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  (blank is on purpose? if so, ignore the following)

1. Source: "Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai"
2. Tags suggetion
   "機巧少女は傷つかない"
   "ED"
   "higedriver"
   "utagumisetsugekka"
   and... guest name
3. Kiai-Time is none besides Zweib's Insane

1. 00:54:382 (1) - end at 00:55:132
2. 00:58:882 (1,2,3,4) - for beginner, this pattern is difficult... , imo
3. 01:04:883 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 00:42:007- add a note
2. 00:57:007 (1) - I prefer to move to 00:56:632
3. 01:15:758 (5,6,7) - regular triangle is better in common with 01:09:758 (5,6,7) -

1. 00:12:381 (6) - That's clever!
2. 01:05:728 (4) - Object isn't snapped!
3. 01:06:853 (8) - ^

1. 00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
2. 00:58:132 (6) - NC

1. 00:33:007 (1) - I prefer to move nearer the center (tiny slider is fine idea~)
2. 00:58:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool!
3. 01:22:133 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 01:21:383 (1,1) -
4. 01:22:508 (2) - NC

1. 00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
2. 00:58:132 (6) - NC
3. 01:28:508 (9) - ^

1. 00:14:818 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 00:15:006 (2,3) -
2. 00:15:756 (5) - i prefer curved slider in common with 00:15:943 (6) -
3. 01:13:883 (1,3) - blanket correctly
   
   SPOILER

   

1. add guest name tags and "utagumi". Utagumi Setsugekka is the name of their unit.
2. add Source : "Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai"
3. add Audio Lead-in "2000"

1. 00:01:131 (3) - i suggest add hit-nomral (sampleset) of the slider end. i can hear drum here.
2. 00:10:787 (7) - move to x:108 y:324 (like 00:30:288 (7) - and 01:25:789 (7) - )
3. 00:49:882 (1) - hmm, i think soft-clap is fit to that slider start.
4. 01:01:414 (7,8) - try use 1/2 slider instead of this notes. really fit the song and vocal. like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:414 (7,8) - ^ same above
6. 01:10:508 (6,7) - Ctrl+G? more interesting jump and good flow imo.

1. i recommend OD+1. OD6 is low in Insane diff. and same as Hard diff, not good imo.
2. 00:01:131 (3) - same suggest in Maware! diff.
3. 00:10:787 (4) - it is a bit large spacing. move to x:332 y:288?

1. 00:05:162 - ~ 00:06:287 - really weird space here. i hope you mapping this part.
2. 00:33:007 (1) - not fit this slider. i suggest add note instead of slider.
3. 00:33:382 (1) - finish is better in this note for me.
4. 00:37:225 (1) - remove NC? it has been difficult to understand that it is a stream.
5. 01:22:883 (1) - add finish.

1. 00:04:881 - ~ 00:13:881 - why volume 20% here? i think too low.
2. 00:38:757 - volume 60% is weird the slider repeat. because not sound here. so turn down the volume?
3. 01:22:508 (1) - ^ same above. about slider end.
4. 01:26:821 (5) - add NC. suddenly change rhythm here. so confuse of players imo.

1. 00:14:631 (3) - add clap to the head and end.
2. 00:17:069 (2) - ^ to the repeat.
3. 00:17:631 (3) - ^ to the end.
4. 00:18:381 (5) - ^ and so on.
   
5. 00:47:632 - i think empty here. and 00:46:882 (1) - slider end is 00:47:632 - better. 00:47:444 - is weird for me.

1. looks fine.

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  hitsound is wip?

1. 00:54:382 (1) - slider end is 00:55:132 -. better to follow the vocal for biginners.

mingmichael wrote:

taiko mods come as wcx19911123 request ;3

Muzukashii

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  1. what's wrong with you, kana? ;w;
  2. please read this before you see my mods >> http://puu.sh/56e5H.txt

1. from 00:07:881 - until 00:13:881 - please consider with this notes. too long for the muzukashii diff even it's just don kat don kat patterns. give a little break at least. like for the example 00:09:193 - ; 00:11:443 - ; 00:12:943 - delete them
2. from 00:26:444 - until 00:32:632 - well, please consider too here, like the first mod. too long notes there. at least, please give little breaks
   00:45:944 - until 00:52:882 -
3. you can move 00:54:945 - to 00:54:757 - if you want to follow the vocal sound
4. 01:16:508 - until 01:16:883 - , try to avoid kkkkd stream, or the different colour streams ;w;

No, no one said that we can't use kkkkd at Muzu,
at least I kept the diff spread between Oni and Muzu (As the difficulty of Oni is very hard.)
Those mods are based on 'The Muzu is too hard' as I see, as I say before, I want to have a harder Muzu with a Hard Oni.
Hence, the muzukashii remain unchanged.

Oni

• too many useless timing points! delete them, because they have same BPM, sample, Volume, and also in kiai times! http://puu.sh/56dMa.png No, no, I want to emphasize the bass drum sometimes and also the SV changes.

1. 00:07:318 (55,56,57) - ddk here. because at 00:07:506 - we can hear the staccato sound at the last note (i guess it's staccato sound lol). when you used kkd, the last note became low and didn't give an accent at there ;w;
   I'm following the drums, we can hear kkd clearly here.
2. 00:32:819 (261,262) - don kat. the reason is same like ^ changed to K.
3. 00:54:945 (65) - it can be moved to 00:54:757 - to follow the vocal sound
   Not bad but wanna keep it now.
4. 01:22:602 (91) - kat here? just to follow the kkd there like the next pattern notes kkd kkd kkd
   they are tom-tom (which means bass drum), so I used don here.
   

okay, that's all from me
Muzukashii diff should be changed a bit to give some little breaks
and Oni diff, well alright! ;3 just delete the useless timing points there

goodluck /o/

spboxer3 wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:30:194 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - 這段其實我認為跟鼓會更好 可以更順暢的連接00:33:007 (167) - 的音

SPOILER

其實我正正在跟鼓, Don是bass drum, kat is hi-hat 啊~
00:33:007 (167) - k會比較適合那種清脆的音 好
00:42:663 - 加個note吧 這邊歌聲也很明顯 如果只加在後面鼓點的話雖然合適但是因為note的hitsound會覆蓋掉所以感覺就像延遲了1/4拍 好
01:16:508 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - 連打和背景音樂居然是相反的感覺好惡俗... 在這裡,Don的support是明顯的大鼓, 即是低音鼓.
01:28:508 (98) - 大D 很明顯的結尾 而且可以凸顯的 用D/K會比較好 好.

[Oni]
00:32:445 (258,259,260) - 其實我喜歡1/6你知道的/...\ 在這裡下不太好
01:16:883 (54,55,56) - 同Muzu
01:28:415 (140,141) - 140 del 141用D感覺比三連更能凸顯結尾的感覺 好.

前面感覺怎有點亂阿 第一句和第二句跟詞了 第三卻跟那些2連感覺有點容易混淆

機巧少女不會懷孕受傷
常喜歐尼醬根本把持不住>w<

quantum-rose wrote:

恭喜深圳得救