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State Radio - Right Me Up

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Ken Cosgrove
43 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Ken Cosgrove
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 12, 2009 at 12:55:06 PM

Artist: State Radio
Title: Right Me Up
Tags: us against the crown
BPM: 87
Filesize: 6448kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.42 stars, 319 notes)
  2. Simple (3.72 stars, 255 notes)
Download: State Radio - Right Me Up
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Oh this friend today right me up...

WIP

2/2 diff completed.

[Simple] : 100% done
[Hard] : 100% done

Currently, [Simple] is just [Hard] without a couple of beats in the intro and difficulty sliders changed. Will finish [Simple] ASAP.

Edits:

dsxx's edits
whymeman's edits (except for Kiai sections -- still tentative on changing that -- and the one 5 time repeating slider -- i think that's pretty on time/beat)
eee's timing + edits
Last edited by Ken Cosgrove , edited 25 times in total.
Dragonslayerxx
19 posts
Joined July 2008
Dragonslayerxx
By Request~

Timing
Offset: Try 3,847 (not sure)

Hard
00:14:84 (1) - Spacing
00:37:26 (1,2,3,4) - Realign so it forms a square
00:52:95 (1) - Move one unit up
01:01:64 - Insert Break
01:07:18 - ^
01:12:43 (8) - 01:15:53 (1) - Some notes here maybe?
01:55:19 (5) - Spacing
01:56:57 (8) - ^
02:02:33 - Some notes or a break
02:07:84 - ^
02:13:36 - ^
02:28:70 (14) - Delete
02:28:70 - 02:32:15 - Change spinners to:
02:28:70 - 02:29:74
02:30:08 - 02:31:12
02:31:46 - 02:32:15
02:32:77 (2) - Quarter tick back?

Good luck~
Ken Cosgrove
43 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Ken Cosgrove

Dragonslayerxx wrote:

By Request~

Timing
Offset: Try 3,847 (not sure)

Hard
00:14:84 (1) - Spacing what?
00:37:26 (1,2,3,4) - Realign so it forms a square ehh, i wanted a diamond xD
00:52:95 (1) - Move one unit up fixed
(01:01:64 - Insert Break
01:07:18 - ^
01:12:43 (8) - 01:15:53 (1) - Some notes here maybe? fixed
01:55:19 (5) - Spacing
01:56:57 (8) - ^) intentional, but it's not confusing is it?
(02:02:33 - Some notes or a break
02:07:84 - ^
02:13:36 - ^) fixed
02:28:70 (14) - Delete it sounds a bit empty w/o it imo, idk i'll think about that
(02:28:70 - 02:32:15 - Change spinners to:
02:28:70 - 02:29:74
02:30:08 - 02:31:12
02:31:46 - 02:32:15) wait, why three of them? O_o
02:32:77 (2) - Quarter tick back?
 fixed
Good luck~
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: No
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 6.30 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source for all difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags for all difficulties.)

[Simple] (Done) (Edit add-in)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 87.003 (Sounds a bit too fast. Try 86.990BPM and check to see if that works.) / 3,793 ms
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.00
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 246 ( 172 Circles / 70 Sliders / 4 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 335
[Current] Max Score: 1,615,430
[Current] Star Rating: 3.73
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.5

00:14:13 (6) - Bottomed out.
00:22:58 (?) - Instead of a break, a spinner could fit here. The break kinda looks too small to be there and its the start of the map.
00:25:86 ~ 00:26:47 (T-Sec.) - The kiai use here doesn't seem right.
00:30:68 (2,3) - If you want to keep this difficulty "simple" try using the beat, not hte lyrics for stuff like this.
00:41:03 (5) - The slider sounds okay but after 3 times, it sounds odd and off.
00:47:92 (2,3,4) - The ends could link up a bit more evenly if you can.
01:01:54 ~ 01:21:03 (Sec.)- I feel that the breaks in this section is unneeded. For songs like this, you don't want to rely on the lyrics too much or else you'll be stuck.
01:26:47 ~ 01:27:14 (T-Sec.) - Another odd kiai point.
01:57:41 (9) - Sounds like it should end at 01:58:18.
02:02:23 ~ 02:14:82 (Sec.) - More mini breaks. As posted like before, don't rely on the lyrics too much. Put the beats to use with the map as well.
02:21:03 ~ 02:47:58 (T-Sec.) - The current kiai use is overkill. I know you're trying to be creative with it, but its best to not spam the fountains as this can cause some playability issuse and lag for some.

Notes: Well, not much problems with the notes, just mainly the map setup. There are some timing sections in there that don't seem to be doing anything either. Make sure to go over it and try to control the use of the kiai like to have it on for certain parts of the song.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 87.003 (Sounds a bit too fast. Try 86.990BPM and check to see if that works.) / 3,793 ms
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.00
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 306 ( 242 Circles / 60 Sliders / 4 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 381
[Current] Max Score: 2,945,986
[Current] Star Rating: 4.35
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

00:07:24 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you look at (5), you can see it looks slightly off from the line up.
00:10:34 (5,8) - The slider end of (5) could go over (8) a bit more neater if you can.
00:22:58 (?) - Instead of a break, a spinner could fit here. The break kinda looks too small to be there and its the start of the map.
00:30:68 (3,4) - The ends link slightly uneven.
00:41:03 (5) - The slider sounds okay but after 3 times, it sounds odd and off.
01:01:54 ~ 01:21:03 (Sec.)- I feel that the breaks in this section is unneeded. For songs like this, you don't want to rely on the lyrics too much or else you'll be stuck.
01:26:47 ~ 01:27:14 (T-Sec.) - Odd kiai point.
01:57:41 (9) - Feels like it should end at 01:58:18.
02:02:23 ~ 02:14:82 (Sec.) - More mini breaks. As posted like before, don't rely on the lyrics too much. Put the beats to use with the map as well.
02:21:03 ~ 02:47:58 (T-Sec.) - The current kiai use is overkill. I know you're trying to be creative with it, but its best to not spam the fountains as this can cause some playability issuse and lag for some.

Notes: Similiar issues like before with the kiai use and the way the breaks are set up. It may seem like a lot of work, but its not. Just need to take out what is unwanted and add in the needed.

Overall: Not that bad for a start. Just need some reconstructing with the timing sections and the break use. I noticed how the map tries to flow with the lyrics, but it ends up with some deadends (looking at the small breaks). Just remember that you can't always stick to just lyrics or the beats alone. You'll have to use both to make the map work. I'm sure the map will work out to be ranked eventually, don't give up. I'll drop my star in then.
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee

peppy wrote:

Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.
just pointing this out... ya know...

eeemod GO!!!

I believe the fountain toggles can stay at the beginning of verses. Just not sure if those spinners can stay. Think about what's provided in the quote, choose what you think.
Also, BPM = 87.00 friend of mine told me .99's are rare (unless awp times it that way :P). OFFSET = 3810 imo. Resnap notes, recalculate sliders (make sure 1/3 slider is intact), and fix breaks as well.

[Simple]
00:41:05 (5) - weird. I can't find anything else, so this stays.
'tis good

[Hard]
02:33:46 (4) - end 1/4 back

something still funny with the timing, I think I'm just no good at it. I DO think mines works for now.

The map/song is very cool and soothing. star.
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