thanksMira-san wrote:
Hi. From my modding queue.
And PMing you.
(I only accept osu!standard, sorry.)
[Normal]
00:54:995 (3,4)Still seems to be good.
- Change to this.
[Insane]
00:31:860 (6)
- Move to x:276 y:40Still seems to be good.
Ok sorry.
That's all I can find. Not too many. lol.
edit: It's Choucho. Throwing a star.
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블캣 띄워드렸어요
-> http://bloodcat.com/osu/?q=124689&m=s&c=&g=&d=&s=date&o=0
아 그리고 모딩 받는거에 대해서 말할게 있으니까 내일 pm해주세요.
-> http://bloodcat.com/osu/?q=124689&m=s&c=&g=&d=&s=date&o=0
아 그리고 모딩 받는거에 대해서 말할게 있으니까 내일 pm해주세요.
hey m4m
took a careful look through the timing since it's variable, here's what I have. make sure all gders apply this as well
[Habi's Easy]
I feel like the difficulty in this should be reduced noticeably, since it is a tv size map, having a 3 star easy is not very considerate of the newer players who just play this game to play anime songs they know. Distance snap being 1.2 is not that great, would recommend sticking to 1.0 especially if you're doing 1/1 rhythms, which I would recommend you cut down on considerably.
00:13:208 (3,4) - please don't use stacks in an easy
from 00:16:421 - to 00:27:850 - I think you should take out most of the filler beats, like 00:20:351 (2) - , 00:23:208 (2) - and turn beats like 00:18:565 (2) - into just single circles. Simplification will go a long way here, since the song is very soft.
00:27:851 (1,2,3) - would like to see a pattern where the flow is in a straight line, like doing a ctrl+g on 3 and then moving notes afterwards to compensate.
00:30:351 (4,1) - again, please don't use stacks
00:35:708 (4) - would recommend removing and putting a circle where the slider end was, 00:36:064 - here
I think you have an idea. The patterning and flow is all fine, rather nice overall, but I think to start this diff was not mapped in a way that would best help the spread as a whole.
[Normal]
00:05:531 (3) - perhaps you could curve this, to flow with slider before
00:22:495 (1) - would probably work best flipped ctrl+h and then moved back into spacing
00:53:566 (1,2,3,4) - I think some more consistent patterning could be done here, they just seem like randomly placed linear sliders
00:56:423 (1,2) - move 1 down and then above
01:00:709 (4,5,1) - This pattern may end up being confusing due to the 1/2 spacing and then a stack, might want to unstack
01:04:995 (2) - small thing, but move this to x356 y340 so it's symmetrical with the end of 01:03:923 (3) -
[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Silent notes are unrankable. Please add at least some sound to these
00:04:291 (7) - would recommend a NC on this note so there isn't a long and slow slider trail through the short pause
00:07:138 (6) - while I see that you would like to stack this with the notes before, it doesn't play the best as a result, I think moving to about x256 y220 so that the spacing increases with the music but is still nice to play will work
00:16:424 - yep, can't have 0% volume
00:26:960 (5) - some very weird spacing on this note, I would recommend in the x268 y244 area so that it's much more readable
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - sjoy just mentioned this and I'm going to agree, this seems quite uneventful for this difficulty
01:07:138 (6) - flip the curve for this? it's possible to do so and keep your pattern, so I think you should so it flows into the next slider well
[Insane]
AR-1, this is not fast or have many jumpy parts to justify AR 9
HP -1 as well, again this map does not need large difficulty settings
00:03:213 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did not like this transition at all, the slider is extremely short and the stream that starts way off from the center where almost all insane players will spin is pretty bad, so it comes as a very unwelcome surprise. try this perhaps
00:15:174 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing may easily end up confusing, as 4 is a very similar distance from
00:17:674 (4,5) - would recommend curves on these two, or at least 4, so that the flow between them is much nicer
00:29:103 (5,1) - I think a ctrl+g here would make this a pretty cool slight jump pattern, instead of being a simple curved flow
00:38:209 (2,3,4) - please do about the same spacing that you did 00:37:495 (7,8,1) - here for consistency
00:39:278 - to 00:44:990 - this will be a longer explanation, will try to use pictures with bad paint skills to help
In this part, you have a lot of Slider -> Circle with short distance, and then Circle -> Slider with large distance, so it looks like this
http://puu.sh/56ijT.jpg or this http://puu.sh/56iHZ.jpg
I think you should try and do either the opposite or keep even spacing, will feel much better to play, like this
http://puu.sh/56DHa.jpg and this http://puu.sh/56DLW.jpg
The reason for this is you can see the area for the slider circle is large, so it creates what we call "slider leniency" basically making it so that large spacing after sliders is easier to play than large spacing after circles. I think that if you applied this idea to mainly this section, but also most of the map, it will improve the feel of playing it much more
00:46:775 (7) - ctrl+g here? will feel better coming from previous section's flow, and there is enough space after this note to make next note fine to hit
00:52:852 (3,4,5) - would recommend rotating this a bit and moving it closer to 00:53:388 (6,7,1) - the jump is a bit sudden right now
01:14:102 (2,3,4) - perhaps this arrangement will be a bit more fun to play
I love the circle flow in the kiai, nice job
good luck!
took a careful look through the timing since it's variable, here's what I have. make sure all gders apply this as well
Offset: 712ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 4,283ms BPM: 169.00
Offset: 4,993ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 37,850ms BPM: 169.00
Offset: 39,270ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 47,841ms BPM: 167.50
Offset: 49,990ms BPM: 169.00
Offset: 50,700ms BPM: 167.00
Offset: 52,137ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 84,994ms BPM: 159.00
Offset: 85,560ms BPM: 143.00
Offset: 86,304ms BPM: 143.00
[Habi's Easy]
I feel like the difficulty in this should be reduced noticeably, since it is a tv size map, having a 3 star easy is not very considerate of the newer players who just play this game to play anime songs they know. Distance snap being 1.2 is not that great, would recommend sticking to 1.0 especially if you're doing 1/1 rhythms, which I would recommend you cut down on considerably.
00:13:208 (3,4) - please don't use stacks in an easy
from 00:16:421 - to 00:27:850 - I think you should take out most of the filler beats, like 00:20:351 (2) - , 00:23:208 (2) - and turn beats like 00:18:565 (2) - into just single circles. Simplification will go a long way here, since the song is very soft.
00:27:851 (1,2,3) - would like to see a pattern where the flow is in a straight line, like doing a ctrl+g on 3 and then moving notes afterwards to compensate.
00:30:351 (4,1) - again, please don't use stacks
00:35:708 (4) - would recommend removing and putting a circle where the slider end was, 00:36:064 - here
I think you have an idea. The patterning and flow is all fine, rather nice overall, but I think to start this diff was not mapped in a way that would best help the spread as a whole.
[Normal]
00:05:531 (3) - perhaps you could curve this, to flow with slider before
00:22:495 (1) - would probably work best flipped ctrl+h and then moved back into spacing
00:53:566 (1,2,3,4) - I think some more consistent patterning could be done here, they just seem like randomly placed linear sliders
00:56:423 (1,2) - move 1 down and then above
01:00:709 (4,5,1) - This pattern may end up being confusing due to the 1/2 spacing and then a stack, might want to unstack
01:04:995 (2) - small thing, but move this to x356 y340 so it's symmetrical with the end of 01:03:923 (3) -
[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Silent notes are unrankable. Please add at least some sound to these
00:04:291 (7) - would recommend a NC on this note so there isn't a long and slow slider trail through the short pause
00:07:138 (6) - while I see that you would like to stack this with the notes before, it doesn't play the best as a result, I think moving to about x256 y220 so that the spacing increases with the music but is still nice to play will work
00:16:424 - yep, can't have 0% volume
00:26:960 (5) - some very weird spacing on this note, I would recommend in the x268 y244 area so that it's much more readable
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - sjoy just mentioned this and I'm going to agree, this seems quite uneventful for this difficulty
01:07:138 (6) - flip the curve for this? it's possible to do so and keep your pattern, so I think you should so it flows into the next slider well
[Insane]
AR-1, this is not fast or have many jumpy parts to justify AR 9
HP -1 as well, again this map does not need large difficulty settings
00:03:213 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did not like this transition at all, the slider is extremely short and the stream that starts way off from the center where almost all insane players will spin is pretty bad, so it comes as a very unwelcome surprise. try this perhaps
00:17:674 (4,5) - would recommend curves on these two, or at least 4, so that the flow between them is much nicer
00:29:103 (5,1) - I think a ctrl+g here would make this a pretty cool slight jump pattern, instead of being a simple curved flow
00:38:209 (2,3,4) - please do about the same spacing that you did 00:37:495 (7,8,1) - here for consistency
00:39:278 - to 00:44:990 - this will be a longer explanation, will try to use pictures with bad paint skills to help
In this part, you have a lot of Slider -> Circle with short distance, and then Circle -> Slider with large distance, so it looks like this
http://puu.sh/56ijT.jpg or this http://puu.sh/56iHZ.jpg
I think you should try and do either the opposite or keep even spacing, will feel much better to play, like this
http://puu.sh/56DHa.jpg and this http://puu.sh/56DLW.jpg
The reason for this is you can see the area for the slider circle is large, so it creates what we call "slider leniency" basically making it so that large spacing after sliders is easier to play than large spacing after circles. I think that if you applied this idea to mainly this section, but also most of the map, it will improve the feel of playing it much more
00:46:775 (7) - ctrl+g here? will feel better coming from previous section's flow, and there is enough space after this note to make next note fine to hit
00:52:852 (3,4,5) - would recommend rotating this a bit and moving it closer to 00:53:388 (6,7,1) - the jump is a bit sudden right now
01:14:102 (2,3,4) - perhaps this arrangement will be a bit more fun to play
I love the circle flow in the kiai, nice job
good luck!
Topic Starter
very good...wow.. good mod thanks!!captin1 wrote:
hey m4m
took a careful look through the timing since it's variable, here's what I have. make sure all gders apply this as wellOffset: 712ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 4,283ms BPM: 169.00
Offset: 4,993ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 37,850ms BPM: 169.00
Offset: 39,270ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 47,841ms BPM: 167.50
Offset: 49,990ms BPM: 169.00
Offset: 50,700ms BPM: 167.00
Offset: 52,137ms BPM: 168.00
Offset: 84,994ms BPM: 159.00
Offset: 85,560ms BPM: 143.00
Offset: 86,304ms BPM: 143.00
[Normal]
00:05:531 (3) - perhaps you could curve this, to flow with slider beforefix
00:22:495 (1) - would probably work best flipped ctrl+h and then moved back into spacingfix
00:53:566 (1,2,3,4) - I think some more consistent patterning could be done here, they just seem like randomly placed linear slidersfix
00:56:423 (1,2) - move 1 down and then aboveOther fix
01:00:709 (4,5,1) - This pattern may end up being confusing due to the 1/2 spacing and then a stack, might want to unstackfix
01:04:995 (2) - small thing, but move this to x356 y340 so it's symmetrical with the end of 01:03:923 (3) - fix
[Insane]
AR-1, this is not fast or have many jumpy parts to justify AR 9
HP -1 as well, again this map does not need large difficulty settingsfix
00:03:213 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did not like this transition at all, the slider is extremely short and the stream that starts way off from the center where almost all insane players will spin is pretty bad, so it comes as a very unwelcome surprise. try this perhapsfix00:15:174 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing may easily end up confusing, as 4 is a very similar distance fromfix
00:17:674 (4,5) - would recommend curves on these two, or at least 4, so that the flow between them is much nicerfix
00:29:103 (5,1) - I think a ctrl+g here would make this a pretty cool slight jump pattern, instead of being a simple curved flowfix
00:38:209 (2,3,4) - please do about the same spacing that you did 00:37:495 (7,8,1) - here for consistencyfix
00:39:278 - to 00:44:990 - this will be a longer explanation, will try to use pictures with bad paint skills to help
In this part, you have a lot of Slider -> Circle with short distance, and then Circle -> Slider with large distance, so it looks like this
http://puu.sh/56ijT.jpg or this http://puu.sh/56iHZ.jpg
I think you should try and do either the opposite or keep even spacing, will feel much better to play, like this
http://puu.sh/56DHa.jpg and this http://puu.sh/56DLW.jpg
The reason for this is you can see the area for the slider circle is large, so it creates what we call "slider leniency" basically making it so that large spacing after sliders is easier to play than large spacing after circles. I think that if you applied this idea to mainly this section, but also most of the map, it will improve the feel of playing it much more
00:46:775 (7) - ctrl+g here? will feel better coming from previous section's flow, and there is enough space after this note to make next note fine to hitfix
00:52:852 (3,4,5) - would recommend rotating this a bit and moving it closer to 00:53:388 (6,7,1) - the jump is a bit sudden right nowfix
01:14:102 (2,3,4) - perhaps this arrangement will be a bit more fun to playfix
I love the circle flow in the kiai, nice job
good luck!
[Navy] wrote:
안녕하세요~ ㅋ ( 네 안녕하세요~!! )
[ZZZ's Hard]
00:04:467 (8,1)
00:07:317 (7,1) - 안겹치게 하는게 좋지 않을까요..? ( 음.. 제취향이라 .. ㅠㅠ ... 그리고 괜찮아보여요.. 이정도는 ... )
00:10:263 (5,6) - 5를 6, 6을 5자리로
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - 약간 이상한 듯 한데..
보통 리듬대로 하시는게 어떨까요 ( 이것도 노린거라서 ㅠㅠ... 별 문제는 없을꺼같아요! )
01:00:530 (4,5) -
(4)는 조금올리고 (5)는 내리면 조금더쉬워질듯 해요 ( 음 ... 별 문제는 없는거같아요 ... 흨흨... )
(전이런거 많이틀려서 ㅜㅜ)
직선 슬라이더가 너무많아여!
조금만 바꿔주시면 완벽할듯
W h i t e wrote:
[Hard]
00:00:714 - 소리를 키워주세요. ( 네~ )
00:16:424- ^ ( ^ )
01:19:102 (9) - 슬라이더 보다는 연타로 하시는게 어떨까요? ( 제 취향이라서 ... 사람들도 이게 더 재미있다고하고 ㅇㅇ!!! )
역시 다들 잘 만드신다니까 ( 님도 잘만드시자나옄!!! )
sjoy wrote:
FROM M4M
[Zzz's Hard]
tags is conflict with other diff
00:04:291 (7) - NC ( yes )
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - a lit boring on hard diff( umm.. no... )
00:16:424 you don't use the %0 hitsounds.It's unrankable.PLZ at leat 30% ( yes )
01:12:852 (5,1) - try this http://puu.sh/56dE5.jpg ( no... )
01:26:295 (3) - move on 01:26:400 spinner start on 01:26:505 ( no... )
DropTimes wrote:
첫모딩이네요~ 으어 ;w;
[Zzz's Hard]
이것도 1.4로 맞춰주세요
처음이라 이것만 해드려도 될지 모르겠네요
부탁드려서 감사합니다
captin1 wrote:
hey m4m
[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Silent notes are unrankable. Please add at least some sound to these ( umm.. Done )
00:04:291 (7) - would recommend a NC on this note so there isn't a long and slow slider trail through the short pause ( yes. Done )
00:07:138 (6) - while I see that you would like to stack this with the notes before, it doesn't play the best as a result, I think moving to about x256 y220 so that the spacing increases with the music but is still nice to play will work ( no...I Now is good ... )
00:16:424 - yep, can't have 0% volume ( yes. Done )
00:26:960 (5) - some very weird spacing on this note, I would recommend in the x268 y244 area so that it's much more readable ( no...I Now is good ... )
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - sjoy just mentioned this and I'm going to agree, this seems quite uneventful for this difficulty ( umm.. no... I Now pending )
01:07:138 (6) - flip the curve for this? it's possible to do so and keep your pattern, so I think you should so it flows into the next slider well ( no... )
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328,84,20531,2,0,L|188:84,1,140
96,84,21067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,164,21245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,248,21424,2,0,P|144:256|176:248,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,21781,2,0,P|328:212|376:260,2,140,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,296,22674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,380,22853,6,0,P|256:380|208:332,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,296,23388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,23745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,296,24103,2,0,L|152:296,1,140
68,328,24638,2,0,P|60:292|68:256,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,172,24995,6,0,P|92:100|44:52,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,136,25531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,68,25888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,68,26067,2,0,L|408:68,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,172,26960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,68,27495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,68,27853,6,0,L|408:68,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,68,28388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,28567,2,0,P|456:220|504:268,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,348,29103,2,0,L|320:348,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,348,29638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,348,29817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,380,29995,2,0,P|44:352|56:308,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,30353,6,0,P|88:156|40:108,2,140,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,192,31245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,132,31603,2,0,L|248:132,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,132,31960,2,0,P|388:184|388:248,1,140
304,216,32495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,44,32853,2,0,L|444:44,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,33567,6,0,L|164:216,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,216,34103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,34281,2,0,P|120:68|72:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,104,34817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,34995,2,0,L|260:140,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,52,35531,2,0,L|428:52,1,140
508,16,36067,2,0,P|516:52|508:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,164,36424,6,0,P|468:236|516:284,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,364,36960,2,0,L|332:364,1,140
272,296,37495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,224,37674,2,0,L|76:224,1,140
20,152,38209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,64,38387,2,0,L|184:64,1,140
268,28,38922,2,0,P|276:64|268:100,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,39278,6,0,P|236:252|284:300,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,248,39813,2,0,P|396:176|348:128,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,40349,2,0,P|164:180|116:132,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,20,40884,2,0,P|240:20|288:68,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,41420,1,12,0:0:0:0:
316,212,41777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,64,42134,6,0,P|236:18|168:20,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,135,42669,2,0,P|167:181|236:180,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,129,43205,2,0,P|397:179|396:248,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,298,43740,2,0,P|234:248|236:180,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,212,44276,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,100,44633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,272,44990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,272,45704,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,272,46418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,272,47132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,272,47490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,272,47668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,47847,6,0,P|92:220|92:156,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,92,48382,2,0,L|296:92,1,140
388,92,48918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,56,49097,2,0,P|472:128|424:176,1,140
388,92,49632,5,12,0:0:0:0:
468,256,49990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,256,50704,6,0,L|172:256,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,51242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,180,51421,2,0,P|128:108|80:60,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,144,51959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,180,52138,2,0,L|268:180,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,52673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,52852,2,0,P|444:216|396:264,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,53388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,96,53566,6,0,L|184:96,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,96,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,54280,2,0,P|136:248|88:296,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,212,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,54995,2,0,L|360:280,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,280,55530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,55709,2,0,P|408:128|456:80,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,164,56245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,56423,6,0,L|180:104,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,104,56959,2,0,P|36:156|36:220,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,284,57495,2,0,L|172:284,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,57852,2,0,P|328:316|376:268,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,156,58388,2,0,P|252:156|204:204,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,236,58923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,68,59280,6,0,P|148:68|100:20,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,64,59816,2,0,L|20:204,1,140
20,296,60352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,252,60530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,252,60709,2,0,L|332:252,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,92,61423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,56,61602,2,0,L|360:28,5,35
336,56,62138,6,0,P|336:128|384:176,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,212,62673,2,0,P|510:262|508:330,1,140
428,292,63209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,292,63387,2,0,L|196:292,1,140
104,292,63923,2,0,P|52:240|52:176,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,64459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,64637,2,0,P|192:104|184:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64995,6,0,L|396:192,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,156,65530,2,0,P|480:228|432:276,1,140
396,192,66066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,108,66245,2,0,L|220:108,1,140
128,108,66780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,283,67138,2,0,P|200:232|176:188,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,67852,6,0,L|400:344,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,344,68388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,68566,2,0,L|448:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,104,68923,2,0,P|396:52|332:52,2,140,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,136,69816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,69995,2,0,L|132:136,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,136,70530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,216,70709,6,0,P|84:288|36:336,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,252,71245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,71423,2,0,L|308:320,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,160,72138,2,0,L|256:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,72852,2,0,L|308:320,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,160,73567,6,0,L|256:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,160,74102,2,0,P|108:104|108:48,1,140
196,72,74637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,152,74816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,74995,2,0,P|88:296|40:344,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,300,75530,2,0,L|316:300,1,140
399,263,76066,2,0,P|408:297|399:331,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,180,76423,6,0,P|364:108|412:60,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,76959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,77316,2,0,L|204:84,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,84,77673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,77852,2,0,P|160:236|112:284,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,200,78387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,78566,2,0,L|232:164,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,164,78923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,200,79102,2,2,L|376:228,1,35
404,200,79280,6,0,P|404:128|356:80,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,79816,2,0,L|128:76,1,140
36,76,80352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,156,80530,2,0,P|80:228|32:276,1,140
76,356,81066,2,0,L|148:356,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,280,81423,2,0,L|336:280,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,280,81959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,200,82137,6,0,P|384:128|432:80,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,112,82673,2,0,L|152:112,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,112,83209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,180,83387,2,0,P|0:252|48:300,1,140
84,216,83923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,280,84280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,216,84637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,368,84995,6,0,P|292:368|340:320,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,192,85561,2,0,P|220:192|172:240,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,86295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86400,12,0,88917,0:0:0:0:
[General]
Try to add audio lead-in
- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags
[Habi's Easy]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:25:558 - snap to 01:25:561
00:30:353 (4,1) - It's not proper to use overlapping in an Easy
00:37:495 (2,3) - ^
01:08:923 (2,3) - ^
01:18:923 (3,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:03:571 (4) - New combo
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:
[Zzz's Hard]
00:02:142 (4) - New combo
00:04:291 (7) - ^
00:10:263 (5,6) - This jump is a bit nazi
00:24:638 (5) - Change it to a 1/8 reversing slider
00:25:531 (2,3) - Make it into a slider
00:47:490 (5) - New combo
00:47:847 (1) - If you accepted the previous advice, remove new combo here
00:48:382 (2) - Make this slider half length, then add one note(New combo) at 00:48:740
01:26:295 (3) - I think it's better if you remove this note
[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - New combo
01:01:602 (4) - ^
Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.
Try to add audio lead-in
- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags
[Habi's Easy]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:25:558 - snap to 01:25:561
00:30:353 (4,1) - It's not proper to use overlapping in an Easy
00:37:495 (2,3) - ^
01:08:923 (2,3) - ^
01:18:923 (3,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:03:571 (4) - New combo
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:
[Zzz's Hard]
00:02:142 (4) - New combo
00:04:291 (7) - ^
00:10:263 (5,6) - This jump is a bit nazi
00:24:638 (5) - Change it to a 1/8 reversing slider
00:25:531 (2,3) - Make it into a slider
00:47:490 (5) - New combo
00:47:847 (1) - If you accepted the previous advice, remove new combo here
00:48:382 (2) - Make this slider half length, then add one note(New combo) at 00:48:740
01:26:295 (3) - I think it's better if you remove this note
[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - New combo
01:01:602 (4) - ^
Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.
M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요
[Easy]
00:07:495 (4) - 여기에 노트 넣는것도 괜찮다고 봄
00:09:995 (4) - 뭔가 음악이랑 안어울리는거 같은데...
01:17:495 (2) - 여기다가 노트 놓는것도 나쁘지 않다고 봄
[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거
[Hard]
00:04:291 (7) - 이거랑 전노트랑 간격이 좀 넓은데 NC 넣어도 괜찮을듯
[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC
노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL
로리 만세!
[Easy]
00:07:495 (4) - 여기에 노트 넣는것도 괜찮다고 봄
00:09:995 (4) - 뭔가 음악이랑 안어울리는거 같은데...
01:17:495 (2) - 여기다가 노트 놓는것도 나쁘지 않다고 봄
[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거
[Hard]
00:04:291 (7) - 이거랑 전노트랑 간격이 좀 넓은데 NC 넣어도 괜찮을듯
[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC
노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL
로리 만세!
Topic Starter
thanks~^^jogfi2002 wrote:
[General]
Try to add audio lead-in
- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags
[Normal]
00:03:571 (4) - New combofix
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:fix
[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - New combono
01:01:602 (4) - ^no
Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.
Zzz's hard difficulty
00:44:990 Not sure why you are stacking, might want to space it out
00:47:132 New combo
00:44:990 Not sure why you are stacking, might want to space it out
00:47:132 New combo
hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3
Habi's Easy:
Normal:
Zzz's Hard:
Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
Habi's Easy:
- 00:07:853 (1) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with the next note, but you made the slider a bit ugly, so how about making it like this?
- 00:09:995 (4) - this slider kinda followed the beat bad since you left the strong beat on its body...so how about doing something like 2 1/1 sliders or 1 1/1 and a note? it'll be better imo..and btw you forgot to add finishs on this slider too, i can hear it clearly in the music
- 00:23:567 (3) - making so many liner sliders on easiest diff's is kinda boring imo, so how about doing something like this instead with this slider?
- 00:30:710 (1) - ^
- 00:37:853 (3) - move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, so it'll blanket better with other slider~
- 00:40:706 (3) - well...you followed the voice good, untill you added the repeat maybe remove it and make 1 1/1 and a note? it'll follow it better if you ask me o3o
- 01:02:138 (1) - another bad blanketing, how about doing something like this instead of leaving it like this?
- 01:03:566 (3) - make a curve slider here like i said on here 00:23:567 (3) -
- 01:22:137 (1) - well...move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, it'll make perfect blanket with the center note
Normal:
- 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
- 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
- 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
- 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
- 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?
Zzz's Hard:
- 00:10:263 (5,6) - wow...this jump is a bit too high for the hard diff, so you might want to make less ds
- 00:14:906 (5) - I don't this note follows anything is just overmapped, i suggest you to remove it
- 01:19:102 (9) - wtf? you followed the beat nicely untill here? why did you do that lol remove it and add 1 note instead, don't make overmapped stuff ;w;
Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
- 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
- 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
- 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
- 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
- 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
- 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
- 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
- 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
- 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly
Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
Almost Fixed
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Habi's Easy
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
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Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldiff
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please
[Habi's Easy]
Nothing to Say.
[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.
00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.
01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.
[Zzz's Hard]
00:04:996 (1) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow
00:13:210 (6) - try CTRL+G.
00:49:632 (1) - remove Nc 00:49:990 (2) - add Nc.
01:03:209 (3) - Please used distance snap.
01:07:852 (1) - add Finish. Because it is part of kiai.
01:19:102 (9) - I don't like 1/2 slider. Why can't use this?
01:26:295 (3) - I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please
this note Move 01:26:400 - here. and add Nc is better.
[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.
01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkward
Topic Starter
wow!! very good mod..All ClearSekai-nyan wrote:
hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3
Normal:
- 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
- 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
- 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
- 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
- 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?
Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
- 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
- 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
- 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
- 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
- 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
- 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
- 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
- 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
- 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly
Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
Thanks!!
Topic Starter
thanks~:D good modSatellite wrote:
Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldifffix
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please
[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.fix
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.fix
00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.fix
01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.fix
[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.no
01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkwardOther fix
From my queue~
[Habi's Easy]
[Normal]
[Zzz's Hard]
[Insane]
wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
[Habi's Easy]
- 01:00:709 (3) - how about making horizonal correctly?
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[Normal]
- 00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888
- 00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctly
- 00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?
- 01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^
- 01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192
[Zzz's Hard]
Good!
[Insane]
- 00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)
- 00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DS
- 00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?
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132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?
wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~
apl-
From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!
[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.
[Zzz's Hard]
00:03:392 - Add a spinner? It feels really REALLY empty.
[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.
[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.
[Zzz's Hard]
00:03:392 - Add a spinner? It feels really REALLY empty.
[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.