This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 06, 2014 at 18:32:29

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: True Blue Traveler (TV Size)
Source: Infinite Stratos Season 2
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8019kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (3.5 stars, 257 notes)
2. Infinite (5.06 stars, 339 notes)
3. Insane (3.93 stars, 299 notes)
4. Normal (1.93 stars, 114 notes)

Download: Kuribayashi Minami - True Blue Traveler (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready to be Ranked
~Beatmapto~
Normal. Done by me
Hard. Done by me
Insane. Done by me
Infinite. Done by me
Insta Download http://puu.sh/5G6bp.osz
Awesome skin byLeminitruc. You can get the full skin https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2660246
Thanks to neonat and Raphel for modding >.<

General

Bpm is still 170bpm, it is right.
Offset should be 556, shift all points by +556 to snap them back

Once you put it right, either shift the notes to the proper place or remap areas which you can now see are off the music.

Hi~! from my queue!

[Normal]

• 00:00:556 (1) - rhythm is strange. end on 00:01:261
  00:05:144 (5,1) - remove that it overlaps lightly
  00:06:203 (1,2) - ^
  00:08:144 (3) - add 1 reverse and 00:08:850 (1) - start on 00:08:850 end on 00:10:438. maybe it is better :3
  00:23:144 (1,3) - makes to same slider shape. it is good for playing :3
  00:28:791 (1,2,3,4) - distance is too strange
  00:33:026 ~ 00:34:085 - add something. so bored
  00:36:203 (4) - overlap on 00:35:144 (2) end. maybe it is better~
  00:38:321 (7) - add 1 reverse
  00:40:438 (2,3,4) - distance
  00:43:261 - add 4/4 slider
  00:54:556 (3,4) - remove that it overlaps lightly
  00:55:967 ~ 00:56:673 - add something
  01:07:260 - add 2/4 slider and add 1 reverse
  01:12:909 (3) - should NC this slider, to show that its different because its slowed
  01:18:379 (4,5) - distance
  
  [Hard]
  
  • AR is too fast. AR → 6 or 7
    00:03:556 (3) - add 1 reverse for follow song
    00:04:085 (4,5) - accurate overlap
    00:04:791 (1) - distance
    00:07:791 (1,2,3) - overlap. maybe it is better
    00:14:321 (5,1) - distance
    00:29:321 (2,3) - remove that it overlaps
    00:29:674 (3,1) - ^
    00:37:438 (8,9) - distance
    00:38:850 (4,1) - blanket
    00:43:262 (3,1) - remove that it overlaps
    00:43:968 (1,2) - distance
    00:46:262 (1,2,3) - ^
    00:49:615 (5) - too close. many players will click earlier than necessary.
    00:49:791 (6) - remove 1 reverse and start on 00:49:967 for follow song
    00:51:379 (1,2,3) - bad overlap D: try a different pattern
    00:55:968 (2) - should be start on 00:55:879 for follow vocal
    00:57:203 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad overlap. it is too confuse
    01:01:879 (11) - what is this?
    01:08:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad overlap
    01:12:555 (4) - NC this slider, to show that its different because its slowed and start on 01:12:555 for follow song
    01:16:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - distance
    
    [Infinite]
    
    • Good. funny :3
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 00:04:438 - add circle
        00:13:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad overlap
        00:21:379 (1,2) - place to parallel
        00:23:144 (1,2) - distance
        00:24:203 (6,7) - ^
        00:26:320 (6) - this slider should be start on00:26:320
        00:26:320 (6,7) - place to parallel
        00:31:968 (1) - place farther
        00:43:967 (5,6,7,8) - distance
        01:04:791 (6) - remove this and add circle on 01:04:791. maybe it is better :3
        01:12:379 (1) - rhythm error. start on 01:12:555 end on 01:13:085
        01:14:144 (1) - should be start on 01:13:967
        01:16:791 - add circle
        01:19:085 (1,2,3) - start on 01:19:261 and remove (2)

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What is Blanket and NC. oh and THANKS

General

You need a difficulty that is below 3 star rating, so I suggest you start on the Easy difficulty

You have the tags "Tatenashi Sarashiki Infinite stratos season two True Blue Traveler anime pop" on the Hard difficulty only, which is an issue. You don't need these tags as well, because they are already in the data, so you should remove them from the Hard difficulty

Normal

You need constant spacing between notes
examples that are not following this rule are 00:46:438 (1,1) - 00:52:438 (5,6) - and 01:14:674 (6,7) -

00:03:731 (3) - object end is not snapped
00:45:717 (4) - not snapped
00:03:378 (2,3) - slider before circle
00:07:085 (2) - slider starts at 00:07:261
00:07:967 (3) - slider starts at 00:08:320
00:08:850 (1) - inappropriate and not nice and you probably cannot have this here, change the shape of the slider and also end it at 00:10:614
Have a spinner after that slider and end the spinner at 00:11:850
00:35:850 (3,4) - possibly shift them so that 4 isn't covered completely
00:51:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo), NC at 00:51:379 (2) -
00:39:732 - add a note
00:42:909 (7) - NC
00:43:261 (1) - remove NC
01:12:908 (3) - slowdown slider not necessary, could confuse people

Normal is not complete, continue to map till the end

Hard

You really really really should not put so so many sliders starting on a red line, it is not good for playing or rhythm

00:04:579 (5) - object not snapped
00:17:674 (1) - just replace it with a note at 00:17:850
00:20:320 - add a note
01:01:968 (12) - 1/4 beat repeat slider redundant, only the 1/2 beats are required for the music here
01:08:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too cramped, space things out
01:12:555 - important beat here, why leave it out?
01:17:320 - ^
01:17:850 - ^ again you just breezed past it with a slider that isn't on anything important
01:18:379 - ^
01:18:732 - ^
01:19:262 (9) - 2x slider velocity is definitely not needed and does not fit. Remove it.

Hard is not complete, continue to map till the end

Insane

Again, do not have too many sliders starting on red lines

00:05:497 (1) - remove the repeat, slider still ends at 00:05:850
00:38:144 (5,6,7) - why are they suddenly so close to each other as compared to the rest, space them out equally
00:41:408 - add a note
00:45:732 - important beat here, why breeze pass it
00:46:967 (5) - slider ends at 00:47:144
00:48:203 - important beat here, why go past it
00:54:203 - ^
01:12:555 (1) - slider body cannot be seen, quite unrankable
01:16:438 - imprtant beat, why skip it
01:16:791 - ^
01:17:144 (1) - why start there, beat is at 01:17:320
01:17:673 (2) - why start there, beat is at 01:17:850
01:18:203 (3) - why start there, beat is at 01:18:379 and 01:18:732

Insane is not complete, continue to map till the end

Infinite

Snap back your uninherited points

00:32:850 - unforseen and very random sudden 2x slider velocity change. Remove the velocity change, this is a rankability issue
00:45:555 (8) - slider end at 00:45:732
00:46:703 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - again overmapping here. Beats are at 00:46:791 - 00:46:967 - 00:47:144 and 00:47:497
00:47:938 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ same thing, overmapping
00:55:791 (2) - remove
00:55:967 (3) - shift to 00:55:879
01:02:673 - again the slider velocity here is ridiculous, reduce it
01:15:379 (10,11,12) - there is only 1 holding of vocal here, and you place a 1/4 beat rhythm of sliders here, overmapped.
01:19:085 (1) - shift to 01:19:261 and add a note at 01:19:085

Infinite is not complete, map until the end.

Decreasing circle size and making insane slider velocity is not the way to go to increase the level of difficulty of a map. A lot of work is needed for the mapset as of right now.

Mods Applied thanks alot guys

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