ChouCho - starlog (TV Size) [OsuMania|Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888fix
  2. 00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctlyfix
  3. 00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?fix
  4. 01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^fix
  5. 01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192fix


[Insane]
  1. 00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)fix
  2. 00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DSfix
  3. 00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?fix

    404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?????


wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
thanks and your so fun ww img ww
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

TestApple wrote:

From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.you see the old map
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.^

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.??
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.??
thanks mod
Losertic
엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.


AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Losertic wrote:

엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.


AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ
그게 저도 원래 AR9로 설정했었는데 모딩받으면서 3명이나 AR8로 하라고 해서 어쩔수 없이..내림..
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요 :o

[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거

[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL :D

로리 만세!
감사합니다ㅋㅋ 제가 정신이 없어서 님 모딩을 그냥 지나쳤네여ㅋㅋㅋ;;;;;
죄송합니다..and 감사합니다ㅎ
Hanabi
From my queue + PM + IRC

편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

깔끔 ^^

Habi's Easy


00:07:853 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스
00:26:424 - 00:26:960 - 휘슬빼시고 피니쉬로. (왜 커스텀 피니쉬에 휘슬 사운드를 넣었는지 잘 모르겠네요)
00:31:424 (2,3) - 디스턴스
00:34:995 (3,4) - ^
00:43:562 (3,4) - 조금 더 구부리면 잘 감싸질듯
01:04:995 (1) - ^
01:00:709 (3) - 동선을 위해
01:03:566 (3,4) - 디스턴스
01:07:852 (1,2) - ^
01:17:495 (2,3) - ^
01:25:980 (2) - 30||149

Normal


00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선
00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천
00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요
01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Zzz's Hard


00:06:781 (5,6,7) - 디스턴스 2.05 다음에 같은 방향으로 무빙하려면 하드 치고는 좀 어렵지 않을까요? 사진처럼 평범하게 하는걸 추천드려요
00:25:888 (3) - 아무 소리도 안들려서 예측하기 힘든 박자네요 D:
00:44:633 (6)가 144||272자리에 오고, 00:44:990 (1)가 204||100자리에 오는게 더 동선이 좋지 않을까요?
01:01:423 (6,7) - 6번 써클 마주보게 해주세요
01:12:852 (5,1) - 약간 헷갈리는데 137||298정도로 겹쳐보이게 하는게 더 좋아보여요
01:19:102 (9) - 뜬금없는 1/4 슬라라니; 그냥 써클로 바꾸는걸 추천

Insane


00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천
00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요
00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정
00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?
01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]
편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

깔끔 ^^

Normal


00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선
00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천
00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요
01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Insane


00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천
00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요
00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정
00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?
01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>[/quote]

제가 머 고쳤는지 까먹었네여ㅋㅋ(거의 다 수정 완료)

감사합니닿
Stefan
Hey! m4m time

[General]
Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii. Well, fixed. lol

[Easy]
00:39:278 - 00:44:990 - The soft Hitsounds (except Finish) are pretty weird and noisy. You should keep the SC:1 like you did before, about the Finishes: Keep them in.
00:44:990 (1,3) - You could do at the end of the Sliders the Normal Sampleset, it fits great with the guitar riff.

Nothing more to add, fine Easy.

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:
408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Hard]
00:04:467 (2) - That feels extremly bad and weird to play. Please try this out: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078641
00:07:317 (7) - Here too.
00:47:490 (5,6) - I'd to see a more diagonal curve with these two circles, I tried out and it feels better as the current: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078652
01:01:602 (7) - Same as 00:04:467 (2).
01:19:102 (9,1) - I don't get the flow here.. I think you can use two circles instead the (9) Slider here.

Nothing to say, nice Hard Diff.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3
Sonico Makaron
Hi :)

[Genera]
looks fine

[Habi's Easy]
00:00:714 (1) - NC since the bug
00:04:996 (1) - maybe use standart soft finish? sounds more better imo
00:06:424 (3) - remove clap at the end slider, since clap not fit here imo
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:13:567 (4) - please don't use stacks in an easy, since it hard to read for beginners
00:26:424 (3) - NC?
00:27:853 (1) - same suggestion as 00:04:996 (1)
00:30:710 (1) - same as 00:13:567 (4)
00:52:138 (3) - remove clap at the end slider
01:04:995 (1) - remove clap at he repeat slider
01:13:566 (1) - maybe use same form slider as 01:12:138 (2) -

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)

[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1) - add NC
00:02:142 (4) - maybe NC?
00:25:888 (3) - delete note, it will be better follow for vocal

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finish
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clap
01:01:602 (4) - NC

good map~
good luck :)
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Stefan wrote:

Hey! m4m time

[General]
Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii. Well, fixed. lol

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:
408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3
All fix!!

very good mod +_+b thank you :D
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi :)

[Genera]
looks fine

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NCfix
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?fix
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?no
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)fix

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NCfix
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?fix
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finishfix
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clapfix
01:01:602 (4) - NCfix

good map~
good luck :)
thanks~ good mod :)
mingmichael
taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[Muzukashii]

☞ nothing~
☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.

☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.
• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 -

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 -

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there


====================



[Oni]

☞ nothing~
☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up
• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods.

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 -


====================


okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo :) keep it up~!
Sonnyc
Zzz's Hard:

00:02:142 (4) - 뉴콤?
00:10:263 (5) - 엇박이니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요. 헷갈릴수 있을듯
00:22:674 (9,1) - 가사 따르시려면 (9) 부터 뉴콤?
00:25:888 (3) - 삭제하는게 가사와 자연스러울듯요.
00:26:067 (4) - 악기 강조 뉴콤?
01:14:816 (4) - 랜덤 점프 느낌이 나요 개인적으로.
01:19:102 (9) - 그냥 일반적 연타가 더 나을거 같아요.

Insane:

00:02:678 (2,3) - (316,148)이 슬라이더와의 흐름상 더 나을거 같습니다.
00:09:638 (5) - (384,224)에 놓는건 어때요? 다음 노트와 간격을 짧게 해 놓은게 살짝 안어울리는거 같고, 좀 거리 두는게 나을거 같아요.
00:16:781 (2) - 뉴콤? 이거도 앞 노트랑 가까운게 약간 이상한거 같아요. 점 띄워 주시는게 어떠실지.
00:20:353 (5,1) - 여기는 점프 없는게 나을듯요
00:35:353 (6) - (252,176)이 더 부드러운 흐름이 될거 같아요
00:47:668 (2) - 앞과 점프 좀 어색한듯요
01:07:673 (3,1) - 많이 가까워서 어색한듯 합니다.
01:24:816 (3,1) - (1) 부터는 약간 부드러운 구간인데 이 사이에 점프가 있는게 좀 부담스럽게 느껴졌습니다.
01:26:400 (1) - 마지막에 거의 소리가 안나니까 5% 처리 해주세요.

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Nardoxyribonucleic
My 200th post~ \:D/

mingmichael wrote:

taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[Muzukashii]

☞ nothing~
☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.
☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.
• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 - I followed the snare drum strikes there, so no change~

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent fixed

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now OK

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here fixed

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here. The vocal is of the same pitch as 00:24:995 - that's why I used kat there.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes fixed

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only fixed

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 - Nice~ :3

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o fixed

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too changed to k d kkk d

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there fixed


====================



[Oni]

☞ nothing~
☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up
• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song fixed

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods. fixed

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break fixed

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before fixed

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 - The strings are of the same pitch, and I used kats to map the snare drums there, so no change~


====================


okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo :) keep it up~! Thanks >_<"
Thanks for your mod michael~~ :)
>Update<
DreaM117er
OK...I'm late...
From Queue...after midterm exam...

Insane
No more problem. make better look^^

00:07:853 (1) - move to x136 y232
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - a little close
00:37:317 (6,7,8) - How about this↓ I test this better than before.

00:58:388 (2) - move to x56 y236
00:59:816 (3) - move to x284 y268
01:00:709 (1) - move to x396 y296, and bending point add x421 y332
01:01:066 (2) - copy 01:00:709 (1) , rotate +170 and move to x504 y192
01:01:423 (2) - move to x308 y148
01:03:745 (5,7,1) - move to x448 y288
01:06:066 (6,9) - move to x300 y204
01:06:245 (7) - move to x368 y144
01:06:423 (8) - move to x300 y28
01:07:673 (3,1) - too close, 01:07:673 (3) stacking 01:07:852 (1) better or change like↓
01:07:138 (1,2,3,1) - ↓

01:10:173 (4) - rotate +18 and move to x280 y224
01:10:709 (1) - bending point move to x356 y64
01:14:995 (1) - bending point move to x96 y196
01:18:566 (5) - add bending point better
01:20:173 (6) - move to x92 y200
01:21:602 (6) - ^
01:24:637 (2,3) - How about move to x256 y348
01:24:995 (1,2) - too close


Zzz's Hard
00:06:781 (5,6) - get close
00:25:531 (2,3) - change a slider better
01:11:423 (3,4,5,1) - make nice!!!
01:24:816 - follow lyric better


Normal
00:03:571 (1) - del
00:04:291 (4) - add new combo circle
01:00:709 (4,5) - two no reverse slider better


Habi's Easy
00:00:714 (1) - no reverse slider end 00:01:606
00:03:571 (3) - del
00:04:291 (3) - add new combo circle
00:39:278 (1) - slider end 00:39:813
00:42:848 (1,2) - sound strange
01:07:495 (3) - del better, 'cause voice start blue line

OK, little problem.

I very like this song, before you ask me for mod.
So I'll watch you= =+
and star for you.
Good lock
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

My 200th post~ \:D/

mingmichael wrote:

taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[Muzukashii]

☞ nothing~
☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.
☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.
• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 - I followed the snare drum strikes there, so no change~

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent fixed

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now OK

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here fixed

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here. The vocal is of the same pitch as 00:24:995 - that's why I used kat there.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes fixed

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only fixed

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 - Nice~ :3

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o fixed

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too changed to k d kkk d

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there fixed


====================



[Oni]

☞ nothing~
☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up
• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song fixed

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods. fixed

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break fixed

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before fixed

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 - The strings are of the same pitch, and I used kats to map the snare drums there, so no change~


====================


okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo :) keep it up~! Thanks >_<"
Thanks for your mod michael~~ :)
>Update<
update lol
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

m1223961117 wrote:

OK...I'm late...
From Queue...after midterm exam...

Insane
No more problem. make better look^^

00:07:853 (1) - move to x136 y232
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - a little close
00:37:317 (6,7,8) - How about this↓ I test this better than before.

00:58:388 (2) - move to x56 y236
00:59:816 (3) - move to x284 y268
01:00:709 (1) - move to x396 y296, and bending point add x421 y332
01:01:066 (2) - copy 01:00:709 (1) , rotate +170 and move to x504 y192
01:01:423 (2) - move to x308 y148
01:03:745 (5,7,1) - move to x448 y288
01:06:066 (6,9) - move to x300 y204
01:06:245 (7) - move to x368 y144
01:06:423 (8) - move to x300 y28
01:07:673 (3,1) - too close, 01:07:673 (3) stacking 01:07:852 (1) better or change like↓
01:07:138 (1,2,3,1) - ↓

01:10:173 (4) - rotate +18 and move to x280 y224
01:10:709 (1) - bending point move to x356 y64
01:14:995 (1) - bending point move to x96 y196
01:18:566 (5) - add bending point better
01:20:173 (6) - move to x92 y200
01:21:602 (6) - ^
01:24:637 (2,3) - How about move to x256 y348
01:24:995 (1,2) - too close


Normal
00:03:571 (1) - del
00:04:291 (4) - add new combo circle
01:00:709 (4,5) - two no reverse slider better


I very like this song, before you ask me for mod.
So I'll watch you= =+
and star for you.
Good lock
thank you mod and star :D:D
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]
Insane:

00:02:678 (2,3) - (316,148)이 슬라이더와의 흐름상 더 나을거 같습니다.
00:09:638 (5) - (384,224)에 놓는건 어때요? 다음 노트와 간격을 짧게 해 놓은게 살짝 안어울리는거 같고, 좀 거리 두는게 나을거 같아요.
00:16:781 (2) - 뉴콤? 이거도 앞 노트랑 가까운게 약간 이상한거 같아요. 점 띄워 주시는게 어떠실지.
00:20:353 (5,1) - 여기는 점프 없는게 나을듯요
00:35:353 (6) - (252,176)이 더 부드러운 흐름이 될거 같아요
00:47:668 (2) - 앞과 점프 좀 어색한듯요
01:07:673 (3,1) - 많이 가까워서 어색한듯 합니다.
01:24:816 (3,1) - (1) 부터는 약간 부드러운 구간인데 이 사이에 점프가 있는게 좀 부담스럽게 느껴졌습니다.
01:26:400 (1) - 마지막에 거의 소리가 안나니까 5% 처리 해주세요.

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내일 완성을 <<[/quote]

모딩 감사합니다ㅎ and별도 감사합니다 ㅠㅜ 모두 고쳤습니다

헐 저같은 초보가 님한테 이런 소리를 듣다니!!감격 감사합니다!!
[ Zzz ]

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]
Try to add audio lead-in

- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags


[Zzz's Hard]

00:02:142 (4) - New combo ( yes )
00:04:291 (7) - ^ ( yes )
00:10:263 (5,6) - This jump is a bit nazi ( umm.. no... )
00:24:638 (5) - Change it to a 1/8 reversing slider ( no... )
00:25:531 (2,3) - Make it into a slider ( no... )
00:47:490 (5) - New combo ( no... )
00:47:847 (1) - If you accepted the previous advice, remove new combo here ( no... )
00:48:382 (2) - Make this slider half length, then add one note(New combo) at 00:48:740 ( no... )
01:26:295 (3) - I think it's better if you remove this note ( umm.. )

Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.
Thanks~ jogfi2002
[ Zzz ]

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요 :o

[Hard]
00:04:291 (7) - 이거랑 전노트랑 간격이 좀 넓은데 NC 넣어도 괜찮을듯 ( 네~ )

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL :D

로리 만세!
모딩 감사합니다~
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