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Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
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Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt Habiholic
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수정했습니다~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
▲updated! ;)
Shariele
I liked it! It catched the rythm really good I think! :)
I really hope it gets ranked soon! :D
Sonnyc
Easy:

00:06:755 (1) - 1/2 줄여주세요. 그게 피니시와 어울릴듯요
00:14:907 (2) - 이지에서 이전 슬라이더 위를 읽기 어렵게 지나가면 어려울거 같습니다.
00:45:396 (1,2) - 이지 내 간격 변동 비추합니다. 리패턴 추천
01:08:712 (4,5) - (4)에 리버스 넣고 (5) 01:09:690 로 옮기는게 나을듯요

Habi's Normal:

00:40:994 (1) - 끝에 피니시. 클랩 만으로는 많이 부족한 느낌이 듭니다
00:43:603 (1) - crtl+G 2번 눌러서 00:44:907 (2)와 같은 모양을!
00:46:212 (1) - 시작에 피니시
00:48:820 (1) - 끝에 피니시
00:50:777 (4) - ^
01:01:864 (4) - 호흡이 길어지고 있으니 뉴콤 넣어주세요
01:11:646 (2) - 시작이 아니라 끝에 클랩 들어가야 할듯요
01:15:396 (2) - 끝에 피니시
01:19:473 (5) - (4)와 같은 모양으로 만들어주세요. 너무 곡률이 센듯요

Hard:

00:11:483 (2,3) - 점프 좀 이상한거 같은데 이런식은 어떨까요? (2) 슬라이더 2번째 점 (160,100) 마지막 점 (208,164)하고 돌리기 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1083389
00:13:929 (1) - 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:36:918 (1) - 00:36:103 (2)를 더 잘 감싸주세요
01:00:886 (5) - 완벽한 대칭을 바랍니다.

갠적으로 하드에서 만큼은 연타 없는게 나을거 같아요..

Insane:

00:04:146 (2) - (336,244)가 더 부드러울듯요
00:21:755 (3,4) - 음악의 변동 폭이 작아서 여기의 점프는 부담스럽게 느껴집니다. 노트 두개를 다시 배치하는게 나을듯요
00:26:973 (1,2) - (2) 부터 뉴콤을 넣어 주세요. 안그러면 00:27:299 (2)가 좀 헷갈리게 느껴지는거 같습니다.
00:33:413 (2) - 가사랑도 맞게 하기 위해 삭제해주세요. 또 바로 직전에 연타 있어서 없는게 왠지 나을거 같기도.
00:38:059 (1) - 굳이 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:42:951 (1) - ^
00:54:364 (1) - 앞 콤보가 너무 짧은듯 합니다. 뉴콤 삭제~
01:16:049 (1) - 첫 부분이 01:15:559 (2)에 약간 가려져 있는데, 꼬여있어서 플레이에 일단 지장은 없었지만 이상하다는 약간의 느낌.
01:20:614 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제

인센 재밌
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:06:755 (1) - 1/2 줄여주세요. 그게 피니시와 어울릴듯요
00:14:907 (2) - 이지에서 이전 슬라이더 위를 읽기 어렵게 지나가면 어려울거 같습니다.
00:45:396 (1,2) - 이지 내 간격 변동 비추합니다. 리패턴 추천
01:08:712 (4,5) - (4)에 리버스 넣고 (5) 01:09:690 로 옮기는게 나을듯요

Hard:

00:11:483 (2,3) - 점프 좀 이상한거 같은데 이런식은 어떨까요? (2) 슬라이더 2번째 점 (160,100) 마지막 점 (208,164)하고 돌리기 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1083389
00:13:929 (1) - 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:36:918 (1) - 00:36:103 (2)를 더 잘 감싸주세요
01:00:886 (5) - 완벽한 대칭을 바랍니다.

갠적으로 하드에서 만큼은 연타 없는게 나을거 같아요..

Insane:

00:04:146 (2) - (336,244)가 더 부드러울듯요
00:21:755 (3,4) - 음악의 변동 폭이 작아서 여기의 점프는 부담스럽게 느껴집니다. 노트 두개를 다시 배치하는게 나을듯요
00:26:973 (1,2) - (2) 부터 뉴콤을 넣어 주세요. 안그러면 00:27:299 (2)가 좀 헷갈리게 느껴지는거 같습니다.
00:33:413 (2) - 가사랑도 맞게 하기 위해 삭제해주세요. 또 바로 직전에 연타 있어서 없는게 왠지 나을거 같기도.
00:38:059 (1) - 굳이 뉴콤 필요 없을듯요
00:42:951 (1) - ^
00:54:364 (1) - 앞 콤보가 너무 짧은듯 합니다. 뉴콤 삭제~
01:16:049 (1) - 첫 부분이 01:15:559 (2)에 약간 가려져 있는데, 꼬여있어서 플레이에 일단 지장은 없었지만 이상하다는 약간의 느낌.
01:20:614 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제

인센 재밌
:oops: All Fixed!
Damori_old
[Insane]
00:10:668 (1) - move down looks better like this ~ http://puu.sh/5auj6.jpg
00:43:277 (10) - nc
00:59:092 (9) - ^

so perfect ;W;

[Hard]
Looks fine! gj

[Normal]
Also looks fine! Gj Habi!

[Easy]

Same here.. why so good mapper ;_;
Delis
[General]
  1. don't you liked a silent soft-sliderslide ? D:

  2. disable Widescreen Support in the Easy,Normal and Hard diffs. this map doesn't use a SB, probably useless it.
[Easy]
00:08:386 (3) - make a curve, same like 00:06:755 (1) -
00:18:820 (2) - probably forget a whistle on the head
00:25:994 (4) - I think don't need a finish on the tale, feels little noisy
00:48:168 (1) - spacing*-* (nazi)
01:01:864 (1) - how about add a finish on the head, good sounds imo
01:12:299 (2) - spacing

[Habi's Normal]
00:01:864 (4) - add a whistle on the head
00:03:168 (1) - ^
00:08:386 (1) - add a finish on the head, I heard cymbal sound
00:37:081 (3,4,1) - try this, would be better flow.
00:43:603 (1,2,1) - hmm where is finish on the head, is it on purpose ?
00:59:255 (1) - add a finish on the head

[Hard]
00:54:038 (1) - add a finish on the head, are you forget it? I'm not sure =.=
01:01:864 (1) - add a finish on the head, same as Easy and Insane diffs.
01:03:331 (4) - I suggest add a circle, would better following the vocal

[Insane]
00:15:396 (4) - I don't like that place, uuh why didn't make jump here ><, try move to x408 y352, sorry the coordinates is little random place x_x
00:22:081 (1) - NC here, because volume down here from the circle
00:33:005 (5,6,7) - you can make more big jump, I thought don't fit with the song
00:42:299 (5) - NC ?
00:56:157 (2) - CTRL G, I don't like these flow :/
01:10:505 (4) - try to spacing x1.2, would be better jump to 01:10:668 (5) -
01:27:788 (1) - add a clap
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Damori wrote:

[Insane]
00:10:668 (1) - move down looks better like this ~ http://puu.sh/5auj6.jpg fixed!
00:43:277 (10) - nc no
00:59:092 (9) - ^ ^

so perfect ;W;

[Hard]
Looks fine! gj

[Normal]
Also looks fine! Gj Habi!

[Easy]

Same here.. why so good mapper ;_;
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Delis wrote:

[General]
  1. don't you liked a silent soft-sliderslide ? D: hmm..think about that!

  2. disable Widescreen Support in the Easy,Normal and Hard diffs. this map doesn't use a SB, probably useless it.fixed!
[Easy]
00:08:386 (3) - make a curve, same like 00:06:755 (1) - fixed!
00:18:820 (2) - probably forget a whistle on the head fixed!
00:25:994 (4) - I think don't need a finish on the tale, feels little noisy fixed!
00:48:168 (1) - spacing*-* (nazi) hmm..pass!
01:01:864 (1) - how about add a finish on the head, good sounds imo fixed!
01:12:299 (2) - spacing same..pass!

[Hard]
00:54:038 (1) - add a finish on the head, are you forget it? I'm not sure =.= fixed!
01:01:864 (1) - add a finish on the head, same as Easy and Insane diffs. fixed!
01:03:331 (4) - I suggest add a circle, would better following the vocal fixed!

[Insane]
00:15:396 (4) - I don't like that place, uuh why didn't make jump here ><, try move to x408 y352, sorry the coordinates is little random place x_x good! fixed!
00:22:081 (1) - NC here, because volume down here from the circle fixed!
00:33:005 (5,6,7) - you can make more big jump, I thought don't fit with the song fixed!
00:42:299 (5) - NC ? oh lol good! fixed!
00:56:157 (2) - CTRL G, I don't like these flow :/ pass!
01:10:505 (4) - try to spacing x1.2, would be better jump to 01:10:668 (5) -fixed!
01:27:788 (1) - add a clap i feel little strange! pass!
thanks mod! :)
HabiHolic
에고,, 요세 할시간이 없어서 지금 수정했서요~

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑updated!
Accel World
nice map 8-)
Dainesl
Taiko Mod by Tamul's request (ty, i was bored of waiting for someone)

General

00:04:391 - could you remove the group of four inherited points here since it seems pointless to have them here.

01:14:907 - This gets all of my nope. Just remove this point since the music is still like...vibrant. if you know what I mean. Instruments are still emphasized.

Muzukashii

00:22:407 (66) - Make this a don to add consistency to the music.

01:03:168 (254) - this slider doesn't fit imo, put a couple of notes down since the music doesn't really change much here...

Oni

00:17:516 - idk about this part since there's tons of finishers...and tbh it makes them less of a notable event when you see them since they occur like EVERYWHERE. the music isn't really even emphasized much here, so i don't know about this. Stuff like 00:41:320 (213) - is great, try following from that!

00:55:505 (295) - maybe delete this note so that you fit the small break in the music

01:24:853 (497) - ^

ye these are good Taikos :D
TKS

Dainesl wrote:

Taiko Mod by Tamul's request (ty, i was bored of waiting for someone)

General

00:04:391 - could you remove the group of four inherited points here since it seems pointless to have them here. - why pointless?

01:14:907 - This gets all of my nope. Just remove this point since the music is still like...vibrant. if you know what I mean. Instruments are still emphasized. - agree.

Muzukashii

00:22:407 (66) - Make this a don to add consistency to the music. - i dont think so.

01:03:168 (254) - this slider doesn't fit imo, put a couple of notes down since the music doesn't really change much here... - i dont felt problem.

Oni

00:17:516 - idk about this part since there's tons of finishers...and tbh it makes them less of a notable event when you see them since they occur like EVERYWHERE. the music isn't really even emphasized much here, so i don't know about this. Stuff like 00:41:320 (213) - is great, try following from that! - necessary to understand the my mapping-style.

00:55:505 (295) - maybe delete this note so that you fit the small break in the music - i can hear strong bass sound. and i think break here is pointless.

01:24:853 (497) - ^ - nope.

ye these are good Taikos :D
thanks for mod.

update おねがいします!: Link
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑updated!
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested by Tamul via PM :3

MOD
  • [TK'S Muzukashii]
  1. 00:14:092 (35) - delete?
    00:14:255 (36) - if above is done change this to k plays better imo
  2. 00:19:473 (53,54) - k d? plays better like this imo
  3. 00:24:690 (76,77) - ^
  4. 00:28:929 (95,96) - ^
  5. 00:29:744 (99) - delete?
  6. 00:34:146 (121,122) - k d?
  7. 00:34:962 (125) - delete?
  8. 00:38:630 (146,147) - delete (146) and change (147) to k/K plays better like this
    00:41:239 (158,159) - same like above
  9. 00:42:462 (162,163) - change (162) to k and delete (163)
    00:42:951 (164) - if above is done move this to 00:42:788
  10. 00:49:065 (191,192) - delete (191) and change (192) - to d/D plays like previous pattern
    00:51:674 (203,204) - same like above
  11. 00:52:896 (207,208) - change (207) to k and delete (208)
    00:53:386 (209) - if above is done move this to 00:52:223
  12. 01:23:875 (344) - delete?

    [TK'S Oni]
  13. 00:19:473 (85,86) - k d? plays better like this imo
  14. 00:24:690 (110,111) - ^
  15. 00:28:603 (129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - place them like this? plays better with the vocals imo
    00:33:820 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - same pattern as above ^
  16. 00:39:364 (201) - k?
  17. 00:49:799 (262) - ^
  18. 00:58:929 (317) - k? plays better imo
  19. 00:59:989 (324) - move this to 00:59:826 ?
  20. 01:02:598 (341) - move this to 01:02:434 ?
  21. 01:09:771 - add d here .w. too empty for me..
  22. 01:24:364 (493) - d? k here plays abit early for the vocals

That's all from me :3
good luck~
TKS

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by Tamul via PM :3

MOD
  • [TK'S Muzukashii]
  1. 00:14:092 (35) - delete?
    00:14:255 (36) - if above is done change this to k plays better imo - sorry. x xx pattern is a little weird for me ;_;
  2. 00:19:473 (53,54) - k d? plays better like this imo - kept.
  3. 00:24:690 (76,77) - ^
  4. 00:28:929 (95,96) - ^
  5. 00:29:744 (99) - delete? - fixed.
  6. 00:34:146 (121,122) - k d? - nope.
  7. 00:34:962 (125) - delete? - ok!
  8. 00:38:630 (146,147) - delete (146) and change (147) to k/K plays better like this
    00:41:239 (158,159) - same like above
  9. 00:42:462 (162,163) - change (162) to k and delete (163)
    00:42:951 (164) - if above is done move this to 00:42:788
  10. 00:49:065 (191,192) - delete (191) and change (192) - to d/D plays like previous pattern
    00:51:674 (203,204) - same like above - all changed to ddd K.
  11. 00:52:896 (207,208) - change (207) to k and delete (208)
    00:53:386 (209) - if above is done move this to 00:52:223 - awesome these patterns.
  12. 01:23:875 (344) - delete? - ok.

    [TK'S Oni]
  13. 00:19:473 (85,86) - k d? plays better like this imo - current pattern is good for bass sound.
  14. 00:24:690 (110,111) - ^ - ^
  15. 00:28:603 (129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - place them like this? plays better with the vocals imo - its good. but i kept.
    00:33:820 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - same pattern as above ^ - ^
  16. 00:39:364 (201) - k? - good.
  17. 00:49:799 (262) - ^ - ^
  18. 00:58:929 (317) - k? plays better imo - fixed.
  19. 00:59:989 (324) - move this to 00:59:826 ? - so nice sound.
  20. 01:02:598 (341) - move this to 01:02:434 ? - ^
  21. 01:09:771 - add d here .w. too empty for me.. - fixed.
  22. 01:24:364 (493) - d? k here plays abit early for the vocals - thats true.

That's all from me :3
good luck~
mod arigatou!!

おねがいします!: Link
qoot8123
HI~
Here is Taiko mod request via PM


Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. To TaMul : Offset is a bit off, try -12ms
[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:14:092 (35) - move to 00:14:581 - and 00:15:070 (40) - remove as 00:10:994 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) -
  2. 00:14:092 (35) - try to add note?to make this part more fun
  3. 01:12:299 (283) - move to 01:11:483 - and change to k sounds better imo
  4. if you change the above one,please add note on 01:11:646 -

Comment

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 01:06:918 - and 01:07:000 - add k or 01:07:081 (364) - add finish .to stress this 01:06:755 (361) - big kat
  2. 01:10:913 (392) - remove and 01:10:994 (393,394,395,396) - move to 01:11:157 - to reflect 01:12:462 (405,406,407,408,409,410,411) -

That's I can find~
Good map in general~ :)
TKS

qoot8123 wrote:

HI~
Here is Taiko mod request via PM


Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. To TaMul : Offset is a bit off, try -12ms
[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:14:092 (35) - move to 00:14:581 - and 00:15:070 (40) - remove as 00:10:994 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - good flow.
  2. 00:14:092 (35) - try to add note?to make this part more fun - added k
  3. 01:12:299 (283) - move to 01:11:483 - and change to k sounds better imo
  4. if you change the above one,please add note on 01:11:646 - fixed.

Comment

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 01:06:918 - and 01:07:000 - add k or 01:07:081 (364) - add finish .to stress this 01:06:755 (361) - big kat - i kept it. i want to keep that flow.
  2. 01:10:913 (392) - remove and 01:10:994 (393,394,395,396) - move to 01:11:157 - to reflect 01:12:462 (405,406,407,408,409,410,411) - nope. but i changed some notes.

That's I can find~
Good map in general~ :)
mod arigatou~!

update onegai simasu! Link
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑Updated!
thanks!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

qoot8123 wrote:

[General]
  1. To TaMul : Offset is a bit off, try -12ms
Good map in general~ :)
fixed!
Silver Crow
OMGod I luv this map rank plz >w<~

star
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Accel World wrote:

nice map 8-)

Silver Crow wrote:

OMGod I luv this map rank plz >w<~

star
thanks!
KanaRin
Sorry for late.

Oni

  1. 01:22:721 (483) - how about k ddd k ddd k ddd k ddd k here? much stronger than now, I think it fits the vocal well too.
  2. good structure and fully-done.
Muzukashii

  1. 00:01:200 - hmm, map that part just similar to Oni? (of course you don't need to map the same) sounds odd if we only use d here.
  2. 00:44:895 (167) - Sounds very strong here, how about big kat ?
That's it, they are very nice.
Call me back.
claudio rolna
All good!
SPOILER
The kiai time is the right timing!awesome!
TKS

KanaRin wrote:

Sorry for late.

Oni

  1. 01:22:721 (483) - how about k ddd k ddd k ddd k ddd k here? much stronger than now, I think it fits the vocal well too. - yea. so nice patterns. but that is a little noisy for close part. so i made quiet patterns intentionally. gomen nasai!
  2. good structure and fully-done.
Muzukashii

  1. 00:01:200 - hmm, map that part just similar to Oni? (of course you don't need to map the same) sounds odd if we only use d here. - hai. i want to keep current patterns! T^T
  2. 00:44:895 (167) - Sounds very strong here, how about big kat ? - agree! added.
That's it, they are very nice.
Call me back.
thanks for mod!

i changed only Muzu.
please update. : Link
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated!
Thanks KanaRin and TKS!
KanaRin
Alright.

Taiko'd
Boncho
plz ,anyone rank this :o
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Bonch0 wrote:

plz ,anyone rank this :o
:(
Rakuen
Hi~

( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Try silent slider slide (to decrease noise while sliding)
Use silent slider tick when there's Slider Tick: 2 (or more), use only clap sound when it's needed
^ For example in Hard diff, part like 00:03:156 - with guitar doesn't suit slider tick

[Easy]
00:08:537 - At this point look at (3), it's a bit overlapped with (2), > 00:08:374 (3,2) -
00:17:504 (1) - Place at X:100 Y:264 (left bottom part, see if it suits)
00:32:178 - There should be a clap here, the music has
00:32:830 - ^
00:44:569 - If possible avoid overlap too, between 00:44:080 (1,1) -
00:55:656 - Note here for clap?
01:11:961 (2) - Don't suggest 1.2x jump here, try other pattern >.<
01:15:221 (2) - Ctrl+G and move 01:15:711 (3) - to X:424 Y:300
01:20:113 (1) - Blanket

[Habi's Normal]
00:24:678 (5) - Inconsistency DS
00:26:308 (2) - ^
00:32:830 (4) - ^
00:37:069 (3) - Slightly inconsistency DS, you can either fix or ignore
00:48:156 (3) - Inconsistency DS
00:50:113 (3) - ^
00:52:069 (1) - ^
00:59:243 - Finish
01:13:265 (2) - Slightly inconsistency DS
01:16:526 (3) - Inconsistency DS
01:17:504 (1) - ^ 0.93x is low from 1.0x

DS is important, the mapping are fine, all followed to the rhythm

[Hard]
00:08:537 - There should be a clap here followed by 00:05:928 (4) -
00:20:113 (1) - Ctrl+G may suit the flow better
00:22:395 (1) - Not suggesting to stack this, will be a little hard to read since NC should be at 00:22:721 (2) - (heavy beat + finish)
00:27:939 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:43:591 - Finish
00:59:732 (2) - Stack this with tail of 00:58:265 (1) -
01:18:482 (3) - Blanket this with 01:18:808 (1) -

[Insane]
Approach Rate: -1 (from 9 > 8) , strongly recommended cuz AR9 is too fast
OD: -1
00:13:917 (2) - Maybe this one you don't have to follow DS, it looks squeezed with 00:14:080 (3) -
^ Try move upper if you wanna follow DS
00:17:993 (2) - NC, easier to read, like 00:22:721 (1) -
00:30:384 - If possible avoid overlap with 00:30:384 (1,2) -
00:37:965 (8) - Make this aligned with 00:36:743 (5) -
00:43:428 (7,8,1) - Try moving this to place around X:400 Y:276 , and arrange 00:43:265 (6) - for a little
01:01:770 (4) - Move this to X:242 Y:133 (hold shift and move)
01:20:031 (3) - Arrange this for a little

Hope it helps.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Try silent slider slide (to decrease noise while sliding)
Use silent slider tick when there's Slider Tick: 2 (or more), use only clap sound when it's needed
^ For example in Hard diff, part like 00:03:156 - with guitar doesn't suit slider tick
OK! I'll find silent slider slider file and add!

[Easy]
00:08:537 - At this point look at (3), it's a bit overlapped with (2), > 00:08:374 (3,2) - but it's seem not have problem..think about that!
00:17:504 (1) - Place at X:100 Y:264 (left bottom part, see if it suits) good pattern, changed!
00:32:178 - There should be a clap here, the music has Ok,fixed!
00:32:830 - ^ ^
00:44:569 - If possible avoid overlap too, between 00:44:080 (1,1) - same reason on 00:08:537 mod
00:55:656 - Note here for clap? for easy playing,i made space
01:11:961 (2) - Don't suggest 1.2x jump here, try other pattern >.< That's not have problem too...maybe? :?
01:15:221 (2) - Ctrl+G and move 01:15:711 (3) - to X:424 Y:300 Ctrl G ok,(3)'s mod is no
01:20:113 (1) - Blanket fixed!

[Hard]
00:08:537 - There should be a clap here followed by 00:05:928 (4) - it's little weird pass
00:20:113 (1) - Ctrl+G may suit the flow better ok!
00:22:395 (1) - Not suggesting to stack this, will be a little hard to read since NC should be at 00:22:721 (2) - (heavy beat + finish) hmm..pass.
00:27:939 (1) - Ctrl+G ok!
00:43:591 - Finish ok!
00:59:732 (2) - Stack this with tail of 00:58:265 (1) - ok!
01:18:482 (3) - Blanket this with 01:18:808 (1) - 01:18:808 (1) -

[Insane]
Approach Rate: -1 (from 9 > 8) , strongly recommended cuz AR9 is too fast pass
OD: -1 ok!
00:13:917 (2) - Maybe this one you don't have to follow DS, it looks squeezed with 00:14:080 (3) -
^ Try move upper if you wanna follow DS overlaped on (3)
00:17:993 (2) - NC, easier to read, like 00:22:721 (1) - ok!
00:30:384 - If possible avoid overlap with 00:30:384 (1,2) - pass
00:37:965 (8) - Make this aligned with 00:36:743 (5) - ok!
00:43:428 (7,8,1) - Try moving this to place around X:400 Y:276 , and arrange 00:43:265 (6) - for a little pass
01:01:770 (4) - Move this to X:242 Y:133 (hold shift and move) ok!
01:20:031 (3) - Arrange this for a little ^

Hope it helps.
Thanks!! :D
HabiHolic
all fixed

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66906
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23712,74907,78168
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt Habiholic
BeatmapID:318341
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑Updated!
HabiHolic
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

:3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/140407#
Please add taiko diff!! ;)
CXu
/late

[General]
  1. Inconsistent preview time in hard. Change it to 66906ms.
  2. I can't find a source for (TV Size) in the title. If you have one, please show me :P If not, remove (TV Size), and add it to tags instead.
[Insane]
  1. OD8? OD7 is fairly easy tbh :P
  2. 00:10:656 (1) - Finish on head? Fits with the symbal sound imo.
  3. 00:12:613 (2) - Whistle on end to follow the same whistlepattern as before.
  4. 00:16:200 (1) - I would try using the regular soft-whistle on the end here. Same with both 00:16:689 (3,4) - start.
  5. 00:28:265 (2) - Ctrl+g? Flow feels better to me as you'll get a circular motion.
  6. 00:24:841 (1,2) - Swap new combo, so your nc comes on the downbeat.
  7. 00:29:080 (1,2) - Same as above.^
  8. 00:33:156 (6,1) - ^
  9. 00:39:352 (2,3,4,5) - Having the note come before the sliders feels a bit better imo, as you'll be hitting on the vocals, instead of having them on the sliderend: http://puu.sh/6p3B0.jpg
  10. 00:42:776 (3,4,5) - You could try this and see if you like it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259882 it's a different flow from what you have now, but eh I think it plays pretty well :P
  11. 01:08:374 (6,1) - Swap NC.
  12. 01:10:738 - Add a note? To follow the "shi".
  13. 01:15:874 (4,1) - The spacing here feels too close, since you get a strong vocal and a strong drum at 01:16:037 - .
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:113 (3) - Shorten to 00:05:602 - , then add a note at 00:05:765 -, since that's a pretty strong beat, and feels weird to not hit.
  2. 00:22:395 (1,2) - Swap NC.
  3. 00:25:819 (3) - This should be at 00:25:656 - , as 00:25:819 - is the silent beat.
  4. 00:29:080 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the rhythm here, especially that long (1) slider, ast it skips a few beats. Try a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/6p4Vf.jpg
  5. 00:44:243 - Are you sure that slidertick hitsound should bere here? Sounds out of place to me.
  6. 00:49:950 (1) - Whistle on end.
  7. 01:06:429 - Unsnapped green line. Messes up your hitsounds, so snap it to 01:06:417 - .
  8. 01:13:917 (3) - This really should be shortened to 01:14:243 - to follow the vocals imo. I guess something like http://puu.sh/6p58K.jpg ?
  9. 01:19:297 (2) - ctrl+g. The spacing here is reaaaaaally big compared to the rest of the map, as well as reaaaally big for a hard :P
[Habi's Normal]
  1. 00:05:765 (1) - Move the 2nd point to 504;256 , the 3rd (red) point to 436;320 and the 4th point to 428;348 , for a slightly better blanket :P
  2. 00:14:895 (3) - Just feels more natural to me if you shorten this to 00:15:221 - , and add a note at 00:15:384 -
  3. 00:39:515 (3,4) - Feels a bit weird. Try following the vocals only? http://puu.sh/6p5Mb.jpg Or if you think that's too hard, you can do it like this: http://puu.sh/6p5MB.jpg
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:961 (1,2) - Swap NC.
  2. 00:29:243 - Feels weird to skip this beat/vocal imo. Add a note?
  3. 01:17:015 (1) - Might want to just shape this regularily, instead of having that slight twitch on the sliderpath, as it could be a bit confusing for new players.
  4. 01:17:830 (1) - Remove NC.
That's all. Poke me when you're done!
HabiHolic
All Fixed

Thanks CXu

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

CXu wrote:

/late

[General]
  1. Inconsistent preview time in hard. Change it to 66906ms. Oh! I didn't see that! Thanks!
  2. I can't find a source for (TV Size) in the title. If you have one, please show me :P If not, remove (TV Size), and add it to tags instead. This song is anime "COPPELION" opening song. so i add 'opening' on tag. is it ok? :?
[Insane]
  1. OD8? OD7 is fairly easy tbh :P ok, fixed!
  2. 00:10:656 (1) - Finish on head? Fits with the symbal sound imo. good. added!
  3. 00:12:613 (2) - Whistle on end to follow the same whistle pattern as before. good,too. added!
  4. 00:16:200 (1) - I would try using the regular soft-whistle on the end here. Same with both 00:16:689 (3,4) - start. fixed! and i added drum on 00:16:526 (2).
  5. 00:28:265 (2) - Ctrl+g? Flow feels better to me as you'll get a circular motion. fixed!
  6. 00:24:841 (1,2) - Swap new combo, so your nc comes on the downbeat. ok!
  7. 00:29:080 (1,2) - Same as above.^ ^
  8. 00:33:156 (6,1) - ^ ^
  9. 00:39:352 (2,3,4,5) - Having the note come before the sliders feels a bit better imo, as you'll be hitting on the vocals, instead of having them on the sliderend: http://puu.sh/6p3B0.jpg fixed!
  10. 00:42:776 (3,4,5) - You could try this and see if you like it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259882 it's a different flow from what you have now, but eh I think it plays pretty well :P not bad, fixed!
  11. 01:08:374 (6,1) - Swap NC.fixed!
  12. 01:10:738 - Add a note? To follow the "shi". hmm...little weird!
  13. 01:15:874 (4,1) - The spacing here feels too close, since you get a strong vocal and a strong drum at 01:16:037 - . changed another style!
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:113 (3) - Shorten to 00:05:602 - , then add a note at 00:05:765 -, since that's a pretty strong beat, and feels weird to not hit. fixed!
  2. 00:22:395 (1,2) - Swap NC. fixed!
  3. 00:25:819 (3) - This should be at 00:25:656 - , as 00:25:819 - is the silent beat. Absolutely,it is the silent beat. but i want to add rhythm on (3). think about that!
  4. 00:29:080 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the rhythm here, especially that long (1) slider, ast it skips a few beats. Try a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/6p4Vf.jpg i'm just follow guitar sound. so shorten (1) slider to 00:29:406
  5. 00:44:243 - Are you sure that slidertick hitsound should bere here? Sounds out of place to me. removed!
  6. 00:49:950 (1) - Whistle on end. ok!
  7. 01:06:429 - Unsnapped green line. Messes up your hitsounds, so snap it to 01:06:417 - . oh,fixed!
  8. 01:13:917 (3) - This really should be shortened to 01:14:243 - to follow the vocals imo. I guess something like http://puu.sh/6p58K.jpg ? fixed!
  9. 01:19:297 (2) - ctrl+g. The spacing here is reaaaaaally big compared to the rest of the map, as well as reaaaally big for a hard :P [/color]
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:961 (1,2) - Swap NC.fixed!
  2. 00:29:243 - Feels weird to skip this beat/vocal imo. Add a note? added! but changed style is ok?
  3. 01:17:015 (1) - Might want to just shape this regularily, instead of having that slight twitch on the sliderpath, as it could be a bit confusing for new players. i thought that it's not have problem.. :? think about that! making little hard is maybe not bad for newbie..
  4. 01:17:830 (1) - Remove NC. fixed!
That's all. Poke me when you're done!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

All Fixed

Thanks CXu

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66906
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Mode: 0
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Title:ANGEL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ANGEL (TV Size)
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:TaMul
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:COPPELION
Tags:TKSalt Habiholic
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432,116,50765,2,0,P|464:184|448:276,2,165,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,52069,6,0,L|220:168,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,248,52721,2,0,P|80:296|-8:280,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,168,54026,2,0,P|60:116|72:60,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,24,54678,2,0,P|224:44|292:36,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,32,55330,6,0,P|464:104|464:216,1,220
388,292,56308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,292,56634,2,0,P|228:276|172:288,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,252,57287,2,0,L|60:192,1,55
24,156,57613,2,0,L|16:96,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,48,57939,6,0,P|84:72|144:56,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,36,58591,2,0,L|356:36,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,76,59243,6,0,B|432:124|448:180|448:180|512:196|520:268|520:268|496:340|436:368|356:332|364:268,1,440,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,60874,2,0,L|136:276,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,328,61526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,220,61852,6,0,B|16:184|44:124|44:124|108:116|160:152|160:152|168:88|212:56|212:56|268:64|304:92|320:144,1,440,0|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
396,160,63482,2,0,P|452:160|492:120,2,110,4|4|4,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64461,12,4,67069,0:0:0:0:
80,204,67721,6,0,L|60:152,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,312,68374,2,0,P|124:312|168:268,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,69026,2,0,L|256:104,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,280,70004,2,0,P|389:314|443:313,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,70656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,108,70982,6,0,P|292:80|228:120,1,165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,164,71634,2,0,P|160:180|96:160,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,236,72287,6,0,B|20:296|80:312|80:312|148:288|188:352,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,73265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,340,73591,2,0,B|361:286|429:310|429:310|489:294|489:234,1,220
456,136,74569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,64,74895,6,0,P|320:48|264:72,1,110,8|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,75384,2,0,P|188:192|72:176,1,220,4|4,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,344,76526,2,0,P|100:368|160:360,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,77178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,260,77504,6,0,L|452:272,1,110,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,172,78156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,68,78482,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,36,78808,2,0,P|300:68|244:68,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,79461,2,0,P|88:56|40:92,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,196,80113,6,0,B|96:212|128:288|128:288|180:296|208:252,1,220
256,164,81091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,260,81417,2,0,B|335:296|387:288|387:288|419:212|479:196,1,220
464,88,82395,2,0,L|408:80,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,82721,6,0,P|284:36|204:84,2,165,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,140,84026,2,0,P|316:192|308:252,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,308,84678,2,0,L|100:304,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,232,85330,6,0,P|12:164|216:76,1,330,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,86634,2,0,P|464:82|487:233,1,330,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87939,12,0,89406,0:0:0:0:
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