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shigure999

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shigure999 2014-02-18T12:17:03+00:00

nice map!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-02-18T12:31:54+00:00

shigure999 wrote:
nice map!

thx!

epocsodielaK

50 posts

Joined March 2012

epocsodielaK 2014-07-10T06:52:02+00:00

just a suggestion for the combo colour set ;p

[Colours]
Combo1 : 196,193,181
Combo2 : 159,169,146
Combo3 : 156,78,115
Combo4 : 114,119,156

Zweib

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Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-08-29T04:24:39+00:00

AR and OD fixed

Mei

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Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-09-20T05:40:59+00:00

嘿嘿

[insane]

00:34:981 (1,2) - 00:35:139 这里有个ka的音，滑条尾感觉弱化了，试试这样的我感觉好些
Picture
00:36:402 (1,2,3) - 这里也是类似的意见，原因是有吉他（或者其他的奇怪的乐器的声音
Picture
00:42:086 (5,6,7) - 我个人感觉ctrl+g好打些
00:45:717 (2) - 移到x268 y108抱起来啊
01:14:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - 23的flow感觉不太好，建议试试这样
Picture
01:17:297 (2,3,4) - 根据前面的节奏下发这里可以这样啊，顺便01:17:297 (2,1) - 有点overlap
Picture
01:22:823 (5) - ctrl+g 好些
01:23:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 正常做法不是滑条拉倒红线然后连打放偶数个么（吐血
01:24:244 (2,1) - 2叠在一的头上啊
02:09:402 (1,2) - 这两个也加上clap
02:12:402 (1) - ctrl+g？
02:16:823 (3,4) - 3和4分别ctrl+g
02:20:455 (2,3,4) - 试试这样
Picture
02:48:244 (2,3) - 感觉有点怪，试试这样
Picture
03:31:349 (2) - ctrl+g
03:49:113 (6) - 建议删掉这个，听起来顺耳一点.-.，5可以叠在7的头上然后nc一下
04:10:034 (1,5) - 5叠在1上面试试
04:26:139 在这里加个note？比如x336 y252

有人叫我mp，所以猪尾巴88

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-09-20T14:33:56+00:00

Mei wrote:
嘿嘿
[insane]
00:34:981 (1,2) - 00:35:139 这里有个ka的音，滑条尾感觉弱化了，试试这样的我感觉好些
Picture
不太喜欢这种滑条尾压蓝._.用滑条尾踩重音不也挺带感的嘛w

00:36:402 (1,2,3) - 这里也是类似的意见，原因是有吉他（或者其他的奇怪的乐器的声音
Picture
同上

00:42:086 (5,6,7) - 我个人感觉ctrl+g好打些这里打着是不舒服，改了节奏

00:45:717 (2) - 移到x268 y108抱起来啊嘛，nazi

01:14:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - 23的flow感觉不太好，建议试试这样
Picture

01:17:297 (2,3,4) - 根据前面的节奏下发这里可以这样啊，顺便01:17:297 (2,1) - 有点overlap 前面好像没这么下过节奏呀，，
Picture

01:22:823 (5) - ctrl+g 好些故意的w

01:23:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 正常做法不是滑条拉倒红线然后连打放偶数个么（吐血确实是按你说的那样打起来更习惯点，不过这里6个的串总觉得短了- -，其实NC在这个位置的话不影响读图的

01:24:244 (2,1) - 2叠在一的头上啊？？

02:09:402 (1,2) - 这两个也加上clap 唔效果不明显，还是按原音乐的来吧

02:12:402 (1) - ctrl+g？不了，一直朝一个方向转很闷的

02:16:823 (3,4) - 3和4分别ctrl+g 后面不好接了orz

02:20:455 (2,3,4) - 试试这样
Picture

02:48:244 (2,3) - 感觉有点怪，试试这样
Picture

03:31:349 (2) - ctrl+g

03:49:113 (6) - 建议删掉这个，听起来顺耳一点.-.，5可以叠在7的头上然后nc一下加了NC

04:10:034 (1,5) - 5叠在1上面试试

04:26:139 在这里加个note？比如x336 y252
有人叫我mp，所以猪尾巴88

谢摸
我比较懒改的不多orz女王不要打我

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-09-22T15:23:08+00:00

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria.
Try using 75-80% volume for the kiai times? 65% is a pretty low increase of volume from the other parts of the song to the point where it feels insignificant. A noticeably louder hitsound in the kiai time would be nice to indicate that it's the strongest part of the song!

>Easy

01:00:560 (1) - Remove NC? I think this is inconsistent with the combo pattern that you have made so far.
01:02:928 (2,1) - Swap NC? Same reason as the suggestion above.
01:17:770 (1) - Remove the NC, then swap NC at 01:19:507 (3,1)? Again, same reason.
01:58:665 (1,2) - Swap NC yet again? I believe you should know the reason by now. (If I ask for a remove/swap/add NC, assume that it's to keep the combo consistency.)
02:03:560 - Add a finish to follow the cymbal here?
02:04:981 (1) - ^
03:00:402 & 03:01:823 - Use the default soft finish if possible to emphasize the cymbals here, too? The current finish doesn't really go well with the song.
03:01:823 (2,1) - Swap NC?
03:06:718 (2) - Add an NC here?
03:54:402 (1,3) - Swap NC?
03:57:401 (1) - Remove NC? (Okay, I'm honestly pretty confused right now. The combo pattern looks kinda random. Sometimes you add an NC every 4 stanzas, and sometimes 2. Well, just try to make them consistent.)

>Normal

00:51:718 (5,6) - Can have a little better blanket, I think.
01:02:928 - Use the default soft finish to emphasize the cymbal?
03:00:244 - 03:14:455 - This part is very awkward to play since you used too many long sliders and skipped a lot of strong instrument sounds. I recommend you to remap this part and emphasize more instrument sounds + make this part a little more intense with less long sliders.
03:33:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not a must, but might as well make them symmetrical. Don't you think it'd be nicer?

>Hard

00:45:244 (1) - Try to follow that piano note in the middle of the slider? Feels weird to leave it unmapped.
01:13:981 (4) - Won't it be confusing since it has four repeats compared to 01:13:349 (2,3)?
02:00:402 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1). I don't think hitsounding the middle with a custom hitsound is enough.
02:34:034 (1) - Rotate it like this for a better flow?
03:30:402 - 03:48:244 - I think the usage of whistles can be improved here. For example, add whistles at 03:31:349, 03:32:139, and 03:32:613 because the instruments are clearly strong, and remove the whistle at 03:31:981 since there's no instrument sound that can be followed.
03:33:244 (1) - Same as 00:45:244 (1).
03:59:139 (3,1) - Don't you think they're too close to each other?
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Why are you mapping here? There is literally nothing that you can map except the cymbal at 04:26:297. This is completely unacceptable since it's essentially mapping emptiness for a relatively long amount of time.

>Melt's Insane

00:33:244 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1) in the Hard diff. I can't see what are you trying to follow here by using this rhythm, honestly.
00:58:507 - Try to add a circle here to follow the drum? It feels pretty noticeable, and I think it's awkward to skip it.
01:06:244 - ^. It's actually confusing to leave this unmapped because players might think that 01:06:402 (4) starts here.
02:26:455 (5,1) - Unstack? It's hard to explain... it just feels more comfortable and fits with the song better if there isn't any stack here, IMO.
03:06:718 (6,1) - Swap NC since the music's rhythm "restarts" at (6), and make a jump between 03:06:560 (5,6)? Fits the song way better.
03:28:270 (1) - Use Soft whistle here instead? A drum hitsound doesn't really work here...
03:38:770 (3,4,5,6) - What's with the sudden spacing inconsistency?

>Insane

01:12:560 (4) - Lengthen to 1/1 and add a whistle on the head? Feels more comfortable to play that way.
02:34:665 (4) - ^
04:11:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What's with this stream? These objects are largely based on nothing and are just odd to play since there isn't anything that the circles on the blue ticks are mapping on...
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Same as Hard.

Well uh, yeah. I think Easy and Hard are quite hard as Easy and Hard diffs, especially Easy with the complicated rhythm. The overall flow in Hard can also be improved, and also the triangles at the end of each kiai time in Melt's diff.

Still a good mapset, but definitely can be improved.

Good luck on the way!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-09-22T17:23:13+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria.
Try using 75-80% volume for the kiai times? 65% is a pretty low increase of volume from the other parts of the song to the point where it feels insignificant. A noticeably louder hitsound in the kiai time would be nice to indicate that it's the strongest part of the song! changed to 70%
>Easy
01:00:560 (1) - Remove NC? I think this is inconsistent with the combo pattern that you have made so far.
01:02:928 (2,1) - Swap NC? Same reason as the suggestion above.
01:17:770 (1) - Remove the NC, then swap NC at 01:19:507 (3,1)? Again, same reason.
01:58:665 (1,2) - Swap NC yet again? I believe you should know the reason by now. (If I ask for a remove/swap/add NC, assume that it's to keep the combo consistency.)
02:03:560 - Add a finish to follow the cymbal here?
02:04:981 (1) - ^
03:00:402 & 03:01:823 - Use the default soft finish if possible to emphasize the cymbals here, too? The current finish doesn't really go well with the song. i'm not sure because i see no difference between here and before
03:01:823 (2,1) - Swap NC?
03:06:718 (2) - Add an NC here?
03:54:402 (1,3) - Swap NC?
03:57:401 (1) - Remove NC? (Okay, I'm honestly pretty confused right now. The combo pattern looks kinda random. Sometimes you add an NC every 4 stanzas, and sometimes 2. Well, just try to make them consistent.)
>Normal
00:51:718 (5,6) - Can have a little better blanket, I think.
01:02:928 - Use the default soft finish to emphasize the cymbal? same to easy, so no change here, or maybe I should change the sample file of normal-hitfinish?
03:00:244 - 03:14:455 - This part is very awkward to play since you used too many long sliders and skipped a lot of strong instrument sounds. I recommend you to remap this part and emphasize more instrument sounds + make this part a little more intense with less long sliders.
03:33:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not a must, but might as well make them symmetrical. Don't you think it'd be nicer?
>Hard
00:45:244 (1) - Try to follow that piano note in the middle of the slider? Feels weird to leave it unmapped. I dont think so because player will pay more attention to the vocal, I'd like to use 1/1 sliders to release the rhythm
01:13:981 (4) - Won't it be confusing since it has four repeats compared to 01:13:349 (2,3)? I think it's ok because player will read the approach circle when dealing with these short reverse sliders
02:00:402 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1). I don't think hitsounding the middle with a custom hitsound is enough. same to before
02:34:034 (1) - Rotate it like this for a better flow?
03:30:402 - 03:48:244 - I think the usage of whistles can be improved here. For example, add whistles at 03:31:349, 03:32:139, and 03:32:613 because the instruments are clearly strong, and remove the whistle at 03:31:981 since there's no instrument sound that can be followed.
03:33:244 (1) - Same as 00:45:244 (1).
03:59:139 (3,1) - Don't you think they're too close to each other? it's okay because when we see (1), the slider(3) already disappeared.
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Why are you mapping here? There is literally nothing that you can map except the cymbal at 04:26:297. This is completely unacceptable since it's essentially mapping emptiness for a relatively long amount of time. ??I can hear bass here :/
>Insane
01:12:560 (4) - Lengthen to 1/1 and add a whistle on the head? Feels more comfortable to play that way.
02:34:665 (4) - ^
04:11:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What's with this stream? These objects are largely based on nothing and are just odd to play since there isn't anything that the circles on the blue ticks are mapping on... i can hear the 1/4.... and it fits the music, it's exciting here
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Same as Hard. same. low but the bass notes do exist
Well uh, yeah. I think Easy and Hard are quite hard as Easy and Hard diffs, especially Easy with the complicated rhythm. The overall flow in Hard can also be improved, and also the triangles at the end of each kiai time in Melt's diff. lol, I agree with you that the rhythm of Easy is quite painful, so I mainly used more sliders rather than circles to fulfill the song. But I believe that the difficulty of Hard is of good balance, which I am most satisfied with. For better diff spread, maybe Normal can be mapped harder

Still a good mapset, but definitely can be improved.

Good luck on the way!

And other all fixed, thanks for modding!

Last edited by Zweib 2014-11-25T08:04:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

wantuol

107 posts

Joined October 2010

wantuol 2014-09-23T13:23:30+00:00

聖娼女～性奴育成学園～

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-30T12:29:39+00:00

聖娼女～性奴育成学園～

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-23T13:42:09+00:00

我觉得你还是把source去掉吧

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-23T14:17:12+00:00

ins
01:24:244 (2) - 没叠好
02:32:139 (5) - 这个和那大滑条太近了不好看拉远点吧
02:34:665 (4) - 弧度小一点比较好
02:38:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - nightmare233
02:40:191 (1) - 其实你blanket没弄好..
04:08:139 (1,2,3,4) - 3和4那里建议多考虑一下
04:21:560 - 加spin啊
233

melt's insane
01:17:928 - 有点坑啊
01:26:297 (2) - 往下一点
啊

hard
感觉没啥问题

我觉得没啥能挑的啊
歌还不错就是source实在太kowai
总之就当这歌是什么单曲把source去掉比较好
反正之前牛顿爱迪生大发明还是哪个也是删了吧

---

ez
00:32:770 (1) - ez不要玩这种花式滑条啊
01:17:770 (4) - slider end
01:23:139 (6) - 提前1/2结束比较好听
01:33:402 (3) - 建议弄成blanket (2)的那种新装你感受一下
02:39:876 (4) - sldier end
03:09:244 (4) - 123456788
03:26:613 (1,2) - 建议把这两个拖到383:107的位置感觉那个地方两边一样的间距不是很好
03:38:770 (5) - 你的三角星华佗了
04:02:770 (4) - 这样不好吧

我觉得你这确实不过关最前面那一段感觉做图没进入状态后面还好

edit2
nm还行不挑了

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-23T14:47:24+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
ins
01:24:244 (2) - 没叠好
02:32:139 (5) - 这个和那大滑条太近了不好看拉远点吧
02:34:665 (4) - 弧度小一点比较好
02:38:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - nightmare233 这个抄太明显了w，突然想起我还找kloyd要摸了orz
02:40:191 (1) - 其实你blanket没弄好..
04:08:139 (1,2,3,4) - 3和4那里建议多考虑一下
04:21:560 - 加spin啊 = =塞不进
233

melt's insane
01:17:928 - 有点坑啊？
01:26:297 (2) - 往下一点
啊

hard
感觉没啥问题

我觉得没啥能挑的啊
歌还不错就是source实在太kowai
总之就当这歌是什么单曲把source去掉比较好
反正之前牛顿爱迪生大发明还是哪个也是删了吧

---

ez
00:32:770 (1) - ez不要玩这种花式滑条啊
01:17:770 (4) - slider end
01:23:139 (6) - 提前1/2结束比较好听
01:33:402 (3) - 建议弄成blanket (2)的那种新装你感受一下
02:39:876 (4) - sldier end
03:09:244 (4) - 123456788
03:26:613 (1,2) - 建议把这两个拖到383:107的位置感觉那个地方两边一样的间距不是很好
03:38:770 (5) - 你的三角星华佗了
04:02:770 (4) - 这样不好吧

我觉得你这确实不过关最前面那一段感觉做图没进入状态后面还好 orz，之前更糟，现在感觉好一些了

edit2
nm还行不挑了

其他all fixed
thanks for modding

Pururut

488 posts

Joined March 2012

Pururut 2014-11-24T11:17:14+00:00

~~真随便写点~~

[Insane]
00:33:876 (4,5) - 读成压蓝线滑条
01:14:455 (1,2,3) - bad flow don't ask me why,大概是23太近,3 ctrl+g可能会好点
01:23:139 (6) - 圆弧朝上感觉更顺
02:32:139 (5,6) - 好像6锚点高了点
02:34:665 (4) - 塞不下转盘感觉可以折返一次
03:14:455 (1) - 漏了whistle
03:21:797 (9,10) - 貌似没盖好后面的滑条
03:47:139 (1) - 也这样啊 02:13:981 (2)
04:00:086 (1,2,3) - try

SPOILER

04:02:297 (5,1,2,3) - try

SPOILER

04:16:349 (2) - 还可以下一点

[Melt'Insane]
hh辣鸡妹儿
01:17:455 (6,7,1) - 不该空拍的建议改成滑条
01:37:192 没有必要拖这么久才break啊掉血的啊
02:24:560 (2) - 建议拖到后面红线这里加个note
02:36:086 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

03:11:297 (3,4) - 不需要空拍打起来很怪异
04:25:349 这里也是别空了连hard都有

[Hard]
01:13:981 (4) - 感觉改成两次折返加两个note还容易打点
02:36:086 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

02:39:402 (2) - 没叠好

[Normal]
1/2 1/1堆叠还是别老是混搭的好
00:56:770 (2) - 难看
01:26:613 (1,2) - 好像断flow了
03:02:139 (2,3) - ^

[Easy]
fine

下面美丽

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-24T13:27:24+00:00

Pururut wrote:
~~真随便写点~~

[Insane]
00:33:876 (4,5) - 读成压蓝线滑条稍微移远了点，其实影响不大？
01:14:455 (1,2,3) - bad flow don't ask me why,大概是23太近,3 ctrl+g可能会好点把2放到了前面4的下面（爷爷！）
01:23:139 (6) - 圆弧朝上感觉更顺感觉差不多。。朝下的话跟后面的串更顺
02:32:139 (5,6) - 好像6锚点高了点 fixed
02:34:665 (4) - 塞不下转盘感觉可以折返一次略怪
03:14:455 (1) - 漏了whistle 这里不加
03:21:797 (9,10) - 貌似没盖好后面的滑条不好看
03:47:139 (1) - 也这样啊 02:13:981 (2) 好
04:00:086 (1,2,3) - try 感觉不好，不过缩小了点ds容易些
SPOILER
04:02:297 (5,1,2,3) - try = =诡异，改了别的
SPOILER
04:16:349 (2) - 还可以下一点好

[Hard]
01:13:981 (4) - 感觉改成两次折返加两个note还容易打点改了
02:36:086 (2,3,4) - 改成一个滑条了，更简单

SPOILER
02:39:402 (2) - 没叠好 fixed

[Normal]
1/2 1/1堆叠还是别老是混搭的好再考虑下因为ez hd比较难，nm已经偏简单了
00:56:770 (2) - 难看改了
01:26:613 (1,2) - 好像断flow了微调了下
03:02:139 (2,3) - ^ 微调了下

[Easy]
fine

下面美丽

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,361 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-11-24T15:57:24+00:00

[Easy]
01:29:455 (1,2) - Way too apparent blanket issue.
02:02:297 (1) - Remove NC
02:04:981 (3) - NC

[Normal]
01:19:507 (1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly you didnt follow the vocal here?
02:07:192 (5,1) - 1/2
02:58:665 (4) - Touch the HP bar, unrankable.

[Hard]
00:42:086 (4) - Too curved.
00:42:402 (5,1) - Weird 1/4
01:13:507 (2,3,4) - 做个音量渐增吧。。。

本来还想多摸，可是还有三分钟断电。。。TwT

加油！

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-24T16:59:47+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Easy]
01:29:455 (1,2) - Way too apparent blanket issue. fixed
02:02:297 (1) - Remove NC fixed
02:04:981 (3) - NC fixed

[Normal]
01:19:507 (1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly you didnt follow the vocal here? hmm for the clap
02:07:192 (5,1) - 1/2 might be hard
02:58:665 (4) - Touch the HP bar, unrankable. fixed

[Hard]
00:42:086 (4) - Too curved. fixed
00:42:402 (5,1) - Weird 1/4 maybe it's ok
01:13:507 (2,3,4) - 做个音量渐增吧。。。ok

本来还想多摸，可是还有三分钟断电。。。TwT

加油！

Thanks!

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-11-25T10:13:21+00:00

From my topic

Insane

why dorain 6 ?

i think 7~8 best!!

00:39:560 Blanket?
http://gyazo.com/15a7ed1e9835aef767a330ec2fe233b3

00:43:981(1,2) forrow is Hard lol . chenge i hope

00:45:876 I like this slider ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/975a567501f3c321ab223da01f41ba60

00:55:192 NC remove
00:55:823 NC add ?

01:21:244(3,4) forrow 3slider is curve best , i think

01:30:718 ~ 01:37:034 i like this part!! good

02:37:349 i think
http://gyazo.com/a5dde1ac69b1a97d341fbb58275423a2

02:42:402(4,5,6,7) no forrow lol chenge plz

02:50:928 curve? 02:50:297(1,2,4)

03:44:928 curve?

03:50:849(2,4) remove . overmap?

Melt's Insane

01:57:876 add

02:52:823 Clap Drum
02:53:139 finish Drum
02:53:613 Clap Drum

03:06:876(1) 03:06:718 this start

03:35:928(1,2) forrow plz

03:40:507 NC remove
03:40:981 NC add

03:56:928(1,4) Blanket?

03:59:770 Ctrl G

04:07:823 I like ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/c845624ae16002c8497809894b0a8fd1

Hard

Drain 6 ? i think

00:59:928(6,1) far

01:32:060 remove
02:54:165 ^^
04:08:692 ^^

03:19:744 X101 Y323

03:32:901 X129 Y161

03:47:928 Clap Drum
03:48:244 finish Drum

Nomal

02:02:770 add ?

02:13:823 this?
http://gyazo.com/cb5244a3b8b3f3b40f0c97cb98b23878

Easy

good!

---------------------------------------------------------

good songs

i hope ranked!!

slider is cool

good luck XD

Star prezents!!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-25T12:19:31+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
From my topic

Insane

why dorain 6 ?

i think 7~8 best!! changed to 7!

00:39:560 Blanket? fixed!
http://gyazo.com/15a7ed1e9835aef767a330ec2fe233b3

00:43:981(1,2) forrow is Hard lol . chenge i hope moved them closer

00:45:876 I like this slider ↓↓↓ The jump too high, not fit the music imo
http://gyazo.com/975a567501f3c321ab223da01f41ba60

00:55:192 NC remove fixed!
00:55:823 NC add ? fixed!

01:21:244(3,4) forrow 3slider is curve best , i think curved by a little

01:30:718 ~ 01:37:034 i like this part!! good

02:37:349 i think keep this
http://gyazo.com/a5dde1ac69b1a97d341fbb58275423a2

02:42:402(4,5,6,7) no forrow lol chenge plz it's ok imo

02:50:928 curve? 02:50:297(1,2,4)

03:44:928 curve? ok!

03:50:849(2,4) remove . overmap? no

Melt's Insane

01:57:876 add

02:52:823 Clap Drum
02:53:139 finish Drum
02:53:613 Clap Drum

03:06:876(1) 03:06:718 this start

03:35:928(1,2) forrow plz

03:40:507 NC remove
03:40:981 NC add

03:56:928(1,4) Blanket?

03:59:770 Ctrl G

04:07:823 I like ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/c845624ae16002c8497809894b0a8fd1

Hard

Drain 6 ? i think

00:59:928(6,1) far distance snapped here

01:32:060 remove uh, all fixed thx!
02:54:165 ^^
04:08:692 ^^

03:19:744 X101 Y323

03:32:901 X129 Y161

03:47:928 Clap Drum cool but not consist lol
03:48:244 finish Drum

Nomal

02:02:770 add ? all fixed!

02:13:823 this?
http://gyazo.com/cb5244a3b8b3f3b40f0c97cb98b23878

Easy

good!

---------------------------------------------------------

good songs

i hope ranked!!

slider is cool

good luck XD

Thanks for modding!

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-11-26T18:03:53+00:00

That BG is NSFW ;w;
hentai Zweib :3

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-27T01:18:03+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
That BG is NSFW ;w;
hentai Zweib :3

yay I'm hentai o3o
I gonna find something better

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2014-11-27T14:12:23+00:00

hi，from qq

[Easy]

没什么好说的

[Normal]

02:50:613 (4) - 这个前面那个音没东西总觉得怪怪的，不如连着前面大白线弄一个短滑条._.
04:04:981 - ^
03:24:086 (1) - ends03:24:402 - ？

[Hard]

03:45:876 (1) - 开头不加个whistle么.
02:35:928 - 这个绿线没用吧
04:23:613 (2) - NC

[Mei‘s Insane]

01:28:507 (3,5,7) - NC？like02:50:613 (1,1,1) -
03:14:455 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个音是逐渐往下的，为什么间距反而是越来越大._.，建议改成逐渐变小或者间距不变.
03:33:244 (2,4) - 这overlap是不是太多了._.
03:45:876 (1) - 滑条头不加个whistle么.

[Insane]

03:45:244 (3) - 滑条头是不是漏了whistle
04:21:402 (1,2) - 交换NC
02:06:876 - 没用的绿线

水平有限，写的太少，见谅Q.Q

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-27T14:51:43+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
hi，from qq

[Easy]

没什么好说的

[Normal]
02:50:613 (4) - 这个前面那个音没东西总觉得怪怪的，不如连着前面大白线弄一个短滑条._. 还好。。好像间隔1/2更难，不改了
04:04:981 - ^
03:24:086 (1) - ends03:24:402 - ？不太好

[Hard]
03:45:876 (1) - 开头不加个whistle么. 好
02:35:928 - 这个绿线没用吧 fixed
04:23:613 (2) - NC 加后面了

[Insane]
03:45:244 (3) - 滑条头是不是漏了whistle 好
04:21:402 (1,2) - 交换NC 不，故意的
02:06:876 - 没用的绿线 fixed

水平有限，写的太少，见谅Q.Q 不会呀xD

Thank you~

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-11-28T16:35:28+00:00

Hinsvar

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria.
Try using 75-80% volume for the kiai times? 65% is a pretty low increase of volume from the other parts of the song to the point where it feels insignificant. A noticeably louder hitsound in the kiai time would be nice to indicate that it's the strongest part of the song!

>Melt's Insane

00:33:244 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1) in the Hard diff. I can't see what are you trying to follow here by using this rhythm, honestly.cause its the begining of this song so i tried to follow vocal here ;w;
00:58:507 - Try to add a circle here to follow the drum? It feels pretty noticeable, and I think it's awkward to skip it. added
01:06:244 - ^. It's actually confusing to leave this unmapped because players might think that 01:06:402 (4) starts here.Agree
02:26:455 (5,1) - Unstack? It's hard to explain... it just feels more comfortable and fits with the song better if there isn't any stack here, IMO.fixed
03:06:718 (6,1) - Swap NC since the music's rhythm "restarts" at (6), and make a jump between 03:06:560 (5,6)? Fits the song way better.
03:28:270 (1) - Use Soft whistle here instead? A drum hitsound doesn't really work here...fixed
03:38:770 (3,4,5,6) - What's with the sudden spacing inconsistency?fixed

Well uh, yeah. I think Easy and Hard are quite hard as Easy and Hard diffs, especially Easy with the complicated rhythm. The overall flow in Hard can also be improved, and also the triangles at the end of each kiai time in Melt's diff.

Still a good mapset, but definitely can be improved.

Good luck on the way!

Ar3

melt's insane
01:17:928 - 有点坑啊塞了一个进去
01:26:297 (2) - 往下一点好
啊

Pururut

~~真随便写点~~

[Melt'Insane]
hh辣鸡妹儿 P帅饶命
01:17:455 (6,7,1) - 不该空拍的建议改成滑条塞了一个circle
01:37:192 没有必要拖这么久才break啊掉血的啊死不了人
02:24:560 (2) - 建议拖到后面红线这里加个note 这里感觉还行
02:36:086 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

03:11:297 (3,4) - 不需要空拍打起来很怪异
04:25:349 这里也是别空了连hard都有很多地方都给加上circle 不过这里感觉要不要都可以吧

下面美丽

-Yuzuriha-inori-

Melt's Insane

01:57:876 add i thinks its fine

02:52:823 Clap Drum
02:53:139 finish Drum
02:53:613 Clap Drum

03:06:876(1) 03:06:718 this start

03:35:928(1,2) forrow plz

03:40:507 NC remove
03:40:981 NC add

03:56:928(1,4) Blanket? moved a little bit up

03:59:770 Ctrl G kept this to balance the distance

04:07:823 I like ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/c845624ae16002c8497809894b0a8fd1 same as Above ;w;

Kagamine Ren

hi，from qq

[Mei‘s Insane]

01:28:507 (3,5,7) - NC？like02:50:613 (1,1,1) - 之前是有nc的不过后来bat说这里间距没变我就给改回来了
03:14:455 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个音是逐渐往下的，为什么间距反而是越来越大._.，建议改成逐渐变小或者间距不变. 好
03:33:244 (2,4) - 这overlap是不是太多了._. 感觉还行.-.
03:45:876 (1) - 滑条头不加个whistle么. 咦好像本来就有啊;w;

水平有限，写的太少，见谅Q.Q

thanks for help :3

code

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TitleUnicode:COLD BUTTERFLY
Artist:Duca
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Creator:Zweib
Version:Melt's Insane
Source:
Tags:Melt opening Frill eroge Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~
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Zweib

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Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-29T01:38:03+00:00

Update:
fixed some illegal s.e. wav files
replaced the bg
adjusted the diff spread from E to H (E:1.49->1.44; N:2.12->2.23; H:3.72->3.54)
Requested some testplay from my friends, confirmed that E/H are much better than before

Here is some new feedback to Hinsvar's mod ;w;

Hinsvar wrote:
Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria. Some guys suggested that remove the source because it's a 18+ game lol. Maybe not proper here.

>Normal
03:00:244 - 03:14:455 - This part is very awkward to play since you used too many long sliders and skipped a lot of strong instrument sounds. I recommend you to remap this part and emphasize more instrument sounds + make this part a little more intense with less long sliders. remapped

>Hard
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Why are you mapping here? There is literally nothing that you can map except the cymbal at 04:26:297. This is completely unacceptable since it's essentially mapping emptiness for a relatively long amount of time. Deleted already

>Insane
04:11:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What's with this stream? These objects are largely based on nothing and are just odd to play since there isn't anything that the circles on the blue ticks are mapping on... I reviewed this part again and again. It's not loud but I can feel piano note at every 1/4 here, it's quite hyper part, so I want to keep this. Actually there are quantities of 1/4 notes - the guitar and piano, so is it in this section. I think it's not overmap here.

wcx19911123

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Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-12-11T10:11:36+00:00

ticket

[General]
combo color 1 and 4 are nearly the same, they're really confusing to read. please change the color to meke them easier to be distinguished(changing the sequence is also a way)

[Easy]
01:34:192 - end the slider here? wound fit the song better(like what you did at 02:56:297 - )
03:00:402 (1) - hope you can change its direction, to make the starting be more closer to the center

[Normal]
AR is too high imo, 5~5.5 would be totally enough
03:14:455 (1) - start it at 03:14:297 - ? would fit the song better imo

[Hard]
04:26:297 - this note sounds too quiet, it doesn't fit the song well. please turn the volume up a bit

[Melt's Insane]
02:23:770 (5) - out of screen
03:09:560 - why not end the slider here? I don't see any other 1/4 rhythm before this one, and this one doesn't fit the song well imo
04:09:402 (1,2) - ctrl+g? flow can be better

[Insane]
02:03:323 (5) - this slider is hard to read when to start. it looks like that it starts at 02:03:402 - sometimes, it's confusing. I suggest to fix the spacng on 02:03:086 (4,5,1) - , to make the slider much closer to 02:03:086 (4) - rather than 02:03:560 (1) -
04:26:297 - same as Hard

call me back then

Zweib

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Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-12-11T13:47:41+00:00

All fixed! And so is Melt's Insane diff. (He asked me to do so)

And about

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Insane]
02:03:323 (5) - this slider is hard to read when to start. it looks like that it starts at 02:03:402 - sometimes, it's confusing. I suggest to fix the spacng on 02:03:086 (4,5,1) - , to make the slider much closer to 02:03:086 (4) - rather than 02:03:560 (1) -

I just moved (5) by a little though, if you regard it as a single circle(notice the position of slider head), the distance is ok

Thanks for modding!

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-12-11T15:28:37+00:00

bubbled

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2014-12-11T15:44:17+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
bubbled

no wcx. that has worng metadata/incorrect word. official site is NSFW so I could not post here sorry.

https://vndb.org/v12431

must move Sei Shojyo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~ to source from tags, this song from the game. and NOT "Sei Shoujo", the database had incorrect info.
~~maybe "Seishojo" without space~~
ignore this if you choose to remove from metadata.

Zweib wrote:
Hinsvar wrote:
Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria. Some guys suggested that remove the source because it's a 18+ game lol. Maybe not proper here.

should not use kanji title at least because it has strong inappropriate expression, but would be acceptable with romanized imo. (pls ask Japanese XATs before moving to qualified)

[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.should follow this rule. lyrics has "mature lyrics/theme".

pls fix

Last edited by NewRulerNA 2014-12-11T16:47:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Zweib

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Zweib 2014-12-11T16:33:21+00:00

Thank you NewRulerNA for consideration

I'll consult some XATs soon and deal with it asap.

Edit: after asked some BATs -

I keep the metadata temporarily, added +18 warning in the cw

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-12-26T17:56:56+00:00

the mapper removed some sliderslide hitosunds and changed a few patterns. map is checked and rebubbled

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2014-12-27T15:19:17+00:00

Recheck.

Hard

03:00:244 (4) - Spacing issue, make it consistent.

Melt's Insane

01:16:823 (4) - Add NC here to keep the same measure.

Insane

02:45:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I forgot to mention this stream too, there is nothing audible on blue ticks, avoid this stream.
04:11:692 (2,3,4,5) - same as ^

Call me back, and also, please confirm metadata.

Zweib

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Zweib 2014-12-30T18:48:59+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Recheck.

Hard
03:00:244 (4) - Spacing issue, make it consistent.

Melt's Insane
01:16:823 (4) - Add NC here to keep the same measure.

Insane
02:45:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I forgot to mention this stream too, there is nothing audible on blue ticks, avoid this stream. (4)and(6) were removed, but still used (1,2,3) to bring out the chorus?
04:11:692 (2,3,4,5) - same as ^ follow the piano?

Call me back, and also, please confirm metadata.

other all fixed, so is Melt's Insane

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2014-12-31T17:36:45+00:00

Fixed a few patterns.
Qualified, and Happy New Year ! o/

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