-Gamu- wrote:

初見で100/ミスが出やすいと思うポイント
OD9にしたくなる
01:36:119 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - なんだこれって思って、適当にクリックしてたら１００でまくったわ

06:02:061 (4,1,2) - 急にリズム変わって、ミスしました。　コイツ許さない
05:51:119 - からずっと各offbeatも拾っていた、つまりはそういうことだ。言い訳力の高さとは

普通に良かった

もしApproval行ったらHDHRで99%期待してます^^
行く可能性なんて3割ないだろうけど


thank you deathblood.
few objects are changed for your suggestion.

IRC change log
01:31:001 (6) - rmv whistle
04:58:531 (4) - samplest normal
05:28:531 (1) -finish

ここに01:14:943 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -　があるじゃろ？
これを

I wanted to mod something different from the same Christmas stuff and I found this remix by kors k, so I'm going to mod this!

[Remix]

1. 00:15:119 (1) - I think rhythm is starting to be quite boring since you are using too many sliders with repeat, so what about changing this to a 3/1 one? It follows vocals well at this point. If you do that, apply the same on 00:26:413 (1) -, it will bring some variety!
2. 01:36:119 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Let me say this is pure awesomeness!
3. 01:44:766 (2) - I hardly get the rhythm on this beat because there's no strong sound. Since you probably missed the sound at 01:44:237 - you can make a slider starting from here and ending where 01:44:766 (2) - was.
4. 01:26:766 (4) - You could try making this slider curve like you did in the previous sliders of the pattern.
5. 01:58:178 (5) - Can you make it less compressed?
6. 03:08:237 (4) - That's quite too near the previous object comparing to the whole map.
7. 05:53:943 (1,2,3,4) - Try to keep your spacing consistent in pattern like these, it makes the map cleaner!
8. 04:59:413 (7,8) - I'd rather replace them with a slider, or simply by deleting 04:59:590 (8) -. I prefer the first one since you can clearly hear a sound on 04:59:413 (7) - and a less loud one in 04:59:590 (8) -, that's why I'd put a slider here.

Great map, couldn't find anything more worth a mention, good luck with getting it ranked!

Leader wrote:

I wanted to mod something different from the same Christmas stuff and I found this remix by kors k, so I'm going to mod this!

[Remix]

1. 00:15:119 (1) - I think rhythm is starting to be quite boring since you are using too many sliders with repeat, so what about changing this to a 3/1 one? It follows vocals well at this point. If you do that, apply the same on 00:26:413 (1) -, it will bring some variety!
   sorry I don't think so. there is no problem even if it boring since slow part.
2. 01:36:119 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Let me say this is pure awesomeness!
   thank you
3. 01:44:766 (2) - I hardly get the rhythm on this beat because there's no strong sound. Since you probably missed the sound at 01:44:237 - you can make a slider starting from here and ending where 01:44:766 (2) - was.
   it is not mistake. some sliders picked up it, but circles did another one. same as 01:50:413 (2) - 01:53:943 (1) -
4. 01:26:766 (4) - You could try making this slider curve like you did in the previous sliders of the pattern.
   fixed
5. 01:58:178 (5) - Can you make it less compressed?
   It certainly was bad. fixed
6. 03:08:237 (4) - That's quite too near the previous object comparing to the whole map.
   ok
7. 05:53:943 (1,2,3,4) - Try to keep your spacing consistent in pattern like these, it makes the map cleaner!
   I think not need to keep distance because some objects to ignore it later in this, so it does not make sense. but changed a pattern
8. 04:59:413 (7,8) - I'd rather replace them with a slider, or simply by deleting 04:59:590 (8) -. I prefer the first one since you can clearly hear a sound on 04:59:413 (7) - and a less loud one in 04:59:590 (8) -, that's why I'd put a slider here.
   changed

Great map, couldn't find anything more worth a mention, good luck with getting it ranked!

thanks Leader

Christmas map~

[General]
Dimensions for wide background should be 1366 x 768
SB load shouldn't exceed 5.00

[Remix]
00:50:413 (1,2,3,4) - adjust them and separate them even, keeping the symmetry of course, will look better
00:54:296 (4,1) - make the spacing between these too same as 00:54:649 (1,2) - 1 touching prev sliders tail feels like a spacing mistake
01:05:943 (3,4) - is just my opinion but, I don't like how it looks, the curve and smoothy slider then right away the sharp one, I would prefer if 2, is a curvy one too =p
01:08:766 (1,2,3) - adjust 3, so spacing between these is even
01:14:413 (3) - This slider is too near to the previous note, I think the spacing should be bigger, taking in consideration the spacing of the prev combo, 1/2 have the same spacing as this one, If this meant to be an "anti-jump" it didn't felt good while play it, it felt more like a break right there was kinda awkward
01:25:001 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - all this whistles together kinda hurt my ear, I suggest you to just keep the whistle pattern, or maybe find a better hitsounds that suits the stream
01:41:237 (1,2,3) - center 2, so the whole pattern is symmetric, like you did here 01:50:413 (2) -
01:59:237 (6) - same as above
02:28:884 (4,5,6,7) - space even
02:35:590 (5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I personally didn't like this, it was confusing, let's see what other modders have to say about it
02:43:707 (1) - This should be farther from the prev note, if is an anti-jump, doesn't work like one to me, it was weird while playing
02:44:060 - 02:44:678 - In this section the slider should be 1/4 long not 1/8, if you listen carefully you will notice, as it is is just overmapped. An option could be split it into 2 sliders
02:52:884 (7) - stack properly
03:35:590 - 03:46:001 - weird how your combo pattern changed here, to longer combos. keep consistence please~
03:42:649 (7,8) - stack properly under prev 5
03:45:649 (7) - Feels like it needs a hitsound there, maybe a normal finish?, I where you I would of remove five repeats and add a note 03:46:001 - here, to empathize the sound
03:59:590 (1) - can you move a bit to the right, so it doesn't touch prev 4, doesn't look very well
04:08:943 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - that increase of spacing in the 3 last notes is confusing, a better way to do it is increasing it gradually, exlample http://puu.sh/5wlDz.jpg
06:02:413 (1,2,3) - this change of spacing is really confusing, I'm not against of anti-jumps, but the spacing between 1 and 2, while playing, made me feel like the next notes where 1/4, I suggest to delete 1 and add a repeat to 06:02:061 (4) -
06:02:590 - 06:11:060 - an suggestion for this section that I think would be awesome, start the first combo with 1.35 distance spacing maybe, then decrease spacing gradually to the next combos, just like you did with volume~

Good luck~!

Lissette wrote:

Christmas map~

[General]
Dimensions for wide background should be 1366 x 768
no. makes sense to use this size.

1. could not found its original size.
2. I have limit the size for SB
3. this satisfies the rule

if you found its size image, give me it. but do not resize my BG >.<
SB load shouldn't exceed 5.00
sorry, can not fix this....if you make a good SB, I will use yours.

[Remix]
00:50:413 (1,2,3,4) - adjust them and separate them even, keeping the symmetry of course, will look better
many random spacing on this map so I think do not have to be it
00:54:296 (4,1) - make the spacing between these too same as 00:54:649 (1,2) - 1 touching prev sliders tail feels like a spacing mistake
oops...fixed
01:05:943 (3,4) - is just my opinion but, I don't like how it looks, the curve and smoothy slider then right away the sharp one, I would prefer if 2, is a curvy one too =p
sorry, I didn't... I know what you say but I want to emphasize changing because (4) also followed the vocal same as (3)
01:08:766 (1,2,3) - adjust 3, so spacing between these is even
okok
01:14:413 (3) - This slider is too near to the previous note, I think the spacing should be bigger, taking in consideration the spacing of the prev combo, 1/2 have the same spacing as this one, If this meant to be an "anti-jump" it didn't felt good while play it, it felt more like a break right there was kinda awkward
but I think it would be hard to understand, because almost rhythm is 1/2. I think should put any changing here.
01:25:001 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - all this whistles together kinda hurt my ear, I suggest you to just keep the whistle pattern, or maybe find a better hitsounds that suits the stream
changed the volume, but didn't others.
01:41:237 (1,2,3) - center 2, so the whole pattern is symmetric, like you did here 01:50:413 (2) -
no. It is the distance being aware of a volume at there
01:59:237 (6) - same as above
^
02:28:884 (4,5,6,7) - space even
changed a little
02:35:590 (5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I personally didn't like this, it was confusing, let's see what other modders have to say about it
but I have asked to play some players, but Nobody take a combobreak.
02:43:707 (1) - This should be farther from the prev note, if is an anti-jump, doesn't work like one to me, it was weird while playing
why...? this 1/1 is just include a little break. not anti jump.
02:44:060 - 02:44:678 - In this section the slider should be 1/4 long not 1/8, if you listen carefully you will notice, as it is is just overmapped. An option could be split it into 2 sliders
removed the slider
02:52:884 (7) - stack properly
no, this placement is fine, they are moved to the upper right in the play. check it with testplay mode
03:35:590 - 03:46:001 - weird how your combo pattern changed here, to longer combos. keep consistence please~
this part is quiet and not have many jump/stack so not need to use many NC imo
03:42:649 (7,8) - stack properly under prev 5
same as 02:52:884 (7)
03:45:649 (7) - Feels like it needs a hitsound there, maybe a normal finish?, I where you I would of remove five repeats and add a note 03:46:001 - here, to empathize the sound
fmm...not need to add any hitsound imo...but add normal-hitnormal at 03:46:001 -
03:59:590 (1) - can you move a bit to the right, so it doesn't touch prev 4, doesn't look very well
ok
04:08:943 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - that increase of spacing in the 3 last notes is confusing, a better way to do it is increasing it gradually, exlample http://puu.sh/5wlDz.jpg
there is not a large changing than before so not need to get nervous imo.
06:02:413 (1,2,3) - this change of spacing is really confusing, I'm not against of anti-jumps, but the spacing between 1 and 2, while playing, made me feel like the next notes where 1/4, I suggest to delete 1 and add a repeat to 06:02:061 (4) -
at least, it would not happen to think it is 1/4 if player look approach circle.....
06:02:590 - 06:11:060 - an suggestion for this section that I think would be awesome, start the first combo with 1.35 distance spacing maybe, then decrease spacing gradually to the next combos, just like you did with volume~
but what circles pick up sound does not have any changing at 06:02:590 ~ 06:09:296 - . I think would not fit.

Good luck~!

sorry for many rejection. however anti-jump and random spacing are my mapping style. maybe you think it is stupid but understanding please orz
anyway thank you Lisette

Hi

[Remix]
That dark purple and dark blue combo color are too similar to the background in my opinion, you could make them lighter.
01:48:296 - I think should use white and gray combo color in this part where the background is in shades of gray.
03:40:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I believe you could split this combo, maybe do what you did here: 03:52:531 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
04:08:943 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think would make more sense if you increase the spacing gradually.
04:57:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you could ve follow the music with the objects instead of only with the whistles.
example:
04:57:472 - http://puu.sh/5zfZo.jpg
06:02:590 (2,3,4,5) - really sudden change of spacing imo... i missed.... and took me a while to catch the rhythm again cuz you change to only red ticks.
only one diff? /sadpanda

Good luck~

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi

[Remix]
That dark purple and dark blue combo color are too similar to the background in my opinion, you could make them lighter.
okay changed to be more lighter
01:48:296 - I think should use white and gray combo color in this part where the background is in shades of gray.
oops forgot to fix this section
03:40:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I believe you could split this combo, maybe do what you did here: 03:52:531 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
ok
04:08:943 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think would make more sense if you increase the spacing gradually.

NewRulerNA wrote:

there is not a large changing than before so not need to get nervous imo.

I dislike to use like a random spacing stream. sorry >.<
04:57:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you could ve follow the music with the objects instead of only with the whistles.
example:
04:57:472 - http://puu.sh/5zfZo.jpg
maybe its idea is good, but I felt would not be good more than now. sorry for using a stupid reason orz
06:02:590 (2,3,4,5) - really sudden change of spacing imo... i missed.... and took me a while to catch the rhythm again cuz you change to only red ticks.
fmm...I think this is playable...but many some players said about it so changed that ;_;
only one diff? /sadpanda
yeah, try to be approval

Good luck~

thank you Lizbeth~

~General~

1. You should re-encode your file .ogg to .mp3 with 192kbps of quality, file size is too high and also with too high kbps right now.

~Remix~

1. I would reduce the HP Drain by 1 tick, it feels a bit too evil right now.
2. I'd remove the gray colour since it's confusing when you dim the background.

1. 01:36:119 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I know what you wanted to do here, but I think it's pretty confusing, I'm sure you can do something better than this actually.
2. 02:43:354 (9) - I'd add a combo here to emphasize the boom of this part.
3. 04:07:355 (9) - Add a new combo here so it's splitted in 2 parts and it isn't way too long like right now.
4. 04:30:648 (9) - Same as suggested at 02:43.
5. 05:36:296 (5,6,7,8) - I always find such stacks pretty confusing, I'd place (5) somewhere else to avoid the double stack.
6. 05:49:707 (6) - Add a finish on this circle, it would sound amazing imo.

Great map, let me know when it's ready. :3

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. You should re-encode your file .ogg to .mp3 with 192kbps of quality, file size is too high and also with too high kbps right now.
   okay

~Remix~

1. I would reduce the HP Drain by 1 tick, it feels a bit too evil right now.
   I think HP8 is also good...but changed
2. I'd remove the gray colour since it's confusing when you dim the background.
   fm, but now we can disable the skin... and what have any light color on having effect part is not cool... sorry

1. 01:36:119 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I know what you wanted to do here, but I think it's pretty confusing, I'm sure you can do something better than this actually.
   sry, not changed.
   1. I know maybe this confese some players, but not too hard to understand because have a space on 01:35:590 (5,6,1) - .
   2. I could not find good/cool placement more than now orz
2. 02:43:354 (9) - I'd add a combo here to emphasize the boom of this part.
   ok
3. 04:07:355 (9) - Add a new combo here so it's splitted in 2 parts and it isn't way too long like right now.
   okay, added NC
4. 04:30:648 (9) - Same as suggested at 02:43.
   ok
5. 05:36:296 (5,6,7,8) - I always find such stacks pretty confusing, I'd place (5) somewhere else to avoid the double stack.
   ok
6. 05:49:707 (6) - Add a finish on this circle, it would sound amazing imo.
   ok~ and adjust the volume to 60%

Great map, let me know when it's ready. :3

thank you Andrea, call you soon

Everything seems much better now :3

Bubble #1~

thank you~ ><

good map for chirstmas ！
I like it.

chirstmas songs approved Σ(ﾟдﾟlll)

I need a new ruler from north america.
(bubble 2#) ~~~~~

oh thanks a lot Frost >.<

to other BATs
please don't rank before christmas~ ><

[SB]
The imagine in the beginning pops up out of nowhere from the black. Could you make this fade instead?

[Remix]
Can you rename the diffname to Marathon? Sorry for this.

The offset is a bit too early, sadly. add +3 to the offset.
03:45:652 (5) - Can you make the first four repeats have a different (louder) hitsound than the rest? It plays a bit weird at the moment.
I'm not really a fan of these whistles, I think it would be better to leave them out here, especially the part after the first kiai, it disorientated me because the whistle pattern didn't follow the song.

happy30 wrote:

[SB]
The imagine in the beginning pops up out of nowhere from the black. Could you make this fade instead?
sorry, I tried to use the fade effect, but did not work that.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",10000,0
//Break Periods
2,272260,282754
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,0,,0

so I could not be solved if you have a idea, I would use it with pleasure.

[Remix]
Can you rename the diffname to Marathon? Sorry for this.
but I think not need to do it because this song is very short as the marathon.
The offset is a bit too early, sadly. add +3 to the offset.
okay >.<
03:45:652 (5) - Can you make the first four repeats have a different (louder) hitsound than the rest? It plays a bit weird at the moment.
ok
I'm not really a fan of these whistles, I think it would be better to leave them out here, especially the part after the first kiai, it disorientated me because the whistle pattern didn't follow the song.
fmm, I think this pattern is not also bad, however the opinion has a valid point so I changed some pattern at 03:13:004 ~ 03:34:181 and 05:28:534 ~ 05:49:710 - but will not remove whistle at these section.
btw... if you think not good, I will back to the old version. I dont have an idea which is better than now orz

thank you happy

happy makes me unhappy ;_;

never rank

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no longer try to rank > Why?

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