If you could get an mp3 that is NOT cut off at the end, that would be awesome D: The mp3 is correct, it's normal for the song to finish in that way
00:05:79 (1) - This speed up feels sort of unnatural. Sure you wanna keep it? Luxary don't want change this
02:14:19 (1,1,2) - That pattern is so weird, I really suggest moving the second slider ;( fixed
00:53:00 (3,4,5) - This pattern sounds and plays awkwardly :< fixed
01:05:84 (9,1) - It MIGHT trip people up how close those notes are to each other. It didn't trip me up, changing it would probably be best. hmm fixed
01:44:36 (1,2,3) - It feels a bit unnatural how these sliders slow down. Up to you if you wanna change it. I don't want change this
No problem! And wow, those sliders... They look totally unrankable, but hey, they feel natural to me and they shouldn't trip up players too much, so I'm fine with 'em.
00:12:59 (3,4,5) - Wat... this spacing was weiiird. fixed
01:45:11 (2,1) - those notes feel so close to each other. Or maybe that's just me. Up to you. fixed
Okay, this feels a bit hard, but new players should always be able to understand the patterns. And the HPDrain should be low enough for them to be able to make mistakes anyway.