1. Easy (2.44 stars, 189 notes)
2. Hard (4.97 stars, 475 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 682 notes)
4. Normal (3.49 stars, 223 notes)

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod time

General
you should use more hit sounds YES
http://puu.sh/5rPas
here my hit sounds set. please use it if you want YES THANKS
http://puu.sh/5wUC9.jpg
Your map need a Normal diff I will make a normal diff ok


Insane
00:09:294 - add note YES
00:12:294 (3,4) - Ctr+G YES
00:13:399 (3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/5wQAJ.jpg YES
00:14:820 (9) - NC and remove 00:15:294 (1) YES
00:17:978 (3,4) - make a stream ? YES
00:19:241 (3,4) - ctr+G YES
00:26:505 (3,4) - please use 1/2 slider at first. YES
00:27:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - noisy use volume 40%~50% YES
00:28:162 (1) - remove nc and add next note YES
00:33:294 (5,6) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/5wQUY.jpg YES
00:37:399 (5,6,7) - you know what i want to say YES
00:48:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try any stream pattern YES
00:51:768 (1,2,3,4) - ^ YES
01:27:452 (3) - please fix to stack YES
01:35:347 (3) - make better brancket http://puu.sh/5wR5q.jpg YES
01:36:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - noisy YES
01:45:768 (7,8,9) - I like this jump pattern Thanks

02:03:294 (7) - make better brancket http://puu.sh/5wRgI.jpg YES
02:03:294 (7,8,9,10,11) - try this http://puu.sh/5wRlB.jpg YES
02:11:662 (1) - D: Fixed
02:37:478 (10,11) - http://puu.sh/5wRqq.jpg YES
02:50:189 (6) - move more right http://puu.sh/5wRti.jpg YES
03:15:294 (10) - move this http://puu.sh/5wRwm.jpg YES

Hard
00:09:768 (4) - fix to stack YES
00:17:031 (10) - remove reverse and put a note YES
00:19:241 (5) - stack YES
01:07:873 (6,1,2,3) - try this ? http://puu.sh/5wTyu.jpg YES
01:39:294 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/5wTC0.jpg YES
01:43:399 (2) - stack on 01:42:452 (6) - YES
01:47:031 (1) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/5wTFj.jpg YES
01:48:294 (3) - ^ YES
01:50:820 (7) - ^ YES
01:56:505 (4) - delete way point YES
01:58:557 (9) - stack on (7) http://puu.sh/5wTIU.jpg YES

Easy
you should more separate to new combo.
00:18:610 (1) - move to center and it make more easier for beginners. http://puu.sh/5wTX5.jpg YES
00:56:189 (4) - stack on 00:56:189 (4) - YES
02:02:189 (4) - dont touch to HP bar YES
02:06:294 (8) - move to this http://puu.sh/5wUjF.jpg YES
02:12:294 (1,2,3) - bake better brancket http://puu.sh/5wUo9.jpg YES

tellertheworld wrote:

[Insane]

open

Don't follow voice and speech in the same map.

00:17:347 - to 00:18:531 - circle here Ok I add stream
01:13:399 - to 01:14:189 - ^ Ok I add stream
like than
00:30:926 (3) - slider here This is already a slider
00:49:241 - circle here I don't think its needed
00:55:715 (7) - circle here Ok
00:55:873 - slider here (2/4) Ok
01:08:347 - slider here (2/4) I think circle is fine here
01:08:505 - delete ^
01:08:347 (6) - circle here You said make this a slider up there ^ ?
02:09:768 - silder here (2/4) Ok
02:09:926 - delete Ok
02:35:031 - to 02:52:636 - plaese try to use piano to set your map because it is the map focus. Ok I tried to map more to piano
03:15:926 - circle here Ok
03:16:083 - slider here (2/4) Ok

hope it can help you~
03:16:241 (2) - delete

Ok

Thanks so much for mod

open

something wrong when I modding...
01:08:347 (6) - circle here You said make this a slider up there ^ ? (DETELE)
00:49:241 - circle here I don't think its needed ↓

00:30:926 (3) - slider here This is already a slider ↓


I feel better than after~ Strive!
Please try~ (No KD)

tellertheworld wrote:

Thanks so much for mod

open

something wrong when I modding...
01:08:347 (6) - circle here You said make this a slider up there ^ ? (DETELE)
00:49:241 - circle here I don't think its needed ↓

00:30:926 (3) - slider here This is already a slider ↓


I feel better than after~ Strive!
Please try~ (No KD)

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XMPPwocky wrote:

Mod completed

INSANE

1. 00:19:556 (4) - Very hard to read on first playthrough, I feel like it messes up the nice flow the song + map have. The music doesn't stop, neither should the cursor. Consider moving it either to 232x260 (which "zig-zags" and makes reading 5 easier), or 108x348, which creates a jump to 00:19:715 (5) -OK, fixed it
2. 00:26:820 (4) - ^ same thing OK
3. 02:45:057 (6,7) - looks a little too much like a single note, consider moving 7 out a bit (156x212?) OK
4. 02:50:110 (5,6) - ^ same thing OK
5. 02:51:689 (7,8) - ^ same thing again OK

HARD

1. initial few combos seem a little long for a hard, but that's stylistic and drain's not too ridiculous so it's cool Fixed, added more NC
2. 00:29:505 (10) - NC here, reads better OK
3. 00:29:662 (1) - and naturally no NC here OK
4. 01:15:136 (4,5) - Should these stack? I suspect you could do a neat "triple" with the slider 6 as the 3rd note: 4 to 185x203, 5 to 203x135, 7 to 224x68 Yes it is okay, I want this diff to have no stream notes, triplets since its already quite high bpm
5. 02:08:505 (5) - NC? OK
6. 02:11:662 (10) - NC? OK
7. 02:20:662 (8) - NC again? OK
8. 02:59:820 (8) - a bit hard to read, perhaps move to 56x180? No it's is fine
9. 03:11:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - long combo, split? OK
10. 03:23:031 (1) - spinner seems a little unnecessary, but not super out-of-place so leave it if you want It's fine

NORMAL

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  01:54:610 (5,6,7) - you had the opportunity for the two sliders to nicely blanket the middle beat but you didn't take it? I think its okay
  02:43:873 (4,5) - rhythm seems to "skip" between these two, move to full beat spacing? (5 at 2:44:820) OK

EASY

1. 00:11:031 (5,6) - aesthetic, but 6 seems to collide with 5's track. move 6 like one or two pixels to the left? OK
2. 00:23:662 (1,2) - 1's end doesn't line up with 2's start in a nice way- curve 1, maybe? OK
3. 01:44:189 (5,6) - the piano does a neat little sweep here that you might want to map to? a few other spots as well It's easy diff so not too much map, I think this long slider is okay
4. 03:24:610 (1,2,3,4) - you set up what could be a nice repeating rhythm, but then just have nothing for an entire bar I have changed the whole part to a spinner now, it matches the long hold note

1. BG quality is too low. try to use it.　a little good quality better than current one.
   
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1. 00:33:294 - Add note? I felt that empty here.
2. 00:35:978 (5) - Add clap to slider end.
3. 00:39:610 (3) - Try use to copy to (2) slider. and Ctrl+H,J looks better IMO.
   
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4. 00:52:873 - Add note and try jump placement pattern here.
5. 00:55:872 (2) - Remove whistle to slider end.
6. 01:02:821 (4) - (nazi) Move to 1 grid right. Stack to 01:02:031 (1) -
7. 02:00:294 - Why you don't make stream this part D: like a 00:51:768 - here.
8. 02:47:268 (2) - Remove this note. piano sound start is 02:47:347 - here.
9. 02:48:452 (8) - Add finish to slider end.
10. 03:02:820 (1,2,3,4) - Add some hitsounds?
11. 03:06:768 - Add note.
    
    ah.. I really don't understand your NC pattern.

1. 00:43:873 (1) - Add NC.
2. 02:17:031 (8) - Add clap to slider head.
3. 02:49:005 - I felt that don't need break time. it is weird.
4. 03:06:610 (6) - Remove clap to slider end. not found sound here.
5. 03:07:241 (1) - ^

1. 00:39:452 (2) - hidden slider overall by 00:38:189 (4) - this slider. so you should change to another way
   
   well done compared to other diffs.

1. SV1.00 same the Normal diff..? I recommend set SV0,80.
2. 00:48:926 (1) - Rhythm suggestion. like this?
   
   
3. 01:47:031 - I think that 0,75x green line is don't need in Easy diff.
4. 01:57:136 (5) - same as 00:48:926 (1) -
5. 02:52:715 - same as 01:47:031 -

Multipoke wrote:

This is all a first impression go through of everything.

http://puu.sh/5BhgT.osr First playthrough

Only doing Insane because I haven't played any of the other difficulties nor enough to map a good one to give good feedback (and laziness/time because of finals)

00:26:347 (2) - I don't understand how this fits the music, maybe it's just me. I think its okay
00:53:347 (1) - The music stops, so I feel that more distance or having it right at where the last tick stopped is much more appropriate. This distance feels weird to me. Fixed, i put ctrl + h
01:34:083 (1,2,3) - Personally, this whole blue section seems very weird to me. I think having the first slider bounce back feels better, a slider from the white tick where the repeat is at now to the next white tick, and having 2 circles follow that on the white ticks. If you don't like this, I'd still say remove the second slider and put a single circle instead. ***Actually this sounds fine when I turned on hitsounds, so I dunno. Fixed

smallboat wrote:

Hi,I'm late~! sorry >_< form req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Stack Leniency suggest don"t adjust it.(Default is 7). Fixed
2.Letterbox remember select it,because you have the break time. Fixed

[Easy] Notice blanket.

00:21:136 (4) - Notice the DS.(0.78x change to 0.90x.) Fixed
00:24:926 (3) - Make a good pattren : Fixed

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00:31:557 (5) - Be a arc : Fixed

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00:33:768 (1,3) - Blanket is bad,I suggest replace it. Fixed I Think
01:00:926 (3,5) - Can be a symmetry,imo. Fixed
01:27:768 (2) - (360|124),too close it. Fixed
01:33:136 (4) - Suggest blanket it : Fixed

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01:59:031 (1,2) - Be a symmetry or (1) blanket (2) slider head? Fixed
02:06:926 (1) - Blanket bad.(or move (296|384) be a arc?) Fixed, moved to (296|384)
02:14:189 (3) - ^ Fixed
03:11:978 (1) - Feel overlap,not a good pattern. Fixed
03:14:820 (5,6) - Be a symmetry? 03:14:820 (5) -
03:17:978 (1,2,3) - Suggest make a good pattern : 03:14:820 (5) -

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[Normal] Notice blanket,too.

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00:18:610 (1) - Slider head +finish. (Suggest add green line turn up the volume.) Fixed
00:28:715 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:38:820 (1,2,3,4) - Feel a bit overlap or too close,imo.(Suggest enlarge the space.) I might change if more people say
01:34:083 (1) - The middle +finish? Fixed
01:36:926 (1) - Slider head +finish. Fixed
01:41:662 (2) - The middle +finish? Fixed
01:56:505 (7) - Blanket (6)? Fixed
02:05:662 (6) - Blanket (1)? Fixed
03:22:083 (7) - Add a note? Fixed

[Hard]

00:22:241 (5) - Move to (256|236),and ctrl+g,better flow. Fixed
00:23:031 (3) - Recommended ctrl+g. Fixed
00:23:662 (1) - Slider stack bad. ? What slider stack
00:25:873 (2) - Move to (240|88),good pattern and better flow. Fixed
00:49:873 (1) - Ctrl+g is better flow.(Make a small jump,too.) Fixed
00:59:820 (2) - Slider head stack 00:58:873 (6) ? Fixed
01:04:083 (6) - Recommded slider head stack 01:02:505 (1) slider head. Fixed
01:05:031 (2) - Flow not good,recommended use ctrl+g is better flow and make a jump. Fixed
01:06:452 (1) - Stack bad. Fixed
01:11:189 (8,9) - Be symmetry. 01:11:189 (8) - Fixed
01:16:241 (7) - Stack bad. Fixed
01:47:031 (1) - You reduce speed is here,then,why is the 00:38:505 (1) part no reduce speed here? (I think this part can reduce it. ) Fixed
01:52:241 (1) - You plus speed is here,so I feel the 00:43:873 (7) should be plus speed is here,in the same rhythm. Fixed
01:56:820 (5) - Ctrl+g is better flow. Fixed
02:05:505 (3) - (44|160)? Fixed
02:17:662 (1,2,3) - Fixed

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02:52:715 (1) - Slider head +finish Fixed
02:57:768 (1,2) - Stack crooked off. Fixed
03:03:294 (2) - NC,because plus the speed,or,unrankable. Fixed, but I might have to change? Sudden sv change not allow?
03:03:768 (3) - ^
03:04:241 (4) - ^
03:27:294 (5) - and 03:27:768 (1) ,all use ctrl+g,is better flow,I recommended it. Fixed

[Insane] Error: Fixed

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00:14:347 (7) - (152|24)? Fixed
00:14:505 (8) - Slider end stack 00:14:820 (9) slider head? Fixed
00:15:294 (1,2) - Ctrl+g? Fixed
00:21:452 (5) - (112|264)? Fixed
00:32:031 (5) - Ctrl+g? Fixed
00:45:610 (8) - Recommended move to (296|160). I moved to (320|180) to stack with 00:44:189 (2) -
00:55:715 (1) - Stack 00:55:872 (2) slider head? Fixed
03:26:347 (9) - Blanket crooked off. Fixed

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you improved.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.