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The Chain Gang of 1974 - Sleepwalking

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RatedNC17
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, June 12, 2014 at 5:32:21 PM

Artist: The Chain Gang of 1974
Title: Sleepwalking
Source: Grand Theft Auto V
Tags: gta five 5 rockstar games north grand theft auto alternative Daydream Forever DragonSparta Silverboxer
BPM: 106.05
Filesize: 5847kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. DragonSparta's Insane (3.87 stars, 159 notes)
  2. Easy (-1 stars, 63 notes)
  3. Hard (2.38 stars, 125 notes)
  4. Normal (1.78 stars, 78 notes)
  5. Silverboxer's Extra (4.79 stars, 173 notes)
Download: The Chain Gang of 1974 - Sleepwalking
Download: The Chain Gang of 1974 - Sleepwalking (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD. NEW BG, MP3 FILE, AND NEW DIFF Thanks
Michael: A few weeks ago i was happily sulking by my swimming pool...
Franklin: 401Ks, tax returns and all that?
Trevor: NOBODY TELLS ME WHAT WANT!
Lester: I suppose the group hugs out of the question ;)
Easy 100%
Normal 100%
Hard 100%
DragonSparta's Insane 100% (Thank You DragonSparta)
Silverboxer's Extra 100% (Thank you Silverboxer)
1ST map going for Rank

Thanks goes to these nice people
SPOILER
iNickel, -RIKKA-, 10crystalmask10, Silverboxer, [Zzz], Xanandra, Sharlo, K4zuya K, OstrichSupreme, mm996, Rakuen, Jekate, DragonSparta, Shuiyiming, agentdark1706, Lolicore_Komari, AnthonyEcon, WhiteAries, CTs-Th, Sheela901, Winek, CDFA, Reat, Trust, Mystima, - Miomio Chii -, Laturn, Avishay, Teara, deejaydray, No_Gu, xVirtualNinjax, Sieg, Rotte, Lapis Aoki, sksmwkd125, Lally, Tari, ikari_kyon, MasterKirin, No Dap, Bonch0, sammy711, Snaggletooth, Vhy, 10nya
Special Thanks to DragonSparta for Insane Diff and star, Silverboxer for Extra diff and offset fix, BeatofIke for timing fix, Teara for re-map help, baraajte123 for test plays, INickel,OstrichSupreme, Winek, - Miomio Chii -, MasterKirin for star. (Thanks guys :) <3)
Nickelony
Here a better Timed template for you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/dvf1v2u8ujmws ... ate%5D.osu

Map with this template and then ask me for mod please :)

[General]
Please use distance snap and always check AiMod (File > Open AiMod)
The sliders... You are doing it like the old osu! mapping style.

Old style:



New Style:



Of course you can use the old lines, but not always 0_0

Tipp: NEVER do everything perfect (I mean sliders)

As exaple play many maps from Andrea or take a exaple of this map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/87630

[Easy]
00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - This is to hard for beginners...
00:40:341 (6,2) - Not looking good...
00:27:045 (7,1) - Not the best solution for easy.

[Normal]
OD - 5
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4) - NEVER DO THIS IN NORMAL!

[Hard]
00:04:273 (3) - Really Hard to read.
00:13:325 (3) - ^
00:13:325 (3) - A bit boring...
00:40:341 (8) - I don't like circles on sliders!
00:31:854 (9) - A slider here is not the best solution

[Wallpaper suggestion]
http://conowego.pl/uploads/pics/tit_a7c2e1.jpg
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

iNickel wrote:

Here a better Timed template for you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/dvf1v2u8ujmws ... ate%5D.osu

Map with this template and then ask me for mod please :)
Thank You!! :)
Nickelony
You shouldn't give me Kudosu, because this wasn't really a mod, so I only edited the post.
-RIKKA-_old
Hi, from M4M.

Easy
・00:35:532 (5) - like this ?



・00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・AR & HD -1

Normal
・CS +1
・AR & OD 4 or 5
・00:04:556 (3,4) - like this?



・00:09:082 (4) - ^
・00:13:608 (3,4) - ^
・00:45:574 (4,1) - Please repeat it.
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294

Hard
・CS +1
・HD 6 or 7
・00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too far?
・00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・I recommend that you add various kinds to slider.

good luck :D
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

-RIKKA- wrote:

Hi, from M4M.

Easy
・00:35:532 (5) - like this ?



・00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・AR & HD -1

Normal
・CS +1
・AR & OD 4 or 5
・00:04:556 (3,4) - like this?



・00:09:082 (4) - ^
・00:13:608 (3,4) - ^
・00:45:574 (4,1) - Please repeat it.
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294

Hard
・CS +1
・HD 6 or 7
・00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too far?
・00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・I recommend that you add various kinds to slider.

good luck :D
Thank You for the mods :)
10crystalmask01
Ello o3o Random mod
[Easy]
00:25:348 (4) - NC
00:35:532 (5) - Add a finish on the tail, to match the cymbal crash heard in the music. Double click on the tail on the timeline like this:
Once it's highlighted in red you can add the finish.
00:40:058 (5) - Make the default normal hitsound on the reverse end as well,to continue the hitsound pattern.

The spacing looks pretty clean :P
[Normal]
Circle size -2, they're wayy to small for a standard player to hit in a Normal diff :S
00:27:045 (5) - Add another reverse, so it ends at 00:27:611 instead with a finish hitsound.
00:29:874 (5) - NC
00:34:400 (4) - ^
00:38:926 (4) - ^
00:45:715 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:46:281 - 00:47:696 Try this rhythm?


Rhythm here is a bit to complicated, since so many objects are only being placed 1/2 beats apart. :(

[Hard]
Circle size -1 or 2.
00:04:273 (3,4,5,1,2,2) - Really confusing overlap, please re-map this part.
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2) - Move more apart.
00:13:325 (3,4,2,2) - Another bad overlap, please re-map as well.
00:18:558 (5) - NC
00:29:874 (7) - ^
00:34:400 (7) - ^
00:38:926 (7) - ^
00:47:978 (6) - ^
00:52:505 (6) - ^
00:56:465 (6) - ^
This diff still needs a lot of work :( Especially on the flow.
Hope this helps~! ^^
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o Random mod
SPOILER
[Easy]
00:25:348 (4) - NC
00:35:532 (5) - Add a finish on the tail, to match the cymbal crash heard in the music. Double click on the tail on the timeline like this:
Once it's highlighted in red you can add the finish.
00:40:058 (5) - Make the default normal hitsound on the reverse end as well,to continue the hitsound pattern.

The spacing looks pretty clean :P
[Normal]
Circle size -2, they're wayy to small for a standard player to hit in a Normal diff :S
00:27:045 (5) - Add another reverse, so it ends at 00:27:611 instead with a finish hitsound.
00:29:874 (5) - NC
00:34:400 (4) - ^
00:38:926 (4) - ^
00:45:715 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:46:281 - 00:47:696 Try this rhythm?


Rhythm here is a bit to complicated, since so many objects are only being placed 1/2 beats apart. :(

[Hard]
Circle size -1 or 2.
00:04:273 (3,4,5,1,2,2) - Really confusing overlap, please re-map this part.
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2) - Move more apart.
00:13:325 (3,4,2,2) - Another bad overlap, please re-map as well.
00:18:558 (5) - NC
00:29:874 (7) - ^
00:34:400 (7) - ^
00:38:926 (7) - ^
00:47:978 (6) - ^
00:52:505 (6) - ^
00:56:465 (6) - ^
This diff still needs a lot of work :( Especially on the flow.
Hope this helps~! ^^

All applied and thanks for the help :)
Silverboxer
from my modding queue

General

Re-sized background: http://puu.sh/5bFEk.jpg
Use different slider shapes than just straight paths. Here's the topic for awesome sliders: t/37194
Easy

AR +1
All of your difficulties should be the same length. Try to map the beginning of the song for Easy.
Try to make the notes flow better instead of using 90 degree angles.
00:23:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to replace some circles with sliders, or make a better pattern than two rows of circles
00:46:847 (2) - overlap with 00:45:150 (4)
00:47:696 (3) - - move to 00:47:978
00:54:768 (1,2,3,4) - replace some sliders with circles, or make different slider shapes. Just needs to be more interesting to play.
Normal

OD -1
Replace some circles with sliders. You have too many objects, and not enough spacing. Change distance snap to 1.2x
00:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard for Normal. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/5bGBQ.jpg
00:12:335 (1,2,3,4) - Too many objects, not enough spacing.
00:17:993 (4) - Normal players cannot read this slider, especially under a circle
00:27:045 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider that repeats only once
00:40:058 (2) - separate into two sliders instead of one repeating slider
00:45:150 (1) - Normal players can't read this
00:47:413 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lots of notes for Normal... maybe take some notes out and extend some sliders? It might look easier after you change the distance snap.
Hard

HP -1
Watch the distance snap from 00:01:020 - 00:17:851. It doesn't stay at 0.8x most of the time
Nothing else to say except use a better variety of slider shapes and don't use so many 90 degree patterns.
[ Zzz ]
HI~ RatedNC17

t/142356 My m4m modding queue request !!

[ General ]


Your mp3 File = 128kbps> 192kbps
There is a need to change.

BG = 800x450 > ( 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768 ) There is a need to change.

[ Easy ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:04:414 (4) - Not good Shape

00:07:809 (2) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:16:861 (2) - ^

00:17:993 (3) - No Nc

00:18:276 (2) - Difficulty Balance To Removal

00:27:045 (4) - More Good Bits To Change :)

00:45:150 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

[ Normal ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:10:496 (6) - it should be changed

00:17:993 (3) - More Good :)

00:37:795 (2) - Not good Shape

00:38:926 (1) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:55:899 (2) - ^

00:57:031 (3) - ^

[ Hard ]

HP + 1 OD - 1

00:03:283 (1,2) - Not good.

00:07:809 (1,2) - ^ ( Same as above )

:)
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ RatedNC17

t/142356 My m4m modding queue request !!

[ General ]


Your mp3 File = 128kbps> 192kbps
There is a need to change.

BG = 800x450 > ( 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768 ) There is a need to change.

[ Easy ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:04:414 (4) - Not good Shape

00:07:809 (2) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:16:861 (2) - ^

00:17:993 (3) - No Nc

00:18:276 (2) - Difficulty Balance To Removal

00:27:045 (4) - More Good Bits To Change :)

00:45:150 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

[ Normal ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:10:496 (6) - it should be changed

00:17:993 (3) - More Good :)

00:37:795 (2) - Not good Shape

00:38:926 (1) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:55:899 (2) - ^

00:57:031 (3) - ^

[ Hard ]

HP + 1 OD - 1

00:03:283 (1,2) - Not good.

00:07:809 (1,2) - ^ ( Same as above )

:)
Thank You for the modz :D
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue

SPOILER
General

Re-sized background: http://puu.sh/5bFEk.jpg
Use different slider shapes than just straight paths. Here's the topic for awesome sliders: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
Easy

AR +1
All of your difficulties should be the same length. Try to map the beginning of the song for Easy.
Try to make the notes flow better instead of using 90 degree angles.
00:23:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to replace some circles with sliders, or make a better pattern than two rows of circles
00:46:847 (2) - overlap with 00:45:150 (4)
00:47:696 (3) - - move to 00:47:978
00:54:768 (1,2,3,4) - replace some sliders with circles, or make different slider shapes. Just needs to be more interesting to play.
Normal

OD -1
Replace some circles with sliders. You have too many objects, and not enough spacing. Change distance snap to 1.2x
00:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard for Normal. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/5bGBQ.jpg
00:12:335 (1,2,3,4) - Too many objects, not enough spacing.
00:17:993 (4) - Normal players cannot read this slider, especially under a circle
00:27:045 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider that repeats only once
00:40:058 (2) - separate into two sliders instead of one repeating slider
00:45:150 (1) - Normal players can't read this
00:47:413 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lots of notes for Normal... maybe take some notes out and extend some sliders? It might look easier after you change the distance snap.
Hard

HP -1
Watch the distance snap from 00:01:020 - 00:17:851. It doesn't stay at 0.8x most of the time
Nothing else to say except use a better variety of slider shapes and don't use so many 90 degree patterns.

Awesome help! Thanks :)
Luvdic
Hello, from m4m, sorry for taking so long

[General]

The was that the mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad, if you did the cut by yourself, you should consider reediting it more properly, so it wont end so abruptly.

Also, youre not supposed to be using the "Short Ver." thing in your title anymore because of this: t/89198 And as far as I know, the title doesnt have this name originally.

When you map, you should consider using lvl 4 grid, or just disable grid snap if youre pro enough. This is because it causes some slight DS bug, Ill tell them to you per each diff just to show you, this is more a suggestion for your future maps.


[Hard]

00:18:558 - Add circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later?
00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an example of what I was telling you about using grid size lvl4, notice hoe (1) and (2) and different DS compared to other objects, so yeah, fix it.
00:28:177 (7) - Flip horizontally this slider, so it will look like this: http://puu.sh/5qUdG
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:53:636 (3,4) - Slider should start at 00:53:636 and then you should move the circle to 00:54:485 - Fix hitsounds as well, obviously.

[Normal]

00:46:281 - Missing hitsound?
00:49:110 (3,4) - Same suggestion as in the hard diff in 00:53:636 (3,4)
00:53:636 (3,4) - Same as above
00:54:768 - Take out clap?

[Easy]

The whole first part before the break makes no sense at all to me, I suggest you to totally remap it. If you want suggestion as to where to put the beats, just say so, and when I have time, Ill give it to you.

00:56:465 (3) - Missing hitsound?
00:58:728 - Missing hitsound?
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m, sorry for taking so long

SPOILER
[General]

The was that the mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad, if you did the cut by yourself, you should consider reediting it more properly, so it wont end so abruptly. actually thats how the song was cut from the artist since the mp3 is used in a trailer.

Also, youre not supposed to be using the "Short Ver." thing in your title anymore because of this: t/89198 And as far as I know, the title doesnt have this name originally. alright then

When you map, you should consider using lvl 4 grid, or just disable grid snap if youre pro enough. This is because it causes some slight DS bug, Ill tell them to you per each diff just to show you, this is more a suggestion for your future maps. noted


[Hard]

00:18:558 - Add circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later? no
00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an example of what I was telling you about using grid size lvl4, notice hoe (1) and (2) and different DS compared to other objects, so yeah, fix it. ok
00:28:177 (7) - Flip horizontally this slider, so it will look like this: http://puu.sh/5qUdG ok
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Slider should start at 00:53:636 and then you should move the circle to 00:54:485 - Fix hitsounds as well, obviously. ok

[Normal]

00:46:281 - Missing hitsound? THX for spotting that :o
00:49:110 (3,4) - Same suggestion as in the hard diff in 00:53:636 (3,4) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Same as above ok
00:54:768 - Take out clap? ok

[Easy]

The whole first part before the break makes no sense at all to me, I suggest you to totally remap it. If you want suggestion as to where to put the beats, just say so, and when I have time, Ill give it to you.

00:56:465 (3) - Missing hitsound? thx for spotting that
00:58:728 - Missing hitsound?thx for spotting that
Sharlo
Hello M4M :)

[Normal]
The Arrangement is so unshapely.

00:17:993 (3) - Move it to 00:17:993 and end on 00:17:851.

[Hard]
OD-2 plz. Don't forget this is a Hard diff.
The mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad. I agree.
Your sliders are very rigid. New ranked beatmaps are not like this.

00:17:851 (3) - Remove NC.
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that the DS should not be so closed.
00:28:742 (7,8,9) - Put them with the same DS.
Sorry, I can't find more.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

Sharlo wrote:

Hello M4M :)

[Normal]
The Arrangement is so unshapely.

00:17:993 (3) - Move it to 00:17:993 and end on 00:17:851. ?

[Hard]
OD-2 plz. Don't forget this is a Hard diff. ok
The mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad. I agree.
Your sliders are very rigid. New ranked beatmaps are not like this.

00:17:851 (3) - Remove NC. ok
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that the DS should not be so closed. ok
00:28:742 (7,8,9) - Put them with the same DS.
fixed
Sorry, I can't find more.
Good luck.
Unusual-bot
hi :3
here's my first mod so i'm sorry if i make some mistakes ok :)

Easy
SPOILER
00:17:993 (3,4) - why don't you make it into one slider? it's too hard for easy
00:40:058 (5,1) - try to blanket it properly

Normal
SPOILER
00:10:496 (6,1) - where's DC? (distant snap)
00:18:558 (1) - move the end of spin to 00:23:085 -
00:36:663 (1) - move this to x:176 y:40

Hard
SPOILER
00:33:834 (6) - please make this into curve, it's not good to have this kind of slider
00:47:978 (1) - Ctrl + H and blanket properly
00:52:505 (1) - ^

ok, that's all from me
good luck with your map,hope this will be ranked soon (love the song and vid :D )
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

K4zuya K wrote:

hi :3
here's my first mod so i'm sorry if i make some mistakes ok :) No problem :)

Easy
SPOILER
00:17:993 (3,4) - why don't you make it into one slider? it's too hard for easy ok
00:40:058 (5,1) - try to blanket it properly alright

Normal
SPOILER
00:10:496 (6,1) - where's DC? (distant snap) fixed
00:18:558 (1) - move the end of spin to 00:23:085 ok
00:36:663 (1) - move this to x:176 y:40
fixed

Hard
SPOILER
00:33:834 (6) - please make this into curve, it's not good to have this kind of slider alright
00:47:978 (1) - Ctrl + H and blanket properly no
00:52:505 (1) - ^ ok

ok, that's all from me
good luck with your map,hope this will be ranked soon (love the song and vid :D )
Thanks for the mod :D
OmgHahaLOLxD
Easy

This difficulty is basically perfect IMO.
However, If i may input one idea, every slider that is curvy like 00:29:308 (3) -
during the kiai time, sounded better with the clap sound, but that's just me.

Normal

00:37:795 (2) - I think these notes look a little nicer in with a strait L shape, rather then the slightly crooked L.
00:38:926 (1) - ^
00:55:899 (2) - ^
00:57:031 (3) - ^

Hard

00:03:707 (2) - This slider doesn't need 3 nodes
00:12:759 (3) - ^
00:38:926 (1) - Same as the Ls in normal difficulty

General Notes

Your song is so much fun! I love the song and the beat map, it's so fluent.
The sliders are the only thing that may bother some players IMO.
Other then that, maybe a beat map skin? Not mandatory, but might add a little spice.
Gl with your song :D
OmgHahaLOLxD
Easy

This difficulty is basically perfect IMO.
However, If i may input one idea, every slider that is curvy like 00:29:308 (3) -
during the kiai time, sounded better with the clap sound, but that's just me.

Normal

00:37:795 (2) - I think these notes look a little nicer in with a strait L shape, rather then the slightly crooked L.
00:38:926 (1) - ^
00:55:899 (2) - ^
00:57:031 (3) - ^

Hard

00:03:707 (2) - This slider doesn't need 3 nodes
00:12:759 (3) - ^
00:38:926 (1) - Same as the Ls in normal difficulty

General Notes

Your song is so much fun! I love the song and the beat map, it's so fluent.
The sliders are the only thing that may bother some players IMO.
Other then that, maybe a beat map skin? Not mandatory, but might add a little spice.
Gl with your song :D
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

OstrichSupreme wrote:

Easy

This difficulty is basically perfect IMO.
However, If i may input one idea, every slider that is curvy like 00:29:308 (3) -
during the kiai time, sounded better with the clap sound, but that's just me.

Normal

00:37:795 (2) - I think these notes look a little nicer in with a strait L shape, rather then the slightly crooked L. ok
00:38:926 (1) - ^ ok
00:55:899 (2) - ^ no
00:57:031 (3) - ^ no

Hard

00:03:707 (2) - This slider doesn't need 3 nodes i'd rather keep it
00:12:759 (3) - ^ ^
00:38:926 (1) - Same as the Ls in normal difficulty thx or spotting that

General Notes

Your song is so much fun! I love the song and the beat map, it's so fluent.
The sliders are the only thing that may bother some players IMO.
Other then that, maybe a beat map skin? Not mandatory, but might add a little spice.
Gl with your song :DThank you for the mod
mm996
hello, my poor mod and poor english.don't care. for M4M
[General]
the song feels littlle short,make it longer will be better
not necessary have BREAK TIME,cuz the song is short
BPM106.offset1026
[Easy]
00:15:730 (1,2) - close
00:16:861 (2,3) - far
00:47:978 (3,4,1) - blocked best not appear in easy diffs
[Normal]
00:01:444 (2,1) - little far
00:03:990 (2,3) - foldback silder will be better
00:13:042 (2,3) - ^
00:09:082 (4,5) - change?
00:49:110 (3) - change to slider
00:53:636 (3) - ^
[Hard]
feels circle a little small but CS5 is okey.
00:53:636 (3) - 00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - little far,but really nice when playing.beat fantasy~

GOOD LUCK!
Rakuen
Hi~

M4M from your queue!
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[General]
Ok.
You need a better background pic since your "Source" isn't come from GTA, tho I dont have any suggested BGs

[Easy]
Overall: Squared, no flow or lesser, could build more flow and increase note density
Suggest to decrease SV for "Easy" diff and increase the DS to 1.0x or something, if you have time
00:06:677 (1) - Use DS (Distance Snap) and remain 0.8x for the whole song if possible
00:16:861 (2,3) - ^
00:23:085 (1) - I prefer the first circle after break is around or near center of the screen
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - Could move this set to a little bit right and make 00:24:216 (3) - on the center, that looks better
00:27:045 (4) - Bounces doesn't suit Easy diff, becoz it's designed for newbies and they can't guess how many it hits
00:45:150 (4) - ^
00:49:393 (4) - This note is out of beat or anything in the song, suggest to remove and put a circle 00:49:676 -
00:54:768 (1) - Constant DS is important for Easy and Normal mapping standard for now
00:56:465 (3) - ^ Use 0.8x and remain if possible

[Normal]
Overall: Squared, Ok flow
Use Tiny grid size (by pressing G and change) to arrange the note neatly
00:02:151 (1) - Remove NC
00:01:020 (1,2,1,2) - I personally suggest these notes change into sliders since Blue Ticks are kinda hard to aim
00:05:546 (1,2,1,2) - ^ applies
00:14:598 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:17:851 - You missed a hit and suddenly jumped to drum > 00:17:993 (3) -
00:17:993 (3) - Suggest not to put bounces before spinner
00:27:045 (5) - Maybe change to 1 slider without any reverse
00:29:308 (3) - Do not change your DS suddenly, it makes players hard to read
^ For this kind of style you can use it in Hard / Insane diff for clear notes stacks
00:37:795 (2,3,1) - Suggest to change this pattern if you have anymore idea
00:50:242 (1,2) - Make it slider
00:53:636 (3,4,5) - Change to 2 sliders
00:55:899 (2) - Bad flow, try Ctrl+J

[Hard]
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2,3) - This is kinda out of mapping area
00:29:874 (1) - Remove slider whistle
00:34:400 (1) - ^
00:27:611 (5) - NC (New combo)

That's all, hope it helps.
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
thanks for mods you two i'll mod your maps as soon as i get home :D
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

mm996 wrote:

hello, my poor mod and poor english.don't care. for M4M
[General]
the song feels littlle short,make it longer will be better
not necessary have BREAK TIME,cuz the song is short
BPM106.offset1026
[Easy]
00:15:730 (1,2) - close moved it
00:16:861 (2,3) - far i'd rather keep it
00:47:978 (3,4,1) - blocked best not appear in easy diffs
[Normal]
00:01:444 (2,1) - little far i'd rather kepp it
00:03:990 (2,3) - foldback silder will be better
00:13:042 (2,3) - ^
00:09:082 (4,5) - change? no
00:49:110 (3) - change to slider no
00:53:636 (3) - ^ no
[Hard]
feels circle a little small but CS5 is okey.
00:53:636 (3) - 00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - little far,but really nice when playing.beat fantasy~

GOOD LUCK!


Thanks for the help
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

SPOILER
M4M from your queue!
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[General]
Ok.
You need a better background pic since your "Source" isn't come from GTA, tho I dont have any suggested BGs that was meant to be in the tags :o

[Easy]
Overall: Squared, no flow or lesser, could build more flow and increase note density
Suggest to decrease SV for "Easy" diff and increase the DS to 1.0x or something, if you have time i'll keep it
00:06:677 (1) - Use DS (Distance Snap) and remain 0.8x for the whole song if possible ok
00:16:861 (2,3) - ^
00:23:085 (1) - I prefer the first circle after break is around or near center of the screen no
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - Could move this set to a little bit right and make 00:24:216 (3) - on the center, that looks better ok
00:27:045 (4) - Bounces doesn't suit Easy diff, becoz it's designed for newbies and they can't guess how many it hits
00:45:150 (4) - ^
00:49:393 (4) - This note is out of beat or anything in the song, suggest to remove and put a circle 00:49:676 -
00:54:768 (1) - Constant DS is important for Easy and Normal mapping standard for now
00:56:465 (3) - ^ Use 0.8x and remain if possible

[Normal]
Overall: Squared, Ok flow
Use Tiny grid size (by pressing G and change) to arrange the note neatly ok
00:02:151 (1) - Remove NC ok
00:01:020 (1,2,1,2) - I personally suggest these notes change into sliders since Blue Ticks are kinda hard to aim ok
00:05:546 (1,2,1,2) - ^ applies ok
00:14:598 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ok
00:17:851 - You missed a hit and suddenly jumped to drum > 00:17:993 (3) thx for spotting that
00:17:993 (3) - Suggest not to put bounces before spinner i'll keep it
00:27:045 (5) - Maybe change to 1 slider without any reverse i'll keep it
00:29:308 (3) - Do not change your DS suddenly, it makes players hard to read
^ For this kind of style you can use it in Hard / Insane diff for clear notes stacks
00:37:795 (2,3,1) - Suggest to change this pattern if you have anymore idea
00:50:242 (1,2) - Make it slider no
00:53:636 (3,4,5) - Change to 2 sliders no
00:55:899 (2) - Bad flow, try Ctrl+J

[Hard]
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2,3) - This is kinda out of mapping area still fully shows in test play
00:29:874 (1) - Remove slider whistle no
00:34:400 (1) - ^ no
00:27:611 (5) - NC (New combo) ok

That's all, hope it helps.

Thx for the the mod
Jekate
hello M4M~

[General]
  1. bpm: 106 Offset: 1012 that was what i found
  2. a suggestion, you can tilt a bit straight slider like this one to make your map more variation, or a little curve like this
  3. raise volume on kiai time 10%
[Easy]
  1. from AiMod, fix that
  2. please use 1/4 beat snap divisior rather than 1/8
  3. 00:47:985 (3) - ctrl+h then ctrl+g and then move this coordinate x:136 y:128, looks better don't they
  4. 00:51:945 (3) - ctrl+> then move to x:172 y:72
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:834 (2,3) - the distance so close since you have 1.2 DS in this diff
  2. 00:47:978 (1) - the shape not looks good, maybe you can copy paste this one 00:49:393 (4) -
  3. 00:55:899 (2,3,4) - that one was a jump and prety far for a normal diff, i sugest you not put any jumps in normal diff
[Hard]
  1. this diff must have Distance Spacing more than 1.2 (curently 0.8 same as easy diff), because in normal diff your DS is 1.2 so logically in hard diff you should have more than 1.2 or you can lower the DS on normal diff
  2. 00:17:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can spread it out like this one 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4) -
  3. 00:31:854 (3,1,2,3,4) - bad overlap imo
  4. 00:52:505 (1,2,3) - this flow one looks ok
that's all
be optimistic on your map and keep improving~

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/134296

thanks 8-)
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

Jekate wrote:

hello M4M~

[General]
  1. bpm: 106 Offset: 1012 that was what i found thx :)
  2. a suggestion, you can tilt a bit straight slider like this one to make your map more variation, or a little curve like this
  3. raise volume on kiai time 10%
ok

[Easy]
  1. from AiMod, fix that ok
  2. please use 1/4 beat snap divisior rather than 1/8 ok
  3. 00:47:985 (3) - ctrl+h then ctrl+g and then move this coordinate x:136 y:128, looks better don't they yep :D
  4. 00:51:945 (3) - ctrl+> then move to x:172 y:72
ok

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:834 (2,3) - the distance so close since you have 1.2 DS in this diff ok
  2. 00:47:978 (1) - the shape not looks good, maybe you can copy paste this one 00:49:393 (4) - ok
  3. 00:55:899 (2,3,4) - that one was a jump and prety far for a normal diff, i sugest you not put any jumps in normal diff
fixed

[Hard]
  1. this diff must have Distance Spacing more than 1.2 (curently 0.8 same as easy diff), because in normal diff your DS is 1.2 so logically in hard diff you should have more than 1.2 or you can lower the DS on normal diff
  2. 00:17:851 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can spread it out like this one 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4) - no
  3. 00:31:854 (3,1,2,3,4) - bad overlap imo
  4. 00:52:505 (1,2,3) - this flow one looks ok


that's all
be optimistic on your map and keep improving~

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/134296

thanks 8-)
Thanks for mod
Vergence
M4M4M4M4M4M4M!

Hi~

General
Overall, spacing is probably the problem in the maps~
Just a tweak would do.

Easy
00:07:804 (2,3,4) - I would recommend :
00:24:807 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing not equal, feels uncomfortable... (yes, im that kind of guy)
00:28:181 (1,2,3) - Spacing changes
Recommend 1.05x spacing distance

Normal
00:03:983 (2) - Jumps. Not recommended for Normal difficulty
00:39:313 (3,4.1) - Spread these notes abit further
00:52:238 (5) - Two grids up (Level 4)

Hard
00:28:181 - end of 1st kiai time - Notes become easier. Recommend a bit of jumps for fun
And other spacing problems derp~

I would say its not bad for ur first few beatmaps~
Keep on getting feedback from more people.
These are just recommendations~
Not "I WANT CHA TO CHANGE ALL OF IT" type :o
The addition sounds make great noises!
Derp
Echeveria
Hello!I‘ve taken a look ar your map, and here are my suggestions:
General Suggestions
· Hmm..I think you should pay attention to where a new combo begins. Currently many of them are too short, and some are paced a beat earlier or later than where it should begin.

· You can try to make them symmetrical since their are many repeated passages. It will be better.

Easy
00:04:408 (4) - I don't think this is placed right. It's obvious that another passage begin at 0:05:54, it sounds strange now. So I think you should change it, as well as making it a new combo here.

00:13:464 (3) - The same as above.

00:53:653 (5,1) - They are overlapped. You can also try to create symmetry here.

Normal
00:11:200 (1,1) - Why new combo here?

00:27:049 (5) - Since there is a stress on 0:27:615, it should not last for so long. It's better if you make it a new combo with a circle on the stress. It now sounds strange with 00:27:898 (1) -


Hard
A General suggestion: The combos are too short, sometimes only last for 3 hits.
00:04:832 (4) - Oh this one should be placed at x:256,y:172 It now looks like there is a sudden change, that's strange

I think you should make a insane difficulty since the current highest difficulty is too easy if you just end mapping this song with it. The song sounds great since there are many dotted notes which gives it strong rhythm. , so if you pay attention and use them correctly, I think your map will be better. Hope your map will be ranked soon :)
Echeveria


Artist: Shuiyiming
Title: Hwa Shwei Ywe~The Flower, Pool and the Moon
Difficulties: The Love(Easy) | The Pool(Normal) | The Flower(Hard) | The Moon(Insane) |

Here is my map. I would appreciate it if you modded it for me since you are such an outstanding osu player! :)
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

DragonSparta wrote:

M4M4M4M4M4M4M!

Hi~

General
Overall, spacing is probably the problem in the maps~
Just a tweak would do.

Easy
00:07:804 (2,3,4) - I would recommend :
ok (pokemon ftw)
00:24:807 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing not equal, feels uncomfortable... (yes, im that kind of guy) fixed
00:28:181 (1,2,3) - Spacing changes fixed
Recommend 1.05x spacing distance

Normal
00:03:983 (2) - Jumps. Not recommended for Normal difficulty fixed
00:39:313 (3,4.1) - Spread these notes abit further
00:52:238 (5) - Two grids up (Level 4)

Hard
0 0:28:181 - end of 1st kiai time - Notes become easier. Recommend a bit of jumps for fun
And other spacing problems derp~ will fix those

I would say its not bad for ur first few beatmaps~
Keep on getting feedback from more people.
These are just recommendations~
Not "I WANT CHA TO CHANGE ALL OF IT" type :o
The addition sounds make great noises!
Derp
Thank you :D
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