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The Chain Gang of 1974 - Sleepwalking

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RatedNC17
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, June 12, 2014 at 5:32:21 PM

Artist: The Chain Gang of 1974
Title: Sleepwalking
Source: Grand Theft Auto V
Tags: gta five 5 rockstar games north grand theft auto alternative Daydream Forever DragonSparta Silverboxer
BPM: 106.05
Filesize: 5847kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. DragonSparta's Insane (3.87 stars, 159 notes)
  2. Easy (-1 stars, 63 notes)
  3. Hard (2.38 stars, 125 notes)
  4. Normal (1.78 stars, 78 notes)
  5. Silverboxer's Extra (4.79 stars, 173 notes)
Download: The Chain Gang of 1974 - Sleepwalking
Download: The Chain Gang of 1974 - Sleepwalking (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD. NEW BG, MP3 FILE, AND NEW DIFF Thanks
Michael: A few weeks ago i was happily sulking by my swimming pool...
Franklin: 401Ks, tax returns and all that?
Trevor: NOBODY TELLS ME WHAT WANT!
Lester: I suppose the group hugs out of the question ;)
Easy 100%
Normal 100%
Hard 100%
DragonSparta's Insane 100% (Thank You DragonSparta)
Silverboxer's Extra 100% (Thank you Silverboxer)
1ST map going for Rank

Thanks goes to these nice people
SPOILER
iNickel, -RIKKA-, 10crystalmask10, Silverboxer, [Zzz], Xanandra, Sharlo, K4zuya K, OstrichSupreme, mm996, Rakuen, Jekate, DragonSparta, Shuiyiming, agentdark1706, Lolicore_Komari, AnthonyEcon, WhiteAries, CTs-Th, Sheela901, Winek, CDFA, Reat, Trust, Mystima, - Miomio Chii -, Laturn, Avishay, Teara, deejaydray, No_Gu, xVirtualNinjax, Sieg, Rotte, Lapis Aoki, sksmwkd125, Lally, Tari, ikari_kyon, MasterKirin, No Dap, Bonch0, sammy711, Snaggletooth, Vhy, 10nya
Special Thanks to DragonSparta for Insane Diff and star, Silverboxer for Extra diff and offset fix, BeatofIke for timing fix, Teara for re-map help, baraajte123 for test plays, INickel,OstrichSupreme, Winek, - Miomio Chii -, MasterKirin for star. (Thanks guys :) <3)
Nickelony
Here a better Timed template for you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/dvf1v2u8ujmws ... ate%5D.osu

Map with this template and then ask me for mod please :)

[General]
Please use distance snap and always check AiMod (File > Open AiMod)
The sliders... You are doing it like the old osu! mapping style.

Old style:



New Style:



Of course you can use the old lines, but not always 0_0

Tipp: NEVER do everything perfect (I mean sliders)

As exaple play many maps from Andrea or take a exaple of this map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/87630

[Easy]
00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - This is to hard for beginners...
00:40:341 (6,2) - Not looking good...
00:27:045 (7,1) - Not the best solution for easy.

[Normal]
OD - 5
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4) - NEVER DO THIS IN NORMAL!

[Hard]
00:04:273 (3) - Really Hard to read.
00:13:325 (3) - ^
00:13:325 (3) - A bit boring...
00:40:341 (8) - I don't like circles on sliders!
00:31:854 (9) - A slider here is not the best solution

[Wallpaper suggestion]
http://conowego.pl/uploads/pics/tit_a7c2e1.jpg
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

iNickel wrote:

Here a better Timed template for you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/dvf1v2u8ujmws ... ate%5D.osu

Map with this template and then ask me for mod please :)
Thank You!! :)
Nickelony
You shouldn't give me Kudosu, because this wasn't really a mod, so I only edited the post.
-RIKKA-_old
Hi, from M4M.

Easy
・00:35:532 (5) - like this ?



・00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・AR & HD -1

Normal
・CS +1
・AR & OD 4 or 5
・00:04:556 (3,4) - like this?



・00:09:082 (4) - ^
・00:13:608 (3,4) - ^
・00:45:574 (4,1) - Please repeat it.
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294

Hard
・CS +1
・HD 6 or 7
・00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too far?
・00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・I recommend that you add various kinds to slider.

good luck :D
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

-RIKKA- wrote:

Hi, from M4M.

Easy
・00:35:532 (5) - like this ?



・00:40:058 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・AR & HD -1

Normal
・CS +1
・AR & OD 4 or 5
・00:04:556 (3,4) - like this?



・00:09:082 (4) - ^
・00:13:608 (3,4) - ^
・00:45:574 (4,1) - Please repeat it.
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294

Hard
・CS +1
・HD 6 or 7
・00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too far?
・00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
・Kiai time end 00:59:860 to 00:59:294
・I recommend that you add various kinds to slider.

good luck :D
Thank You for the mods :)
10crystalmask01
Ello o3o Random mod
[Easy]
00:25:348 (4) - NC
00:35:532 (5) - Add a finish on the tail, to match the cymbal crash heard in the music. Double click on the tail on the timeline like this:
Once it's highlighted in red you can add the finish.
00:40:058 (5) - Make the default normal hitsound on the reverse end as well,to continue the hitsound pattern.

The spacing looks pretty clean :P
[Normal]
Circle size -2, they're wayy to small for a standard player to hit in a Normal diff :S
00:27:045 (5) - Add another reverse, so it ends at 00:27:611 instead with a finish hitsound.
00:29:874 (5) - NC
00:34:400 (4) - ^
00:38:926 (4) - ^
00:45:715 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:46:281 - 00:47:696 Try this rhythm?


Rhythm here is a bit to complicated, since so many objects are only being placed 1/2 beats apart. :(

[Hard]
Circle size -1 or 2.
00:04:273 (3,4,5,1,2,2) - Really confusing overlap, please re-map this part.
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2) - Move more apart.
00:13:325 (3,4,2,2) - Another bad overlap, please re-map as well.
00:18:558 (5) - NC
00:29:874 (7) - ^
00:34:400 (7) - ^
00:38:926 (7) - ^
00:47:978 (6) - ^
00:52:505 (6) - ^
00:56:465 (6) - ^
This diff still needs a lot of work :( Especially on the flow.
Hope this helps~! ^^
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o Random mod
SPOILER
[Easy]
00:25:348 (4) - NC
00:35:532 (5) - Add a finish on the tail, to match the cymbal crash heard in the music. Double click on the tail on the timeline like this:
Once it's highlighted in red you can add the finish.
00:40:058 (5) - Make the default normal hitsound on the reverse end as well,to continue the hitsound pattern.

The spacing looks pretty clean :P
[Normal]
Circle size -2, they're wayy to small for a standard player to hit in a Normal diff :S
00:27:045 (5) - Add another reverse, so it ends at 00:27:611 instead with a finish hitsound.
00:29:874 (5) - NC
00:34:400 (4) - ^
00:38:926 (4) - ^
00:45:715 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:46:281 - 00:47:696 Try this rhythm?


Rhythm here is a bit to complicated, since so many objects are only being placed 1/2 beats apart. :(

[Hard]
Circle size -1 or 2.
00:04:273 (3,4,5,1,2,2) - Really confusing overlap, please re-map this part.
00:09:365 (5,6,1,2) - Move more apart.
00:13:325 (3,4,2,2) - Another bad overlap, please re-map as well.
00:18:558 (5) - NC
00:29:874 (7) - ^
00:34:400 (7) - ^
00:38:926 (7) - ^
00:47:978 (6) - ^
00:52:505 (6) - ^
00:56:465 (6) - ^
This diff still needs a lot of work :( Especially on the flow.
Hope this helps~! ^^

All applied and thanks for the help :)
Silverboxer
from my modding queue

General

Re-sized background: http://puu.sh/5bFEk.jpg
Use different slider shapes than just straight paths. Here's the topic for awesome sliders: t/37194
Easy

AR +1
All of your difficulties should be the same length. Try to map the beginning of the song for Easy.
Try to make the notes flow better instead of using 90 degree angles.
00:23:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to replace some circles with sliders, or make a better pattern than two rows of circles
00:46:847 (2) - overlap with 00:45:150 (4)
00:47:696 (3) - - move to 00:47:978
00:54:768 (1,2,3,4) - replace some sliders with circles, or make different slider shapes. Just needs to be more interesting to play.
Normal

OD -1
Replace some circles with sliders. You have too many objects, and not enough spacing. Change distance snap to 1.2x
00:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard for Normal. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/5bGBQ.jpg
00:12:335 (1,2,3,4) - Too many objects, not enough spacing.
00:17:993 (4) - Normal players cannot read this slider, especially under a circle
00:27:045 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider that repeats only once
00:40:058 (2) - separate into two sliders instead of one repeating slider
00:45:150 (1) - Normal players can't read this
00:47:413 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lots of notes for Normal... maybe take some notes out and extend some sliders? It might look easier after you change the distance snap.
Hard

HP -1
Watch the distance snap from 00:01:020 - 00:17:851. It doesn't stay at 0.8x most of the time
Nothing else to say except use a better variety of slider shapes and don't use so many 90 degree patterns.
[ Zzz ]
HI~ RatedNC17

t/142356 My m4m modding queue request !!

[ General ]


Your mp3 File = 128kbps> 192kbps
There is a need to change.

BG = 800x450 > ( 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768 ) There is a need to change.

[ Easy ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:04:414 (4) - Not good Shape

00:07:809 (2) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:16:861 (2) - ^

00:17:993 (3) - No Nc

00:18:276 (2) - Difficulty Balance To Removal

00:27:045 (4) - More Good Bits To Change :)

00:45:150 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

[ Normal ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:10:496 (6) - it should be changed

00:17:993 (3) - More Good :)

00:37:795 (2) - Not good Shape

00:38:926 (1) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:55:899 (2) - ^

00:57:031 (3) - ^

[ Hard ]

HP + 1 OD - 1

00:03:283 (1,2) - Not good.

00:07:809 (1,2) - ^ ( Same as above )

:)
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ RatedNC17

t/142356 My m4m modding queue request !!

[ General ]


Your mp3 File = 128kbps> 192kbps
There is a need to change.

BG = 800x450 > ( 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768 ) There is a need to change.

[ Easy ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:04:414 (4) - Not good Shape

00:07:809 (2) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:16:861 (2) - ^

00:17:993 (3) - No Nc

00:18:276 (2) - Difficulty Balance To Removal

00:27:045 (4) - More Good Bits To Change :)

00:45:150 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

[ Normal ]

Slower bpm = ar - 1

00:10:496 (6) - it should be changed

00:17:993 (3) - More Good :)

00:37:795 (2) - Not good Shape

00:38:926 (1) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:55:899 (2) - ^

00:57:031 (3) - ^

[ Hard ]

HP + 1 OD - 1

00:03:283 (1,2) - Not good.

00:07:809 (1,2) - ^ ( Same as above )

:)
Thank You for the modz :D
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue

SPOILER
General

Re-sized background: http://puu.sh/5bFEk.jpg
Use different slider shapes than just straight paths. Here's the topic for awesome sliders: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
Easy

AR +1
All of your difficulties should be the same length. Try to map the beginning of the song for Easy.
Try to make the notes flow better instead of using 90 degree angles.
00:23:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to replace some circles with sliders, or make a better pattern than two rows of circles
00:46:847 (2) - overlap with 00:45:150 (4)
00:47:696 (3) - - move to 00:47:978
00:54:768 (1,2,3,4) - replace some sliders with circles, or make different slider shapes. Just needs to be more interesting to play.
Normal

OD -1
Replace some circles with sliders. You have too many objects, and not enough spacing. Change distance snap to 1.2x
00:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too hard for Normal. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/5bGBQ.jpg
00:12:335 (1,2,3,4) - Too many objects, not enough spacing.
00:17:993 (4) - Normal players cannot read this slider, especially under a circle
00:27:045 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider that repeats only once
00:40:058 (2) - separate into two sliders instead of one repeating slider
00:45:150 (1) - Normal players can't read this
00:47:413 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lots of notes for Normal... maybe take some notes out and extend some sliders? It might look easier after you change the distance snap.
Hard

HP -1
Watch the distance snap from 00:01:020 - 00:17:851. It doesn't stay at 0.8x most of the time
Nothing else to say except use a better variety of slider shapes and don't use so many 90 degree patterns.

Awesome help! Thanks :)
Luvdic
Hello, from m4m, sorry for taking so long

[General]

The was that the mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad, if you did the cut by yourself, you should consider reediting it more properly, so it wont end so abruptly.

Also, youre not supposed to be using the "Short Ver." thing in your title anymore because of this: t/89198 And as far as I know, the title doesnt have this name originally.

When you map, you should consider using lvl 4 grid, or just disable grid snap if youre pro enough. This is because it causes some slight DS bug, Ill tell them to you per each diff just to show you, this is more a suggestion for your future maps.


[Hard]

00:18:558 - Add circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later?
00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an example of what I was telling you about using grid size lvl4, notice hoe (1) and (2) and different DS compared to other objects, so yeah, fix it.
00:28:177 (7) - Flip horizontally this slider, so it will look like this: http://puu.sh/5qUdG
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:53:636 (3,4) - Slider should start at 00:53:636 and then you should move the circle to 00:54:485 - Fix hitsounds as well, obviously.

[Normal]

00:46:281 - Missing hitsound?
00:49:110 (3,4) - Same suggestion as in the hard diff in 00:53:636 (3,4)
00:53:636 (3,4) - Same as above
00:54:768 - Take out clap?

[Easy]

The whole first part before the break makes no sense at all to me, I suggest you to totally remap it. If you want suggestion as to where to put the beats, just say so, and when I have time, Ill give it to you.

00:56:465 (3) - Missing hitsound?
00:58:728 - Missing hitsound?
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

Xanandra wrote:

Hello, from m4m, sorry for taking so long

SPOILER
[General]

The was that the mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad, if you did the cut by yourself, you should consider reediting it more properly, so it wont end so abruptly. actually thats how the song was cut from the artist since the mp3 is used in a trailer.

Also, youre not supposed to be using the "Short Ver." thing in your title anymore because of this: t/89198 And as far as I know, the title doesnt have this name originally. alright then

When you map, you should consider using lvl 4 grid, or just disable grid snap if youre pro enough. This is because it causes some slight DS bug, Ill tell them to you per each diff just to show you, this is more a suggestion for your future maps. noted


[Hard]

00:18:558 - Add circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later? no
00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an example of what I was telling you about using grid size lvl4, notice hoe (1) and (2) and different DS compared to other objects, so yeah, fix it. ok
00:28:177 (7) - Flip horizontally this slider, so it will look like this: http://puu.sh/5qUdG ok
00:45:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:27:045 (1,2,3,4,5) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Slider should start at 00:53:636 and then you should move the circle to 00:54:485 - Fix hitsounds as well, obviously. ok

[Normal]

00:46:281 - Missing hitsound? THX for spotting that :o
00:49:110 (3,4) - Same suggestion as in the hard diff in 00:53:636 (3,4) ok
00:53:636 (3,4) - Same as above ok
00:54:768 - Take out clap? ok

[Easy]

The whole first part before the break makes no sense at all to me, I suggest you to totally remap it. If you want suggestion as to where to put the beats, just say so, and when I have time, Ill give it to you.

00:56:465 (3) - Missing hitsound? thx for spotting that
00:58:728 - Missing hitsound?thx for spotting that
Sharlo
Hello M4M :)

[Normal]
The Arrangement is so unshapely.

00:17:993 (3) - Move it to 00:17:993 and end on 00:17:851.

[Hard]
OD-2 plz. Don't forget this is a Hard diff.
The mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad. I agree.
Your sliders are very rigid. New ranked beatmaps are not like this.

00:17:851 (3) - Remove NC.
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that the DS should not be so closed.
00:28:742 (7,8,9) - Put them with the same DS.
Sorry, I can't find more.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

Sharlo wrote:

Hello M4M :)

[Normal]
The Arrangement is so unshapely.

00:17:993 (3) - Move it to 00:17:993 and end on 00:17:851. ?

[Hard]
OD-2 plz. Don't forget this is a Hard diff. ok
The mp3 file ends and the map is pretty bad. I agree.
Your sliders are very rigid. New ranked beatmaps are not like this.

00:17:851 (3) - Remove NC. ok
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that the DS should not be so closed. ok
00:28:742 (7,8,9) - Put them with the same DS.
fixed
Sorry, I can't find more.
Good luck.
Unusual-bot
hi :3
here's my first mod so i'm sorry if i make some mistakes ok :)

Easy
SPOILER
00:17:993 (3,4) - why don't you make it into one slider? it's too hard for easy
00:40:058 (5,1) - try to blanket it properly

Normal
SPOILER
00:10:496 (6,1) - where's DC? (distant snap)
00:18:558 (1) - move the end of spin to 00:23:085 -
00:36:663 (1) - move this to x:176 y:40

Hard
SPOILER
00:33:834 (6) - please make this into curve, it's not good to have this kind of slider
00:47:978 (1) - Ctrl + H and blanket properly
00:52:505 (1) - ^

ok, that's all from me
good luck with your map,hope this will be ranked soon (love the song and vid :D )
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

K4zuya K wrote:

hi :3
here's my first mod so i'm sorry if i make some mistakes ok :) No problem :)

Easy
SPOILER
00:17:993 (3,4) - why don't you make it into one slider? it's too hard for easy ok
00:40:058 (5,1) - try to blanket it properly alright

Normal
SPOILER
00:10:496 (6,1) - where's DC? (distant snap) fixed
00:18:558 (1) - move the end of spin to 00:23:085 ok
00:36:663 (1) - move this to x:176 y:40
fixed

Hard
SPOILER
00:33:834 (6) - please make this into curve, it's not good to have this kind of slider alright
00:47:978 (1) - Ctrl + H and blanket properly no
00:52:505 (1) - ^ ok

ok, that's all from me
good luck with your map,hope this will be ranked soon (love the song and vid :D )
Thanks for the mod :D
OmgHahaLOLxD
Easy

This difficulty is basically perfect IMO.
However, If i may input one idea, every slider that is curvy like 00:29:308 (3) -
during the kiai time, sounded better with the clap sound, but that's just me.

Normal

00:37:795 (2) - I think these notes look a little nicer in with a strait L shape, rather then the slightly crooked L.
00:38:926 (1) - ^
00:55:899 (2) - ^
00:57:031 (3) - ^

Hard

00:03:707 (2) - This slider doesn't need 3 nodes
00:12:759 (3) - ^
00:38:926 (1) - Same as the Ls in normal difficulty

General Notes

Your song is so much fun! I love the song and the beat map, it's so fluent.
The sliders are the only thing that may bother some players IMO.
Other then that, maybe a beat map skin? Not mandatory, but might add a little spice.
Gl with your song :D
OmgHahaLOLxD
Easy

This difficulty is basically perfect IMO.
However, If i may input one idea, every slider that is curvy like 00:29:308 (3) -
during the kiai time, sounded better with the clap sound, but that's just me.

Normal

00:37:795 (2) - I think these notes look a little nicer in with a strait L shape, rather then the slightly crooked L.
00:38:926 (1) - ^
00:55:899 (2) - ^
00:57:031 (3) - ^

Hard

00:03:707 (2) - This slider doesn't need 3 nodes
00:12:759 (3) - ^
00:38:926 (1) - Same as the Ls in normal difficulty

General Notes

Your song is so much fun! I love the song and the beat map, it's so fluent.
The sliders are the only thing that may bother some players IMO.
Other then that, maybe a beat map skin? Not mandatory, but might add a little spice.
Gl with your song :D
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