01:12:741 (1,1) - ecc..
  3. second thing is that the hitsound could be really better in parts like 00:05:899 (1) - missing finishes 00:46:818 (2) - missing whistle you should notice more the strong sounds and add the appropriate hitsound
  4. 00:14:723 (1,2,3) - this pattern is so borring why don't you try to unstack this circles to continue the flow to the spinner and not block it
  5. 00:15:605 (1) - this spinner basicly should start in the strong sound of battery that you hear also 00:15:782 - and not where is atm
  6. 00:20:014 (3) - is better to do a singular slider as a reverse one it would fitt better
  7. 00:21:072 (5) - this slider basicly should end at 00:21:777 -
  8. 00:40:823 (1) - ;_; nuuh this basicly should start 00:41:175 - here in the down beat
  9. 00:41:175 - from here you should start to change your hitsound pattern with a stronger sound as a whistle like a normal sampleset and i'm really sorry you should change the rhythm aswell
  10. 00:55:283 (5) - new combo
  11. 01:08:333 - you can clearly hear you're missing something here like this kind of rhythm
  12. 01:15:034 (1,2) - missing totally the hitsounds
  13. 01:25:615 (1) - i can't hear any sound that introduce this circle so remove it
  14. 01:26:320 - basicly from here you should start a hitsound pattern that introduce the drum in the background so you should follow it for exsample with a normal sampleset
  15. 02:04:763 (8) - i find unapropriate this slider with all the diff itself
  16. 02:14:286 (5,6) - this kind of overlaps are really ugly
  17. 02:55:904 (1,2,3) - same what i said before this kind of stacks
  18. 02:22:751 - this kiai is not necessary instead of adding it here add it 03:07:895 - here
  19. 03:06:837 (5) - same
  20. 03:42:459 (1,2,3) - same


[Hard]
  1. i think the slider velocity is a bit low and the pattern feels really slow like a another normal,personally i would tell you to try to change it and to try to do some separate spacing as the one you're using atm
  2. following the new rules go arround and check your spinners like i said in normal diff
  3. 00:26:715 (6) - ctrl+g
  4. 00:28:478 (1,2,3,4) - borring pattern as normal
  5. 00:41:881 (2,3,4) - same
  6. 01:36:195 (1,2,3) - again
  7. 01:42:367 (2) - better flow:
  8. 01:43:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this combo is to long
  9. same what i said about the kiai in normal
  10. in the end on the last spinner remove the finish


gl ;_;/
Topic Starter
Zexion

Lally wrote:

hi o3o #queue

[Normal]
  1. HP -1 Okay
  2. first thing that i notice in this map is that the first object after the spinner is to close to it like: 00:03:076 (1,1) - 00:15:605 (1,1) - 00:49:816 (1,1) - 01:12:741 (1,1) - ecc.. You're right, I think I forgot to see those... Fixed
  3. second thing is that the hitsound could be really better in parts like 00:05:899 (1) - missing finishes 00:46:818 (2) - missing whistle you should notice more the strong sounds and add the appropriate hitsound I'll re-sound the map after a while
  4. 00:14:723 (1,2,3) - this pattern is so borring why don't you try to unstack this circles to continue the flow to the spinner and not block it Un-stacked.
  5. 00:15:605 (1) - this spinner basicly should start in the strong sound of battery that you hear also 00:15:782 - and not where is atm Fixed!
  6. 00:20:014 (3) - is better to do a singular slider as a reverse one it would fitt better Indeed! What was I thinking?!
  7. 00:21:072 (5) - this slider basicly should end at 00:21:777 - Fixed!
  8. 00:40:823 (1) - ;_; nuuh this basicly should start 00:41:175 - here in the down beat Fixed!
  9. 00:41:175 - from here you should start to change your hitsound pattern with a stronger sound as a whistle like a normal sampleset and i'm really sorry you should change the rhythm aswell Don't be sorry for stuff that's right lol, I'll look for a different wistrle.
  10. 00:55:283 (5) - new combo Fixed!
  11. 01:08:333 - you can clearly hear you're missing something here like this kind of rhythm Fixed!
  12. 01:15:034 (1,2) - missing totally the hitsounds I swear I hitsounded these ones. Arrgh. Fixed!
  13. 01:25:615 (1) - i can't hear any sound that introduce this circle so remove it I was thinking about adding a spinner but yeah. Gone
  14. 01:26:320 - basicly from here you should start a hitsound pattern that introduce the drum in the background so you should follow it for exsample with a normal sampleset I'll keep it in mind when I resound tha map
  15. 02:04:763 (8) - i find unapropriate this slider with all the diff itself Yep
  16. 02:14:286 (5,6) - this kind of overlaps are really ugly I'll ask for more opinions, I wanted to do something diferent
  17. 02:55:904 (1,2,3) - same what i said before this kind of stacks I don't see the problem with stacking every once a while...
  18. 02:22:751 - this kiai is not necessary instead of adding it here add it 03:07:895 - here But that's the climax of the song!... I'll ask for more opinions about that one...
  19. 03:06:837 (5) - same Gone!
  20. 03:42:459 (1,2,3) - same
I'll fix this one later

[Hard]
  1. i think the slider velocity is a bit low and the pattern feels really slow like a another normal,personally i would tell you to try to change it and to try to do some separate spacing as the one you're using atm Increased CS for now, I'll see another SV later since I would have to move everything atm
  2. following the new rules go arround and check your spinners like i said in normal diff Fixed!
  3. 00:26:715 (6) - ctrl+g Fixed!
  4. 00:28:478 (1,2,3,4) - borring pattern as normal Keeping it for now
  5. 00:41:881 (2,3,4) - same Keeping it for now
  6. 01:36:195 (1,2,3) - again Yeah this one isn't really good. Fixed.
  7. 01:42:367 (2) - better flow: Really nice! Fixed!
  8. 01:43:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this combo is to long
  9. same what i said about the kiai in normal Same answer
  10. in the end on the last spinner remove the finish [color=#00BF00]Fixed![/color[/list]


gl ;_;/

Thanks a lot for your mod, I've been away from mapping for so long that I kinda forgot everything!
Birdy
from the q

[General]
The video needs to be reduced in file size. 17+MB is really too much.
The preview point is weirdly positioned, use 00:51:756 instead.

[Normal]
00:11:193 (4) - The finish could be clickable IMO.
00:20:014 (3) - Could and should blanket the following (4).
00:21:072 (5) - Could be divided into a circle and a 1/2 slider, unless you want to strictly follow the vocal only.
00:24:246 (4,5) - Fix the distance snap.
00:29:889 (4) - Improve the blanket to the previous (3).
00:41:175 (1,2,3,1,2) - This is really unfitting and eccentric. Use the same rhythm as at 01:48:892 (1,2,3,1,2) instead.
00:49:993 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier. Doesn't give much room to prepare for the following object.
00:59:163 (3) - x124 y256 for proper blanket with the previous (2).
01:00:221 (5) - Middle point x352 y276 and end point x312 y204 for perfect blanket.
01:01:631 (2) - Middle point x224 y160 and end point x264 y224 for perfect blanket.
01:11:860 (6,7) - Use a circle and a 1/4 repeat slider instead. The slider starts 1/4 too late, which is not suitable.
01:27:378 (3) - x276 y288
01:30:552 (1) - Middle point x348 y248 and end point x328 y284 for a proper blanket with the previous slider end.
01:31:610 (3,4) - Replace with a circle and 1/4 repeat slider etc. same as a while ago.
01:40:428 (4) - Move to x8 y260 and open up the curve a little more for a smoother pattern.
01:42:896 (2) - Should be a 1/2 repeat slider instead, or a circle and a 1/2. Ignores important elements in the music (both the vocal and the beat).
01:57:710 (1) - Again, end 1/2 earlier.
02:05:116 - Missing object (1/2 slider, perhaps?).
02:07:232 (3) - Improve the blanket to (2)'s end.
02:11:817 (1) - Replace with a circle starting 1/2 later. Spinner reasons, again.
02:14:286 (5,6) - Doesn't play well, doesn't look good.
I also extended the slider to end at the next beat. It was completely missing an object, you know.

02:26:278 (1) - Move the slider end up. This looks too compressed.
02:31:215 (1) - Middle point x128 y148 for a proper blanket.
03:27:293 (7,8) - Do the same as with 01:11:860 (6,7)
03:34:701 (3) - Copy, paste and flip the previous (1) here. That shape fits the pattern better.
03:47:397 (1) - Put a circle here and start this 1/2 later. The finish should be clickable and not a spinner start.

[Hard]
00:06:605 (3,4,5) - Rhythm improvement below.

00:09:428 (3,4,5) - Rhythm improvement above.
00:11:546 (9,1) - Swap New Combo.
00:12:252 (2,3,4) - Rhythm improvement above.
00:59:515 (3) - Shorten by 1/4, since you're following the vocals, apparently.
01:06:922 (2) - Rhythm improvement below. Alternatively don't use the repeat slider, and use a normal 1/4 slider + circle.

01:15:739 (2,3,4) - You know, the good old stuff as in the start.

01:21:382 (2,3,4) - ^
01:23:498 (7,8,9) - ^
01:31:610 (4,5) - Use the non-repeat slider first, then the one with the repeat. The (5) is 1/4 off.
01:52:066 (7) - x316 y240 to be blanketed better by (6) and (8).
01:52:419 (8) - x232 y208 for better blanketing with (7).
02:15:697 (8,9) - Slider first, then the circle.
02:29:981 (4) - Shorten by 1/4 and add a circle to the end.
02:59:783 (6) -

03:06:837 (5,6,7,8) - Don't stack 1/4 and 1/2 to the same point.
03:07:543 (8) - Should be two circles. The next section start deserves a new hit object and not a slider end.
03:28:351 (1) - End 1/2 earlier and add a circle to the ending point.
Topic Starter
Zexion

Static Noise Bird wrote:

from the q

[General]
The video needs to be reduced in file size. 17+MB is really too much. Reduced to ~10MB.
The preview point is weirdly positioned, use 00:51:756 instead. Yeah I think I might have forgotten to re-snap it while timing the map. Fixed.

[Normal]
00:11:193 (4) - The finish could be clickable IMO. I don't get your point. You mean not using a reverse slider but two circles?
00:20:014 (3) - Could and should blanket the following (4). Fixed!
00:21:072 (5) - Could be divided into a circle and a 1/2 slider, unless you want to strictly follow the vocal only. Your idea sounds better, so fixed!
00:24:246 (4,5) - Fix the distance snap. Fixed!
00:29:889 (4) - Improve the blanket to the previous (3). Fixed!
00:41:175 (1,2,3,1,2) - This is really unfitting and eccentric. Use the same rhythm as at 01:48:892 (1,2,3,1,2) instead. I don't really get what's so unffiting with that pattern, the second part has some drums for that repeating slider...
00:49:993 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier. Doesn't give much room to prepare for the following object. Fixed!
00:59:163 (3) - x124 y256 for proper blanket with the previous (2). Fixed!
01:00:221 (5) - Middle point x352 y276 and end point x312 y204 for perfect blanket. Fixed!
01:01:631 (2) - Middle point x224 y160 and end point x264 y224 for perfect blanket. Fixed!
01:11:860 (6,7) - Use a circle and a 1/4 repeat slider instead. The slider starts 1/4 too late, which is not suitable. Fixed!
01:27:378 (3) - x276 y288 Fixed!
01:30:552 (1) - Middle point x348 y248 and end point x328 y284 for a proper blanket with the previous slider end. Fixed!
01:31:610 (3,4) - Replace with a circle and 1/4 repeat slider etc. same as a while ago. Fixed!
01:40:428 (4) - Move to x8 y260 and open up the curve a little more for a smoother pattern. Fixed!
01:42:896 (2) - Should be a 1/2 repeat slider instead, or a circle and a 1/2. Ignores important elements in the music (both the vocal and the beat). Fixed!

Your mod was AWESOME! Thanks a lot!!!
[ Shamwow ]
M4M from my queue!

Normal:
+00:11:193 (4) - move this up so that it doesn't go off the grid
+00:41:175 (1) - ^
+01:06:569 (6) - ^
+01:40:428 (4) - ^
there are a few more that do this but i won't pinpoint them all, it's no big deal anyway unless half of the slider or circle is sticking off the grid (like 01:06:569 (6))
+01:44:660 (1,2) - just having two long sliders here seems too weird to me (kinda hard to describe)
+01:57:004 - maybe start the spinner here? it might sound better because it goes with the song
+03:47:397 (1) - i suggest removing this circle and moving the beginning of the spinner here, but this can be optional

Hard:
+01:31:610 (4,5,6) - this looks reeally hard to read
+03:04:897 (7) - seems a little too far off the grid (there are fewer in this diff that do this than in normal)

overall this is a good map!! it was kinda hard for me to find issues here, especially in the hard diff, which is why its so short (or that could just be my eyes are bad). good luck!
Topic Starter
Zexion

-Dave Strider- wrote:

M4M from my queue!

Normal:
+00:11:193 (4) - move this up so that it doesn't go off the grid
+00:41:175 (1) - ^
+01:06:569 (6) - ^
+01:40:428 (4) - ^
there are a few more that do this but i won't pinpoint them all, it's no big deal anyway unless half of the slider or circle is sticking off the grid (like 01:06:569 (6)) All of them fixed!, I'll look later for some more like this.
+01:44:660 (1,2) - just having two long sliders here seems too weird to me (kinda hard to describe) Hmm... I'll think about this one.
+01:57:004 - maybe start the spinner here? it might sound better because it goes with the song Moved!
+03:47:397 (1) - i suggest removing this circle and moving the beginning of the spinner here, but this can be optional That was my original idea, but another modder pointed that it would be better to leave the end beat clickeable, so I'll have to pass.

Hard:
+01:31:610 (4,5,6) - this looks reeally hard to read Yeah I knew it was a bad idea. Changed.
+03:04:897 (7) - seems a little too far off the grid (there are fewer in this diff that do this than in normal) Fixed!

overall this is a good map!! it was kinda hard for me to find issues here, especially in the hard diff, which is why its so short (or that could just be my eyes are bad). Don't worry! good luck!

Thanks a lot for your mod!
Cerulean Veyron
Hello, from my queue! Sorry for the delay.

Avril Lavigne! 8D
[> General <]
  1. - I guess you should make an Easy diff for your mapset to make your spread balanced better, just some simple patterns and that's all. It's up to you if you're trying to find someone to make an Easy, or making it by your own.
  2. - Timing Check: I think the first offset should be 260, second is 15,789.
  3. - Checked everything, looks fine!


[> Normal <]
  1. 00:20:014 (3,4,5,6) - This flow looks odd, you can make a triangle with (4), (5), and (6).
  2. 00:21:425 (6,1) - Swap NC, new track came off there.
  3. 00:24:246 (4,1) - ^
  4. 00:25:657 (1,2,3,4) - Curve the flow here, here's my example > http://puu.sh/eASFb/26db950cbc.png
  5. 00:29:889 (4,5) - Fix your spacing here, jumps aren't allowed in Easy/Normal. Also swap NC with 00:31:300 (1) -
  6. 00:33:416 (4,1) - Swap NC.
  7. 00:36:943 (1,4) - ^
  8. 00:41:175 (1,2) - Fixx your spacing.
  9. 00:46:466 (1,2) - Swap NC.
  10. 00:52:461 (1) - Add finish on head?
  11. 01:04:100 (2,3,4) - Kinda offbeat on these sliders, looks fine, but might be a little complicated when they're kept without a steady beat. This is not an important issue to be fixed.
  12. 01:05:511 (4,6) - I prefer not to overlap here, keeping it clear makes it more readable.
  13. 01:15:034 (1) - Add Finish?
  14. 01:20:677 (6,1) - Swap NC.
  15. 01:29:141 (3) - Try keeping this pattern symmetric, by moving it downgrid to y:88. Watch your spacing.
  16. 01:31:963 (4,5) - Check your spacing. Also swap (4)'s NC with 01:30:552 (1) -
  17. 01:33:374 (1) - If you've done above, remove this NC.
  18. - i think i'll need to stop the NC inconsistencies here, so try finding them on your own. Since it's a Normal diff, it's recommended to always add an NC in the long white tick to notice the players the music changes.
  19. 01:41:838 (1,2) - Check your spacing, quite nazi.
  20. 01:53:125 (4,5,1) - Form a Triangle here, improves the flow.
  21. 02:00:178 (1) - Add Finish on head.
  22. 02:06:174 (3,4) - Try to double blanket here, not just a single slider blankets and the other one not. Also fix the spacing.
  23. 02:09:701 (1) - I don't think the spinner fits in this part like the other ones you've added, remove it and map some notes.
  24. 02:12:523 (2,3) - Try remaking them symmetric.
  25. 02:15:344 (6) - This slider looks off, i might help a bit for this > http://puu.sh/eAUWd/b74a5dba71.png
  26. 02:18:518 (5,1) - Stack?
  27. 02:20:635 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here, or not planning to make one?
  28. 02:22:751 - Imo, this part is not really intense for a kiai time like the others.
  29. 02:41:443 (3,4) - Recorrect this parallel.
  30. 02:50:966 (1) - Add finish?
  31. 03:02:958 (3,4) - Fix spacing~
  32. 03:07:895 - Try to add a kiai time here, sounds fitting.
  33. 03:16:713 (1) - Same as 02:09:701 (1) -
  34. 03:33:289 (1,2,3) - Recorrect blanket.
  35. 03:34:700 (3,4) - Fix spacing~
  36. - Pointed out much major issues here, some NC inconsistencies are flowing in this diff. You made a good work, but it's quite valuable.


[> Hard <]
  1. - Same issues like the previous diff about the NC inconsistency and spacings. Might not mention them here to increase the size of mods. So as again, find them yourself.
  2. 00:06:605 (3) - You should avoid moving sliderpoints out of grid, this might lead to unrankability.
  3. 00:09:428 (3,5) - Try to curve them in the same position to improve the flow, by copy-pasting ofc!
  4. 00:12:252 (3,4,5) - Make a symmetry?
  5. 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - Instead of stacking, make a formation or a triangle at least.
  6. 00:26:362 (5,6) - Recorrect blanket.
  7. 00:28:478 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:19:661 (1,2,3) -
  8. 00:34:474 (2,3,4) - Not sure if you intentionally make a jump here, but i prefer keeping the spacing balanced like the previous notes.
  9. 00:37:648 (6) - I think a downbeat for the rhythm here is enough for this track. Repeat arrow sounds too weak for a white long tick.
  10. 00:40:823 (1) - I can hear a strong beat in the middle of the slider, i guess you should shorten the slider for a downbeat to hit that strong beat.
  11. 00:41:881 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:19:661 (1,2,3) -
  12. 00:52:461 (2) - Add finish on head.
  13. 00:54:930 (1,2) - Recorrect this blanket, also same as 00:37:648 (6) - for the repeat arrow issue.
  14. 01:10:449 (4,5,6) - This spacing changes is much bigger major issue than the minor ones, i guess you'll need to fix this one to avoid unrankability.
  15. 01:15:034 (1,2) - Curve and making them the same position for a better double blanket.
  16. 01:24:909 (1,2) - Symmetry?
  17. 01:28:789 (4,5,6) - Recorrect blanket.
  18. 01:33:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - This back-and-forth flow looks nice! It can be neater when you form a perfect diamond formation.
  19. 01:48:716 (5) - Remove circle? i don't think this part is likely need a circle. Well, not really an important issue.
  20. 01:51:361 (6,7,8) - Recorrect blanket.
  21. 01:54:183 (2,3,4,5) - Try to recurve them all the same position, it'll improve the flow if so.
  22. 02:07:232 (2,3,4) - Symmetry?
  23. 02:10:406 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream looks okay, i prefer replacing it as a 1/4 beat slider.
  24. 02:13:228 (3,4,5,6) - You almost complete this perfect square formation, so remake it?
  25. 02:26:807 (3) - Replace as 1/4 circles? like you've did on the previous parts you made.
  26. 02:44:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks okay, how about making a formation instead of stacks?
  27. 02:58:373 (3,4) - Recorrect blanket.
  28. 03:08:248 (1,2) - ^, Also this pattern have a great quality of mapping, try to make those more often!
  29. 03:24:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Form a Star formation here.
  30. 03:41:048 (7,8) - Stack perfectly? Or move circle (8) somewhere for a triangle formation with circle (1).
  31. - Likely needs a small work with pattern changes, blankets, streams, and some spacings. Well, not remapping, just try to focus on them to keep them perfectly balanced.

I guess that's all, it's a good map, but needs a bit more improvement. Or try to find more modders to see their opinions about the map.
Good luck, Zexion!
Topic Starter
Zexion

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, from my queue! Sorry for the delay.

Avril Lavigne! 8D
[> General <]
  1. - I guess you should make an Easy diff for your mapset to make your spread balanced better, just some simple patterns and that's all. It's up to you if you're trying to find someone to make an Easy, or making it by your own. Yeah, I'm hoping for a GD or I'll make an easy myself.
  2. - Timing Check: I think the first offset should be 260, second is 15,789. I'll try those later
  3. - Checked everything, looks fine!Yay!


[> Normal <]
  1. 00:20:014 (3,4,5,6) - This flow looks odd, you can make a triangle with (4), (5), and (6). Okay.
  2. 00:21:425 (6,1) - Swap NC, new track came off there.
  3. 00:24:246 (4,1) - ^
  4. 00:25:657 (1,2,3,4) - Curve the flow here, here's my example > http://puu.sh/eASFb/26db950cbc.png Fixed!
  5. 00:29:889 (4,5) - Fix your spacing here, jumps aren't allowed in Easy/Normal. Also swap NC with 00:31:300 (1) - Fixed!
  6. 00:33:416 (4,1) - Swap NC.
  7. 00:36:943 (1,4) - ^
  8. 00:41:175 (1,2) - Fixx your spacing. Fixed!
  9. 00:46:466 (1,2) - Swap NC.
  10. 00:52:461 (1) - Add finish on head? Okay, sounds better!
  11. 01:04:100 (2,3,4) - Kinda offbeat on these sliders, looks fine, but might be a little complicated when they're kept without a steady beat. This is not an important issue to be fixed. I'll consider changing it, awaiting for more opinions.
  12. 01:05:511 (4,6) - I prefer not to overlap here, keeping it clear makes it more readable. I don't really know how that overlap got there. Fixed!
  13. 01:15:034 (1) - Add Finish? Fixed!
  14. 01:20:677 (6,1) - Swap NC.
  15. 01:29:141 (3) - Try keeping this pattern symmetric, by moving it downgrid to y:88. Watch your spacing. Fixed!
  16. 01:31:963 (4,5) - Check your spacing. Also swap (4)'s NC with 01:30:552 (1) - Fixed!
  17. 01:33:374 (1) - If you've done above, remove this NC.
  18. - i think i'll need to stop the NC inconsistencies here, so try finding them on your own. Since it's a Normal diff, it's recommended to always add an NC in the long white tick to notice the players the music changes. I will work on these soon, thanks for telling me!
  19. 01:41:838 (1,2) - Check your spacing, quite nazi. Fixed!
  20. 01:53:125 (4,5,1) - Form a Triangle here, improves the flow. Fixed!
  21. 02:00:178 (1) - Add Finish on head. Fixed!
  22. 02:06:174 (3,4) - Try to double blanket here, not just a single slider blankets and the other one not. Also fix the spacing. Okay, I think I got it!
  23. 02:09:701 (1) - I don't think the spinner fits in this part like the other ones you've added, remove it and map some notes. I'd rather not, otherwise I would have to use an stream and I can't.
  24. 02:12:523 (2,3) - Try remaking them symmetric. Fixed!
  25. 02:15:344 (6) - This slider looks off, i might help a bit for this > http://puu.sh/eAUWd/b74a5dba71.png Fixed!
  26. 02:18:518 (5,1) - Stack? Now properly stacked!
  27. 02:20:635 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here, or not planning to make one? It wasn't really my intention...
  28. 02:22:751 - Imo, this part is not really intense for a kiai time like the others. Okay, a third modder that mentions this will make me change it... but I still think its the climax of the song o_o
  29. 02:41:443 (3,4) - Recorrect this parallel. Fixed!
  30. 02:50:966 (1) - Add finish? Fixed!
  31. 03:02:958 (3,4) - Fix spacing~ Fixed!
  32. 03:07:895 - Try to add a kiai time here, sounds fitting. Same as before
  33. 03:16:713 (1) - Same as 02:09:701 (1) - Same answer
  34. 03:33:289 (1,2,3) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!
  35. 03:34:700 (3,4) - Fix spacing~ Fixed!
  36. - Pointed out much major issues here, some NC inconsistencies are flowing in this diff. You made a good work, but it's quite valuable.Thanks!


[> Hard <]
  1. - Same issues like the previous diff about the NC inconsistency and spacings. Might not mention them here to increase the size of mods. So as again, find them yourself. Okay!
  2. 00:06:605 (3) - You should avoid moving sliderpoints out of grid, this might lead to unrankability. Whoops, Fixed!
  3. 00:09:428 (3,5) - Try to curve them in the same position to improve the flow, by copy-pasting ofc! I actually think that flow is better...
  4. 00:12:252 (3,4,5) - Make a symmetry? Okay!
  5. 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - Instead of stacking, make a formation or a triangle at least.Changed, but did something else
  6. 00:26:362 (5,6) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!
  7. 00:28:478 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - I'd rather leave the stacks
  8. 00:34:474 (2,3,4) - Not sure if you intentionally make a jump here, but i prefer keeping the spacing balanced like the previous notes. Re-arranged notes so the jump is obvious
  9. 00:37:648 (6) - I think a downbeat for the rhythm here is enough for this track. Repeat arrow sounds too weak for a white long tick. I'm putting emphasis on the lyrics in that one part... so I'll have to pass.
  10. 00:40:823 (1) - I can hear a strong beat in the middle of the slider, i guess you should shorten the slider for a downbeat to hit that strong beat. Agreed, so fixed!
  11. 00:41:881 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:19:661 (1,2,3) - Re-arranged
  12. 00:52:461 (2) - Add finish on head. Fixed!
  13. 00:54:930 (1,2) - Recorrect this blanket, also same as 00:37:648 (6) - for the repeat arrow issue. Fixed!
  14. 01:10:449 (4,5,6) - This spacing changes is much bigger major issue than the minor ones, i guess you'll need to fix this one to avoid unrankability. Huh? Which spacing changes...? Either way I double-checked them and fixed some minor differences.
  15. 01:15:034 (1,2) - Curve and making them the same position for a better double blanket. I did not want to blanket these...
  16. 01:24:909 (1,2) - Symmetry? Fixed!
  17. 01:28:789 (4,5,6) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!... blanketing is hard.
  18. 01:33:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - This back-and-forth flow looks nice! It can be neater when you form a perfect diamond formation. I don't really get this one. A diamond on these ones?.. tried but it didn't look really good.
  19. 01:48:716 (5) - Remove circle? i don't think this part is likely need a circle. Well, not really an important issue. I can hear the drums on that beat :o
  20. 01:51:361 (6,7,8) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!... I think I hate blankets
  21. 01:54:183 (2,3,4,5) - Try to recurve them all the same position, it'll improve the flow if so. uhh... any suggestions on this? I thought they were already curved nicely D:
  22. 02:07:232 (2,3,4) - Symmetry? I'll pass on this one.
  23. 02:10:406 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream looks okay, i prefer replacing it as a 1/4 beat slider. Hmm... no thanks.
  24. 02:13:228 (3,4,5,6) - You almost complete this perfect square formation, so remake it? Fixed!
  25. 02:26:807 (3) - Replace as 1/4 circles? like you've did on the previous parts you made. I did that so it would be somewhat different... if it is an issue then I'll change it...
  26. 02:44:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks okay, how about making a formation instead of stacks? Yeah, nice idea! I made an hexagon!
  27. 02:58:373 (3,4) - Recorrect blanket. Fixed!
  28. 03:08:248 (1,2) - ^, Also this pattern have a great quality of mapping, try to make those more often! Okay!
  29. 03:24:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Form a Star formation here. I'll think about this one.
  30. 03:41:048 (7,8) - Stack perfectly? Or move circle (8) somewhere for a triangle formation with circle (1). Stacked properly
  31. - Likely needs a small work with pattern changes, blankets, streams, and some spacings. Well, not remapping, just try to focus on them to keep them perfectly balanced.

I guess that's all, it's a good map, but needs a bit more improvement. Or try to find more modders to see their opinions about the map. Understood, thanks a lot for your help!
Good luck, Zexion!

Thanks a lot for your mod!
sheela
Hey Zexion!

General

  1. 02:22:751 - I wouldn't put a kiai point here, since it's the solo. The kiai is usually used for the chorus, so a kiai there won't be necessary. But, the second goes more to 02:50:966 -, since it's a chorus.

Normal

  1. 00:03:076 (1) - I highly suggest you reduce the spinner's length by a 1/2 a beat (which is on 00:05:193 - ), in order for the players to get back in track when they finished spinning it. It'll have a bigger break than a 1/4 beat break.
  2. 00:11:193 (4,1) - It's not major, but the distance is inconstant from the distance snap.
  3. 00:21:425 (6) - I would rotate this a bit to the left, or make it straight so it could shoot better to the next circle.
  4. 00:23:188 (3) - This slider seems really weird when you hear. If you followed the vocals, but you shouldn't break the rhythm that follows the piano. Also, you left a piano beat on 00:23:541 with a slider tick, which I don't think it would go together. I suggest that you put something that is clickable on that beat.
  5. 00:39:765 - I don't think you should put a long pause here. I would add a circle or a slider on that beat so the pause wouldn't be really awkward.
  6. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider ends on a tick that shouldn't be on. And the slider is really weird to hear. Unless it's a mistake, you should end it on the white tick before the blue tick.
  7. 01:08:333 (7) - Make a blanket with the previous slider? It will look nicer.
  8. 01:12:212 (7) - Add claps on the head, repeat, and tail since add a clap on the slider will only go to the body. There's also 03:27:646 (8) .
  9. 01:12:918 (1) - The end of the spinner must not be silent, else it's unrankable. I also suggest that you trim the spinner, like it's stated in the first suggestion to let players have the time to get back in-track. And when the spinner is on the white tick, it would be perfect of a clap and a finish.
  10. 01:21:735 (2) - Add a finish hitsound on the tail, since there's a cymbal sound in the music.
  11. 01:29:141 (3,1) - Improve the blanket a bit. It also goes for 02:20:635 (2,3) .
  12. 01:41:486 (6,1) - There's an inconsistency with distance. Please fix it.
  13. 01:46:071 (2) - The flow would go better if the slider is next to the previous slider, like placing it to x:177 y:215. Don't forget about the next circle.
  14. 01:48:187 (4) - Add whistles on repeat and tail? It would hit the drums, like you did to the head.
  15. 02:00:178 (1) - Maybe move the tail on the other side, like moving it to x:161 y:27, so it won't repeat the same pattern as 02:01:236 (3) .
  16. 02:09:701 (1) - I suggest you take out that spinner and map that part. Since you didn't do in the first chorus, it would make a consistency between them. Do it also to 03:16:713 (1) .
  17. 02:15:344 (6) - Sounds great if you put a finish on the head. This also goes to 03:00:489 (3) and 03:22:003 (6) .
  18. 02:31:215 (1,2) - Be careful with the distance.
  19. 02:55:904 (1,2,3) - I'd unstack them for making more movements for player.
  20. 03:06:837 - Like before, you shouldn't let a break on there, because it's a little awkward, and you're missing some good beats. I suggest you map this part, and 03:23:414 .
  21. 03:28:351 (1) - I think a clap with a finish would go together.
  22. 03:33:289 (1,3) - Make them more symmetric.
  23. 03:35:758 (4) - Move the tail to somewhere to x:424 y:276, so it could shoot up instead of shooting down.
  24. 03:42:459 (1,3) - These sliders have too much repeats, and they can lead to confusion because there are a lot of one-repeat sliders during the map. Try replacing those sliders by long sliders, or a spinner that starts on 03:42:106 to 03:43:870 .

Hard

  1. 00:06:605 (3) - I don't like how the flow was made for the two next objects, because of this slider. I'd make something like this:
  2. 00:13:664 (1) - It's a little the same the previous suggestion, so I'd go more with something like this:
  3. 00:19:661 (1) - This new combo is unnecessary, so you can remove it.
  4. 00:34:121 (1,2,3,4) - This is unexpected. The pattern would fit with the strong vocals, but I don't think it would with the map, since it's too random. Try moving them closer to each other, or make another pattern with the distance snap.
  5. 00:40:117 (2) - I'd replace the circle by a 1/2 slider so it doesn't avoid the white tick. Without the white tick, I clicked the circle (3) too early.
  6. 00:47:876 (3,4,5) - This rhythm breaks the previous rhythms, because it follows the voice, instead of the instrument. It's a little weird to listen to it. So I'd map the instrument there.
  7. 00:52:461 (2) - Add a new combo? The chorus and kiai start here, but there's already 00:51:756 (1) that have a new combo.
  8. 01:00:044 - You should add circle on that tick, because you added objects on the blue ticks, so that tick should also have one. It's about "polarity". It will avoid the confusion.
  9. 01:07:627 (4) - Add a finish.
  10. 01:12:389 (8,9) - Add claps.
  11. 01:12:918 (1) - Objects must not have silent sounds, else it's unrankable. You should turn up the volume more.
  12. 01:15:034 (1) - The slider is a bit ugly with the next object. Plus, the distance between this and the next object is inconsistent to the others. You can make something similar as in the first suggestion:
  13. 01:19:266 (3) - Distance is inconstant from the others with the previous object. There's also 01:33:021 (1) - 01:37:959 (5) - 02:42:501 (1) .
  14. 01:22:088 (4) - Add a finish on the head.
  15. 01:25:615 (1) - Remove the new combo, then add it to the next object. And, remove the new combo to 01:27:378 (1) .
  16. 01:59:120 (6) - This repeat slider should have claps, since it hits the drum. But add claps on head and tail, and each repeat. Else, if you select the slider and add the clap, it'll only go the body.
  17. 02:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the distances between them are too high. I'd reduce it a bit.
  18. 02:15:344 (7) - Add a finish since there's a cymbal beat in the music.
  19. 03:27:293 (7,8,9) - The claps should be added on the tail of the slider and on the circles. There's drum beats in the background.
  20. 03:41:754 (1) - I think it should need a finish.
To be honest, the new combo pattern seems to be too random. Try to aim the big downbeat.
Anyways, good luck with your map! Any question ca be asked via PM or in-game.
Topic Starter
Zexion

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Zexion!

General

  1. 02:22:751 - I wouldn't put a kiai point here, since it's the solo. The kiai is usually used for the chorus, so a kiai there won't be necessary. But, the second goes more to 02:50:966 -, since it's a chorus. All right, 3 modders think the same thing so... changed.

Normal

  1. 00:03:076 (1) - I highly suggest you reduce the spinner's length by a 1/2 a beat (which is on 00:05:193 - ), in order for the players to get back in track when they finished spinning it. It'll have a bigger break than a 1/4 beat break. Okay!
  2. 00:11:193 (4,1) - It's not major, but the distance is inconstant from the distance snap. Fixed!
  3. 00:21:425 (6) - I would rotate this a bit to the left, or make it straight so it could shoot better to the next circle. Fixed, now it's a straight slider!
  4. 00:23:188 (3) - This slider seems really weird when you hear. If you followed the vocals, but you shouldn't break the rhythm that follows the piano. Also, you left a piano beat on 00:23:541 with a slider tick, which I don't think it would go together. I suggest that you put something that is clickable on that beat. Not sure on this one
  5. 00:39:765 - I don't think you should put a long pause here. I would add a circle or a slider on that beat so the pause wouldn't be really awkward. Okay!
  6. 00:42:586 (3) - This slider ends on a tick that shouldn't be on. And the slider is really weird to hear. Unless it's a mistake, you should end it on the white tick before the blue tick. Indeed, that was totally a mistake, fixed!
  7. 01:08:333 (7) - Make a blanket with the previous slider? It will look nicer. Okay!
  8. 01:12:212 (7) - Add claps on the head, repeat, and tail since add a clap on the slider will only go to the body. There's also 03:27:646 (8) . Fixed!
  9. 01:12:918 (1) - The end of the spinner must not be silent, else it's unrankable. I also suggest that you trim the spinner, like it's stated in the first suggestion to let players have the time to get back in-track. And when the spinner is on the white tick, it would be perfect of a clap and a finish. Fixed! Really nice suggestion.
  10. 01:21:735 (2) - Add a finish hitsound on the tail, since there's a cymbal sound in the music. Fixed!
  11. 01:29:141 (3,1) - Improve the blanket a bit. It also goes for 02:20:635 (2,3) . Fixed!
  12. 01:41:486 (6,1) - There's an inconsistency with distance. Please fix it. Fixed!
  13. 01:46:071 (2) - The flow would go better if the slider is next to the previous slider, like placing it to x:177 y:215. Don't forget about the next circle. Fixed!
  14. 01:48:187 (4) - Add whistles on repeat and tail? It would hit the drums, like you did to the head. Fixed!
  15. 02:00:178 (1) - Maybe move the tail on the other side, like moving it to x:161 y:27, so it won't repeat the same pattern as 02:01:236 (3) . I'll pass, I don't really see a problem with a simple repeating pattern.
  16. 02:09:701 (1) - I suggest you take out that spinner and map that part. Since you didn't do in the first chorus, it would make a consistency between them. Do it also to 03:16:713 (1) . Fair enough, mapped both parts!
  17. 02:15:344 (6) - Sounds great if you put a finish on the head. This also goes to 03:00:489 (3) and 03:22:003 (6) . Okay!
  18. 02:31:215 (1,2) - Be careful with the distance. Fixed!
  19. 02:55:904 (1,2,3) - I'd unstack them for making more movements for player. No thanks
  20. 03:06:837 - Like before, you shouldn't let a break on there, because it's a little awkward, and you're missing some good beats. I suggest you map this part, and 03:23:414 . Okay for the first one, but for the second one I wanted to make a small break since its a normal.
  21. 03:28:351 (1) - I think a clap with a finish would go together. Okay!
  22. 03:33:289 (1,3) - Make them more symmetric. Fixed!
  23. 03:35:758 (4) - Move the tail to somewhere to x:424 y:276, so it could shoot up instead of shooting down. Fixed!
  24. 03:42:459 (1,3) - These sliders have too much repeats, and they can lead to confusion because there are a lot of one-repeat sliders during the map. Try replacing those sliders by long sliders, or a spinner that starts on 03:42:106 to 03:43:870 .
    Agreed, also I wanted to change those way before but I forgot lol, fixed!

Hard

  1. 00:06:605 (3) - I don't like how the flow was made for the two next objects, because of this slider. I'd make something like this:
    Fixed!
  2. 00:13:664 (1) - It's a little the same the previous suggestion, so I'd go more with something like this:
    Fixed!
  3. 00:19:661 (1) - This new combo is unnecessary, so you can remove it. Fixed!
  4. 00:34:121 (1,2,3,4) - This is unexpected. The pattern would fit with the strong vocals, but I don't think it would with the map, since it's too random. Try moving them closer to each other, or make another pattern with the distance snap.
  5. 00:40:117 (2) - I'd replace the circle by a 1/2 slider so it doesn't avoid the white tick. Without the white tick, I clicked the circle (3) too early. Fixed!
  6. 00:47:876 (3,4,5) - This rhythm breaks the previous rhythms, because it follows the voice, instead of the instrument. It's a little weird to listen to it. So I'd map the instrument there. Fixed!
  7. 00:52:461 (2) - Add a new combo? The chorus and kiai start here, but there's already 00:51:756 (1) that have a new combo. Added on the beat you mentioned, I guess it's okay to leave the one beat combo.
  8. 01:00:044 - You should add circle on that tick, because you added objects on the blue ticks, so that tick should also have one. It's about "polarity". It will avoid the confusion. Hmmm... okay, fixed!
  9. 01:07:627 (4) - Add a finish. Okay!
  10. 01:12:389 (8,9) - Add claps. Fixed!
  11. 01:12:918 (1) - Objects must not have silent sounds, else it's unrankable. You should turn up the volume more. Fixed!
  12. 01:15:034 (1) - The slider is a bit ugly with the next object. Plus, the distance between this and the next object is inconsistent to the others. You can make something similar as in the first suggestion: Really nice, changed!
  13. 01:19:266 (3) - Distance is inconstant from the others with the previous object. There's also 01:33:021 (1) - 01:37:959 (5) - 02:42:501 (1) . Fixed!... I don't know how those got so messed up.
  14. 01:22:088 (4) - Add a finish on the head. Okay!
  15. 01:25:615 (1) - Remove the new combo, then add it to the next object. And, remove the new combo to 01:27:378 (1) .
  16. 01:59:120 (6) - This repeat slider should have claps, since it hits the drum. But add claps on head and tail, and each repeat. Else, if you select the slider and add the clap, it'll only go the body. Fixed!
  17. 02:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the distances between them are too high. I'd reduce it a bit. I'll wait more opinions on this one.
  18. 02:15:344 (7) - Add a finish since there's a cymbal beat in the music. Fixed!
  19. 03:27:293 (7,8,9) - The claps should be added on the tail of the slider and on the circles. There's drum beats in the background. Fixed!
  20. 03:41:754 (1) - I think it should need a finish.Agreed

To be honest, the new combo pattern seems to be too random. Try to aim the big downbeat. I know, I'll work on the combos soon.
Anyways, good luck with your map! Thanks a lot! Any question ca be asked via PM or in-game.

Thank you very much for your mod!
Kazuya
Hi. Sorry. I can't speak English. : (


I hope you understand:

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Uncheck: Letterbox

[Hard]

Circle size is bit small. Change to 4.

  1. 00:06:605 (3) - Add claps to slider head.
  2. 00:11:193 (7,8) - Add claps.
  3. 00:23:541 (5,6,7) - Follow the vocal here. Put circles here: 00:23:541 - 00:24:951 - and 1/1 slider here: 00:23:893 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIrGn/c8207ffe27.jpg
  4. 00:32:005 (4,5,6) - Same as. Follow the vocal here. Put circles here: 00:32:005 - 00:33:416 - and 1/1 slider here: 00:32:358 -
  5. 00:37:296 (5,6) - I think my conception is better fits here: Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIsbH/9a80a1b520.jpg Make reverse slider here: 00:37:296 - 1/1 slider here: 00:38:001 - and circle here: 00:39:059 -
    Better suited to the vocals.
  6. 00:40:823 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals. This part weird, and some long slider is not good start. Example: 00:42:939 (6) - This slider is not good start here, because the vocal interrupted here: 00:43:291 - Move this slider here: 00:42:586 -
  7. 01:19:971 (4,5,6,7) - Add claps
  8. 01:24:909 (1,2) - Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIt4l/1881776609.jpg Add repeat: 01:24:909 (1) - , remove repeat: 01:25:615 (2) - and move this slider here: 01:25:967 - Reverse slider better fits here: 01:24:909 -
  9. 01:27:378 (3,4) - Put circles here: 01:27:378 - 01:27:554 - and put 1/2 slider here: 01:27:731 - My conception better fits the vocal. Timeline: http://puu.sh/eItuF/c26b65d0d6.jpg
  10. 01:31:610 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think don't put stream here, because 1/4 sounds is very low, the vocal louder. Follow the vocal.
  11. 01:33:021 (1,2) - Use this: http://puu.sh/eItRH/f4e1e0418a.jpg Better here.
  12. 01:39:370 (3) - Move slider here: 01:39:193 - because vocal starts here 01:39:193 - and put circles here: 01:39:722 - 01:40:075 -
  13. 01:48:892 (1,2) - Move slider here: 01:48:892 - and circle here: 01:49:598 - I think better fits to the vocal.
  14. 01:49:950 (3,4) - Same as ^ Slider here: 01:49:950 - circle here: 01:50:656 -
  15. 01:52:066 (7,8) - Same as ^ Slider here: 01:52:066 - Circle here: 01:52:772 -
  16. 01:52:948 - Put circle here
  17. 02:05:116 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps
  18. 02:07:232 (2) - I think 1/4 reverse slider is better here.
  19. 02:08:290 (4,5) - Delete circle: 02:08:996 (5) - Move 02:08:290 (4) - slider here: 02:08:643 - and put circles here: 02:08:290 - 02:08:467 - I think better.
  20. 02:10:406 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Add claps
  21. 02:44:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is ugly. Use similar: http://puu.sh/eLCvn/4372e41d7e.jpg
  22. 03:14:949 (3) - 1/4 slider is better fits here. If i use: put circle here: 03:15:302 -
  23. 03:32:936 (1,2,3) - Uhh, this is bad/weird. Please, follow vocal: (use this): http://puu.sh/eLD23/c99b9e8fe9.jpg (Time: 03:32:936 - to 03:35:229 - )

[Normal]

CS: 3!

  1. 02:03:353 (6,7) - This flow bad. Use similar: http://puu.sh/eLDDX/5a7451b02b.jpg
  2. 02:06:174 (3,4) - Same as. Flow is weird.
  3. 02:56:609 (3,4,5,6) - I think better, if slider is start the white line. Timeline: http://puu.sh/eLDUf/999c4e30b3.jpg
  4. 03:19:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^


GL.
Topic Starter
Zexion

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. Sorry. I can't speak English. : ( Don't worry!

I hope you understand:

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Uncheck: Letterbox Done!

[Hard]

Circle size is bit small. Change to 4. The song is slow and not too difficult. I don't see a problem with using smaller circles.

  1. 00:06:605 (3) - Add claps to slider head. Missed it. Fixed!
  2. 00:11:193 (7,8) - Add claps Okay!
  3. 00:23:541 (5,6,7) - Follow the vocal here. Put circles here: 00:23:541 - 00:24:951 - and 1/1 slider here: 00:23:893 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIrGn/c8207ffe27.jpg Really nice suggestion, changed!
  4. 00:32:005 (4,5,6) - Same as. Follow the vocal here. Put circles here: 00:32:005 - 00:33:416 - and 1/1 slider here: 00:32:358 - Changed!
  5. 00:37:296 (5,6) - I think my conception is better fits here: Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIsbH/9a80a1b520.jpg Make reverse slider here: 00:37:296 - 1/1 slider here: 00:38:001 - and circle here: 00:39:059 -
    Better suited to the vocals. Passing on this one, I don't really like how it sounds.
  6. 00:40:823 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals. This part weird, and some long slider is not good start. Example: 00:42:939 (6) - This slider is not good start here, because the vocal interrupted here: 00:43:291 - Move this slider here: 00:42:586 - Fixed!
  7. 01:19:971 (4,5,6,7) - Add claps Okay, just hoping it won't be too loud...
  8. 01:24:909 (1,2) - Timeline: http://puu.sh/eIt4l/1881776609.jpg Add repeat: 01:24:909 (1) - , remove repeat: 01:25:615 (2) - and move this slider here: 01:25:967 - Reverse slider better fits here: 01:24:909 - Fixed!
  9. 01:27:378 (3,4) - Put circles here: 01:27:378 - 01:27:554 - and put 1/2 slider here: 01:27:731 - My conception better fits the vocal. Timeline: http://puu.sh/eItuF/c26b65d0d6.jpg Fixed!
  10. 01:31:610 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think don't put stream here, because 1/4 sounds is very low, the vocal louder. Follow the vocal.Waiting for more opinions on this one
  11. 01:33:021 (1,2) - Use this: http://puu.sh/eItRH/f4e1e0418a.jpg Better here. Okay, I think I got it...
  12. 01:39:370 (3) - Move slider here: 01:39:193 - because vocal starts here 01:39:193 - and put circles here: 01:39:722 - 01:40:075 - Okay, but made some slight modifications
  13. 01:48:892 (1,2) - Move slider here: 01:48:892 - and circle here: 01:49:598 - I think better fits to the vocal. Okay, changed!
  14. 01:49:950 (3,4) - Same as ^ Slider here: 01:49:950 - circle here: 01:50:656 - No thanks
  15. 01:52:066 (7,8) - Same as ^ Slider here: 01:52:066 - Circle here: 01:52:772 - No thanks
  16. 01:52:948 - Put circle here Okay!
  17. 02:05:116 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps Then again, I hope its not too loud...
  18. 02:07:232 (2) - I think 1/4 reverse slider is better here. Indeed, but added as three circles.
  19. 02:08:290 (4,5) - Delete circle: 02:08:996 (5) - Move 02:08:290 (4) - slider here: 02:08:643 - and put circles here: 02:08:290 - 02:08:467 - I think better. Really nice, fixed!
  20. 02:10:406 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - Add clapsNo, notice that the drums in the song are lowering their intensity while the claps keep theirs. It just sounds off.
  21. 02:44:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is ugly. Use similar: http://puu.sh/eLCvn/4372e41d7e.jpg Fixed!
  22. 03:14:949 (3) - 1/4 slider is better fits here. If i use: put circle here: 03:15:302 -
  23. 03:32:936 (1,2,3) - Uhh, this is bad/weird. Please, follow vocal: (use this): http://puu.sh/eLD23/c99b9e8fe9.jpg (Time: 03:32:936 - to 03:35:229 - ) Let me think about this one...


[Normal]

CS: 3! Same answer as hard

  1. 02:03:353 (6,7) - This flow bad. Use similar: http://puu.sh/eLDDX/5a7451b02b.jpg Fixed!
  2. 02:06:174 (3,4) - Same as. Flow is weird. Notes are blanketed there, what's the problem?
  3. 02:56:609 (3,4,5,6) - I think better, if slider is start the white line. Timeline: http://puu.sh/eLDUf/999c4e30b3.jpg Fixed!
  4. 03:19:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^ Fixed!


GL.

Thanks a lot for your mod!
VINXIS
le mod

from me modding q

k only 2 diffs nic e

u dont need the second timing point m8
Normal CS3 and the rest 4-5 too lax for normal aside from the CS which is too rough forthe normal
Hard CS4 OD 6.5 dont use CS5 for hard pls
put alternative rock into tags
it's mostly just inconsistent comboing in context with the song so
00:21:425 (6) - nc
00:22:483 (1) - remove nc
00:24:246 (4) - nc
00:25:657 (1) - remove nc
00:26:715 (4) - nc
00:38:354 (4) - nc
00:40:823 the vocal starts here m8
00:42:586 (3,1) - blanket will look much better
00:46:466 (1) - if u want the nc here, then make a slider as it fits more, otherwise remove nc and nc the next note
01:29:141 (3) - nc
01:30:552 (1) - remove nc
01:31:610 (3) - nc
01:37:606 (3) - nc
01:38:664 (1) - remove nc
01:40:428 (4) - nc
01:50:303 (3,1) - blanket will look better
02:43:560 (1) - map this with 1/2 notes instead of a spinner for map consistency
02:55:904 (1,2,3) - no stak pls
02:59:078 (1) - remove nc
02:59:431 (2) - nc
03:04:721 (1) - remove nc
03:05:074 (2) - nc
03:22:003 (6) - nc
03:38:227 (3) - nc
03:38:580 (1) - remove nc
03:40:343 (4) - nc
03:41:754 (7) - nc
03:42:459 (1) - remove nc
00:46:466 (1) - remove nc
00:46:818 (2) - nc
01:23:498 (7) - nc
01:29:494 (7) - nc
02:54:140 (6) - nc
02:56:609 (5) - nc
02:56:962 (1) - remove nc
02:59:431 (5) - nc
03:07:895 (9) - nc
03:08:248 (1) - remove nc
03:13:538 (5) - nc
03:13:891 (1) - remove nc
03:16:360 (6) - nc
03:18:476 (1) - remove nc
03:19:181 (5) - nc
03:21:650 (1) - remove nc
03:22:003 (2) - nc
idk the map is fine to me, but it looks like a bland old map with not much variety in the map tbh (that's just my opinion TT_TT, I'm not fond with this kind of mapping style, it is fine with this style though). It'll look much better once it's CS4 and, most of the stacks are redundant but yehj

good luk m9
Topic Starter
Zexion
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VINXIS wrote:

le mod

from me modding q

k only 2 diffs nic e kthx

u dont need the second timing point m8 check the timing bro, ticks will fuck up if there's no second point
Normal CS3 and the rest 4-5 too lax for normal aside from the CS which is too rough forthe normal
Hard CS4 OD 6.5 dont use CS5 for hard pls gonna need one more opinion b4 changing this m8
put alternative rock into tags k
it's mostly just inconsistent comboing in context with the song so yeah i actually had to rework that. So now it's a good chance, le nc changes:
00:21:425 (6) - nc k
00:22:483 (1) - remove nc k
00:24:246 (4) - nc k
00:25:657 (1) - remove nc k
00:26:715 (4) - nc k
00:38:354 (4) - nc k
00:40:823 the vocal starts here m8
>implying everything is vocals
le background rhythm man
00:42:586 (3,1) - blanket will look much better tried and failed over 9000 times.
00:46:466 (1) - if u want the nc here, then make a slider as it fits more, otherwise remove nc and nc the next note k
01:29:141 (3) - nc k
01:30:552 (1) - remove nc k
01:31:610 (3) - nc k
01:37:606 (3) - nc k
01:38:664 (1) - remove nc k
01:40:428 (4) - nc k
01:50:303 (3,1) - blanket will look better yee
02:43:560 (1) - map this with 1/2 notes instead of a spinner for map consistency noice
02:55:904 (1,2,3) - no stak pls no
02:59:078 (1) - remove nc k
02:59:431 (2) - nc k
03:04:721 (1) - remove nc k
03:05:074 (2) - nc k
03:22:003 (6) - nc k
03:38:227 (3) - nc k
03:38:580 (1) - remove nc k
03:40:343 (4) - nc
03:41:754 (7) - nc
03:42:459 (1) - remove nc
don't agree with the last three
00:46:466 (1) - remove nc k
00:46:818 (2) - nc k
01:23:498 (7) - nc k
01:29:494 (7) - nc k
02:54:140 (6) - nc k
02:56:609 (5) - nc k
02:56:962 (1) - remove nc k
02:59:431 (5) - nc k
03:07:895 (9) - nc k
03:08:248 (1) - remove nc k
03:13:538 (5) - nc k
03:13:891 (1) - remove nc k
03:16:360 (6) - nc k
03:18:476 (1) - remove nc k
03:19:181 (5) - nc k
03:21:650 (1) - remove nc k
03:22:003 (2) - nc k
idk the map is fine to me, but it looks like a bland old map with not much variety in the map tbh (that's just my opinion TT_TT, I'm not fond with this kind of mapping style, it is fine with this style though). It'll look much better once it's CS4 and, most of the stacks are redundant but yehj
Now being serious, my mapping style is old, so yeah, some people will love and some others will hate it, but whatever. I kinda like those stacks.

good luk m9
tyvm
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I actually had fun replying to this. Thanks a lot for your mod! (I needed that extra help with the NC, seriously ;_;)
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