Melophobia wrote:

[RARE]
00:25:669 (2) - あたってるわよ 配置変えた
00:47:891 (7) - 頑張って下げて これもだめか？ http://puu.sh/5dbaC.png
00:52:114 (2) - Newcombo いれた
00:54:114 - Whistle？ ドラムの音拾ってるのでここはNO
01:07:447 - 流れ的にFinishかなと ドラムの音フォローなのでフィニッシュはいれたくない また言われるようならもっとしっくりくる音取りに変えてみます。
01:25:225 (1) - Sliderの速度落としてみたら結構合う気がするんですがどうでしょう 速度変えました

Melophobia wrote:

Video見た感じアポロストロフィは全角っぽい→‘ これで直ってるかな...?

[Insane]
00:05:225 (2) - Finishつけてもいいんじゃないかなぁと うーんなんか浮いちゃうから今のままで
00:11:225 - シンバルが若干聞こえるからここにもFinish。音量下げてもいいかもめ　つけました音小さすぎるかなぁ
00:25:891 (4) - ハイハットに合わせてWhistle?　(これハイハットって言うんだ...
00:37:003 (7) - ちょっと狭く感じるかも？僕なら(3)に重ねて置きます 次の(1)のジャンプのほうを広くしたかったから別の位置にしました
00:39:891 - ピアノの音にあわせてWhistle鳴らしたいのはわかるんだけど、ここにはない方がドラムの音（ﾃﾞﾝｯﾃﾞﾃﾞﾝってやつ）が強調されて聞こえが良いと思う　え～まじか消したけどぉ
00:48:558 - Clap？　はい
00:52:336 (5) - Newcombo?　はいはい
00:54:114 - Finishだと少し煩い＆Whistleの方が音に合ってると思います　めっちゃ迷ってた
01:26:114 - Whistle？　01:25:669 - のハイハットの音と聴き比べると、こっちのほうが音が大きいから区別化って意味でも合うと思う　はい最後の3つ強調させたいから音量下げた
01:07:447 - 流れ的にここはFinishでは？Kiai timeであまり使われていないものあって違和感あります。音量は下げてね 変えるの忘れてたけど、ここは曲にあわせてclapにしたい。
01:21:669 (3) - ＾　同じく
01:16:225 (2) - Clap。もし鳴り方が気になるなら音量下げてみたり　ok

[Normal]
00:05:225 (1) - 難しそうだけど最低難易度だしもうちょっとSpinnerとの間隔あけてほしいなぁ はーい...
01:01:003 - ここになにか置きたい　01:15:225 - にも はははい
01:07:447 - Insaneに同じ 同じくclap

HelloSCV wrote:

Rare's Hard

1. check ai mod plz fixed unsnap

00:36:558 (4,5) - well i think reduce this distance and give jump on 00:36:780 (5,1) - these notes will fits better with vocal no, pref this pattern
00:37:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern looks little bit messed up, 00:38:114 (3) - NC here can be solution i don't think so.
00:41:447 (2) - same clap suggestion with Insane diff no change, not fit this clap imo
00:46:780 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uh another ramdon jump here, you can use this or something else if you want to improve(just my think) this part no, pref current pattern
00:52:114 (2) - NC for SV changing added combo that melo's modding.
01:17:225 (3) - this slider should be started 01:17:003 - here if you followed vocal sound no, pref my pattern
01:26:891 - spinner suggestion like insane As a result of talking and MiLu, no change.

HelloSCV wrote:

Normal

00:07:003 (1) - how about curving like next slider? both sliders have similar sound hm dont need fix it imo...but changed
00:15:891 (1) - this slider breaking up the flow imo you can change this easily like this dont think so...
00:21:225 (1,2) - same opinion with 00:07:003 (1) - here　no change
and don't forget to add spinner if you fix it in insane

Insane

00:18:114 (2) - it'll be better if you curve this slider like previous, plays and feels better considering music imo current pattern looks better than it, to my thinking
00:20:114 (3,4) - hmm maybe try this for better movement? the idea is not bad... but keep it
00:39:891 - uh need whistle on this slider o.o? (like 00:43:447 - this) removed the whistle to emphasize drum sounds by melo's modding
00:41:225 (2) - how about adding clap on end too? it fits really well and drum sounds are heard clearly (and don't forget to add it on 00:43:225 (4) - here , 00:44:780 (2) - here and etc.) sounds good : )
00:54:114 (1) - this sudden acceleration feels really bad, since you decelerated previous slider on previous this slider feels too fast to catch it,players may miss this slider easily (or 00:54:558 (2) - add NC here to notice easily that 00:54:114 (1) - this slider has different SV) or just reducing SV little add NC on 00:54:558 (2)
01:08:669 (1) - there isn't any sound here, i recommend to delete this note no change
01:17:891 (7,1) - try reversing these current pattern fits the back sounds
01:23:447 (4) - need NC about large distance and rhythm changing its easily possible to predict this pattern imo
01:26:891 - i think add spinner here by 01:29:891 - here (or somewhere) fits awesome i dont think so