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angela - ANGEL [Osu|Taiko]

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Silver Crow
OMGod I luv this map rank plz >w<~

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Accel World wrote:

nice map 8-)

Silver Crow wrote:

OMGod I luv this map rank plz >w<~

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thanks!
KanaRin
Sorry for late.

Oni

  1. 01:22:721 (483) - how about k ddd k ddd k ddd k ddd k here? much stronger than now, I think it fits the vocal well too.
  2. good structure and fully-done.
Muzukashii

  1. 00:01:200 - hmm, map that part just similar to Oni? (of course you don't need to map the same) sounds odd if we only use d here.
  2. 00:44:895 (167) - Sounds very strong here, how about big kat ?
That's it, they are very nice.
Call me back.
claudio rolna
All good!
SPOILER
The kiai time is the right timing!awesome!
TKS

KanaRin wrote:

Sorry for late.

Oni

  1. 01:22:721 (483) - how about k ddd k ddd k ddd k ddd k here? much stronger than now, I think it fits the vocal well too. - yea. so nice patterns. but that is a little noisy for close part. so i made quiet patterns intentionally. gomen nasai!
  2. good structure and fully-done.
Muzukashii

  1. 00:01:200 - hmm, map that part just similar to Oni? (of course you don't need to map the same) sounds odd if we only use d here. - hai. i want to keep current patterns! T^T
  2. 00:44:895 (167) - Sounds very strong here, how about big kat ? - agree! added.
That's it, they are very nice.
Call me back.
thanks for mod!

i changed only Muzu.
please update. : Link
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated!
Thanks KanaRin and TKS!
KanaRin
Alright.

Taiko'd
Boncho
plz ,anyone rank this :o
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Bonch0 wrote:

plz ,anyone rank this :o
:(
Rakuen
Hi~

( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Try silent slider slide (to decrease noise while sliding)
Use silent slider tick when there's Slider Tick: 2 (or more), use only clap sound when it's needed
^ For example in Hard diff, part like 00:03:156 - with guitar doesn't suit slider tick

[Easy]
00:08:537 - At this point look at (3), it's a bit overlapped with (2), > 00:08:374 (3,2) -
00:17:504 (1) - Place at X:100 Y:264 (left bottom part, see if it suits)
00:32:178 - There should be a clap here, the music has
00:32:830 - ^
00:44:569 - If possible avoid overlap too, between 00:44:080 (1,1) -
00:55:656 - Note here for clap?
01:11:961 (2) - Don't suggest 1.2x jump here, try other pattern >.<
01:15:221 (2) - Ctrl+G and move 01:15:711 (3) - to X:424 Y:300
01:20:113 (1) - Blanket

[Habi's Normal]
00:24:678 (5) - Inconsistency DS
00:26:308 (2) - ^
00:32:830 (4) - ^
00:37:069 (3) - Slightly inconsistency DS, you can either fix or ignore
00:48:156 (3) - Inconsistency DS
00:50:113 (3) - ^
00:52:069 (1) - ^
00:59:243 - Finish
01:13:265 (2) - Slightly inconsistency DS
01:16:526 (3) - Inconsistency DS
01:17:504 (1) - ^ 0.93x is low from 1.0x

DS is important, the mapping are fine, all followed to the rhythm

[Hard]
00:08:537 - There should be a clap here followed by 00:05:928 (4) -
00:20:113 (1) - Ctrl+G may suit the flow better
00:22:395 (1) - Not suggesting to stack this, will be a little hard to read since NC should be at 00:22:721 (2) - (heavy beat + finish)
00:27:939 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:43:591 - Finish
00:59:732 (2) - Stack this with tail of 00:58:265 (1) -
01:18:482 (3) - Blanket this with 01:18:808 (1) -

[Insane]
Approach Rate: -1 (from 9 > 8) , strongly recommended cuz AR9 is too fast
OD: -1
00:13:917 (2) - Maybe this one you don't have to follow DS, it looks squeezed with 00:14:080 (3) -
^ Try move upper if you wanna follow DS
00:17:993 (2) - NC, easier to read, like 00:22:721 (1) -
00:30:384 - If possible avoid overlap with 00:30:384 (1,2) -
00:37:965 (8) - Make this aligned with 00:36:743 (5) -
00:43:428 (7,8,1) - Try moving this to place around X:400 Y:276 , and arrange 00:43:265 (6) - for a little
01:01:770 (4) - Move this to X:242 Y:133 (hold shift and move)
01:20:031 (3) - Arrange this for a little

Hope it helps.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Try silent slider slide (to decrease noise while sliding)
Use silent slider tick when there's Slider Tick: 2 (or more), use only clap sound when it's needed
^ For example in Hard diff, part like 00:03:156 - with guitar doesn't suit slider tick
OK! I'll find silent slider slider file and add!

[Easy]
00:08:537 - At this point look at (3), it's a bit overlapped with (2), > 00:08:374 (3,2) - but it's seem not have problem..think about that!
00:17:504 (1) - Place at X:100 Y:264 (left bottom part, see if it suits) good pattern, changed!
00:32:178 - There should be a clap here, the music has Ok,fixed!
00:32:830 - ^ ^
00:44:569 - If possible avoid overlap too, between 00:44:080 (1,1) - same reason on 00:08:537 mod
00:55:656 - Note here for clap? for easy playing,i made space
01:11:961 (2) - Don't suggest 1.2x jump here, try other pattern >.< That's not have problem too...maybe? :?
01:15:221 (2) - Ctrl+G and move 01:15:711 (3) - to X:424 Y:300 Ctrl G ok,(3)'s mod is no
01:20:113 (1) - Blanket fixed!

[Hard]
00:08:537 - There should be a clap here followed by 00:05:928 (4) - it's little weird pass
00:20:113 (1) - Ctrl+G may suit the flow better ok!
00:22:395 (1) - Not suggesting to stack this, will be a little hard to read since NC should be at 00:22:721 (2) - (heavy beat + finish) hmm..pass.
00:27:939 (1) - Ctrl+G ok!
00:43:591 - Finish ok!
00:59:732 (2) - Stack this with tail of 00:58:265 (1) - ok!
01:18:482 (3) - Blanket this with 01:18:808 (1) - 01:18:808 (1) -

[Insane]
Approach Rate: -1 (from 9 > 8) , strongly recommended cuz AR9 is too fast pass
OD: -1 ok!
00:13:917 (2) - Maybe this one you don't have to follow DS, it looks squeezed with 00:14:080 (3) -
^ Try move upper if you wanna follow DS overlaped on (3)
00:17:993 (2) - NC, easier to read, like 00:22:721 (1) - ok!
00:30:384 - If possible avoid overlap with 00:30:384 (1,2) - pass
00:37:965 (8) - Make this aligned with 00:36:743 (5) - ok!
00:43:428 (7,8,1) - Try moving this to place around X:400 Y:276 , and arrange 00:43:265 (6) - for a little pass
01:01:770 (4) - Move this to X:242 Y:133 (hold shift and move) ok!
01:20:031 (3) - Arrange this for a little ^

Hope it helps.
Thanks!! :D
HabiHolic
all fixed

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66906
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt Habiholic
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑Updated!
HabiHolic
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

:3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/140407#
Please add taiko diff!! ;)
CXu
/late

[General]
  1. Inconsistent preview time in hard. Change it to 66906ms.
  2. I can't find a source for (TV Size) in the title. If you have one, please show me :P If not, remove (TV Size), and add it to tags instead.
[Insane]
  1. OD8? OD7 is fairly easy tbh :P
  2. 00:10:656 (1) - Finish on head? Fits with the symbal sound imo.
  3. 00:12:613 (2) - Whistle on end to follow the same whistlepattern as before.
  4. 00:16:200 (1) - I would try using the regular soft-whistle on the end here. Same with both 00:16:689 (3,4) - start.
  5. 00:28:265 (2) - Ctrl+g? Flow feels better to me as you'll get a circular motion.
  6. 00:24:841 (1,2) - Swap new combo, so your nc comes on the downbeat.
  7. 00:29:080 (1,2) - Same as above.^
  8. 00:33:156 (6,1) - ^
  9. 00:39:352 (2,3,4,5) - Having the note come before the sliders feels a bit better imo, as you'll be hitting on the vocals, instead of having them on the sliderend: http://puu.sh/6p3B0.jpg
  10. 00:42:776 (3,4,5) - You could try this and see if you like it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259882 it's a different flow from what you have now, but eh I think it plays pretty well :P
  11. 01:08:374 (6,1) - Swap NC.
  12. 01:10:738 - Add a note? To follow the "shi".
  13. 01:15:874 (4,1) - The spacing here feels too close, since you get a strong vocal and a strong drum at 01:16:037 - .
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:113 (3) - Shorten to 00:05:602 - , then add a note at 00:05:765 -, since that's a pretty strong beat, and feels weird to not hit.
  2. 00:22:395 (1,2) - Swap NC.
  3. 00:25:819 (3) - This should be at 00:25:656 - , as 00:25:819 - is the silent beat.
  4. 00:29:080 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the rhythm here, especially that long (1) slider, ast it skips a few beats. Try a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/6p4Vf.jpg
  5. 00:44:243 - Are you sure that slidertick hitsound should bere here? Sounds out of place to me.
  6. 00:49:950 (1) - Whistle on end.
  7. 01:06:429 - Unsnapped green line. Messes up your hitsounds, so snap it to 01:06:417 - .
  8. 01:13:917 (3) - This really should be shortened to 01:14:243 - to follow the vocals imo. I guess something like http://puu.sh/6p58K.jpg ?
  9. 01:19:297 (2) - ctrl+g. The spacing here is reaaaaaally big compared to the rest of the map, as well as reaaaally big for a hard :P
[Habi's Normal]
  1. 00:05:765 (1) - Move the 2nd point to 504;256 , the 3rd (red) point to 436;320 and the 4th point to 428;348 , for a slightly better blanket :P
  2. 00:14:895 (3) - Just feels more natural to me if you shorten this to 00:15:221 - , and add a note at 00:15:384 -
  3. 00:39:515 (3,4) - Feels a bit weird. Try following the vocals only? http://puu.sh/6p5Mb.jpg Or if you think that's too hard, you can do it like this: http://puu.sh/6p5MB.jpg
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:961 (1,2) - Swap NC.
  2. 00:29:243 - Feels weird to skip this beat/vocal imo. Add a note?
  3. 01:17:015 (1) - Might want to just shape this regularily, instead of having that slight twitch on the sliderpath, as it could be a bit confusing for new players.
  4. 01:17:830 (1) - Remove NC.
That's all. Poke me when you're done!
HabiHolic
All Fixed

Thanks CXu

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

CXu wrote:

/late

[General]
  1. Inconsistent preview time in hard. Change it to 66906ms. Oh! I didn't see that! Thanks!
  2. I can't find a source for (TV Size) in the title. If you have one, please show me :P If not, remove (TV Size), and add it to tags instead. This song is anime "COPPELION" opening song. so i add 'opening' on tag. is it ok? :?
[Insane]
  1. OD8? OD7 is fairly easy tbh :P ok, fixed!
  2. 00:10:656 (1) - Finish on head? Fits with the symbal sound imo. good. added!
  3. 00:12:613 (2) - Whistle on end to follow the same whistle pattern as before. good,too. added!
  4. 00:16:200 (1) - I would try using the regular soft-whistle on the end here. Same with both 00:16:689 (3,4) - start. fixed! and i added drum on 00:16:526 (2).
  5. 00:28:265 (2) - Ctrl+g? Flow feels better to me as you'll get a circular motion. fixed!
  6. 00:24:841 (1,2) - Swap new combo, so your nc comes on the downbeat. ok!
  7. 00:29:080 (1,2) - Same as above.^ ^
  8. 00:33:156 (6,1) - ^ ^
  9. 00:39:352 (2,3,4,5) - Having the note come before the sliders feels a bit better imo, as you'll be hitting on the vocals, instead of having them on the sliderend: http://puu.sh/6p3B0.jpg fixed!
  10. 00:42:776 (3,4,5) - You could try this and see if you like it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259882 it's a different flow from what you have now, but eh I think it plays pretty well :P not bad, fixed!
  11. 01:08:374 (6,1) - Swap NC.fixed!
  12. 01:10:738 - Add a note? To follow the "shi". hmm...little weird!
  13. 01:15:874 (4,1) - The spacing here feels too close, since you get a strong vocal and a strong drum at 01:16:037 - . changed another style!
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:113 (3) - Shorten to 00:05:602 - , then add a note at 00:05:765 -, since that's a pretty strong beat, and feels weird to not hit. fixed!
  2. 00:22:395 (1,2) - Swap NC. fixed!
  3. 00:25:819 (3) - This should be at 00:25:656 - , as 00:25:819 - is the silent beat. Absolutely,it is the silent beat. but i want to add rhythm on (3). think about that!
  4. 00:29:080 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the rhythm here, especially that long (1) slider, ast it skips a few beats. Try a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/6p4Vf.jpg i'm just follow guitar sound. so shorten (1) slider to 00:29:406
  5. 00:44:243 - Are you sure that slidertick hitsound should bere here? Sounds out of place to me. removed!
  6. 00:49:950 (1) - Whistle on end. ok!
  7. 01:06:429 - Unsnapped green line. Messes up your hitsounds, so snap it to 01:06:417 - . oh,fixed!
  8. 01:13:917 (3) - This really should be shortened to 01:14:243 - to follow the vocals imo. I guess something like http://puu.sh/6p58K.jpg ? fixed!
  9. 01:19:297 (2) - ctrl+g. The spacing here is reaaaaaally big compared to the rest of the map, as well as reaaaally big for a hard :P [/color]
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:961 (1,2) - Swap NC.fixed!
  2. 00:29:243 - Feels weird to skip this beat/vocal imo. Add a note? added! but changed style is ok?
  3. 01:17:015 (1) - Might want to just shape this regularily, instead of having that slight twitch on the sliderpath, as it could be a bit confusing for new players. i thought that it's not have problem.. :? think about that! making little hard is maybe not bad for newbie..
  4. 01:17:830 (1) - Remove NC. fixed!
That's all. Poke me when you're done!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

All Fixed

Thanks CXu

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66906
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt Habiholic
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updated!
CXu
Recheck, no kds.

[General]
  1. About the TV Size thing, it's related to this rule. As I can't find a source for the song with TV Size in the title, you'll either find one for me, or remove it from the title and put it in tags instead :?
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:613 (2) - You added a clap on end instead of whistle :P
  2. 00:42:939 (5) - Add whistles on both start and end on this slider.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:765 (4) - Clap.
  2. 00:25:819 (3,4) - This really feels weird to play though, since you're skipping something, then hitting nothing. You really should fix this.
  3. 00:44:080 (2) - Add a whistle on repeat.
  4. 00:44:895 (1) - Is the clap supposed to be on the sliderstart here?
  5. 01:06:417 (1) - Normal and Hard uses a whistle on start instead of a finish. Change this to whistle as well.
  6. 01:10:982 (4) - Whistle on head.
  7. 01:12:287 (3,1) - Swap NC.
[Habi's Normal]
  1. 00:39:515 (3) - Clap on start, whistle on repeat, and add a whistle on 00:40:493 (4) - .
  2. 01:07:721 (1) - Oh yeah, maybe make this a 1/2 slider? Fits with the 1/2 rhythm at 01:08:374 (2,3,4,5) - , and the vocals are all in 1/2. If you do this, remember to add the clap at 01:08:047 - .
  3. 01:25:330 (1) - Finish on start.
[Easy]
  1. 00:31:852 (1) - Remove the NC?
  2. 00:44:080 (1,2,1,2,3) - Is your hitsounds correct here? The clap at 00:44:895 (2) - and 00:46:200 (2) - sounds out of place.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

CXu wrote:

Recheck, no kds.

[General]
  1. About the TV Size thing, it's related to this rule. As I can't find a source for the song with TV Size in the title, you'll either find one for me, or remove it from the title and put it in tags instead :?
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:613 (2) - You added a clap on end instead of whistle :P
  2. 00:42:939 (5) - Add whistles on both start and end on this slider.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:765 (4) - Clap.
  2. 00:25:819 (3,4) - This really feels weird to play though, since you're skipping something, then hitting nothing. You really should fix this.
  3. 00:44:080 (2) - Add a whistle on repeat.
  4. 00:44:895 (1) - Is the clap supposed to be on the sliderstart here?
  5. 01:06:417 (1) - Normal and Hard uses a whistle on start instead of a finish. Change this to whistle as well.
  6. 01:10:982 (4) - Whistle on head.
  7. 01:12:287 (3,1) - Swap NC.
[Easy]
  1. 00:31:852 (1) - Remove the NC?
  2. 00:44:080 (1,2,1,2,3) - Is your hitsounds correct here? The clap at 00:44:895 (2) - and 00:46:200 (2) - sounds out of place.
all fixed and remove (TV Size) and added TV Size on Tag!
HabiHolic
late sorry

All Fixed

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated!
CXu
[Insane]
01:06:417 (1) - Ops, I meant use whistle here, not in hard :oops:

[Hard]
01:12:287 (1) - Finish

[Easy]
00:44:080 (1) - Are you able to avoid the overlap with 00:45:384 (1) - ?
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

CXu wrote:

[Insane]
01:06:417 (1) - Ops, I meant use whistle here, not in hard :oops:

[Hard]
01:12:287 (1) - Finish

[Easy]
00:44:080 (1) - Are you able to avoid the overlap with 00:45:384 (1) - ?
fixed! thanks for rechecking~ :D
CXu
Blub.
HabiHolic
추 to the 카
Beige

HabiHolic wrote:

추 to the 카
하비누님꺼였으면 버블팝 할거였음 ㅋㅋ
TKS
8-)
Beige
omg... 1 month plz ;_;
HabiHolic
한달 지나도록 뱃이 안오고있서 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
BeatofIke
Pretty weird that Hard difficulty has more stars than Insane. ._.
Natsu

BeatofIke wrote:

Pretty weird that Hard difficulty has more stars than Insane. ._.
always happen with OD8 od8 best! GL on rank :D
BeatofIke
I know, I just find that weird for some reason. Oh well XD
The star system is broken anyways lol. I already looked at your map last night and there are no unrankable issues. Therefore, Enjoy your rank!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
My Comment is....


Thanks :o
BeatofIke
Sorry about that, I edited your post by accident and posted on it (I wanted to quote your post).
So, I had to delete it, sorry about that :<.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

BeatofIke wrote:

Sorry about that, I edited your post by accident and posted on it (I wanted to quote your post).
So, I had to delete it, sorry about that :<.
I don't care about that..anyway, Thank you! <3
TKS
わーい おめでとう

Edit:
Beatmap Graveyard ...
-Neipezi
why graveyard?
BeatofIke
what...just happpened?
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