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Nakae Mitsuki - Koiiro no Hanasaku Koro

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Momochikun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 08, 2014 at 6:31:12 PM

Artist: Nakae Mitsuki
Title: Koiiro no Hanasaku Koro
Source: 花色ヘプタグラム
Tags: hanairo heptagram opening lump of sugar visual novel eroge chewin gamu oyatsu
BPM: 168
Filesize: 17725kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chewin's Normal (4.52 stars, 182 notes)
  2. Gamu's Hard (4.92 stars, 258 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 356 notes)
  4. Oyatsu's Easy (2.66 stars, 100 notes)
Download: Nakae Mitsuki - Koiiro no Hanasaku Koro
Download: Nakae Mitsuki - Koiiro no Hanasaku Koro (no video)
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#9 花色ヘプタグラム OP
I found this song when searching some of visual novels by LoS.. it's so good <3
Hard - Gamu
Normal - Chewin
Easy - Oyatsu
Enjoy it ~
Gamu
(」・ω・) hi~

Done: http://puu.sh/5e4Zy.zip

Please add the "gamu" in the Tags~
Oyatsu
Sorry for late, Mochi-chan!! http://puu.sh/5f2k0.zip - here is my diff and some hitsounds, please save. Thank you ^^
don't forget add Oyatsu in tags =w=
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thanks for great diff guys~
-Teina-
[insane]
SPOILER
00:18:281 (4) - set a slider (2/4)
and 00:18:281 (4) - circle here
00:57:566 (1) - storten 1/4
00:58:013 - circle here
01:26:138 (1) - up for location
01:34:709 (1) - ^
01:42:745 (4) - near 01:42:566 (3) - may be well

Hope it can help you

poor English. If you cannot know what I said ,please reply to me.

[timing]
I cannot mod any wrong....
- Miomio Chii -
hi, here is my mod ! From forum PM. (have nazi mod point)
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
*-TV size ?
[Oyatsu's Easy]
01:22:031 - s3 ?

nazi : (if you don't care about this, you can ignore this)
00:24:709 (2) - ~, x 368 y 256, ~ (~)
00:33:281 (3) - x 356 y 180, x 380 y 140, x 428 y 136, x 456 y 48 (strike is already it)
00:42:923 (3) - could it move to x 188 y 216 ?
00:56:138 (1) - ~, x 200 y 120, ~ (~)
01:00:423 (1) - ~, x 260 y 116, ~ (~)
01:05:066 (3) - ~, x 296 y 304, x 348 y 288 (~)
01:06:138 (1) - ~, x 300 y 128, x 248 y 156, x 200 y 172, ~ (~)
01:07:566 (1) - ~, x 104 y 116, ~ (~)
01:14:709 (1) - move right a grid ~, ~, x 276 y 164 (~)
[Chewin's Normal]
hitsound ok

nazi : (if you don't care about this, you can ignore this)
00:14:709 (1) - ~, x 128 y 208, x 24 y 316
00:40:423 (1) - left a grid
00:55:245 (2) - right a gird ~, x 480 y 128 (~)
00:59:352 (1) - up 5 grid
01:03:816 (2) - right a grid
01:07:923 (2) - up a gird
01:43:281 (1) - last dot right a grid
[Gamu's Hard]
hitsound ok

nazi : (if you don't care about this, you can ignore this)
00:31:852 (1) - ~, ~, x 232 y 140, ~, x 164 y 192 (~)
01:07:031 (3) - ~, x 340 y 140, x 380 y 136 (~)
01:10:245 (1) - last dot x 240 y 196
01:34:531 (4) - up a grid
[Insane]
hitsound ok

nazi :

00:13:817 (4) - x 232 y 184
00:26:138 (1) - ~, ~, x 168 y 144, x 168 y 192 (~)
00:35:423 (4) - down 2 grid (remember to stack 00:36:316 (2) - )
00:47:388 (1) - ~, x 48 y 196, x 4 y 132 (~)
00:52:209 (2) - ~, x 204 y 180, ~ (~)
00:54:352 (4) - ~, down a grid, right a grid
00:56:495 (2) - left 2 grid
00:58:816 (1) - ~, ~, x 152 y 124, x 148 y 184 (~)
01:02:745 (5) - left 2 grid
01:02:923 (6) - left 2 grid (remember stack 01:03:638 (2) - )
01:04:531 (1) - ~, up 1 grid, right 1 grid
01:04:888 (2) - ~, ~, right 1 grid
01:05:245 (3) - right 4 grid (remember stack 01:05:781 (5) - )
01:05:959 (6) - left 2 grid
01:07:031 (4) - left 5 grid
01:09:888 (2) - x 292 y 132
01:10:245 (1) - last dot right a grid
01:12:923 (6) - down a grid
01:13:102 (1) - last dot down 1 and right 2 grid
01:14:709 (1) - ~, right 3 grid, right a grid, ~, ~
01:15:245 (2) - all move to x 164 y 132 (remember stack 01:14:531 (6) - )
01:15:781 (3) - x 396 y 216
01:15:959 (1) - up a grid
01:44:173 (3) - left 3 grid
01:44:888 (2) - left 2 grid (remember stack 01:44:352 (4) - )
01:47:745 (3) - x 188 y 188
01:48:281 (3) - left 3 grid

End of this mod,
if ignore the nazi,
i think its enough for rank. (not sure about the rank condition, so its just my thought)

Good luck to you !
Koiyuki


From my queue of Normal Mod

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]
  1. add '花色ヘプタグラム'、'eroge'、'galgame' to tags, and remove '-gamu-' from tags(because I have searched -gamu- and I can find no map, with tag 'gamu' is enough to find -gamu-'s map)

[Oyatsu's Easy]
  1. 00:13:281 (2,3,1) - the angle of 2's tail,3,and 1 is too sharp imo,change like this: http://puu.sh/5xykZ.jpg
  2. 00:20:423 (1) - I think the spin should end at 00:22:566 - , and map begin at 00:23:281 - is better.

[Chewin's Normal]
  1. 00:59:352 (1) - http://puu.sh/5xzXR.jpg this is enough
  2. 01:22:031 (2,3) - I think this is better http://puu.sh/5xA00.jpg

[Gamu's Hard]
  1. 00:26:138 (1,2,3) - this? http://puu.sh/5xAbX.jpg
  2. 00:35:959 (1,2) - I recommend that not useing 3/4 slider here
  3. 00:49:888 (4) - ctrl+g?
  4. 01:27:566 (3) - NC?

[Insane]
  1. 00:38:459 (4,1) - nazi blanket problem
  2. 01:08:281 (3) - NC
  3. 01:15:245 (2,1,3) - feel a liitle weird about the three sliders...
  4. 00:46:138 (1) - ctrl+g flow may be better

pretty good
good luck with your map :D
CakiP
request PM~~

[Easy]
nothing.


[Normal]
nothing.


[Hard]
01:01:316 (3,4) - ここ順番入れ替えたほうが面白いかも。


[Insane]
01:34:709 (1) - I'm having trouble this note. hidden note.
00:38:459 (4) - moving x:224 y172
00:39:531 (3) - ^
00:40:423 (1) - ^
00:46:852 (2) - moving x:92 y124
00:47:923 (2) - ^
01:00:959 (2,4) - moving x:344 y216

It is better to carry out a blanket more~

gomen my poor mod T^T
good map,good luck!
Swayzo_old
Easy and Normal:
Fun: 10/10
- Really fun to play.
Design: 10/10
- Good job. No mistakes.
Fundamentals: 10/10

Hard:
Fun: 10/10
- Really fun to play.
Design: 9.5/10
- Maybe change the squiggly line @ 01:04:531 into a normal curve pointing upwards
Fundamentals: 10/10


Insane:
Fun: 10/10
- Really fun to play.
Design: 10/10
- Perfect, I find no mistakes
Fundamentals: 9/10
- The drumming @ 00:19:531 and 01:33:995 doesn't sound right.
- Note at the end of the slider is not in the right timing spot! 01:33:459

Overall:
You did a good job with the maps. It was fun and well designed. There are a few things you can change though. Have a star! :)
Hellgert
just a little question

is that really want some of circle with hitsound volume 35%?
i spot that some of the circle with hit sound like that didnt fit the sound :\
try adjust the hitsound again on some circle :|
Atrue
Hello~
From pm req.


[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Nice map,good luck.
[Oyatsu's Easy]
General
Some thing about hitsound and beats to say.
Beats
01:14:709 (1,2) - You missed really important vocal here in the 2 point. But adding circles may increase the difficult. So maybe01:21:673 (3) - Give the slider a second thought. I think it is rather sudden to change track you follow here. But follow vocal rather than drum may not have good feeling as you used here. Better to find a better way to change track following.
Hitsound
00:13:281 (2) - Hmm.. I think here the hitsound is not so logical, especially the slider's head is really weak in hitsound.
And slider tick is really obvious and not necessary.(in the whole part from 00:11:852 to 00:20:066 ) or you have to fix the hitsound here 00:15:781 by adding a note though difficult may increase.
00:26:138 (1) - Stk is too obvious in the slider.
00:27:566 (2) - ^
01:29:352 - Also the clap here you missed is necessary I think. Maybe 2,4 clap is not suitable if you can not cover all 2,4 white tick in the part..
NCs
[Chewin's Normal]
General
CS3? I think 4 really hard for a normal diff.
Overall I think it is a difficult normal diff.
Beats
00:59:352 (1) - Maybe a little hard for a normal diff? You can just put a circle on 00:59:352 and a blank is suitable.
Placement
00:30:423 (4) - A little curve will help the flow.
00:31:852 (1) - ^
00:48:995 (1) - ^
[Gamu's Hard]
General
Good diff you made! Really clean and tidy map.
Beats
00:30:245 (1,2) - Just a suggestion that here if you want to follow vocal better I prefer make 1 a long slider but not 2. (But here you followed the drum is really perfect and maybe both is ok....maybe?)
01:33:102 (1) - Here I suggest a longer slider because on the head you followed the instrument(not drum) and the end of the short slider is a drum and it is supposed to be longer( maybe all through to 2?) though you have to miss the long white tick..
Placement
00:25:423 (4) - Curve the slider a little to make the flow smoother?
[Insane]
General
Pretty good map. But still I have something to pick out~
Beats
00:27:388 (1,2) - Here you used 1/2 beats and 00:37:566 (1,2) - you used 1/4 with no obvious sign. And 1/2 is enough in covering vocal as you used it I think. So maybe just use 1/2 is ok. 3/4 is really sudden.
01:01:673 (1,2) - 3/4? Really weird beat I think. No sign showed a 3/4 here.
01:36:673 (1) - Hmm.. I don't know why slow the slider here... Here is really no difference with the previous part for me..
And after here you did a really good job in the pattern and beats!
Placement
00:33:281 (1) - Stacking is not so fit here especially the note has no obvious relationship with the slider previous. Just free it will be better.
00:39:531 (3) - Just give it a bigger distance as 00:38:816 (1,2) - is better to emphasize here.
00:44:531 (1) - A little curve may help flow
00:45:959 (4,1) - Flow is not good here. Curve maybe better, or you can just move it a little up.
00:58:638 (6,1) - I know you blanket here on purpose but I think the flow here is not so good. And I got no idea about how to fix it if the blanket is not broken.
01:31:852 (1,2) - Maybe enlarge the distance? 1.15x is rather short than I supposed.
01:32:923 (4,1) - flow is not so smooth and curve 1 will get a better flow..(but you have to move some other objects maybe.)
01:33:102 (1,2,3) - Pay attention to the distance here between on the 3 notes. Equal them will be prettier.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Gamu
  1. 01:34:531 (4) - up a grid
  2. 00:26:138 (1,2,3) - this? http://puu.sh/5xAbX.jpg
  3. 00:49:888 (4) - ctrl+g?
  4. 01:01:316 (3,4) - ここ順番入れ替えたほうが面白いかも。
  5. 01:33:102 (1) - Here I suggest a longer slider because on the head you followed the instrument(not drum) and the end of the short slider is a drum and it is supposed to be longer( maybe all through to 2?) though you have to miss the long white tick..
  6. 00:25:423 (4) - Curve the slider a little to make the flow smoother?

    I did these modifications.
thank you for modding~

My diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hanairo.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59709
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Koiiro no Hanasaku Koro
TitleUnicode:恋色の花咲く頃
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:中恵光城
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Gamu's Hard
Source:Hanairo Heptagram
Tags:opening lump of sugar visual novel chewin gamu -gamu- oyatsu
BeatmapID:324076
BeatmapSetID:123694

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"Video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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248,156,40066,2,0,P|276:108|272:52,1,106.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,44,40423,6,0,P|280:60|320:56,1,71,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,68,40781,2,0,P|448:52|408:56,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,202,41138,2,0,P|429:171|428:136,2,71,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,41673,6,0,L|272:172,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42031,1,0,3:0:0:0:
108,180,42209,1,0,1:0:0:0:
44,124,42388,2,0,L|40:48,1,71,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,42745,1,2,3:2:0:0:
200,108,42923,2,0,P|236:120|264:148,1,71,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,43281,6,0,B|240:280|184:280|184:280|192:320,1,142,2|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
112,348,43816,2,0,L|100:276,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,192,44173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
36,164,44352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
100,108,44531,6,0,L|112:36,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,88,44888,2,0,L|225:27,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,45245,2,0,L|272:144,2,35.5,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,52,45602,1,0,1:0:0:0:
404,104,45781,2,0,L|416:176,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,260,46138,6,0,P|364:252|316:280,1,106.500004062653,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,259,46852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,304,47031,2,0,L|220:300,1,53.2500020313264
256,232,47388,6,0,P|248:208|248:172,1,53.2500020313264,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,47923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,100,48281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,140,48459,2,0,P|128:140|100:128,2,53.2500020313264
220,100,48995,6,0,L|232:40,1,53.2500020313264,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,48,49352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,49531,2,0,L|390:144,1,53.2500020313264
470,156,49888,2,0,L|460:104,1,53.2500020313264
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256,248,50959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,288,51138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,268,51316,2,0,L|56:280,2,53.2500020313264,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,51852,6,0,P|136:160|120:120,1,71,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,76,52209,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,40,52388,2,0,L|200:36,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
224,116,52745,2,0,L|296:112,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,53102,6,0,L|392:188,1,71,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,196,53459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,120,53638,2,0,P|432:84|444:48,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,40,53995,2,0,P|320:44|287:33,1,71,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,84,54352,2,0,P|224:120|212:156,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,112,54709,6,0,P|64:116|56:172,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,55245,2,0,P|120:252|152:240,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,316,55602,2,0,P|220:293|234:262,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,180,55959,6,0,P|272:184|320:256,1,142,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,284,56495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,240,56673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,156,56852,2,0,P|464:124|468:88,1,71,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
364,40,57209,2,0,P|376:72|372:108,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,188,57566,6,0,P|280:164|200:192,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,256,58102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,264,58281,2,0,P|68:232|72:192,1,71,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
108,120,58638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,80,58816,6,0,L|256:76,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,59173,2,0,P|304:172|308:212,2,71,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,59709,6,0,L|472:136,1,71,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,135,60423,6,0,P|460:208|496:268,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,304,60959,2,0,P|380:300|340:312,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,61316,1,0,3:0:0:0:
272,348,61495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
281,261,61673,6,0,P|224:212|160:224,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,62209,2,0,L|76:120,1,71,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,62566,2,0,L|183:43,1,71,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,62923,2,0,L|314:19,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,63281,6,0,P|440:108|492:68,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
500,172,63816,2,0,L|496:252,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
408,326,64173,2,0,L|412:256,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,64531,6,0,B|312:184|272:192|272:192|232:200|192:192,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
128,184,65066,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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256,300,65602,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,333,65781,2,0,L|352:264,1,71,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,66138,6,0,B|256:212|232:216|232:216|200:176|216:124,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,66673,2,0,P|300:48|344:52,1,71,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
304,132,67031,2,0,P|338:139|373:138,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
444,88,67388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,164,67566,6,0,L|492:240,2,71,2|0|0,0:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
408,212,68102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,68281,2,0,L|312:288,2,71,2|0|0,0:0|3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,68995,6,0,B|272:224|272:224|224:200|176:232,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,69531,2,0,P|268:308|308:304,1,71,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,276,69888,1,2,3:2:0:0:
408,196,70066,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,132,70245,6,0,P|296:132|243:195,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,70781,2,0,L|84:188,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,71138,1,2,3:2:0:0:
64,40,71316,1,0,3:0:0:0:
116,108,71495,2,0,P|152:108|188:88,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,71852,6,0,L|256:192,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,72388,2,0,L|336:84,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
412,48,72745,2,0,P|448:44|484:56,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,73102,6,0,P|432:196|480:272,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,316,73638,2,0,L|324:324,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,73995,2,0,P|236:260|240:216,1,71,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
187,150,74352,2,0,P|220:138|256:140,1,71,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,74709,6,0,B|288:232|236:224|236:224|180:232,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,75245,2,0,P|104:152|116:104,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,68,75602,2,0,P|214:74|248:66,1,71,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,75959,6,0,P|328:184|392:188,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
452,132,76495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,216,76673,2,0,L|460:292,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,346,77031,2,0,L|376:276,1,71,0|2,3:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
308,224,77388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,284,77566,6,0,P|176:304|120:264,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,220,78638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,152,78816,6,0,P|248:120|236:84,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,40,79173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,56,79352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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136,128,81495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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452,176,83102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,152,83281,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83370,12,2,84531,3:2:0:0:
256,192,84888,5,0,1:0:0:0:
192,248,85066,2,0,P|256:280|320:248,2,142,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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408,192,89709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,60,90066,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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316,192,91138,2,0,B|356:208|392:192|392:192|424:176|464:192,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,91852,6,0,P|272:120|244:148,1,71,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,92209,2,0,L|252:304,1,71,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,92566,2,0,L|143:175,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,93102,6,0,P|96:112|232:176,1,213,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,160,93816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,93995,2,0,P|376:60|452:76,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,94531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,94709,6,0,P|404:268|420:344,1,142,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,40,96316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,260,97745,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,212,99173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,336,99531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,212,99888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,284,100066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,212,100959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,64,102745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,44,102923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,36,103281,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,88,103459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,212,105245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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AlexaBM
hi~ NM from my queue c:

  • [General]
  1. 01:26:138 - I don't understand why Kiai continues here.. If I were you, I would stop it here.
  • [Oyatsu's Easy]
  1. 00:28:638 (3,2) - Not very good overlap.
  2. 01:11:138 (4,5) - I don't recommend you to put circles one on the other in Easy diff, it can confuse some mewbies, I think.
    Your diff is good, but you have one problem:
    Try to use all the place of the mapping field
  • [Chewin's Normal]
  1. 00:11:673 - Delete this green timing section, it's unnecessary here.
  2. 00:59:709 - maybe stop reverses here?
  3. 00:59:709 - Maybe do smth like this?I like this diff, but i think you slider velocity is too high. And spacing between them is too big, I think. If I were you, I would change slider velocity at 1,10

  • [Gamu's Hard]
  1. AR -1?
  • [Insane]
    Can't say anything :c
GL~
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thanks for the mod guys !~
Sorry that i can't reply all, but i fixed almost all of it.
Updated all diff except Easy o.o
LexiaLovesU

You requested a Mod In game Pm
Note: I dont like pointless streams that hit absolutely nothing. Remember that these are all Suggestion and that your free to ignore all of these

[Insane]


[General]
Pls Right in description that you video contains things that children should not see. it contains alot of sexual themes like that naked girl at 01:18:102 only covered up by fog that is considered a sexual theme that should be rated 16+

[Major Suggestions]
00:11:852 (1) - that slider is not aligned with the stream but i cant seem to give just point to put it at sorry
00:12:923 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - What is with this pattern you Change DS for absolutely no reason it goes from being 1.18 x away to suddenly on the next note being 1.40 x away then 1.19 x away then 1.30 x away then 1.64 x away then 1.66 x away. Pls tell me the reason for you not to change this cause all i do when i play this part is low down and speed up in a mili second then slow down again. for me this ruin the game play. and there i no emphasis on anything to let the note give a reason to anti jump and jump.this can cause a confusion about when to hit the notes. in this Insane im trying to keep up with the fast pacedness of the map so there isnt much time to focus on the approach circle. so people rely on there knowlegde of distance and the song to know when to hit the circle.
00:19:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - whats the point in this stream it hits nothing nor does it support the flow that after a repeat slider that you have to quickly jerk upward to hit that stream that goes downward.
00:22:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - whats the point in this stream it hits nothing honestly are you thinking that it only takes a stream to create intensity in a map there are other ways you then pointless streams that ruin the quality of the map (just my opinion that i consider an issue) :roll
01:26:138 (1) - move that to x:60 y:288 its not perfectly aligned with that stream( this stream matches the music so im fine with it)
01:33:816 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this does not sound right it sounds weird and stream is so out of place here honestly why
01:34:709 (1) - move this to x:128 y:240 its not perfectly aligned with that stream and make sure you keep the same DS with the rest of that stream you put that note .1 to high its supposed be .8
01:47:566 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - i dont like these weird DS changes they seems so weird not to mention that they make that pattern look a bit ehh. they also make people slow down and speed up for no reason this can cause a confusion about when to hit the notes. in this Insane im trying to keep up with the fast pacedness of the map so there isnt much time to focus on the approach circle. so people rely on there knowlegde of distance and the song to know when to hit the circle.
Thats all for the major suggestions moving to regular Suggestions :)

[Suggestions]
00:16:673 (2) - i hate circles under sliders it really confuses me going back to start of slider again to hit a circle.
00:22:388 (3) - why is that circle under the slider body. even when you play it appears before the slider is fully gone.
00:25:423 (3) - i always found circles under sliders confusing. mostly because i have to stop suddenly then move again
00:26:138 (1) - i find that slider a bit ugly as of now i feel the red point made that edge to sharp while that part in the song sounds more free and calm you know what i mean.
00:28:995 (1) - when i heard this vocal note i thought that slider didnt match it. i feel a wave slider would match
00:33:281 (1) - i always found circles under sliders confusing. mostly because i have to stop suddenly then move again
00:34:709 (1) - Finally someone does a nice anti jump it fits that part amazingly good job
00:36:673 (3,4) - that does not feel like a stack at all. what feels like a stack is 4 and 5 cause they both have the same sound note in the music
00:41:673 (1) - this feels like a wave slider because of the vocals extending.
00:45:423 (1) - i know i probably wrong you can call me a baka. but seeing a triple with the last one a NC is weird
00:48:995 (1) - This slider red point make this seem to sharp
00:53:638 (2) - under that slider now that is not pretty
00:55:959 (1) - weird slider idk doesnt suit this song
01:00:245 - this feels so empty. there a little ding sound there. why dont you add a soft whistle circle there
01:01:673 (1) - this is not aligned with the start of 4. even if you didnt mean a blanket like thingy still move it to x416 y172 it will look better
01:04:531 (1) - move to x:280 y:144 to make it aligned
01:06:673 (2) - make that blanket better its off
01:13:638 (2) - ^^
01:36:673 (1) - that slider doesnt fit at all try something different like wave
Thats all great job nice map :)
Losertic
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Modding

General

  1. some problem at tags.

Oyatsu's Easy

  1. 00:28:638 (3,2) - no problem.. but, umm. i think not good this axis change another way?
  2. 00:32:923 (2) - 1.0x distance..? umm. well. change this? 00:31:852 (1) - move (208,276)
  3. 01:11:138 (4,5) - move another axis? (no stack)
  4. 01:11:852 (1,2) - change this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147769
  5. 01:14:709 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:21:673 (3) - move this slider start at 01:21:495 ?

Chewin's Normal

  1. Check your Tags. hanairo heptragram opening lump of sugar visual novel eroge chewin gamu oyatsu
  2. 00:25:781 (5) - move (220,248)?
  3. 01:13:102 (4) - move (212,128)?
  4. 01:13:995 (1) - move (356,320)?
  5. some question
    00:11:852 ~ 00:33:638 - change 1.1x distance? or 01:37:566 ~ - change 1.0x distance? umm..

Gamu's Hard

  1. Check your Tags. hanairo heptagram opening lump of sugar visual novel chewin gamu -gamu- oyatsu
  2. 01:00:245 - add note?
  3. 01:39:173 (2,3) - i think it's pretty pattern, but umm. more jump this note? or umm.. change rhythm? ex) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147821
    (i know why made this pattern. not same another pattern ex) 01:44:531 , 01:47:388 etc.)

Insane

  1. change stack this note,sliders? 00:37:031 (5) - 00:38:459 (4) - 00:39:531 (3) - 00:40:423 (1) -
  2. 01:00:245 - add note? or.. like this? follow vocal http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147841
  3. 00:19:888 ~ 00:20:334 / 01:33:548 ~ 01:34:620 - umm... i heard some weird hitsonud. (i used osu! original hitsound)

    00:22:745 ~ 00:23:191 - well, it's alright.

It's nice map. ;)
Sakura
Hi there~
[General]
Well let's see first things first, your combo colours are pretty light which... your background and video are also light so it's hard to see them you should try to make them lighter (specially at AR9 like Insane)
There are some missing tags on some difficulties, make sure all tags match up. For example Hard has -gamu- as an extra tag

[Insane]
00:20:959 (2,3,4,5,1) - Looking at these notes the pattern looks pretty awkward when you can easily adjust them around into a prettier pattern like this for example.
Mostly would be pattern suggestions like the above example, it would certainly make the flow of your map feel better, but changing every single one would change your whole map and you probably don't want that.

[Hard]
00:59:709 (1) - This slowdown feels awkward, there's no hinting to it in the music.

[Normal]
No issues here, good flow and everything, love the map.

[Easy]
01:22:566 (4,5) - If you move 4 down and 5 up the flow feels more clean. Like this

Pretty nice mapset, call be back later.
Gamu

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

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Gamu's Hard

  1. Check your Tags. hanairo heptagram opening lump of sugar visual novel chewin gamu -gamu- oyatsu ok. removed
  2. 01:00:245 - add note? no. It does not need.
  3. 01:39:173 (2,3) - i think it's pretty pattern, but umm. more jump this note? or umm.. change rhythm? ex) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147821
    (i know why made this pattern. not same another pattern ex) 01:44:531 , 01:47:388 etc.) No. I want to create a variety of patterns
It's nice map. ;)

Sakura wrote:

Hi there~

[Hard]
00:59:709 (1) - This slowdown feels awkward, there's no hinting to it in the music. Hmm..I want to feel the same as the Insane diff. I can see that you are you said. But, I really like this.. So I want to keep it

Pretty nice mapset, call be back later.
thank you for modding~ :3

My diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hanairo.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59709
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Koiiro no Hanasaku Koro
TitleUnicode:恋色の花咲く頃
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:中恵光城
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Gamu's Hard
Source:花色ヘプタグラム
Tags:hanairo heptagram opening lump of sugar visual novel eroge chewin gamu oyatsu
BeatmapID:324076
BeatmapSetID:123694

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.42
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Miyuri BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,255,255

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Topic Starter
Momochikun

Sakura wrote:

Hi there~
[General]
Well let's see first things first, your combo colours are pretty light which... your background and video are also light so it's hard to see them you should try to make them lighter (specially at AR9 like Insane) I make my combo colour more dark.
There are some missing tags on some difficulties, make sure all tags match up. For example Hard has -gamu- as an extra tag yeah.

[Insane]
00:20:959 (2,3,4,5,1) - Looking at these notes the pattern looks pretty awkward when you can easily adjust them around into a prettier pattern like this for example. sure thing
Mostly would be pattern suggestions like the above example, it would certainly make the flow of your map feel better, but changing every single one would change your whole map and you probably don't want that. yeah you're right ><

Pretty nice mapset, call be back later.
Fixed stuffs on my diffs.
Since Oyatsu got problem with his PC and won't comeback soon. I've fixed the minor stuff in his diff.
All diffs now Updated ! :roll:
-Neipezi
hi Momochikun o^o/

video quality is not good. it is high-definition video. Download

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:40:423 (1) - change the direction of the slide photo

[Chewin's Normal]
- CS -1 change?
00:26:673 (2,3) - (2) circle after deleting, (3) a slide 00:26:673 (2) - move? (vocal)
00:27:566 (3) - 00:27:388 - here move? (vocal)
00:30:245 (3) - this change? (vocal)
00:59:352 (1) - arrow 1 change?
01:38:995 (3,4) - whistle add ( 01:37:566 (1) - with the same sound )
01:41:852 (3,4) - ^
01:44:709 (3,4) - ^

[Gamu's Hard]
00:30:245 (1,2) - two changes?

[Insane]
00:11:495 (1,2,3,4,1) - must be placed in a straight line.
- (1) x160 y108
- (2) x148 y124
- (3) x136 y140
- (4) x124 y156
00:18:281 (4,5) - ctrl + g?
00:54:352 (4) - ^
01:47:923 (1,2) - NC change?

Momochikun, you are my regular customers in the queue xDD
Topic Starter
Momochikun

-Kirito wrote:

hi Momochikun o^o/

video quality is not good. it is high-definition video. Download
Thank you so much ~~ <3
[Insane]
00:11:495 (1,2,3,4,1) - must be placed in a straight line. sure.
- (1) x160 y108
- (2) x148 y124
- (3) x136 y140
- (4) x124 y156
00:18:281 (4,5) - ctrl + g? i like current pattern :3
00:54:352 (4) - ^ ^
01:47:923 (1,2) - NC change? Hm.. why ? current NC fit nicely imo

Momochikun, you are my regular customers in the queue xDD huehue.. it's just incidental thing that you opened your queue when i was browsing in the forum :D
Thanks ~
Updated !
Gamu

-Kirito wrote:

hi Momochikun o^o/

[Gamu's Hard]
00:30:245 (1,2) - two changes? sorry. I think It is not good

Momochikun, you are my regular customers in the queue xDD
thank you for modding~
Mystyk
I'll get to this now, I'll edit this post later.

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:28:638 (3,2) - this overlap could be avoided in my opinion, it is not so bad, but it could be improved by simply replacing them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1173650 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1173655
00:32:923 (2) - spacing is too big, move (2,3) closer to (1) - http://puu.sh/5Nm4P.jpg
01:11:852 (1) - change the direction of the slider for better flow? - http://puu.sh/5NnV0.jpg

[Chewin's Normal]
00:24:531 (2) - put this on the white tick 00:24:352 - because in my opinion it is a bit weird to follow that kind of rhythm, because you put 00:23:995 (1) - on a white tick (which is following the beat) however you placed (2) on a red tick, which follows the lyrics, and you also put these on the white ticks 00:25:423 (4,5) - so I think you should follow this simple rythym first, and later this part 00:26:138 (1,2,3) - is fine as it is
00:52:745 (3) - this note sounds too silenced imo even if you used drum sampleset on it, use maybe a soft whistle?
00:59:352 (1) - there are too many reverses and also it could fit more to the lyrics, this would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/5NprN.jpg (and delete the slider velocity change)

[Gamu's Hard]
00:18:816 (1) - I think this should be a hit a circle, it emphasizes the finish sound better
00:21:673 (1,2) - you could use a longer slider here instead, the music sounds "long" here, so a long slider would fit better than 1/2
00:38:816 (1,2) - again I think you should use a long slider, because she sings long, and a long slider emphasizes the lyrics better
00:41:673 (1,2) - same here ^ and also there is a piano sound in the background, I think a long slider would fit really well, and it gives variety beside those 1/2s
00:53:102 (1) - same thing I mentioned before, this should be a hit circle, because it emphasizes the finish sound and the end of the combo better, also, there is a lot of 1/2 so I think it would be nice to have that small space :P
00:59:709 (1) - instead of a slider velocity change and a slider, you could use a hit circle, which emphasizes the chorus better (pointed out by Garven)

[Insane]
00:24:531 (1,2,3,4) - these would be better because they start on the white ticks, where you can hear the beat and the piano too - http://puu.sh/5O2ER.jpg
00:37:566 (1,2) - I don't really like the 3/4 slider, she stops singing on the white tick so there is no reason to make it 3/4, so delete (2) and lengthen (1)
00:40:781 (2,3) - same here ^ maybe try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1175529
00:47:923 (2,3,4) - it would be better to have the slider start on the white ticks because of the tick sound in the music - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176370
00:50:602 (3) - put this on the white tick 00:50:423 - because that's where there is a sound in the music and it feels weird on the red tick
00:53:638 (2) - try to replace this so that they don't overlap with 00:53:102 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176443 - (this is just an example and I also think that I put (4) a bit up)
00:57:566 (1,2) - this should be again one long slider
00:59:709 (1) - try using a hit circle instead of a slider, it will emphasize the chorus better
01:36:673 (1) - I personally didn't really like this slider velocity change, I think you should edit it just like the previous parts
01:20:423 (1,2) - same that I mentioned about these kind of 3/4 sliders + hit circles, make it one long slider
01:46:674 (1,2) - it would be better if you hit ctrl+G on the timeline, because the slider would start on the white tick and it would sound better and fitting, and the flow should be improved as well, also, you might just add a reverse to (2), it would fit to the piano sound imo, but it's up to you - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176497 - also, by improving flow, I mean that this: http://puu.sh/5OsM2.jpg - doesn't flow well imo, because you have to jump down again and then go upwards, which might be uncomfortable
01:47:209 (1,2) - same as above ^ but the reason is that (1) ends on a beat which should me emphasized with either a hit circle or a slider start, it will feel better to click it

That's it, good luck with the mapset and sorry for being so late!
Topic Starter
Momochikun

Mystyk wrote:

I'll get to this now, I'll edit this post later.

[Insane]
00:24:531 (1,2,3,4) - these would be better because they start on the white ticks, where you can hear the beat and the piano too - http://puu.sh/5O2ER.jpg Hm.. didn't sound like a problem for me, and i don't want to ruin the patterns. maybe you can give me suggestion of pattern D: ?
00:37:566 (1,2) - I don't really like the 3/4 slider, she stops singing on the white tick so there is no reason to make it 3/4, so delete (2) and lengthen (1) Eh,, i'm sure they're the hold vocal of "ng" that landing on this tick here.. so it's fine o.o
00:40:781 (2,3) - same here ^ maybe try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1175529 nice, fixed
00:47:923 (2,3,4) - it would be better to have the slider start on the white ticks because of the tick sound in the music - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176370 The flow would be bad imo. and i use the head of slider (3) to emphasize that guitar sound on 00:48:102 - . It's fine imo
00:50:602 (3) - put this on the white tick 00:50:423 - because that's where there is a sound in the music and it feels weird on the red tick I can't hear any instrument nor vocal on the white tick >_<
00:53:638 (2) - try to replace this so that they don't overlap with 00:53:102 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176443 - (this is just an example and I also think that I put (4) a bit up) I love overlap lol.. but yeah moved a bit so it'll more beautiful xD
00:57:566 (1,2) - this should be again one long slider Didn't really agree for this. i think 3/4 will fit nicer with the next jump pattern
00:59:709 (1) - try using a hit circle instead of a slider, it will emphasize the chorus better I can hear that slowing down instrument o.o
01:36:673 (1) - I personally didn't really like this slider velocity change, I think you should edit it just like the previous parts^
01:20:423 (1,2) - same that I mentioned about these kind of 3/4 sliders + hit circles, make it one long slider Didn't have any idea of new pattern, give me some suggestion pls xD
01:46:674 (1,2) - it would be better if you hit ctrl+G on the timeline, because the slider would start on the white tick and it would sound better and fitting, and the flow should be improved as well, also, you might just add a reverse to (2), it would fit to the piano sound imo, but it's up to you - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176497 - also, by improving flow, I mean that this: http://puu.sh/5OsM2.jpg - doesn't flow well imo, because you have to jump down again and then go upwards, which might be uncomfortable This were one of my favourite pattern in this map. sorry >.<
01:47:209 (1,2) - same as above ^ but the reason is that (1) ends on a beat which should me emphasized with either a hit circle or a slider start, it will feel better to click it same then ~

That's it, good luck with the mapset and sorry for being so late!
Thanks a lot for mod !
Will update soon because my connection sucks :P
Mystyk
00:24:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176900 and http://puu.sh/5OyjN.jpg OR maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176909 but in a nicer way?
00:50:602 (3) - you can hear the same sound 00:47:209 (3) - and 00:47:923 (2) - and actually every white tick has that sound 00:46:852 (2) - the beginning of this slider and 00:48:102 (3,4) - the ending of both of these sliders >.< if you really can't hear it, try to listen to it with 25% there is clearly a sound on the white tick rather than on the red tick >.<
00:59:709 (1) - but that slowing down sound can be hardly heard imo, but well at least try to replace this 01:00:423 (1) - because that kind of overlap is not really nice, they only reach for a little bit, so put them either further - http://puu.sh/5OyNC.jpg - or stack them
01:20:423 (1,2) - hmm well this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176931 - this flows similarly to how it was before OR http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176939 - though if you do it this way, I think it would flow better if you hit ctrl+G on (2) but then you should replace (3) and (4) too maybe, well it's up to you, or you can also try this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176944

You don't have to change them exactly as I did, you can try them on your own way, I'm just giving examples :P
Topic Starter
Momochikun

Mystyk wrote:

00:24:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176900 and http://puu.sh/5OyjN.jpg OR maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176909 but in a nicer way? fixed on my own pattern :P
00:50:602 (3) - you can hear the same sound 00:47:209 (3) - and 00:47:923 (2) - and actually every white tick has that sound 00:46:852 (2) - the beginning of this slider and 00:48:102 (3,4) - the ending of both of these sliders >.< if you really can't hear it, try to listen to it with 25% there is clearly a sound on the white tick rather than on the red tick >.< well.. i just want to follow the vocal here, anyway that instrument was not pretty loud that players won't get bothered with that.. imo
00:59:709 (1) - but that slowing down sound can be hardly heard imo, but well at least try to replace this 01:00:423 (1) - because that kind of overlap is not really nice, they only reach for a little bit, so put them either further - http://puu.sh/5OyNC.jpg - or stack them dunno.. but i still like them the way it is :(
01:20:423 (1,2) - hmm well this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176931 - this flows similarly to how it was before OR http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176939 - though if you do it this way, I think it would flow better if you hit ctrl+G on (2) but then you should replace (3) and (4) too maybe, well it's up to you, or you can also try this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1176944 as the first SS ~

You don't have to change them exactly as I did, you can try them on your own way, I'm just giving examples :P
Thanks a lot !
Also fixed stuffs from Oyatsu's diff. Updated ~
Edit: Thanks for stars :D
Xinchii
Hello ~

From queue

Ummm......

I check the map long time , but really can't find some Constructively issue , sorry ;w;

Just think the map is great enough

so Star~!

Good luck , and thanks for show your work :3
Gamu

Mystyk wrote:

I'll get to this now, I'll edit this post later.

[Gamu's Hard]
00:18:816 (1) - I think this should be a hit a circle, it emphasizes the finish sound better  :arrow: ok.
00:21:673 (1,2) - you could use a longer slider here instead, the music sounds "long" here, so a long slider would fit better than 1/2 :arrow: It is also possible to use the long slider certainly. but, I want to keep as it is.
00:38:816 (1,2) - again I think you should use a long slider, because she sings long, and a long slider emphasizes the lyrics better  :arrow: fix
00:41:673 (1,2) - same here ^ and also there is a piano sound in the background, I think a long slider would fit really well, and it gives variety beside those 1/2s :arrow: ^
00:53:102 (1) - same thing I mentioned before, this should be a hit circle, because it emphasizes the finish sound and the end of the combo better, also, there is a lot of 1/2 so I think it would be nice to have that small space :P :arrow: i think this is fit to vocal. and that is good.
00:59:709 (1) - instead of a slider velocity change and a slider, you could use a hit circle, which emphasizes the chorus better (pointed out by Garven) :arrow: ok
thank you for modding~

my diff
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324,212,68995,6,0,B|272:224|272:224|224:200|176:232,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,69531,2,0,P|268:308|308:304,1,71,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,276,69888,1,2,3:2:0:0:
408,196,70066,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,132,70245,6,0,P|296:132|243:195,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,70781,2,0,L|84:188,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,71138,1,2,3:2:0:0:
64,40,71316,1,0,3:0:0:0:
116,108,71495,2,0,P|152:108|188:88,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,71852,6,0,L|256:192,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,72388,2,0,L|336:84,1,71,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
412,48,72745,2,0,P|448:44|484:56,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,73102,6,0,P|432:196|480:272,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,316,73638,2,0,L|324:324,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,73995,2,0,P|236:260|240:216,1,71,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
187,150,74352,2,0,P|220:138|256:140,1,71,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,74709,6,0,B|288:232|236:224|236:224|180:232,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,75245,2,0,P|104:152|116:104,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,68,75602,2,0,P|214:74|248:66,1,71,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,75959,6,0,P|328:184|392:188,1,142,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
452,132,76495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,216,76673,2,0,L|460:292,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,346,77031,2,0,L|376:276,1,71,0|2,3:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
308,224,77388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,284,77566,6,0,P|176:304|120:264,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,100,78281,2,0,L|152:144,1,71,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,220,78638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
244,152,78816,6,0,P|248:120|236:84,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,40,79173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,56,79352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
464,284,79709,2,0,P|412:284|364:252,1,106.5,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,80066,2,0,B|280:268,1,71,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,80423,6,0,B|172:324|172:324|128:296|80:304,1,142,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,80959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,172,81138,2,0,L|52:96,1,71,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,128,81495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
180,200,81673,6,0,P|216:204|252:196,1,71,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,82031,2,0,P|290:272|319:249,1,71,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,82388,2,0,P|386:302|403:270,1,71,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
472,323,82745,2,0,P|484:288|486:252,1,71,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
452,176,83102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,152,83281,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83370,12,2,84531,3:2:0:0:
256,192,84888,5,0,1:0:0:0:
192,248,85066,2,0,P|256:280|320:248,2,142,2|2|2,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,76,86138,6,0,B|212:80|240:52|240:52|312:64,1,142,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,86852,2,0,B|300:304|272:332|272:332|200:320,1,142,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,112,87566,2,0,B|368:148|396:176|396:176|384:248,1,142,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
140,272,88280,2,0,B|144:236|116:208|116:208|128:136,2,142,2|2|4,3:2|3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
304,324,89352,5,0,3:0:0:0:
408,192,89709,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,60,90066,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,192,90423,6,0,B|156:176|120:192|120:192|88:208|48:192,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,91138,2,0,B|356:208|392:192|392:192|424:176|464:192,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,91852,6,0,P|272:120|244:148,1,71,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,92209,2,0,L|252:304,1,71,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,92566,2,0,L|143:175,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,93102,6,0,P|96:112|232:176,1,213,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,160,93816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,93995,2,0,P|376:60|452:76,1,142,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,94531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,94709,6,0,P|404:268|420:344,1,142,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
93,341,95423,2,0,P|108:272|92:204,1,142,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
28,152,95959,6,0,L|48:80,1,71,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,40,96316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,96495,2,0,P|236:68|276:60,1,71,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,30,96852,2,0,P|386:26|352:32,1,71,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,116,97209,2,2,P|340:180|292:240,1,142,2|2,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,260,97745,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,97923,2,0,L|48:244,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,98281,2,0,L|25:330,2,71,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,336,98816,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,212,99173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,336,99531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,212,99888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,284,100066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,140,100423,6,0,L|340:68,2,71,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,212,100959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,101138,2,0,L|264:356,2,71,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,101673,6,0,P|176:204|140:208,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,247,102031,2,0,P|36:255|72:252,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,207,102388,2,0,P|149:172|146:137,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,64,102745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,44,102923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,36,103281,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,88,103459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,36,103638,2,0,L|400:44,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,124,103995,2,0,L|444:132,2,71,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,168,104531,6,0,P|280:200|284:240,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,212,104888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,212,105245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,344,105602,2,0,L|256:264,1,71,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,132,106138,6,0,P|124:132|92:152,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,232,106495,2,0,P|87:264|118:285,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,106852,2,0,P|225:254|232:217,1,71,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,136,107209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,188,107388,5,2,0:0:0:0:
484,192,107745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,188,108102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,192,108459,2,0,L|492:276,1,71,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Andrea
~General~
  1. It would be nice if you can use the same Kiai Time on all the difficulties.
~Oyatsu's Easy~
  1. Stack Leniency is kinda too low for this difficulty, increase it by 2 or 3 ticks at least.
  1. 00:29:709 (2) - This slider repeat is kinda covered by the previous hitcircle, try to move it somewhere else if you can.
~Chewin's Normal~
  1. Increase both HP and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  2. Stack Leniency is kinda too low for this difficulty, increase it by 2 or 3 ticks at least.
  1. 00:59:352 (1) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing for a Normal, I'd make it only 1 instead and then add a circle at 01:00:066.
  2. 01:15:959 (1) - Same comment as above, but this isn't that confusing actually, so you can keep it if you wish.
~Gamu's Hard~
  1. 00:59:709 (1) - If I have to be honest, I don't really like this slowdown here, I'd prefer if you put 4 circles in a row instead, to follow with the music.
  2. 01:37:209 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  3. 01:37:745 (1) - Remove the new combo from here afterwards.
~Insane~
  1. 00:59:709 (1) - Same suggestion as Gamu's Hard.
Really good mapset, call me back once you've checked this.
Topic Starter
Momochikun

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. It would be nice if you can use the same Kiai Time on all the difficulties.
~Oyatsu's Easy~
  1. Stack Leniency is kinda too low for this difficulty, increase it by 2 or 3 ticks at least.
  1. 00:29:709 (2) - This slider repeat is kinda covered by the previous hitcircle, try to move it somewhere else if you can.
~Chewin's Normal~
  1. Increase both HP and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  2. Stack Leniency is kinda too low for this difficulty, increase it by 2 or 3 ticks at least.
  1. 00:59:352 (1) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing for a Normal, I'd make it only 1 instead and then add a circle at 01:00:066.
  2. 01:15:959 (1) - Same comment as above, but this isn't that confusing actually, so you can keep it if you wish.
~Gamu's Hard~
  1. 00:59:709 (1) - If I have to be honest, I don't really like this slowdown here, I'd prefer if you put 4 circles in a row instead, to follow with the music.
  2. 01:37:209 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  3. 01:37:745 (1) - Remove the new combo from here afterwards.
~Insane~
  1. 00:59:709 (1) - Same suggestion as Gamu's Hard.
Really good mapset, call me back once you've checked this.
Sorry that i can't change the SV because i want to cover that "whoosh" instrument. It fits nicely with the feeling of the song and the previous jumps imo.
Also for kiai, we have our own preferences :P
Others fixed, Updated ~
Andrea
Okay, after a recheck this is finally ready to go.

Bubbled~
Oyatsu
LOLLLLLLLLLLL
Go! Go!! Mochi
*SHOCKED* :o
Melophobia
Ranked.
Gamu
Congrats!
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Sankyuu melo ! ww
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