Vhy wrote:

BPM: 132.000
offset: 5410

Ikki KiDz wrote:

pas di bagian 3 / 4 spinner berturut2 itu terlalu cepet
susah buat dapetin perfectnya..
coba dikasih timing lebih pas dibagian itunya selebihnya bagus kok

IadzXenon wrote:

Thanks for modding, but for right now I'm focusing on playing than mapping. I'll reply your mod later. Sorry...

not94 wrote:

Insane Diff:
00:05:410 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe you shouldn't do so many circles, try sliders and blankets. I'll skip this for right now...
01:03:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ - ^
01:18:359 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I would also prefer large Jumps here. Jumping? All right...
00:26:318 (2) - make this slider half as long and use a reverse arrow I don't mind...
00:29:953 (2) - ^ - ^
01:24:268 (4,5,6) - this has to be a new combo Yes, you're right...
01:33:812 (10) - 01:44:493 (6) - youre right that is good to be faster.But please don't make it THAT fast. I don't know how to fix it... :/
01:58:137 place a circle here it sounds better Nope for now... :>
02:18:364 (1) - 02:31:535 (7) - in the last seconds you can do pretty high jumps. that makes the map more interesting. Yes you're right...
do some changes in the volume it sounds better ( kiai time could be louder) Allright...

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue ~

[General]
Every objects aren't snapped (maybe because of an offset or timing changed...) Yes you're right...
Japanese title : オワタP Ok...
Don't write "otawap" in the source and tags because it's already wrote for the artist. Same for the title of the song (in the tags) All right...

[Normal]
00:12:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Distance Snap I don't mind...
00:25:868 (6,7) - Blanket ? :

SPOILER

It's just a little blanket but no problem...
00:29:504 (8,9) - ^ No blanket...
00:46:321 (3,1,2,3) - Distance Snap Ooppss... :3
00:49:048 (1) - Ugly
I don't think so...
01:07:229 (1) - Place this circle at x:176 y:208 All right...
01:07:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance Snap (and don't forget to move up a little bit the (4) for a good square patern) Yes you're right...
01:11:775 (2,3) - Blanket ? Okay...
01:12:683 (3,4) - Distance Snap All right...
01:20:409 (4,5,1) - ^ - ^
01:24:955 (5) - x:184 y:72 All right...
01:25:409 (1,2) - Blanket

SPOILER

All right , but i changed by mine... :3
01:31:318 (6,7) - ^ - ^
01:32:682 - Break time in a Kiai Time ? Weird xD I don't know how to fix it, I don't know where I must place a break. But I hope this allowed...

[Hard]
01:21:317 (8,1) - Blanket ? No blanket...
01:31:089 (6,7) - Distance Snap I don't mind, it's okay just have some jumping right?

[Insane]
00:05:637 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange Patern =/ Yes you're right...
00:08:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ I don't think so for this because I don't know how to change it, Ill keep mine...
01:03:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - But I like this one ^w^ Thanks...
01:08:814 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Messy Yeah I know it's messy but I won't change it...

Hope it'll be helpful =3

IadzXenon wrote:

But please note that my name is IadzXenon not IdazXenon :/ . Please change it in your modding queue, it's sound isn't nice...

IadzXenon wrote:

01:32:682 - Break time in a Kiai Time ? Weird xD I don't know how to fix it, I don't know where I must place a break. But I hope this allowed...

Kenterz9 wrote:

IadzXenon wrote:

But please note that my name is IadzXenon not IdazXenon :/ . Please change it in your modding queue, it's sound isn't nice...

Oops, really sorry xD

IadzXenon wrote:

01:32:682 - Break time in a Kiai Time ? Weird xD I don't know how to fix it, I don't know where I must place a break. But I hope this allowed...

I think it's okay, just strange ^w^

HabiHolic wrote:

[Normal]

00:07:228 (5) - NC Here Rhythm flow Ok...
00:10:864 (5) - ^ - ^
00:12:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What distance is the difference? Tune in to the constant distance is unrankble Ouh, I'm understand now...
00:50:864 (1) - Delete the spinner looks better idea of ​​keeping notes I don't mind... :>
00:54:500 (1) - ^ - ^
00:59:955 - add note please Rhythm flow I'll skip for this time...
01:22:682 (2) - Suggestions for good eye look Reference photo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1206575 I think so...
01:32:682 - why this berak time? mapping please 01:39:500-this far I don't know how to fill it, for this I need BAT. If this allowed for break, I'll skip this...
01:39:955 (1,1,1,1) - all delete spiner Please make clear the part and then back to Yes just a spinner make this strange, but same reason, I don't know how to fill it...
01:46:546 (1,2) - don't like patten this batter Reference photo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1206585 I don't mind... :>


[Hard]

00:58:137 (10) - NC Please Ok...
00:59:955 - add note Same reason, I'll skip for this time
01:00:182 (1) - ctrl + g Oopps...
01:04:500 (6) - NC All right...
01:07:910 (5) - ^ - ^
01:11:546 (5) - ^ - ^

I'm disappointed in your map. Do not fit the layout of the map is not recommended intervals. This bitmap needs to be improved for Yeah I think so. I'm newmapper here and this is my first map. So I don't have much Experience... :/

Good Luck

IadzXenon wrote:

HabiHolic wrote:

01:39:955 (1,1,1,1) - all delete spiner Please make clear the part and then back to Yes just a spinner make this strange, but same reason, I don't know how to fill it... Now I have idea to fill this...

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi Hi...

Mod from French Modding Team :p

[Normal]

00:19:500 (1) - They are stack but the spacing is good ! Can you make something new ? Emh it's too hard for me to make new...
00:59:955 - Add a note ? Yeah like HabiHolic asked before to flow rhythm. But I prefer to add slider in 00:59:500 to 00:59:728... :>

That's all I found but I find it a little bit hard for a normal :3

[Hard]
00:09:046 (1) - Wrong spacing ( I think) It's hard for me to change it...
01:13:591 (6) - You should reverse it Make slider shorter than reverse it? I don't mind... :>
01:32:228 (7) - Too far ( wrong spacing) No problem just add some jumping right...
02:16:319 (10) - Use new combo ? Ooppsss...
02:32:228 (7) - Too far ( wrong spacing) Same reason, I want make some jumping...


[Insane]
01:17:682 (1) - Make it more simple ! It's hard for me to change it...

Yeah if I change some pattern then I need to remap. It's hard for me...


That's all I found again

Nicce beatmap and nice song! Ahh thank you very much...
Hope the best for you !
Good luck ! Thanks...

1. remove "vocaloid" from source
   it is no problem even if source is blank about vocaloid's song
   https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r= ... aloid&m=-1
2. BG size should be 800x600
3. it is hard to play because skinning colour is similar to BG
   I recommend to change the colour of hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, at least

1. for normal diff, you use too many circles. I recommend to change several circles into slider
2. OD -1
3. for normal diff, avoid overlap as far as posibble.
   for example, 00:08:137 (3,2) - , 00:18:137 (5,1) - are not good
4. 00:44:500 (3) - curve more gently
5. 01:32:682~01:39:955- avoid setting Kiai-Time on break-time (apply to other diffs)
6. 01:45:410 (1) - very hard for beginner because of short spinner

1. 00:19:500~00:34:046- repeated similar patterns are boring
2. 00:40:637 (3,4,1) - avoid this overlap
3. 00:45:182 (1,2,3,4) - many circle's stack like this is boring and easy. it is better not to use too mach

1. 01:08:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to see. I recommend to avoid overlap
2. 01:32:682~01:46:773- SV 2.0x is too rapid...

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. remove "vocaloid" from source
   it is no problem even if source is blank about vocaloid's song
   https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r= ... aloid&m=-1 Ouh, all right...
2. BG size should be 800x600 Oopss I never check this...
3. it is hard to play because skinning colour is similar to BG
   I recommend to change the colour of hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, at least All right...

[Normal]

1. for normal diff, you use too many circles. I recommend to change several circles into slider I'll try to minimalizier this...
2. OD -1 Ok...
3. for normal diff, avoid overlap as far as posibble.
   for example, 00:08:137 (3,2) - , 00:18:137 (5,1) - are not good I don't mind :> . Overlap as far as possible didn't make between note are very far right?
4. 00:44:500 (3) - curve more gently Fixed...
5. 01:32:682~01:39:955- avoid setting Kiai-Time on break-time (apply to other diffs) Skipped for this time. If this allowed and rankable I wouldn't change this. For this I'll asked BAT...
6. 01:45:410 (1) - very hard for beginner because of short spinner Hmhmhmhm yes you're right if I think again, hard for begginer player...

[Hard]

1. 00:19:500~00:34:046- repeated similar patterns are boring I agree...
2. 00:40:637 (3,4,1) - avoid this overlap Same reason, nope... :>
3. 00:45:182 (1,2,3,4) - many circle's stack like this is boring and easy. it is better not to use too mach Yes you're right...

[Insane]

1. 01:08:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to see. I recommend to avoid overlap Same reason again, I don't mind, and mostly because this is insane...
2. 01:32:682~01:46:773- SV 2.0x is too rapid... Emh, yes like not94 asked before, this is too fast, now I changed my mind. But this is make me to should remap... :/

if you adjust hitsound-volume, your map become enjoyable, imo Yes I'm waiting for my friend to give volume suggest...
~Good Luck~ Thanks very much...

Winek wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue!

[General]
You don't need to write the name of the song in the tags. Ouh ok...
Your skin is very imcomplete, try at least to make sliderb and reversearrow. Ok . But it's hard for me to make own sliderball design. Or do you have any idea?

[Normal]
00:59:955 - Avoid skipping Downbeat like that I won't change this beatmap type into a flow rythm...
01:09:046 (1) - Maybe Remove NC that fits more the music Oppss...
01:56:319 (5) - NC - ^
There are parts you leave with too much circles. It won't kill you to modify some to sliders. I'll thinking about that...

[Hard]
00:05:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This type of thing are REAAALY repetitive.... Try expending some sliders, transofrm to circles, wathever what. I have think hardly to make that patterns and I think it's so ok so I won't change it...
00:59:955 - Place circles here? Like previous reason, I won't follow the rythm...
01:58:137 - ^ - ^
01:32:228 (7) - May I suggest you NC? Nope :> . But I'm already to make new combo on 02:32:228 to make some variety...

Hopes it helps. Btw, i see nothing on Insane, sry. No problems, anyway thanks for modding...

Feith wrote:

hai...hai...
I'm from Modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/uuevfz3q46d9

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on the standard monitor size
- change little bit of object timing
- deleting the first Kiai Time, because that time is not perfect for Kiai Time

mod that has not been in uploaded file:
please change the artist to "Kagamine Len" and put "OwataP" to Tags

that is all from me

thank you for request

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi from my queue ~

[General]

1. I think 2nd kiai time should begin at 01:03:591 - 01:32:228 - I won't change, I think it's better to keep mine...

[Hard]

1. 01:32:682 - why keep empty after ? It make strange :< Yes it's strange but still allowed, I've ask BAT...
2. 01:58:137 - feel like miss the lyrics here If you charmer, it's no lyric them. You can hear vocal "i" on 01:58:250, and it's not possible to add note there...

[Insane]

1. 00:11:546(4,5,6) - Do you sure you want to do like this pattern ? seems it's not very good to read.
   Just point out to be a reference It is the challenge you know!
2. 00:42:000(2) - suggest to make this slider straight to be symmetry with (1) I'll think about that...
3. 01:05:637(1,2,3) - How about some pattern like this ?
   
   SPOILER

   
   symmetry with 01:05:182(1,2,3) - , seems it will be much beatiful Ahh you're genius . Why I can't found that's Idea... :/
4. 01:09:728(4,5,6) - seems you can overlapping (4) with 01:08:932(2) -
   and (5) with 01:09:387(2) -
   current's is some mess Hmhmhmh agree...
   
   EX

   
5. 01:58:137 - Add a note to follow the lyrics ? Same reason as hard diff...
6. 02:09:728(7,8) - this slider overlapping is so confuse
   try to make it slant some Same reason, it's the challenge... ;>
   
   EX

   
7. 02:13:364(7,8) - ^ - ^
8. 02:20:637(1,2) - ^ - ^
9. 02:24:273(1,2) - ^ - ^

Ah.... I think you can attention on pattern in your map
cus BPM is low , and seems you just follow distance spacing , it will be some depressing druing plaing
try to do some jump or some special design ~
maybe note it after Hmhmhm yes you're right, I just follow distance snap in Insane sure it's make boringable...

believe you can improve it more >.O All right...

Good luck ~Thanks...

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[Normal]
01:32:682 - kiai during break even if it's in the other diffs i would suggest removing it I've ask BAT, it's still allowed...
01:46:773 (1) - this note goes off to close to spinner. perhaps remove it or shorten the spinner to 01:46:319 I'm confused, clash with RandomEffect mod, he ask me to extend it before... :'(
Not that all bad for a normal Nice to hear, thanks...

[Hard]
00:41:546 to 00:44:273 - i feel that the sliders could be spaced out a bit. having them end and start at the same spot gets repetitive Hmhmhm you're right...
01:12:682 (2) - this overlaps awkwardly with (1,2,3,4) perhaps move it over or put (2) in the same spot as them My aim is for make cilcular (1,2,3,4) so I keep mine...
01:25:182 (1) - flip vertically so that it creates a blanket. looks nicer Me too...
01:32:682 - that kiai suggestion applies here Same reason...
02:03:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this combo goes on for a while. maybe split them in half Fixed
02:07:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^ - ^
02:14:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^ - ^

[Insane]
00:07:455 (1,2,3) - this is a bit hard to read. perhaps space this out. it also give (4,5,6) a more clearer sight It's the challenge... :>
00:07:910 (4) - NC No, because (1,2,3,4,5,6) follow "Parajikurorobenzene" lyrics here so I won't change it...
00:11:546 (4) - NC - ^
00:15:182 (4) - NC - ^
00:23:364 to 00:26:318 - these all go off at the same spot. to avoid repetition. space them apart from each other
00:27:000 to 00:29:954 - ^ applies here to I'll only apply to 00:27:000 to 00:29:954 only to make variation... :>
01:06:091 (4) - NC Same reason...
01:09:728 (4) - ^ - ^

Thats all. nice map Thank you very much...

Mystima wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue


Normal:
00:59:955 - a hitsound is missing here Yes music beat is up but no problem I think...
01:41:091 (3) - and 01:42:910 (3) - i would move these hitsounds 1/4 to the right (blue) Whoaa nice idea you're pretty smart... ;D
01:44:500 (3) - same principle as before, i would extend this slider 1/4 to the right (end on blue) - ^ :>

Hard: *

Insane: *

Overall: good map Nice to hear, thanks...

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue...

Well, I will try to refrain from posting too much style-changing comments in my mod, but let me be honest here, I don't really enjoy the, albeit unique, style of your map (reminds me of some soulfear maps, for example this http://osu.ppy.sh/b/66465, but fear's mapping fits the music much more than yours). It's interesting at first but soon gets boring due to the monotonous repeat of the same rhythmic structure, which is due partially to the music itself but I do think there're space for improvement. Will try to suggest some ideas but merely suggestions, as I've no idea how to map with this style you are using.

Alright no more random bs.

[General]
Seems fine.

[Insane]
Suggest CS-1, as I feel that the map is a bit too empty with CS5. Also, CS5 makes a lot of triplets really hard to click, especially with hard rock.

SPOILER

No, because CS chronological with other diff. Yes you're right looks too empty but no problem here. Yes hard for click and especially if use hard rock mod, no problem because it's the challenge...

This diff is way too random for you, seems that you are just putting whatever pattern that you think of. The link between the pattern and the music is quite weak imo. Also you don't have to make a pattern for all triplets in the vocal, could use something different (you could probably have a look at Yousei Teikoku's Asgard, which have three ranked versions, may be inspiring I feel.) Heheheh... :>

00:06:546 (1,2,3) - inconstant spacing. Happens a lot afterwards so I won't repeat this for every single case. You probably need to check and make sure the spacing is constant (1.0x) for all the triplets of this kind. No problem here, it's really sure I use distance snap consistency...
00:09:500 (3,1) - the spacing here is way too extreme, which doesn't fit well as there's no obvious "jump" in the music Ooops you're right, doesn't fit the music well... :>
00:10:409 (3,1) - ^ - ^
00:10:864 (3,1) - ^ - ^
00:11:546 (4,5,6) - pretty weird overlap, suggest removing it.
00:11:773 (6) - actually two syllable within this slider. the first one ends at the red line. Suggesting replacing it with a slider + a cirlce. Also, curved slider may fit the vocal better.
00:15:410 (6) - ^
00:20:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - fix spacing and make sure that the curves are smooth No problem about spacing here But I fix the circle...
00:26:318 (3,4) - expect a slider here due to the vocal You're genious! Why I can delay about this... :/
0 0:29:954 (3,4) - ^ - ^
00:33:364 (7,8) - ^ - ^
00:36:091 (1,2) - for this part you are using both curved and straight sliders, but I can tell the difference of them as the vocal the correspond to are quite the same. Will suggesting using only one type of sliders.
00:34:728 (1,2,3,4) - try make some geometric shape out of it, e.g. a kite or something like that. current arrangement is quite messy. You may also considering some jumps for 3 & 4, like you did for 00:40:864 (5,6,7), as the vocal does suggest jumps.
00:36:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:37:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:455 (3,4,5,6,7) - you may considering using some overlapping patterns. Arranging everything is a line/curve gets boring. The vocal at 00:42:682 (5,6,7) do suggest some back n' forth jumps (due to the pitch of the first and third note being identical).
00:43:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:50:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make sure the curve is smooth. Anyways this plays kinda weirdly, don't know how to change though. Ok fixed...
00:54:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use curved sliders as you did previously. No, I want to make variation...
00:59:955 - missing circle No, in this map I follow the singer only. And you can see the max combo is pass 880x so I won't change it whoever ask me sorry...
01:02:455 (3) - straight slider?
01:20:864 (3,4) - slider Ok...
01:24:387 (2,3,4) - ^ - ^
01:31:773 (3,1) - ^ - ^
01:33:819 (10) - like this slider, fits the music well Thanks...
01:58:137 - mussing circle You know right?
02:06:091 (7,8) - that overlap... well I like such overlap in, e.g. Rin's Utatabigarasu, but I'm not fond of the overlap here, perhaps because the vocal here is not as surprising.

I will stop here. Can't really continue modding as the map is getting annoying.

You should really check your map and fix obvious spacing issues first. Also try to make more interesting pattern that fit the music better (I know this is a really generic statement, but I can't think of a better way to say this). Yes you're right I think this beatmap especially for insane diff is boringable. I should remap to make new pattern...

Feel free to ask me for a recheck if you feel satisfied with the map yourself. Thanks I appreciated it . I'll ask you to recheck later...

Sorry if some words are kinda rude. No problem, you've give appologize...

No Dap wrote:

Mod request from modding Q

[General]
I don't know if 800 x 589 BG is acceptable Ooops maybe some wrong when I change it's BG.... Double check
fill out source. Halllah why I should forgot to change background source orz... :/ (I think Kagamine Rin, Len sang this, if I'm not mistaken)

[Normal]
00:18:137 (5,1) - they overlapped, and look ugly I don't mind... :>
00:19:500 (1,3) - ^ Ok for this, looks ugly...
00:44:500 (3) - [img]http://puu.sh/6MBTw.jpg It's look ugly...
00:47:228 (1,3) - blanket Fixed...
01:13:137 (4,1) - overlapped No problem I guess...
01:18:591 (2) - remove curve and make it parallel to 01:19:500 (3) - It's okay for me...
01:24:046 (4) - remove curve - ^
around 01:30:000 you don't have any notes during KIAI time.. Sure for break time...
01:41:205 (3) - Normal Players usually can't distinguish blue tick notes. Use a slider like 01:44:500 (3) Great idea... :>
01:43:023 (3) - ^ - ^
01:57:682 (4,5,1,2,3) - Also, 01:58:364 (1,2,3) - overlapped No problem I guess...
02:23:591 (1) - I have the feeling, from this note the difficulty goes up pretty high. Oh well, I guess it's ok You're right. Congratulations you got 100 point!

[Hard]
00:32:910 (6,7) - blanket better Hmhmhm looks nice
01:40:410 (1,1,1,1) - these spinners might piss off some people.. I've extend all to blue line Except the last spinner...
02:14:273 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make go in different directions
I doubt if this is DT'ble lol. Because I've no any idea to change it. But I'll think later...

[Insane]
Too hard. That is all to say. I'm sorry No problem this diff is confusing indeed...

Hope it helped ><

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2 modding queue
==General==
Circle a bit too dark...

==Insane==
-- Combo Problem --
00:40:182 (1) - No point to new combo Opps... :>
01:18:364 (1) - ^ - ^
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
-- Other(S) --
00:18:819 (1,2,3,1) - I think it will cover the finish of the slider and make it unrankable Beat is far enough to slider so no problem there...
00:26:319 (3,1,2,3) - Slider cover notes this time :3 Okay for this because beat from slider is near away...
00:59:955 Missing note? Since music soft there, I won't do it is better, doesn't fit the music imo...
01:32:682 If you need to increase the spead of the slider, you should make a warnning... (Old style modding, but i dont know now) I'll think later. If I don't need to make warning I'll skip it...

==Hard==
-- Combo Problem --
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
-- Other(S) --
00:35:864 (4,1,2) - This pattern is kind of missy for player... Stack leniency is the answer, so I won't change it...
00:49:728 Why you No vocal there and more fit the music...
02:01:546 (1,2,3,4) - make 3,4 the same distnace with 1,2 No, doesn't fit the music well...


==OVERALL==
LIKE :
DisLIKE :
A bit boring for the same pattern of the map..
Smae pattern of the song cant make a better map X_X I can't fix this since this song has a same rythmic structure so nothing I can't do besides make same pattern...

BIG GOOD LUCK! I hope so...

1. normal diff should be showed as 3 or under 3 star rating
2. change a clear and beautiful background, it is very important you know!
3. suggest only leave 2 combo colors for this map, red and yellow. that makes your map easier to read.

1. 01:21:319 (5) - spacing 0.5
2. 01:25:410 (1,2) - spacing 1.14
3. 02:26:773 (1,2) - overlap + 1.34spacing it is hard to read for beginner
4. 01:32:682 - do not put kiai during breaktime it is un

1. 00:36:091 (1,2) - you should know it is unreadable in hidden mode why? because how player discern hitpoint at 00:36:091 (1) - head or tail? plz change it
2. 00:50:637 (1) - spinner here is too short, it may disturb player's rhythm.
3. 00:51:774 (1) - it is confusing, you did not map note at red tick, and this slider also break player's rhythm
4. 00:55:410 (1) - ^ (may change to 3 short slider,imo
5. 01:03:364 (1,2,3,4) - it is confusing too, plz separate them, it is a bad flow (would not be recognized by bat
6. 01:32:682 - do not put kiai during breaktime it is un
7. 02:09:728 (5,6) - it is unreadable in hidden mode, 5 and 6 would show out at the same time but you do a overlap here
8. 02:21:319 (9,1) - ^

1. enjoyable map~ just something should point out, It is playable D: and SS is not very hard
   
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2. you should open aimod and fix unsnap notes
3. 00:52:000 (6,7) - spacing should be fixed,it is too big jump but no loud sound here for so big jump,00:52:228 (7) - move to(200,360
4. 01:02:455 (3) - slider too bent
5. 01:09:273 (1,2) - suggesting change to 3 circles, because you mapped it with 80% overlap, it is very hard to see the note.
6. 01:09:728 (3) - and this one, suggest to change in 2 circles, for tidy as 01:13:364 (4,5,6) - done
7. 01:14:841 (3) - ^
8. 01:39:955 (1) - long slider after 01:39:955 - is not suitable for 2.0xbpm, you should reduce the sv to keep the slider slowly
9. 02:28:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - they are too "normal" in this diff

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lol ... another 1st map..
[General]

1. normal diff should be showed as 3 or under 3 star rating I'll try to reduce it
2. change a clear and beautiful background, it is very important you know! Did you mean I must change background into the better? If yes then I disagree. I think it's a very simple image also I can't found better than current...
3. suggest only leave 2 combo colors for this map, red and yellow. that makes your map easier to read. No I love those color also no problem if the note easier to read...

[Normal]

1. 01:21:319 (5) - spacing 0.5 Fixed...
2. 01:25:410 (1,2) - spacing 1.14 - ^
3. 02:26:773 (1,2) - overlap + 1.34spacing it is hard to read for beginner I change by mine...
4. 01:32:682 - do not put kiai during breaktime it is un No, I have read the ranking criteria and I see no regard about break in kiai time. Also I've ask BAT and it's still allowed...

[Hard]

1. 00:36:091 (1,2) - you should know it is unreadable in hidden mode why? because how player discern hitpoint at 00:36:091 (1) - head or tail? plz change it Stack leniency is the answer. Stack leniency is good enough for me and not so confusing...
2. 00:50:637 (1) - spinner here is too short, it may disturb player's rhythm. I don't mind... :>
3. 00:51:774 (1) - it is confusing, you did not map note at red tick, and this slider also break player's rhythm No problem, I follow the vocal...
4. 00:55:410 (1) - ^ (may change to 3 short slider,imo It's will increase diff...
5. 01:03:364 (1,2,3,4) - it is confusing too, plz separate them, it is a bad flow (would not be recognized by bat Same reason as your mod at 00:36:091
6. 01:32:682 - do not put kiai during breaktime it is un Sure you know...
7. 02:09:728 (5,6) - it is unreadable in hidden mode, 5 and 6 would show out at the same time but you do a overlap here You're right, I'll change later
8. 02:21:319 (9,1) - ^ - ^

[Insane]

1. enjoyable map~ just something should point out, It is playable D: and SS is not very hard Nice to hear so most player can enjoy this map imo. Thanks for testplay...
   
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2. you should open aimod and fix unsnap notes Oooopsss... c:
3. 00:52:000 (6,7) - spacing should be fixed,it is too big jump but no loud sound here for so big jump,00:52:228 (7) - move to(200,360 Emh, maybe it's just a mistake when I mapping...
4. 01:02:455 (3) - slider too bent You're right, looks not good...
5. 01:09:273 (1,2) - suggesting change to 3 circles, because you mapped it with 80% overlap, it is very hard to see the note. I'll think later...
6. 01:09:728 (3) - and this one, suggest to change in 2 circles, for tidy as 01:13:364 (4,5,6) - done - ^
7. 01:14:841 (3) - ^ - ^
8. 01:39:955 (1) - long slider after 01:39:955 - is not suitable for 2.0xbpm, you should reduce the sv to keep the slider slowly No, I think the slider speed fit the singer well...
9. 02:28:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - they are too "normal" in this diff I don't mind... :>

that's all, good luck
sorry for edit many times, i might feel tired when modding Thanks for mod . But you shouldn't constrain yourself. Don't hurried when modding. A good mod is take more than one days so you can mod in detail and useful for users. As my mod on your map, I take it 3 days (but I don't think it's a good mod since I don't much helped you).