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DOIN' IT WELL

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20:16 Asphyxia: +1 for both lower diffs
20:16 Asphyxia: OD
20:16 Kyshiro: no
20:16 Asphyxia: pls
20:16 Kyshiro: i cant
20:16 Kyshiro: that would fuck the star rating in the ass
20:17 Asphyxia: unmoddable
20:18 Asphyxia: SET A PREVIEW TIME
20:18 Kyshiro: LOL
20:18 Kyshiro: post it
20:18 Kyshiro: kd
20:18 Asphyxia: lol?
20:18 Asphyxia: LOL?
20:20 Kyshiro: fixd
20:20 Asphyxia: you cant even give me kudo for pointing out the preview time
20:20 Asphyxia: LÖOL
20:20 Asphyxia: I might aswell check the whole mapset
20:20 Asphyxia: while I'm at it
20:21 Kyshiro: LOL its only 30 seconds anyway
20:22 Asphyxia: Disable wide screen
20:22 Kyshiro: no
20:22 Kyshiro: the bg is 1366x768
20:23 Kyshiro: =16:9
20:23 Asphyxia: wtf
20:24 Kyshiro: ok nvm
20:24 Kyshiro: gotta remove
20:24 Asphyxia: =)
20:25 Asphyxia: also should you add some audioleadin?
20:25 Asphyxia: if you haven't
20:25 Asphyxia: 00:30:401 (1) - This spinner is 632 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 1000 on auto.
20:25 Kyshiro: you cant
20:25 Kyshiro: osu does it automatically
20:25 Asphyxia: aiBAT yells something about this
20:25 Kyshiro: it gets 1000 in auto
20:26 Asphyxia: gonna post sometime
20:26 Asphyxia: xd
20:26 Asphyxia: + gonna point out more if I find
20:26 Asphyxia: <3
20:26 Kyshiro: okay
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How did I end up here....I blame modreqs!

[General]
Am I the only one that thinks the "Doin' it well" background text should be storyboarded to bounce around to the music?
I don't know about those difficulty names, personally I would have no idea which is which.
30 seconds drain time, cutting it close there. (I see draining time drama in the future).
Could add Super Mario Bros in the tags (song it is based on as I'm sure everyone knows).
Those spinners...barelyyy rankable.

[Superior]
Very high AR for the easiest difficulty, even for a 30 second song needs to be beginner friendly.
Slider speed is fairly high for the easiest difficulty as well but you can leave that for more opinions.

[Exquisite]
00:12:717 (1,2) - really wish these didn't overlap, otherwise they are nicely done

No real complaints with any of the maps, all flows nicely...well..apart from the 'random' screams but there you go. Now family can wonder why I am humming Mario theme. Have a star!
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James2250 wrote:

How did I end up here....I blame modreqs!

[General]
Am I the only one that thinks the "Doin' it well" background text should be storyboarded to bounce around to the music? Will be made soon
I don't know about those difficulty names, personally I would have no idea which is which. It's the name set i've been using ever since i started mapping, haven't had anyone complaining about them yet so I think it'll be fine
30 seconds drain time, cutting it close there. (I see draining time drama in the future). 30 seconds is the minimum so it should be fine
Could add Super Mario Bros in the tags (song it is based on as I'm sure everyone knows). added
Those spinners...barelyyy rankable. They're rankable though, keeping them for now

[Superior]
Very high AR for the easiest difficulty, even for a 30 second song needs to be beginner friendly. Reduced AR by 1
Slider speed is fairly high for the easiest difficulty as well but you can leave that for more opinions.

[Exquisite]
00:12:717 (1,2) - really wish these didn't overlap, otherwise they are nicely done Fixed

No real complaints with any of the maps, all flows nicely...well..apart from the 'random' screams but there you go. Now family can wonder why I am humming Mario theme. Have a star!
Thanks a lot :3
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Superior:
00:20:296 (1) - ctrl+g (nicer flow?)


Exquisite:
-1 AR maybe?

Epic:
00:24:717 (7) - ctrl+g?



Nice map anyways :3

EDIT: star
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Damori wrote:

Superior:
00:20:296 (1) - ctrl+g (nicer flow?) Would ruinthe spacing


Exquisite:
-1 AR maybe? Yeah why not

Epic:
00:24:717 (7) - ctrl+g? The flow is better the way it is



Nice map anyways :3
Thanks :3
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speedrank this and I steal your mom
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[Luanny] wrote:

speedrank this and I steal your mom
you can have her i dont care aheuahe
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Hello!

From Modding Queue.

General

  1. not hitsound? umm
  2. change audioreadin 1500~2000?
  3. doin' it well doin' it well doin' it well ahhhhh

Superior

  1. 00:07:033 (3,1) - i think weird slider rythem. ummmm change slider shape?

[*]00:12:717 (1) - add NC? because 00:27:875 (1) - this. and ahhhhhhh

Exquisite

  1. 00:05:454 (2) - change this?
    ─ 00:05:454 - add note
    ─ 00:05:770 - add note
  2. 00:14:612 (1) - add NC?
  3. 00:29:770 (3) - ^

Epic

  1. HP -1? OD -1?
  2. 00:30:401 (1) - it's really short. change 1.2x bpm?


Really Simple beatmap.

take it!
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Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From Modding Queue.

General

  1. not hitsound? umm There are hitsound
  2. change audioreadin 1500~2000? It's automatically done by osu, I can't change that
  3. doin' it well doin' it well doin' it well ahhhhh

Superior

  1. 00:07:033 (3,1) - i think weird slider rythem. ummmm change slider shape? Changed it a bit

[*]00:12:717 (1) - add NC? because 00:27:875 (1) - this. and ahhhhhhh okay

Exquisite

  1. 00:05:454 (2) - change this? I'd rather keep it
    ─ 00:05:454 - add note
    ─ 00:05:770 - add note
  2. 00:14:612 (1) - add NC? Okay
  3. 00:29:770 (3) - ^ Okay

Epic

  1. HP -1? OD -1? They're fine really
  2. 00:30:401 (1) - it's really short. change 1.2x bpm? Can't change the length of them


Really Simple beatmap.

take it!
Thanks a lot
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Kyshiro wrote:

General


─ not hitsound? umm There are hitsound
→ It's custom hitsound. i think you have customsound (ex. CS:1)....

umm

Maybe not?

I don't know :o
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Losertic wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

General


─ not hitsound? umm There are hitsound
→ It's custom hitsound. i think you have customsound (ex. CS:1)....

umm

Maybe not?

I don't know :o
There are soft whistles and drums
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Ello o3o Random mod

[Superior]
00:01:980 (3) - Also make the tail of the slider have the default drum hit?
00:03:875 (3) - drum-finish on the tail would sound pretty neat! :) Try it!
00:09:559 (3) - Drum finish?
00:19:033 (3) - Same suggestion as 00:03:875 (3)
00:24:717 (4) - Drum finish?

[Exquisite]
00:04:507 (6) - Drum-finish on the head?
00:09:559 (7) - ^
00:19:664 (5) - ^
00:24:717 (7) - ^

[Epic]
00:04:507 (10) - Add drum finish?
00:09:559 (11) - ^ On the head
00:19:664 (12) - ^ On the head
00:24:717 (7) - ^ On the head

Hope this helps~! ^^
*This song....Aaand that's enough internet for me today, lol o.o
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10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o Random mod

[Superior]
00:01:980 (3) - Also make the tail of the slider have the default drum hit?
00:03:875 (3) - drum-finish on the tail would sound pretty neat! :) Try it!
00:09:559 (3) - Drum finish?
00:19:033 (3) - Same suggestion as 00:03:875 (3)
00:24:717 (4) - Drum finish?

[Exquisite]
00:04:507 (6) - Drum-finish on the head?
00:09:559 (7) - ^
00:19:664 (5) - ^
00:24:717 (7) - ^

[Epic]
00:04:507 (10) - Add drum finish?
00:09:559 (11) - ^ On the head
00:19:664 (12) - ^ On the head
00:24:717 (7) - ^ On the head

Hope this helps~! ^^
*This song....Aaand that's enough internet for me today, lol o.o
Fixed em all, Thanks
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Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

> Your letterbox settings are different between the difficulties. Fix them please.
> I doubt the kiai fit to the parts you set. It's a scream but no actually part of the song which is impressive and basy or anything. You should remove them.

Easy

> 00:05:138 (1,2,3) - I understand your way of wanting to put the circle into the curve of the slider but the flow is not given so good. Due to the slider 00:05:138 (1) - going downwards and being directed down, so if you place the circle in that angle and place it gives less good flow and transition. Try to improve it by moving the circle right of the end of the slider and a little lower so it gives better flow and is easier for beginners. Or you could move the slider 00:06:717 (2,3) - up a litte more so it has a less harsh angle. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081764
> 00:13:664 (1) - , 00:28:822 (1) - This spinner is too short to play good for new players. It has 4000 score which is the minimum it should have but its still very sudden and hard to play. Make it longer by removing the previous slider and enlarging the spinner or remove the spinner and place a slider.
> 00:19:033 (3,1) - The transition of these is very bad. The pink slider goes to the right and the next elment is on the left side and too hard to play due to the flow being broken. You can simply solve this problem by recreating the movement of the pervious pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081767 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081770 . It will improve your transition and flow. Of course you can find something better what you like more.
> 00:23:770 (2) - Move the circle below these 00:22:822 (1,3) - to create a better flow and transition between the elements. Due to the long slider going downwards the circle feels off when playing.

Hard


> 00:30:401 (1) - Too short again. It's very sudden and not good to play. Make some kind of slider to improve this and make the playment better. It would also give a better ending tbh.

Insane

> 00:25:349 (9) - The way you placed your combo's here is weird. You should have your NC here and not on the next patterns. It should be on the new beat. You didn't do this before 00:07:664 (1,1) -
> 00:26:296 (4,5) - Because of the way you shaped and placed your previous sliders 00:25:664 (2,3) - they flow very weird and don't give a good playment with the other elements. If you shape them a little diagonal then the flow would improve.

Due to the song being so short i can't point out any more. Well done. (:
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BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

> Your letterbox settings are different between the difficulties. Fix them please. They are all turned off already, maybe the last update messed up a bit idk
> I doubt the kiai fit to the parts you set. It's a scream but no actually part of the song which is impressive and basy or anything. You should remove them.There's no actual part for the kiai, I think they are a fun effect added on the screams though, I'll get some more opinions on that

Easy

> 00:05:138 (1,2,3) - I understand your way of wanting to put the circle into the curve of the slider but the flow is not given so good. Due to the slider 00:05:138 (1) - going downwards and being directed down, so if you place the circle in that angle and place it gives less good flow and transition. Try to improve it by moving the circle right of the end of the slider and a little lower so it gives better flow and is easier for beginners. Or you could move the slider 00:06:717 (2,3) - up a litte more so it has a less harsh angle. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081764 Fixed
> 00:13:664 (1) - , 00:28:822 (1) - This spinner is too short to play good for new players. It has 4000 score which is the minimum it should have but its still very sudden and hard to play. Make it longer by removing the previous slider and enlarging the spinner or remove the spinner and place a slider. This is still really simple to play, even by spinning 3/4th of the spinner with 160rpm(no one would spin that slow) it'd be a 300
> 00:19:033 (3,1) - The transition of these is very bad. The pink slider goes to the right and the next elment is on the left side and too hard to play due to the flow being broken. You can simply solve this problem by recreating the movement of the pervious pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081767 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1081770 . It will improve your transition and flow. Of course you can find something better what you like more. This flows fine,specially with that short break in between them I honestly have no clue how to put this into words though
> 00:23:770 (2) - Move the circle below these 00:22:822 (1,3) - to create a better flow and transition between the elements. Due to the long slider going downwards the circle feels off when playing. There's no bad flow to be seen in here, +this is part of my style, people either move in a curve over this pattern, or actually follow the slider a bit more which makes a kind of a wave movement, either way it plays fine

Hard


> 00:30:401 (1) - Too short again. It's very sudden and not good to play. Make some kind of slider to improve this and make the playment better. It would also give a better ending tbh. I'll try and get more opinions on this, however i have no problem with such spinners. A slider wouldn't really fit the noise either

Insane

> 00:25:349 (9) - The way you placed your combo's here is weird. You should have your NC here and not on the next patterns. It should be on the new beat. You didn't do this before 00:07:664 (1,1) - Fixed
> 00:26:296 (4,5) - Because of the way you shaped and placed your previous sliders 00:25:664 (2,3) - they flow very weird and don't give a good playment with the other elements. If you shape them a little diagonal then the flow would improve. Changed

Due to the song being so short i can't point out any more. Well done. (:
Thanks :3
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That scream part just really.. LMAO
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Superior

00:12:717 (1) - Flip veritcally. Better flow

MY GOSH OAO RENARD DID THIS?!

Exquisite

Could you standardise the DS here? :/ kinda bugs me

Epic

00:08:928 (9) - NC?

00:19:033 (10) - ^

Well uh.. Actually I think this can be ranked :3 Sorry for short mod (Well I mean, this song is only 31 sec long XD)

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
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yurunneram wrote:

Superior

00:12:717 (1) - Flip veritcally. Better flow It flows fine as it is

MY GOSH OAO RENARD DID THIS?!

Exquisite

Could you standardise the DS here? :/ kinda bugs me There's nothing to standardise, it plays fine/is easy to read the way it is now

Epic

00:08:928 (9) - NC?wouldn't make sense

00:19:033 (10) - ^ ^

Well uh.. Actually I think this can be ranked :3 Sorry for short mod (Well I mean, this song is only 31 sec long XD)

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Sorry I couldn't add anything, thanks for checking though
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2013-11-20 21:49 Frostmourne: 00:17:349 (6) -
2013-11-20 21:49 Frostmourne: add a note here on Exquisite diff
2013-11-20 21:49 Kyshiro: there's already a note o-o
2013-11-20 21:50 Kyshiro: maybe you deleted it on accident?
2013-11-20 21:50 Frostmourne: hm..
2013-11-20 21:50 Frostmourne: 00:17:349
2013-11-20 21:50 Frostmourne: it's on 1/6
2013-11-20 21:50 Kyshiro: OH damn
2013-11-20 21:50 Kyshiro: it snapped to the current 6
2013-11-20 21:50 Kyshiro: my bad
2013-11-20 21:51 Frostmourne: em so eh
2013-11-20 21:51 Frostmourne: I will bubble then
2013-11-20 21:51 Kyshiro: yeah, added it
2013-11-20 21:51 Frostmourne: let me check technical things a bit
2013-11-20 21:51 Kyshiro: woo thats awesome
2013-11-20 21:52 Frostmourne: Superior
2013-11-20 21:52 Frostmourne: 00:28:822 (1,1) -
2013-11-20 21:52 Frostmourne: I would change spinner
2013-11-20 21:52 Frostmourne: to a slider
2013-11-20 21:52 Frostmourne: em.. maybe a bit difficult for beginners
2013-11-20 21:52 Frostmourne: to read a note after that quick spinner
2013-11-20 21:52 Kyshiro: ah yeah
2013-11-20 21:52 Kyshiro: alright
2013-11-20 21:54 Frostmourne: alright, you're doin' it well here
2013-11-20 21:54 Frostmourne: update
2013-11-20 21:54 Kyshiro: aheuahe thanks
2013-11-20 21:54 Kyshiro: 1 second, trying to make a cool slider
2013-11-20 21:54 Frostmourne: lol
2013-11-20 21:54 Frostmourne: okay


doin' it well

[Luanny] wrote:

speedrank this and I steal your mom
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