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Touhou YouYou Yume~perfect cherry blossom - Border of Life

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Sourcerer
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Topic Starter
Sourcerer
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, September 17, 2009 at 7:52:55 PM

Artist: dBu Music
Title: Border of Life
BPM: 141
Filesize: 5919kb
Play Time: 00:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.2 stars, 53 notes)
  2. Hard (4.21 stars, 154 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 193 notes)
Download: dBu Music - Border of Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Sourcerer , edited 18 times in total.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Suggested Background

[Normal]
00:16:15 (6) - Move it a bit to the left more
00:19:13 (3) - Move it a bit down more
00:20:28 (2) - Move it exactly on top of 00:19:90 (1) so it forms a mini rectangle shape
00:20:67 (3) - Beginning point should be positioned at the end point of 00:20:28 (2)
00:21:05 (4) - Move it to the right
00:50:67 (1) - Move it on top
01:37:12 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - These spinners are overlapping, they're illegal and not allowed, I suggest just changing these to one whole spinner instead or remap this part.
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sourcerer
Thanks Nacho-Don!
I Really appreciate it you mod my maps! :)
Thanks a lot!

Wait? a STAR? :D:D:D:D:D
*YES*
*Dances*

Thankz!
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
The timing is off. You need multiple sections. Use this:

First Section:
Offset - 6891
BPM - 141

Second Section:
Offset - 13725
BPM - 155.98

There are probably more timing changes in the rest of the song. I only timed up to where you had finished mapping.

Make sure you resnap all notes and recalculate slider lengths after putting in the new sections. This will probably screw with the positioning of some stuff, so go over everything and put it where it should be.

Also I might want to make a difficulty for this.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
There's no way in hell that that is the correct artist.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy

Cyclone wrote:

There's no way in hell that that is the correct artist.
Just searched for it, correct artist is dBu.
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sourcerer

tieff wrote:

00:53:75 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps on normal diff? No way.
Well, This should be named hard.
I started out With Normal, but this is Rather a Hard map.
I forgot to do that.
So, That isnt really necessary.
Thanks, though!
Kudos, pal!
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sourcerer

Cyclone wrote:

There's no way in hell that that is the correct artist.
Inorite?
i was going to look up on it.
Though, i'm kinda forgetfull.(<-lolenglish, is that right? Forgetfull?)
Anyways, i forgot.
I got it right, now.
dBu!
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
second section > 13.699 ms

00:14:109(2) : make it end 1/4th to the right
00:32:381(break): not needed

no star yet..waiting for next difficulty
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sourcerer

x3ns0r wrote:

second section > 13.699 ms
???
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
he means change the offset of the second timing section to 13699 instead of 13725. Keep the first section the same and don't change the BPM of the 2nd.

(don't kudosu this)
nooodl_old
73 posts
Joined August 2008
nooodl_old
Recalculate Slider Lengths. Also, notes like 00:18:34 (1,2) - are crammed onto each other, while you make insane jumps later in the song. Use distance snap, it saves lives.

00:13:72 (1) - delete, change (2) into a spinner
00:16:80 (1) - spacing
00:29:69 () - place beat here
00:31:80 (1-end,2) - a little easy on the finish! you don't want to break the freaking cymbal
00:47:57 (1,2) - a little ugly, with the slider ends overlapping
00:53:15 (2,1) - spacing!
01:10:46 (10) - spacing
01:27:00 (1) - spacing, place this further away
01:32:00 (1) - delete, connect spinner
01:50:46 (1) - same

You'll get a star when it's all fixed :D
Eddycted
132 posts
Joined October 2008
Eddycted
The correct tag for the artist is "dBu music". http://www.dobuusagi.com/
Could you lower the beat volume a little?
There's a lot of hit sounds, especially claps. They tend to overshadow the rest of the song, so I'd remove some of those.

01:16:42 (1), 01:16:61 (1) - Spacing
01:47:00 (5) - Make it a new combo, or fix spacing.

Awesome song. Star. <3
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sourcerer
Thanks, Lybyd!
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
<3 dBu. one of my go-to artists for Touhou remixes

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine enough to me.

*only modding complete diffs*

[HARD]

i dunno. seems a bit easy for a hard diff. maybe i've just played too many hard hard diffs :/

there are plenty of nazi-spacing issues in this diff, stuff like at 00:21:41 (1,2), or at 01:19:31 (1,2). there are others but you can have a look and find them yourself. they are not too major but it would be best if you sort these out.

00:19:87 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - each of these combos have different spacing. it'd look cleaner if they had the same spacing. if not, make the change in spacing consistent (e.g. the spacing after each combo gets bigger and bigger or something)
01:36:81 (1) - woah. long ass spinner. you should make it shorter and map the space that is left after shortening it.
01:46:62 (4,1) - spacing. too close together. turn distance snap on and move these apart.

im not sure about this map. it has some glaring issues, but playtesting it a bit, it isn't too bad. but it has some issues that need sorting out though.

a reluctant star i guess
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
[Easy]

00:34:88 (2) - fix spacing
00:36:41 (2) - ^

[Insane] (LOL, this should be the last difficulty =S)

Use distance snap 1,2x and organize ALL NOTES with this. o.o

[Hard]

Overall - 8/11
Circle size - Normal (same in Insane)
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
I'm kinda surprised to find your Insane diff to be unfinished. I should seriously finish modding it, then. >.<

Anyway, here's what I changed in the Insane diff based on what was done yet. But I'm quite through with the 1/3 part of the map. <3

No star yet. :P

Download: dBu Music - Border of Life (charlesisgay) [Insane Test].osu
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sourcerer

jockeytiyan wrote:

I'm kinda surprised to find your Insane diff to be unfinished.
Finished it :twisted:
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
Oh cool, I'll mod it for you then. Notify me about the other map too, by the way. Thanks. ^^
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al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Hi I have some opinion with your song ^^

First , It is a special problem ~
I think you are the fist time to makeing a map
Because you put MANY CLAP on the note ~
It is a bad thing for the lisening

You can put nothing on the note if it is not mix to the music ~

The Combo problem:

[Insane]
00:10:295 Change to new combo
This dif. is too short

[Hard]
Find

[Easy]
Too short also ~

[All]
You can change the sound of clap and PM me again
I will mod it again ~
The song is too long for the new map maker ~
So you can cut thesong OR make the map longer ~

STAR ~
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan

al2e10 wrote:

Hi I have some opinion with your song ^^

First , It is a special problem ~
I think you are the fist time to makeing a map
Because you put MANY CLAP on the note ~
It is a bad thing for the lisening

You can put nothing on the note if it is not mix to the music ~

The Combo problem:

[Insane]
00:10:295 Change to new combo
This dif. is too short

[Hard]
Find

[Easy]
Too short also ~

[All]
You can change the sound of clap and PM me again
I will mod it again ~
The song is too long for the new map maker ~
So you can cut thesong OR make the map longer ~

STAR ~
This is not his first time. And fix your grammar. :P

Sorry, I'm just sick with seeing people who doesn't use proper grammar. ^^
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