Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (T · forum

wcx19911123

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-10-15T14:10:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月7日 at 22:42:37

Artist: Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui
Title: Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size)
Source: Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai
Tags: 機巧少女は傷つかない Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai ending ED Zweib Irori Yaya Komurasaki KanaRin popner Amamiya Yuko
BPM: 160
Filesize: 19135kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.57 stars, 103 notes)
Insane (4.95 stars, 301 notes)
Kana's Taiko Maware! (4.78 stars, 672 notes)
Kana's Taiko Muzu (4.78 stars, 425 notes)
Maware! (5 stars, 458 notes)
Normal (4.41 stars, 162 notes)
popner's Hard (4.95 stars, 223 notes)
Skystar (4.82 stars, 440 notes)
Zweib (5 stars, 401 notes)

Download: Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size)
Download: Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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anime「機巧少女は傷つかない」ED「回レ！雪月花」夜々 ver

啊~~~马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马~哇~勒！
根本把持不住。

Last edited by wcx19911123 2013-11-07T14:45:16+00:00, edited 29 times in total.

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-10-15T14:13:43+00:00

i'm sf

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-16T05:27:27+00:00

板凳
呜呜呜好想做这图长喜要GD嘛qaq

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2013-10-16T06:41:27+00:00

嘔心瀝血之作

http://puu.sh/4RlwX.7z

Taiko Oni Lv. 10*

Muzu先等下..

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2013-10-16T08:17:31+00:00

orz

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:回レ！雪月花 (TV Size)
Artist:Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:原田ひとみ，茅野愛衣 & 小倉唯
Creator:wcx19911123
Version:Zweib's Insane
Source:
Tags:
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280,288,47443,2,0,L|288:224,2,46.7500014266968,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,47818,2,0,L|144:160,1,46.7500014266968
176,40,48006,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,168,48193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,48287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,232,48381,6,0,L|264:136,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,48662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,48756,2,0,L|56:312,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,208,49037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,184,49131,2,0,L|120:168,1,93.5000028533936,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,185,49412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,49506,2,0,P|219:103|208:40,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,16,49787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,16,49881,5,0,1:0:0:0:
328,72,50068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,50162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,50256,1,0,1:0:0:0:
432,208,50443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,50537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,240,50631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,288,50818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,50912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,304,51006,1,0,1:0:0:0:
152,192,51193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,184,51287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,51381,6,0,P|96:230|136:272,1,93.5000028533936,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,344,51662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,344,51756,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,256,51943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,256,52037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,244,52131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
207,140,52318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,112,52412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,91,52506,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,40,52693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,153,52881,6,0,P|392:128|336:152,1,170,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,304,53631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,304,54006,6,0,P|160:344|256:328,2,170,0|6|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,88,54943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,200,55131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,56,55506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55881,12,0,57381,2:0:0:0:
200,16,58131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,136,58318,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,144,58412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,58506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,58599,2,0,L|200:184,1,21.25
232,168,58693,2,0,L|232:224,1,42.5
336,72,58881,6,0,P|328:120|336:192,1,101.999996887207,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,198,59162,2,0,P|426:162|373:138,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,59443,2,0,P|345:238|399:196,1,101.999996887207,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,59724,6,0,P|208:344|272:360,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,60006,2,0,P|84:219|38:267,1,101.999996887207,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,60287,2,0,P|251:172|233:108,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,60568,6,0,L|392:56,2,50.9999984436036,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,60849,2,0,L|104:144,2,50.9999984436036,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,61131,2,0,P|296:256|256:312,1,152.999995330811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,352,61506,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,344,61599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,61693,2,0,P|448:312|472:248,1,101.999996887207
200,272,62068,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,96,62256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,272,62443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,96,62631,2,0,L|216:80,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,62912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,63006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,63193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,208,63381,6,0,P|304:248|304:312,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,104,63756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,240,63943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,348,64131,2,0,P|298:284|192:288,1,203.999993774414,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,320,64599,1,0,3:0:0:0:
136,320,64693,1,0,3:0:0:0:
312,72,64881,5,10,0:0:0:0:
320,96,64975,2,0,L|365:118,1,50.9999984436036
192,128,65162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,147,65256,2,0,L|136:168,1,50.9999984436036
344,187,65443,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,208,65538,2,0,L|400:227,1,50.9999984436036
160,232,65724,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,251,65819,2,0,L|104:272,1,50.9999984436036
208,344,66006,5,10,0:0:0:0:
216,360,66100,2,0,L|263:377,1,50.9999984436036
368,272,66287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,264,66381,2,0,L|296:288,1,50.9999984436036
120,184,66568,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,176,66662,2,0,L|184:192,1,50.9999984436036
400,152,66849,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,144,66943,2,0,L|320:168,1,50.9999984436036
160,104,67131,6,0,P|112:104|64:144,1,101.999996887207,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,229,67412,2,0,L|236:109,1,101.999996887207
312,32,67693,2,0,L|320:152,1,101.999996887207
488,80,68068,5,0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,68256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,68443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,68631,2,0,L|504:272,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,312,68912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,352,69006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,69193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,184,69381,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,328,69568,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,352,69662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,376,69756,2,0,P|264:328|256:264,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,248,70037,1,0,2:0:0:0:
352,248,70131,2,0,L|368:176,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,70318,2,0,L|280:144,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
104,312,70506,2,0,L|144:248,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,24,70693,2,0,L|128:96,1,50.9999984436036,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
0,208,70881,6,0,P|50:207|120:176,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,71162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,71256,1,8,0:2:0:0:
432,192,71443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,208,71537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,71631,2,0,P|384:208|336:160,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,71912,1,8,0:2:0:0:
280,320,72193,2,0,L|328:384,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,376,72381,6,0,P|168:384|224:368,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
200,296,72662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,296,72756,1,8,0:2:0:0:
32,224,72943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,73131,2,0,L|198:32,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,73318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,73412,2,0,L|328:144,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,73599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,73693,2,0,P|155:179|171:241,1,101.999996887207,8|4,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
480,176,74068,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,40,74256,1,8,0:2:0:0:
280,232,74443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,256,74537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,74631,2,0,P|256:344|224:360,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,74912,2,0,L|384:264,1,50.9999984436036,0|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
176,224,75193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,75381,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,344,75568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,75756,2,0,P|352:208|336:136,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,144,76131,6,0,P|384:136|336:72,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,76506,2,0,P|200:8|192:-8,2,50.9999984436036,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,76787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,168,76881,6,0,P|138:192|240:200,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,40,77256,1,8,0:2:0:0:
464,272,77443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,77537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,325,77631,2,0,L|312:336,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
232,112,78006,1,8,0:2:0:0:
24,320,78193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,336,78287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,344,78381,6,0,P|144:336|192:296,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,24,78756,2,0,P|128:96|160:136,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,79037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,79131,2,0,P|336:192|376:144,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,32,79412,2,0,L|456:88,1,50.9999984436036,8|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,64,79693,2,0,P|272:64|320:104,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,344,80068,6,0,L|112:320,1,50.9999984436036
64,160,80256,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,192,80443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,80537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,280,80631,2,0,P|405:325|352:368,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,80912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,81006,1,8,0:2:0:0:
96,96,81193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,81287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,81381,6,0,L|144:192,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,256,81756,6,0,L|408:224,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,16,82131,6,0,P|220:58|238:115,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,82506,1,8,0:2:0:0:
376,328,82599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,82693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,344,82787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,352,82881,5,0,0:2:0:0:
400,240,83068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,192,83256,2,0,L|208:296,1,85,8|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,344,83631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,136,83818,2,0,L|0:88,2,42.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
152,160,84193,2,0,P|193:159|236:147,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,84568,6,0,L|448:112,2,42.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,144,84943,2,0,L|344:240,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,360,85318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,160,85506,1,8,0:2:0:0:
136,312,85693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,312,85787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,85881,5,8,0:2:0:0:
144,120,86068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,86256,1,10,0:2:0:0:
232,80,86443,1,8,0:2:0:0:
296,173,86818,1,8,0:2:0:0:
327,189,86912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,87006,1,10,0:2:0:0:
320,48,87193,1,8,0:2:0:0:
192,240,87381,6,0,P|178:207|176:156,1,85,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,87756,2,0,P|344:312|328:384,1,85,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
112,360,88131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,360,88318,1,0,3:0:0:0:
120,112,88506,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-16T09:09:36+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
呜呜呜好想做这图长喜要GD嘛qaq

求留个Normal

Last edited by Kayano 2013-10-16T10:28:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

popner

osu! Alumni

2,407 posts

Joined March 2011

popner 2013-10-16T09:48:56+00:00

给留个Easy啊

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2013-10-16T10:45:11+00:00

yaya

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-16T16:04:09+00:00

给留个，留个
hard啊

Princess God

135 posts

Joined June 2010

Princess God 2013-10-18T05:40:38+00:00

果然好速度……

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2013-10-19T00:00:45+00:00

前排顶赞射星星，一会来看图
打了一会感觉总体难度略难了。。不说最高难度那个我打不了，insane做的确实难了，hard也是。。毕竟tv版求把持= =

ctyjason

136 posts

Joined July 2011

ctyjason 2013-10-20T14:05:00+00:00

很期待這首歌曲的,夜夜><

ctyjason

136 posts

Joined July 2011

ctyjason 2013-10-20T16:45:20+00:00

你會用以下網址的skin嗎？我製作的！
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/160706

ichivictus

ichivictus 2013-10-21T04:26:37+00:00

From my new queu -.-
Since it's WIP is it allowed to be in pending? o.o

[Easy]
00:54:382 (61) - I felt ending it on the red tick was too soon / too early. This is what I'd do: http://i.imgur.com/ExpOHH5.png

[Normal]
00:54:757 - Not too fond of this empty space but I think I understand why ;3

[Hard]
00:45:007 (2) - Eh, I hate this antijump

It's a pretty tough diff for a hard imo.

The rest of the diffs look great so far. Skystar is amazing and super fun ^-^ I wish I could do a better mod but I'm still learning. Hope this helps!

popner

osu! Alumni

2,407 posts

Joined March 2011

popner 2013-10-21T15:08:43+00:00

Note that the timing of Zweib's Insane is different form other diffs.

381,375.011719116222,4,1,1,20,1,0

Should be

381,375,4,2,2,40,1,0

gxytcgxytc

202 posts

Joined May 2011

gxytcgxytc 2013-10-21T16:42:52+00:00

根本把持不住

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-10-21T19:37:10+00:00

啊~~~马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马勒马~哇~勒！
根本把持不住。

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2013-10-23T10:59:00+00:00

Hi. From My Takio Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.

[General]

~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.

“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)

[Kana’s Tako]

00:07:318 (55,56,57) - try to change? ddk
00:32:819 (226,227) – ^ dk
01:28:321 (139,140,141) - ^? ddk
00:46:320 (5,6,7,8) – change? k kkd => kkd k?
Good~

Good Luck!

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2013-10-23T16:39:02+00:00

http://puu.sh/4Xt5c.7z

Muzukashii and some changes on Oni

popner

osu! Alumni

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Joined March 2011

popner 2013-10-23T19:41:53+00:00

http://puu.sh/4XnSK
怕你忘了

[Hard]
00:10:881 (5) - missed a note, according to 00:29:819 (3,4,5) and 01:25:321 (3,4,5)
00:12:381 (1) - 白线结束我觉得更好，vocal没有拖到那么后头

[Maware]
00:12:381 (1) - 白线结束我觉得更好

另外我的难度
00:49:882 (1) - 这个音效直接复制的你的，现在感觉略奇怪，可以改成普通的

CrazyErrorMan

110 posts

Joined February 2013

CrazyErrorMan 2013-10-23T21:15:24+00:00

Hey, here is a mod by me from my que.
I've checked out your Normal and Easy Diff...
You don't seem to have some new combos. It is just one giant one.
So, I've got a list where I think new combos should I start.
This is a partial list for combo mods for Normal.
I think you can figure out where the rest of the new combos can go in Easy and Normal.

00:07:881
00:11:443
00:14:631
00:25:881
00:27:569
00:31:319
00:33:382
Also, I think this should be in WIP until you have completed putting combos in Easy and Normal.

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-10-24T08:31:47+00:00

hi~ from my queue

[Skystar]
00:22:506 (2) - for better flow,how about this?

SPOILER

00:23:162 (2) - add note x:288 y:192 and how about like this?

SPOILER

00:24:381 (1) - i think it can be more beautiful?

SPOILER

00:54:757 (1) - NC?
00:55:132 - i think not fit vocal.how about this rhythm?

SPOILER

[popner's Hard]
00:14:068 (2) - move x:348 y:132?

[Maware!]
00:55:132 (4) - i think not fit vocal so remove note,like this?

SPOILER

[Zweib's Insane ]
00:04:506 (1,2,3) - remove? too lonely...
01:28:321 (4) - remove?

sorry poor mod

nice "Maware!"
good luck~

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2013-10-26T00:37:22+00:00

Hello! From My Queue

[Skystar]
00:04:693 (1) - I think this silder is bad

[Maware!]
00:05:631 (5) - Add NC
00:58:132 (6) - ^

Sorry poor mod ;ㅅ;
Just.. good map!
GL!

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-10-26T03:42:44+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

(blank is on purpose? if so, ignore the following)

Source: "Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai"
Tags suggetion
"機巧少女は傷つかない"
"ED"
"higedriver"
"utagumisetsugekka"
and... guest name
Kiai-Time is none besides Zweib's Insane

[Easy]

00:54:382 (1) - end at 00:55:132
00:58:882 (1,2,3,4) - for beginner, this pattern is difficult... , imo
01:04:883 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

00:42:007- add a note
00:57:007 (1) - I prefer to move to 00:56:632
01:15:758 (5,6,7) - regular triangle is better in common with 01:09:758 (5,6,7) -

[popner's Hard]

00:12:381 (6) - That's clever!
01:05:728 (4) - Object isn't snapped!
01:06:853 (8) - ^

[Insane]

00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
00:58:132 (6) - NC

[Zweib's Insane]

00:33:007 (1) - I prefer to move nearer the center (tiny slider is fine idea~)
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool!
01:22:133 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 01:21:383 (1,1) -
01:22:508 (2) - NC

[Maware!]

00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
00:58:132 (6) - NC
01:28:508 (9) - ^

[Skystar]

00:14:818 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 00:15:006 (2,3) -
00:15:756 (5) - i prefer curved slider in common with 00:15:943 (6) -
01:13:883 (1,3) - blanket correctly
SPOILER

addictive song, mawaremawaremaware~~~~
~☆
~Good Luck~

Vicho

887 posts

Joined May 2009

Vicho 2013-10-26T19:04:37+00:00

Artist: Utagumi Setsugekka (so you should add seiyuus names in tags)
Source: Machine-Doll wa Kizutsukanai (don't confuse with Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai ww)
Also about video, I think you should change video offset to 135

That's all, about mapping I think everything is perfect! Good luck~

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-10-26T20:21:12+00:00

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

add guest name tags and "utagumi". Utagumi Setsugekka is the name of their unit.
add Source : "Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai"
add Audio Lead-in "2000"

[Maware!]

00:01:131 (3) - i suggest add hit-nomral (sampleset) of the slider end. i can hear drum here.
00:10:787 (7) - move to x:108 y:324 (like 00:30:288 (7) - and 01:25:789 (7) - )
00:49:882 (1) - hmm, i think soft-clap is fit to that slider start.
01:01:414 (7,8) - try use 1/2 slider instead of this notes. really fit the song and vocal. like this?
SPOILER
01:07:414 (7,8) - ^ same above
01:10:508 (6,7) - Ctrl+G? more interesting jump and good flow imo.

[Insane]

i recommend OD+1. OD6 is low in Insane diff. and same as Hard diff, not good imo.
00:01:131 (3) - same suggest in Maware! diff.
00:10:787 (4) - it is a bit large spacing. move to x:332 y:288?

[Zweib's Insane]

00:05:162 - ~ 00:06:287 - really weird space here. i hope you mapping this part.
00:33:007 (1) - not fit this slider. i suggest add note instead of slider.
00:33:382 (1) - finish is better in this note for me.
00:37:225 (1) - remove NC? it has been difficult to understand that it is a stream.
01:22:883 (1) - add finish.

[Skystar]

00:04:881 - ~ 00:13:881 - why volume 20% here? i think too low.
00:38:757 - volume 60% is weird the slider repeat. because not sound here. so turn down the volume?
01:22:508 (1) - ^ same above. about slider end.
01:26:821 (5) - add NC. suddenly change rhythm here. so confuse of players imo.

[popner's Hard]

00:14:631 (3) - add clap to the head and end.
00:17:069 (2) - ^ to the repeat.
00:17:631 (3) - ^ to the end.
00:18:381 (5) - ^ and so on.
00:47:632 - i think empty here. and 00:46:882 (1) - slider end is 00:47:632 - better. 00:47:444 - is weird for me.

[Normal]

looks fine.

[Easy]

hitsound is wip?

00:54:382 (1) - slider end is 00:55:132 -. better to follow the vocal for biginners.

Good luck!

Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2013-10-27T02:31:41+00:00

That Skystar is so asdfghjkl @.@

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-10-29T14:55:16+00:00

updated, thx for modding
waiting guests

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2013-10-29T16:07:05+00:00

hello~迟到的mod，想要等图完成的差不多的时候再说，见谅。

以下只是个人建议仅供参考。。

General
总感觉bg有点崩，不过这点几乎可以无视，这夜夜画的也挺带感的。
好评，给星。
难度偏高。

Easy
总体风格好评，没有东西可摸。。

Normal
00:04:506 (5) - 我有些不理解这个滑条的用意，因为vocal的重音是在滑条的折返点上的，而似乎起始点才是应该压的地方，虽然这个节奏是一个很不错的创新。
00:55:132 (4,5,1) - 嗯，这里是不是空的多了点。。虽然可以理解这里空的感觉。。

popner's Hard
赞！第一次test就ss，不挑了。

Insane
这回科学了
00:33:382 (1,2,3) - 相较于之前的note密度，这里想要空的话建议踩红线即可，踩白线就显得太过空了，比较突然。虽然后面有相应的地方与之呼应，但是这个大空白的出现本身就很突兀而且这里的lyric和之前是一样快的。
00:40:507 (5) - 这个滑条反向似乎可以使flow更加顺畅，虽然这不能从根本上改变flow，却可以使人看着顺畅些。后面多处短滑条亦是如此，不一一列举了，若是刻意为之对于读图也未免显得有些难了
00:58:601 (8,9) - 我觉得这里overmap的有点过
00:58:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这一串跳的比较随机，距离有些不同，尤其是01:00:289 (6,1,2) - 这三个滑条的flow似乎会出现一些问题，和之前的那几个滑条flow不太相同（虽然我自己打的时候好像没有感觉出来，不过慢放的时候却觉得有点问题，我也拿不大准）
后面感觉好些了。。

剩下的难度都打不了= =尽快rank吧，现在看机巧ed的时候已经一大批求map的了

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2013-11-02T03:21:07+00:00

taiko mods come as wcx19911123 request ;3

Muzukashii

1. what's wrong with you, kana? ;w;
2. please read this before you see my mods >> http://puu.sh/56e5H.txt

from 00:07:881 - until 00:13:881 - please consider with this notes. too long for the muzukashii diff even it's just don kat don kat patterns. give a little break at least. like for the example 00:09:193 - ; 00:11:443 - ; 00:12:943 - delete them
from 00:26:444 - until 00:32:632 - well, please consider too here, like the first mod. too long notes there. at least, please give little breaks
00:45:944 - until 00:52:882 -
you can move 00:54:945 - to 00:54:757 - if you want to follow the vocal sound
01:16:508 - until 01:16:883 - , try to avoid kkkkd stream, or the different colour streams ;w;

Oni

too many useless timing points! delete them, because they have same BPM, sample, Volume, and also in kiai times! http://puu.sh/56dMa.png

00:07:318 (55,56,57) - ddk here. because at 00:07:506 - we can hear the staccato sound at the last note (i guess it's staccato sound lol). when you used kkd, the last note became low and didn't give an accent at there ;w;
00:32:819 (261,262) - don kat. the reason is same like ^
00:54:945 (65) - it can be moved to 00:54:757 - to follow the vocal sound
01:22:602 (91) - kat here? just to follow the kkd there like the next pattern notes kkd kkd kkd t

okay, that's all from me
Muzukashii diff should be changed a bit to give some little breaks
and Oni diff, well alright! ;3 just delete the useless timing points there

goodluck /o/

Thanks for modding.

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2013-11-03T16:36:35+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
taiko mods come as wcx19911123 request ;3

Muzukashii

1. what's wrong with you, kana? ;w;
2. please read this before you see my mods >> http://puu.sh/56e5H.txt
from 00:07:881 - until 00:13:881 - please consider with this notes. too long for the muzukashii diff even it's just don kat don kat patterns. give a little break at least. like for the example 00:09:193 - ; 00:11:443 - ; 00:12:943 - delete them
from 00:26:444 - until 00:32:632 - well, please consider too here, like the first mod. too long notes there. at least, please give little breaks
00:45:944 - until 00:52:882 -
you can move 00:54:945 - to 00:54:757 - if you want to follow the vocal sound
01:16:508 - until 01:16:883 - , try to avoid kkkkd stream, or the different colour streams ;w;

No, no one said that we can't use kkkkd at Muzu,
at least I kept the diff spread between Oni and Muzu (As the difficulty of Oni is very hard.)
Those mods are based on 'The Muzu is too hard' as I see, as I say before, I want to have a harder Muzu with a Hard Oni.
Hence, the muzukashii remain unchanged.

Oni
too many useless timing points! delete them, because they have same BPM, sample, Volume, and also in kiai times! http://puu.sh/56dMa.png No, no, I want to emphasize the bass drum sometimes and also the SV changes.
00:07:318 (55,56,57) - ddk here. because at 00:07:506 - we can hear the staccato sound at the last note (i guess it's staccato sound lol). when you used kkd, the last note became low and didn't give an accent at there ;w;
I'm following the drums, we can hear kkd clearly here.
00:32:819 (261,262) - don kat. the reason is same like ^ changed to K.
00:54:945 (65) - it can be moved to 00:54:757 - to follow the vocal sound
Not bad but wanna keep it now.
01:22:602 (91) - kat here? just to follow the kkd there like the next pattern notes kkd kkd kkd
they are tom-tom (which means bass drum), so I used don here.

okay, that's all from me
Muzukashii diff should be changed a bit to give some little breaks
and Oni diff, well alright! ;3 just delete the useless timing points there

goodluck /o/

Thanks for modding

Updates on Oni:
http://puu.sh/57ELM.osu

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2013-11-04T05:36:47+00:00

Pandiar's mod

00:04:506 (1,2,3) - remove? too lonely... orz i'll consider it
01:28:321 (4) - remove? ok

RandomEffect's mod
00:33:007 (1) - I prefer to move nearer the center (tiny slider is fine idea~) ok
01:22:133 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 01:21:383 (1,1) - fixed a little
01:22:508 (2) - NC ok

Guy's mod
00:05:162 - ~ 00:06:287 - really weird space here. i hope you mapping this part. I'll consider it

00:33:007 (1) - not fit this slider. i suggest add note instead of slider. someone said it's fine idea..orz
00:33:382 (1) - finish is better in this note for me. ok
00:37:225 (1) - remove NC? it has been difficult to understand that it is a stream. ok
01:22:883 (1) - add finish. ok

thanks for modding

http://puu.sh/58k7i

to wcx:

我的kiai`combo color`megadata就麻烦你帮我统一了，谢谢!

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2013-11-04T10:39:40+00:00

Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:
hi~ from my queue

[Skystar]
00:22:506 (2) - for better flow,how about this? eh no
SPOILER
00:23:162 (2) - add note x:288 y:192 and how about like this? [/color]
SPOILER
00:24:381 (1) - i think it can be more beautiful? i dont see what's wrong with this... and the slider in your image obviously broke the blanket
SPOILER
00:54:757 (1) - NC? no
00:55:132 - i think not fit vocal.how about this rhythm? i followed the drums
SPOILER

Lolicore_Komari

Lolicore_Komari wrote:
Hello! From My Queue

[Skystar]
00:04:693 (1) - I think this silder is bad i dont think so

[Maware!]
00:05:631 (5) - Add NC
00:58:132 (6) - ^

Sorry poor mod ;ㅅ;
Just.. good map!
GL!

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]

(blank is on purpose? if so, ignore the following)
Source: "Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai"
Tags suggetion
"機巧少女は傷つかない"
"ED"
"higedriver"
"utagumisetsugekka"
and... guest name
Kiai-Time is none besides Zweib's Insane
[Easy]
00:54:382 (1) - end at 00:55:132
00:58:882 (1,2,3,4) - for beginner, this pattern is difficult... , imo
01:04:883 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Normal]
00:42:007- add a note
00:57:007 (1) - I prefer to move to 00:56:632
01:15:758 (5,6,7) - regular triangle is better in common with 01:09:758 (5,6,7) -
[popner's Hard]
00:12:381 (6) - That's clever!
01:05:728 (4) - Object isn't snapped!
01:06:853 (8) - ^
[Insane]
00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
00:58:132 (6) - NC
[Zweib's Insane]
00:33:007 (1) - I prefer to move nearer the center (tiny slider is fine idea~)
00:58:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool!
01:22:133 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 01:21:383 (1,1) -
01:22:508 (2) - NC
[Maware!]
00:55:320 (6) - start at 00:55:507
00:58:132 (6) - NC
01:28:508 (9) - ^
[Skystar]
00:14:818 (1) - i prefer straight slider in common with 00:15:006 (2,3) - i dont prefer o_o
00:15:756 (5) - i prefer curved slider in common with 00:15:943 (6) -
01:13:883 (1,3) - blanket correctly fixed
SPOILER
addictive song, mawaremawaremaware~~~~
~☆
~Good Luck~

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
add guest name tags and "utagumi". Utagumi Setsugekka is the name of their unit.
add Source : "Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai"
add Audio Lead-in "2000"

[Maware!]
00:01:131 (3) - i suggest add hit-nomral (sampleset) of the slider end. i can hear drum here.
00:10:787 (7) - move to x:108 y:324 (like 00:30:288 (7) - and 01:25:789 (7) - )
00:49:882 (1) - hmm, i think soft-clap is fit to that slider start.
01:01:414 (7,8) - try use 1/2 slider instead of this notes. really fit the song and vocal. like this?
SPOILER
01:07:414 (7,8) - ^ same above
01:10:508 (6,7) - Ctrl+G? more interesting jump and good flow imo.

[Insane]
i recommend OD+1. OD6 is low in Insane diff. and same as Hard diff, not good imo.
00:01:131 (3) - same suggest in Maware! diff.
00:10:787 (4) - it is a bit large spacing. move to x:332 y:288?

[Zweib's Insane]
00:05:162 - ~ 00:06:287 - really weird space here. i hope you mapping this part.
00:33:007 (1) - not fit this slider. i suggest add note instead of slider.
00:33:382 (1) - finish is better in this note for me.
00:37:225 (1) - remove NC? it has been difficult to understand that it is a stream.
01:22:883 (1) - add finish.

[Skystar]
00:04:881 - ~ 00:13:881 - why volume 20% here? i think too low. i didnt add hitsounds yet, when your mod came
00:38:757 - volume 60% is weird the slider repeat. because not sound here. so turn down the volume?
01:22:508 (1) - ^ same above. about slider end.
01:26:821 (5) - add NC. suddenly change rhythm here. so confuse of players imo. added
[popner's Hard]
00:14:631 (3) - add clap to the head and end.
00:17:069 (2) - ^ to the repeat.
00:17:631 (3) - ^ to the end.
00:18:381 (5) - ^ and so on.
00:47:632 - i think empty here. and 00:46:882 (1) - slider end is 00:47:632 - better. 00:47:444 - is weird for me.

[Normal]
looks fine.
[Easy]

hitsound is wip?
00:54:382 (1) - slider end is 00:55:132 -. better to follow the vocal for biginners.
Good luck!

thanks for modding guys
http://puu.sh/58s3S.osu

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2013-11-04T11:25:04+00:00

[Muzukashii]
00:30:194 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - 這段其實我認為跟鼓會更好可以更順暢的連接00:33:007 (167) - 的音

SPOILER

00:33:007 (167) - k會比較適合那種清脆的音
00:42:663 - 加個note吧這邊歌聲也很明顯如果只加在後面鼓點的話雖然合適但是因為note的hitsound會覆蓋掉所以感覺就像延遲了1/4拍
01:16:508 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - 連打和背景音樂居然是相反的感覺好惡俗...
01:28:508 (98) - 大D 很明顯的結尾而且可以凸顯的用D/K會比較好

[Oni]
00:32:445 (258,259,260) - 其實我喜歡1/6你知道的/...\
01:16:883 (54,55,56) - 同Muzu
01:28:415 (140,141) - 140 del 141用D感覺比三連更能凸顯結尾的感覺

前面感覺怎有點亂阿第一句和第二句跟詞了第三卻跟那些2連感覺有點容易混淆

機巧少女不會懷孕受傷
常喜歐尼醬根本把持不住>w<

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2013-11-04T16:36:57+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
[Muzukashii]
00:30:194 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - 這段其實我認為跟鼓會更好可以更順暢的連接00:33:007 (167) - 的音
SPOILER
其實我正正在跟鼓, Don是bass drum, kat is hi-hat 啊~
00:33:007 (167) - k會比較適合那種清脆的音好
00:42:663 - 加個note吧這邊歌聲也很明顯如果只加在後面鼓點的話雖然合適但是因為note的hitsound會覆蓋掉所以感覺就像延遲了1/4拍好
01:16:508 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - 連打和背景音樂居然是相反的感覺好惡俗... 在這裡,Don的support是明顯的大鼓, 即是低音鼓.
01:28:508 (98) - 大D 很明顯的結尾而且可以凸顯的用D/K會比較好好.

[Oni]
00:32:445 (258,259,260) - 其實我喜歡1/6你知道的/...\ 在這裡下不太好
01:16:883 (54,55,56) - 同Muzu
01:28:415 (140,141) - 140 del 141用D感覺比三連更能凸顯結尾的感覺好.

前面感覺怎有點亂阿第一句和第二句跟詞了第三卻跟那些2連感覺有點容易混淆

機巧少女不會懷孕受傷
常喜歐尼醬根本把持不住>w<

謝謝sp3.

Update: http://puu.sh/58CGr.7z

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-11-04T17:14:59+00:00

all diffs updated
thanks for modding :3

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2013-11-05T01:10:27+00:00

Oni的難度resnap一次
順便說一下你的Zweib's Insane video offset不見了
EDIT: okay, set Taiko icon

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-11-05T04:58:46+00:00

fixed
虽然好像没看到有unsnap 0.0

KanaRin

1,886 posts

Joined April 2010

KanaRin 2013-11-05T18:26:05+00:00

謝謝sp3.

Akhlis_old

Akhlis_old 2013-11-05T22:08:34+00:00

Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha! Aaaaaya!
Great map, great song, great Yaya, damn I can't wait for it to be ranked!
~Akhlis approves this beatmap~

d002734

3 posts

Joined November 2012

d002734 2013-11-07T06:22:50+00:00

good

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2013-11-07T10:55:29+00:00

[Zweib]
01:21:383 (1,1,1) - 这3个slider感觉蓝线结束+静音sliderend更带感
顺便你这diff换个名字好不好难度甩下前面Insane一条街

[Insane]
00:10:787 (4) - 读错了建议用普通spacing

[Skystar]
QUNIMADE

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2013-11-07T11:18:57+00:00

all fixed. orzzzzzz
难度名去掉了['s Insane]

http://puu.sh/5bdoU.osu

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-11-07T15:06:42+00:00

Insane那个改了
all updated

Nymph