REDALiCE - Acceleration [OsuMania|Osu] · forum

captin1

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2011

captin1 2013-11-21T17:48:54+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
Set "Preview Time", it's Unrankble.
Inconsistence "Audio-Lead-In", you must fix it.
Uncheck "Widescreen Support" since there is no SB.
Inconsistence "Tags", you must fix it.
Inconsistence "Timing Points", you must fix it.
PLEASE CHECK AIMOD.
[Standard]
Placement
00:41:704(1,2,3) You can bent these flow better, horizontal movement looks a bit ugly.
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:13:037 Missing note is not good for newbie for consistence, you can add better. doing this pushes star rating above 3.25 ;_;
00:16:037(1) For the easiest diff, I don't recommend doubled kick slider, it's hard to expect.
Hit Sound
00:39:371(3) Add clap at end.
00:57:371(1) Add finish at head.

[Another]
Placement
00:12:371(2,3,4) Put these notes symmetrically on previous (1,2,3)?
SPOILER
00:27:037(7) I suppose you can put jumping from (7) to (8) better not fro (6) to (7) since the red line is emphasized with whistle.
SPOILER
00:31:037(2) Just opposite (1) and replace like this? I suppose it looks more fun.
SPOILER
00:32:204(2) The flow from (1) looks not good I suppose, this anti-jumping is a bit confused. Here is example.
SPOILER
00:37:537(7) This spacing looks narrow, you can move far away better.
01:03:371(3) I suppose CTRL+G looks more nice flow.
Hit Sound
00:06:204(4) Add whistle at reverse.
00:08:871(4)^
00:21:371(17) Add finish.
00:31:704(4) Add whistle? no thanks, keeping it less loud there

Good Luck.

thanks!
http://puu.sh/5p604.zip

some notes for reika
00:21:703 - I set the preview point here, I think it fits best, so you should do the same for all of the mania diffs if you agree, otherwise put it wherever you want ;o
you should add an audio lead in of 2000 since the song starts right away, should be done in the .osu file
use my tags, they include natsu
and uncheck the widescreen, its unnecessary

also natsu, set offset to 37 in yours and preview point/audio lead in as above ^

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-11-24T07:04:24+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M

[Hyper]
Placement
00:35:204(3) I suppose CTRL+G looks nice flow for jumping here. ok
00:01:371(5,6) To follow the music, I suppose this would be more suitable. your suggestion its good but I think my current rhythm is better
00:32:037(6) Not sure, but extend at 00:32:287 better for me.No since the strong sound its on the upbeat the offset got a non important sound thought
01:10:204(1) It's not snapped at beginning, and you should set ×0.60 not ×0.75. ok
01:15:537(1) Again, why you used ×0.75 in this section... cuz Im Baka :c should be fine now
01:16:704(3) Object end isn't snapped. ~
00:04:871(7,8) Why ignored whistle sounds here? You can hear it clearly I suppose... sound nice added
00:10:204(7,8) ^ ^
00:35:537(1) At head, you put soft whistle here, but previous part you already put Normal-whistle. I don't know the difference since I can here same sounds both parts. And there are same points in this diff, just for me, you can set one whistle sound better. Im baka should be fine both sounds now and captin1 dont let me use custom hitsounds so /me runs
01:06:704(1)Finish sounds nice at head than whistle. okay

Good Luck. thanks owo/

moe diff

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - Acceleration.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 21703
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16704
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Acceleration
TitleUnicode:Acceleration
Artist:REDALiCE
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE
Creator:Reikosaka
Version:Natsu's Hyper
Source:maimai
Tags:Halfpipe tokyo sega captin1 [Shi-Ra] asd123iii Natsu
BeatmapID:325943
BeatmapSetID:124329

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-11-24T13:07:49+00:00

Update !

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-11-28T13:31:33+00:00

here is captin's ticket

captin's Standard

00:00:037 (1) - check this
00:22:370 (1) - stack this note with 00:24:036 (3) - this slider for better flow with 00:23:370 (2) - this
01:18:203 (2) - how about changing this to 1/2 slider? feels better with music

Natsu's Hyper

00:09:036 (3) - why didn't you add a whistle here o.o?
00:15:036 (6,8) - uh missing claps?
00:17:703 (6) - ^
00:38:203 (4,5) - this seems little bit messed up, maybe something like this can be solution
00:51:703 (4) - clap
00:52:120 (1,1,2) - considering this diff called Hyper, this rhythm plays much better

captin's Another

00:22:370 (1) - well this slider isn't really good for playing imo, this sudden acceleration feels kinda weird and players may miss it easily try reducing SV little? like x1.25 or x1.5?(yea 00:57:036 (1) - same here too)
00:31:703 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1132274 try this placement, it fits really well with previous and next slider
00:42:703 (7) - add NC here? since rhythm hears changed little and distance too
01:06:870 (2,4) - had a mistake on clap imo
01:07:703 (7) - because of consistence, i think this slider's finish should be placed on 01:07:536 (6) - here
01:12:536 (10) - try reversing this (i mean ctrl g) for better movement? (and it'll be better 01:13:036 (12) - if you curve this downward
01:17:536 (2) - delete whistle for consistence

good luck~

captin1

osu! Alumni

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captin1 2013-11-28T17:03:10+00:00

"HelloSCV"

here is captin's ticket

captin's Standard

00:00:037 (1) - check this oops
00:22:370 (1) - stack this note with 00:24:036 (3) - this slider for better flow with 00:23:370 (2) - this fixed
01:18:203 (2) - how about changing this to 1/2 slider? feels better with music fixed

captin's Another

00:22:370 (1) - well this slider isn't really good for playing imo, this sudden acceleration feels kinda weird and players may miss it easily try reducing SV little? like x1.25 or x1.5?(yea 00:57:036 (1) - same here too) Imo it's actually quite easy to get the path of this, since the slidercircle is so lenient. I'll see what I can do.
00:31:703 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1132274 try this placement, it fits really well with previous and next slider oh wow cool yea thanks
00:42:703 (7) - add NC here? since rhythm hears changed little and distance too fixed
01:06:870 (2,4) - had a mistake on clap imo o.o it's fine on my end
01:07:703 (7) - because of consistence, i think this slider's finish should be placed on 01:07:536 (6) - here nice catch
01:12:536 (10) - try reversing this (i mean ctrl g) for better movement? (and it'll be better 01:13:036 (12) - if you curve this downward cool
01:17:536 (2) - delete whistle for consistence yea

good luck~

whooo yea thanks

also deleted notes in standard cause fk star rating

http://puu.sh/5wpsG.zip

Azer

World Cup Organiser

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Joined December 2012

Azer 2013-11-29T16:19:29+00:00

Hi! m4m with captin.

[captin's Another]

00:09:703 (2) - Placement of this note doesnt help with the flow I feel, It would be better placed somewhere around here
SPOILER
00:11:036 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Is it just my eyes or these are not perfect squares?
00:16:703 (3,4) - ctrl+g both
00:22:870 (1,2) - The jump between these two seems high compared to what follows
00:29:370 (5) - flows bad, you can maybe move it to the left like this
SPOILER
00:31:703 (4,5,1,2) - distance
00:33:036 (7) - overlap looks bad
00:38:703 (1) - blanket? (00:38:370 (11) - too maybe but flow would be weird)
01:08:703 (4) - blanket
01:11:703 (7,8) - blanket nazi mode aaaaaaa fix them
01:12:870 (11,12) - bad flow, suggestion
SPOILER

[captin's Standard]

00:00:037 (1) - .. what?
00:26:703 (3) - blanket? & 00:26:703 (3,1,2) - triangle pls
00:37:370 (3) - blanket pls
00:39:370 (3) - overlap ;A;
00:58:036 (2) - blanket pls
01:01:370 (3) - blanket pls
01:04:036 (4) - blanket pls D:
01:14:703 (3,4) - god this is the worst mod ive ever fucking done im sorry
SPOILER
and fix 01:16:370 (1,2,3) - position

Sorarei

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Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-11-30T02:43:27+00:00

i forgot to update previous difficult

captin1

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Joined February 2011

captin1 2013-11-30T20:37:59+00:00

"Azer"

Hi! m4m with captin.

[captin's Another]

00:09:703 (2) - Placement of this note doesnt help with the flow I feel, It would be better placed somewhere around here
SPOILER
00:11:036 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Is it just my eyes or these are not perfect squares? they're close enough
00:16:703 (3,4) - ctrl+g both
00:22:870 (1,2) - The jump between these two seems high compared to what follows
00:29:370 (5) - flows bad, you can maybe move it to the left like this
SPOILER
00:31:703 (4,5,1,2) - distance
00:33:036 (7) - overlap looks bad reworked along with distance
00:38:703 (1) - blanket? (00:38:370 (11) - too maybe but flow would be weird)
01:08:703 (4) - blanket
01:11:703 (7,8) - blanket nazi mode aaaaaaa fix them
01:12:870 (11,12) - bad flow, suggestion changed a different way
SPOILER

[captin's Standard]

00:00:037 (1) - .. what? fixed in last mod
00:26:703 (3) - blanket? & 00:26:703 (3,1,2) - triangle pls
00:37:370 (3) - blanket pls
00:39:370 (3) - overlap ;A;
00:58:036 (2) - blanket pls
01:01:370 (3) - blanket pls
01:04:036 (4) - blanket pls D:
01:14:703 (3,4) - god this is the worst mod ive ever fucking done im sorry
SPOILER
and fix 01:16:370 (1,2,3) - position

thanks yo

http://puu.sh/5y1dK.zip

Sorarei

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-01T03:12:11+00:00

update !

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-12-04T07:59:28+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
here is captin's ticket

Natsu's Hyper

00:52:120 (1,1,2) - considering this diff called Hyper, this rhythm plays much better yeah but my current rhythm follow better the song also they are sliders easy to do imo

good luck~

thank you :3

SPOILER

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331,85,29370,2,0,P|307:45|265:20,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,24,29703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,68,29870,2,0,P|80:107|80:152,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,231,30203,38,0,B|170:265|170:265|225:255,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,225,30703,22,0,P|345:254|359:293,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,348,31036,2,0,L|460:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,31370,2,0,P|472:148|432:124,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,76,31703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,52,31870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,32036,2,0,P|128:104|108:124,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,32370,2,0,L|4:196,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,188,32870,1,4,0:0:0:0:
332,180,33036,2,0,P|328:220|304:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,276,33370,38,0,L|144:320,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,33703,2,0,L|87:247,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,160,34036,2,0,L|51:161,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,34370,2,0,L|38:67,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,16,34703,6,0,L|205:36,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,80,35036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,136,35203,2,0,P|296:99|296:60,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,188,35536,6,0,P|332:216|264:204,1,120.000004577637,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,36036,22,0,P|144:100|100:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,144,36370,2,0,P|60:172|104:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,36703,2,0,P|195:165|196:211,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,37036,2,0,P|184:296|232:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,37370,6,0,P|312:288|304:336,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,37870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,38036,1,2,2:0:0:0:
396,212,38203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,116,38370,2,0,P|411:77|401:38,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,38703,38,0,P|261:13|221:14,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,72,39036,2,0,P|116:68|80:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,39370,2,0,L|4:200,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,39703,2,0,L|80:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,320,40036,6,0,P|73:331|112:322,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,40370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,200,40536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,248,40703,1,2,2:0:0:0:
416,320,40870,6,0,P|452:296|464:240,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,160,41370,22,0,L|372:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,20,41703,2,0,L|269:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,42036,2,0,L|161:95,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,16,42370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,100,42536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,184,42703,5,2,2:0:0:0:
108,184,42870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,100,43036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,184,43203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,368,43536,1,2,2:0:0:0:
156,352,43703,2,0,P|196:336|224:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,44036,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,32,44370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,164,44703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,32,45036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,164,45370,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,45703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,164,46036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,296,46370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,164,46703,37,0,0:0:0:0:
330,39,47036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,132,47370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,47703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,349,48036,5,0,0:0:0:0:
81,225,48370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,132,48703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,49036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,112,49370,37,0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,49703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,256,50036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,100,50370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,244,50703,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,228,51036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,100,51370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,51703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,232,52036,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52120,12,4,54703,0:0:0:0:
240,112,54953,6,0,P|292:132|324:188,1,120,8|8,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
276,276,55370,2,0,P|224:256|192:200,1,120,8|8,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,55870,1,8,2:0:0:0:
240,12,56036,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,152,57370,38,0,L|148:100,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,57703,2,0,L|364:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,58036,2,0,L|148:284,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,58370,2,0,L|364:284,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,340,58703,6,0,P|460:300|460:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,168,59036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,88,59203,2,0,P|352:60|312:48,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,59536,6,0,B|180:92|180:92|132:56,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,24,60036,22,0,L|40:108,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,200,60370,2,0,P|76:192|104:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,172,60703,2,0,L|192:256,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,61036,2,0,P|228:340|256:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,61370,6,0,P|348:292|348:332,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,61870,2,0,P|204:180|188:136,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,62203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,84,62370,2,0,P|320:116|328:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,62703,38,0,L|408:276,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,63036,2,0,L|240:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,63370,2,0,L|76:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,168,63703,2,0,L|144:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,64036,6,0,P|272:188|292:144,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,64,64370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,64,64536,2,0,P|324:68|360:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,64870,6,0,B|444:168|444:168|432:216,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,296,65370,22,0,P|352:320|308:328,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,288,65703,2,0,P|188:284|140:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,348,66036,2,0,P|56:304|60:268,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,66370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,136,66536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,66703,6,0,P|256:68|216:44,1,80,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,67036,2,0,L|88:52,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,67536,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,40,67703,2,0,P|388:72|400:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,68036,38,0,P|328:224|328:268,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,344,68370,2,0,P|344:360|300:356,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,68703,2,0,P|196:272|156:264,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,320,69036,2,0,P|68:284|68:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,69370,6,0,P|148:136|144:96,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,12,69703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,12,69870,2,0,L|184:12,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,12,70203,6,0,B|320:24|320:24|344:72,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,70703,22,0,P|364:204|408:204,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,71036,2,0,P|496:188|496:228,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,292,71370,2,0,L|360:348,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,344,71703,2,0,L|206:293,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,72036,6,0,P|108:200|100:160,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,72536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,72703,1,2,2:0:0:0:
412,232,72870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,73036,2,0,P|436:200|444:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,73370,38,0,P|444:64|484:72,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,73703,2,0,P|364:80|324:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,74036,2,0,P|216:64|204:108,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,74370,2,0,P|128:164|112:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,44,74703,6,0,P|40:68|24:100,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,196,75036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,272,75203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,288,75370,1,2,2:0:0:0:
264,260,75536,6,0,B|312:248|312:248|360:276,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,76036,22,0,L|488:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,176,76370,2,0,P|464:156|416:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,76703,2,0,L|285:111,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,77036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,77203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,180,77370,6,0,P|76:144|64:104,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,77870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,160,78203,1,2,2:0:0:0:
444,88,78370,2,0,P|472:132|476:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,78703,37,4,0:0:0:0:
256,336,79036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,336,79203,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,144,79536,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,144,79703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,240,80036,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2013-12-07T17:33:32+00:00

Hello,mod by request !
Nice song,I like it :p

[General]
Please add hitsound on mania diffs,or it will be unrankable(new ~~damn~~ rule)

[5K Easy]
00:04:870 - Add a note
00:17:370 - Add a note
00:31:870 - Add a note
00:32:370 - Add a note
00:35:203 - Add a note ?
00:36:703 - Add a note
{00:37:703 -
00:37:870 -
00:38:036 - Add a note ?}
00:38:203 - Add a note
00:40:536 - Add a note
00:42:536 - Add a note
01:06:536 - Add a note
01:07:036 - Add a note
01:07:536 - Add a note

[6K 3i's Normal]
00:04:870 - Add a note
00:41:370 (41370|1,41370|0,41703|4,41703|5,42036|0,42036|1,42370|4,42370|3,42536|2,42536|1,42703|4,42703|5,42870|0,42870|1,43036|4,43036|3,43203|2,43203|1) - 個人建議某些打亂。。
01:16:036 (76036|4,76036|3,76203|0,76203|1,76370|4,76370|5,76536|1,76536|2,76703|3,76703|4,76870|1,76870|0,77036|5,77036|4,77203|2,77203|1,77370|4,77370|3) - 這個也是。。

Nice diff !

[6K Hard]
Well,hit volume 5% seems not allowed..
00:04:870 - Add a note
00:29:870 - Add a note

Yeah,also a nice diff

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-08T01:56:44+00:00

Spy wrote:
Hello,mod by request !
Nice song,I like it :p

[General]
Please add hitsound on mania diffs,or it will be unrankable going work for hitsound(new ~~damn~~ rule)

[5K Easy]
00:04:870 - Add a note i didn't want put 1/2 in early time
00:17:370 - Add a note added
00:31:870 - Add a note added
00:32:370 - Add a note added
00:35:203 - Add a note ? nope, too hard
00:36:703 - Add a note added
{00:37:703 - nope
00:37:870 - nope
00:38:036 - Add a note ?} added
00:38:203 - Add a note nope
00:40:536 - Add a note nope
00:42:536 - Add a note added
01:06:536 - Add a note added
01:07:036 - Add a note added
01:07:536 - Add a note added

[6K Hard]
Well,hit volume 5% seems not allowed..
00:04:870 - Add a note added
00:29:870 - Add a note nope

Yeah,also a nice diff

Nice song,good luck to rank!

thanks spy !

asd123iii

283 posts

Joined October 2012

asd123iii 2013-12-08T15:01:30+00:00

Spy wrote:
Hello,mod by request !
Nice song,I like it :p

[6K 3i's Normal]
00:04:870 - Add a notenot fix
00:41:370 (41370|1,41370|0,41703|4,41703|5,42036|0,42036|1,42370|4,42370|3,42536|2,42536|1,42703|4,42703|5,42870|0,42870|1,43036|4,43036|3,43203|2,43203|1) - 個人建議某些打亂。。已打亂
01:16:036(76036|4,76036|3,76203|0,76203|1,76370|4,76370|5,76536|1,76536|2,76703|3,76703|4,76870|1,76870|0,77036|5,77036|4,77203|2,77203|1,77370|4,77370|3) - 這個也是。。 not fix(我絕對不會跟你說三鍵全按也不會斷)

Nice diff !

Nice song,good luck to rank!

Thanks

http://puu.sh/5G5oU.rar

[Shi-Ra]

458 posts

Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2013-12-13T20:10:47+00:00

lZenxl Mod

Changelog

lZenxl wrote:
Mod by Request :3

[7K Shi-Ra's Maximum]
00:15:370 - Add - From the previous note count pattern was (4 1 2 1 4 1 2 1 4), whereas this timing only has 3 - Oh really...added
00:27:203 (27203|4) - Change to note? - Not suitable for slider - Replaced
00:24:536 (24536|5) - Same mod as above - Eh...I prefer two short LNs here
00:32:536 (32536|0,32536|6) - I guess these are okay, change to notes if you want to - kk, removed with chord

00:33:370 to 00:34:703 does not have sliders while
00:34:703 to 00:41:370 have sliders
It is an awkward transition of patterns, either add sliders between 00:33:370 to 00:34:703 or remove sliders(not recommended though, I like the sliders) - Understood, pattern re-arranged

00:43:786 (43786|0,43786|6) - Move down 1/4 - Re-modelled
00:43:536 (43536|3) - Extend to 00:44:036 - Then remove the note overlapping it - Re-modelled with previous ^
00:43:870 - Add - Added two notes with previous ^
00:47:870 (47870|0,48870|1) - I don't know what these notes are mapped to - Remove? - Agree, removed.
00:59:203 (59203|1,61870|2) - Change to notes? - No no, prefer two short sliders again
01:04:536 (64536|4) - Same mod as above - Re-modelled in another way

01:08:036 to 01:10:703 you used triplets
Use triplets for 01:13:370 to 01:16:036 also? - Sorry, wanna keep chords here, it'll be overmapping to use chords+triplets

Suggestions (Optional)
- Use a 10x SV for 00:22:370, then use 1x SV for 00:22:411
-> It just makes a nice effect ( I don't know how to explain it in words )
- Same applies to 00:57:036 - SV edited, really useful, thanks!

Spy Mod

Changelog

Spy wrote:
[7K Shi-Ra's Maximum]
00:00:870 (870|4) - Remove - Removed
00:01:536 (1536|4) - Remove - Can't, dats ruin alternation here
00:02:870 (2870|3) - Remove - Done
00:03:036 (3036|5) - Remove - ^
00:03:120 - Add a note - Added
00:03:286 - Add a note - ^
00:03:453 - Add a note - ^
00:03:536 (3536|4) - Remove - Removed, but not sure for what
00:03:703 - Add a note? - It'll be harder if I do that~
00:04:203 (4203|4) - Move to 00:04:120 - Moved
00:04:620 - Add a note - Added
00:05:203 (5203|6) - Remove - Deleted
00:05:536 (5536|0) - Remove - There goes background sound
00:05:703 (5703|4) - Remove - ^
00:06:036 (6036|4) - Remove - Done
00:06:203 (6203|2) - Move to 00:06:286 - Moved
00:06:870 (6870|6) - Remove - Done
00:07:536 (7536|2) - Remove - I'll ruin transition between patterns here~
00:07:703 (7703|3) - Remove - ^
00:07:870 (7870|0) - Remove - ^
00:08:203 (8203|3) - Move to 00:08:286 - Remodelled
00:08:370 (8370|6) - Remove - Remodelled after previous
00:08:620 - Add a note - ^
00:08:870 (8870|2) - Move to 00:08:953 - I'll be hard for player to read fast transition from 1/8 to 1/4
00:09:536 (9536|3) - Remove - Here goes sound
00:10:036 (10036|6) - Remove - ^
00:11:536 (11536|2,11536|6) - Remove - Removed only first note
00:12:203 (12203|2) - Remove - No no, it'll ruin transition here
00:12:453 - Add a note ? - Not here~
00:12:536 - Add a note ? - Agree with that, added
00:12:870 (12870|4) - Remove - All these notes are transitions between chords coz of MX difficulty, if I delete them, diff doesn't reach MX lvl
00:13:203 (13203|5) - Remove - ^
00:13:536 (13536|3) - Remove - ^
00:32:536 - Add a note - This column is for cymbals and there's no cymbal sound

Thank you for mods, guys ^w^

> New ver. MX <

eironeia

88 posts

Joined June 2013

eironeia 2013-12-19T04:31:32+00:00

Hi Reikosaka and all other guest diff warriors :3
Please change your source to Halfpipe Tokyo as it is the very firs place this song came out in before it got into maimai.
I play the mania of this MX too stronk :v but really fun maps across the board

I do have a map for a HPTokyo/maimai song at http://osu.ppy.sh/s/135423 *runs*
Anyway I can mod the standard diffs for this song on request because I like this song very much--reply here if you guys want.
Thank you and good luck!/M'kasih dan maju terus! For ranked! :3

Sorarei

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Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-19T04:45:17+00:00

makasih gan info-nya , mod standard juga ya

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2013-12-22T23:48:02+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue! I'm sorry but I can't mod your other difficulties than the standard ones!

I did an IRC-mod with captin1 on his difficulties, here's the log

Log

00:45 Asphyxia: Hey there o/
00:45 captin1: hey
00:45 Asphyxia: Are you busy atm or would you like to irc mod with me your difficulties on this mapset?
00:45 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317824 REDALiCE - Acceleration [captin's Standard]]
00:46 captin1: oh sure, that would be cool
00:46 Asphyxia: Shall we get started on this one?
00:46 captin1: sure :3
00:47 Asphyxia: 00:12:036 (3) - Maybe make this slider more symmetric? Would look cool that way :3
00:47 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5Vmxu.jpg
00:47 Asphyxia: like that
00:47 captin1: hm I think I can do that yea
00:49 Asphyxia: 00:13:370 (1,2,3) - Well, maybe not my favourite kind of flow here, try this instead? http://puu.sh/5VmDv.jpg
00:49 Asphyxia: It gives a small curve on it, imo looks neat~
00:50 captin1: sure
00:51 Asphyxia: 00:16:036 (1,2,3,4) - I honestly was kind of disappointed to see only 4 straight sliders in a row, you really could come up with something cool! I've come up with something usual, see if you like it!
00:51 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5VmNt.jpg
00:51 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5VmOq.jpg
00:52 Asphyxia: I'd advice you to make something cooler though xD
00:53 captin1: heh yeah I think I'll work on that one on my own, thanks tho
00:53 Asphyxia: 00:24:036 (3) - Try to move this up a bit, I think the flow could be improved here
00:53 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5VmXe.jpg
00:53 Asphyxia: like that
00:54 Asphyxia: the small drop from (2)'s end to (3)'s start is kind of awkward
00:54 Asphyxia: I'd suggest that ^
00:54 Asphyxia: and then of course distance snap the next objects
00:54 captin1: hm
00:55 captin1: don't think it's a huge issue, since the cursor motion of the first two sliders together will probably swing a bit wide anyways I think
00:56 Asphyxia: Okay :3
00:56 captin1: plus what I have there is a blanket of 1, and I think that I'd like to keep taht
00:56 captin1: that
00:56 Asphyxia: 00:24:870 (4,1,2) - Have you ever thought about forming a triangle between these ?
00:56 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5Vn9p.jpg
00:57 Asphyxia: would look kind of cool, what do you think?
00:58 captin1: not too sure, would like to keep it wider like I have
00:58 Asphyxia: 00:26:703 (3,1) - This blanket is incorrect, make sure to fix it.
00:59 captin1: whoops okay heh
00:59 Asphyxia: 00:33:370 (1) - I'd move this slider more up, this way (3)'s end would watch better (4)'s start
00:59 Asphyxia: I mean (1)'s start*
01:00 captin1: yeah
01:00 Asphyxia: 00:34:703 (3,4) - What do you think of moving (4) a bit more down and making a blanket with (3)? This way the flow would improve
01:01 Asphyxia: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1193164
01:01 captin1: sure
01:02 Asphyxia: when you distance snap next objects, 00:36:370 (1,3) - blanket will become a bit incorrect, you might want to fix that afterwards
01:03 captin1: I worked around with that already, don't worry
01:03 Asphyxia: Great!
01:03 Asphyxia: 00:42:703 (1,2) - If you want to, you could improve this blanket slightly if you take off the grid snap
01:04 captin1: sure
01:04 Asphyxia: 01:00:370 (1) - I'd prefer to see un upcurve instead of downcurve
01:05 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5VnGW.jpg
01:05 captin1: sure
01:05 Asphyxia: an*
01:05 Asphyxia: lol
01:05 captin1: lol
01:05 Asphyxia: 01:00:703 (2,3) - This blanket isn't perfect, you could improve it a bit.
01:06 Asphyxia: 01:04:036 (4) - You can take off the grid snap here and move this sliders end ~2 grids up without it to make a perfect blanket, that might be not necessary though
01:06 captin1: k
01:06 Asphyxia: unnecessary*
01:06 Asphyxia: god damn my english sucks today
01:07 captin1: haha all good
01:07 Asphyxia: 01:06:036 (2) - I would simply curve this slider to the other direction and move 01:06:703 (3) - just a bit to the right so the (2)'s end will catch (3)'s start better
01:08 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/5VnSX.jpg like this
01:09 captin1: sure
01:09 Asphyxia: 01:11:036 (1) - Again, I'd prefer to see a downcurve here instead!
01:10 captin1: makes sense, yea
01:11 Asphyxia: 01:13:370 (1) - Same would go here then
01:11 captin1: kk
01:11 Asphyxia: 01:14:703 (3,4) - Blankets between these are incorrect, make sure to fix them

01:12 captin1: lol
01:12 Asphyxia: 01:17:036 - I think you could add a note here, it's quite similar to 01:16:703 - these beats so it's kinda weird to ignore it, imo
01:13 captin1: 00:42:370 - I did the same thing here with skipping the note before the 1/2 slider, plus if I add any more notes to this map it'll kick the star rating too high XD
01:13 Asphyxia: Oh right, my bad
01:13 Asphyxia: sorry
01:13 Asphyxia:

01:14 captin1: 3.2 barely rankable, lol
01:14 Asphyxia: Yeah lol, I had the same problem
01:14 Asphyxia: <.<
01:15 captin1: heh
01:15 Asphyxia: Say when you're done and we move to your another
01:15 captin1: yea I'm good
01:16 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317823 REDALiCE - Acceleration [captin's Another]]
01:16 Asphyxia: Well, you might want to consider Hp7 since you're using OD8
01:16 Asphyxia: this way the HP wouldn't be the same as in Hyper
01:17 captin1: hp6od8 is common for my maps, I'd rather make natsu lower his lol
01:17 Asphyxia: Ok lol
01:17 Asphyxia: 00:02:703 (1) - Give this slider a small curvy boost to match better with 00:03:203 (3,5) - sliders
01:17 Asphyxia: etc
01:18 captin1: sure
01:18 Asphyxia: Also, make sure to remove the widescreen support from this diff :3
01:19 captin1: lol oops
01:19 captin1: thought I did
01:19 Asphyxia: 00:03:203 (3,5) - If you want to, you can take the grid snap off and improve the blanket a little
01:20 captin1: if it's not glaringly obvious it's not really a huge issue in this diff imo
01:20 Asphyxia: 00:05:370 (1,3) - Tell me, is this your style like curving the sliders the same direction?
01:21 Asphyxia: because if it isn't, I think those sliders would look much prettier overall when curved to the other direction
01:21 captin1: I suppose it is a style thing hah
01:21 Asphyxia: 00:05:870 (3) - like http://puu.sh/5VoMD.jpg
01:22 captin1: yeah I like how I have it
01:22 Asphyxia: Ok so I wont mention those anymore, just wanted to make things clear
01:22 captin1: no prob
01:22 Asphyxia: 00:10:370 (4) - I would move this note with 00:10:703 (1) - more down so 00:09:870 (3) - 's end can catch it better
01:23 Asphyxia: maybe not a big deal though
01:23 captin1: sure
01:23 Asphyxia: 00:16:036 (1,2,3,4) - These blankets need some improvement, atleast I think so
01:25 captin1: yea
01:25 Asphyxia: 00:20:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - wooh, this combo is LOOONG, you really should consider adding NC to 00:20:703 (9) -
01:27 captin1: think I'd like to keep the stream a solid color, I get that it's super long but the way it is, if you're gonna end up missing it one nc won't help
01:27 Asphyxia: 00:24:536 (7) - Sliders end 1 grid to the right to make a better blanket with 00:24:036 (5) -
01:28 captin1: kay
01:28 Asphyxia: 00:26:703 (6) - Not sure, what do you think of CTRL + G'ing this slider
01:29 captin1: I like that, yeah
01:30 Asphyxia: 00:33:036 (7) - I'd move this slider somewhere more to the left, because when I quickly looked at the testplay it almost looked like it was overlapping with 00:32:536 (5) -
01:31 captin1: alright
01:31 Asphyxia: 00:35:036 (9) - Well, I'd prefer to see an upcurve here, what do you think?
01:32 captin1: heh yeah
01:34 Asphyxia: Well, that would be it then I guess
01:34 captin1: alright :3
01:34 Asphyxia: couldn't spot anything worth pointing out
01:34 Asphyxia: hope that helps ^^Å
01:35 captin1: it did! thanks!

Natsu's Hyper:

Try 5-8-6 settings (as in 5 HP, 8 AR, 6 OD, this would prevent having the same HP drain like the Another diff has, AR8 would make it easier to read overall and the gap between Hard -> Insane wouldn't be that big)
00:16:036 (1,2) - You could improve this blanket just a bit.
00:18:036 (7,8) - ^
00:23:703 (4,5) - Has kind of an awkward angle, I would recommend you to move 00:24:036 (5) - more up to prevent it, like this?
Example
This would require you to distance snap next objects but that shouldn't be too hard
00:25:703 (2,3) - Blanket
00:29:036 (4,5) - ^
00:34:703 (1,2) - This jump might be too harsh for Hard players, you might want to consider lowering the distance here a bit.
01:09:703 (2,3) - The awkward angle is here too, same thing: move them a bit to the right to prevent this, like this maybe?
Example
Cool diff!

I guess that would be the mod then, GL with this mapset :3

captin1

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captin1 2013-12-22T23:50:18+00:00

really appreciated!

http://puu.sh/5Vqwo.zip

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-12-23T00:26:00+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Natsu's Hyper:

Try 5-8-6 settings (as in 5 HP, 8 AR, 6 OD, this would prevent having the same HP drain like the Another diff has, AR8 would make it easier to read overall and the gap between Hard -> Insane wouldn't be that big) lower the hp but not the ar 7 play fine o.o people need to learn to read instead of play at reaction
00:23:703 (4,5) - Has kind of an awkward angle, I would recommend you to move 00:24:036 (5) - more up to prevent it, like this? ah its the flow i like to have there its on purpose
00:34:703 (1,2) - This jump might be too harsh for Hard players, you might want to consider lowering the distance here a bit. Its ok its not really big x.x
01:09:703 (2,3) - The awkward angle is here too, same thing: move them a bit to the right to prevent this, like this maybe? I preffer to keep it as it is since it play really nice
Cool diff!
thanks for mod remove lines = apply

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388,80,35036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,136,35203,2,0,P|296:99|296:60,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,188,35536,6,0,P|332:216|264:204,1,120.000004577637,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,36036,22,0,P|144:100|100:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,144,36370,2,0,P|60:172|104:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,36703,2,0,P|195:165|196:211,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,37036,2,0,P|184:296|232:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,37370,6,0,P|312:288|304:336,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,37870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,38036,1,2,2:0:0:0:
396,212,38203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,116,38370,2,0,P|411:77|401:38,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,38703,38,0,P|261:13|221:14,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,72,39036,2,0,P|116:68|80:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,39370,2,0,L|4:200,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,39703,2,0,L|80:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,320,40036,6,0,P|73:331|112:322,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,40370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,200,40536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,248,40703,1,2,2:0:0:0:
416,320,40870,6,0,P|452:296|464:240,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,160,41370,22,0,L|372:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,20,41703,2,0,L|269:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,42036,2,0,L|161:95,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,16,42370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,100,42536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,184,42703,5,2,2:0:0:0:
108,184,42870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,100,43036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,184,43203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,368,43536,1,2,2:0:0:0:
156,352,43703,2,0,P|196:336|224:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,44036,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,32,44370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,164,44703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,32,45036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,164,45370,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,45703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,164,46036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,296,46370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,164,46703,37,0,0:0:0:0:
330,39,47036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,132,47370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,47703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,349,48036,5,0,0:0:0:0:
81,225,48370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,132,48703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,49036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,112,49370,37,0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,49703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,256,50036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,100,50370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,244,50703,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,228,51036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,100,51370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,51703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,232,52036,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52120,12,4,54703,0:0:0:0:
240,112,54953,6,0,P|292:132|324:188,1,120,8|8,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
276,276,55370,2,0,P|224:256|192:200,1,120,8|8,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,55870,1,8,2:0:0:0:
240,12,56036,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,152,57370,38,0,L|148:100,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,57703,2,0,L|364:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,58036,2,0,L|148:284,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,58370,2,0,L|364:284,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,340,58703,6,0,P|460:300|460:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,168,59036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,88,59203,2,0,P|352:60|312:48,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,59536,6,0,B|180:92|180:92|132:56,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,24,60036,22,0,L|40:108,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,200,60370,2,0,P|76:192|104:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,172,60703,2,0,L|192:256,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,61036,2,0,P|228:340|256:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,61370,6,0,P|348:292|348:332,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,61870,2,0,P|204:180|188:136,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,62203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,84,62370,2,0,P|320:116|328:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,62703,38,0,L|408:276,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,63036,2,0,L|240:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,63370,2,0,L|76:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,168,63703,2,0,L|144:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,64036,6,0,P|272:188|292:144,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,64,64370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,64,64536,2,0,P|324:68|360:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,64870,6,0,B|444:168|444:168|432:216,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,296,65370,22,0,P|352:320|308:328,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,288,65703,2,0,P|188:284|140:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,348,66036,2,0,P|56:304|60:268,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,66370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,136,66536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,66703,6,0,P|256:68|216:44,1,80,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,67036,2,0,L|88:52,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,67536,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,40,67703,2,0,P|388:72|400:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,68036,38,0,P|328:224|328:268,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,344,68370,2,0,P|344:360|300:356,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,68703,2,0,P|196:272|156:264,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,320,69036,2,0,P|68:284|68:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,69370,6,0,P|148:136|144:96,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,12,69703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,12,69870,2,0,L|184:12,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,12,70203,6,0,B|320:24|320:24|344:72,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,70703,22,0,P|364:204|408:204,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,71036,2,0,P|496:188|496:228,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,292,71370,2,0,L|360:348,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,344,71703,2,0,L|206:293,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,72036,6,0,P|108:200|100:160,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,72536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,72703,1,2,2:0:0:0:
412,232,72870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,73036,2,0,P|436:200|444:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,73370,38,0,P|444:64|484:72,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,73703,2,0,P|364:80|324:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,74036,2,0,P|216:64|204:108,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,74370,2,0,P|128:164|112:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,44,74703,6,0,P|40:68|24:100,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,196,75036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,272,75203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,288,75370,1,2,2:0:0:0:
264,260,75536,6,0,B|312:248|312:248|360:276,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,76036,22,0,L|488:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,176,76370,2,0,P|464:156|416:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,76703,2,0,L|285:111,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,77036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,77203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,180,77370,6,0,P|76:144|64:104,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,77870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,160,78203,1,2,2:0:0:0:
444,88,78370,2,0,P|472:132|476:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,78703,37,4,0:0:0:0:
256,336,79036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,336,79203,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,144,79536,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,144,79703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,240,80036,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-23T01:45:40+00:00

Update !

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2013-12-23T18:48:04+00:00

hi Reikosaka, uh, maybe this is too late for me ( because i'm focus mapping and busy in real life this month )
I'm sure my mods will not really helpful, so i think i'll only ask about this

Isn't the BG in this map is vocaloid or not ? and if i'm right about this, isn't it allowed if the BG's name in this mapset is not listed to the tags ? ( just asking )

[5K Easy]

*isn't the pattern from 00:42:703 - to 00:43:203 - is odd ? i know this is easy diff, but it's strange. Maybe placing a note in 00:43:203 - at 1st column is make this better.... ( i hope so )

[6K 3i's Normal]

*Why you placing a circle in this 00:01:203 (1203|1) - and 00:06:536 (6536|4) - ? Maybe it's better if you put a circle in 00:01:120 - and 00:06:453 - ( i'm only heard a sound in that timing. But i don't know if this mod is true or not )
i checking about this between circle and the music's sound repeatly and i sure if this solution is better. ( except if you make a hitsound in there )
*00:11:370 (11370|3) - don't sure about this but move this circle in 5th column makes the pattern better.

[7K Shi-ra's Maximum]

*00:51:536 - maybe placing a circle in 1st column ? )
*00:51:870 - this timings is good for placing something like a circle in here ( because the sound in this timing is bigger than previous same sound in 00:51:203 -, 00:50:870 - , .... )

Well, this map is perfectly done and great ( Especially the Shira's Maximum, what a cool LN's ). I hope it's ranked as soon as possible

And i'll give you 2 stars, i hope it's helpful.

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

YunoFanatic 2013-12-24T02:20:54+00:00

hohohohohhohohohohhohohohho o/ i cant mod 7k ok? well i can mod but...

wow mapset
much speed
such reiko

5k

= 00:05:370 (5370|2,5870|2,6370|4,6703|4) - doesnt look good pattern.. Stacks should be consistent and then you only used 2 stacks which is in the 3 and 5 then you have an upcoming note which is 00:07:370 (7370|2) - it will really look bad i suggest to : 00:05:870 (5870|2) - place this on 1 00:06:703 (6703|0) - on 1 00:07:370 (7370|4) - on 5 now you have an consistent pattern and you have a good climbing pattern.

= 00:08:036 (8036|2,8036|0,8536|0) - i dont like this.. place 00:08:036 (8036|2,8036|0) - to 2 and 4 because the pitch was a bit loud than before.

= 00:09:870 (9870|3) - place on 5 look at 00:08:536 (8536|0) - you placed it on 1..

= 00:10:370 (10370|1) - place on 1 because 00:11:036 (11036|4) - and your making an stair pattern

= 00:12:370 (12370|0,12703|1,13036|1,13036|2) - delete this then copy 00:11:036 (11036|4,11370|3,11703|3,11703|2,12036|3,12036|1) - paste on 00:12:370 then ctrl+h then delete 00:13:536 (13536|4) - and there you go nice pattern! the fact that you didnt follow the pitch on 00:13:370

= 00:17:036 (17036|2) - this holder should be starting on 00:16:870 i know you hear the beat did you?

= 00:23:703 (23703|3) - why is this on 4?

= 00:26:703 add note on 1

= is it me or holder in 00:35:536 and end it on 00:36:036 is good?

= 00:36:370 (36370|2) - i donnt understand why is there an holder here? the fact that this beat is such loud.=

= 00:38:703 (38703|2,38870|1,39036|0,39370|2,39536|3,39703|4) - D: why is this 1/2 notes? this should be only 1/1 same on 00:40:036 (40036|3,40203|1,40370|3,40703|0,40870|4,41036|0) -

= 01:12:536 (72536|3,72870|3) - change them into holder

6k 3i

= 00:00:037 add one more note

= 00:06:370 ^

nice diffu

6k

wow diff
such mania
much 6k

its perfect >w< cant find lololololol star this btw

im only an 4k and 5k mapper so im only good at modding 5k and 4k ._.

Sorarei

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Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-24T02:45:20+00:00

[Remillion Cross]hi Reikosaka, uh, maybe this is too late for me ( because i'm focus mapping and busy in real life this month )
I'm sure my mods will not really helpful, so i think i'll only ask about this

Isn't the BG in this map is vocaloid or not ? and if i'm right about this, isn't it allowed if the BG's name in this mapset is not listed to the tags ? ( just asking ) i'm planning to change BG soon

[5K Easy]

*isn't the pattern from 00:42:703 - to 00:43:203 - is odd ? i know this is easy diff, but it's strange. Maybe placing a note in 00:43:203 - at 1st column is make this better.... ( i hope so ) fixed

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-24T03:03:50+00:00

[quote="YunoFanatic"]hohohohohhohohohohhohohohho o/ i cant mod 7k ok? well i can mod but...

wow mapset
much speed
such reiko

5k

= 00:05:370 (5370|2,5870|2,6370|4,6703|4) - doesnt look good pattern.. Stacks should be consistent and then you only used 2 stacks which is in the 3 and 5 then you have an upcoming note which is 00:07:370 (7370|2) - it will really look bad i suggest to : 00:05:870 (5870|2) - place this on 1 00:06:703 (6703|0) - on 1 00:07:370 (7370|4) - on 5 now you have an consistent pattern and you have a good climbing pattern. fixed

= 00:08:036 (8036|2,8036|0,8536|0) - i dont like this.. place 00:08:036 (8036|2,8036|0) - to 2 and 4 because the pitch was a bit loud than before. fixed

= 00:09:870 (9870|3) - place on 5 look at 00:08:536 (8536|0) - you placed it on 1.. fixed

= 00:10:370 (10370|1) - place on 1 because 00:11:036 (11036|4) - and your making an stair pattern fixed

= 00:12:370 (12370|0,12703|1,13036|1,13036|2) - delete this then copy 00:11:036 (11036|4,11370|3,11703|3,11703|2,12036|3,12036|1) - paste on 00:12:370 then ctrl+h then delete 00:13:536 (13536|4) - and there you go nice pattern! the fact that you didnt follow the pitch on 00:13:370 fixed

= 00:17:036 (17036|2) - this holder should be starting on 00:16:870 i know you hear the beat did you? i'm following the "bell" sound

= 00:23:703 (23703|3) - why is this on 4? moved to 5

= 00:26:703 add note on 1 added

= is it me or holder in 00:35:536 and end it on 00:36:036 is good?

following kick sound

= 00:36:370 (36370|2) - i donnt understand why is there an holder here? the fact that this beat is such loud.= following kick sound

LN bringing more flow

= 00:38:703 (38703|2,38870|1,39036|0,39370|2,39536|3,39703|4) - D: why is this 1/2 notes? this should be only 1/1 same on 00:40:036 (40036|3,40203|1,40370|3,40703|0,40870|4,41036|0) - too monotone if put 1/1 note

= 01:12:536 (72536|3,72870|3) - change them into holder changed

wow doge ,
such modder ,
much suggest

indyinyou

887 posts

Joined June 2009

indyinyou 2013-12-24T06:42:05+00:00

i ll check it soon when i have time

asd123iii

283 posts

Joined October 2012

asd123iii 2013-12-24T13:28:03+00:00

Remillion Cross wrote:
hi Reikosaka, uh, maybe this is too late for me ( because i'm focus mapping and busy in real life this month )
I'm sure my mods will not really helpful, so i think i'll only ask about this

Isn't the BG in this map is vocaloid or not ? and if i'm right about this, isn't it allowed if the BG's name in this mapset is not listed to the tags ? ( just asking )

[5K Easy]

*isn't the pattern from 00:42:703 - to 00:43:203 - is odd ? i know this is easy diff, but it's strange. Maybe placing a note in 00:43:203 - at 1st column is make this better.... ( i hope so )

[6K 3i's Normal]

*Why you placing a circle in this 00:01:203 (1203|1) - and 00:06:536 (6536|4) - ? Maybe it's better if you put a circle in 00:01:120 - and 00:06:453 - ( i'm only heard a sound in that timing. But i don't know if this mod is true or not )
i checking about this between circle and the music's sound repeatly and i sure if this solution is better. ( except if you make a hitsound in there )
add a note in this part,I think 00:01:120 - and 00:06:453 - are not correct.
*00:11:370 (11370|3) - don't sure about this but move this circle in 5th column makes the pattern better.Fixed

[7K Shi-ra's Maximum]

*00:51:536 - maybe placing a circle in 1st column ? )
*00:51:870 - this timings is good for placing something like a circle in here ( because the sound in this timing is bigger than previous same sound in 00:51:203 -, 00:50:870 - , .... )

Well, this map is perfectly done and great ( Especially the Shira's Maximum, what a cool LN's ). I hope it's ranked as soon as possible
And i'll give you 2 stars, i hope it's helpful.

Thank yoou

YunoFanatic wrote:
hohohohohhohohohohhohohohho o/ i cant mod 7k ok? well i can mod but...

wow mapset
much speed
such reiko

5k
= 00:05:370 (5370|2,5870|2,6370|4,6703|4) - doesnt look good pattern.. Stacks should be consistent and then you only used 2 stacks which is in the 3 and 5 then you have an upcoming note which is 00:07:370 (7370|2) - it will really look bad i suggest to : 00:05:870 (5870|2) - place this on 1 00:06:703 (6703|0) - on 1 00:07:370 (7370|4) - on 5 now you have an consistent pattern and you have a good climbing pattern.

= 00:08:036 (8036|2,8036|0,8536|0) - i dont like this.. place 00:08:036 (8036|2,8036|0) - to 2 and 4 because the pitch was a bit loud than before.

= 00:09:870 (9870|3) - place on 5 look at 00:08:536 (8536|0) - you placed it on 1..

= 00:10:370 (10370|1) - place on 1 because 00:11:036 (11036|4) - and your making an stair pattern

= 00:12:370 (12370|0,12703|1,13036|1,13036|2) - delete this then copy 00:11:036 (11036|4,11370|3,11703|3,11703|2,12036|3,12036|1) - paste on 00:12:370 then ctrl+h then delete 00:13:536 (13536|4) - and there you go nice pattern! the fact that you didnt follow the pitch on 00:13:370

= 00:17:036 (17036|2) - this holder should be starting on 00:16:870 i know you hear the beat did you?

= 00:23:703 (23703|3) - why is this on 4?

= 00:26:703 add note on 1

= is it me or holder in 00:35:536 and end it on 00:36:036 is good?

= 00:36:370 (36370|2) - i donnt understand why is there an holder here? the fact that this beat is such loud.=

= 00:38:703 (38703|2,38870|1,39036|0,39370|2,39536|3,39703|4) - D: why is this 1/2 notes? this should be only 1/1 same on 00:40:036 (40036|3,40203|1,40370|3,40703|0,40870|4,41036|0) -

= 01:12:536 (72536|3,72870|3) - change them into holder
6k 3i
= 00:00:037 add one more note ok

= 00:06:370 ^ ^

nice diffu
6k
wow diff
such mania
much 6k

its perfect >w< cant find lololololol star this btw

im only an 4k and 5k mapper so im only good at modding 5k and 4k ._.

Thanks

http://puu.sh/5Xa69.rar

Sorarei

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-24T13:47:49+00:00

Update

richardfeder

1,056 posts

Joined March 2013

richardfeder 2013-12-24T16:54:10+00:00

mark

[Shi-Ra]

458 posts

Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2013-12-24T17:09:01+00:00

Remillion Cross wrote:
[7K Shi-ra's Maximum]

*00:51:536 - maybe placing a circle in 1st column ? ) - Oh yeah, thanks, I've found suitable sound for it.
*00:51:870 - this timings is good for placing something like a circle in here ( because the sound in this timing is bigger than previous same sound in 00:51:203 -, 00:50:870 - , .... ) - Understood, follow the beat here for now.

Well, this map is perfectly done and great ( Especially the Shira's Maximum, what a cool LN's Really? Thanks >///< ). I hope it's ranked as soon as possible
And i'll give you 2 stars, i hope it's helpful.

Forgot about hitsounding, my next step will be HSes for this diff x.x

Thank you for the mod, RC ^w^

> New ver. MX <

Sorarei

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Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-24T17:24:33+00:00

Update

PROGUY

osu! Alumni

936 posts

Joined October 2010

PROGUY 2013-12-25T14:12:04+00:00

Hi there, Reikosaka! Here's my check as requested.

[captin's Standard]
01:20:036 (1) Move up by two grids and right by two grids = x:264 y:208

[Natsu's Hyper]
HP Drain +1
00:28:370 (2,3) These two sliders are more spaced away than 1 & 2, and 3 & 4. Move 2 & 3 closer until they're the same. Something like this, maybe? (Disable Grid Snap)

[captin's Another]
HP Drain + 1 or 2

[5K Easy]
- It feels too hard for an Easy. I'd recommend removing some notes and reducing the amount of long notes.

[6K 3i's Normal]
01:19:703 (79703|4,79703|1) Delete these notes.

Hope this helps! Good luck!

Also Merry Christmas!

asd123iii

283 posts

Joined October 2012

asd123iii 2013-12-26T07:26:40+00:00

Fixed

http://puu.sh/5YWz9.rar

Thank you

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Sorarei 2013-12-27T04:14:48+00:00

Update

indyinyou

887 posts

Joined June 2009

indyinyou 2013-12-27T04:35:02+00:00

Hi

http://puu.sh/5ZSST

use hitsound copier for other diff t/131540

if sound weird pm me i ll check it

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-12-28T06:23:35+00:00

[shira's maximum]

nothing awkward

[6k hard]

00:04:036 (4036|4) - move 4

00:04:870 (4870|0,5036|4,5036|2,5036|5) - ctrl+h

00:21:370 (21370|1) - http://puu.sh/61207.jpg and 00:22:370 (22370|2,22370|0,22703|5,22703|3,23036|3,23036|4,23370|0,23536|3,23703|4,23870|1,24036|2,24036|4) - ctrl + h

00:36:536 - add

01:08:036 - add

01:09:370 - add

[3i's normal]

np

[5k easy]

00:27:536 - move 3 or 4

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-12-28T23:16:40+00:00

Both suggestions apply

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 21703
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:Acceleration
Artist:REDALiCE
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE
Creator:Reikosaka
Version:Natsu's Hyper
Source:Halfpipe Tokyo
Tags:Halfpipe tokyo sega captin1 [Shi-Ra] asd123iii Natsu
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384,88,59203,2,0,P|352:60|312:48,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,59536,6,0,B|180:92|180:92|132:56,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,24,60036,22,0,L|40:108,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,200,60370,2,0,P|76:192|104:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,172,60703,2,0,L|192:256,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,61036,2,0,P|228:340|256:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,61370,6,0,P|348:292|348:332,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,61870,2,0,P|204:180|188:136,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,62203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,84,62370,2,0,P|320:116|328:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,62703,38,0,L|408:276,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,63036,2,0,L|240:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,63370,2,0,L|76:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,168,63703,2,0,L|144:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,64036,6,0,P|272:188|292:144,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,64,64370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,64,64536,2,0,P|324:68|360:88,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,64870,6,0,B|444:168|444:168|432:216,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,296,65370,22,0,P|352:320|308:328,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,288,65703,2,0,P|188:284|140:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,348,66036,2,0,P|56:304|60:268,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,66370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,136,66536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,66703,6,0,P|256:68|216:44,1,80,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,67036,2,0,L|88:52,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,67536,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,40,67703,2,0,P|388:72|400:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,68036,38,0,P|328:224|328:268,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,344,68370,2,0,P|344:360|300:356,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,68703,2,0,P|196:272|156:264,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,320,69036,2,0,P|68:284|68:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,69370,6,0,P|148:136|144:96,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,12,69703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,12,69870,2,0,L|184:12,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,12,70203,6,0,B|320:24|320:24|344:72,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,70703,22,0,P|364:204|408:204,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,71036,2,0,P|496:188|496:228,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,292,71370,2,0,L|360:348,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,344,71703,2,0,L|206:293,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,72036,6,0,P|108:200|100:160,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,72536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,72703,1,2,2:0:0:0:
412,232,72870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,73036,2,0,P|436:200|444:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,73370,38,0,P|444:64|484:72,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,73703,2,0,P|364:80|324:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,32,74036,2,0,P|216:64|204:108,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,74370,2,0,P|128:164|112:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,44,74703,6,0,P|40:68|24:100,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,196,75036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,272,75203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,288,75370,1,2,2:0:0:0:
264,260,75536,6,0,B|312:248|312:248|360:276,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,76036,22,0,L|488:260,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,176,76370,2,0,P|464:156|416:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,76703,2,0,L|285:111,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,77036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,77203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,180,77370,6,0,P|76:144|64:104,2,80,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,220,77870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,160,78203,1,2,2:0:0:0:
444,88,78370,2,0,P|472:132|476:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,78703,37,4,0:0:0:0:
256,336,79036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,336,79203,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,144,79536,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,144,79703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,240,80036,5,4,0:0:0:0:

captin1

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captin1 2013-12-29T01:34:38+00:00

ah crap hitsounds are messed up now, you gotta tell us when you change stuff like this, cause now we have silenced notes in standard which is unrankable XD

http://puu.sh/61TcK.zip fixed up combo colors and hitsounds, reiko change the two normal-sliderslide and soft-slidersilde to normal-sliderslide2 and soft-sliderslide2, should clear up the hitsounding issues.

btw fixed that note and upped hp by one in my another, thanks for the check proguy :3

Sorarei

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Sorarei 2013-12-29T03:04:34+00:00

[6k hard]

00:04:036 (4036|4) - move 4

00:04:870 (4870|0,5036|4,5036|2,5036|5) - ctrl+h

00:21:370 (21370|1) - http://puu.sh/61207.jpg and 00:22:370 (22370|2,22370|0,22703|5,22703|3,23036|3,23036|4,23370|0,23536|3,23703|4,23870|1,24036|2,24036|4) - ctrl + h

00:36:536 - add not add

01:08:036 - add

01:09:370 - add

[5k easy]

00:27:536 - move 3 or 4[/quote]
thanks for mod 17VA

richardfeder

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richardfeder 2013-12-29T03:56:04+00:00

Easy

It's easy so don't be friendly \:D/ don't put extra notes if there is not needed
00:01:036 (1036|3) - move to 00:01:370 (1370|3) -

00:02:703 (2703|4) - move to 00:03:203 (3203|4) -

00:03:703 (3703|1) - move to 0|1|2|3|4
and delete 00:04:036 (4036|3) -

00:04:536 (4536|4) - delete

00:05:036 (5036|3) - move to 00:04:870 (4870|3) -

00:06:536 (6536|2) - add

00:08:036 (8036|1) - move to 2 and delete 00:08:036 (8036|3) -

00:12:036 (12036|3) - delete. not a beat that deserve highlight

00:13:370 (13370|4) - delete

00:18:703 (18703|4,19036|0,19370|4,19703|0,20036|3,20370|1,20703|3,21036|1) - change to one or two long note

00:33:370 (33370|3) - move to 00:33:703 (33703|3) -
Following(like 00:34:370 (34370|4,34703|3,34703|0,35036|4) - ) are the same: when a "PA" take place use double notes, and normal beats use single. Clearly contrast to "PA" normal beats are not so heavy and one note is enough

00:40:703 (40703|0) - what is this? x.x

00:43:703 (43703|4) - move to 00:43:536 (43536|4) -

00:43:870 (43870|4) - to 00:43:703 (43703|3) -
If you are following the melody, then follow it from the beginning to the end. Shifting your focus from melody to beats are a little confusing here

00:45:370 (45370|2,46703|2) - delete...from here same suggest as above:delete excursive notes and use long notes from 00:53:036 (53036|1) -

00:58:703 (58703|1) - move to 00:58:536 (58536|4) -
00:59:036 (59036|4) - move to 0

01:04:036 (64036|4) - move to 01:03:870 (63870|4) -

01:04:536 (64536|4) - move to 3

01:06:536 (66536|4,66703|4,66703|3,67036|1,67203|3,67203|1,67536|0,67703|1,67703|0) - never make this kind of thing in easy...

01:17:036 (77036|3) - what is this?
Thing twice before using a long note. If you cannot exactly tell what is it, when should it start and where should it end, then I suggest review that usage of long notes

3i's Normal

原来是Normal啊...好像稍微难了一些,估计有些人看到后面的1/2拍砖要摔

00:20:036 (20036|3,20370|3,20703|3,21036|3) - 加也未尝不可,但是对于Normal来说可能比较吃紧,而且怎么说...clap毕竟原本不属于这段音乐,感觉专门为了这个clap加一个note有overmap的嫌疑,特别是难度只是Normal

00:33:703 (33703|3,33703|4,34036|0,34036|1,34370|3,34370|2) - 这样拍有点蠢>.<蛮像转谱的...

00:41:370 (41370|1,41370|0,41703|5,41703|4,42036|0,42036|1,42370|4,42370|3) - 我建议换成1/2单note

00:49:370 (49370|2) - 挪到1

01:05:370 (65370|3,65370|4,65703|2,65703|4,66036|2,66036|3,66370|1,66370|0) - 好像有很多这种拍砖....其实我是建议一个定拍一个音高这样放的,或者起码按照特定的pattern放...这样真的好像转谱>.<

01:16:036 (76036|4,76036|3,76203|0,76203|1,76370|4,76370|5,76536|1,76536|2,76703|3,76703|4,76870|1,76870|0,77036|5,77036|4,77203|2,77203|1,77370|4,77370|3) - 这估计蛮多人要摔w

01:18:703 (78703|1,78703|0,78703|4,78703|5,80036|0,80036|3,80036|5,80036|2) - 感觉overmap,不应该有4个
总体没有什么问题,就是拍砖有点那个,然后作为Normal稍微有些难,不过有一个ez垫着说不定问题不是特别大...orz

Hard

00:23:536 (23536|2) - what is this?

00:24:036 (24036|1) - move to 0

00:24:536 - miss a note
I think you need to review this diff a little bit...I cannot quiet understand your mapping and I think some of your notes do not make sense...Sorry >.<

MX

Shi-Ra \:D/
00:38:203 (38203|6,38536|5) - I think these holds have nothing to correspond to. Also these two 00:40:870 (40870|6,41203|4) -
I did not check all of them but I think maybe you need to review those short holds. Most of them did exist but some of them did not :p

00:43:536 - https://www.dropbox.com/s/4dcdq8s76b6bge1/lanhsifg.jpg

00:45:870 (45870|3) - start at 00:46:036 -

01:08:870 (68870|3,68953|2,69036|1) - I not very sure about those usage of 1/4 notes, also holds that I mention before like 01:13:203 (73203|5) -

the rests are fine for me xD

~~Sorry for my lateness! >.< I will finish asap!~~
Good luck

Last edited by richardfeder 2013-12-29T05:39:50+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Sorarei

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Sorarei 2013-12-29T04:14:51+00:00

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