ChouCho - starlog (TV Size) [OsuMania|Osu|Taiko]

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jogfi2002
[General]
Try to add audio lead-in

- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags

[Habi's Easy]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:25:558 - snap to 01:25:561

00:30:353 (4,1) - It's not proper to use overlapping in an Easy
00:37:495 (2,3) - ^
01:08:923 (2,3) - ^
01:18:923 (3,1) - ^


[Normal]

00:03:571 (4) - New combo
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:



[Zzz's Hard]

00:02:142 (4) - New combo
00:04:291 (7) - ^
00:10:263 (5,6) - This jump is a bit nazi
00:24:638 (5) - Change it to a 1/8 reversing slider
00:25:531 (2,3) - Make it into a slider
00:47:490 (5) - New combo
00:47:847 (1) - If you accepted the previous advice, remove new combo here
00:48:382 (2) - Make this slider half length, then add one note(New combo) at 00:48:740
01:26:295 (3) - I think it's better if you remove this note


[Insane]

00:07:317 (6) - New combo
01:01:602 (4) - ^

Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.
Pretty Rhythm
M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요 :o

[Easy]
00:07:495 (4) - 여기에 노트 넣는것도 괜찮다고 봄
00:09:995 (4) - 뭔가 음악이랑 안어울리는거 같은데...
01:17:495 (2) - 여기다가 노트 놓는것도 나쁘지 않다고 봄

[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거

[Hard]
00:04:291 (7) - 이거랑 전노트랑 간격이 좀 넓은데 NC 넣어도 괜찮을듯

[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL :D

로리 만세!
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]
Try to add audio lead-in

- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags

[Normal]

00:03:571 (4) - New combofix
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:fix


[Insane]

00:07:317 (6) - New combono
01:01:602 (4) - ^no

Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.
thanks~^^
GasTheJuice
Zzz's hard difficulty

00:44:990 Not sure why you are stacking, might want to space it out
00:47:132 New combo
Sekai
hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Habi's Easy:
  1. 00:07:853 (1) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with the next note, but you made the slider a bit ugly, so how about making it like this?
  2. 00:09:995 (4) - this slider kinda followed the beat bad since you left the strong beat on its body...so how about doing something like 2 1/1 sliders or 1 1/1 and a note? it'll be better imo..and btw you forgot to add finishs on this slider too, i can hear it clearly in the music
  3. 00:23:567 (3) - making so many liner sliders on easiest diff's is kinda boring imo, so how about doing something like this instead with this slider?
  4. 00:30:710 (1) - ^
  5. 00:37:853 (3) - move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, so it'll blanket better with other slider~
  6. 00:40:706 (3) - well...you followed the voice good, untill you added the repeat maybe remove it and make 1 1/1 and a note? it'll follow it better if you ask me o3o
  7. 01:02:138 (1) - another bad blanketing, how about doing something like this instead of leaving it like this?
  8. 01:03:566 (3) - make a curve slider here like i said on here 00:23:567 (3) -
  9. 01:22:137 (1) - well...move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, it'll make perfect blanket with the center note



Normal:
  1. 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
  2. 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
  3. 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
  4. 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
  5. 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?



Zzz's Hard:
  1. 00:10:263 (5,6) - wow...this jump is a bit too high for the hard diff, so you might want to make less ds
  2. 00:14:906 (5) - I don't this note follows anything is just overmapped, i suggest you to remove it
  3. 01:19:102 (9) - wtf? you followed the beat nicely untill here? why did you do that lol remove it and add 1 note instead, don't make overmapped stuff ;w;



Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
  1. 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
  2. 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
  3. 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
  4. 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
  5. 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
  6. 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
  7. 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
  8. 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
  9. 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly




Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
HabiHolic
Almost Fixed

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Habi's Easy
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic
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Satellite


Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldiff
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please

[Habi's Easy]
Nothing to Say.

[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.

00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.

01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:04:996 (1) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow
00:13:210 (6) - try CTRL+G.
00:49:632 (1) - remove Nc 00:49:990 (2) - add Nc.
01:03:209 (3) - Please used distance snap.
01:07:852 (1) - add Finish. Because it is part of kiai.
01:19:102 (9) - I don't like 1/2 slider. Why can't use this?

01:26:295 (3) - I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please
this note Move 01:26:400 - here. and add Nc is better.

[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.

01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkward

Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Sekai-nyan wrote:

hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Normal:
  1. 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
  2. 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
  3. 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
  4. 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
  5. 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?


Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
  1. 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
  2. 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
  3. 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
  4. 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
  5. 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
  6. 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
  7. 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
  8. 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
  9. 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly




Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
wow!! very good mod..All Clear
Thanks!! :):)
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Satellite wrote:



Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldifffix
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please

[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.fix
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.fix

00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.fix

01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.fix

[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.no

01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkwardOther fix

thanks~:D good mod
RandF
From my queue~

[Habi's Easy]
  1. 01:00:709 (3) - how about making horizonal correctly?

    169,40,60709,2,0,P|257:24|337:45,1,160

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888
  2. 00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctly
  3. 00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?
  4. 01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^
  5. 01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192

[Zzz's Hard]

  • Good!

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)
  2. 00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DS
  3. 00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?

    404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?


wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
apl-
From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:03:392 - Add a spinner? It feels really REALLY empty.

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888fix
  2. 00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctlyfix
  3. 00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?fix
  4. 01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^fix
  5. 01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192fix


[Insane]
  1. 00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)fix
  2. 00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DSfix
  3. 00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?fix

    404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?????


wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
thanks and your so fun ww img ww
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

TestApple wrote:

From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.you see the old map
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.^

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.??
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.??
thanks mod
Losertic
엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.


AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Losertic wrote:

엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.


AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ
그게 저도 원래 AR9로 설정했었는데 모딩받으면서 3명이나 AR8로 하라고 해서 어쩔수 없이..내림..
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요 :o

[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거

[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL :D

로리 만세!
감사합니다ㅋㅋ 제가 정신이 없어서 님 모딩을 그냥 지나쳤네여ㅋㅋㅋ;;;;;
죄송합니다..and 감사합니다ㅎ
Hanabi
From my queue + PM + IRC

편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

깔끔 ^^

Habi's Easy


00:07:853 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스
00:26:424 - 00:26:960 - 휘슬빼시고 피니쉬로. (왜 커스텀 피니쉬에 휘슬 사운드를 넣었는지 잘 모르겠네요)
00:31:424 (2,3) - 디스턴스
00:34:995 (3,4) - ^
00:43:562 (3,4) - 조금 더 구부리면 잘 감싸질듯
01:04:995 (1) - ^
01:00:709 (3) - 동선을 위해
01:03:566 (3,4) - 디스턴스
01:07:852 (1,2) - ^
01:17:495 (2,3) - ^
01:25:980 (2) - 30||149

Normal


00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선
00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천
00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요
01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Zzz's Hard


00:06:781 (5,6,7) - 디스턴스 2.05 다음에 같은 방향으로 무빙하려면 하드 치고는 좀 어렵지 않을까요? 사진처럼 평범하게 하는걸 추천드려요
00:25:888 (3) - 아무 소리도 안들려서 예측하기 힘든 박자네요 D:
00:44:633 (6)가 144||272자리에 오고, 00:44:990 (1)가 204||100자리에 오는게 더 동선이 좋지 않을까요?
01:01:423 (6,7) - 6번 써클 마주보게 해주세요
01:12:852 (5,1) - 약간 헷갈리는데 137||298정도로 겹쳐보이게 하는게 더 좋아보여요
01:19:102 (9) - 뜬금없는 1/4 슬라라니; 그냥 써클로 바꾸는걸 추천

Insane


00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천
00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요
00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정
00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?
01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>
Topic Starter
[ Yuki ]
편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

깔끔 ^^

Normal


00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선
00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천
00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요
01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Insane


00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천
00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요
00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정
00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?
01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>[/quote]

제가 머 고쳤는지 까먹었네여ㅋㅋ(거의 다 수정 완료)

감사합니닿
Stefan
Hey! m4m time

[General]
Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii. Well, fixed. lol

[Easy]
00:39:278 - 00:44:990 - The soft Hitsounds (except Finish) are pretty weird and noisy. You should keep the SC:1 like you did before, about the Finishes: Keep them in.
00:44:990 (1,3) - You could do at the end of the Sliders the Normal Sampleset, it fits great with the guitar riff.

Nothing more to add, fine Easy.

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:
408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Hard]
00:04:467 (2) - That feels extremly bad and weird to play. Please try this out: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078641
00:07:317 (7) - Here too.
00:47:490 (5,6) - I'd to see a more diagonal curve with these two circles, I tried out and it feels better as the current: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078652
01:01:602 (7) - Same as 00:04:467 (2).
01:19:102 (9,1) - I don't get the flow here.. I think you can use two circles instead the (9) Slider here.

Nothing to say, nice Hard Diff.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3
Sonico Makaron
Hi :)

[Genera]
looks fine

[Habi's Easy]
00:00:714 (1) - NC since the bug
00:04:996 (1) - maybe use standart soft finish? sounds more better imo
00:06:424 (3) - remove clap at the end slider, since clap not fit here imo
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:13:567 (4) - please don't use stacks in an easy, since it hard to read for beginners
00:26:424 (3) - NC?
00:27:853 (1) - same suggestion as 00:04:996 (1)
00:30:710 (1) - same as 00:13:567 (4)
00:52:138 (3) - remove clap at the end slider
01:04:995 (1) - remove clap at he repeat slider
01:13:566 (1) - maybe use same form slider as 01:12:138 (2) -

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)

[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1) - add NC
00:02:142 (4) - maybe NC?
00:25:888 (3) - delete note, it will be better follow for vocal

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finish
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clap
01:01:602 (4) - NC

good map~
good luck :)
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