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Skalim wrote:

i´ll fix now all, and more later i´ll test the SV of asd123iii, thanks for the help, just wait

Edit: all fixed, except some suggerences (3 or 4), thanks for all cross ^^ (when the map no need mod, i´ll put the hitsounds, but i´ll need help)
seems you forgot something :p
ah i can help you about the hitsounds :D
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Here my mods In-game PM
[General]
Change Audio song to 192 kbps for better quality

[3i's 4K Novice]
too hard SV change , so need to delete all
00:42:946 (42946|0,43183|0,43420|0,43656|0) - i would recommend you to didn't make this beat since this is easy difficult (or normal difficult)

[6K Basic] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|
00:14:525 (14525|1) - move this to 3rd
00:25:893 (25893|2) - move to 4th
00:29:051 (29051|2) - move to 2nd
01:16:420 (76420|4) - move to 6th
01:17:367 (77367|1) - move to 1st
01:20:525 (80525|1,81156|4) - move to 4th and 3rd
01:22:735 (82735|3) - move to 5th
01:47:683 (107683|2) - move to 2nd

[7K Basic] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:19:262 - Try this http://puu.sh/5zoKF.png
00:30:946 (30946|6) - move to 6th
00:56:209 (56209|0) - move to 2nd
01:07:578 (67578|5,67893|5,68209|5) - move to 3rd so its easy to do
01:21:314 (81314|5,81472|4) - move to left (one column)
01:21:788 (81788|3) - move to 3rd
01:23:051 - Try this http://puu.sh/5zoYU.png
01:25:578 - same like above (mirror)

[5K Advance] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|
00:19:578 (19578|4,19656|3,19735|0,19814|1,19893|3,19972|4,20051|1,20130|0) - i suggest change pattern to stream
01:05:446 (65446|4,66709|1) - move to white line (1/1 beat) since previous difficult had same beat position
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Reikosaka wrote:

Here my mods In-game PM
[General]
Change Audio song to 192 kbps for better quality

[3i's 4K Novice]
too hard SV change , so need to delete all
00:42:946 (42946|0,43183|0,43420|0,43656|0) - i would recommend you to didn't make this beat since this is easy difficult (or normal difficult) moderate yea, delete umm, is not necessary, i´ll talk with asd123iii.

[6K Basic] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|
00:14:525 (14525|1) - move this to 3rd
00:25:893 (25893|2) - move to 4th
00:29:051 (29051|2) - move to 2nd
01:16:420 (76420|4) - move to 6th DONE
01:17:367 (77367|1) - move to 1st
01:20:525 (80525|1,81156|4) - move to 4th and 3rd
01:22:735 (82735|3) - move to 5th
01:47:683 (107683|2) - move to 2nd

[7K Basic] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:19:262 - Try this http://puu.sh/5zoKF.png
00:30:946 (30946|6) - move to 6th
00:56:209 (56209|0) - move to 2nd
01:07:578 (67578|5,67893|5,68209|5) - move to 3rd so its easy to do DONE
01:21:314 (81314|5,81472|4) - move to left (one column)
01:21:788 (81788|3) - move to 3rd
01:23:051 - Try this http://puu.sh/5zoYU.png
01:25:578 - same like above (mirror)

[5K Advance] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|
00:19:578 (19578|4,19656|3,19735|0,19814|1,19893|3,19972|4,20051|1,20130|0) - i suggest change pattern to stream some changes in this but i no see real problems with this pattern.
01:05:446 (65446|4,66709|1) - move to white line (1/1 beat) since previous difficult had same beat position
Thanks for you mod ^^ any suggestion tell me

DONE: All done
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Reikosaka wrote:

Here my mods In-game PM
[General]
Change Audio song to 192 kbps for better quality

[3i's 4K Novice]
too hard SV change , so need to delete all fix, say really, I think this SV just hard for SS, not hard for play. :P
00:42:946 (42946|0,43183|0,43420|0,43656|0) - i would recommend you to didn't make this beat since this is easy difficult (or normal difficult)
redo this part
[6K Basic] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|
00:14:525 (14525|1) - move this to 3rd
00:25:893 (25893|2) - move to 4th
00:29:051 (29051|2) - move to 2nd
01:16:420 (76420|4) - move to 6th
01:17:367 (77367|1) - move to 1st
01:20:525 (80525|1,81156|4) - move to 4th and 3rd
01:22:735 (82735|3) - move to 5th
01:47:683 (107683|2) - move to 2nd

[7K Basic] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:19:262 - Try this http://puu.sh/5zoKF.png
00:30:946 (30946|6) - move to 6th
00:56:209 (56209|0) - move to 2nd
01:07:578 (67578|5,67893|5,68209|5) - move to 3rd so its easy to do
01:21:314 (81314|5,81472|4) - move to left (one column)
01:21:788 (81788|3) - move to 3rd
01:23:051 - Try this http://puu.sh/5zoYU.png
01:25:578 - same like above (mirror)

[5K Advance] Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|
00:19:578 (19578|4,19656|3,19735|0,19814|1,19893|3,19972|4,20051|1,20130|0) - i suggest change pattern to stream
01:05:446 (65446|4,66709|1) - move to white line (1/1 beat) since previous difficult had same beat position
Thanks

http://puu.sh/5zFi0.rar
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Column: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]
This link is not original sound voltex Max Burning!!'s pattern(Actually it's Reflec Beat), but check rhythm by using this video.(especially 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104) http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21977659

00:56:999 (56999|1) - I'm not sure this note should be placed at here or 00:57:078 , anyway other difficulties are doesn't match with 4K NOVICE's rhythm. check plz.

[3i's 4K NOVICE]

OD:6 → OD:7
00:35:999 (35999|0,36314|3,36630|1,36946|0) - just suggestion. How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141369
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141396 fix this part plz

btw I like your SV settings before update(But it was too hard to set it at this difficulty imo :o )

[6K BASIC]

00:46:735 - Add some note? 4K NOVICE has this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141412
00:52:420 (52420|1) - This note should be at 00:52:499
00:57:156 (57156|4) - delete. You placed notes at this part by knob's Effect sounds
01:01:578 (61578|2,61578|3) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141437
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141446 fix this part and refer to General article
01:38:841 (98841|0,99472|4) - Ctrl+H?
01:45:314 - add note at 1

[7K BASIC]

00:30:472 - beat missing?
00:41:630 (41630|4) - unsnapped. This note should be at 00:41:604
01:01:499 - beat missing. How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141479
01:07:262 - add note at 2
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141483 fix this part and refer to General article

[5K ADVANCED]

00:04:104 - add one more note
00:14:209 - ^
00:36:630 (36630|2) - delete
01:06:709 (66709|1) - This LN should be start at 01:06:630
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141501 fix this part and refer to General article

[6K EXHAUST]

00:23:841 - maybe add note at 1
00:46:420 (46420|4,46420|0) - delete, no sound here.
00:46:578 (46578|2) - ^
01:03:630 (63630|5) - this note should be placed at 01:03:551
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141522 fix this part and refer to General article

[Rage!!]

00:16:893 - how about this pattern? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141542 http://puu.sh/5zJFD.jpg
00:42:789 (42789|4) - delete
00:46:420 (46420|5,46578|1) - ^
00:46:735 - add 2 more notes here
01:09:315 (69315|1,69394|5,69473|2,69552|4) - make pattern like this http://puu.sh/5zJJ9.jpg
01:09:630 (69630|5,69630|1,69788|2,69788|4) - ^ http://puu.sh/5zJMt.jpg
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141562 fix this part and refer to General article
01:54:156 - add note at 0 and 4? because this part is end of song.

Good Luck! :D
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Hi Skalim :3 Random mod para el 7K Rage!!
Columnas = 0,1,2,3,4,5,6

• Desde 00:04:104 - podes agregar un LN en la columna 0 hasta 00:04:420 - Por el Yeah! de fondo, ya que en esta parte lo hiciste 00:14:525 - Creo yo que seria bueno para darle variedad al comienzo, ya que luego por como cambia el ritmo del mapa no hay necesidad de ponerle LN a esas partes xD..Si decides ponerle LN, seria bueno asi ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141844 ... En el 00:09:156 - Asi --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141849 , quedarian bien con esos patrones xD.
• Desde 00:11:683 - Hasta 00:13:578 - Creo que quedaria bien un patron asi ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141864
00:14:525 - Aca podes agregar una 3ra nota wn o.o, asi como agregaste de 3notas desde 00:11:683 - Hasta 00:12:946 - en la columna 2 estaria bien xD
• 00:23:683 - Aca podes agrager una 2da nota, por la misma razón ^ en la columna 2 creo que estaria mejor, si no en la 6 xD
• 00:24:314 - Tambien aca podes agregar una 2da nota tambien en la 2da columna xD, quedaria bien con el stream
• 00:42:946 - Hasta 00:43:893 - Podes poner el LN en la columna 0, para no dejarlo vacio xD y poner esa parte asi --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141915, o asi --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141920, o asi --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141929 (Esta solo si decides ponerle una 3ra nota en 00:42:946 - , O como veas xD el chiste es que no dejes sola esa columna que te mencione >_<, que se ve rara para mi xD
• 01:16:183 (76183|2) - Aca podes mover esta nota a la columna 1 para asi mover tambien esta nota 01:16:262 (76262|3) - <-- (No selecciona esta ;_;, bug bug everiguer.., pero bue es la que esta en la columna 3 xD) - Para crear un patron bueno a mi parecer xD
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Ya lo demás del mapa me parece bien, muy buen mapa bro :D, suerte con el rank ^^, saludos!.
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Chocoliti wrote:

Column: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]
This link is not original sound voltex Max Burning!!'s pattern(Actually it's Reflec Beat), but check rhythm by using this video.(especially 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104) http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21977659

00:56:999 (56999|1) - I'm not sure this note should be placed at here or 00:57:078 , anyway other difficulties are doesn't match with 4K NOVICE's rhythm. check plz. I think it should be here 00:56:999 - , Fixed

[3i's 4K NOVICE]

OD:6 → OD:7 fixed
00:35:999 (35999|0,36314|3,36630|1,36946|0) - just suggestion. How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141369 fixed
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141396 fix this part plz fixed

btw I like your SV settings before update(But it was too hard to set it at this difficulty imo :o )Glad to hear that :)

[6K BASIC]

00:46:735 - Add some note? 4K NOVICE has this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141412
00:52:420 (52420|1) - This note should be at 00:52:499
00:57:156 (57156|4) - delete. You placed notes at this part by knob's Effect sounds
01:01:578 (61578|2,61578|3) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141437
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141446 fix this part and refer to General article
01:38:841 (98841|0,99472|4) - Ctrl+H?
01:45:314 - add note at 1

[7K BASIC]

00:30:472 - beat missing?
00:41:630 (41630|4) - unsnapped. This note should be at 00:41:604
01:01:499 - beat missing. How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141479
01:07:262 - add note at 2
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141483 fix this part and refer to General article

[5K ADVANCED]

00:04:104 - add one more note
00:14:209 - ^
00:36:630 (36630|2) - delete
01:06:709 (66709|1) - This LN should be start at 01:06:630
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141501 fix this part and refer to General article

[6K EXHAUST]

00:23:841 - maybe add note at 1
00:46:420 (46420|4,46420|0) - delete, no sound here.
00:46:578 (46578|2) - ^
01:03:630 (63630|5) - this note should be placed at 01:03:551
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141522 fix this part and refer to General article

[Rage!!]

00:16:893 - how about this pattern? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141542 http://puu.sh/5zJFD.jpg
00:42:789 (42789|4) - delete
00:46:420 (46420|5,46578|1) - ^
00:46:735 - add 2 more notes here
01:09:315 (69315|1,69394|5,69473|2,69552|4) - make pattern like this http://puu.sh/5zJJ9.jpg
01:09:630 (69630|5,69630|1,69788|2,69788|4) - ^ http://puu.sh/5zJMt.jpg
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141562 fix this part and refer to General article
01:54:156 - add note at 0 and 4? because this part is end of song.


Good Luck! :D
Thanks :)

http://puu.sh/5zRJx.rar
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Chocoliti wrote:

Column: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]
This link is not original sound voltex Max Burning!!'s pattern(Actually it's Reflec Beat), but check rhythm by using this video.(especially 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104) http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21977659 I am not trying remap the diff, this map is made by me and asd123iii and i wanna get this ranked with my patterns suggerences

00:56:999 (56999|1) - I'm not sure this note should be placed at here or 00:57:078 , anyway other difficulties are doesn't match with 4K NOVICE's rhythm. check plz.

[3i's 4K NOVICE]

OD:6 → OD:7
00:35:999 (35999|0,36314|3,36630|1,36946|0) - just suggestion. How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141369
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141396 fix this part plz

btw I like your SV settings before update(But it was too hard to set it at this difficulty imo :o )

[6K BASIC]

00:46:735 - Add some note? 4K NOVICE has this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141412
00:52:420 (52420|1) - This note should be at 00:52:499
00:57:156 (57156|4) - delete. You placed notes at this part by knob's Effect sounds is not necessary
01:01:578 (61578|2,61578|3) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141437
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141446 fix this part and refer to General article The same.
01:38:841 (98841|0,99472|4) - Ctrl+H?
01:45:314 - add note at 1

[7K BASIC]

00:30:472 - beat missing? No, is a "prepare for the distortion"
00:41:630 (41630|4) - unsnapped. This note should be at 00:41:604
01:01:499 - beat missing. How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141479
01:07:262 - add note at 2
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141483 fix this part and refer to General article The same problem

[5K ADVANCED]

00:04:104 - add one more note
00:14:209 - ^
00:36:630 (36630|2) - delete here continue the stream
01:06:709 (66709|1) - This LN should be start at 01:06:630
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141501 fix this part and refer to General article The same.

[6K EXHAUST]

00:23:841 - maybe add note at 1
00:46:420 (46420|4,46420|0) - delete, no sound here.
00:46:578 (46578|2) - ^
01:03:630 (63630|5) - this note should be placed at 01:03:551
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141522 fix this part and refer to General article The same of ^

[Rage!!]

00:16:893 - how about this pattern? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141542 http://puu.sh/5zJFD.jpg
00:42:789 (42789|4) - delete
00:46:420 (46420|5,46578|1) - ^
00:46:735 - add 2 more notes here
01:09:315 (69315|1,69394|5,69473|2,69552|4) - make pattern like this http://puu.sh/5zJJ9.jpg
01:09:630 (69630|5,69630|1,69788|2,69788|4) - ^ http://puu.sh/5zJMt.jpg
01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 Here should be start like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141562 fix this part and refer to General article deleted 1 note of the pattern, but again, i am no trying copy the original map.
01:54:156 - add note at 0 and 4? because this part is end of song.

Good Luck! :D

-DanteMayCry- wrote:

Hi Skalim :3 Random mod para el 7K Rage!!
Columnas = 0,1,2,3,4,5,6

• Desde 00:04:104 - podes agregar un LN en la columna 0 hasta 00:04:420 - Por el Yeah! de fondo, ya que en esta parte lo hiciste 00:14:525 - Creo yo que seria bueno para darle variedad al comienzo, ya que luego por como cambia el ritmo del mapa no hay necesidad de ponerle LN a esas partes xD..Si decides ponerle LN, seria bueno asi ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141844 ... En el 00:09:156 - Asi --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141849 , quedarian bien con esos patrones xD. No totalmente hecho pero me sirvio lo del "yeah"
• Desde 00:11:683 - Hasta 00:13:578 - Creo que quedaria bien un patron asi ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141864
00:14:525 - Aca podes agregar una 3ra nota wn o.o, asi como agregaste de 3notas desde 00:11:683 - Hasta 00:12:946 - en la columna 2 estaria bien xD
• 00:23:683 - Aca podes agrager una 2da nota, por la misma razón ^ en la columna 2 creo que estaria mejor, si no en la 6 xD En la 2 esta bien
• 00:24:314 - Tambien aca podes agregar una 2da nota tambien en la 2da columna xD, quedaria bien con el stream
• 00:42:946 - Hasta 00:43:893 - Podes poner el LN en la columna 0, para no dejarlo vacio xD y poner esa parte asi --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141915, o asi --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141920, o asi --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1141929 (Esta solo si decides ponerle una 3ra nota en 00:42:946 - , O como veas xD el chiste es que no dejes sola esa columna que te mencione >_<, que se ve rara para mi xD Hecho, pero deje el mismo patron de antes, solo que lo movi uno a la izquierda, ahora no hay espacios en blanco
• 01:16:183 (76183|2) - Aca podes mover esta nota a la columna 1 para asi mover tambien esta nota 01:16:262 (76262|3) - <-- (No selecciona esta ;_;, bug bug everiguer.., pero bue es la que esta en la columna 3 xD) - Para crear un patron bueno a mi parecer xD movi la nota y lo deje solamente asi, tambien se creo un buen patron de esta manera XD
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Ya lo demás del mapa me parece bien, muy buen mapa bro :D, suerte con el rank ^^, saludos!.
Thanks so much for the mods ^^, a mod is one more step of the rank.
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Skalim wrote:

This link is not original sound voltex Max Burning!!'s pattern(Actually it's Reflec Beat), but check rhythm by using this video.(especially 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104) http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21977659 I am not trying remap the diff, this map is made by me and asd123iii and i wanna get this ranked with my patterns suggerences

Sorry, I mean not pointing out your own pattern, notes' timing is wrong. Between 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 all notes should be moved 1/4 earlier. (ex: In 6K BASIC Diff, First this LN should be end at 01:32:525 , 01:32:604 (92604|0) - this should be at 01:32:525 , 01:32:762 (92762|2) - this should be at 01:32:683 like this. Refer to my screen shots that I uploded and 3i's 4K NOVICE diff. asd123iii fixed that part.)
posted
Hi, nice mapper Skalim :)
I'm modding beginner(studying and practicing), so please see to a reference grade.

Rage!!:
00:06:000 (6000|5,6000|6,6000|1,6000|4) - timing feel little early
00:41:289 (41289|6) - timing feel early
01:00:631 (60631|6) - to which sound does it correspond? if you don't have intention, I recommend delete

It's my liking, so no problem even if it does not change.
01:11:052 (71052|5,71052|3) - change hold
01:12:000 BPMx1.50 - 01:11:052~01:12:157 change over BPMx2.0
01:54:156 (114156|4,114156|0,114157|6,114157|2) - change hold

Since the translation site was used in part, it may not be transmitted ;;
Do your best!! XD
posted
Hi, there are mods for your diffs except 4K diff, it's nice and easy to play already ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diff)
5K ADVANCED
00:02:999 (2999|2) - move to 3rd column, it's more suitable with your pattern here rather that repeating previous position

00:03:788 - add here note to 2nd column according to the sound, don't ignore it here, it'll be also good transition between your previous and next going patterns here

00:04:735 (4735|4) - move to 2nd column too, this triplet will be more playable, there's no need to place beginning if so far from next going note

00:13:905 - same suggestion like previous - add here note to 2nd column according to the beat sound which goes there

00:17:841 - add here one more note to 0 column according to the beat again, dong ignore this sound, it's clearly heard there

00:24:630 (24630|0) - move to 3rd column to place this chorus correctly here according to previous note, check that

00:31:578 - add here at least one note to accent the strong beat, it's suitable with SV here, don't be afraid of it

00:32:683 (32683|3) - this note should be here 00:32:762 - according to the music, check it with lower playback and you'll see

00:36:551 (36551|0,36551|4) - this chord should be here 00:36:472 according to the beat, listen closely to it here

00:49:420 (49420|1) - move to centre column or to 4th column here, it'll be better chord transition

01:15:235 - add here one more note to 1st column according to the music and perform triplet note


(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 for 6K diffs)
6K BASIC
00:06:332 - I suggest you to make this map more accent-able, place at least one more note here to 3rd column for it or better add notes to 0 and 6th columns to accent this beat

00:11:367 - add here notes to 2nd and 3rd columns too or add at least one of them to accent this part too

00:29:683 (29683|3) - move it to 2nd column, it's more suitable transition between previous and next going patterns here

00:46:972 - add here one more note according to the beat here, it's missed now but clearly sounds there

00:55:972 (55972|3) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note for your pattern here

01:02:209 - I suggest you to accent this break part too with adding chorus (0 and 6th column notes), there's not enough placing only LNs for it and it wouldn't be difficult here

01:23:367 - add here at least one single note according to the beat which goes there, don't leave this place empty (add to 3rd column I suggest) / repeat it here 01:25:893 and 01:28:420 here to, no need to leave these parts empty coz the beat is clearly sounds there

01:41:367 (101367|1) - move to 2nd column and perform smooth transition between your patterns there


6K EXHAUST
00:02:367 (2367|2) - move this note to 3rd column, it's more comfortable to play it here and more suitable with next going pattern

00:04:104 (4104|4) - there's no need to move this not so far from LN here, move it to 2nd column and you'll see that this pattern is more comfortable here

00:07:578 (7578|1) - I recommend you to "open" chord here and move this note to 0 column, there's some difference in play style after doing it, listen to the music here and you'll understand it

00:23:683 (23683|1,23841|2) - move these notes to 2nd and 3rd columns accordingly, it's better to place them here after chord which goes before them

00:29:378 - add here one more note to 4th column here to accent the beat, placing one note is not enough for EX

00:33:078 (33078|2) - delete this note, there's no suitable sound for placing it here

00:52:104 - add here one more note to 3rd column to make chord here according to the beat, one note isn't enough to accent it

01:24:156 (84156|4) - move this note to 3rd column again and "open" this chord and make comfortable chord transition here

01:29:999 (89999|3) - move to 1st column to make this note suitable with your next going stair pattern

Here 01:30:156 and here 01:30:314 - you can add more notes to 3rd and 4th columns accordingly and make double stair pattern, I think it'll be good there

01:34:656 (94656|2) - move this note to 1st column and perform comfortable transition between chords in this part


(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K BASIC
00:05:999 (5999|5,5999|4) - I suggest you to remove one of these notes coz chord of 3 notes in a row looks hard for Basic diff

00:09:788 (9788|2,10104|0) - switch these notes and reverse them to 0 and 2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable to play here with your next going pattern

00:11:051 - you can add here one more note to 3rd column to accent beat sound here like you did it for next part here 00:11:367

00:28:420 (28420|6) - move this note to 4th or 5th column, don't place notes in triplets far from each other, it's really uncomfortable to play, move them closer

00:31:893 (31893|6) - move it to 5th column, to perform next going pattern correctly, you already have LN and next going single note in 6th column

00:34:578 (34578|0) - move to 5th column again to make stair pattern here, there's no suitable sound to place two notes in a row in this column

00:51:551 (51551|2) - there are already two holds and one single note so I suggest you to delete this note, it's hard for Basic diff

01:01:735 - add here one more note to 2nd column according to the sound and connect it with your previous pattern by doing that

01:23:130 (83130|5) and 01:23:446 (83446|3) - I suggest you to delete these notes, playing such triplets with holding LN is difficult for Basic

01:25:656 (85656|1,85972|3) - save suggestion ^ this diff don't look Basic with such patterns, they are hard for many beginners


Rage!!
It's hard to understand these patterns, but I see there some really overmapped places. Please, re-model chords in this diff, which include more than 5 notes in them. After it I recommend you to re-check jacks in this diff, no need to place so many jacks in it so try to re-arrange them without overmapping. After all, there's no need to overmap all sounds by placing two notes for each sound, you can make really hard diff without it, just cut some chords by 30% and re-arrange other notes, when you make this, you'll see that after it your diff will looks better and cleaner.


So many diffs. Nice mapset again \o/
Good luck :3/
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Chocoliti wrote:

Skalim wrote:

This link is not original sound voltex Max Burning!!'s pattern(Actually it's Reflec Beat), but check rhythm by using this video.(especially 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104) http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21977659 I am not trying remap the diff, this map is made by me and asd123iii and i wanna get this ranked with my patterns suggerences

Sorry, I mean not pointing out your own pattern, notes' timing is wrong. Between 01:32:209 ~ 01:40:104 all notes should be moved 1/4 earlier. (ex: In 6K BASIC Diff, First this LN should be end at 01:32:525 , 01:32:604 (92604|0) - this should be at 01:32:525 , 01:32:762 (92762|2) - this should be at 01:32:683 like this. Refer to my screen shots that I uploded and 3i's 4K NOVICE diff. asd123iii fixed that part.)
WHAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!! (and osu crash) (the timming is good, but some LN are bad, i´ll fix it more later).

5K timming fixed, RAGE!! LNs fixed, 6K minor problems fixed (why occur these problem ._.?), 7K LNs fixed, 6K basic minor problems fixed and well...

asd123iii, you turn, the old timming of you diff is good, listen you map with drum and you´ll find the problem.

Thanks so much chocoliti ^^.

AceNic wrote:

Hi, nice mapper Skalim :)
I'm modding beginner(studying and practicing), so please see to a reference grade.

Rage!!:
00:06:000 (6000|5,6000|6,6000|1,6000|4) - timing feel little early i listen good the song
00:41:289 (41289|6) - timing feel early ^
01:00:631 (60631|6) - to which sound does it correspond? if you don't have intention, I recommend delete

It's my liking, so no problem even if it does not change.
01:11:052 (71052|5,71052|3) - change hold is not necessary, is the reason what i put a speed change here XD
01:12:000 BPMx1.50 - 01:11:052~01:12:157 change over BPMx2.0
01:54:156 (114156|4,114156|0,114157|6,114157|2) - change hold is very much used in every maps, i don´t wannaise these metod in this map, sorry ^^

Since the translation site was used in part, it may not be transmitted ;;
Do your best!! XD
Thanks AceNic, good mod for you first time ^^

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your diffs except 4K diff, it's nice and easy to play already ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diff)
5K ADVANCED
00:02:999 (2999|2) - move to 3rd column, it's more suitable with your pattern here rather that repeating previous position

00:03:788 - add here note to 2nd column according to the sound, don't ignore it here, it'll be also good transition between your previous and next going patterns here

00:04:735 (4735|4) - move to 2nd column too, this triplet will be more playable, there's no need to place beginning if so far from next going note

00:13:905 - same suggestion like previous - add here note to 2nd column according to the beat sound which goes there

00:17:841 - add here one more note to 0 column according to the beat again, dong ignore this sound, it's clearly heard there

00:24:630 (24630|0) - move to 3rd column to place this chorus correctly here according to previous note, check that

00:31:578 - add here at least one note to accent the strong beat, it's suitable with SV here, don't be afraid of it

00:32:683 (32683|3) - this note should be here 00:32:762 - according to the music, check it with lower playback and you'll see

00:36:551 (36551|0,36551|4) - this chord should be here 00:36:472 according to the beat, listen closely to it here

00:49:420 (49420|1) - move to centre column or to 4th column here, it'll be better chord transition

01:15:235 - add here one more note to 1st column according to the music and perform triplet note


(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 for 6K diffs)
6K BASIC
00:06:332 - I suggest you to make this map more accent-able, place at least one more note here to 3rd column for it or better add notes to 0 and 6th columns to accent this beat

00:11:367 - add here notes to 2nd and 3rd columns too or add at least one of them to accent this part too

00:29:683 (29683|3) - move it to 2nd column, it's more suitable transition between previous and next going patterns here

00:46:972 - add here one more note according to the beat here, it's missed now but clearly sounds there

00:55:972 (55972|3) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note for your pattern here

01:02:209 - I suggest you to accent this break part too with adding chorus (0 and 6th column notes), there's not enough placing only LNs for it and it wouldn't be difficult here

01:23:367 - add here at least one single note according to the beat which goes there, don't leave this place empty (add to 3rd column I suggest) / repeat it here 01:25:893 and 01:28:420 here to, no need to leave these parts empty coz the beat is clearly sounds there this pause is a "prepare for LN practice" XD.

01:41:367 (101367|1) - move to 2nd column and perform smooth transition between your patterns there


6K EXHAUST
00:02:367 (2367|2) - move this note to 3rd column, it's more comfortable to play it here and more suitable with next going pattern

00:04:104 (4104|4) - there's no need to move this not so far from LN here, move it to 2nd column and you'll see that this pattern is more comfortable here

00:07:578 (7578|1) - I recommend you to "open" chord here and move this note to 0 column, there's some difference in play style after doing it, listen to the music here and you'll understand it

00:23:683 (23683|1,23841|2) - move these notes to 2nd and 3rd columns accordingly, it's better to place them here after chord which goes before them

00:29:378 - add here one more note to 4th column here to accent the beat, placing one note is not enough for EX

00:33:078 (33078|2) - delete this note, there's no suitable sound for placing it here

00:52:104 - add here one more note to 3rd column to make chord here according to the beat, one note isn't enough to accent it

01:24:156 (84156|4) - move this note to 3rd column again and "open" this chord and make comfortable chord transition here

01:29:999 (89999|3) - move to 1st column to make this note suitable with your next going stair pattern

Here 01:30:156 and here 01:30:314 - you can add more notes to 3rd and 4th columns accordingly and make double stair pattern, I think it'll be good there

01:34:656 (94656|2) - move this note to 1st column and perform comfortable transition between chords in this part


(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K BASIC
00:05:999 (5999|5,5999|4) - I suggest you to remove one of these notes coz chord of 3 notes in a row looks hard for Basic diff

00:09:788 (9788|2,10104|0) - switch these notes and reverse them to 0 and 2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable to play here with your next going pattern

00:11:051 - you can add here one more note to 3rd column to accent beat sound here like you did it for next part here 00:11:367

00:28:420 (28420|6) - move this note to 4th or 5th column, don't place notes in triplets far from each other, it's really uncomfortable to play, move them closer

00:31:893 (31893|6) - move it to 5th column, to perform next going pattern correctly, you already have LN and next going single note in 6th column

00:34:578 (34578|0) - move to 5th column again to make stair pattern here, there's no suitable sound to place two notes in a row in this column

00:51:551 (51551|2) - there are already two holds and one single note so I suggest you to delete this note, it's hard for Basic diff

01:01:735 - add here one more note to 2nd column according to the sound and connect it with your previous pattern by doing that

01:23:130 (83130|5) and 01:23:446 (83446|3) - I suggest you to delete these notes, playing such triplets with holding LN is difficult for Basic

01:25:656 (85656|1,85972|3) - save suggestion ^ this diff don't look Basic with such patterns, they are hard for many beginners


Rage!!
It's hard to understand these patterns, but I see there some really overmapped places. Please, re-model chords in this diff, which include more than 5 notes in them. After it I recommend you to re-check jacks in this diff, no need to place so many jacks in it so try to re-arrange them without overmapping. After all, there's no need to overmap all sounds by placing two notes for each sound, you can make really hard diff without it, just cut some chords by 30% and re-arrange other notes, when you make this, you'll see that after it your diff will looks better and cleaner.


So many diffs. Nice mapset again \o/
Good luck :3/
Ok, very much peoples say me what the "rage!!" is overmapped, now i deleted some notes of the last part, i no consider overmapped this diff in the start of the song, but well, a try is a try XD thanks so much for the mod ^^
posted
Change back to old timing~

http://puu.sh/5BS3u.rar
posted
Hi there. Here's my mod as requested. :)

[General]
- You must add hitsounds if you want this set ranked. This applies to all maps.

[6K BASIC]
00:01:578 Add normal note in 3rd column.
00:21:788 (21788|1) Move to 3rd column. At same time, add normal note in 4th column.
01:07:893 (67893|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:08:525 (68525|4) Move to 4th column.

Other than that, there's not much else I can suggest so here's a star. :)
Call me for recheck after applying my mod.
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PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. Here's my mod as requested. :)

[General]
- You must add hitsounds if you want this set ranked. This applies to all maps.

[6K BASIC]
00:01:578 Add normal note in 3rd column.
00:21:788 (21788|1) Move to 3rd column. At same time, add normal note in 4th column.
01:07:893 (67893|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:08:525 (68525|4) Move to 4th column.

Other than that, there's not much else I can suggest so here's a star. :)
Call me for recheck after applying my mod.
i´ll put hitsounds when the map is really ended and modded (and this is the momment, +25 SP finally :D) thanks for the mod ^^.
posted
ALL Hitsounded!!, ready for the hitsounds mod
posted
Hi there. BAT check as requested.

I noticed that the volume for each difficulty is slightly inconsistent:
3i's 4K NOVICE - 85%
5K ADVANCED - 83% mostly
6K BASIC - 85%
6K EXHAUST - 73% mostly
7K BASIC - 82%
Rage!! - 72% mostly

I recommend that you should just set them all to 75% or 80%.
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PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. BAT check as requested.

I noticed that the volume for each difficulty is slightly inconsistent:
3i's 4K NOVICE - 85%
5K ADVANCED - 83% mostly
6K BASIC - 85%
6K EXHAUST - 73% mostly
7K BASIC - 82%
Rage!! - 72% mostly

I recommend that you should just set them all to 75% or 80%.
ok, I´ll fix it now, thanks ^^

EDIT: Rage!! volume = 60% because the map got very much notes and with 75% is a little weird listen the soft notes all the map XD.
posted
Hmm, alright then. Bubbled. :)
posted
You maybe need Rename your Diff name : Rage!!----->7K Rage!!
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