Pandiar wrote:

hi~ from my queue

[Skystar]
00:22:506 (2) - for better flow,how about this? eh no

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00:23:162 (2) - add note x:288 y:192 and how about like this? [/color]

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00:24:381 (1) - i think it can be more beautiful? i dont see what's wrong with this... and the slider in your image obviously broke the blanket

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00:54:757 (1) - NC? no
00:55:132 - i think not fit vocal.how about this rhythm? i followed the drums

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Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hello! From My Queue

[Skystar]
00:04:693 (1) - I think this silder is bad i dont think so

[Maware!]
00:05:631 (5) - Add NC
00:58:132 (6) - ^

Sorry poor mod ;ㅅ;
Just.. good map!
GL!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

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  (blank is on purpose? if so, ignore the following)

1. Source: "Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai"
2. Tags suggetion
   "機巧少女は傷つかない"
   "ED"
   "higedriver"
   "utagumisetsugekka"
   and... guest name
3. Kiai-Time is none besides Zweib's Insane

[Easy]

1. 00:54:382 (1) - end at 00:55:132
2. 00:58:882 (1,2,3,4) - for beginner, this pattern is difficult... , imo
3. 01:04:883 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:42:007- add a note
2. 00:57:007 (1) - I prefer to move to 00:56:632
3. 01:15:758 (5,6,7) - regular triangle is better in common with 01:09:758 (5,6,7) -

[popner's Hard]

1. 00:12:381 (6) - That's clever!
2. 01:05:728 (4) - Object isn't snapped!
3. 01:06:853 (8) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
2. 00:58:132 (6) - NC

[Zweib's Insane]

1. 00:33:007 (1) - I prefer to move nearer the center (tiny slider is fine idea~)
2. 00:58:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool!
3. 01:22:133 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 01:21:383 (1,1) -
4. 01:22:508 (2) - NC

[Maware!]

1. 00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
2. 00:58:132 (6) - NC
3. 01:28:508 (9) - ^

[Skystar]

1. 00:14:818 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 00:15:006 (2,3) - i dont prefer o_o
2. 00:15:756 (5) - i prefer curved slider in common with 00:15:943 (6) -
3. 01:13:883 (1,3) - blanket correctly fixed
   
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addictive song, mawaremawaremaware~~~~
~☆
~Good Luck~

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. add guest name tags and "utagumi". Utagumi Setsugekka is the name of their unit.
2. add Source : "Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai"
3. add Audio Lead-in "2000"

[Maware!]

1. 00:01:131 (3) - i suggest add hit-nomral (sampleset) of the slider end. i can hear drum here.
2. 00:10:787 (7) - move to x:108 y:324 (like 00:30:288 (7) - and 01:25:789 (7) - )
3. 00:49:882 (1) - hmm, i think soft-clap is fit to that slider start.
4. 01:01:414 (7,8) - try use 1/2 slider instead of this notes. really fit the song and vocal. like this?
   
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5. 01:07:414 (7,8) - ^ same above
6. 01:10:508 (6,7) - Ctrl+G? more interesting jump and good flow imo.

[Insane]

1. i recommend OD+1. OD6 is low in Insane diff. and same as Hard diff, not good imo.
2. 00:01:131 (3) - same suggest in Maware! diff.
3. 00:10:787 (4) - it is a bit large spacing. move to x:332 y:288?

[Zweib's Insane]

1. 00:05:162 - ~ 00:06:287 - really weird space here. i hope you mapping this part.
2. 00:33:007 (1) - not fit this slider. i suggest add note instead of slider.
3. 00:33:382 (1) - finish is better in this note for me.
4. 00:37:225 (1) - remove NC? it has been difficult to understand that it is a stream.
5. 01:22:883 (1) - add finish.

[Skystar]

1. 00:04:881 - ~ 00:13:881 - why volume 20% here? i think too low. i didnt add hitsounds yet, when your mod came
2. 00:38:757 - volume 60% is weird the slider repeat. because not sound here. so turn down the volume?
3. 01:22:508 (1) - ^ same above. about slider end.
4. 01:26:821 (5) - add NC. suddenly change rhythm here. so confuse of players imo. added

[popner's Hard]

1. 00:14:631 (3) - add clap to the head and end.
2. 00:17:069 (2) - ^ to the repeat.
3. 00:17:631 (3) - ^ to the end.
4. 00:18:381 (5) - ^ and so on.
   
5. 00:47:632 - i think empty here. and 00:46:882 (1) - slider end is 00:47:632 - better. 00:47:444 - is weird for me.

[Normal]

1. looks fine.

[Easy]

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  hitsound is wip?

1. 00:54:382 (1) - slider end is 00:55:132 -. better to follow the vocal for biginners.

Good luck!