1. AIRakuen's Extra (5 stars, 868 notes)
2. AI's Hard (4.48 stars, 429 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 698 notes)
4. Normal (3.06 stars, 284 notes)
5. Tari's Hard (4.76 stars, 533 notes)

_AI wrote:

(╯°□°）╯︵ !

• 
  [AI love you]

1. 00:11:424 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that this part has unnecessary big jump, because 00:10:363 (1,2,3) < this part doesn't have jumps. Use a smaller jumps.
2. 00:15:212 (2,3,6,7) - I think these slider should change to circle instead, following the notes at from 00:10:363 (1) - 00:11:879 (4) this part. Just suggestion.
3. 00:19:606 (1,2) - Maybe make a little jumps at this part, since 00:20:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) <this part has jumps too.
4. 00:21:273 (3) - Maybe bring this nearer to the 00:21:727 (6) . Since this part is repeating jumps.
5. 00:39:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these part is a little packed together, Make them spread out a little more.
6. 01:11:424 (4) - Unnecessary big jump. This part of the song is softer and calming. Try to avoid the jump here~
7. 01:14:151 (1) - Maybe add a note here and 01:14:454 as well. Fits the song better~
8. 01:38:394 (5) - Maybe change this repeater to circle instead. The piano part is strong here, the slider repeater doesn't fits the song nicely.
9. 01:29:454 (4,5) - Maybe Ctrl + G at this part. That overlay is kinda hard to read especially with HD. When I play with HD I always miss at this point @@
10. 02:35:212 (5,6,7,8) - This part, the notes are closely packed together. Spread them out a little more.
11. 03:24:757 (5,6,7) - This part I feel a little uncomfortable @@ Even I'm playing that part. I don't really know why either ._.
12. 03:45:515 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that stacking (1),(2) and (3),(4) is not a good idea.

_AI wrote:

(╯°□°）╯︵ !

-S c a r l e t- wrote:

Just some simple mod~
All these mod is just my suggestion~ Feel free to ignore some of them if it's not helpful :/

I can't mod Hard and Normal well @@ So..

_AI wrote:

(╯°□°）╯︵ !

ts8zs wrote:

bpm x2 198 BPM is too high, and original BPM tested is 99 BPM

[Normal]
00:17:030 (1,3) - blanket
00:23:697 (3) - ^

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

Hey, here is a mod from my que.
The only thing I have to say about your map is that the hardest diff's last spinner does not match up with the other diff's spinner.
I think that would help out the map.
But that is just a thought though.
That is all I could think of.

CET 6 wrote:

Hi~ 比之前的有进步！谢谢 ^.^

General

感觉每个diff的AR都可以-1 owo 我试试

Normal

00:11:576 (2) - 或许可以包一下1
01:28:545 (4) - 为什么不和前面对称 放在左边
01:35:212 (3,4) - 我感觉不好看
感觉复制粘贴有点多了
怎么说呢，我说说我觉得乱的例子吧（当然每个人标准不同
00:44:909 (1,2) - 这里突然就用对称
01:19:454 (5) - 这个和前后对称的风格又不搭了
01:38:848 (1,2,3) -
02:02:485 (1,2,3,1) -

大概先这样吧，感觉可以irc来讲比较好
加油！

谢谢你的mod
大概能改的都尝试改了 ;w;
希望还可以

10crystalmask01 wrote:

IRC mod for Normal

21:14 Rakuen: hi~
21:15 10crystalmask01: ello
21:18 Rakuen: u have any map for me to mod? :3
21:18 10crystalmask01: :D
21:18 10crystalmask01: ahh yes!
21:18 Rakuen: cuz Im gonna request mod again >.>
21:18 10crystalmask01: lol 
21:19 10crystalmask01: M4M? :3
21:19 Rakuen: sure :)
21:19 10crystalmask01: Awesome! My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/157267 
21:21 10crystalmask01: thanks! ^^
21:22 *Rakuen is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/315355 CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears]
21:22 Rakuen: ok will mod it ^_^
21:22 10crystalmask01: yay xD
21:24 10crystalmask01: can it be IRC mod? o3o
21:30 Rakuen: ok :)
21:26 10crystalmask01: Okay, starting on Normal >w<
21:27 10crystalmask01: 00:04:303 (4) - NC
21:31 Rakuen: btw
21:31 Rakuen: u know how to get a video?
21:31 10crystalmask01: o3o youtube
21:31 10crystalmask01: or do you mean convert it to an avi file?
21:31 Rakuen: ya
21:31 Rakuen: how to make silence
21:31 Rakuen: and convert
21:31 Rakuen: :)
21:34 10crystalmask01: o3o
21:34 10crystalmask01: ahh idk sorry ;w; 
21:36 10crystalmask01: Try asking pimpG (who previously helped me).
21:36 Rakuen: ok ty
21:37 10crystalmask01: np ^^ 00:31:879 - 00:33:394 - try this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/4ZCKC/afed8574f0.jpg
21:39 10crystalmask01: the 3rd note helps emphasize the 'to'
21:39 Rakuen: zzz
21:39 Rakuen: there's always a bug
21:39 Rakuen: it helps me combo all note
21:39 10crystalmask01: D: yikes!
21:40 Rakuen: u dont have?
21:41 10crystalmask01: nope, I have to do them myself o3o
21:42 10crystalmask01: its okay though, Nc's not really the main issue now 
21:42 Rakuen: the bug helps me
21:42 Rakuen: NC every note
21:42 Rakuen: lol
21:42 Rakuen: waste time >.>
21:43 10crystalmask01: lol ok, I won't mod the NC 
21:43 Rakuen: its ok
21:43 Rakuen: u can still mod
21:43 Rakuen: i fixed it back XD
21:43 10crystalmask01: lol ok xD
21:44 10crystalmask01: 00:36:727 - 00:39:757 - Another rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/4ZCZV/f9a2061b5d.jpg
21:44 10crystalmask01: wait, did you try the previous rhythm suggestion yet? o3o
21:44 10crystalmask01: i'll wait :3 tell me if you like or don't like
21:47 Rakuen: yep
21:47 Rakuen: it's cool
21:47 Rakuen: but with my mapping skill it will become "uncool"
21:47 Rakuen: XD
21:48 10crystalmask01: o3o ohh
21:49 10crystalmask01: you can't figure out how to position the objects for the rhythm to work?
21:49 Rakuen: not sure >.>
21:50 Rakuen: dun understand the picture
21:50 Rakuen: 00:36:727 - 
21:50 10crystalmask01: ^ http://puu.sh/4ZCZV/f9a2061b5d.jpg
21:51 10crystalmask01: after 00:35:818 (1) - , you place a note (which is hit circle 2) at 00:36:727 -
21:51 10crystalmask01: and hit circle 7 is on 00:39:757
21:51 Rakuen: oh
21:52 10crystalmask01: 00:38:545 there's no note o3o
21:52 10crystalmask01: 00:38:545 - 
21:54 Rakuen: so 00:38:545 - a note here?
21:54 10crystalmask01: nu
21:54 10crystalmask01: that's the empty space 
21:55 Rakuen: oh
21:55 10crystalmask01: in http://puu.sh/4ZCZV/f9a2061b5d.jpg
21:55 Rakuen: leave it empty?
21:55 10crystalmask01: yep
21:57 10crystalmask01: tell me when your done :3
21:57 Rakuen: I'll update 
21:58 10crystalmask01: already?! O_O
21:59 Rakuen: ok updated
22:00 Rakuen: so this kind of map
22:00 Rakuen: very far from ranked? >w<
22:01 10crystalmask01: mm idk I haven't finished modding yet QAQ
22:01 Rakuen: btw make hard and collab diff in forum post if possible >.>
22:02 Rakuen: cuz it's not my main diff
22:02 10crystalmask01: kk
22:02 Rakuen: thanks very much ^_^
22:02 10crystalmask01: np ^^
22:02 10crystalmask01: Wait, what about the slidier at 00:38:848 and note at 00:39:757?
22:03 10crystalmask01: aren't you alsogoing to fixthem? o3o
22:03 10crystalmask01: also going to fixthem*
22:03 10crystalmask01: ahh my spacebaris broken x.x
22:03 Rakuen: owh :3
22:04 Rakuen: fixing it
22:04 10crystalmask01: Here just make them like this: http://puu.sh/4ZDQT/58adbe860a.jpg
22:05 10crystalmask01: 00:44:909 (1,2) - Re-model these sliders, I dislike how their tails overlap each other a bit >.>
22:07 10crystalmask01: 01:01:273 (3) - Remove the reverse, and instead add a note at 01:02:485 -, leaving an empty space at 01:02:182 - (so it's consistent with the space at 00:57:333 -)
22:10 10crystalmask01: 01:38:848 (6) -  - TRy having this slider curved, like this: http://puu.sh/4ZE6J/3a9c37991d.jpg 
22:10 10crystalmask01: Having two straight sliders looks boring :S
22:16 Rakuen: ok
22:16 10crystalmask01: 03:18:242 - 03:21:273 - Another rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/4ZEkD/5a2eafb7df.jpg
22:19 10crystalmask01: 03:28:242 - 03:30:060 - http://puu.sh/4ZEqe/70bbd948e5.jpg
22:19 10crystalmask01: There's a space at 03:28:848
22:20 10crystalmask01: If you need help with re-modeling and repositioning the objects, just ask :3
22:26 Rakuen: ok
22:26 Rakuen: after I update Ill tell u
22:28 Rakuen: can I keep the last rhythm? :)
22:28 Rakuen: I quite like mine >w<
22:28 10crystalmask01: o3o
22:28 10crystalmask01: umm
22:28 10crystalmask01: ok lol >w<
22:29 Rakuen: yay ^_^
22:30 10crystalmask01: 03:47:333 (3,5) - disliek how the ends are slightly overlapped o3o 
22:30 10crystalmask01: TRy to keep them evenly spaced 
22:31 10crystalmask01: 03:55:970 (1) - Have this spinner start at 03:56:424 -, so its evely spaced between the previous object (03:55:212 (4) - ) and 04:01:273 (1) - 
22:32 10crystalmask01: Plus, spinner starts at the word 'to' the vocals say
22:33 10crystalmask01: and that's it for this diff ^^
22:38 Rakuen: done :3
22:38 10crystalmask01: awesome!
22:38 Rakuen: the part i like the most in my diff is 04:06:727 (2,3,4) - 
22:38 Rakuen: XD
22:39 Rakuen: thanks
22:39 Rakuen: ^_^
22:39 10crystalmask01: np x3
22:39 10crystalmask01: omg
22:39 10crystalmask01: that mod took 1/2 an hour! O_O
22:39 Rakuen: >.>'
22:39 Rakuen: 1 hour 20 min
22:39 Rakuen: something
22:39 10crystalmask01: ...
22:40 10crystalmask01: sorry, my mods can sometimes be in depth >w<
22:40 10crystalmask01: but thats only if I actually like the map :3
22:40 10crystalmask01: this song sounds so sad... ;_;
22:41 10crystalmask01: gah, screw onions
22:41 Rakuen: ._.''
22:41 Rakuen: u watched the vid?
22:41 Rakuen: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIOMRiQaB-U
22:42 Rakuen: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mIOMRiQaB-U
22:42 Rakuen: ^ linked
22:42 10crystalmask01: kk
22:42 Rakuen: go watch >.>
22:42 Rakuen: I'll put that video soon
22:42 Rakuen: if you're anime fans u know what they do inside
22:43 10crystalmask01: yea, they make me shed man tears ;_;
22:44 10crystalmask01: holy cow, where the hell are those onions hiding???
22:44 Rakuen: >.<'

Will mod the other diffs later

Thanks for the IRC >.o /
You can start a new post for further mod if you like
If you don't want a kudosu on new post just tell

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hellooo ~ owo

Why not use 01:34:000 for the preview point? I think it would be better owo

Will consider that

Rakuen wrote:

Thanks for the IRC >.o /
You can start a new post for further mod if you like
If you don't want a kudosu on new post just tell No kuds o3o

[_AI's Hard]
00:13:394 (5,6,1) - Try replacing these notes with 1/1 slider + reverse starting at 00:13:242 like this?
hits the 'ji-kai-i' notes better.
00:22:939 - 00:23:394 has a slider instead, to hit the 'da-ku-da' lyrics on time.
00:58:091 (2) - Move higher, looks weird how the cursor has to move really right just to catch that slider. Creates a strange flow.
*NOTE* You'll have to adjust 00:58:697 (3) - and a few other objects as well.
01:14:606 (1) - Try adding a finish on the head?
01:24:303 (3) - ^
01:46:121 (6) - Remodel its tail lower, so it isn't touching 01:44:909 (5) -
02:19:454 (6) - Move lower, same reason as 00:58:091 (2)
02:34:909 (1) - ?

03:35:212 (3,4,1) - Having them lined up closer like this would create a better effect:


[AI Love You]
00:30:818 (4) - Move to 328/92 so 00:30:666 (3,4) - has symmetry with 00:30:363 (1,2) -

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Storyboard done ~

http://puu.sh/52sUK.zip

this is for your collab diff

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1. offset +2 from current state (669)
2. Audio Lead-In : 1000 on all diff
3. difficult spread is too big between Collab and Hard. try Hard diff more difficulty than current. or make a light Insane? - do not need if you follow my opinion on AI Love you diff -

1. good work on this diff. very good simply.I can't touch this concise patterns. If i pick dare, 03:48:545 (5) - don't need overlap slider to slider. if do not overlap slider to slider, dat flow be like current.
2. 00:47:333 (3,4,5,6) - try make more easier beat. it will be good for Normal diff. difficult beat is not good for Normal diff. not sure it is difficult beat. but rhythm density is high a little bit at around of that section.

1. 02:06:424 (1) - why don't you around end point of slider adjust be good flow with (2) slider like this? - don't care, this is just example.

1. 00:13:242 (2,3) - try use 1/2 slider and a Circle on here? that beat is good for read when playing. if you put note with consider flow, this section more good than current. IMO
2. 00:19:606 (1) - remove this Circle and NC on (2) Circle? this section have slightly far distance between (9) and (1). so players can think the beat like mentioned beat by me when playing.
3. 00:20:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is bad .. this pattern disturbance players' vision. players can recognize zigzag jump (1) and (2)'s place on this section. well.. reduce difficult like beat on here please. and start slider on 00:21:727 - here.
4. omit mod. first, this diff is too overmapped. look that SV, that SV kidding this song's BPM. the beat and arrangements are good anyway. but beat is too subjective, current beat is inconsistent a little bit with song like unnecessary beats. and arrangement is making players be confuse. big distance at low BPM is very bad. I have no idea how to find improvements at current situation. but if I'm mapper of this map, I will reduce beat difficult or remap. As a result this diff need reduce difficulty.

Dark Fang wrote:

wawa

[General]

1. offset +2 from current state (669) Fixed
2. Audio Lead-In : 1000 on all diff Fixed
3. difficult spread is too big between Collab and Hard. try Hard diff more difficulty than current. or make a light Insane? - do not need if you follow my opinion on AI Love you diff - Yes I'm currently making / requesting for a new diff Tell me if u would love to make an insane

[Normal]

1. good work on this diff. very good simply.I can't touch this concise patterns. If i pick dare, 03:48:545 (5) - don't need overlap slider to slider. if do not overlap slider to slider, dat flow be like current. Fixed the overlap
2. 00:47:333 (3,4,5,6) - try make more easier beat. it will be good for Normal diff. difficult beat is not good for Normal diff. not sure it is difficult beat. but rhythm density is high a little bit at around of that section. Will try to change it

cool

-S c a r l e t- wrote:

Just some simple mod~
All these mod is just my suggestion~ Feel free to ignore some of them if it's not helpful :/

• 
  [AI love you]

1. 00:11:424 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that this part has unnecessary big jump, because 00:10:363 (1,2,3) < this part doesn't have jumps. Use a smaller jumps.
2. 00:15:212 (2,3,6,7) - I think these slider should change to circle instead, following the notes at from 00:10:363 (1) - 00:11:879 (4) this part. Just suggestion.
3. 00:19:606 (1,2) - Maybe make a little jumps at this part, since 00:20:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) <this part has jumps too.
4. 00:21:273 (3) - Maybe bring this nearer to the 00:21:727 (6) . Since this part is repeating jumps. yeaa
5. 00:39:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these part is a little packed together, Make them spread out a little more.
6. 01:11:424 (4) - Unnecessary big jump. This part of the song is softer and calming. Try to avoid the jump here~
7. 01:14:151 (1) - Maybe add a note here and 01:14:454 as well. Fits the song better~ it already thr ?...
8. 01:38:394 (5) - Maybe change this repeater to circle instead. The piano part is strong here, the slider repeater doesn't fits the song nicely.
9. 01:29:454 (4,5) - Maybe Ctrl + G at this part. That overlay is kinda hard to read especially with HD. When I play with HD I always miss at this point @@
10. 02:35:212 (5,6,7,8) - This part, the notes are closely packed together. Spread them out a little more.
11. 03:24:757 (5,6,7) - This part I feel a little uncomfortable @@ Even I'm playing that part. I don't really know why either ._. coz my bad mapping ;w;
12. 03:45:515 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that stacking (1),(2) and (3),(4) is not a good idea. yea @@

This map is really nice to play~ The pattern is nice and the flow too especially at kiai time~ But I still feel some parts still has some unnecessary jumps and the pattern doesn't fit the song. I won't state all out because I'm still a no good modder ._. Beautiful song <3

I can't mod Hard and Normal well @@ So..

_AI wrote:

(╯°□°）╯︵ !

ts8zs wrote:

bpm x2
[AI love U]
00:01:576 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056735
00:06:727 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056737
00:07:939 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:11:576 (2,3) - swap
00:13:242 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056744
00:23:848 (6) - move to 376,24
00:19:454 (9) - move to 380,80
00:20:970 (1) - move to 264,284
00:21:273 (3) - move to 156,152
00:31:424 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:40:212 (5) - move to 512,40
01:04:000 (5,6) - Ctrl+G
>01:04:606 (2) - move to 1
01:10:666 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:11:273 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:14:909 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:15:212 (4) - move to 476,84
01:17:333 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:24:606 (1) - move to 296,252
01:32:636 (7) - blanket
01:39:303 (2) - ^
01:40:666 (7) - ^
01:43:091 (6) - Ctrl+G
01:43:394 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:45:970 (9,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056773
01:50:666 (1) - blanket
01:52:788 (1) - blanket
要注意包好啊，这是展现你是否用心（耐心）做图的地方啊，前面有一些只是还可以……你自查吧……后面不说了._. o3o 被抓到不用心
01:57:636 (6) - move to 488,96
02:05:515 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:08:394 (4,5) - swap
02:13:394 - 加个从这里开始的break
02:32:636 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:19:151 (1) - blanket
03:22:182 (5) - Ctrl+G
03:22:636 (7) - Ctrl+G
03:26:727 (2) - move to 444,48
03:38:697 (2) - Ctrl+G
03:39:151 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:39:606 (1,2) - swap
03:54:757 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056794
04:11:424 (4,5) - swap
04:13:091 (2,3,4) - a reverse
[Hard]
低难度因为慢所以blanket看得比较清楚……你懂得？
02:06:424 (1) - remove last 2 points
02:12:788 (1) - remove and break start here
04:18:545 - end at here?

CET 6 wrote:

_AI's Hard

00:32:182 (2,3) - 这个看起来有点··
感觉有点单调了，有的梗出现太多比如01:14:606 (1,2,3) - 03:29:757 (3,4) - 这种排列，尽量试看看用些不同的梗，歌很长，不容易
就因为太单调所以我才放那些烂梗 :p



AI Love You

感觉这个难度做得比较好
谢谢! <3 >.o/



大概先这样吧，感觉可以irc来讲比较好
加油！

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Rakuen wrote:

Thanks for the IRC >.o /
You can start a new post for further mod if you like
If you don't want a kudosu on new post just tell No kuds o3o

Okay, modded the rest of your diffs QAQ

[_AI's Hard]
00:13:394 (5,6,1) - Try replacing these notes with 1/1 slider + reverse starting at 00:13:242 like this? nahh :p i folo the music du du dut
hits the 'ji-kai-i' notes better.
00:22:939 - 00:23:394 has a slider instead, to hit the 'da-ku-da' lyrics on time. same as above
00:58:091 (2) - Move higher, looks weird how the cursor has to move really right just to catch that slider. Creates a strange flow.
*NOTE* You'll have to adjust 00:58:697 (3) - and a few other objects as well.
01:14:606 (1) - Try adding a finish on the head?
01:24:303 (3) - ^
01:46:121 (6) - Remodel its tail lower, so it isn't touching 01:44:909 (5) -
02:19:454 (6) - Move lower, same reason as 00:58:091 (2)
02:34:909 (1) - ?

03:35:212 (3,4,1) - Having them lined up closer like this would create a better effect:


[AI Love You]
00:30:818 (4) - Move to 328/92 so 00:30:666 (3,4) - has symmetry with 00:30:363 (1,2) - yeaa

Hope this helps~! ^^

Dark Fang wrote:

wawa

[_AI's Hard]

1. 02:06:424 (1) - why don't you around end point of slider adjust be good flow with (2) slider like this? - don't care, this is just example.

good. overall map has good flow follow this song.

[AI Love You]

1. 00:13:242 (2,3) - try use 1/2 slider and a Circle on here? that beat is good for read when playing. if you put note with consider flow, this section more good than current. IMO Fixed in previous mod
2. 00:19:606 (1) - remove this Circle and NC on (2) Circle? this section have slightly far distance between (9) and (1). so players can think the beat like mentioned beat by me when playing. ^
3. 00:20:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is bad .. this pattern disturbance players' vision. players can recognize zigzag jump (1) and (2)'s place on this section. well.. reduce difficult like beat on here please. and start slider on 00:21:727 - here. ^
4. omit mod. first, this diff is too overmapped. look that SV, that SV kidding this song's BPM. the beat and arrangements are good anyway. but beat is too subjective, current beat is inconsistent a little bit with song like unnecessary beats. and arrangement is making players be confuse. big distance at low BPM is very bad. I have no idea how to find improvements at current situation. but if I'm mapper of this map, I will reduce beat difficult or remap. As a result this diff need reduce difficulty. Will highly consider this but i will keep it first , I wanna fully show the "feeling" of the song, the powerful word in the lyric, the touching sentence about all the mythical love story, just like those dancer dance without thinking when they first heard the music, as a jump in the map means something that should be mention/pointed/felt, just like a BOLD in a normal sentence

i'm always respecting mappers' maps and style. but this one is a little serious
if you remap or adjust on Collaboration, call me again for remod

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Offset: 651

o3o

_AI wrote:

(╯°□°）╯︵ !

Kobato Channn wrote:

Just wanted to say, good job on finishing the Insane mode .