Nakae Mitsuki - Pure Love, True Love [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Rukaru

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Rukaru 2013-11-09T12:50:48+00:00

oh wow, so many mods already.

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-09T15:23:15+00:00

theramdans wrote:
my further m4m

Insane
AR-1 OD+1 pls, coz the bpm is rather slow
00:22:106 (4) - slider looks weird
00:40:802 - NC
00:41:671 - remove NC
00:47:106 (1) - replace with a circle and remove NC
01:01:237 (5) - slider looks weird
02:35:476 (2) - remove this
02:59:498 (4) - slider looks weird
03:11:454 (1-2) - replace both sliders with circles, 1/4 sliders do not fit here
03:11:889 - add a circle
03:12:106 - remove spinner and continue mapping till 03:13:628 , because the vocal is still there
03:34:280 (4) - slider looks weird

Ok Im done with this
good luck~

ok, fixed all of this

edit : updated the hard and insane diff
and still need more time to finish editing easy and normal cause so many that have to be changed

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2013-11-09T16:40:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kogasa_old_1

123 posts

Joined July 2011

kogasa_old_1 2013-11-09T16:13:42+00:00

Boo! From my modding queue.

Also, I'm sorry, but I can't mod Taiko.

-A really nice storyboard! It's really pretty.

General
I'm sure it was already said before, but the map can't be bigger than 10 MB without video.

Easy
A nice map overall, though the little repeating sliders such as 00:42:324 (1) - can get a little repetitive considering the song's length.

Normal
00:05:584 (1) - This didn't read very well, and it'll probably end up confusing normal players.
00:07:759 (2) - Out of place.
00:34:716 (5,6) - I think it'd be better to stack these more or turn it into a slider. Unexpected and hard to read in Normal mode.

Hard
00:31:671 (1,2,3) - These would look nicer and be eaiser to play if you spread them out a bit more.
00:35:150 (1,2,3) - ^
02:51:237 (6) - NC
03:08:193 (3,4,5) - Same thing as the first two.
03:47:758 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is oddly shaped and makes the pattern after it look out of place.

Insane
AR is a little high.
00:47:106 (1) - Kinda weird. If you didn't make it a stream so there wouldn't be 4 in a row, why not make the slider at least go towards the other slider instead of away like that?
02:14:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This looks exactly the same as it did when the pattern type was first used and it looks a little copy-pasted. It could be moved so it looks a little different.

A really pretty song! I hope I could help.
Good luck!

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-09T17:30:14+00:00

ok, I take all of your suggestions for hard and insane diff, thanks for modding \:D/
(except mapping the break time part, I want to leave it as is)

for the filesize, it can still be tolerated as long as it doesn't go beyond 20 MB or so I heard
and last, I'll consider about remapping the normal diff (which makes my work will be longer lol, so bear with it)
and for the missing file.. dunno why aimod considered it missing, maybe I'll ask the BAT >_>

edit : done remapping normal diff and fixing easy diff, back again to modding 8)

Lust

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Lust 2013-11-12T22:59:11+00:00

Always need more maps of this song, love it

[Easy]Mmm wow okay, nice sliders haha

00:03:628 (4,5) - this would look better if blanket was fixed better (angle slider end down just a bit)
00:09:280 (3) - make this shape more like 00:07:541 (1)
00:10:584 (1) - i wouldnt have this note here, move it so it is not underneath 00:08:845 (2) maybe it is better to have 00:10:584 (1) be blanketed by 00:09:280 (3) like so
this is an easy diff so notes hidden like that shouldnt be like that
00:17:976 (1) - this looks very wrong to me for some reason, but i cant place my finger on it. probably the location of 00:17:541 (4) so i suggest you change it up just for design purposes
00:47:541 (1) - better to have repeat slider here
00:45:367 (4) - NC
00:58:845 (1) - have this blanket 01:00:150 (2) or something, the way it looks now is very ugly (same for the other parts that look like it

thats basically it that i found, there are more of the same issue repeating throughout the map that i stated, just look out for overall flow and design
[Normal]
Nothing too out of the ordinary here, just make sure to recheck your spacing!

Nice set, good luck!

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2013-11-13T13:57:50+00:00

Lust wrote:
Always need more maps of this song, love it

[Easy]Mmm wow okay, nice sliders haha
00:03:628 (4,5) - this would look better if blanket was fixed better (angle slider end down just a bit) (fixed)
00:09:280 (3) - make this shape more like 00:07:541 (1) (fixed)
00:10:584 (1) - i wouldnt have this note here, move it so it is not underneath 00:08:845 (2) maybe it is better to have 00:10:584 (1) be blanketed by 00:09:280 (3) like so
this is an easy diff so notes hidden like that shouldnt be like that (good point, fixed)
00:17:976 (1) - this looks very wrong to me for some reason, but i cant place my finger on it. probably the location of 00:17:541 (4) so i suggest you change it up just for design purposes (i got your point, and i've thought of an interesting shape lol)
00:47:541 (1) - better to have repeat slider here (nope, it would break the flow)
00:45:367 (4) - NC (fixed)
00:58:845 (1) - have this blanket 01:00:150 (2) or something, the way it looks now is very ugly (same for the other parts that look like it (fixed this but kept the rest)
thats basically it that i found, there are more of the same issue repeating throughout the map that i stated, just look out for overall flow and design (thanks for pointing those, but please be more spesific later because it's kind of confusing without you pointing what you found wrong :3)

[Normal]
Nothing too out of the ordinary here, just make sure to recheck your spacing!
(fixed all issues)

Nice set, good luck! (thanks~)

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2013-11-13T14:11:40+00:00

がんばってね~

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2013-11-13T14:14:29+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
がんばってね~

全て本当にありがとうマコ様 >.<)/

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2013-11-13T17:29:29+00:00

Hii M4M~

[General]
What I found, kiai time should be on 00:56:237 - untill 01:19:063 then 02:12:758 - untill 02:35:584 - then 03:29:280 - untill 03:38:193 - then 03:39:715 - untill 04:02:541 -
I can't mod SB~
You can use Ctrl+C, Ctrl+V, Ctrl+H. Ctrl+J, Ctrl+<, Ctrl+> if you want make a symetrical slider or something symetrical, well just in case

[Easy]
Well to make a simple curve slider you don't need many points like this one 00:00:585 (1) - You can make it simple by use tri points rather than that
00:02:324 (3) - Make it simple looks like this

SPOILER

It looks better imo
00:05:802 (7) - It's better looks like this

SPOILER

00:07:541 (1,2,1) - Make It more symetrical like this

SPOILER

00:14:932 - Add a circle? with clap
00:17:976 (1,2,1) - Try this one, a lot better

SPOILER

00:26:671 (7) - Weird shape slider, maybe you can fix It?
00:31:889 (6,2) - 01:40:150 (7,2) - 01:55:802 (6,2) - This kind of overlapping should be avoided in an Easy or Normal diff, hard to read imo
01:19:715 (1) - This spinner should be start at 01:20:584 -
01:31:019 - Add a circle? with finish
02:02:758 (6) - Blanket?

SPOILER

02:36:237 (1) - This spinner should be start at 02:37:106 -
It doesn't sounds right if you did not put any notes here 03:25:802 - untill 03:28:845 - since the song back to upbeat again
How about add spinner here 03:27:324 - untill 03:28:845 -
04:13:628 (1) - This spinner should be start at 04:14:498 -
04:14:498 (1) - This spinner volume should be gradually down, why not put some points to down the volume

[Normal]
00:23:193 - Add a circle? with clap
00:26:671 (3) - Reduce one repeat slider and put a circle here 00:27:758 - It's sounds better
00:45:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - How about this kind of patern? sounds better imo

00:51:238 (4,5,6) - This patern sounds better

01:07:325 (3,5) - Make It more symetric?

SPOILER

01:31:019 - Add a circle? with finish
01:47:541 (5,6,7) - Sounds better

02:04:932 (6) - Delete one repeat slider and move to 02:05:367 -
02:10:150 (7) - Delete one repeat slider and put a circle here 02:10:802 -
02:11:237 - Add a circle?
02:57:977 (3,4) - Make It more symetric

SPOILER

03:12:542 (1) - This spinner should be end at 03:13:628 - and add finish
It doesn't sounds right if you did not put any notes here 03:25:802 - untill 03:28:845 - since the song back to upbeat again
How about add spinner here 03:27:324 - untill 03:28:845 -
04:13:628 (1) - This spinner should be start at 04:14:498 -
03:59:715 (7) - Delete one repeat and put a circle here 04:01:019 -
04:14:498 (1) - This spinner volume should be gradually down, why not put some points to down the volume

[Hard]
00:17:758 (3) - Delete? Doesn't sounds right
00:21:671 (2) - Same as above
00:21:019 (1) - Add finish at slider tail
01:52:106 (1) - Delete? Doesn't sounds right
01:57:867 - Add a circle
02:05:584 (1) - Change into triplet maybe?
02:10:150 (1) - Delete? Doesn't sounds right
03:28:954 - Add a circle
How about add spinner here 03:27:324 - untill 03:28:845 -
04:13:628 (1) - This spinner should be start at 04:14:498 -
03:35:802 (3,4,5) - Not stack properly
03:39:389 - Add a circle
03:53:302 - Same as above
00:49:932 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - A bit confusing
02:47:541 - Add a circle with finish
03:59:715 (7) - Delete one repeat and put a circle here 04:01:019 -
04:14:498 (1) - This spinner volume should be gradually down, why not put some points to down the volume

[Insane]
01:31:019 - Add a circle with finish
02:09:281 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Sugestion, you can make a star or polygonal jumps here
02:47:541 - Add a circle with finish
03:11:454 (1,2) - Weird, not sure about this one
04:14:498 (1) - This spinner volume should be gradually down, why not put some points to down the volume

Untuk diff easy sama normal masih agak aneh kak menurut aku, kalo masih bingung tanya aja ya kaaak
Good SB actually and good luck~

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-11-13T17:44:26+00:00

Ticket.

[General]

I recommend to use a better BG with 1024*768 =w=
SB Elements Not .png
sb\sb25.jpg
sb\sb13.jpg
sb\sb18.jpg
sb\sb16.jpg
sb\sb2.jpg
sb\sb26.jpg
sb\white.jpg
sb\sb1.jpg
sb\20.jpg
sb\sb4.jpg
sb\sb7.jpg
sb\sb22.jpg
sb\sb6.jpg
sb\sb17.jpg
sb\sb3.jpg
sb\sb8.jpg
sb\sb27.jpg
sb\sb32.jpg
sb\sb24.jpg
sb\sb21.jpg
Unused Image Files
lyrics\lyrics_4o.png
sb\black.png
Mention that: My belief is that REMAP CAN MAKE MORE PROGRESS IN MAPPING. So I will say some parts or some diffs should remap, means that now the part or the diff is really weird. I hope you can read all I written add make a better map.

[Easy]

00:00:585 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:02:324 (3) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start.
00:04:063 (5) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add NC.
00:05:802 (7) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:07:541 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:09:280 (1) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:10:584 (1) - Add a whistle and remove the finish, remove NC.
00:14:932 - Consider to add a note here, if you add it, add clap.
00:15:367 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:16:237 (3) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start.
00:19:715 (1) - Remove NC.
00:21:019 (2) - Add a finish.
00:21:454 (1) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start.
00:24:932 (5) - Add NC and blanket better.
00:26:671 (7) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider.
00:27:976 (1) - Remove NC.
00:28:411 (2) - Add a finish and remove the whistle on the start, add NC.
00:30:150 (4) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start.
00:31:889 (6) - Add a finish and remove the whistle on the entire slider, add NC.
00:33:193 (1) - Remove NC.
00:33:628 (2) - Remove the whistle on the end, remove the whistle on the entire slider.
00:31:889 (1,3) - Highly recommend not to overlap in Easy diff.
00:37:106 (3) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider.
00:38:845 (1) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start.
00:42:324 (1) - Finish on the start.
00:44:063 (3) - Add NC.
00:45:367 (1) - Remove NC.
00:45:802 (2) - Add NC.
00:49:280 (3) - Add NC.
00:50:584 (1) - Remove NC.
00:51:019 (2) - Add NC.
00:55:367 (1) - To make the end of a slider on the drum hit is not good imo. Try this way. , the same to 01:09:280 (5) - and some similar places.
00:58:845 (1) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start.
01:01:889 (4) - Add NC.
01:02:324 (5) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider.
01:05:802 (4) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider, add whistle on the start, add NC.
01:07:541 (6) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider.
01:10:584 (1) - Add a clap.
01:11:019 (2) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on the end, remove the clap on the entire slider.
01:12:324 (4) - Add a clap.
01:12:758 (5) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #1 (at 01:13:192), remove the clap on the end.
01:14:063 (6) - Add a clap, add NC.
01:14:498 (7) - Add a clap on repeat #1 (at 01:14:932).
01:15:802 (8) - Add a clap.
01:16:237 (9) - Remove the whistle on the entire slider.
01:17:976 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
01:18:845 (3) - Add a finish on the start.
Oh so many already……
I just want to say not add a whistle/finish/clap to the entire slider except it fits the music. It may make the song hears weird when playing.
Clap can be added to 2,4, like 01:17:541 - and 01:18:411 -
So I won't say anymore about the hitsounds, if I point out all that I will write maybe more than one page. >.< You should check it by yourself now.
01:38:411 (5) - NC
01:53:628 (3,4) - blanket better like
01:55:367 (5) - NC
01:55:802 (6,2) - No overlap.
01:57:106 (1) - Remove NC
02:02:324 (5) - NC
02:23:193 (5) - NC
03:32:758 (5) - NC
03:43:193 (5) - NC
03:50:150 (5) - NC
03:57:106 (5) - NC and 03:58:411 (1) - Remove NC
By the way, the rhythm is too simple, most are 2/1 sliders and a note. Try to make some differences.

[Normal]

Hitsounds problems recommended in Easy already.
Your sliders have only 3 shapes？ Similar silders are boring to play.
The diff need remapping imo. Also you can ignore this. It's hard for me to say briefly and totally, so I make a small normal diff. Hope you can have a reference.
http://puu.sh/5hgVs.osu

[Hard]

00:04:063 (6) - NC
00:07:541 (4) - ^
00:08:193 (1) - remove NC
Oh, I have to say here. Add NC according to the rhythm, sometimes according to vocal. Your NC are all in a mess.
00:45:802 (3) - And I forget to say in EZ and NM, try to use sliders like this：

3 nodes make it in a curve is enough, more nodes makes the slider more weird. Such as 01:39:280 (1,2) - oh, what a bad blanket!
00:49:932 (4,5) - I suggest not using notes after sliders and stack on the start of silders. Stack on the end is better imo.
Try to use more area in corners：
SPOILER
02:04:715 (1,1) - This kind of overlap is more seen in Insane not a Hard.
02:03:845 (3) - When change the speed of sliders, please NC. But I think there is no reason to slow down the sliders.
My suggestion is also to remap. Your style of Hard is far from nowadays maybe.

[Insane]

The same NC, hitsounds and slider problems mentioned before.
Rhythm are similar with Hard, try to full the rhythm more.
Patterns are so similar, make some differences.
00:26:890 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I still think that the jump doesn't fit the song.
01:04:281 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is in bad placement.
01:12:325 (2,1) - flow is bad.
01:40:803 (4,5) - weird
02:14:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as before
03:29:064 (5,6,7) - weird spacing
unsnap
00:47:324 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:38:629 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:38:629 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:39:499 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:39:499 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:40:151 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:40:151 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:26:454 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Finally, I also think Insane should be remapped, most because of the weird spacing. You can refer to some recently ranked maps' Insane diff.

[Taiko Muzu]

I can't mod Taiko diff but there are something warning.

00:14:932 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
03:39:280 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

I hope that it can be ranked with your more hard work and progress.

When I was a new mapper, I give my 1st map to some famous modders, thay just tell me:" shit map! remap that plz." But I didn't give up. I have mapped 2 songs and remapped about 10 times or more. Finding more mistakes, making more good patterns, these help me a lot on mapping. And just recently, I have my first ranked map with only in one month, and I join popner's team to finding more good maps. I grow up with all of this.

And I really hope you can, too.

Good luck with your map.

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-14T05:01:31+00:00

whoa, I seriously appreciate this all o.o
it's right that the hard different seems need some reaping (actually I realize this but nobody seems concerned about it before, so that's it)
and for the other different, I'll check other's opinion before considering to remap
thanks yuki, you really motivated me as a new mapper!

-Neipezi

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Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2013-11-14T11:49:33+00:00

hi o_o m4m

[General]
- 20% of the total volume added. the sound is too small.

[Easy]
- slider tick rate -1
00:09:280 (1,1) - NC remove
00:27:976 (1,2) - NC change
00:50:584 (1) - NC remove
00:52:758 (1) - finish add
00:53:193 (2) - 00:54:498 (3,4) - delete, then add Arrowhead this
01:38:411 (5) - NC remove
01:41:454 (1) - NC add
02:05:802 (1) - finish add
02:09:280 (1) - ^
02:16:237 (1) - NC remove
02:19:715 - finish add
02:35:367 (3) - x:368 y:188 move
03:01:454 (5) - clap reomve , finish add
03:58:411 (1) - NC remove
04:12:324 (1) - ^
04:13:628 (1) - 04:14:498 (1) - here a spinner start point

[Hard]
00:28:302 (2) - circle delet
01:39:498 (2) - blanket
01:56:889 (1) - finish add
03:35:802 (3) - x:280 y:72 one place a fixing
04:09:063 (1) - finish add
04:09:932 (1) - ^
04:11:019 (4) - ^
04:13:411 (1,2,3,4) - to the beat is not right

BOX

[Insane]
00:28:084 - here a circle add?
01:06:237 (4,5) - I do not know the meaning of it

01:09:280 (1,1) - NC remove
01:11:020 (1) - ^
01:16:672 (1) - ^
02:26:020 (1,1) - ^
02:28:629 (1) - ^
03:03:629 (1,1) - ^
03:11:454 (1,2) - snap is too wide.
03:28:738 (2) - circle delet
04:04:281 (1,1) - NC remove
04:09:064 (1,1,1) - ^
04:13:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to be the same as

good lucky

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2013-11-14T12:05:50+00:00

hello~~ from my queue's M4M ></
nice song!

Easy
uhh...first,i think you should keep a constant distance between two notes,i have seen many like 0.94,0.81.
00:24:498 (4,5) - (5) less bending to blanket perfect
00:47:541 (1,2,3) - why not try this? :

01:00:150 (2,3) - blanket
01:04:063 (2,3) - ^
02:02:324 (5,6) - ...jump? fix this please ._.
02:21:454 (3,4) - almost overlap
04:01:889 (2) - try this rhythm will better to be played by beginner :

i think there are many blanket problem in this difficult,but it has look fine already.

Normal
00:06:890 (1,2) - try this rhythm will be better :

00:35:802 (1,2) - parallel
01:08:194 (5,1) - stack better (0.4→0.0?)
02:54:499 (3) - add finish on start
03:59:499 (6) - move to 72|152
03:59:715 (7) - slide to 04:00:584 only please

Hard
00:22:106 (4) - do you like this shape?? :

01:18:411 (4,5) - this maybe better... :

02:10:802 (4,5) - stack better
03:00:150 (3) - let this slider just like 03:01:019 (5),i think that shape you use of there is a little weird...
good difficult,i can't find more problem :>

Insane
00:35:584 (4,5) - they are very not east to be read ;_;
01:41:890 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:48:412 (2) - less bending,like 02:47:977 (1)
hmm...i'm still not good at modding Insane,sorry :<

that all i can find,your SB is awesome ><
Good Luck~!!

El SolarBeam

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-14T13:07:39+00:00

wow, it seems i overused the modding queues ._."
please give me some days (or week because busy lately) to implement the changes

anyway, thanks for all your input~

EDIT : all suggestions on easy diff above are implemented

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2013-11-24T05:13:28+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Rukaru

829 posts

Joined April 2012

Rukaru 2013-11-14T15:52:55+00:00

hello there, from your request.

[General]
check some stuff on AImod. but I think there is no problem at all.

[Easy]
nah, first time impression by playing this map. patterns and rhythm are good, but hitsound need some works because many hitsound here is not consistent and that makes this map a little "sounds bad".
as example this : 00:01:889 (2) - has whistle here, but on 00:03:628 (4) - whistle disappeared. well, it's not affect the gameplay but still, sometimes it sounds bad. try using whistle on every 2nd and 4th white tick.

00:10:584 (1) - remove finish here. I do not hear any cymbal on this. doesn't fit well with the song.
00:15:367 (1) - remove this clap. add on 00:16:237 (3) - slider head instead. because it's backed with strong drum here. so it could be fits the song.
00:17:976 (1) - add clap on slider head to emphasize the drum.
00:19:715 (1) - remove new combo?
00:26:671 (7) - clap on slider head.
00:28:411 (2) - finish please. such a waste if there is no finish hitsound here. fits well with changed phase on the song. therefore a new combo should start here too.
00:33:628 (2) - bad overlap. how about this?
SPOILER
00:54:932 (4) - remove finish. because the finish much more better here 00:55:367 (1) *slider end
01:18:845 (3) - well, how about finish on this 01:18:845 (3) - on both head and end slider?
01:19:715 (1) - remove finish please. don't add any hitsound on this spinner. because there is nothing to emphasize here.
01:19:715 (1) - in my opinion this slider will be better if end at 01:22:324.
01:41:889 (2) - bad overlap again, same case as 00:33:628 (2) . try the same pattern maybe?
01:55:802 (6,1,2) - lets try new pattern here. like this...
SPOILER
02:01:019 (4) - I think you should keep the rhythm same as 01:59:280 (2) - well, try different rythym here. maybe slider and a circle or vice-versa? but if you insist to keep that long slider, I recommend you to put that slider on 02:00:584 (3) - there is a long vocal here. so it's better than (4)
02:00:584 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - here is the rhythm I recommend if you insist to keep long slider.
SPOILER
02:12:324 (4) - finish should be on 02:12:758 (1) - you can hear cymbal on (1)
02:21:454 (3,4,5) - how about this?
SPOILER
02:26:237 (8) - remove finish here. does not fit well with song. and there is a better place to place finish on 02:26:671 (1)
02:36:237 (1) - make the slider end at 02:38:845 ? well, same reason with 01:19:715 (1) and it's a waste if you can't see the lyric just because of this spinner.
02:54:498 (5) - finish would be awesome on this note.
04:01:889 (2) - this...I think many player will losing combo because this slider. well, it's up to you to change or not. xD but how about make this slider into a plain slider which have same length? it should be easier to read.
04:10:584 (4) - remove finish here, add on this slider head instead 04:11:019 (5)
04:13:628 - 04:14:063 - you should map this. and...
04:14:498 - this should be start of the spinner. I think this is better.

that's all for easy. I like the rhythm. but hitsound is a bit...not good. in my opinion.
don't worry, you'll improve by the time.

[Normal]

well, much more better than before remap. but still same problem with easy, need works on hitsound. use clap on every time you hear a loud drum like 00:16:238 (4) - *on slider head

00:07:759 (2) - I think you should delete this. why? this is beginning phase on the song. you shouldn't have to make this same as the next part.
00:10:151 (6) - remove finish on the slider end.
00:15:368 (2) - remove clap on slider end and add clap on 00:16:238 (4) slider head instead.
00:20:584 (4) - oh...I hear cymbal here, how about adding finish here?
00:31:455 (6) - remove finish, add here 00:31:890 (7) instead. finish sounds better on downbeat (long white line). try it!
00:34:933 (4,5) - up ^
00:39:281 (4,5,6) - I see you following the vocal here, but you miss a note here 00:40:367
00:41:019 (8) - if you do so ^, please move this to 00:41:019 . it should be good. try it.
01:02:759 (7) - wrong placed finish. it should be 01:03:194 (1)
01:10:151 (1) - add finish on slider head maybe?
01:42:758 (5) - remove finish.
01:47:541 (5) - keep it same as 01:45:803 (2,3) and remove (6) because this is still in one combo which follow the music, not vocal.
02:04:932 (6) - try this. change to a plain slider, not repeat slider and make it start at 02:05:367 . I think it sounds better.
02:10:150 (7,8) - try this
SPOILER
02:36:238 (1) - uh...same with on easy diff.
from 02:47:976 to 03:01:019 I think you should keep 1/1 rhythm. well, the song on this part is really calm. so it maybe a good idea to make this part of the map is calm too.
03:12:325 (8) - no, remove finish please.
03:30:151 (3) - oh...swap place with 03:30:584 (4,5) . make 03:30:584 (4,5) start at 03:30:151 (3)
03:35:803 (8,1) - again, finish should be on (1)
03:45:368 (8) - what's wrong with this rhythm? you are supposed to following the vocal here. you follows the vocal from 03:44:063
03:54:933 (4) - move this to 03:54:715. that should be good.
04:14:498 (1) - please consider to make this spinner sounds "fade out". by make some green line on every white tick and reduce the volume by 5-8% on each of them.

03:15:584 to 03:27:976 : dammit, I really like this break. you can hear the violin clearly here, it just so beautiful. perfect break!
[]
mods to be continued.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-11-20T13:53:08+00:00

just a demo

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakae Mitsuki - Pure Love, True Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55819
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
CountdownOffset: 3
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Pure Love, True Love
TitleUnicode:Pure Love, True Love
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:中恵光城
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Hard
Source:LOVELY QUEST
Tags:hook hooksoft meis clauson sumita mao eroge gal visual novel opening hatsune lavander nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
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El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-20T18:22:52+00:00

whoa, I'm waiting for this \:D/

and editing some part on easy diff

raheta_adi wrote:
hello there, from your request.

[General]
check some stuff on AImod. but I think there is no problem at all.

[Easy]
nah, first time impression by playing this map. patterns and rhythm are good, but hitsound need some works because many hitsound here is not consistent and that makes this map a little "sounds bad".
as example this : 00:01:889 (2) - has whistle here, but on 00:03:628 (4) - whistle disappeared. well, it's not affect the gameplay but still, sometimes it sounds bad. try using whistle on every 2nd and 4th white tick.
00:10:584 (1) - remove finish here. I do not hear any cymbal on this. doesn't fit well with the song.
00:15:367 (1) - remove this clap. add on 00:16:237 (3) - slider head instead. because it's backed with strong drum here. so it could be fits the song.
00:17:976 (1) - add clap on slider head to emphasize the drum.
00:19:715 (1) - remove new combo?
00:26:671 (7) - clap on slider head.
00:28:411 (2) - finish please. such a waste if there is no finish hitsound here. fits well with changed phase on the song. therefore a new combo should start here too.
00:33:628 (2) - bad overlap. how about this?
SPOILER
(changed into different pattern)
00:54:932 (4) - remove finish. because the finish much more better here 00:55:367 (1) *slider end
01:18:845 (3) - well, how about finish on this 01:18:845 (3) - on both head and end slider? (i like it as is)
01:19:715 (1) - remove finish please. don't add any hitsound on this spinner. because there is nothing to emphasize here.
01:19:715 (1) - in my opinion this slider will be better if end at 01:22:324.
01:41:889 (2) - bad overlap again, same case as 00:33:628 (2) . try the same pattern maybe? (changed into different pattern)
01:55:802 (6,1,2) - lets try new pattern here. like this...
SPOILER
(i'll think it over)
02:01:019 (4) - I think you should keep the rhythm same as 01:59:280 (2) - well, try different rythym here. maybe slider and a circle or vice-versa? but if you insist to keep that long slider, I recommend you to put that slider on 02:00:584 (3) - there is a long vocal here. so it's better than (4) (changed into reverse slider)
02:00:584 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - here is the rhythm I recommend if you insist to keep long slider.
SPOILER
(i'll think it over)
02:12:324 (4) - finish should be on 02:12:758 (1) - you can hear cymbal on (1)
02:21:454 (3,4,5) - how about this?
SPOILER
02:26:237 (8) - remove finish here. does not fit well with song. and there is a better place to place finish on 02:26:671 (1)
02:36:237 (1) - make the slider end at 02:38:845 ? well, same reason with 01:19:715 (1) and it's a waste if you can't see the lyric just because of this spinner.
02:54:498 (5) - finish would be awesome on this note.
04:01:889 (2) - this...I think many player will losing combo because this slider. well, it's up to you to change or not. xD but how about make this slider into a plain slider which have same length? it should be easier to read. (it's more challenging \:D/)
04:10:584 (4) - remove finish here, add on this slider head instead 04:11:019 (5)
04:13:628 - 04:14:063 - you should map this. and... (i like it as is)
04:14:498 - this should be start of the spinner. I think this is better.
that's all for easy. I like the rhythm. but hitsound is a bit...not good. in my opinion.
don't worry, you'll improve by the time. (i've improved for now /o/)

the rest are implemented~
and for normal diff, i'm still not sure what to do so i'll think it over for a while

Datzuke-Oni

49 posts

Joined October 2012

Datzuke-Oni 2013-11-24T18:29:33+00:00

1 - Very good used the Kiai Time
2 - Pace according to the melody
3 - Storyboard Consistent with Betmap
4 - I recommend that uses TO custom skins

Elisha_old

203 posts

Joined November 2012

Elisha_old 2013-11-24T20:28:34+00:00

>insert irrelevant comment here<

Last edited by Elisha_old 2013-11-26T02:00:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Datzuke-Oni

49 posts

Joined October 2012

Datzuke-Oni 2013-11-24T22:45:33+00:00

Elisha wrote:
^IGNORE POSTS FROM THIS USER AT ALL TIMES^

IGNORE THIS YOU PLEASE JUST TRYING TO USERS ridicule

TRYING TO IGNORE humiliate

ELISHA IGNORE AS A USER

Datzuke-Oni

49 posts

Joined October 2012

Datzuke-Oni 2013-11-25T04:23:20+00:00

Ok saw your beatmap and these are my observations:

Ok saw your beatmap and these are my observations:

1 - Levels fit well with the Timing and rhythm of the song
2 - Storyboard consistent with the melody
3 - no problems are reported regarding tistancia

recommendations:

1 - Add it Claps, Cymbals and uses TO A finish when the Kiai Time
2 - Use skins when a song of this type

Datzuke-Oni

49 posts

Joined October 2012

Datzuke-Oni 2013-11-25T04:23:45+00:00

Datzuke-Oni wrote:
Ok saw your beatmap and these are my observations:

Ok saw your beatmap and these are my observations:

1 - Levels fit well with the Timing and rhythm of the song
2 - Storyboard consistent with the melody
3 - no problems are reported regarding tistancia

recommendations:

1 - Add it Claps, Cymbals and uses TO A finish when the Kiai Time
2 - Use skins when a song of this type

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-25T13:27:43+00:00

Datzuke-Oni wrote:
Ok saw your beatmap and these are my observations:

Ok saw your beatmap and these are my observations:

1 - Levels fit well with the Timing and rhythm of the song
2 - Storyboard consistent with the melody
3 - no problems are reported regarding tistancia

recommendations:

1 - Add it Claps, Cymbals and uses TO A finish when the Kiai Time
2 - Use skins when a song of this type

um.. not much change, but thanks for your opinion~

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-11-28T04:19:53+00:00

Finally Finished

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55819
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[Metadata]
Title:Pure Love, True Love
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Hard-24clap
Source:LOVELY QUEST
Tags:hook hooksoft meis clauson sumita mao eroge gal visual novel opening hatsune lavander nardoxyribonucleic
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I think you need make S:C2's clap as normalhit,so I can make sample better?

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-28T09:07:24+00:00

ts8zs wrote:

Finally Finished

osu file format v12

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I think you need make S:C2's clap as normalhit,so I can make sample better?

whoa, it looks really neat >.<

for hitclap um.. it could be changed but, I don't think the other hitsound might fit the song
if you have any samples for another hitsound, I can reconsider it

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2013-11-28T14:04:15+00:00

From lZenxl's Mod Queue

d = don
k = kat
D = big don
K = big kat
">" = Change to

Graphics Check ( I don't usually do this but since there is some storyboard, I'll check it. )

03:27:106 - Flash isn't needed!

Amazing Storyboard overall, however, the texts might be too rough on the edges!

Since you used a Black BG, it is really "rough" graphically when playing

This is an example of a better transition

It is not a must to change it, but it might help you

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni

Can't find any OBVIOUS problems, amazingly modded and mapped! Most of my mods will be optional suggestions

Ohey it's Nardo again! o/ *wave*

Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:46:671 + d ( Feels Empty )
00:54:715 (128,129) - k > K ( It seems like you want more emphasis on these notes in particular, since you left some spaces between these notes and the others )
01:10:041 + k ( It leads to a big don, so I feel that there must be more notes to make this emphasised )
01:34:062 (320) - d > k ( Not really any reason actually, it sounds nice. ehehehe. ehe.)
02:19:389 + d ( Same reason as above :3 )
02:24:714 (207,209) - d,k > D,K ( Sounds like it needs more emphasis here )
03:15:367 + Inheriting Point that decreases volume to 50 or 60%
03:21:671 + d - 03:21:889 (21) - d > k ( Sounds better to me than a simple don )
03:25:367 + Inheriting Point that increases volume to 80%

SV Check

No Problems!

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Turn off letter box

Title Check
No Problems!

Muzukashii

Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

You have a lot of "New Combo"s, double check that **:**:*** (1,1,1) you modded 3 notes instead of one.

00:27:758 (1) - d > k ( Needs more emphasis on the Higher pitched notes )
00:34:280 & 00:34:389 & 00:34:498 - 0,0,d > k,k,k ( Add a bit of variety in the pattern )
00:41:889 (1) - d > k ( I rarely see Muzu Diffs use different keys in 1/4 triplets, most of them use the same keys )
00:42:324 (3) - d > D ( More emphasis )
00:49:280 (1) - d > k ( I rarely see Muzu Diffs use different keys in 1/4 triplets, most of them use the same keys )
00:54:715 (2) - d > D ( More emphasis )
01:03:193 (1) - d > K ( You know the reason )
01:17:106 (1,2,6) - d > k ( Ditto )
01:58:411 (1) - d > k ( Ditto )
02:11:237 (2) - d > D ( More emphasis )
02:12:541 (1) - d > k
02:35:584 (1) - k > d
02:42:976 + d ( Seems like you're missing a beat here )
03:15:367 + Inheriting Point that decreases volume to 50 or 60%
03:22:215 (1,1) - d > k
03:25:367 + Inheriting Point that increases volume to 80%
03:25:802 (4) - d > k
03:28:628 (5,1) - d > k
03:36:237 (1) - d > k

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

03:25:802 to 03:39:606 should add another Kiai Time
- If you do this, make sure every Diff is constant in Kiai Time

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

ts8zs's Diff has a different Artist name, change it
Careful with filesize
Turn off Letterbox!

Title Check

I don't really see mappers use "Taiko Muzukashii", since Muzukashii already represents Taiko, Change to Muzukashii instead

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-28T15:19:55+00:00

whoa, that's fast! thanks for the mod~

lZenxl wrote:
From lZenxl's Mod Queue

d = don
k = kat
D = big don
K = big kat
">" = Change to

Graphics Check ( I don't usually do this but since there is some storyboard, I'll check it. )

03:27:106 - Flash isn't needed! (I still like putting this here orz)

Amazing Storyboard overall, however, the texts might be too rough on the edges!

Since you used a Black BG, it is really "rough" graphically when playing

This is an example of a better transition

It is not a must to change it, but it might help you (now that you mention it o.o will reconsider later)

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

You have a lot of "New Combo"s, double check that **:**:*** (1,1,1) you modded 3 notes instead of one. (fixed)

00:27:758 (1) - d > k ( Needs more emphasis on the Higher pitched notes ) (fixed)
00:34:280 & 00:34:389 & 00:34:498 - 0,0,d > k,k,k ( Add a bit of variety in the pattern ) (it still feels inconsistent)
00:41:889 (1) - d > k ( I rarely see Muzu Diffs use different keys in 1/4 triplets, most of them use the same keys ) (fixed)
00:42:324 (3) - d > D ( More emphasis ) (fixed)
00:49:280 (1) - d > k ( I rarely see Muzu Diffs use different keys in 1/4 triplets, most of them use the same keys ) (fixed)
00:54:715 (2) - d > D ( More emphasis ) (agree)
01:03:193 (1) - d > K ( You know the reason ) (fixed lol)
01:17:106 (1,2,6) - d > k ( Ditto )
01:58:411 (1) - d > k ( Ditto )
02:11:237 (2) - d > D ( More emphasis )
02:12:541 (1) - d > k
02:35:584 (1) - k > d
(fixed)
02:42:976 + d ( Seems like you're missing a beat here ) (nice idea)
03:15:367 + Inheriting Point that decreases volume to 50 or 60% (it's already decreased to 40% beforehand)
03:22:215 (1,1) - d > k (fixed)
03:25:367 + Inheriting Point that increases volume to 80% (nope)
03:25:802 (4) - d > k
03:28:628 (5,1) - d > k
03:36:237 (1) - d > k
(fixed)

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

03:25:802 to 03:39:606 should add another Kiai Time
- If you do this, make sure every Diff is constant in Kiai Time (not really necessary)

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

ts8zs's Diff has a different Artist name, change it (forgot to tell, that's still WIP orz)
Careful with filesize (will reduce it)
Turn off Letterbox!

Title Check

I don't really see mappers use "Taiko Muzukashii", since Muzukashii already represents Taiko, Change to Muzukashii instead
(I'm still not sure about this, so I leave it as is for a while)

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,008 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-11-29T02:11:24+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
From lZenxl's Mod Queue

d = don
k = kat
D = big don
K = big kat
">" = Change to

Oni
Can't find any OBVIOUS problems, amazingly modded and mapped! Most of my mods will be optional suggestions Thanks

Ohey it's Nardo again! o/ *wave* ;3

Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:46:671 + d ( Feels Empty ) added some notes there.
00:54:715 (128,129) - k > K ( It seems like you want more emphasis on these notes in particular, since you left some spaces between these notes and the others ) Good idea~ fixed
01:10:041 + k ( It leads to a big don, so I feel that there must be more notes to make this emphasised ) I see your point. But the pattern will become kkkkD, which is unrankable (In higher BPM, 1/4 cannot contain finishes)... remain unchanged.
01:34:062 (320) - d > k ( Not really any reason actually, it sounds nice. ehehehe. ehe.) fixed
02:19:389 + d ( Same reason as above :3 ) I think leaving this blank is better~ :3
02:24:714 (207,209) - d,k > D,K ( Sounds like it needs more emphasis here ) fixed the former note.
03:15:367 + Inheriting Point that decreases volume to 50 or 60% fixed
03:21:671 + d - 03:21:889 (21) - d > k ( Sounds better to me than a simple don ) nope. I mapped mainly the vocal in this part.
03:25:367 + Inheriting Point that increases volume to 80% fixed

SV Check

No Problems!

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Turn off letter box Since storyboard is applied, I cannot turn off it.

Title Check
No Problems!

Thanks for your mod Zenx~

Update: http://puu.sh/5wlQv

Last edited by Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-11-29T02:34:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-11-29T02:29:44+00:00

fogotten change the diff name._.bbbb

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakae Mitsuki - Pure Love, True Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55819
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
CountdownOffset: 3
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Pure Love, True Love
TitleUnicode:Pure Love, True Love
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:Nakae Mitsuki
Creator:El SolarBeam
Version:Ts8zs' Hard
Source:LOVELY QUEST
Tags:hook hooksoft meis clauson sumita mao eroge gal visual novel opening hatsune lavander nardoxyribonucleic ts8zs
BeatmapID:330383
BeatmapSetID:123687

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
2,195367,204932
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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208,128,223845,2,0,P|242:147|281:148,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,72,224498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,152,224715,2,0,B|88:224|88:224|88:272|32:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,224,225367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,152,225584,2,0,P|80:216|192:208,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,226237,6,0,B|128:96|72:72|72:72|128:32,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,227541,2,0,L|336:96,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,227976,2,0,L|376:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,228411,2,0,P|400:232|336:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,229280,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,229498,2,0,P|288:168|280:128,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,230150,2,0,P|248:312|336:272,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,230802,2,0,L|480:160,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,240,231237,2,0,L|384:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,200,231671,6,0,B|312:144|360:112|360:112|320:64,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,24,232324,2,0,L|448:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,144,232758,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,176,232976,2,0,P|400:216|376:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,233302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,296,233411,2,8,L|248:304,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,233628,6,0,B|256:248|232:199|232:199|208:144,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,248,234715,2,0,L|104:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,235150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,235367,2,0,P|280:104|344:80,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,24,236019,2,0,P|392:48|392:120,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,236454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,236671,2,0,P|352:288|360:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,237106,6,0,P|168:272|88:280,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,216,237758,2,0,L|120:192,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,238193,2,0,L|288:200,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,208,238628,6,0,P|323:275|248:288,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,239280,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,208,239498,2,0,P|96:128|40:80,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,239932,2,0,L|296:96,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,96,240258,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,96,240367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,96,240476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,88,240584,6,0,P|416:168|448:248,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,304,241454,2,0,P|256:312|208:288,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,241889,2,0,P|277:193|321:163,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,242324,2,0,P|370:270|374:324,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,243193,6,0,L|144:88,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,232,243737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,243845,2,0,P|248:288|296:280,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,244498,2,0,P|312:160|264:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,244932,2,0,P|160:200|112:192,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,128,245367,2,0,P|152:112|200:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,112,245802,2,0,L|352:112,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,246237,2,0,L|328:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,246671,2,0,P|256:176|312:120,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,352,247976,6,0,L|256:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,248411,2,0,L|416:312,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,248845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,320,249063,2,0,P|512:243|456:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,249715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,216,249932,2,0,P|312:144|360:80,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,250584,2,0,P|424:224|376:288,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,216,251889,6,0,B|168:216|168:216|120:152,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,252758,2,0,P|320:208|264:288,2,160,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,89,253845,2,0,P|207:121|200:160,2,80,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,254498,12,0,257758,0:0:0:0:

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-29T12:08:50+00:00

I intend to update the beatmap after there's another mod coming, but anyway thanks guys~
(well, it's troublesome for me to update the map for every small changes orz)

Lanturn

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Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2013-11-30T03:09:04+00:00

Sorry for the late response. Now that I have full focus on modding today, I'm starting off with yours.

I think I must have deleted and redownloaded this map like 20 times by the time I finished this mod XD

[General]

Hitsounds:
You should add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav file | http://puu.sh/2HHgJ | Remove the 2 | This makes it so you can't hear the rumbly noise from the slider. (have the song playing in the editor on Easy diff, and press z when its playing a slider.. You'll notice how annoying it sounds right away

)

Difficulty Settings:
Easy: Fine
Normal: Fine
Hard: Reduce AR by 1? 138 BPM is pretty slow so AR7 should be more than enough for a hard.
Insane: Fine.
Muzu / Oni: Fine

Combo Colors:

AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,167,34
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,26,26
Combo5 : 140,26,255
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,172,47
Combo2 : 85,255,85
Combo3 : 0,232,232
Combo4 : 251,49,49
Combo5 : 163,70,255
- [Nardo's Taiko Oni] :
Combo1 : 255,173,51
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 251,40,40
Combo5 : 145,34,255
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,167,34
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,26,26
Combo5 : 140,26,255
- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Combo1 : 255,172,47
Combo2 : 85,255,85
Combo3 : 0,232,232
Combo4 : 251,49,49
Combo5 : 163,70,255
- [Ts8zs' Hard-24clap] :
Combo1 : 255,173,51
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 251,40,40
Combo5 : 145,34,255

First off, the fact that your combo colors in your own difficulties don't match isn't a good thing.
I suggest copying the combo colors from your favorite difficulty into the others, and probably even the Guest Difficulties unless they have a special reason to use different colors. Taiko doesn't matter at all because you'll never see them, but its also silly seeing them not even consistent. I would honestly just copy and replace them all from your favorite diffs colors through the .osu file under [Colours]

Kiai:
Due to probably some offset or timing changes, your kiai is off by 1ms on almost all the diffs. Its best if you go through them all again and resnap them properly. I believe everything is off by 1ms, but its better to go manually resnap it all. Also I suggest resnapping your notes incase they are 1ms off as well.

Also I believe its better to end your kiai on the downbeat like | 01:20:584 - instead of 01:20:367 -

Tags:
ラブリークエストラブクエ | Japanese spelling of the game (also under the title) and its short version
Sound | The CD is called "Sound Quest" Since you already have Quest in the title, it can be omitted.

Silly thing I came across: http://puu.sh/5xe2B.jpg | but the CD lists it as Pure Love, True Love | http://www.hook-net.jp/lovelyquest/download.htm | oh well. Since you have the full version, its better to use the comma instead of the period.

[Storyboard]
Wonderful storyboard, only a couple things caught my attention:

lyrics/creator.png | 802 | This applies to all the other credits as well. Instead of starting off with this whole section to introduce your map and such, why not move it to a break where people will be able to read it? As of right now, you can probably place half of it at 01:23:628 - and the 2nd half at 02:40:150 - or something. All there is at this spot are some light effects and just pure blackness. This gives people something to look at during the breaks, and suits the map much better.

Background.jpg | 233302 | Basically this transition to the SB/sb33.png is a little strange. Did you mean to have this little bit of a jump? It would be better if sb33.png was moved up to the same y coordinate as background.jpg, and even better if it started on the same location entirely of background.jpg | which is 351,238 | sb33.png starts at 320,240 I believe? | Try opening your .osb and doing this:

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240
M,0,233411,233519,320,240,319,240
F,0,233411,233628,0,0.9897093
S,0,233411,254498,1.033032
M,0,233519,254498,319,240,205,240
V,0,233628,,0.9504516,1
F,0,233628,244063,0.9897093,1
F,0,244063,254498,1,0

Try changing it to this:

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240
 M,0,233411,233519,351,238,319,238
 F,0,233411,233628,0,0.9897093
 S,0,233411,254498,1.033032
 M,0,233519,254498,319,238,205,238
 V,0,233628,,0.9504516,1
 F,0,233628,244063,0.9897093,1
 F,0,244063,254498,1,0

or try this:

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240
 M,0,233411,233519,351,238,351,238
 F,0,233411,233628,0,0.9897093
 S,0,233411,254498,1.033032
 M,0,233519,254498,351,238,205,238
 V,0,233628,,0.9504516,1
 F,0,233628,244063,0.9897093,1
 F,0,244063,254498,1,0

You may have to adjust the size a little bit because background.jpg and sb33.png are a bit different. I tried to resize it for you. Try changing the code for S to this:

S,0,233411,254498,1.03885

I believe a combination of the 2nd choice and the above size code would be the absolute best fix to this. Hopefully it helps. Also, so you know | Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240 | is the 2nd thing in your .osb file, so it shouldn't be hard to find.

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Now that you've read all that, and hopefully applied all the changes. I'd really suggest doing this for your other SB pictures as well. I believe its sb17 and sb 18? at around 01:43:954 - | the transition between these two is rather ugly. This is basically how you do this trick. | Delete both of them to start |
Then take SB17 Place it at its starting point ( 01:42:650 - ), resize, and do its movement. This time, move it all the way to the end of where sb18 ends. (I believe it's at 01:44:932 - ) After you have this, save, open your .osb file. Control+F and search for "sb17" after finding it, it'll look something similar to this:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb17.jpg",320,240
 S,0,102650,,1.180364
 M,0,102650,104932,450,266,435,245

S is Size, and M is Movement.

Copy and paste all of this, rename SB\sb17.jpg to SB\sb18.jpg
save the .osb file, and reload your map (without saving on your map directly, or your .osb will be overwritten)

Next, apply your fade outs and ins on SB17 and SB18.. and thats it.

You'll have a smooth transition.

Here is an example of what it turns out like (first delete SB17 and SB18, and then copy paste this in, at any spot in the background section.) Notice how the movement and change between the pictures is flawless. Try it out yourself. If you want a faster transition, reduce the time that SB18 fades in on.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb17.jpg",320,240
 S,0,102650,,1.180364
 F,0,102650,102867,0,1
 M,0,102650,105041,450,266,435,245
 F,0,102867,104498,1
 F,0,104498,104606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb18.jpg",320,240
 S,0,102650,,1.180364
 F,0,102650,103845,0
 M,0,102650,105041,450,266,435,245
 F,0,103845,104063,0,1
 F,0,104063,104824,1
 F,0,104824,105041,1,0

Now.. after doing all this, and if you like it, you could apply it your other pictures as well. The trick is copying and pasting if you want smooth transitions. A great example is the map I will link at the bottom. But yeah, hopefully this helps in someway.

effect/tpfp.png |259282 | You have a spinner here on all your diffs making this not viewable for those with a full skin when its resizing itself inwards. It might be better to start the resizing inwards after the spinner, unless you aren't worried about people seeing the effect. In this case, it might just be better to have a fade-in instead.

Lovely SB, reminds me of the one on Samipale's map for Colorful Days by him and Shinkuu. You should check it out for ideas on your SB as I personally think with a few more touchups, you can create an amazing masterpiece.

alright.. I think that's enough data stuff for now.. If there is anything else, i'm sure someone else will notice.

[Easy]
This difficulty is missing hitsounds all over the place. I highly highly suggest you go through the song once and making sure you have everything correct. Your whistles are a bit strange as well, and almost seem random.

00:17:976 (1,3) - These could use a little touch-up to blanket it better. use the approach circle from (5) and try to blanket it around the edge a bit better.
00:23:193 (3) - is this whistle slider intended? | You use a few others, but I'm not sure what your plan is for them. 00:53:193 (2) - is another spot.
00:27:976 (8,1) - you could nudge the (1) over slightly and give this a better blanket as well (approach circles are some of the best things when trying to blanket stuff) | I won't be much of a Nazi anymore after this, but I think lots of your sliders could use a double-check
00:55:367 (1) - Try adding a bit of a curve into this?
00:56:237 (2) - no finish? I'm not really sure I'm following your hitsounds
01:34:932 (1,2) - I'm not sure symmetry is the best thing to follow for the (1) slider as it sticks itself into the top of the map making the gap from (1) to (2) look strange. Maybe try redesigning this slider or placing (2) in a different spot much like how you have the 01:32:758 (2) - circle placed.
01:41:889 (2,3) - Let's make the difficult a little easier. Instead of having a reverse on (2), how about ending it at 01:42:324 - and adding a 1/2 slider much like you have at 01:18:845 (3) - This also follows the lyrics better as it doesn't join the two words.
01:43:193 (1,1) - I'm wondering if the 1/1 gap here might be a bit hard for an Easy Diff. Generally you want give a bit more room after a slider or it may make it a bit difficult for the newer players. If you believe the 1/1 gap is fine, try moving the slider closer to the middle of the map so people will be able to get to it faster. A good tip is to place a circle where your slider ends, and use the distance snapping to find a good location on how far away the next note should be from the center point. | http://puu.sh/5xfDW.jpg
01:55:802 (2,1) - the (1) slider looks really odd and I don't believe it really fits. I think this slider would be better off trying to avoid the blankets, and ending underneath an earlier note.
02:21:454 (3,4) - The (3) should be changed completely. or the (4) should be placed over to the left side of the (3)'s end. Having the slider almost touch the (4) creates an awkward distance gap and strange look that isn't visually appealing at all.
02:31:889 (7) - This one is a bit strange as well, how about something simple? It really doesn't fit in with your current map style and looks.
02:49:715 (3,2) - (2) could definitely be adjusted so it doesn't overlap with the (3)
03:25:802 (1,2,3) - instead of making this the most difficult part of your song, how about a simple 3/2 slider? | http://puu.sh/5xght.jpg | No need to make one part of this song overly complicated for newer players.
03:37:976 (3) - You could probably get away with changing this to a 1/2 slider, You could also probably get away with deleting 03:38:845 (4,5) - as well as they don't serve much purpose, or at least (5) doesn't | you could also try something like you have at 04:03:193 (1) -
03:44:932 (3,4) - As I mentioned with some other spots. This would probably look much better going off the opposite side from where it is now. A little bit of remapping would be needed, but it'll look and play much better.
03:46:671 (1,2) - It could also be said for this point, but you may already have adjusted this by now if you used the above mod.
03:57:541 (2,3,4) - how about moving the (3) down a bit and the (4) within distance snap range (on the same y coord)
04:01:889 (2) - Having an extra reverse here is a pretty risky move on an Easy diff. You could easily get away with just a circle and then a 1/2 slider since there is no vocals at 04:02:106 - I would also suggest placing the notes a bit differently here as well as they're a bit strange | 03:59:715 (5,6,1) - feel too clumped and should be given more freedom.
04:13:628 (1) - how about starting this spinner at 04:14:498 - and then adding some circles or a slider to fill in the gap here?
04:14:498 (1) - add 5% volume for the end of the spinner.

Overall this is a really pretty difficulty, but lots of work is needed. The main issues are the hitsounds, which really feels incomplete, some sliders don't move into each other nicely, and a bit of nazi blanketing work would be nice. I really like the map though.

[Normal]
The biggest issue I have with this difficulty is that it seems to swap randomly between following the drums and the vocals, almost to the point where I can't even understand it. Normal is one of the hardest difficulties to map mostly because you have to find a balance between vocals, drums, and what you are following. If try to include too much, or swap too often, it can be a very unpleasant map to play.

00:07:759 (2,5) - right off the bat, I'm not sure what the (2) and the reverse in (5) is used for. I guess (2) could follow the Piano, but it's strange that you don't follow it anywhere else. I'm sure you could get away with deleting the (2) and maybe not using the reverse in (5)
00:14:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I'm really not sure what you are following here. You seem to use your hitsounds to 'make' up notes to hit. At 00:22:976 (8,1) - though, you swap to following vocals which is strange again. Try adding a circle to 00:23:193 - to follow your current pattern.
00:31:455 (6) - you should swap this out from a finish to a clap.
00:34:715 - add a note here, since it seems like you follow the drums in this section.
00:40:584 (7) - Again this is a strange spot for a slider. To follow both the vocals and the drums, I would suggest having a slider at 00:40:367 - and go until 00:40:802 - | Then add a circle or slider at 00:41:019 - and end or add another at 00:41:454 -
00:41:889 (8,1) - (8) clap and (1) finish?
00:49:064 (1) - This is just my own personal taste, but I think its best to end this on the drum hit at 00:48:845 - instead of where it is currently. lead-in vocals to me aren't very fun to play. Like I said though, this is my own personal taste, so you don't need to do this.
00:49:281 (2) - Finish instead of clap? | You can hear it in the music.
00:49:932 (3) - Add a finish to the end of this slider! You can hear it in the music as well.
00:54:064 (3) - try placing this above the sliders? since you have the 00:53:412 (2) - curved to do so.
00:54:933 (5) - See no point to this finish here, it'd be much better as a clap.
00:55:367 (1) - Finish on the end? I'm still trying to figure out why you place claps instead of finishes in these spots.
01:01:238 (4) - drum clap on the head? I'm even more confused now.. This one would work great as a finish with a low volume. as well as 01:02:106 - on its head
01:16:672 (9,1) - try a circle and then a slider here. The slider would work better joining 01:17:106 - to 01:17:541 -
I'm gonna stop focusing on hitsounds and such now. You either accepted them or not, and I'm sure you'll be able to figure out the rest if you used my suggestions. Not to mention I'm sure more mods will be able to help with hitsounding as well. You should try to find a mod for them if possible.
01:47:541 (5,6) - Since you are back to using drums again on this part, maybe try getting a note in at 01:47:758 -
02:04:932 (6) - no matter how much you look at it, this is a dead note, meaning there isn't anything playing the background. Try starting at 02:05:150 - for the drums, 02:05:584 - if you'd rather follow the lead-in vocals, or at 02:05:802 - on the start of a new measure.
02:10:150 (7) - The end of the slider is another dead note. Try adding a circle at 02:10:802 - and another one at 02:11:237 -
02:24:716 (2) - another spot you could add a finish for.
02:31:020 (5) - not sure on this slider as well. Try swapping (4) and (5) so it goes slider circle instead. The middle part of a measure is usually a note that doesn't need to be hit
02:34:932 (3) - As I suggested in easy. This would probably be better of as a circle and then a 1/2 slider
02:51:890 (3,5) - more whistle sliders i'm unsure of. You must have a reason if you used so many I'm guessing.
03:51:889 (5) - Dead slider. you can use the other suggestions and probably follow the drums here. 1/2 to 1/2 from reds isn't actually very hard to hit, and completely predictable.
03:59:715 (7) - Another dead slider. which you can use the same suggestion as 2:04:932 - for this.
04:14:498 (1) - add 5% volume for the end of the spinner.

Another big thing I wanted to point out is that lots of the note positioning in this map is really not that great. Lots of sliders don't really feel like they connect properly with other circles / sliders, so that could use a bit of fixing as well.. I've spent so much time on this map though so I'd suggest getting a mod for particularly for this.. as well as for hitsounds as I mentioned. This diff really needs a bit of work done, and I'm hoping my contribution can help a little.
Also, try checking out ts8zs's diff for hitsounds, as they could help your map out a lot more if you follow some of his stuff.

[ts8zs]
After a quick glance.. I think this map is a bit 1/2 spammy. You could definitely use more 1/1 breaks everywhere, as you map stuff that really doesn't even matter, or dead spots. This is going to be my primary focus since your note placements and hitsounds are good. My goal is that I believe this difficulty needs to be toned down a little and to make sure you avoid mapping unnecessary stuff.

00:05:367 (4,5) - make a 1/2 slider on (4) and end it on (5)s head. You shouldn't need a note at 00:05:802 - since you are following the violin? is it.
00:23:628 (5,1,2) - give the (1) a bit of rotation anti-clockwise so you can stack (5) and (2) together. You'll have to adjust the upcoming notes as well.
00:35:150 (8) - example of a note that doesn't matter. You can map to this but it adds nothing, and with the amount of 1/2 notes you use, a nice little 1/1 gap would be perfect.
01:09:932 (4) - you hit a dead note on the tail end of this slider. Just placing a circle at the start of the slider would be more than enough.
01:15:150 (1) - Tail end is on a dead note as well, this one isn't as bad but you could probably get away with just a circle on this as well.
01:16:454 - add a circle here to catch the drums
01:20:476 - I like what you did here, but wouldn't it be better to have the first break at this point?
01:37:758 (6) - Another dead spot on the head here. Try just having a 1/1 gap and place a circle at 01:37:976 -
01:51:671 (5) - good spot for a 1/1 break. add a circle on the tail end of this. and remove the slider.
02:26:454 (6) - Same as 01:09:932 -
02:37:106 - again, maybe use this as a break. This one is optional, but I really think you should have one here or at least at the beginning. For a 1/2 heavy hard, a full 3 minutes and 15 seconds of playing is a bit long.
02:38:302 (4) - Not sure why you have this circle, and I believe the 1/4 reverse at 02:37:758 (2) - is rather unnecessary too.
02:43:845 (1,2) - Try adding a normal samplset onto this. It feels a bit empty since you are following the guitar here and it doesn't make much of an audible noise.
03:53:411 (4) - same thing. I just don't see a point to this.
03:53:628 (1,2) - how about curving the (1) to blanket a bit better around the (2) better?
04:14:498 (1) - add 5% volume for the end of the spinner.

So overall, another thing I wanted to point out is that you have lots of slider ends connecting into 1/4 notes, and then finishing off with another slider. There isn't a problem with these, but they really can be awkward and not that fun to play for a hard diff. Its generally better to start a stream with a circle or end a stream with a circle. not have both with sliders.

Overall, nice map.

[Insane]
Wait.. why is your insane hitsounded properly but your easy and normal aren't? <_<;

00:20:802 (5,6) - very ugly blanket, it might just be better to avoid blanketing the (5) all together and use a different slider shape.
00:23:412 (6,1,2,3) - seperate (6) and (1,2,3) a bit more. This instantly gives off a stream impression that would start at 00:23:737 - If moved away a bit further, it'll be readable, instead of trolling players.
00:31:671 (4) - not sure if the auto stack would catch this or not, but try moving it a bit more under the tail end of the slider.
00:36:890 (6,7,8) - stack the sliders, they're a bit off.
01:04:715 (3) - What is this slider for? It'd be just as fine as a regular circle.
01:08:194 (5) - Finish
01:11:671 (5) - again, I don't quite understand these sliders.
01:34:280 (4,5) - triplet? I think I've gotten my point through that the 1/4 sliders don't make much sense. so I won't mention about it anymore.
01:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try using control+H to make these symmetrical.
01:42:541 (2,3) - same as above
01:51:454 (3) - I'm also not sure about your stacking point of view, but this is another one that doesn't seem to be placed under the slider properly. I won't mention this again as well.
01:57:867 - add circle here
02:11:454 (9,1) - how about stacking these two? 1/1 gaps are loved by stacked notes for insanes.
02:26:020 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'm lost as to what you are following here. you could probably delete - 02:26:129 (7,10) - and add a circle to 02:26:345 - to catch the drums if you plan on following them.
02:54:716 (1,2) - Try placing the (2) where the (1) is. it also adds a nice little curve that flows well.
03:25:802 (3) - custom slider shape would probably work better rather then trying to blanket.
03:28:737 (2) - delete this as its a dead note. stream starts better at 03:28:845 - anyways.
03:56:020 (9,3) - stack these.
04:09:281 (2) - I would delete this as well and try a different idea on this section for placement.

Overall, the insane is pretty nice, but I really don't see a reason to be using the 1/4 jump sliders in this map, as it adds nothing but unnecessary difficulty. also you have some unsnapped stuff you should take care of according to AIbat

AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping
00:47:324 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:39:499 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:39:499 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:40:151 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:40:151 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

I would look at the taiko diffs, but I think I've modded enough on this mapset, and I'm starting to get sleepy. Good luck.

Also take a

because I love your storyboard

El SolarBeam

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-11-30T08:53:36+00:00

since there's exam coming this week, I'll start with 1 diff first >_>

Lanturn's Mod

Lanturn wrote:
[Insane]

I think I must have deleted and redownloaded this map like 20 times by the time I finished this mod XD
(lol sorry for spamming updates lately >_>)

[General]

Hitsounds:
You should add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav file | http://puu.sh/2HHgJ | Remove the 2 | This makes it so you can't hear the rumbly noise from the slider. (have the song playing in the editor on Easy diff, and press z when its playing a slider.. You'll notice how annoying it sounds right away ) (done)

Difficulty Settings:
Easy: Fine
Normal: Fine
Hard: Reduce AR by 1? 138 BPM is pretty slow so AR7 should be more than enough for a hard.
Insane: Fine.
Muzu / Oni: Fine

Combo Colors:
AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 255,167,34
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,26,26
Combo5 : 140,26,255
- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 255,172,47
Combo2 : 85,255,85
Combo3 : 0,232,232
Combo4 : 251,49,49
Combo5 : 163,70,255
- [Nardo's Taiko Oni] :
Combo1 : 255,173,51
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 251,40,40
Combo5 : 145,34,255
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,167,34
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,26,26
Combo5 : 140,26,255
- [Taiko Muzukashii] :
Combo1 : 255,172,47
Combo2 : 85,255,85
Combo3 : 0,232,232
Combo4 : 251,49,49
Combo5 : 163,70,255
- [Ts8zs' Hard-24clap] :
Combo1 : 255,173,51
Combo2 : 0,255,0
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 251,40,40
Combo5 : 145,34,255
First off, the fact that your combo colors in your own difficulties don't match isn't a good thing.
I suggest copying the combo colors from your favorite difficulty into the others, and probably even the Guest Difficulties unless they have a special reason to use different colors. Taiko doesn't matter at all because you'll never see them, but its also silly seeing them not even consistent. I would honestly just copy and replace them all from your favorite diffs colors through the .osu file under [Colours] (fixed)

Kiai:
Due to probably some offset or timing changes, your kiai is off by 1ms on almost all the diffs. Its best if you go through them all again and resnap them properly. I believe everything is off by 1ms, but its better to go manually resnap it all. Also I suggest resnapping your notes incase they are 1ms off as well.

Also I believe its better to end your kiai on the downbeat like | 01:20:584 - instead of 01:20:367 -
(um.. still not sure about this)

Tags:
ラブリークエストラブクエ | Japanese spelling of the game (also under the title) and its short version
Sound | The CD is called "Sound Quest" Since you already have Quest in the title, it can be omitted.

Silly thing I came across: http://puu.sh/5xe2B.jpg | but the CD lists it as Pure Love, True Love | http://www.hook-net.jp/lovelyquest/download.htm | oh well. Since you have the full version, its better to use the comma instead of the period. (added, and btw it is a comma, but it's just so small that it looks like a period lol)

[Storyboard]
Wonderful storyboard, only a couple things caught my attention:

lyrics/creator.png | 802 | This applies to all the other credits as well. Instead of starting off with this whole section to introduce your map and such, why not move it to a break where people will be able to read it? As of right now, you can probably place half of it at 01:23:628 - and the 2nd half at 02:40:150 - or something. All there is at this spot are some light effects and just pure blackness. This gives people something to look at during the breaks, and suits the map much better.

Background.jpg | 233302 | Basically this transition to the SB/sb33.png is a little strange. Did you mean to have this little bit of a jump? It would be better if sb33.png was moved up to the same y coordinate as background.jpg, and even better if it started on the same location entirely of background.jpg | which is 351,238 | sb33.png starts at 320,240 I believe? | Try opening your .osb and doing this:

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240
M,0,233411,233519,320,240,319,240
F,0,233411,233628,0,0.9897093
S,0,233411,254498,1.033032
M,0,233519,254498,319,240,205,240
V,0,233628,,0.9504516,1
F,0,233628,244063,0.9897093,1
F,0,244063,254498,1,0

Try changing it to this:
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240
 M,0,233411,233519,351,238,319,238
 F,0,233411,233628,0,0.9897093
 S,0,233411,254498,1.033032
 M,0,233519,254498,319,238,205,238
 V,0,233628,,0.9504516,1
 F,0,233628,244063,0.9897093,1
 F,0,244063,254498,1,0
or try this:
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240
 M,0,233411,233519,351,238,351,238
 F,0,233411,233628,0,0.9897093
 S,0,233411,254498,1.033032
 M,0,233519,254498,351,238,205,238
 V,0,233628,,0.9504516,1
 F,0,233628,244063,0.9897093,1
 F,0,244063,254498,1,0
You may have to adjust the size a little bit because background.jpg and sb33.png are a bit different. I tried to resize it for you. Try changing the code for S to this:
S,0,233411,254498,1.03885
I believe a combination of the 2nd choice and the above size code would be the absolute best fix to this. Hopefully it helps. Also, so you know | Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sb33.png",320,240 | is the 2nd thing in your .osb file, so it shouldn't be hard to find.

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Now that you've read all that, and hopefully applied all the changes. I'd really suggest doing this for your other SB pictures as well. I believe its sb17 and sb 18? at around 01:43:954 - | the transition between these two is rather ugly. This is basically how you do this trick. | Delete both of them to start |
Then take SB17 Place it at its starting point ( 01:42:650 - ), resize, and do its movement. This time, move it all the way to the end of where sb18 ends. (I believe it's at 01:44:932 - ) After you have this, save, open your .osb file. Control+F and search for "sb17" after finding it, it'll look something similar to this:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb17.jpg",320,240
 S,0,102650,,1.180364
 M,0,102650,104932,450,266,435,245
S is Size, and M is Movement.

Copy and paste all of this, rename SB\sb17.jpg to SB\sb18.jpg
save the .osb file, and reload your map (without saving on your map directly, or your .osb will be overwritten)

Next, apply your fade outs and ins on SB17 and SB18.. and thats it. You'll have a smooth transition.

Here is an example of what it turns out like (first delete SB17 and SB18, and then copy paste this in, at any spot in the background section.) Notice how the movement and change between the pictures is flawless. Try it out yourself. If you want a faster transition, reduce the time that SB18 fades in on.
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb17.jpg",320,240
 S,0,102650,,1.180364
 F,0,102650,102867,0,1
 M,0,102650,105041,450,266,435,245
 F,0,102867,104498,1
 F,0,104498,104606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sb18.jpg",320,240
 S,0,102650,,1.180364
 F,0,102650,103845,0
 M,0,102650,105041,450,266,435,245
 F,0,103845,104063,0,1
 F,0,104063,104824,1
 F,0,104824,105041,1,0
Now.. after doing all this, and if you like it, you could apply it your other pictures as well. The trick is copying and pasting if you want smooth transitions. A great example is the map I will link at the bottom. But yeah, hopefully this helps in someway. (fixed all stuff mentioned above)

effect/tpfp.png |259282 | You have a spinner here on all your diffs making this not viewable for those with a full skin when its resizing itself inwards. It might be better to start the resizing inwards after the spinner, unless you aren't worried about people seeing the effect. In this case, it might just be better to have a fade-in instead. (no problem, I like this)

Lovely SB, reminds me of the one on Samipale's map for Colorful Days by him and Shinkuu. You should check it out for ideas on your SB as I personally think with a few more touchups, you can create an amazing masterpiece. (whoa, nice suggestion, now I have another concept to apply )

alright.. I think that's enough data stuff for now.. If there is anything else, i'm sure someone else will notice.

Wait.. why is your insane hitsounded properly but your easy and normal aren't? <_<; (lol I'm too focusing on this diff XD)

00:20:802 (5,6) - very ugly blanket, it might just be better to avoid blanketing the (5) all together and use a different slider shape. (fixed)
00:23:412 (6,1,2,3) - seperate (6) and (1,2,3) a bit more. This instantly gives off a stream impression that would start at 00:23:737 - If moved away a bit further, it'll be readable, instead of trolling players. (fixed, a bit)
00:31:671 (4) - not sure if the auto stack would catch this or not, but try moving it a bit more under the tail end of the slider. (fixed)
00:36:890 (6,7,8) - stack the sliders, they're a bit off. (fixed)
01:04:715 (3) - What is this slider for? It'd be just as fine as a regular circle. (fixed)
01:08:194 (5) - Finish (fixed)
01:11:671 (5) - again, I don't quite understand these sliders. (won't change this one)
01:34:280 (4,5) - triplet? I think I've gotten my point through that the 1/4 sliders don't make much sense. so I won't mention about it anymore. (fixed)
01:40:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try using control+H to make these symmetrical.
01:42:541 (2,3) - same as above (fixed)
01:51:454 (3) - I'm also not sure about your stacking point of view, but this is another one that doesn't seem to be placed under the slider properly. I won't mention this again as well. (that's intentional)
01:57:867 - add circle here (fixed)
02:11:454 (9,1) - how about stacking these two? 1/1 gaps are loved by stacked notes for insanes. (nope, i like this)
02:26:020 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'm lost as to what you are following here. you could probably delete - 02:26:129 (7,10) - and add a circle to 02:26:345 - to catch the drums if you plan on following them. (nice idea)
02:54:716 (1,2) - Try placing the (2) where the (1) is. it also adds a nice little curve that flows well. (fixed)
03:25:802 (3) - custom slider shape would probably work better rather then trying to blanket. (okay)
03:28:737 (2) - delete this as its a dead note. stream starts better at 03:28:845 - anyways. (fixed)
03:56:020 (9,3) - stack these. (fixed)
04:09:281 (2) - I would delete this as well and try a different idea on this section for placement. (sure)
Overall, the insane is pretty nice, but I really don't see a reason to be using the 1/4 jump sliders in this map, as it adds nothing but unnecessary difficulty. also you have some unsnapped stuff you should take care of according to AIbat

AIBat v3.1 wrote:
Snapping
00:47:324 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:39:499 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:39:499 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:40:151 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:40:151 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
(fixed)

[Easy]
This difficulty is missing hitsounds all over the place. I highly highly suggest you go through the song once and making sure you have everything correct. Your whistles are a bit strange as well, and almost seem random.
00:17:976 (1,3) - These could use a little touch-up to blanket it better. use the approach circle from (5) and try to blanket it around the edge a bit better.
00:23:193 (3) - is this whistle slider intended? | You use a few others, but I'm not sure what your plan is for them. 00:53:193 (2) - is another spot.
00:27:976 (8,1) - you could nudge the (1) over slightly and give this a better blanket as well (approach circles are some of the best things when trying to blanket stuff) | I won't be much of a Nazi anymore after this, but I think lots of your sliders could use a double-check
00:55:367 (1) - Try adding a bit of a curve into this? (too many curves would be boring, so that's how it comes)
00:56:237 (2) - no finish? I'm not really sure I'm following your hitsounds
01:34:932 (1,2) - I'm not sure symmetry is the best thing to follow for the (1) slider as it sticks itself into the top of the map making the gap from (1) to (2) look strange. Maybe try redesigning this slider or placing (2) in a different spot much like how you have the 01:32:758 (2) - circle placed.
01:41:889 (2,3) - Let's make the difficult a little easier. Instead of having a reverse on (2), how about ending it at 01:42:324 - and adding a 1/2 slider much like you have at 01:18:845 (3) - This also follows the lyrics better as it doesn't join the two words.
01:43:193 (1,1) - I'm wondering if the 1/1 gap here might be a bit hard for an Easy Diff. Generally you want give a bit more room after a slider or it may make it a bit difficult for the newer players. If you believe the 1/1 gap is fine, try moving the slider closer to the middle of the map so people will be able to get to it faster. A good tip is to place a circle where your slider ends, and use the distance snapping to find a good location on how far away the next note should be from the center point. | http://puu.sh/5xfDW.jpg
01:55:802 (2,1) - the (1) slider looks really odd and I don't believe it really fits. I think this slider would be better off trying to avoid the blankets, and ending underneath an earlier note.
02:21:454 (3,4) - The (3) should be changed completely. or the (4) should be placed over to the left side of the (3)'s end. Having the slider almost touch the (4) creates an awkward distance gap and strange look that isn't visually appealing at all.
02:31:889 (7) - This one is a bit strange as well, how about something simple? It really doesn't fit in with your current map style and looks.
02:49:715 (3,2) - (2) could definitely be adjusted so it doesn't overlap with the (3)
03:25:802 (1,2,3) - instead of making this the most difficult part of your song, how about a simple 3/2 slider? | http://puu.sh/5xght.jpg | No need to make one part of this song overly complicated for newer players.
03:37:976 (3) - You could probably get away with changing this to a 1/2 slider, You could also probably get away with deleting 03:38:845 (4,5) - as well as they don't serve much purpose, or at least (5) doesn't | you could also try something like you have at 04:03:193 (1) -
03:44:932 (3,4) - As I mentioned with some other spots. This would probably look much better going off the opposite side from where it is now. A little bit of remapping would be needed, but it'll look and play much better.
03:46:671 (1,2) - It could also be said for this point, but you may already have adjusted this by now if you used the above mod.
03:57:541 (2,3,4) - how about moving the (3) down a bit and the (4) within distance snap range (on the same y coord)
04:01:889 (2) - Having an extra reverse here is a pretty risky move on an Easy diff. You could easily get away with just a circle and then a 1/2 slider since there is no vocals at 04:02:106 - I would also suggest placing the notes a bit differently here as well as they're a bit strange | 03:59:715 (5,6,1) - feel too clumped and should be given more freedom.
04:13:628 (1) - how about starting this spinner at 04:14:498 - and then adding some circles or a slider to fill in the gap here?
04:14:498 (1) - add 5% volume for the end of the spinner.
(the rest are fixed~)

Overall this is a really pretty difficulty, but lots of work is needed. The main issues are the hitsounds, which really feels incomplete, some sliders don't move into each other nicely, and a bit of nazi blanketing work would be nice. I really like the map though.

[Normal]
The biggest issue I have with this difficulty is that it seems to swap randomly between following the drums and the vocals, almost to the point where I can't even understand it. Normal is one of the hardest difficulties to map mostly because you have to find a balance between vocals, drums, and what you are following. If try to include too much, or swap too often, it can be a very unpleasant map to play.

00:07:759 (2,5) - right off the bat, I'm not sure what the (2) and the reverse in (5) is used for. I guess (2) could follow the Piano, but it's strange that you don't follow it anywhere else. I'm sure you could get away with deleting the (2) and maybe not using the reverse in (5)
00:14:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I'm really not sure what you are following here. You seem to use your hitsounds to 'make' up notes to hit. At 00:22:976 (8,1) - though, you swap to following vocals which is strange again. Try adding a circle to 00:23:193 - to follow your current pattern.
00:31:455 (6) - you should swap this out from a finish to a clap.
00:34:715 - add a note here, since it seems like you follow the drums in this section.
00:40:584 (7) - Again this is a strange spot for a slider. To follow both the vocals and the drums, I would suggest having a slider at 00:40:367 - and go until 00:40:802 - | Then add a circle or slider at 00:41:019 - and end or add another at 00:41:454 -
00:41:889 (8,1) - (8) clap and (1) finish?
00:49:064 (1) - This is just my own personal taste, but I think its best to end this on the drum hit at 00:48:845 - instead of where it is currently. lead-in vocals to me aren't very fun to play. Like I said though, this is my own personal taste, so you don't need to do this.
00:49:281 (2) - Finish instead of clap? | You can hear it in the music.
00:49:932 (3) - Add a finish to the end of this slider! You can hear it in the music as well.
00:54:064 (3) - try placing this above the sliders? since you have the 00:53:412 (2) - curved to do so.
00:54:933 (5) - See no point to this finish here, it'd be much better as a clap.
00:55:367 (1) - Finish on the end? I'm still trying to figure out why you place claps instead of finishes in these spots.
01:01:238 (4) - drum clap on the head? I'm even more confused now.. This one would work great as a finish with a low volume. as well as 01:02:106 - on its head
01:16:672 (9,1) - try a circle and then a slider here. The slider would work better joining 01:17:106 - to 01:17:541 -
I'm gonna stop focusing on hitsounds and such now. You either accepted them or not, and I'm sure you'll be able to figure out the rest if you used my suggestions. Not to mention I'm sure more mods will be able to help with hitsounding as well. You should try to find a mod for them if possible.
01:47:541 (5,6) - Since you are back to using drums again on this part, maybe try getting a note in at 01:47:758 -
02:04:932 (6) - no matter how much you look at it, this is a dead note, meaning there isn't anything playing the background. Try starting at 02:05:150 - for the drums, 02:05:584 - if you'd rather follow the lead-in vocals, or at 02:05:802 - on the start of a new measure.
02:10:150 (7) - The end of the slider is another dead note. Try adding a circle at 02:10:802 - and another one at 02:11:237 -
02:24:716 (2) - another spot you could add a finish for.
02:31:020 (5) - not sure on this slider as well. Try swapping (4) and (5) so it goes slider circle instead. The middle part of a measure is usually a note that doesn't need to be hit
02:34:932 (3) - As I suggested in easy. This would probably be better of as a circle and then a 1/2 slider
02:51:890 (3,5) - more whistle sliders i'm unsure of. You must have a reason if you used so many I'm guessing.
03:51:889 (5) - Dead slider. you can use the other suggestions and probably follow the drums here. 1/2 to 1/2 from reds isn't actually very hard to hit, and completely predictable.
03:59:715 (7) - Another dead slider. which you can use the same suggestion as 2:04:932 - for this.
04:14:498 (1) - add 5% volume for the end of the spinner.
Another big thing I wanted to point out is that lots of the note positioning in this map is really not that great. Lots of sliders don't really feel like they connect properly with other circles / sliders, so that could use a bit of fixing as well.. I've spent so much time on this map though so I'd suggest getting a mod for particularly for this.. as well as for hitsounds as I mentioned. This diff really needs a bit of work done, and I'm hoping my contribution can help a little.
Also, try checking out ts8zs's diff for hitsounds, as they could help your map out a lot more if you follow some of his stuff.

(after long thinking, I consider to remap this diff)

I would look at the taiko diffs, but I think I've modded enough on this mapset, and I'm starting to get sleepy. Good luck.
(I think those are enough, I can feel you're considerate to mod these :3)

Also take a because I love your storyboard (thanks a lot!)

Last edited by El SolarBeam 2013-12-03T17:11:16+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Coro

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Coro 2013-12-01T05:07:39+00:00

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Not necessary to put 'Taiko' in diff name

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Use default hitsounds and delete unnecessary timing points. Recommend using Nardo's timing points but remember to change to default.
00:54:280 (1) - Add finish
01:31:454 (1) - k
01:31:889 (1,2,1) - ddk, following your pattern

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]
Use default hitsounds.

nice map~
good luck for rank~

El SolarBeam

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El SolarBeam 2013-12-01T10:45:33+00:00

CoroQuetz wrote:
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Not necessary to put 'Taiko' in diff name (will reconsider later)

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Use default hitsounds and delete unnecessary timing points. Recommend using Nardo's timing points but remember to change to default. (done)
00:54:280 (1) - Add finish (not necessary)
01:31:454 (1) - k (fixed)
01:31:889 (1,2,1) - ddk, following your pattern (sure)

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]
Use default hitsounds.

nice map~
good luck for rank~

thanks for mod~

Totoro le Pacha

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Joined March 2012

Totoro le Pacha 2013-12-02T10:38:36+00:00

Ayo. Totoro le Pacha from Pacha's Taiko Modding Queue. Love me, and I'll love you

Let's begin. ♫

[Muzukashii]
01:03:628 (5) - K > k
01:09:715 (1,2,3) - kkk
01:18:845 (3,1,1) - It's a Muzu, your 1/4 streams should only be ddd or kkk. So here, it would be better if you did kkk
01:20:150 (2,3,1) - ^ The same, but here, ddd
01:58:628 (1) - d > k
02:35:584 (2) - D > d Remove this finish, it has nothing to do in a Muzu's 1/4 stream
02:36:671 (1,1,1) - The same as before, it's unrankable. So kkk
02:54:498 (3) - ... Another finish in a 1/4 stream, remove this
03:01:454 (3) - ^
03:08:411 (3) - ^
03:23:193 (1,2,1,2,1) - Try something like this ? http://puu.sh/5zJit.jpg
03:39:280 (2,3,4) - ddd or kkk, but NOT A kdk
04:02:324 (1) - D ?

[Oni]
The Oni seems very good.
01:56:888 (60) - Remove finish ?
02:09:279 (122) - Remove finish, wrong placement.
03:02:976 (375) - ^
03:08:411 (398) - K > D
03:09:932 (405) - K > k
03:18:845 (12,13,14,15) - It would be better with d d d k

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-12-02T15:01:33+00:00

Totoro le Pacha wrote:
Ayo. Totoro le Pacha from Pacha's Taiko Modding Queue. Love me, and I'll love you

Let's begin. ♫

[Oni]
The Oni seems very good. Thanks~
01:56:888 (60) - Remove finish ? Nope. Stressed sound occurs here.
02:09:279 (122) - Remove finish, wrong placement. The stressed note is similar to 00:52:758 - remain unchanged.
03:02:976 (375) - ^ Nope. Stressed sound occurs here.
03:08:411 (398) - K > D fixed
03:09:932 (405) - K > k This note is similar to 03:02:976 - no change
03:18:845 (12,13,14,15) - It would be better with d d d k Good idea to try to follow the vocal. But in this case, I want to map the violin, which gives the higher pitch.

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/5zR7V

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-12-02T16:12:19+00:00

Totoro le Pacha wrote:
Ayo. Totoro le Pacha from Pacha's Taiko Modding Queue. Love me, and I'll love you

Let's begin. ♫

[Muzukashii]
01:03:628 (5) - K > k (fixed)
01:09:715 (1,2,3) - kkk (nope, I like it)
01:18:845 (3,1,1) - It's a Muzu, your 1/4 streams should only be ddd or kkk. So here, it would be better if you did kkk (oops, I forgot about this one, thanks)
01:20:150 (2,3,1) - ^ The same, but here, ddd (fixed)
01:58:628 (1) - d > k (it would sounds off, so I'll leave this one)
02:35:584 (2) - D > d Remove this finish, it has nothing to do in a Muzu's 1/4 stream (sure)
02:36:671 (1,1,1) - The same as before, it's unrankable. So kkk (fixed)
02:54:498 (3) - ... Another finish in a 1/4 stream, remove this (fixed)
03:01:454 (3) - ^(fixed)
03:08:411 (3) - ^(fixed)
03:23:193 (1,2,1,2,1) - Try something like this ? http://puu.sh/5zJit.jpg (um.. I'm following the violin here, so that one isn't good)
03:39:280 (2,3,4) - ddd or kkk, but NOT A kdk (fixed)
04:02:324 (1) - D ? (sure)

thanks for mod and love you too~
(will update after the next mod to reduce update spam orz)

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2013-12-04T09:24:59+00:00

From my queue
Your map is nice,so I can just do short checks,sorry

[General]
Nice storyboard,plz teach me how to make it!

[Easy]
00:05:802 (3) - no NC
00:15:367 (2,3,4) - different distance
00:21:019 (4) - why not stack with 00:17:541 (5)
00:24:932 (5) - NC
00:55:367 (1) - no NC
00:56:237 (2) - NC
00:11:019 (1,1) - too close in Easy
01:34:932 (5) - NC
01:48:845 (5) - NC
02:07:976 (4) - not a good blanket
02:14:498 (3) - ^
02:30:150 (5) - ^ and NC
02:49:715 (3,2) - a little stacked
03:05:367 (5) - NC
04:11:019 (5) - NC

[Normal]
Same NC problems

[Insane]
ar+1? Otherwise the spread is not good.
Some part are just like Hard.Check Andrea's map and get some tips.
Some rhythm suggestions

such as

00:04:281 (4,5) - the sound begins at 00:04:498 and 00:04:932 ,on your slider tail,that;s not comfortable in Insane.So you can just begin your slider at those points.

btw,包子ts8zs's hard is pretty well.

GL

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-12-04T14:41:23+00:00

Thx&fixing hard,But busy now:3

El SolarBeam

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Topic Starter

El SolarBeam 2013-12-04T17:40:15+00:00

615915887 wrote:
From my queue
Your map is nice,so I can just do short checks,sorry (np, I respect all your thought :3)

[General]
Nice storyboard,plz teach me how to make it! (thanks, there are many pro chinese who can make much more better than mine though >.<)

[Easy]
00:05:802 (3) - no NC (fixed already)
00:15:367 (2,3,4) - different distance (fixed)
00:21:019 (4) - why not stack with 00:17:541 (5) (it's not good to stack in easy diff)
00:24:932 (5) - NC (fixed)
00:55:367 (1) - no NC
00:56:237 (2) - NC (fixed)
00:11:019 (1,1) - too close in Easy (not a big problem)
01:34:932 (5) - NC (fixed)
01:48:845 (5) - NC (fixed)
02:07:976 (4) - not a good blanket (fixed)
02:14:498 (3) - ^ (fixed)
02:30:150 (5) - ^ and NC (fixed)
02:49:715 (3,2) - a little stacked (maybe you means overlapped, fixed anyway)
03:05:367 (5) - NC (it would become NC spam that way)
04:11:019 (5) - NC (fixed)

[Normal]
Same NC problems (I'll look for it)

[Insane]
ar+1? Otherwise the spread is not good. (maybe it's the opposite. the hard diff that should be ar -1 because the song itself is slow)
Some part are just like Hard.Check Andrea's map and get some tips. (I don't think it's that much the same, but thanks for the suggestion)
Some rhythm suggestions
such as
00:04:281 (4,5) - the sound begins at 00:04:498 and 00:04:932 ,on your slider tail,that;s not comfortable in Insane.So you can just begin your slider at those points.

btw,包子ts8zs's hard is pretty well.

GL

thanks for modding :3

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