GoGo~~ <3
forum
Afilia Saga - S . M . L (TV Size)
posted
Total Posts
76
Topic Starter
thanks XD
General
Title should be S.M.L (TV Size) instead of S . M . L (TV Size) (there is a space between each character which will affect when you are searching in the game)
and the other ranked map is sticking with S.M.L as well.
regenz's Easy
01:17:207 (1) - 2 repeating sliders with 2 repeaters like this may become a bit sudden to play for players in general. Making them have 1 repeater and add some more circles this way could work better in some ways.
01:17:207 (1) - x 252 y 312
01:18:107 (2) - x 204 y 236
01:18:407 (3) - x 292 y 216
01:19:307 (4) - x 380 y 200
Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did
00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense
00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -
00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed.
01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -
Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!
K.Penguin's Hard
00:42:107 (2) - I think moving this down a bit to make the distance between 00:41:807 (1) - & 00:42:407 (3) - look graphically the same will be more polished.
00:45:257 (6,7,1) - with this bpm (quite high). I don't think spaced stream is a good idea. You'd better stick with a stack like this.
Insane
OD8 could fit more with this song to get more variety of scoreboard.
00:49:307 (4) - the end of this slider is really significant in term of rhythmical sense. I would propose you to end it just on the 00:49:457 (reduced by 1/2) and start a slider on 00:49:607 to be more emphasized with the song. Be aware of the spacing after fixing as well.
Call me back once everything is done and this will be set.
Title should be S.M.L (TV Size) instead of S . M . L (TV Size) (there is a space between each character which will affect when you are searching in the game)
and the other ranked map is sticking with S.M.L as well.
regenz's Easy
01:17:207 (1) - 2 repeating sliders with 2 repeaters like this may become a bit sudden to play for players in general. Making them have 1 repeater and add some more circles this way could work better in some ways.
01:17:207 (1) - x 252 y 312
01:18:107 (2) - x 204 y 236
01:18:407 (3) - x 292 y 216
01:19:307 (4) - x 380 y 200
Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did
00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense
00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -
00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed.
01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -
Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!
K.Penguin's Hard
00:42:107 (2) - I think moving this down a bit to make the distance between 00:41:807 (1) - & 00:42:407 (3) - look graphically the same will be more polished.
00:45:257 (6,7,1) - with this bpm (quite high). I don't think spaced stream is a good idea. You'd better stick with a stack like this.
Insane
OD8 could fit more with this song to get more variety of scoreboard.
00:49:307 (4) - the end of this slider is really significant in term of rhythmical sense. I would propose you to end it just on the 00:49:457 (reduced by 1/2) and start a slider on 00:49:607 to be more emphasized with the song. Be aware of the spacing after fixing as well.
Call me back once everything is done and this will be set.
no reply = fixedFrostmourne wrote:
Xinely's Normal
00:01:457 (4) - this is following weirdly. I think there is a really significant beat on 00:01:757 (slider's tail) which I believe it's really meaningful here. So having this kind of rhythm will make this map more tasty like 00:05:807 (2,3,4) - you did
00:03:707 (2) - similar to above in term of rhythmical sense
00:37:607 (3) - nazi, maybe you can rotate this a bit to make it more smooth and look clean apart from 00:36:407 (1) -
00:59:207 (3) - as this diff follows vocal quite well, this stack becomes confusing due to off-vocal pattern. I would start a slider on 00:59:057 and extend it to the previous point like this. Don't forget to fix your hitsound if they are effectively changed. moved the 00:58:007 (1,2) - to avoid stacked, since 00:59:207 - music of this time is loud, i wanna map this music
01:01:457 (3,4) - similar to above, a second hit on 01:01:607 (4) - isn't not following the vocal. The first one that follows exactly is on 01:01:457 (3) -
In order to maintain the hitsound usage, I suggest you do this way to still maintain the clap on the tail of that slider and vocal on 01:02:207 (4) -
Really great job on beat placements you have done here. Everything follows music amazingly, I love it!
Call me back once everything is done and this will be set.
thanks 4 mod frost
update
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: NouCome (SML).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38732
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70723
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1
[Metadata]
Title:S . M . L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Love Comedy wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
Tags:opening xinely koreapenguin regenz P_A_N noucome 俺の脳内選択肢が 学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している reyshel
BeatmapID:314169
BeatmapSetID:122441
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Op.avi"
0,0,"PAN.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
[TimingPoints]
407,300,4,2,1,60,1,0
1607,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
4757,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6707,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
7607,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
8807,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
9707,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
10307,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
12707,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
14057,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15107,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
18407,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
19607,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
19907,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
23507,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
23807,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
27107,-100,4,2,3,55,0,0
27407,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
27707,-100,4,2,3,55,0,0
28007,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
36407,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
37607,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
38507,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
38582,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
38807,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
47207,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
48407,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
50807,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
54257,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
54707,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
56807,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
58007,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61907,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
64157,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
67007,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
67607,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
72407,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
74207,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
74507,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
77207,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
82007,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
86807,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
87407,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
88007,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
88607,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
88907,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 128,64,64
[HitObjects]
52,100,407,5,4,0:0:0:0:
76,196,707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,252,1007,2,0,L|256:312,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,324,1457,2,0,P|356:304|392:264,1,100,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,2057,1,10,0:0:0:0:
392,152,2207,2,0,P|348:128|284:124,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,120,2807,6,0,P|148:120|92:88,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,3707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,3857,2,0,L|312:280,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,268,4457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,188,4757,2,0,L|452:128,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,5207,6,0,P|333:87|281:83,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,84,5807,2,0,P|176:136|136:192,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,224,6257,2,0,P|168:252|228:268,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,6857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,232,7007,2,0,P|359:218|420:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,7607,6,0,P|504:224|470:146,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,344,8657,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,332,8957,2,0,L|304:332,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,9257,2,0,L|196:316,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,276,9707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,188,10007,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,128,10307,2,0,P|200:112|264:132,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,10907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,280,11207,2,0,P|384:324|440:352,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,272,11807,2,0,P|460:228|404:200,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,164,12407,6,0,P|256:200|184:112,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,64,13307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,152,13607,2,0,P|36:204|64:300,2,150,2|4|8,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,208,14807,6,0,P|152:108|64:52,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,152,15707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,208,16007,2,0,L|248:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,16607,2,0,L|71:283,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,17207,6,0,P|20:144|40:92,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,40,17807,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,80,18107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,116,18407,6,0,L|336:64,2,50,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,18857,2,0,P|288:208|280:264,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,308,19307,2,0,P|224:316|172:308,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,284,19907,5,8,0:0:0:0:
40,188,20207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,128,20507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,188,20807,2,0,L|324:200,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,292,21407,2,0,L|200:276,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,276,21857,6,0,P|124:308|32:260,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,22607,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,104,22907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,80,23207,2,0,P|232:64|320:104,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,24407,6,0,L|220:276,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,360,25007,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,348,25307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,248,25607,2,0,P|76:204|68:152,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,68,26207,2,0,P|119:60|184:88,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,26807,6,0,P|328:152|448:84,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,28307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,152,28607,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,248,28907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,276,29207,5,4,0:0:0:0:
244,320,29507,2,0,P|284:288|312:232,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,276,30407,2,0,P|139:227|144:178,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,96,31007,2,0,P|251:108|312:93,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,31607,5,4,0:0:0:0:
412,208,31907,2,0,P|408:256|380:304,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,32507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,328,32807,2,0,P|168:288|168:220,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,33407,2,0,P|248:200|248:268,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,328,34007,6,0,L|204:384,2,50,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,268,34607,2,0,L|64:296,2,50,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,187,35207,2,0,P|195:135|183:79,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,40,35807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,124,36107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,224,36407,6,0,P|36:272|68:332,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,124,37307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,188,37607,2,0,P|132:224|120:264,2,75,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,140,38207,2,0,P|200:132|264:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,220,38807,6,0,P|395:255|480:204,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,108,39707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,40007,2,0,L|288:72,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,160,40607,2,0,L|364:144,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,60,41207,6,0,P|440:141|384:240,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,280,42107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,264,42407,2,0,L|100:240,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,43007,2,0,L|232:168,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,188,43607,6,0,P|384:196|464:92,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,44507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,36,44807,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,80,45107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,156,45407,2,0,L|172:272,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,328,46007,6,0,P|184:356|260:280,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,188,46907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,92,47207,2,0,L|364:80,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,128,47807,1,4,0:0:0:0:
444,228,48107,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,300,48407,6,0,P|332:324|272:328,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,328,49007,2,0,P|152:288|96:256,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,208,49607,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,120,49907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,104,50207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,188,50507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,272,50807,6,0,P|324:188|276:108,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,104,51707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,120,52007,2,0,L|0:208,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,296,52607,2,0,L|140:340,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,356,53207,6,0,P|260:312|208:180,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,116,54107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,116,54257,2,0,P|104:144|8:100,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,20,55007,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,20,55307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,116,55607,6,0,P|204:156|328:104,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,56507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,180,56807,2,0,P|460:236|444:296,2,100,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,240,57707,1,4,0:0:0:0:
276,196,58007,6,0,L|160:188,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,58907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,344,59207,2,0,B|420:348|420:348|476:324,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,244,59807,2,0,B|452:240|452:240|396:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,344,60407,6,0,L|248:348,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,348,61007,2,0,L|124:256,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,61457,2,0,P|120:136|192:80,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,62207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,108,62507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,196,62807,6,0,P|319:208|367:196,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,63407,2,0,P|480:284|464:336,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,356,63857,2,0,L|264:348,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,64607,2,0,P|176:288|136:236,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,176,65207,5,6,0:0:0:0:
112,80,65507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,100,65807,2,0,P|260:88|316:92,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,66257,2,0,P|294:206|206:238,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,200,67007,2,0,L|104:312,1,100,4|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,352,67607,6,0,L|291:348,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,360,68507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,360,68657,2,0,P|44:304|48:224,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,132,69407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,88,69707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,164,70007,6,0,L|272:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,288,70607,2,0,P|396:312|456:300,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,276,71057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
500,232,71207,2,0,L|484:116,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,56,71807,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,56,72107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,60,72407,6,0,B|123:76|123:76|67:178,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,268,73307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,316,73607,2,0,P|232:332|320:308,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,216,74807,6,0,L|168:104,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,75407,2,0,L|252:188,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,76007,2,0,P|364:272|456:168,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,76907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,56,77207,6,0,B|224:44|224:44|116:64,1,200,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,78107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,220,78407,2,0,L|156:328,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,79007,2,0,L|268:228,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,79607,6,0,P|260:126|181:182,1,200,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,80507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,280,80807,2,0,L|224:364,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,368,81407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,312,81707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,212,82007,6,0,P|420:156|404:100,1,100,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,80,82607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,104,82907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,184,83207,2,0,L|136:224,2,50,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,83807,2,0,L|268:292,2,50,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,84407,6,0,L|468:208,1,100,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,108,85007,2,0,L|348:112,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,56,85607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,128,85907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,188,86207,2,0,P|296:236|344:284,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86807,12,0,89057,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
thanks frostmourne so much, all fixed for me
i fixed all of stuff on regenz's and koreapenguin's too
i fixed all of stuff on regenz's and koreapenguin's too
Ranked
Topic Starter
finally T_T this day has come! thanks all!
Gratz P A N <3
Congratz!! P..A..N.. PANDA!!~ 
lol (?)
Topic Starter
thanks all 
congrats~
pan congratz'w'
แร้งก่อนมี SS2 ได้ไง มันผิดละเนี่ย
Congrats! Great beatmap.
I liked this a bit more than the other ranked version, although a few 1/4 are really weird. Methinks this could have been a bit more intense without disrespecting the song, and you missed a few great jump/pattern opportunities, but overall this is really cool.
The biggest problem is hitsounds are absolutely impossible to hear I had to ignore them and play with music at 50% to be able to hear them...
The biggest problem is hitsounds are absolutely impossible to hear I had to ignore them and play with music at 50% to be able to hear them...