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GasTheJuice
Zzz's hard difficulty

00:44:990 Not sure why you are stacking, might want to space it out
00:47:132 New combo
Sekai
hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Habi's Easy:
  1. 00:07:853 (1) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with the next note, but you made the slider a bit ugly, so how about making it like this?
  2. 00:09:995 (4) - this slider kinda followed the beat bad since you left the strong beat on its body...so how about doing something like 2 1/1 sliders or 1 1/1 and a note? it'll be better imo..and btw you forgot to add finishs on this slider too, i can hear it clearly in the music
  3. 00:23:567 (3) - making so many liner sliders on easiest diff's is kinda boring imo, so how about doing something like this instead with this slider?
  4. 00:30:710 (1) - ^
  5. 00:37:853 (3) - move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, so it'll blanket better with other slider~
  6. 00:40:706 (3) - well...you followed the voice good, untill you added the repeat maybe remove it and make 1 1/1 and a note? it'll follow it better if you ask me o3o
  7. 01:02:138 (1) - another bad blanketing, how about doing something like this instead of leaving it like this?
  8. 01:03:566 (3) - make a curve slider here like i said on here 00:23:567 (3) -
  9. 01:22:137 (1) - well...move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, it'll make perfect blanket with the center note



Normal:
  1. 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
  2. 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
  3. 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
  4. 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
  5. 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?



Zzz's Hard:
  1. 00:10:263 (5,6) - wow...this jump is a bit too high for the hard diff, so you might want to make less ds
  2. 00:14:906 (5) - I don't this note follows anything is just overmapped, i suggest you to remove it
  3. 01:19:102 (9) - wtf? you followed the beat nicely untill here? why did you do that lol remove it and add 1 note instead, don't make overmapped stuff ;w;



Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
  1. 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
  2. 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
  3. 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
  4. 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
  5. 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
  6. 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
  7. 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
  8. 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
  9. 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly




Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
HabiHolic
Almost Fixed

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Habi's Easy
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic
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Satellite


Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldiff
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please

[Habi's Easy]
Nothing to Say.

[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.

00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.

01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:04:996 (1) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow
00:13:210 (6) - try CTRL+G.
00:49:632 (1) - remove Nc 00:49:990 (2) - add Nc.
01:03:209 (3) - Please used distance snap.
01:07:852 (1) - add Finish. Because it is part of kiai.
01:19:102 (9) - I don't like 1/2 slider. Why can't use this?

01:26:295 (3) - I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please
this note Move 01:26:400 - here. and add Nc is better.

[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.

01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkward

Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Sekai-nyan wrote:

hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Normal:
  1. 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
  2. 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
  3. 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
  4. 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
  5. 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?


Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
  1. 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
  2. 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
  3. 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
  4. 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
  5. 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
  6. 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
  7. 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
  8. 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
  9. 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly




Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
wow!! very good mod..All Clear
Thanks!! :):)
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Satellite wrote:



Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldifffix
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please

[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.fix
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.fix

00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.fix

01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.fix

[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.no

01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkwardOther fix

thanks~:D good mod
RandF
From my queue~

[Habi's Easy]
  1. 01:00:709 (3) - how about making horizonal correctly?

    169,40,60709,2,0,P|257:24|337:45,1,160

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888
  2. 00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctly
  3. 00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?
  4. 01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^
  5. 01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192

[Zzz's Hard]

  • Good!

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)
  2. 00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DS
  3. 00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?

    404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?


wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
apl-
From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:03:392 - Add a spinner? It feels really REALLY empty.

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888fix
  2. 00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctlyfix
  3. 00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?fix
  4. 01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^fix
  5. 01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192fix


[Insane]
  1. 00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)fix
  2. 00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DSfix
  3. 00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?fix

    404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?????


wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
thanks and your so fun ww img ww
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

TestApple wrote:

From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.you see the old map
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.^

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.??
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.??
thanks mod
Losertic
엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.


AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Losertic wrote:

엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.


AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ
그게 저도 원래 AR9로 설정했었는데 모딩받으면서 3명이나 AR8로 하라고 해서 어쩔수 없이..내림..
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요 :o

[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거

[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL :D

로리 만세!
감사합니다ㅋㅋ 제가 정신이 없어서 님 모딩을 그냥 지나쳤네여ㅋㅋㅋ;;;;;
죄송합니다..and 감사합니다ㅎ
Hanabi
From my queue + PM + IRC

편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

깔끔 ^^

Habi's Easy


00:07:853 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스
00:26:424 - 00:26:960 - 휘슬빼시고 피니쉬로. (왜 커스텀 피니쉬에 휘슬 사운드를 넣었는지 잘 모르겠네요)
00:31:424 (2,3) - 디스턴스
00:34:995 (3,4) - ^
00:43:562 (3,4) - 조금 더 구부리면 잘 감싸질듯
01:04:995 (1) - ^
01:00:709 (3) - 동선을 위해
01:03:566 (3,4) - 디스턴스
01:07:852 (1,2) - ^
01:17:495 (2,3) - ^
01:25:980 (2) - 30||149

Normal


00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선
00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천
00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요
01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Zzz's Hard


00:06:781 (5,6,7) - 디스턴스 2.05 다음에 같은 방향으로 무빙하려면 하드 치고는 좀 어렵지 않을까요? 사진처럼 평범하게 하는걸 추천드려요
00:25:888 (3) - 아무 소리도 안들려서 예측하기 힘든 박자네요 D:
00:44:633 (6)가 144||272자리에 오고, 00:44:990 (1)가 204||100자리에 오는게 더 동선이 좋지 않을까요?
01:01:423 (6,7) - 6번 써클 마주보게 해주세요
01:12:852 (5,1) - 약간 헷갈리는데 137||298정도로 겹쳐보이게 하는게 더 좋아보여요
01:19:102 (9) - 뜬금없는 1/4 슬라라니; 그냥 써클로 바꾸는걸 추천

Insane


00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천
00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요
00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정
00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?
01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]
편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

깔끔 ^^

Normal


00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선
00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천
00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요
01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Insane


00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천
00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요
00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정
00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?
01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>[/quote]

제가 머 고쳤는지 까먹었네여ㅋㅋ(거의 다 수정 완료)

감사합니닿
Stefan
Hey! m4m time

[General]
Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii. Well, fixed. lol

[Easy]
00:39:278 - 00:44:990 - The soft Hitsounds (except Finish) are pretty weird and noisy. You should keep the SC:1 like you did before, about the Finishes: Keep them in.
00:44:990 (1,3) - You could do at the end of the Sliders the Normal Sampleset, it fits great with the guitar riff.

Nothing more to add, fine Easy.

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:
408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Hard]
00:04:467 (2) - That feels extremly bad and weird to play. Please try this out: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078641
00:07:317 (7) - Here too.
00:47:490 (5,6) - I'd to see a more diagonal curve with these two circles, I tried out and it feels better as the current: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078652
01:01:602 (7) - Same as 00:04:467 (2).
01:19:102 (9,1) - I don't get the flow here.. I think you can use two circles instead the (9) Slider here.

Nothing to say, nice Hard Diff.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3
Sonico Makaron
Hi :)

[Genera]
looks fine

[Habi's Easy]
00:00:714 (1) - NC since the bug
00:04:996 (1) - maybe use standart soft finish? sounds more better imo
00:06:424 (3) - remove clap at the end slider, since clap not fit here imo
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:13:567 (4) - please don't use stacks in an easy, since it hard to read for beginners
00:26:424 (3) - NC?
00:27:853 (1) - same suggestion as 00:04:996 (1)
00:30:710 (1) - same as 00:13:567 (4)
00:52:138 (3) - remove clap at the end slider
01:04:995 (1) - remove clap at he repeat slider
01:13:566 (1) - maybe use same form slider as 01:12:138 (2) -

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)

[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1) - add NC
00:02:142 (4) - maybe NC?
00:25:888 (3) - delete note, it will be better follow for vocal

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finish
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clap
01:01:602 (4) - NC

good map~
good luck :)
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Stefan wrote:

Hey! m4m time

[General]
Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii. Well, fixed. lol

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:
408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3
All fix!!

very good mod +_+b thank you :D
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi :)

[Genera]
looks fine

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NCfix
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?fix
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?no
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)fix

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NCfix
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?fix
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finishfix
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clapfix
01:01:602 (4) - NCfix

good map~
good luck :)
thanks~ good mod :)
mingmichael
taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[Muzukashii]

☞ nothing~
☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.

☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.
• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 -

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 -

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there


====================



[Oni]

☞ nothing~
☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up
• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods.

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 -


====================


okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo :) keep it up~!
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