Afilia Saga - S . M . L (TV Size) · forum

HelloSCV

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Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-12-06T13:41:43+00:00

hi

[regenz's Easy]

00:10:007 (1) - perhaps move this note out to under the next slider? feels much better
someting like this
00:05:207 (1) - move this slider to 00:05:507 - here and add a note instead? like you did in first part of the music
for example
01:25:607 (4) - hmmmm curving this slider to downward for better flow?
i mean like this
01:26:807 (1) - same spinner suggestion with Insane diff

[Xinely's Normal]

00:09:632 - useless green line, delete it plz~
00:13:607 (3,4) - since you followed the white ticks in previous objects current one feels kinda weird so consider changing this to one 5/4 slider with 1 repeat? or just add a note 00:13:907 - here
for example
or like this
01:06:257 (4) - how about adding a finish on the slider's start? it fits really nicely with previous slider and vocal
01:26:807 (1) - same spinner suggestion with Insane diff

[K.Penguin's Hard]

i heard that this diff's HSs was added by P A N , so..

this diff needs video
00:12:407 (1) - 이부분 같은경우에는 00:07:007 (6,1) - 여기나 00:09:257 (2,3) - 여기처럼 아예 완전히 스택시켜주시는게 덜 헷갈릴꺼같아요, 하드에서 안티점프는 좀 헷갈릴수가있고 다른부분에도 사용하지 않은데다가 특별한 음이 들어가있는것도 아닌거같아서 그냥 스택시켜주셔도 괜찮을꺼같아요
00:37:982 (2) - 인세인에서도 한번 언급했는데 제생각엔 이노트는 1/3스냅인거 같네요 00:38:007 - 요기, 끝은 그대로 흰색틱이 맞는거 같아요
00:55:607 (1,2) - try changing hitsound whistle to clap for following drum sound on background
01:07:007 (1,2) - 이것도 1/3스냅이 맞는 박자고 혹시 난이도 때문에 일부러 그러신거라면 밑에 같은 패턴 추천드려요
이렇게?
01:11:807 (5) - i think this note should have clap instead of whistle according to drum sound
01:23:207 (1,2,3,4) - 여기에는 점프를 살짝두시거나 2,3번노트를 서로 바꿔서 아래하고 비슷한식으로 배치하는건 어떨까요? 일관성면도 있지만 플레이면에서도 좀더 신나지 않을까요?
이런식이나
아니면 이런식

굿 딮

[Insane]

00:12:407 (1) - it seems that you missed a whistle on start?
00:23:207 (1) - hmm the NCs on this part need to be fixed for consistence, delete this NC first and then 00:24:107 (1) - add NC here and last 00:25:007 (1) - delete this NC
00:28:907 (6) - well since there is a drum sound on 00:28:832 - here i'd rather move this tripet to 00:28:757 - here and 00:29:057 - add a note here instead, it feels much better for me and because you tried to made a square here, maybe this can be nice choice for pattern as well
example
00:30:557 (4,1) - this jump feels kinda uncomfortable for playing it may because of distance, check what i've done about it and consider it too!
example
00:37:982 (2) - according to vocal sounds actually this note should be snapped at 1/3 beats right 00:38:007 - here (and end at 00:38:207 - here), you may agree about it when check that part with 25% playback
00:56:057 (8) - it would be better if you add a clap here instead of whistle to follow durm sound (and change clap to whistle on 00:55:307 (7) - this' end as well~)
01:07:007 (1) - this part is 1/3 rhythm part as well, try this rhythm for a solution
01:08:657 (4) - hmm is this drum sampleset purposed? it doesn't seem like good choice o_o
01:16:157 (6,7) - consider using ctrl g on these notes and after it, you may see a nice jump imo
like this
01:24:107 (8) - try changing this slider like following image, current jump feels kinda awkward for me, maybe this could be helpful
an example
01:26:882 (1) - how about increasing this spinner's length by 01:29:207 - here? the song actually ends at that time imo o.o

nice diffs \:D/ good luck for rank!

Last edited by HelloSCV 2013-12-07T02:44:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

koreapenguin

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Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2013-12-06T14:06:04+00:00

all fix xD thanks SCV

<3

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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-12-06T14:36:50+00:00

All fix for me, thanks SCV :3
xinely fixed too, she send me pm

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-12-17T18:20:19+00:00

yaho :3/

regenz's Easy

- 00:16:307 (3,1) - you can improve this blanket like this

SPOILER

- 00:18:407 (2) - a simple curve fit better imo you can also blanket with (3) after
- 00:40:007 (3,1) - improve the blaket '-'
- 00:41:807 (2,3) - ^
- 01:04:307 (4,1) - i feel kind strange with thi rythm, what about this ?

SPOILER

- 00:47:207 (2,3) - clap on both slider's end
- 01:12:407 (1) - i don't really understand why there is a spinner here '-', this part you should be mapped
- 01:18:407 (2) -this fit better imo

SPOILER

- 01:23:207 (3,1) - improve blanket :3

Xinely's Normal

- 00:05:807 (2,3) - improve the blanket

SPOILER

- 00:13:607 (3) - move to 24,128 for a better flow
- 00:19:307 (6) - like this to increase the flow

SPOILER

- 00:34:007 (1,2) - you should delete the reverse on both it fit better >.<
- 00:40:007 (3,4) - not paralell, intentional ?
- 00:40:607 (4,1) - also improve the blanket
- 00:45:407 (5,1) - this ?

SPOILER

- 00:59:207 (3) - start at 00:59:057 - and then extend the end at 00:59:507 -
- 01:19:007 (4,1) - improve blanket ;w; should be like this

SPOILER

- 01:23:207 (4,5) - should be both 1/1 sliders

K.Penguin's hard

- 00:11:807 (7,8,1) - this a bit confused i thought it was a triplet here, use normal DS ?
- 00:23:057 - you can add a note here '-'
- 00:37:607 (1) - the end should be one blue tick no ?

- 00:38:007 (2) - same for the start >.<
excepted this nice hard

i like it !

Insane

- 00:04:307 (5,6,1,2) - i feel kinda strange about this rythm, i think this fit better, well if you do you have do remade a bit this part

SPOILER

- 00:20:507 (4,5) - change this into two 1/2 slider ?

SPOILER

- 00:43:532 (1) - i prefer two circle instead but it's up to u xD
- 01:03:407 (5) - ctrl G ? '-' if you do change also the triplet before :3
- 01:23:957 (7,8) - better flow like this

SPOILER

- funny insane =w=b

that's all for me, really nice mapset :3 good luck for rank >3</

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-12-18T08:26:58+00:00

-Umi- wrote:
yaho :3/

Insane
- 00:04:307 (5,6,1,2) - i feel kinda strange about this rythm, i think this fit better, well if you do you have do remade a bit this part I follow the sound "haii" ;w;
SPOILER

- 00:20:507 (4,5) - change this into two 1/2 slider ? i will keep it, i follow the vocal here and maybe i will change it like you on future
SPOILER
- 00:43:532 (1) - i prefer two circle instead but it's up to u xD yeah and it fit with finish sound too
- 01:03:407 (5) - ctrl G ? '-' if you do change also the triplet before :3 I want to make it flow here :3
- 01:23:957 (7,8) - better flow like this fix in similar way
SPOILER
- funny insane =w=b

that's all for me, really nice mapset :3 good luck for rank >3</

thanks for mod ><

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-12-19T11:10:07+00:00

update hard and normal too

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2013-12-20T11:22:00+00:00

m4m

regenz's Easy

00:16:007 (3) - Add a note here, because a strong rhythm is here. Alternatively, you could turn 00:15:707 (2,3) - into one slider to make it easier for beginner players

00:55:607 (1) - Try extending this slider to 00:56:507 because I feel that the rhythm here is stronger than 00:56:207

01:02:207 (2) - Push the red node to (208,64) so that the slider will bend earlier, and seem more symmetrical to 01:03:107 (1) -

Xinely's Normal

00:37:607 (3) - NC this to show a change in the rhythm? its the first slider that lands on a blue tick so the new color may hint that to the players

00:51:707 (2) - Try to stack this on top of 00:50:207 (5) - since a lot of the patterning here is stacking, so try to make that consistent

01:06:257 (4) - Bend the slider more by pushing the middle node to (300,208) to make the flow easier

K.Penguin's Hard

00:12:257 (8,1) - Its really hard to see these notes because of teh small distance spacing in between, try to increase to at least 0.7 and see if it helps

00:41:207 (7) - Try curving this slider to make the patten more interesting

00:41:807 (1,2) - I think the location of these 2 sliders should be swapped because the distance between 00:41:207 (7) - and 00:41:807 (1) - is too great. if its (7) to (2) right now I think it will be a better flow

SPOILER

00:47:132 (6) - This can be removed because too many 1/4 triplets in 200 BPM can be tiring, even on hard

01:23:207 (1,2,3,4) - Use ctrl + shift + S and lower the scaling for this triangle please, its way too big imo

Insane is fine, no problems

Hope I helped

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2013-12-20T14:00:37+00:00

mod4mod

General
clean

Easy
00:04:907 - you should add note to here. or change to slider to (5) ?

SPOILER

00:12:707 (1) - move to 00:12:407 it is better to follow vocal. You're follow the vocal from here　00:24:407 　
00:14:807 (1,2) - same as 00:12:707 (1)
00:16:007 - add note. if you changed 00:14:807 (1,2)
00:19:607 (1,2) - make more better flow

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/5SJ2l.jpg

00:22:307 (1,2) - you know what I say
00:41:507 (1) - make better blanket

SPOILER

00:42:407 (3) - add finish on end
00:53:207 (1) - add finish on head
00:49:907 (4) - make a curve ?

SPOILER

Normal
00:01:607 (4) - try this rhythm

SPOILER

and this placing

SPOILER

00:06:407 (3,4) - same as ^
00:18:407 (1) - add new combo ? because it start new sounds pattern.
00:37:607 (3) - try Ctr+H

SPOILER

00:52:007 (3,4) - make a curve

SPOILER

it will be better smooth pattern

Hard
00:01:607 (4,5) - change to w sliders ?

SPOILER

00:12:257 (8,1) - why use unch-jump here ? please keep spacing
00:45:332 - add note
some good flows give me smile.

Insane
00:08:957 (1,2,3) - change to alignment sequence

SPOILER

00:18:407 (1,2,3,4) - ^

SPOILER

it will be make good jumps
01:08:657 (4) - add finish ?
01:10:007 (1) - ^

that's it

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2013-12-20T15:01:09+00:00

Thanks mod

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:regenz's Easy
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:315747
BeatmapSetID:122441

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Op.avi"
0,0,"PAN.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
407,300,4,1,3,70,1,0
35807,-100,4,1,3,70,0,0
38207,-100,4,1,3,40,0,0
38807,-100,4,1,3,70,0,1
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56807,-100,4,1,3,70,0,0
58007,-100,4,1,3,70,0,1
67007,-100,4,1,3,70,0,0
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88307,-100,4,2,3,40,0,0
88607,-100,4,2,3,30,0,0
88907,-100,4,2,3,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 128,64,64

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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-12-21T12:28:05+00:00

all fix thanks Laurier

Soldsaga KunG

282 posts

Joined May 2013

Soldsaga KunG 2013-12-22T10:27:29+00:00

M4M ^^

Diff Insane

00:07:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - อั้นนี้ผมอยากให้พี่แก้เป็นสามเหลื่ยมแบบนี้งะ 00:08:957 (1,2,3)
00:38:507 (3) - อั้นนี้ทำไมไม่เอาให้ทับไปเบยอะ 00:38:807 (1) - ทับกับจุดเริ่มหรือจุดปลายก็ได้
จุดเริ่ม ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191461
จุดปลาย ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191463

The Ends Mods ^^

Good Luck

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2013-12-23T10:01:36+00:00

m4m, std only 0.0

Insane

01:04:607 (9) - nc here as ur nc style before?
01:16:607 (10) - ^
other r fine to me

K.Penguin's Hard

00:48:107 (4,1) - hmm... ds changing here maybe a bit too hard in hard diff? maybe just make that stream a move one rather than a stack one 0.0
01:05:807 (2,3) - blanket?
01:13:007 (2) - i prefer ctrl+g here, and arrange ds a bit
wow big jump at last lol, hard diff can be that hard nowadays?

Xinely's Normal

00:01:007 (3,4) - blanket perfect
00:10:007 (1,2,3) - arrange these objs to make 2 and 3 a blanket?
00:40:607 (4,1) - blanket? well, no blanket can be a necessity, just consider a bit... and more blanket issue after this, u can fix them by urself or feel free to ignore :3
haha, why nealy 70% of objs r set on the left side of the screen? lol

regenz's Easy

00:16:307 (3,1) - blanket perfect, and lots of them like this, u can fix them by urself or feel free to ignore :3
fine

another map of this song lol

good luck

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-12-27T05:11:07+00:00

m4m ~ std only

[General]
uncheck widescreen support(Easy,Normal)

[regenz's Easy]

00:38:807 - how about this? or same as 00:48:407 (1,2)

SPOILER

[Xinely's Normal]
looks fine

[K.Penguin's Hard]
00:02:807 (1,2) - change slider?

add note suggestion for better flow

00:15:857 (2) - stack on 00:16:307 (4)?
00:49:457 (6) - for example : x408 y344
00:51:257 (6) - for example : x36 y180

01:13:007 (2) - you can make more beautiful blanket

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:06:407 (6) - 00:06:107 (5) ctrl+g slider?
00:11:807 (8) - how about this?

SPOILER

00:14:507 (8) - how about this?

SPOILER

00:40:907 (9) - change slider? i think flow is priority because it is thematic melody line
00:48:707 (2) - remove whole whistle
00:50:207 (8) - ^
01:07:007 (1,2,3) - ^ not fit music,imo
01:08:057 - add note stack on 01:09:407 (8)

sorry to poor mod

good luck~

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-12-27T06:04:45+00:00

thanks thanks :3 almost all fixed

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2013-12-27T17:22:11+00:00

Hi, try M4M

General

The start feels sudden. How about adding the 'Audio Lead-In'?
Easy, Normal : Check out the 'Widescreen Support' plz.

regenz's Easy

00:10:307 (2) - Maybe this is more smooth between (1) and (3)
SPOILER
00:17:207 (1) - finish on head
00:35:07 - Maybe useless greenline?
00:39:107 (2) - move to 00:39:407 is better?
00:43:907 (1,2) - How about following 00:44:807 - this beat?
SPOILER
00:55:607 (1) - finish on head
00:55:607 (1) - feels strange...? end at 00:56:507
01:11:807 (3) - (176|98) is better?
01:22:007 - Same. Useless greenline I think.

Xinely's Normal

00:04:607 : Maybe useless greenline.
00:13:607 (3) - Where are the hitsounds..;w; whistle on head, clap on tail.
00:15:707 (2) - x1.05 → x1.00?
00:16:007 (3,4) - feel so closed..move (4) to down and adjust next (1)?
SPOILER
00:31:007 (4) - rotate 20*?
SPOILER
01:16:007 (3) - change tail's clap into finish?
01:18:857 : Useless greenline?

K.Penguin's Hard

전체적으로 엄청 깔끔하네요..뭘 모딩해야하는건지 ㄷ 그냥 몇자 끄적여볼게요
00:02:207 (6) - 슬라머리에 휘슬 빠지니까 좀 어색하네요...휘슬 넣으시는건 어떠신지..
00:03:107 (2) - 이거만 1.25로 돼있네요..시비거는 뱃들도 있을듯하니 1.2로 바꾸시는게 좋을듯 해요
00:12:257 (8) - 개인적이지만 안티점프랑 음악이 별로 안어울리네요
00:29:207 (1) - 그냥 다음 슬라이더에 겹치시는건 어때요?
00:44:657 (4) - 이것도 다음 슬라에 겹치는게 힛사랑 더 어울리지 않을까요?
01:17:207 ~ 01:26:507 : 이 파트는 저만 그런가요..다른곳은 다 휘슬없고 틱에만 휘슬있으니까 불규칙한게 듣기에 좀 그렇네요..그냥 여기 틱휘슬은 빼는게 어때요?

Insane

00:08:357 (4) - NC?
00:55:307 (7) - clap on tail
00:40:532 (7) - Well, this space gap is almost 0.1. (62|217) is better I think.
00:54:257 (4) - How about changing this rhythm into another one following 00:54:407 this beat ?
SPOILER
01:06:257 (5) - this angle is strange a bit..? rotate3*
SPOILER
01:02:207 (9) - make a curve is more smooth?
SPOILER

...yes, my modding skill is very poor. Sorry ;w;
GL :3

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-12-27T18:52:22+00:00

about 70% fix for insane :3 thanks

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-12-28T03:53:12+00:00

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
m4m

Xinely's Normal

00:37:607 (3) - NC this to show a change in the rhythm? its the first slider that lands on a blue tick so the new color may hint that to the players consistency

00:51:707 (2) - Try to stack this on top of 00:50:207 (5) - since a lot of the patterning here is stacking, so try to make that consistent well but need to tweak some patterns orz, but fixed as i can

01:06:257 (4) - Bend the slider more by pushing the middle node to (300,208) to make the flow easier orz you make an inconsistency spacing and forced flow

Laurier wrote:
mod4mod

Normal
00:01:607 (4) - try this rhythm
SPOILER
and this placing fixed
SPOILER
00:06:407 (3,4) - same as ^
00:18:407 (1) - add new combo ? because it start new sounds pattern. agreed, added
00:37:607 (3) - try Ctr+H yap, flow seems better
SPOILER
00:52:007 (3,4) - make a curve
SPOILER
it will be better smooth pattern i prefer mine for this patten. sorry

that's it

Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m, std only 0.0
Xinely's Normal
00:01:007 (3,4) - blanket perfect isn't blanket again since changed from laurier's mod
00:10:007 (1,2,3) - arrange these objs to make 2 and 3 a blanket? flow won't nicely again
00:40:607 (4,1) - blanket? well, no blanket can be a necessity, just consider a bit... and more blanket issue after this, u can fix them by urself or feel free to ignore :3
haha, why nealy 70% of objs r set on the left side of the screen? lol

good luck

Karia wrote:
Hi, try M4M
Xinely's Normal
00:04:607 : Maybe useless greenline. removed
00:13:607 (3) - Where are the hitsounds..;w; whistle on head, clap on tail. added drum finish on repeat too
00:15:707 (2) - x1.05 → x1.00? not really an issue but let's fix it for avoiding missunderstanding
00:16:007 (3,4) - feel so closed..move (4) to down and adjust next (1)? 1 grid down
SPOILER
00:31:007 (4) - rotate 20*? flow isn't really good for me, rotate 5 degree instead
SPOILER
01:16:007 (3) - change tail's clap into finish? nice catch
01:18:857 : Useless greenline? removed

thanks 4 mods all ~

Update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: NouCome (SML).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38923
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70723
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:314169
BeatmapSetID:122441

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"PAN.png",0,0
Video,0,"Op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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407,300,4,2,1,60,1,0
1607,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
4757,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6707,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
7607,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
8807,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
9707,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
10307,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
12707,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
14057,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
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koreapenguin

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koreapenguin 2013-12-28T08:46:43+00:00

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Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2013-12-29T03:45:05+00:00

baka PAN

[General]
Clear~!

[Insane]

00:00:857 - How about adding circle ? Here you can hear slightly a piano instrument that can be unnecessary if it skipped which different with 00:03:257 - that didn't have any instrument that can be heared. Here's a pattern suggestion if you agree, With this you can make both a fun jump and pretty nice circular flow here ~
SPOILER
00:06:107 (5,6) - How about adding circle at 00:06:107 - then start (5) 1/2 later to following that trumpet hold ? this can be flowing better with the music during gameplay imo, compared to 00:01:457 (3) - that have same sound and same techniques.
00:07:307 (9) - I'd really like to see more jump pattern here since the next rhytm is a pretty fun instrument that sticked out from the music. How about shorten this into 3/4 or better 1/2 ( you can emphasize drum at 00:07:457 - with this ) then add a NC'ed note here 00:07:607 - ? Also you can place it like this :
SPOILER
00:07:757 (1,2,5) - Hm.. i guess you missed whistles at these note ? you can still hear the drum on the BGM here, also whistle here could fit really nice with the finish instrument that played on the music.
00:09:707 (1) - How about shortening this into 3/4 so you can give a shot on the drum clap at 00:09:932 - on the BGM ? I just feel that a 1/1 slider can't really give enough fun for players xD, If you did this you also can repair your NC pattern
00:10:907 (5) - Is this whistle on the slider's end intentional ? i can't hear any drum sound that provided on the music here.
00:17:657 (2) - This placement didn't really making smooth flow imo, I'd prefer 2 circle here that give more strong emphasize to the drum before star pattern jump. Maybe something like this :
SPOILER
00:28:832 (5) - Try adding a clap here, if you hear it correctly there're duplet sounds on the music. Adding them would give more sense and flowing smoothly to follow during gameplay
00:40:532 (7) - ^ same reason
00:38:507 - I'd highly suggest you to remove the kiai fountain here, it may cause a kiai abuse issue as the ranking criteria said, since the fountain would clash with the next one ( 00:38:807 - ) that maybe too strong that can cause epilepsy. Consider this..
00:54:257 (4,5) - I'd suggest you to swap this two to give smoother transition during gameplay, i mean 1/2 slider first to follow the hold vocal "wa~" then you can add a circle to emphasize the drum.
00:56:057 (9,1) - Maybe swap this NC for neater combo rhytm ? as you can see the down beat was lying on the reverse point of (8). So i think the NC should be on (9) instead of (1). But idk if you want to following the vocal, it's up to you
01:01:307 (5,6) - I would suggest to changing (5) into a note then start a 1/2 slider from the red tick to following the vocal more precise here. During gameplay you'll feel that awkward feelings of hitting 1/1 slider (6) when the long hold vocal was emphasized with the end of slider's (5). This will avoid that feelings and make the transition more smoother.
01:06:857 (7) - If you hear it properly, the rhytm has already changed into 1/3 here.. So i'd suggest you to remove this and add 1/3 slider from 01:06:807 -
I'd have to admit that this diff was very fun and well made ( even if i can't pass this.. holyshit that BPM -w- ) , good job that you got there PAN !

[Hard]

00:09:707 (3) - This stack merely broken the flow here, it would be better if you can use correct DS instead
00:11:807 (8,1) - Pretty strange placement, if i.. i would moving the (8) that can be overlapped with the sliderbody but not with the hitcircle, sometimes it can be hard to read, like this
SPOILER
00:27:257 (2) - I'd be better if you can delete this note to give some rest to players with your 1/2 combo pattern in this high bpm songs.
00:31:007 (4,2) - Seems bear pattern, it would be neater if you can make these two sliders have same shape to create smoother pattern to follow during gameplay
00:37:607 (1,2) - 1/3 slider pattern maybe can be too hard to read on Hard diff even if it following the music properly. The rhytm would be easier to read if you give reverse point to (1) then add note instead
00:44:657 (4,5) - This rhytm can be arranged better to follow the vocal, if you change (4) into a 1/2 slider then add another 1/2 slider. you can emphasize it both vocal and drum instrument here
00:46:007 (3) - You will need a finish at the slider's head to emphasize the high vocal,also i can hear other instrument that provide a splashy sound here
01:14:507 (6) - This stack plays awkwardly. I'd suggest you to remove this to 350 32 to create smoother pattern to follow during gameplay.
01:23:207 (1,2,3,4) - This is extremely too hard for 200 BPM song, i hope you can scale them to make it smaller a bit.

[Normal]

00:01:457 (4,3) - Opo iki.. rhytm sama suara sama tapi kok hitsound ne beda.. sing sitok whistle sitok e clap.. consistency ae. le jareku sing (4) mending gantien whistle. lebih cocok masio gak onok suara drum di music ne. le clap rasane crash karo (3)'s slider end o.o
00:07:007 (4) - sup.. delok'en spacing ne :3
00:08:657 (2,3,4) - 1/2 note trus slider iku cukup angel lho gawe newbie.. mending koe ganti note ne jadi slider trus 1/2 reverse ae cek gampangan di follow timbangane 2 1/2 slider... 200 bpm iki coy
00:23:207 (4,1) - Coba'en blanket ae ta ? luwih apik le jareku
SPOILER
00:26:207 (5) - Aku eroh iki pasti slider (4) sing kok puter 120*.. tapi berhubung pattern ne nggak iso mbentuk symmetry ( koyok ngene > 00:29:507 (2,3) - ) gara" (1) kecidekan.. mending gantien sliderliyane atau 2 circle ae..
00:26:807 (1) - Finish di slider's end dunk.. instrument nya lumayan keras ini lho.. aneh aja klo yg di slidertick di emphasize tapi yg ini malah cmn whistle doang
00:34:007 (1,2) - Iki dua dua ne end point ne gak ceblok neng suara opopun nang music. dadi awkward ae pas mitek ne soale mek onok 1/2 rhytm di music ne. kok gak di ilangi ae reverse ne cek gampangan sitik diff ne karo luwih fit nang BGM toh ?
SPOILER
00:47:807 (4,5) - Lbih prefer 1/1 slider iki lek aku timbangane circle. soale suarane podo persis koyok 00:47:207 (3) - . jadi le rhytm ne digawe podo pisan lak luwih pas gitu pattern ne
00:49:007 (2) - jujur ae iki cukup aneh shape ne lek jareku ._. inget en mod ne guru mu soal slider's shape (arc) di map eternal reality mu wwwww

[Easy]

00:04:757 - How about adding circle here ? this part feels empty even for easy diff because you completely ignore the pretty important part which the music provide
00:39:707 - ^ for same reason. anyway it's kiai. So players won't get bother if you adding it to keep steady the transition and flows smoothly
00:43:907 (4) - This reverse slider plays awkwardly during gameplay because it's not landed on any dominant part of the music. I'd suggest you to add a note then start a slider 1/1 later to follow the vocal. then add another note to emphasize the drum
01:17:207 (1,2) - This can be totally hard to read especially on hidden mod because of the double reverse and the placement that you use, which can make possibility to follow with 1 reverse. i'd suggest you to remove the 2nd reverse and rearrange the pattern. or do something similiar with this :
SPOILER
01:23:207 (3,1) - Hm.. i think the blanket can be better here, the curved way of (3) seems not arranged properly for blanket imo

Good Luck for getting this ranked !~

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-12-29T11:28:07+00:00

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:regenz's Easy
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
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Ami

177 posts

Joined November 2012

Ami 2014-01-04T10:46:20+00:00

Yoyo. m4m :3

[regenz's Easy]
00:00:707 (2) - i think 2 reverse arrows are very confusing on Easy.
00:05:207 (1) - ^
00:10:307 (2) - ^
00:07:607 (1) - make this spinner longer. to 00:09:707 and delete (1)
00:19:907 (2) - Make this perfect blanked and the 2 reverse arrows, yo know D:
00:36:407 (1) - make this spinner longer.

to 00:38:507 ^_^
00:40:007 (2,1) - Make perfect :3, Disable Grid snap for it. :p
00:41:807 (2,3) - ^
00:49:907 (4,1) - ^
01:05:807 (2,3) - ^
01:17:207 (1,2) - you know what I mean.

01:23:207 (3,1) - Make perfect.

[Xinely's Normal]
4 1/2 stars, what.

00:15:707 (2) - stack with 00:13:607 (3) - and make this 00:14:807 (1) - perfect :3
00:23:207 (4,1) - Make it perfect blanced
00:56:807 (3,4) - ^
good job, xin. D:

[K.Penguin's Hard]
Looks perfect to me haha.

[Insane]
00:29:207 (8,1) - Stack it, it looks better, rlly o3o
00:45:707 (3,1) - ^

Gud map pan ~~ and sry for my bad english >:

Eldwyn

26 posts

Joined March 2013

Eldwyn 2014-01-11T15:22:34+00:00

I really like this beatmap, kudosu star for youu ~
Don't give up, you'll do it !

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-01-12T06:37:25+00:00

Eldwyn wrote:
I really like this beatmap, kudosu star for youu ~
Don't give up, you'll do it !

thank you!!
thanks for your encourage. ill try

Swayzo_old

78 posts

Joined April 2013

Swayzo_old 2014-01-13T01:35:21+00:00

M4M
Hard:

SPOILER

00:13:007 remove 4 and Extend slider 3 so it's 1 beat long
00:20:807 (1,2) ^
00:34:007(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) Suggestion:

00:37:607 replace (1,2) with circles
00:44:657 4 should be the slider, not 5
01:23:357 too fast

Insane:

SPOILER

00:34:007(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) Suggestion:

~~00:38:507 supposed to snap to slider 1 @ 00:38:807 ?~~
00:44:507 (5,6,7,8,9) didn't play well, try rearranging the notes
00:37:607 replace (1,2) with circles
01:26:057 should be distanced abit further
00:56:057 (2,3) replace 2 with a slider that lasts 1 beat long and add a note at 00:56:507
01:14:957 (1-11) didn't play very well
00:12:257 needs a note

(sorry for the random order, I had to keep replaying the song to find mistakes)
I guess that's all I can find

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2014-02-02T16:19:12+00:00

뭐야 이건

[General]

offset +4 from current state (411)
please uncheck the Widescreen Support in Normal and Easy diffs. you didn't make or use StoryBoard. it's only for SB.
this mapset is unstable. difficult gap is big. it's twice things between Normal and Hard, Hard and Insane. I think Hard diff can reduce difficult from current state. but about Insane.... you should need another Insane diff that light Insane.

[regenz's Easy]

00:31:607 (1) - try to add a Finish hitsound here? I think you forgot to add to hitsound on here. but if you want to highlight that for rhythm, I'd rather add Finish. or other way. if you don't want to add a Finish here, why don't you use Whistle hitsound on here with 00:32:207 (2) - this circle? the choice is yours.
00:38:807 - eh... can you try to use long slider that including 3 white ticks? this section will be difficulty for non technical players. because, this section is immediately after the 00:36:407 (1) - this spinner. accordingly, that players will feel difficult to hit the notes. anyway, try to use this slider.
SPOILER
00:41:507 (1) - if you want to blanket it, why don't you perfectly blanket it? I recommend one grid move to left on gird level 4 (Tiny)
01:07:607 (1) - hm.... I think removing the Whistle hitsound on arrow of this slider is good for this section's sound. because of the drum snare sound is too strongly emphasized on that section. anyway I tried add a Clap on here, but not good. just no hitsound is good for here. IMO

[Xinely's Normal]

dat hitsounds...

00:08:961 - this pattern is too hard to use for Normal diff. why don't you apply Momochikun's opinion?
00:29:211 (1) - try move to (152,272) with 00:30:411 (3) - this slider if you want to make perfect square. well... if you apply this opinion, you should adjust neighboring notes. don't want to bother you, but that will be increase map's quality.
00:35:211 (3) - try remove the Clap hitsound on end of this slider as follow 00:34:011 - this pattern. I think this way is good than current state. 00:36:111 (5) - this circle too.
00:36:411 (1) - add a Finish in stead Whistle on start of slider. I heard a cymbal sound at here.
01:01:461 (3) - aaaah. I recommend remove this circle. this is not good for Normal diff. non tech-players might be confuse on this pattern.
01:05:211 (1) - only use one hitsound like previous hitsounds. eh... eventually, remove the Whistle.
01:11:061 (3) - yea. same opinion as 01:01:461 (3) - this.
01:17:211 (1) - same opinion as above. At the least, please make it consistent. same opinion the later similar patterns.

[K.Penguin's Hard]

세상에. 하드라니. 하드라기엔 슈퍼하드네요.

00:19:161 (3,4) - 이거 슬라이더로 대체해서 사용해주시거나. 혹은 두 서클을 겹쳐주세요 다른 패턴들처럼. 하드에 쓰기엔 너무 어렵네요.

에...음.... 일단 모딩하기 이전에. 잘 만드셧긴 한데 하드라고 하기에는 난이도가 있네요. BPM 이 빨라서 그런감도 없지않아 있긴 한데. 00:46:311 - 이 근처에 1/4 연타가 많은점과 01:23:361 (2,3,4) - 이런 점프 등등. 특히나 후자의 경우에는 인세인에서도 잘은 안쓰이는 점프입니다. 음... 확실히 고난도 이긴한데 잘만드신거 같아서, 현재 상태에서 박자를 조금 줄이는 방편을 요구해봅니다. 저런 연타수들도 조금 줄여주시고. 디스턴스가 너무 넓은곳에는 약간 줄이는 식으로. 난이도를 줄여보시는게 어떤가요?

[Insane]

please. please reduce HP drain. none mode's Drain like HR mode.
00:28:757 (4,5,6) - I think this 3 hit stream is not good for here. certainly, we can hear that drum sound. but in playing? I think almost players impossible hear that. hm... whatever, try to only use (6) circle? E.g. 00:32:807 - here. IMO
00:40:307 (6,7,8) - this pattern feel awkward for me. anyway, i want to say this. this song's main melody is too loud than sub drums' sounds. so.. I recommend this rhythm
SPOILER

good

I will taiko mod if you want

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-02-09T05:41:54+00:00

thanks mod

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38923
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:K.Penguin's Hard
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
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Sarawatlism

1,278 posts

Joined September 2013

Sarawatlism 2014-02-19T14:35:55+00:00

Shooting kudo <3 ♥

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-21T22:03:10+00:00

Short IRC mod. We fixed some minor things. Good luck!

IRC mod

15:28 P A N: BeatofIke please help me :'( https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122441
15:28 BeatofIke: what is it? ;w
15:29 P A N: 6 months map that you gave me a correct title lol
15:31 BeatofIke: oh
15:33 P A N: I still want it to rank but

15:34 BeatofIke: it's graveyarded D:
15:34 P A N: i will dig it today lol
15:34 P A N: oh I should say
15:34 P A N: resurrect
15:38 BeatofIke: okay ;w
15:38 P A N: updating DX
15:38 P A N: mine is almost the first version but
15:38 P A N: ;w;
15:40 BeatofIke: i see o.o
15:45 P A N: ok update
15:46 BeatofIke: okay

15:46 BeatofIke: so..............
15:46 BeatofIke: IRC mod? XD
15:46 P A N: ok ><
15:46 BeatofIke: hue hue hue...
15:47 P A N: i will mod yours as well
15:47 P A N: so its a m4m :3
15:47 P A N: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/145885
15:47 BeatofIke: okay thanks XD
15:47 P A N: XD
15:55 BeatofIke: think your Preview time is unsnapped
15:55 BeatofIke: Try setting one at 00:38:807. o.o
15:56 P A N: can I 38:657? XD
15:56 P A N: I like to set before the kial about 1 sec
15:56 BeatofIke: sure

15:56 P A N: because of fade in
15:56 P A N: ok
16:00 BeatofIke: Think you should add soft-sliderslide3 because of this slider at 00:26:807 (1) - on Xinely's Normal. o.o
16:01 BeatofIke: you can hear the slider slider sound on this slider
16:03 P A N: oh
16:03 P A N: i see
16:04 P A N: but I think its....... ok? XD
16:04 P A N: just one slider
16:07 BeatofIke: Hard is seems fine.
16:08 P A N: ><
16:09 BeatofIke: idk, the slider just sounds inconsisent that's all :/
16:09 P A N: slidertick right?
16:09 BeatofIke: the map on Easy and Normal itself are good.
16:09 BeatofIke: the slidertick sounds fine
16:10 BeatofIke: just the sliderslide
16:10 P A N: oh
16:11 P A N: you mean
16:11 P A N: I need to add mute sliderslide?
16:12 BeatofIke: yes
16:12 P A N: ok I got it
16:12 P A N: I forget it sorry
16:12 P A N: I just a bit confuse about sliderslide and slidertick
16:12 BeatofIke: sorry for the misunderstanding ><
16:12 P A N: ok i will add it
16:12 P A N: no no my fault
16:12 P A N: : (
16:13 BeatofIke: for the taiko diffs, you
16:13 BeatofIke: will need a Taiko BAT for that one

16:14 P A N: ok :3
16:17 P A N: ok I add it
16:17 P A N: silence sliderslide
16:18 BeatofIke: ok
16:23 BeatofIke: why so pro >w<
16:23 P A N: noooo DX
16:23 BeatofIke: lol
16:24 BeatofIke: Think that's it o.o
16:25 P A N: ok please post
16:25 P A N: or you can bubble too ';..;'
16:25 P A N: ahahaha
16:25 BeatofIke: just don't forget to re-snap the Preview time about the Taiko difficulties as well.
16:26 BeatofIke: I can't bubble

16:26 P A N: i see
16:26 P A N: ok
16:26 BeatofIke: because of the Taiko diffs
16:26 BeatofIke: have to circle
16:26 P A N: what is circle mean
16:26 P A N: 0.0
16:27 BeatofIke: This: p/2950389
16:27 P A N: I see
16:28 P A N: I can remove taiko you know lol
16:28 P A N: its already unrank DX
16:28 P A N: he have 2 taiko diff but I have just 1 so
16:28 P A N: its unrank
16:29 BeatofIke: You................. could remove them, but it's better to ask the guest mapper.
16:29 P A N: yea I plan to move it to the creator's box instead
16:30 BeatofIke: okay, that's fine o.o
16:31 P A N: but it's
16:31 P A N: really unrank right?
16:31 P A N: 2 taiko gd with 1 diff owner
16:31 BeatofIke: nope
16:32 P A N: ok so
16:32 P A N: I should move it :X
16:33 BeatofIke: Sure, if you want to o.o
16:35 P A N: I will call you back ><
16:35 BeatofIke: okay >w<

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-03-21T22:16:07+00:00

thanks so much ;w;

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2014-03-22T02:13:55+00:00

GoGo~~ <3

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2014-03-22T02:29:10+00:00

thanks XD

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-03-31T02:09:31+00:00

General
Title should be S.M.L (TV Size) instead of S . M . L (TV Size) (there is a space between each character which will affect when you are searching in the game)
and the other ranked map is sticking with S.M.L as well.

regenz's Easy
01:17:207 (1) - 2 repeating sliders with 2 repeaters like this may become a bit sudden to play for players in general. Making them have 1 repeater and add some more circles this way could work better in some ways.
01:17:207 (1) - x 252 y 312
01:18:107 (2) - x 204 y 236
01:18:407 (3) - x 292 y 216
01:19:307 (4) - x 380 y 200

SPOILER

Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did

SPOILER

00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense

SPOILER

00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -

SPOILER

00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed.

SPOILER

01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -

SPOILER

Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!

K.Penguin's Hard
00:42:107 (2) - I think moving this down a bit to make the distance between 00:41:807 (1) - & 00:42:407 (3) - look graphically the same will be more polished.

SPOILER

00:45:257 (6,7,1) - with this bpm (quite high). I don't think spaced stream is a good idea. You'd better stick with a stack like this.

SPOILER

Insane
OD8 could fit more with this song to get more variety of scoreboard.
00:49:307 (4) - the end of this slider is really significant in term of rhythmical sense. I would propose you to end it just on the 00:49:457 (reduced by 1/2) and start a slider on 00:49:607 to be more emphasized with the song. Be aware of the spacing after fixing as well.

SPOILER

Call me back once everything is done and this will be set.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-03-31T02:42:34+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did
SPOILER
00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense
SPOILER
00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -
SPOILER
00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed. moved the 00:58:007 (1,2) - to avoid stacked, since 00:59:207 - music of this time is loud, i wanna map this music
SPOILER
01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -
SPOILER
Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!

Call me back once everything is done and this will be set.

no reply = fixed
thanks 4 mod frost

update

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: NouCome (SML).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38732
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70723
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が  学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:314169
BeatmapSetID:122441

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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