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Horie Yui - True Truly love [Osu|Taiko]

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Title:True Truly love
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Artist:Horie Yui
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Change and Update
Uchiha_sorayuki
Hi there toara~
Here is the mod you requsted~

[Muzukashii]
00:06:555 (13,14,15,16) - make them like 00:11:261 (34,35,36,37) - it is better
00:12:143 (38,39) - the sound is basically the same as 00:07:437 (17,18) - so d d is more fitting
00:13:761 (45) - k here, fit i think
00:25:525 (92,93) - i think this space is a little awkward, fill something like duplets
01:05:967 (76,77) - d d is more fit here
01:19:496 (35) - del and change the pattern all don, make it like 00:07:437 (17,18,19) -
01:23:908 (56) - should be d, not much sound was heard here

[Oni]
00:16:555 (66) - it is better d
00:26:114 (126,127,128) - this triplet is out of place, no fitting, make it usual pattern
00:36:114 (181,182,183) - the triplet should be in 00:35:967 (180) -
00:40:820 (217) - should be k

Yeah, maybe thats all
sorry cant mod the inner oni, cause i cant lol :(
Good luck~
Alternative

ts8zs wrote:

[Alternative]
overmapped
00:06:481 (4) - del Accept
00:11:040 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102077 Accept
00:29:937 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102071 Accept
00:46:481 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102072 Accept
01:00:820 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102074 Accept
01:19:275 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102075 Accept
OK. Done.
Thank you for modding.
http://puu.sh/5kCka.zip
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Uchiha_sorayuki wrote:

Hi there toara~
Here is the mod you requsted~

[Muzukashii]
00:06:555 (13,14,15,16) - make them like 00:11:261 (34,35,36,37) - it is better Fix
00:12:143 (38,39) - the sound is basically the same as 00:07:437 (17,18) - so d d is more fitting Fix
00:13:761 (45) - k here, fit i think Fix
00:25:525 (92,93) - i think this space is a little awkward, fill something like duplets Change pertten
01:05:967 (76,77) - d d is more fit here Fix
01:19:496 (35) - del and change the pattern all don, make it like 00:07:437 (17,18,19) - Fix
01:23:908 (56) - should be d, not much sound was heard here okay.

[Oni]
00:16:555 (66) - it is better d okay.
00:26:114 (126,127,128) - this triplet is out of place, no fitting, make it usual pattern Change pertten
00:36:114 (181,182,183) - the triplet should be in 00:35:967 (180) - ^
00:40:820 (217) - should be k okay.

Yeah, maybe thats all
sorry cant mod the inner oni, cause i cant lol :(
Good luck~
Thanks modding !! Update
bigfrog
Hello~ from my queue,thanks CloudSplash16 did a M4M from me :>

Easy
00:22:584 (5) - move to 132|12?
00:52:584 (3,1) - (3) reserve and (1) end stack better
01:26:702 (6,1) - blanket better may be more neat

Cloud's Normal
00:49:055 (1) - i think this way get better flow :
only one :<

Kinomi's Hard
00:03:467 (2,3) - swap place?
00:40:525 (4,7) - can be stack better,just suggestion
01:07:143 (7,8) - blanket

Ts8zStyle
01:00:231 (3) - reserve better,since i think the time between 01:00:231 (3,1) is too long.
nice difficult!

Alternatice
00:43:320 (2,3) - i think that overlap not look nice :< maybe try other place??
00:56:702 (3) - hmm...i prefer this pattern :
well,maybe just my feeling...i think this difficult used a little too much stream? This song's stream doesn't so much as you think...

that all i can find,it's not a good mod...;_;
anyway...Good Luck!!
Little
Cloud's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True truly love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51378
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Truly love
TitleUnicode:True Truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
BeatmapID:316619
BeatmapSetID:123967

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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Thanks bigfrog!
mingmichael
ts8zs
[Inner]
00:34:643 (1) - Remove why? nope here. it is for additional note there
01:13:761 (1,2,1,2,1) - dkddK nope, i folllowed all the vocal sounds there
01:16:114 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^ ^
[/quote]
thanks for your mods, but sorry nothing change :o

Uchiha_sorayuki
sorry cant mod the inner oni, cause i cant lol :(
Good luck~
yaahhh uchiha =3= nyoba aja ga apa koq wkwkw
Topic Starter
toara_fict

bigfrog wrote:

Hello~ from my queue,thanks CloudSplash16 did a M4M from me :>

Easy
00:22:584 (5) - move to 132|12?
00:52:584 (3,1) - (3) reserve and (1) end stack better
01:26:702 (6,1) - blanket better may be more neat

Change

that all i can find,it's not a good mod...;_;
anyway...Good Luck!!
Thanks :3 Update
ts8zs
Thx for praise
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Fycho
As your request,sorry for my late>_>

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  • Disable widescreen support for all diffs;
    Checking aimod,make all diffs’ preview time and audio-leadin the same(by fixing in code)

[Alternative]

  • 00:05:525 (1) –I suggest you use 1/2 slider with note here and 1/1 slider at00:06:702 - ,it fits the gitar better;
    00:07:878 (1) -^
    00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –This is very overmapped,there is no 1/4 in the music;
    00:09:717 (5) –this is a little overmapped too imo,consider removing it;
    00:24:275 (5) –add a clap,and add clap to00:28:467 (5) –to fit drums in music;
    00:29:055 (1,2,3) –I think 1/2sliders or 1/2 circles fit better than 3/4 sliders;
    00:30:893 (6) –How about this rhythm., http://puu.sh/5nZ7e.jpg,triplet usually starts at red tick,so you can try this instead;
    00:38:761 (2) –add a clap
    00:43:320 (2,3) –avoid this overlapped object,
    01:01:114 (2,4) –stack perfectly?
    01:02:217 (2,3,4,5) –strange pattern.try this? http://puu.sh/5nZph.jpg
KIAI’s hitound is little noisy for me .Clap and hit-normal are just similar.cosider adding another clap and reduce the volume?
On the other hand,a lot of streams are overmapped seriously,maybe you can work on your rhythm more;

[Kinomi's Hard]

  • 00:12:290 (9) –move to(120,352)for better flow and looks more beautiful
    00:21:261 (4) –try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5nZyt.jpg
    00:33:761 (5,6,7) –Use Ctrl+shift+D to make an Equilateral triangle;
    00:33:761 (5) –add nc
    00:35:378 –add a note here,to make your rhythm more solid like you set at 00:37:731 (3) –
    01:21:114 (5,6) –make a better blanket
    01:22:878 (4) –following gitar here is better, http://puu.sh/5nZL6.jpg

[Cloud's Normal]

  • 00:07:584 (4) –since you follow gitar,so I suggest you use this rhythm,http://puu.sh/5nZU0.jpg
    00:10:525 –how about add a circle stacked to 00:10:672 (2) –’s head
    00:12:290 (5) –move to 00:12:143 –to fit music better.-.If you follow both gitar and drums here,it will be very strange and it plays not good imo;
    00:29:937 (4) –missing clap?
    01:04:349 –how about this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5o045.jpg.This can make your rhythm more solid.Too long blank in KIAI feels weird
    01:10:231 (1) –add some hitsound to the spinner?
    01:17:584 –add a circle stacked to01:18:467 (3) –’s head
    01:18:320 –^
    01:19:349 (7) –same as above,move to01:19:202 -?
nice diff;w;

[Easy]

  • 00:06:702 (2) –add clap to slider end like00:06:114 (1) -?
    00:08:467 (4) -^
    00:09:055 (5) -^
    00:26:114 (1) –add nc because it’s after a spinner.
    00:51:996 (2) –remove finish and add finish to 00:50:231 (1) –slider end
    01:06:114 (2) – copy01:07:878 (3) –and rotate by 180°, 01:06:114 (2,3) – it just hurt my eyes>_>
    01:24:349 (4,1) –avoid overlapping.
This diff need more work about hitsound,it’s too paint imo
Good luck
Little
Fycho的modding

Fycho wrote:

As your request,sorry for my late>_>

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  • Disable widescreen support for all diffs;
    Checking aimod,make all diffs’ preview time and audio-leadin the same(by fixing in code)

[Cloud's Normal]

  • 00:07:584 (4) –since you follow gitar,so I suggest you use this rhythm,http://puu.sh/5nZU0.jpg ok, changed.
    00:10:525 –how about add a circle stacked to 00:10:672 (2) –’s head No, it's hard to space well while keeping the direction of the sliders.
    00:12:290 (5) –move to 00:12:143 –to fit music better.-.If you follow both gitar and drums here,it will be very strange and it plays not good imo; ok
    00:29:937 (4) –missing clap? fixed
    01:04:349 –how about this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5o045.jpg.This can make your rhythm more solid.Too long blank in KIAI feels weird ok, changed
    01:10:231 (1) –add some hitsound to the spinner? why? it doesn't seem necessary
    01:17:584 –add a circle stacked to01:18:467 (3) –’s head ok
    01:18:320 –^ ok
    01:19:349 (7) –same as above,move to01:19:202 -? ok
nice diff;w;
Good luck
Thanks Fycho!

Cloud's Normal
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Title:True Truly love
TitleUnicode:True Truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
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Topic Starter
toara_fict

Fycho wrote:

As your request,sorry for my late>_>

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  • Disable widescreen support for all diffs; Change standard diff ;;
    Checking aimod,make all diffs’ preview time and audio-leadin the same(by fixing in code) should check

[Easy]

  • 00:06:702 (2) –add clap to slider end like00:06:114 (1) -?
    00:08:467 (4) -^
    00:09:055 (5) -^ add clap fix , slider end hold
    00:26:114 (1) –add nc because it’s after a spinner. nc :3
    00:51:996 (2) –remove finish and add finish to 00:50:231 (1) –slider end Good!
    01:06:114 (2) – copy01:07:878 (3) –and rotate by 180°, 01:06:114 (2,3) – it just hurt my eyes>_> hmm >_< some change
    01:24:349 (4,1) –avoid overlapping. okay.
This diff need more work about hitsound,it’s too paint imo fmm...
Good luck
Thanks , update :3


and, Ts8zs changed kiai time 00:50:231 - ~ 01:17:290 - plz >.<
KinomiCandy

bigfrog wrote:

Hello~ from my queue,thanks CloudSplash16 did a M4M from me :>

Kinomi's Hard
00:03:467 (2,3) - swap place? Sure.
00:40:525 (4,7) - can be stack better,just suggestion Fixed.
01:07:143 (7,8) - blanket Fixed.

that all i can find,it's not a good mod...;_;
anyway...Good Luck!!

Fycho wrote:

As your request,sorry for my late>_>

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Kinomi's Hard]

  • 00:12:290 (9) –move to(120,352)for better flow and looks more beautiful No thanks.
    00:21:261 (4) –try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5nZyt.jpg Nah, it does fit though.
    00:33:761 (5,6,7) –Use Ctrl+shift+D to make an Equilateral triangle; Fixed.
    00:33:761 (5) –add nc Done.
    00:35:378 –add a note here,to make your rhythm more solid like you set at 00:37:731 (3) – No thanks.
    01:21:114 (5,6) –make a better blanket I hope I did it right.
    01:22:878 (4) –following gitar here is better, http://puu.sh/5nZL6.jpg No thanks.
Good luck
Thanks for modding. http://puu.sh/5oagj.osu
Topic Starter
toara_fict
Update :3
Lust
For cloud's difficulty from my queue

please fix the leadin and preview times.
also take the countdown off of kinomi's hard

[Cloud's Normal]only one minor suggestion, other than that very nice!
  1. 00:26:702 - try a repeat slider here instead of the circles

good luck!
Little
@Lust, I think circles are better there to accent the beats. Repeat slider just wouldn't be enough.

No change.
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Lust wrote:

For cloud's difficulty from my queue

please fix the leadin and preview times.
also take the countdown off of kinomi's hard

change

good luck!
Update :3
-Neipezi
hello~

[Cloud's Normal]
00:19:349 - circle add?

[Kinomi's Hard]
00:12:584 (1,2,3) - this change is required for. this photo
00:35:525 (2) - blanket also really off
01:21:114 (5) - x452 y200 move?
01:31:555 - the sound level is too high. volum 5% add

[Alternative]
00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream is too long.
00:30:893 (6) - clap remove
01:18:172 (3,4) - not wrong notes. circle a change

good lucky toara san
Little
@-Kirito, I don't think a circle is necessary there. It's not an important beat and I prefer to follow vocals here and try not to have too many notes.

@toara, I did some of my own hitsounding fixes in my diff.
Cloud's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True truly love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51408
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:True Truly love
TitleUnicode:True Truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
BeatmapID:316619
BeatmapSetID:123967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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107,281,15967,2,0,L|267:319,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,315,16702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,244,16996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,144,17290,6,0,P|396:101|353:77,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,32,17878,2,0,P|251:80|264:127,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,170,18320,2,0,L|130:208,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,228,19055,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,292,19643,6,0,P|286:293|328:318,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,291,20231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
473,204,20525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,134,20820,2,0,L|309:171,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,109,21408,2,0,L|338:65,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,171,21996,6,0,P|307:221|241:291,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,290,22584,2,0,L|153:197,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,185,23172,2,0,L|98:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,23761,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,368,24055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,297,24349,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,84,25231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,84,25525,6,0,P|135:98|183:88,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,71,25967,2,0,P|276:60|323:75,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,26408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,196,26702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,244,26996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,296,27290,1,2,0:0:0:0:
251,154,27878,6,0,P|212:124|163:116,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,205,28467,2,0,P|158:234|207:242,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,29055,1,2,0:0:0:0:
85,42,29937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
174,87,30231,6,0,L|289:71,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,58,30820,2,0,P|358:105|368:153,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,198,31261,2,0,P|396:246|381:293,1,100
356,338,31702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,280,31996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,338,32290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,239,32584,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,52,33172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,82,33761,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,160,34055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,174,34349,2,0,P|357:222|342:269,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,348,34937,6,0,P|236:324|187:327,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,35525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
67,249,35820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,178,36114,2,0,P|163:220|207:242,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,209,36702,2,0,P|275:167|231:145,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,242,37290,6,0,P|252:298|376:276,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,187,38172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,117,38467,2,0,P|300:159|300:209,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,187,39349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
367,282,39643,6,0,L|260:327,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,249,40231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,319,40525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
61,248,40820,2,0,P|35:206|35:156,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,87,41408,2,0,P|133:129|133:179,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,248,41996,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,292,42584,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,92,43172,1,4,0:0:0:0:
451,136,43761,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,312,44349,6,0,L|144:272,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,72,45525,2,0,L|368:112,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46702,12,8,48467,0:0:0:0:
136,104,49055,6,0,P|96:192|144:288,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,332,50231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,262,50525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,192,50820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,121,51114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,50,51408,6,0,P|243:90|147:42,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,121,52290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,121,52437,2,0,P|104:176|72:272,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,331,53172,2,0,L|255:307,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,308,53761,6,0,P|336:260|349:213,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,170,54202,2,0,L|215:132,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,54937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,182,55231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
131,252,55525,2,0,P|179:240|226:253,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,304,56114,6,0,L|336:200,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,56996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,64,57290,2,0,P|206:111|196:159,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,204,57731,2,0,P|168:252|183:299,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,344,58172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,344,58467,6,0,P|363:298|341:173,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,249,59349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,178,59643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
134,248,59937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
63,177,60231,2,0,L|23:137,2,50,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,248,60820,6,0,L|173:156,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,143,61408,2,0,L|226:250,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,222,61996,2,0,L|370:130,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,59,62584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,59,62878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,129,63172,6,0,P|142:176|132:224,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,274,63614,2,0,L|24:295,2,100,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,261,64349,2,0,P|213:238|240:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,107,64937,2,0,P|322:140|370:151,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,128,65525,6,0,L|440:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,324,66114,2,0,L|482:364,2,50,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,275,66702,2,0,P|308:261|260:271,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,288,67143,2,0,P|167:299|120:284,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,259,67584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
75,159,67878,6,0,L|216:88,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,141,68761,2,0,L|209:212,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,259,69643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
75,259,69937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70231,12,0,71996,0:0:0:0:
295,214,72584,5,4,0:0:0:0:
102,163,73172,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,301,73761,2,0,P|291:314|339:302,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,163,74937,5,4,0:0:0:0:
295,214,75525,1,4,0:0:0:0:
152,76,76114,2,0,P|104:62|56:74,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,214,77290,5,4,0:0:0:0:
205,257,77584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,257,77731,2,0,P|161:280|112:279,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,191,78320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,191,78467,2,0,P|104:167|153:168,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,175,78908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,214,79202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,258,79643,6,0,P|449:210|436:162,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,115,80084,2,0,P|403:67|416:19,2,100,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,155,80820,2,0,L|272:191,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,190,81261,2,0,P|252:142|239:94,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,155,81996,5,2,0:0:0:0:
241,191,82437,2,0,P|238:240|263:284,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,246,83172,2,0,P|411:196|386:154,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,115,83614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,68,83908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84349,12,0,86114,0:0:0:0:
324,100,86702,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,148,86996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,245,87290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
383,331,87584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,279,87878,2,0,L|198:304,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,213,88467,2,0,L|270:187,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89055,12,0,91408,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
toara_fict
Thanks -kirito~ :3

@CloudSplash16 : okay. Update :3

@KinomiCandy : Update :3
KinomiCandy

-Kirito wrote:

hello~

[Kinomi's Hard]
00:12:584 (1,2,3) - this change is required for. this photo Really? I'll just let it stay it for now.
00:35:525 (2) - blanket also really off Fixed.
01:21:114 (5) - x452 y200 move? Okay.
01:31:555 - the sound level is too high. volum 5% add Okay.

good lucky toara san
Thanks. http://puu.sh/5uc5A.osu
Suimya
sorry for late ></


Easy:
  1. 00:10:820 (2) - how about sticking this note on 00:08:467 (4) - to get ride of the overlapping o.o
  2. 00:11:408 (3) - and move this slider few grids down so it won't over lap with 00:09:055 (5) -
  3. 00:12:584 (1,1) - the note after the spinner, is way to soon how about removing the spinner and making a slider instead starts from 00:12:584 and ends at 00:14:937 i suggest you doing that, cus atm the note after the spinner is way to soon ><
  4. 00:18:467 (5) - i hear whistle on the end of this slider in the music, so i suggest you to add whistle on slider's end
  5. 00:19:643 (1) - remove whistle and add finish instead since it'll be the best here imo
  6. 00:24:349 (1) - same as i said here 00:12:584 (1,1) -

Cloud's Normal:
  1. 00:07:878 (1) - no need to add whistle on the head and it fits better with finish instead imo, i can hear stronger sound then whistle
  2. 00:10:231 (1) - ^
  3. 01:19:643 (1) - ^
  4. 01:21:996 (1) - ^
pro normal diff o3o


Kinomi's Hard:
  1. 00:03:172 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the placement of these notes are how about moving 00:03:172 (1,3) - to x:192 y:188 and 00:03:467 (2,4) - to x:316 y:188 it'll be better placement imo
  2. 00:05:820 (1) - how about sticking this note on 00:05:967 (2) - it'll play better and it'll be fun too owo
  3. 00:11:261 (5,6) - how about sticking these notes on 00:09:937 (3) - instead of making overlapping o.o
  4. 00:26:996 (4,5) - the (5) is a bit too close so i suggest you to move it a bit grids right and down so they won't be so close
  5. 00:41:408 (6) - umm i suggest you sticking this note on 00:39:937 (3) - so they won't overlap
  6. 00:46:702 (1) - move this slider 1 grids down, so the slider's end will stick on 00:45:525 (3) -

Ts8zStyle:
remove the widescreen support on this diff pls
Something i don't understand, about this diff...i don't really get the slow downs on 00:05:967 (1) - and so on..i don't think it fits with music and btw is using that many sv changes really rankable? honestly this style is kinda bad and and making slow downs where they don't fit with music and e.g to it, but other then that the diff is kinda nice imo


Alternative:
Good diff so far o3o



That's all i found good luck~
KinomiCandy

Sekai-nyan wrote:

sorry for late ></

Kinomi's Hard:
  1. 00:03:172 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the placement of these notes are how about moving 00:03:172 (1,3) - to x:192 y:188 and 00:03:467 (2,4) - to x:316 y:188 it'll be better placement imo Fixed.
  2. 00:05:820 (1) - how about sticking this note on 00:05:967 (2) - it'll play better and it'll be fun too owo I guess I'll add it for now.
  3. 00:11:261 (5,6) - how about sticking these notes on 00:09:937 (3) - instead of making overlapping o.o Nah, I don't like that.
  4. 00:26:996 (4,5) - the (5) is a bit too close so i suggest you to move it a bit grids right and down so they won't be so close Fixed.
  5. 00:41:408 (6) - umm i suggest you sticking this note on 00:39:937 (3) - so they won't overlap Fixed.
  6. 00:46:702 (1) - move this slider 1 grids down, so the slider's end will stick on 00:45:525 (3) - Fixed.
That's all i found good luck~
Thank you nyan~ http://puu.sh/5uERz.osu
Topic Starter
toara_fict

Sekai-nyan wrote:

sorry for late ></


Easy:
  1. 00:10:820 (2) - how about sticking this note on 00:08:467 (4) - to get ride of the overlapping o.o o.o
  2. 00:11:408 (3) - and move this slider few grids down so it won't over lap with 00:09:055 (5) - change
  3. 00:12:584 (1,1) - the note after the spinner, is way to soon how about removing the spinner and making a slider instead starts from 00:12:584 and ends at 00:14:937 i suggest you doing that, cus atm the note after the spinner is way to soon >< Change~ ><
  4. 00:18:467 (5) - i hear whistle on the end of this slider in the music, so i suggest you to add whistle on slider's end good!
  5. 00:19:643 (1) - remove whistle and add finish instead since it'll be the best here imo okay.
  6. 00:24:349 (1) - same as i said here 00:12:584 (1,1) -
Thanks ! All change :3
@Kinomi's Hard Update~ :3
hibarirailwayz
via my PM

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:231 (7,8) - remove.と、00:04:349 (6) - を00:05:231 - まで延長。
    理由としては、00:05:525 - から明らかにヴァイオリンと、ドラムの音取に入っていて、remove部分とは音が違うという点。そこから、音取が変わるところでノートをバシッと決めたほうが良いかと思ったという点からです。現状でもなんら問題ないですが。
  2. 00:05:525 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ここのパートは全体的に良くない気がします(主観)。remap推奨。ほとんど改善点になってしまいますので。
    問題点としては、ドラムで音をとっているのか、バイオリンで音をとっているのかはっきりしていない。勘違いしないで頂きたいのは、両方とも取ることは決して悪いことではありません。ただ、両方取るなら、一定のパターンが必要だということです。例えば・・・
    ここではドラム 00:10:231 (27,28,29,30) - ここではバイオリン。 プレイしている限りでは音の強弱は分からないのでどちらかに統一するべきということですね。
    逆に指摘のパート後の00:12:584 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - は、とてもいいリズムです!明瞭簡潔分かりやすい。全後半でリズムも同じでいい感じです!
  3. 00:29:937 - d d と続いてるところからドラムの音取と認識してます。とすれば、dを入れたほうが自然な流れですし、testプレイしながら気になったのですが、この辺に休憩が無いので、ほかの場所で抜けるノーツが無ければ現状維持がよさそうです。
  4. 00:57:584 (41) - を00:57:437 - に移動させて、dに変更。前後で、シンセサイザーの音をとっているので、ここで突然ドラムが入るのは若干違和感があります。「だだん だ~ん」って感じです^^
  5. 01:05:820 - d追加。もし声で取るのであれば、01:06:261 - からなのですが間が空きすぎます。ドラムで取るのであれば指摘したとおりなのですが、01:05:967 - から始まる音に関しては、音自体が非常に小さく、前後の音取から察してもとても不明瞭な気がします。
  6. 多々着心地良かったです><
[Oni]
  1. 00:13:320 (50) - drumラインから聞くとdのほうがしっくりくるように感じます。理由としては00:13:025 (49) - がドラムのラインを取っているように聞えるからです。さらに詳細は以下
    00:12:584 (47,48) - この二つの音ですが、私の認識する限りでは、前者でバイオリンの高い音をフォローしkを採用しており、後者で、ドラムラインに持っていっているように感じます。そして、00:12:878 - の音が00:13:320 - のドラムの音より高いのに低いほうにkが採用されているのに違和感を覚えるとともに、
    そもそも、00:13:320 (50,51,52,53) - はdrumを追えばdkkdが自然だと考えるからです。
  2. 00:29:937 (149) - k. 00:29:055 (146,147,148,149) - このリズムは明らかにドラムを取っており、146番以外はすべて同じ高さの音となっています。なので、つなぎのことも考えているのでしょうが、ここでドラムラインから突然外れるのには違和感があります。
  3. 01:22:290 (61) - d. 01:22:290 (61) - と比べると明らかに音が低く、また後半がわ<01:22:290 (61) - ここから始まる繰り返しパートと比べて>では、明らかにバイオリンを取っているため、前半パートの同じ部分でkを使用しているものの条件が違うことに留意していただきたいです。
  4. 楽しくていい譜面だと思います!初見FCでした☆
[m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:00:820 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kdkdkd...is little boring. Please make this part more exciting!
  2. 00:57:143 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - change "d kkk d k"? here is the strong Synthesizer sound and your beat is not fit.
  3. downward is completely my suggestion.
  4. 01:14:496 (2,3,1,1,1) - "ddk d D"→"ddkkkkD" if you hate order "kD", you should skip this suggestion.
  5. 01:16:849 (1,2,3,1,1) - "kkkkkkD" ^
  6. 01:25:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - "kkkkddddkkddkdk"→"kdddkkddkdddkdk" it's better for inner diff and match the sound, IMO.
  7. nice map XD
駄文長文失礼しました!では
Good luck!
Topic Starter
toara_fict

hibarirailwayz wrote:

via my PM

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:05:231 (7,8) - remove.と、00:04:349 (6) - を00:05:231 - まで延長。 okay.
    理由としては、00:05:525 - から明らかにヴァイオリンと、ドラムの音取に入っていて、remove部分とは音が違うという点。そこから、音取が変わるところでノートをバシッと決めたほうが良いかと思ったという点からです。現状でもなんら問題ないですが。
  2. 00:05:525 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ここのパートは全体的に良くない気がします(主観)。remap推奨。ほとんど改善点になってしまいますので。
    問題点としては、ドラムで音をとっているのか、バイオリンで音をとっているのかはっきりしていない。勘違いしないで頂きたいのは、両方とも取ることは決して悪いことではありません。ただ、両方取るなら、一定のパターンが必要だということです。例えば・・・
    ここではドラム 00:10:231 (27,28,29,30) - ここではバイオリン。 プレイしている限りでは音の強弱は分からないのでどちらかに統一するべきということですね。
    逆に指摘のパート後の00:12:584 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - は、とてもいいリズムです!明瞭簡潔分かりやすい。全後半でリズムも同じでいい感じです! 前半を主にChangeしました!
  3. 00:29:937 - d d と続いてるところからドラムの音取と認識してます。とすれば、dを入れたほうが自然な流れですし、testプレイしながら気になったのですが、この辺に休憩が無いので、ほかの場所で抜けるノーツが無ければ現状維持がよさそうです。okay. 00:29:349 (107) - => 00:29:937 (108) -
  4. 00:57:584 (41) - を00:57:437 - に移動させて、dに変更。前後で、シンセサイザーの音をとっているので、ここで突然ドラムが入るのは若干違和感があります。「だだん だ~ん」って感じです^^ 保留で・・・
  5. 01:05:820 - d追加。もし声で取るのであれば、01:06:261 - からなのですが間が空きすぎます。ドラムで取るのであれば指摘したとおりなのですが、01:05:967 - から始まる音に関しては、音自体が非常に小さく、前後の音取から察してもとても不明瞭な気がします。 前後修正しました!
  6. 多々着心地良かったです><
[Oni]
  1. 00:13:320 (50) - drumラインから聞くとdのほうがしっくりくるように感じます。理由としては00:13:025 (49) - がドラムのラインを取っているように聞えるからです。さらに詳細は以下
    00:12:584 (47,48) - この二つの音ですが、私の認識する限りでは、前者でバイオリンの高い音をフォローしkを採用しており、後者で、ドラムラインに持っていっているように感じます。そして、00:12:878 - の音が00:13:320 - のドラムの音より高いのに低いほうにkが採用されているのに違和感を覚えるとともに、
    そもそも、00:13:320 (50,51,52,53) - はdrumを追えばdkkdが自然だと考えるからです。
  2. 00:29:937 (149) - k. 00:29:055 (146,147,148,149) - このリズムは明らかにドラムを取っており、146番以外はすべて同じ高さの音となっています。なので、つなぎのことも考えているのでしょうが、ここでドラムラインから突然外れるのには違和感があります。
  3. 01:22:290 (61) - d. 01:22:290 (61) - と比べると明らかに音が低く、また後半がわ<01:22:290 (61) - ここから始まる繰り返しパートと比べて>では、明らかにバイオリンを取っているため、前半パートの同じ部分でkを使用しているものの条件が違うことに留意していただきたいです。
  4. 楽しくていい譜面だと思います!初見FCでした☆
Oni All fix ( Some change pertten )

駄文長文失礼しました!では
Good luck!
Thanks! ありがとうございます!!!
Evening
Mod Request by PM :3

Ts8zStyle has the wrong Artist Name!!!, use 堀江由衣 instead.

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Big kat
Italic = Optional

Offset

+15 (835)



BPM

No Problems!

m1ng's Inner Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:14:937 (3) - d > k - Vocal "で"
00:34:642 (1) - K > k - The music is not loud enough to have a "K", this part also doesn't have the vocals
00:36:849 + d - Feels empty here :\
00:46:555 (2) - k > d - 00:46:701 (1) - D > K - The Vocal "く" should lies on 00:46:701 (1) so it should have a higher pitched emphasis
00:47:437 + d - I hear a soft drum from the music here
00:48:908 + d - Same for here
00:57:731 (1) - D > K - The violin is quite high pitched, consider changing to big kat
01:14:717 + d - I hear a soft drum from the music here
01:14:864 + d Unrankable :c
01:16:775 + d - I hear a soft drum from the music here
01:17:070 + d - Same here

01:17:217 + d Unrankable

Kiai Time Check

Kiai Time conflicts with toara's Kiai Time, I suggest you follow toara's kiai time, since I think that kiai time is more suitable.

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Ranking Criteria Check

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AiMod

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Title Check

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Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:18:908 (80,81) - Swap them - The piano is higher pitched
00:24:349 (115) - d > D - There is a loud kick or snare here, I suggest using a big don
00:29:937 (149) - k > d - No need for kat here, the pitch is quite low
00:33:761 (168,169) - D > K - Just to add some variety
00:41:702 + d - There is a soft drum here
00:55:820 + d - Feels empty here
01:27:878 (104,108) - d > k - Needs more emphasis
01:29:055 (1) - Move spinner back by 1/4 and shrink by 1/4 - Then add K at 01:29:055

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Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:19:349 + d - Soft drum here
00:29:055 (106) - Move to 00:28:908
00:57:290 (40,42) - D > d - I don't recommend big don to be put next to kat in 1/2 in Muzukashii difficulties, it's very hard for Muzu players to hit them :c
01:28:908 + k
01:29:055 (1) - Move spinner back by 1/4 and shrink by 1/4 - Then add K at 01:29:055

Kiai Time Check

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General

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AiMod

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Title Check

No Problems! - Quite hard for muzu players at this high BPM though :\

Good luck Mapping!
Little
Fixed all from Sekai-nyan's mod.
Cloud's Normal
osu file format v12

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ts8zs

lZenxl wrote:

Mod Request by PM :3



Offset

+15 (835)
no,I think it should be -8(812)

Good luck Mapping!
ts8zs

Sekai-nyan wrote:

sorry for late ></

Ts8zStyle:
remove the widescreen support on this diff pls Why
Something i don't understand, about this diff...i don't really get the slow downs on 00:05:967 (1) - and so on..i don't think it fits with music and btw is using that many sv changes really rankable? honestly this style is kinda bad and and making slow downs where they don't fit with music and e.g to it, but other then that the diff is kinda nice imo
Slow to show the heavy beats www
And that is why I use STR 2&NC at slowslider&a anti-jump before slowslider
This is rankable but this is hard to rank..
That's all i found good luck~
update
osu file format v12

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Title:True Truly love
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Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
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Version:Ts8zStyle
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Alternative

bigfrog wrote:

Hello~ from my queue,thanks CloudSplash16 did a M4M from me :>


Alternatice
00:43:320 (2,3) - i think that overlap not look nice :< maybe try other place?? Changed
00:56:702 (3) - hmm...i prefer this pattern :
 Changed
well,maybe just my feeling...i think this difficult used a little too much stream? This song's stream doesn't so much as you think...
Yes, I know you said.But I put these intentionally.
that all i can find,it's not a good mod...;_;
anyway...Good Luck!!
Thanks for mod.
Sorry for late.
Alternative

Fycho wrote:

As your request,sorry for my late>_>

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix


[Alternative]

  • 00:05:525 (1) –I suggest you use 1/2 slider with note here and 1/1 slider at00:06:702 - ,it fits the gitar better; Denied 
    00:07:878 (1) -^Denied. Because these are fitted the drum
    00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –This is very overmapped,there is no 1/4 in the music; Sorry. I denied.
    00:09:717 (5) –this is a little overmapped too imo,consider removing it; Sorry. I denied.
    00:24:275 (5) –add a clap,and add clap to00:28:467 (5) –to fit drums in music; Accept
    00:29:055 (1,2,3) –I think 1/2sliders or 1/2 circles fit better than 3/4 sliders; Sorry. I denied.
    00:30:893 (6) –How about this rhythm., http://puu.sh/5nZ7e.jpg,triplet usually starts at red tick,so you can try this instead;  I accepted
    00:38:761 (2) –add a clap Fixed
    00:43:320 (2,3) –avoid this overlapped object, Fixed
    01:01:114 (2,4) –stack perfectly? Fixed
    01:02:217 (2,3,4,5) –strange pattern.try this? http://puu.sh/5nZph.jpg Accept
KIAI’s hitound is little noisy for me .Clap and hit-normal are just similar.cosider adding another clap and reduce the volume?
On the other hand,a lot of streams are overmapped seriously,maybe you can work on your rhythm more;

Good luck
Thanks for modding.
I dont wanna change stream.
Alternative

-Kirito wrote:

hello~


[Alternative]
00:12:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream is too long. Denied
00:30:893 (6) - clap remove Fixed
01:18:172 (3,4) - not wrong notes. circle a change Denied

good lucky toara san
Thanks for modding.

http://puu.sh/5wjaV.osu

譜面は右クリ保存で、保存してくださいな
Topic Starter
toara_fict

lZenxl wrote:

Mod Request by PM :3

Ts8zStyle has the wrong Artist Name!!!, use 堀江由衣 instead.

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Big kat
Italic = Optional

Offset

+15 (835) look closely Thanks :3



BPM

No Problems!

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:18:908 (80,81) - Swap them - The piano is higher pitched okay.
00:24:349 (115) - d > D - There is a loud kick or snare here, I suggest using a big don nope
00:29:937 (149) - k > d - No need for kat here, the pitch is quite low no change
00:33:761 (168,169) - D > K - Just to add some variety hmm... no change ><
00:41:702 + d - There is a soft drum here okay. add
00:55:820 + d - Feels empty here hmm...
01:27:878 (104,108) - d > k - Needs more emphasis no change
01:29:055 (1) - Move spinner back by 1/4 and shrink by 1/4 - Then add K at 01:29:055 it was so before

Kiai Time Check

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problem!

AiMod

No Problems!

Title Check

No Problems!

Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:19:349 + d - Soft drum here
00:29:055 (106) - Move to 00:28:908 I reconsider the pattern
00:57:290 (40,42) - D > d - I don't recommend big don to be put next to kat in 1/2 in Muzukashii difficulties, it's very hard for Muzu players to hit them :c
01:28:908 + k
01:29:055 (1) - Move spinner back by 1/4 and shrink by 1/4 - Then add K at 01:29:055

Sorry,all nope ;w;

Kiai Time Check

No Problems!

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems!

AiMod

No Problems!

Title Check

No Problems! - Quite hard for muzu players at this high BPM though :\

Good luck Mapping!
Thanks >u<!


All Update~
mingmichael
hibarirailwayz
via my PM

[m1ng's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:00:820 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kdkdkd...is little boring. Please make this part more exciting! basicly it follows the instrument sounds as well. no change
  2. 00:57:143 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - change "d kkk d k"? here is the strong Synthesizer sound and your beat is not fit. change 00:57:290 (1,2,1) - to be ddk only
  3. downward is completely my suggestion.
  4. 01:14:496 (2,3,1,1,1) - "ddk d D"→"ddkkkkD" if you hate order "kD", you should skip this suggestion. i never want use dK or kD in any taiko maps :P changed to be ddkkk. much better too. thanks~
  5. 01:16:849 (1,2,3,1,1) - "kkkkkkD" ^ no change at here. you can hear it carefully again. they aren't same like 01:14:496 (2,3,1,2,1) - . at 01:16:702 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - don't have any drum hits like 01:14:496 (2,3,1,2,1) - , just a piano sounds at 01:16:849 (1,2,3) - (it should use 1/6notes, but i don't want it. too fast with 200BPM)
  6. 01:25:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - "kkkkddddkkddkdk"→"kdddkkddkdddkdk" it's better for inner diff and match the sound, IMO. tu it and better :3 changed
  7. nice map XD thanks ;3
駄文長文失礼しました!
Good luck

lZenxl
Mod Request by PM :3
[m1ng's Inner Oni]
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:14:937 (3) - d > k - Vocal "で" hear the pitch sound carefully please. it's low
00:34:642 (1) - K > k - The music is not loud enough to have a "K", this part also doesn't have the vocals no change, to keep the consistency like 00:33:761 (1,1,1) - which i used finishers too
00:36:849 + d - Feels empty here :\ keep mine. just make a same break like 00:41:407 (1,1) - . just want to make them consistent again
00:46:555 (2) - k > d nope nope, string sound is still high there
- 00:46:701 (1) - D > K - The Vocal "く" should lies on 00:46:701 (1) so it should have a higher pitched emphasis disagree here. still keep mine
00:47:437 + d - I hear a soft drum from the music here
00:48:908 + d - Same for here nope both of them. it's still on the calm part, why i should add many notes too?
00:57:731 (1) - D > K - The violin is quite high pitched, consider changing to big kat nope nope
01:14:717 + d - I hear a soft drum from the music here use hibarirailwayz's mod
01:14:864 + d Unrankable :c who said it unrankable? lol
01:16:775 + d - I hear a soft drum from the music here [color=#8000FF]nope nope, there's not any drums. just piano sounds there. totally different like 01:14:496 (2,3,1,2,1) -
01:17:070 + d - Same here[/color] ^
01:17:217 + d Unrankable ^

Kiai Time Check

Kiai Time conflicts with toara's Kiai Time, I suggest you follow toara's kiai time, since I think that kiai time is more suitable. nope, i keep mine there

thanks for the mods :3
here's mine~
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: True truly love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51408
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32

[Metadata]
Title:True Truly love
TitleUnicode:True Truly love
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:toara_fict
Version:m1ng's Inner Oni
Source:DIVINA Online
Tags:KinomiCandy CloudSplash16 Alternative mingmichael ts8zs
BeatmapID:319028
BeatmapSetID:123967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,120
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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51408,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
70231,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0


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192,96,59496,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,59643,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,59937,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60231,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60378,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,60599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,60746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60820,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,60967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61114,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,61187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61261,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,61334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61555,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61702,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,61775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,61996,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,62143,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,62217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,62290,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,62364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,62437,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,62584,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,62731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,62878,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,62952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,63099,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63172,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63467,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,63540,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63614,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63761,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,63908,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,63981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64055,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64202,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,64275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,64422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64643,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64790,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,64937,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,65011,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,65084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,65158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,65231,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,65378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,65525,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,65820,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,65967,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,66187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,66334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66408,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,66922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,66996,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,67143,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,67290,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,67364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,67437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,67584,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,67658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,67731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,67878,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,68320,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,68761,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,69202,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,69643,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,69937,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,70231,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,71996,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,72584,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,73025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,73172,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,73761,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,73908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74055,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,74570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74643,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,74717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74790,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,74937,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,75378,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,75525,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76114,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76408,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76849,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,76922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,77143,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,77290,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,96,77584,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,77731,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,77805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,77878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78025,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,78246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78320,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,78393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78467,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78614,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78761,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,78834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,78908,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,78981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79349,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79496,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,79570,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79643,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,79717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,79937,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,80084,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,80378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,80525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,80672,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,80746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,80820,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,80967,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81114,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,81187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81261,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,81628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81702,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,81996,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,82143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,82217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,82290,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,82364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,82437,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,82584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,82731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,82878,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,82952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,83099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83320,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83467,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,83540,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,83908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,83981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84055,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84202,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84349,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,84422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,84569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84643,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,84716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,84863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84937,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85084,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85231,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85820,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,85893,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,85967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,86040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,86114,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,86187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,86261,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,86334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,86408,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,86481,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,86555,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,86702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,86996,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,87290,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,87584,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,87878,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88172,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88320,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,88540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88761,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,96,88834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,88908,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,89055,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89202,12,0,91408,0:0:0:0:

* EDIT :
please change my offset and resnap it too, toara :? thankss~ www
Topic Starter
toara_fict
* EDIT :
please change my offset and resnap it too, toara :? thankss~ www
now hold change offset :3 Update
yuuki0310
japaneseなので説明不要
今回も完全に個人的要望only

[oni]

00:02:584 - 2個の白線にd

00:08:025 - d

00:30:378 - k

00:28:320 - k

00:39:864 - d

00:40:084 - k

00:55:820 - K

this map is good

お疲れ様でした、今回も安定の少なさですが、少ない=個人的良譜面ということなのでご安心を。それではbye
Topic Starter
toara_fict

yuuki0310 wrote:

japaneseなので説明不要
今回も完全に個人的要望only

[oni]

00:02:584 - 2個の白線にd

00:08:025 - d

00:30:378 - k

00:28:320 - k

00:39:864 - d

00:40:084 - k

00:55:820 - K

this map is good

お疲れ様でした、今回も安定の少なさですが、少ない=個人的良譜面ということなのでご安心を。それではbye
Thanks!

Some change :3 Update
Gamu
2013/11/13 19:40:24のあなたからのmod requestです。

とても遅くなって申し訳ない!

  • [General]
  1. Easy diffで、BGが太鼓仕様になっているので、osu仕様にしてください。 メモ帳でosu.fileを開いて、
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,120
    の"120"という数字を0にしてください。 そうすれば、osu仕様に変わると思います。
  2. AudioLeadInが異なっているので、統一したほうが良いと思います。 ただし、Easy diffの始まりが他のdiffと違いますので、Easyは0でいいと思います。
    これもメモ帳を開いて、AudioLeadInのとこを変えてください。 2000をおすすめします。
  3. ルールではなく、ガイドラインのことなんですが、Slider Tick Rateというのがあると思うのですが、それは統一したほうが私はいいと思っています。そうなると、1か2のどっちかになるのですが、わたし的には2をおすすめします!
  4. Song Setup > Design > Misc. Toggles > Widescreen Support を外していないdiffがあるので外してください(太鼓も含めて)。 SBに関係ある機能なのでいらないです。
  • [Easy]
  1. 00:12:584 (1) - 強い音がbackにありますので、finishを追加するといい感じです~
  2. whistleの追加または削除提案です。 とてもフィットすると思うので、つけることをおすすめします。
    -00:15:525 (1) - 矢印部分に追加
    -00:17:290 (2) - 追加
    -00:17:878 (3) - 削除
    -00:18:467 (4) - 始点に追加
    -00:20:820 (3) - ^
    -00:21:996 (4) - 追加
    -00:23:172 (6) - 始点に追加
    ※これらをセットとして考えてくださいー
  3. 00:24:349 (1) - clapよりもfinishが合います~
  4. 00:26:702 (2) - 見た目がちょっとあまりよろしくないので、このような形にしてみてはどうでしょうか?
  5. 00:31:408 (1) - new comboはいらないですー
  6. 00:32:584 (6) - ここからnew comboいれてください。
  7. 00:36:114 (3) - 見た目の提案。Easy又はNormalは真っ直ぐなスライダーよりもサークルやスライダーの始点にうまく囲ませるように丸くするほうが綺麗に見える思います。例えばこのように・・・↓ アプローチサークル(上から降ってくるやつ)を目印(?)にするといいかもです。
  8. 00:46:702 (1) - clapよりもfinishが合うかな?
  9. 01:00:820 (1) - whistleは消して、finish onlyのほうがいいかも。
  10. 00:56:702 (2) - スペーシングエラーです、 約1.00xにする必要があります。
  11. 01:01:408 (2) - ^
  12. 01:26:702 (1) - Easy diffではあまり好ましくないリピートスライダーです。1回だけリピートするなら問題はありませんが、2回以上するものは初心者プレイヤーを混乱させてしまいます。 普通に、ここは1本の長いスライダーを用いるのが良いと思います。
  13. 01:27:878 (1) - ^
  14. 01:29:055 (1) - Softの音にかえといたほうがいいです。
  15. せっかく、カスタムヒットサウンドが入っているので、ぜひ使ってみたほうがいいと思います~ (hitsoundのつけ方はNormal diffが一番参考になると思われます。)
  16. あと、スライダーの形を主に丸くするスタイルが一番綺麗に見えるので、まっすぐスライダーだけではなく、形を変えていくと面白いと思います。
  • [Cloud's Normal]
  1. 00:50:231 (2,4,1) - (2) is x:331 y:332. (4) is x:332 y:192. (1) is x:331 y:50. Therefore, you must have the same x-coordinate.
  2. 00:54:937 (3,5) - ^ Like the same as above
  3. 01:29:055 (1) - You should turn down the volume. Volume is too big D:
  • [Kinomi's Hard]
  1. 00:11:261 (5,6) - Move to x:392 y:132. Position of left and right is shifted with 00:10:525 (2). Please try the CTRL + H in 00:10:525 (2,3).
  2. 00:29:055 (4) - Add a new combo.
  3. 01:29:202 (1) - You should probably be the same the end of the spinner with other diff. So, the end of spinner is 01:31:408.
  • [Ts8zs' Insane]
  1. Please turn off the "Widescreen Support". Don't need! This is a feature of SB
  2. 00:00:820 (1) - Add default-whistle (start). But, it must be the default in Sampleset. So I thought. First, please add the soft-sliderslide3 of silence. And, 00:00:820 (T) - Please set to Sampleset: Custom 3. You can use the default-whistle~
  3. 00:01:409 (2) - ^
  4. 00:01:997 (1) - ^
  5. 00:02:585 (2) - ^
  6. 00:03:173 (1) - ^
  7. 00:03:761 (2) - ^
  8. 00:50:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Volume of the music is rising gradually, so It is recommended that you add the green line of the volume change. Example: (1): 20%. (2): 25%. (3): 30%. (4): 35%. (5): 40%. (6): 45%. (7): 50%. (8): 55%....etc
  9. 00:54:202 (5) - Add a new combo. I think It is necessary
  10. 01:24:349 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - cool~ :3
  • [Alternative]
  1. 00:19:643 (1) - x:128 y:224に移動させたほうが綺麗に見えます。
  2. いいと思います

本当に遅くなってごめんなさい。
がんばってくださいー
Alternative

-Gamu- wrote:

2013/11/13 19:40:24のあなたからのmod requestです。

とても遅くなって申し訳ない!


  • [Alternative]
  1. 00:19:643 (1) - x:128 y:224に移動させたほうが綺麗に見えます。 修正
  2. いいと思います やったぜ。

本当に遅くなってごめんなさい。
がんばってくださいー
modありがとナス!
http://puu.sh/5Fsbb.osu
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