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Tenmon - Poem of Sky and Sea

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fergas
769 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
fergas
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 октября 2013 г. at 16:12:04

Artist: Tenmon
Title: Poem of Sky and Sea
Source: Byousoku 5 Centimeters
Tags: 5cm Per Second ost Sora to Umi no Shi ost anime
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4392kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,59 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (4,37 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Tenmon - Poem of Sky and Sea
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st map.
I am not strong at mapping. Tell me all your ideas about it(timing, distance, new notes, etc). Hope i become better with your help. =)
Want GD? Write PM!
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Easy ~ 100% need check (attention on sounds)
Hard ~ 95% need check
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Changelog
************29.10.13
General:
-Used some tips by LegendK
************28.10.13
Easy:
-Working with sounds
Hard:
-Working with sounds
-Working with distance
-Redraw some sliders
-Put off some series of notes instead add two jumps(it's ok for hard?)
************27.10.13
General:
-End with mod from ychung97
Easy:
-Redrawed all non stick sliders
************26.10.13
General:
-End with mod from Ikaros_F
************24.10.13
General:
-Changed bmp back to 125.
Why? I wanted to make something like ideal timing(worked b4 with 1/8 snap divisor lol) so looked for notes of this song where i saw 130 bmp, later realised it's to hard mapping for me. Also found one beautiful beatmap http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33688 which helped me understand what to do.
-Offset: - 74
-Delated "normal-sliderslide" sound
-At both diff made less direct sliders - this beatmap starts to look more nicely
-Kiai Time!
Easy:
-New bmp -> Working with distance and timing
-Replace 3 notes with 1 pause
Hard:
-New bmp -> Working with distance and timing
-Add pause
-Harder Apporoach Rate
************22.10.13
Easy:
-Working with Distance Snap
Hard:
-From now Hard = old Normal
-Working with Distance Snap
-Bigger circle size
************17.10.13
General:
-New tags
Easy:
-Add sliders, remade spinner to make same lenght as Normal one beatmap
Normal:
-Hit effects become quietly
-Better timing
-Delate/made new/remade notes/sliders
-Easier HP Drain
************17.10.13
General:
-Changed bmp(from 125 to 130 *_* omg i am noob)
-New tags
Easy:
-Delate some notes
-Better timing
-Bigger circle size
************15.10.13
General:
-Upload map
Last edited by fergas , edited 20 times in total.
Ikaros_F
88 posts
Joined December 2012
Ikaros_F
Hello ,from#modreqs

a map must have hitsounds, you can add clap in white line or ....(look at other map and
imitate）
you can use soft hitsounds in this map


Hard:
1:the volume in 00:00:406-00:07:846 can low ,and than increase the volume step by step.
2:laid notes out, it makes your map don't looks too crowd.
3:try to make your map more beautiful, re-draw some slider like 00:48:406 (5) - and 01:07:606 (1) -
4:ar-1

Easy:
1:00:04:726 (1) - remove nc
2:00:08:086 (1,2) - this two sliders is strange.
3:00:34:966 (2,3,4,5) - the four notes is hard for EZ , it may confused to beginner,you can change it as a rotate slider
4:ar-2，od-1

That's all
good luck

(i like this music.） =w=
fergas
769 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
fergas
Ikaros_F

Ikaros_F wrote:

Hello ,from#modreqs

a map must have hitsounds, you can add clap in white line or ....(look at other map and
imitate）used a lot of time fro this but DONE
you can use soft hitsounds in this map


Hard:
1:the volume in 00:00:406-00:07:846 can low ,and than increase the volume step by step.DONE on both diffs
2:laid notes out, it makes your map don't looks too crowd.Think it's ok. Imo, main idea here is keep rhythm right(no any steams or jumps)
3:try to make your map more beautiful, re-draw some slider like 00:48:406 (5) - and 01:07:606 (1) - DONE on both diffs
4:ar-1 DONE

Easy:
1:00:04:726 (1) - remove nc Made this nc a bit longer
2:00:08:086 (1,2) - this two sliders is strange.Don't think so
3:00:34:966 (2,3,4,5) - the four notes is hard for EZ , it may confused to beginner,you can change it as a rotate sliderDONE
4:ar-2，od-1DONE

That's all
good luck

(i like this music.） =w=Me 2 =3
Took a lot of time casue i needed some rest from this song :?. Also started another map :)

Thank you for mod.
ychung97
129 posts
Joined December 2012
ychung97
Byousoku 5 Centimeters.... i love it <3

SPOILER
[timing]
i think that you have to put the stress on the right beat
i.e. the tick at 00:00:406 - should be white tick
-> offset: 406 (stick to what you timed)

[kiai]
01:01:846 - starting your kiai here shall be better

[Easy]
yeah....quite fine, no obvious mistakes

[Hard]
00:13:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit messy and misleading, you may consider separating them apart
01:27:046 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same

i notice that you use 0.7 DS for most of your beats, perhaps you can use more various types of DS, plus, 0.7 might be too small

really good for one's 1st map
my maps suck even till now =(, yours are fine

receiving taiko GD? =)
fergas
769 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
fergas

ychung97 wrote:

Byousoku 5 Centimeters.... i love it <3 <3

SPOILER
[timing]
i think that you have to put the stress on the right beat
i.e. the tick at 00:00:406 - should be white tick It was already on white tick
-> offset: 406 (stick to what you timed) DONE

[kiai]
01:01:846 - starting your kiai here shall be better DONE

[Easy]
yeah....quite fine, no obvious mistakes =3

[Hard]
00:13:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit messy and misleading, you may consider separating them apart
01:27:046 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same I will think about this. Maybe i will follow Ikaros_F and make some jumps on this(put off notes on red ticks). Seems ppl rly dont like this
i notice that you use 0.7 DS for most of your beats, perhaps you can use more various types of DS, plus, 0.7 might be too small Got fixed on easy diff

really good for one's 1st map Thanks
my maps suck even till now =(, yours are fine lol I have worked with this map for one month :o tired fromt hsi a bit :)

receiving taiko GD? =)Sure
Thanks a lot for mod!
LegendK_old
LegendK_old
just telling few things

1. 01:01:846 (1) - try to make slider in this way

2. you should increase the distance 1.00x

good luck
fergas
769 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
fergas
LegendK

LegendK wrote:

just telling few things

1. 01:01:846 (1) - try to make slider in this way Got it. Redraw several circle sliders on both diffs. Looks more beauty

2. you should increase the distance 1.00x DONE on hard

good luck Thanks!
Thank you for some tips! :)
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